User talk:Gee Willikers

From Create Your Own Story

If you’re going to post in one of my stories:

• You must use proper grammar and punctuation. You might want to review punctuation with dialogue. Compound modifiers require hyphens!
• Choices must be choices your character can make. Your character cannot choose what he’s going to see when he enters the changing room!
• Choices should be marked by an asterisk. Look at every other page in Smutty Sex Romp and notice how the choices are formatted. Be consistent with the rest of the story!

--Platypus 22:44, 31 January 2017 (UTC)

If you continue to post without considering any of the above warnings, I will stop editing your work and will delete it instead. Smutty Sex Romp is my story. If you cannot comply with my rules, please start your own story, or find a story whose author is less strict about format, grammar, and punctuation.

I'd also advise you to ease off with the phrase "start to". Don't have characters start to begin to do things. Have them do it! Your sentences will flow better without "start to". It's rarely necessary. --Platypus 23:39, 31 January 2017 (UTC)