User talk:Numenorean

From Create Your Own Story

Please use proper English grammar and punctuation. Also, work with the existing story style. There are no pages in Smutty Sex Romp that start with the story name. I would prefer not to have such a stylistic change made this far into writing it! Also, this is not a story with abrupt endings (other than occasional deaths). If you have not figured out the way it is structured yet, either read more or do your writing in a smaller, simpler story. I have been working on this story for a long time and I am rather particular about it. --Platypus 23:51, 22 December 2009 (UTC)

Your grammar is not fine. Take a look at the history on the pages you wrote and see how I've had to edit each one to correct your mistakes. Yes, you did get the status bars and category correct, however the story is structured in levels. Did you start reading at the beginning and work your way up to level 3? Did you notice that when a scenario ends, the character returns to his apartment... but that doesn't end the story? He proceeds to the next level. If he leaves the swordsman and the bunny girl, he should move along to the level 4 carnival scenario.

The sysop's pet project may not be the best story for a newbie to jump into the middle of. --Platypus 10:23, 23 December 2009 (UTC)

What were you trying to do to Me 'n' My Wife? I've reverted your edit. Do not blank out stories! --Platypus