User talk:Tomarnold657
From Create Your Own Story
If you're going to post in one of my stories, please pay attention to your grammar and punctuation. You may want to review punctuation with dialogue.
Also, stop beginning to do things and just do them! Begin to is a useful phrase to denote continuous action, or for when a character starts to do something but is then interrupted, but mostly, it's just filler words which weaken your sentence.
Use commas to separate clauses from the name the clause is directed at It's "Fuck me, Brandon!" not "Fuck me Brandon". --Platypus 20:06, 9 August 2019 (UTC)