User talk:Daysue

From Create Your Own Story

Beta Experiment

I like this concept. I just read through the pages you have at the moment, and so far it's pretty well done! I suggest you just work on finishing one character at a time, I'd rather read through a finished character than one that's only done halfway because the writer decided that he/she had to evenly spread out the pages. It kills the mood when you encounter the redlinks. To be honest, this story can become a real contender for the next story to be featured! As long as you keep up the effort that you're going at now.

Anyway, keep up the amazing work you're at right now. Also, tell me when you hit 25+ pages, then I'll see if it's worthy of being featured. Oh and have you read my story? It's called Remember, if you have, mind if you share your honest opinion on it. --Heyoeveryone 09:24, 10 November 2011 (UTC)

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