User talk:Wafflepudding

From Create Your Own Story

Linking different paths in the a story makes sense... sometimes. In the case of Ginny and Vivian, linking the pages you linked makes no sense. In one path, Ginny is delivering a sandwich. In the other, she isn't. linking the pages so that she talks about the sandwich either way makes for a nonsensical story. Please read very carefully before forcing a convergence. --Platypus 21:40, 17 February 2014 (UTC)

Sorry, and thank you

I didn't realize that the paths weren't convergent; you're right, I should have read more closely. I won't repeat the mistake, and I appreciate you pointing it out.

You had the right idea. Unfortunately, it didn't quite work in this particular instance. --Platypus 02:45, 18 February 2014 (UTC)