User talk:Dfoc

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Good job on the adventure (Star Trek)! The only problem is that the misc. letters make the adventure confusing for anyone who wants to add to it or edit it. You may want to make a list of pre-used letters for anyone wishing to edit the adventure. Fruitbat

I'll try to do that, thanks! Dfoc

No problem Fruitbat

Please don't write things in stories you obviously haven't read. You just added Unzip the guy's pants and check out his dick and wrote it as if the character is male, when the character is female. And if you feel you must add to Smutty Sex Romp, make sure you add the status bar to the page. --Platypus 18:29, 1 March 2007 (EST)

Pay attention! THE CHARACTER IS FEMALE! --Platypus 18:34, 1 March 2007 (EST)

Sorry to get so bent about it, but after writing several hundred pages, I feel a bit possessive about Smutty Sex Romp. I also have high standards when it comes to grammar, punctuation and spelling... and it appears that you do not. Perhaps you should stick to writing your Star Trek adventure. --Platypus 19:19, 1 March 2007 (EST)