Talk:John Rabe
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| - | + | Thank you very much, Masked Pickle! | |
| - | + | I like it, except for a few grammatical errors. And maybe the last paragraph could be rephrased | |
| - | + | a bit, I do not think many in the AOG advocate outright slavery at that point. | |
| + | Maybe write something about cutting workers' benefits and civil rights versus a humane treatment of the native population. | ||
| + | -Andromedos | ||
Current revision as of 19:27, 4 September 2008
Thank you very much, Masked Pickle! I like it, except for a few grammatical errors. And maybe the last paragraph could be rephrased a bit, I do not think many in the AOG advocate outright slavery at that point. Maybe write something about cutting workers' benefits and civil rights versus a humane treatment of the native population. -Andromedos
