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TheElderOnes
Ah. Yes, I've kept Bloodsport off of the main page because it's not even 1 pages yet. But, what's existing so far can be found at this here link. -- 21:57, 24 January 2012 (UTC)
Just getting back to you on your latest correspondence.
I myself have been taking a break (as if I even do anything to begin with >.>) from the site and have just started coming back. And as for the apostrophe situation, [Link Removed as System blocks submitting] <--- that might help.
And Bloodsport will resume as soon as I can figure out how I want to portray the scene with the Królowa Krwi before Marissa's first fight. THEN, I need to read some combat pages to see how it should best be done. But, hopefully I'll get my shit together soon. --TheElderOnes 11:39, 2 February 2012 (UTC)
Chlo's-Closet
I'd just like to say that I love that the Spellbook mentions tsunamis! :D I'll think about how I could mention Lord Ruairi's spells without spoilers about what kind of mage he is... --Chlo 21:10, 30 March 2012 (UTC)
Ohh! I really like the sea monster idea. That's good! :) Yes, actually, I do have a specific idea. If you come up with something better, you could use that, just tell me so I can keep the story consistent. I think he developed a spell that could increase your power by a large amount for a small period of time, and the King heard mention of it and bribed him not to tell anyone the spell or to use the spell. The bribe is a princess as a bride, haha. --Chlo 23:34, 23 February 2012 (UTC)
Yay! 300+ pages!!! Anyways, I like the new indifferent storylines! I'm going to go and edit them sometime, but not now becuase I'm very busy in RL. --Chlo 19:47, 23 February 2012 (UTC)
Just so you know, I have continued with options other than the usual grammar/spelling edits. For example, I have created the page with the purplish nightgown in the Amelia arc. I hope I'm not intruding on the story in any way. I think this is ok according to the editor's guide, but I just wanted to check back with you, just in case.--Chlo 22:44, 13 February 2012 (UTC)
I found the Amelia storyline, but if you decide to add a Ruairi storyline, sending me a link is nice, like you did with Saya. I like how you kept with the weird rumors about Lord Ruairi. :) However, I think it'd be even funnier if they were all rumors about how good at manipulating fire he is. XD Since fire is his weak element. Just as a running joke at the beginning (not that I'm trying to make this a comedy/parody, just that a little humor adds to the story). As for the lake name, I agree that it should have a better name. I'm kind of bad at place names though... If you come up with something, post it in Additional Information on Lord Ruairi's Character Page. Thanks. --Chlo 20:59, 13 February 2012 (UTC)
I think it'd be awesome to have Lord Ruairi have a minor appearance in other storylines! However, if Saya met him in a tower, he was probably visiting someone, since he lives in this really excluded lake area. I didn't consider healing spells... he probably knows basics... Just for future reference, you could also play him as antagonist/villain, just as long as you have a good reason for his actions, since he's not evil, just manipulative. In any case, feel free to add a scene with him! I think it's a great idea. --Chlo 15:37, 10 February 2012 (UTC)
By the way, (I know, I know, I'm typing your ears off XD) what is the difference between equipment and possessions in the status indicator? I know that equipment is what she is wearing... but other than that, I'm not entirely certain. Please explain? --Chlo 18:49, 8 February 2012 (UTC)
I saw something similar in that Girl Scout Camp story. I thought it'd be easier to navigate if I just linked them together like that. That's why there's the code thing. --Chlo 18:19, 8 February 2012 (UTC)
You're right about the copy/paste thing, of course. I just wanted to get a move on with the plot, so I did that. Feel free to add extra details like tripping over the heavy dress etc.. In the coming scenes, I plan for there to be more variety.--Chlo 16:45, 8 February 2012 (UTC)
Yeah, the basic plan for Arturia in this case seems to be to go straight to the suitor (ie Lord Ruairi), so that most of the drama will be there. But we'll see what happens, I guess. :) --Chlo 19:14, 7 February 2012 (UTC)
Yay, I'm so happy that you like him! I really can't wait until the scene when he and Arturia meet. (Which is silly, since I'm probably going to be the one writing it.) On another topic, I'm working on the scene where Arturia leaves, and I'm checking back to the Saya scenes you wrote and using them for reference, so things may echo what you've written, just for continuity. And thanks for the tips. :) I'm still getting the hang of things around here.--Chlo 18:56, 7 February 2012 (UTC)
Just letting you know that it is spelled "thought" not "tought". Also, words such as "wonderful", "beautiful", "bashful", etc. only have one L at the end. If you fix these in the continuing parts of the story it would save me a lot of work. Thanks! --Chlo 00:30, 7 February 2012 (UTC)
I like your Princess story. :) Just letting you know that I'll be editing spelling errors and changing sentence structure so that it's slightly easier to read. I may even add more, if I can think of something.--Chlo 00:32, 4 February 2012 (UTC)
Platypus
I originally blocked ordinary users from moving pages because vandals were seriously trashing the site with the move function. But it's been a while since we've have any major vandal activity, so I'll take a shot at unblocking the function. We'll see what happens. --Platypus 15:16, 1 March 2012 (UTC)
If you can find a file-sharing site to upload your pic to, you can put a link to it on a page here. Unfortunately, RobKohr, the system admin, had to disable uploading pics directly to this site due to space considerations. That's not something I can change. --Platypus 02:34, 6 March 2012 (UTC)
If you're going to contribute to Rampage, please use proper grammar. Sentences start with capital letters. Sentences end with periods and shouldn't be combined with other sentences using commas. An elipsis is always three periods, never two. --Platypus 12:01, 16 March 2012 (UTC)
As it says on the Main Page, please don't add more stories on the Main Page. --Platypus 14:07, 12 May 2014 (UTC)
Happyazngirl
Hello. I just wanted to drop by and tell you that your story The life of a medieval princess if really awesome and I loved reading through it all (I went through all the paths in one night o.o). I've also been editing some of the pages, so I hope you don't really mind that. --Happyazngirl 06:25, 26 March 2012 (UTC)
Dirty Me
Hello. I notice in your stories you are using a \ instead of a /. You know / creates a link to the head story, right? While \ just makes the page title more complex. Also, when you make the subcategories, don't forget to put the pages under the main category too. You have pages under [[Category:Unwritten\Karla]], but you also need to put those pages under the main category, [[Category: Unwritten]], also. I have added in the main category, and added the main category to your two additional subcategories, so please take note and make sure the rest follow. --Dirty Me 02:02, 6 May 2014 (UTC)
