User talk:DakotaSecret

From Create Your Own Story

Thanks for adding to my story 2 Taboo 4 You. There were a few grammatical errors that I had to correct. Most of it seemed to stem from writing too quickly, which I perfectly understand. However, the way you write dialogue is incorrect, and it makes it hard to read. You might want to check out the guide on Punctuation with dialogue to help you out with this. Again thank you for adding to my story. --Elerneron (Talk) 08:48, 23 March 2015 (UTC)