User talk:Fbipedohunter

From Create Your Own Story

If you're going to post in one of my stories, make sure to use proper grammar and punctuation. Compound modifiers require hyphens, such as in the case of "semen-soaked snatch" or "cum-covered body". The exception is if the first word of the compound modifier is an adverb ending in -ly.

And while it isn't incorrect per se, you should use begin to and start to infrequently. These phrases are good for describing continuous action, or action that's interrupted, but otherwise, don't have characters begin to start to do things. Just let them do it. --Platypus 22:45, 16 June 2016 (UTC)