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| + | Clause 1: "Popular vote" is not defined by Nomicapolis rules. If [[330]] passes, the term "population" (related to popular) will be defined. This will make a "popular vote" a vote of the Citizens, not us. | ||
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| + | Clause 2: The pronoun "they" has no antecedent. | ||
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| + | Clause 3.1: "Not all positions will be voted on every month," could be taken to mean that it is a violation of the rules to vote on all positions every month. | ||
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| + | Clause 3.2: I'm uncomfortable with the usage of "in writing." We're not actually writing these things, we're typing or posting them. | ||
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| + | Clause 3.3: Replace "representatives" with "officials". | ||
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| + | Clause 4: Requires an "emergency vote" without a reason (perhaps "A player who becomes inactive loses any official positions they may have held."?). Protocol is misspelled. | ||
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| + | Discuss! [[User:Applejuicefool|Applejuicefool]] 11:12, 29 November 2006 (EST) | ||
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Feedback is welcome. I know that one problem is how to address what happens if there become less active players than elected positions. Hopefully, that never becomes an issue, but feedback would be appreciated. --Tucana25 00:30, 29 November 2006 (EST)
Debate
Problems I see: Clause 1: "Popular vote" is not defined by Nomicapolis rules. If 330 passes, the term "population" (related to popular) will be defined. This will make a "popular vote" a vote of the Citizens, not us.
Clause 2: The pronoun "they" has no antecedent.
Clause 3.1: "Not all positions will be voted on every month," could be taken to mean that it is a violation of the rules to vote on all positions every month.
Clause 3.2: I'm uncomfortable with the usage of "in writing." We're not actually writing these things, we're typing or posting them.
Clause 3.3: Replace "representatives" with "officials".
Clause 4: Requires an "emergency vote" without a reason (perhaps "A player who becomes inactive loses any official positions they may have held."?). Protocol is misspelled.
Discuss! Applejuicefool 11:12, 29 November 2006 (EST)
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