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The Spacers/ElijahBaley/Outside

Timewalker — Sun, 30 Sep 2012 06:27:27 GMT

Timewalker:

Ahh, the fresh air troubles you and the winds of change make you nervous. But it is time to brave the Outside.

[[EBO: Left|Go left]]

[[EBO:Right|Go right]]

[[EBO:Straight|Go straight]]

[[The Spacers/ElijahBaley/House|Go backward]]

[[Category:The Spacers]] [[Category:Elijah Baley]]

EBO:LeftStraight

Timewalker — Sun, 30 Sep 2012 06:26:42 GMT

Timewalker:

You head straight. Now where?

[[EBO:LeftLeftStraight|Go left]]

[[EBO:Straight|Go right]]

[[EBO:LeftStraightStraight|Go straight]]

[[EBO: Left|Go backwards]]

[[Category: The Spacers]] [[Category: Elijah Baley]]

EBO:LeftStraight

Timewalker — Sun, 30 Sep 2012 06:26:06 GMT

Timewalker:

You head straight. Now where?

[[EBO:LeftLeftStraight|Go left]]

[[EBO:Straight|Go right]]

[[EBO:LeftStraightStraight|Go straight]]

[[EBO:Left|Go backwards]]

[[Category: The Spacers]] [[Category: Elijah Baley]]

User talk:Platypus

Timewalker — Sun, 30 Sep 2012 06:18:54 GMT

Timewalker:

Since this page has become rather cluttered, I've moved old discussions to the archive page below. Feel free to leave new messages here. I'll get back to you ASAP!

*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive1]]
*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive2]]

>Add new comments below. Do not add new comments to the archive.

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Great thanks. Yea, definitely let me know if you think of any stories that would be good for it. From the ones I've read, I think Heyoeveryone's Remember might be the best option. I'm probably going to record in about a week, so let me know before then if you think of any other good options. -[[User:AlexCW|AlexCW]]

Hey. I have been a fan of this site for a while. I am an experienced actor and had the idea of adapting some of these stories to YouTube. Essentially, it would be an audiobook of the story where you click a link at the end of the video to make your choice (leading you to the next part of the story). You seem to be very active on and passionate about this site. I was wondering if you can help me find a well written CYOA story with lots of dialogue. I'd be willing to discuss this idea if you have any input. Thanks! -[[User:AlexCW|AlexCW]]

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Just wanted to ask what happened to the main page and the reason for it. I was gone for a week, then BAM! A template for the featured, only several stories available directly. What is the criterion for the stories to be displayed on the main page, anyways?
--[[User:Snowball|Snowball- The Anti-Adult-Content Resistance Leader]] 13:00, 18 August 2012 (UTC)

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thanks for the advice i'm a big fan of your work your a really big part of this website
Seth Xozen
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yo!! u just deleted my story!!!!!y???
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thank you!!! i should be able to do it. i'm just a terrible speller. did u make this website??? this should be my last post 'cuz i don't want annoy u any more than i have... :]

peeta.luvr
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i tried to catogorize a page on 'Vampires Vs. Werewolfs' but it didn't work... sorry once again :]
peeta.luvr
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Last thing, you respond Fast!!!!p.s i understand if want me to stop posting stuff, sorry 'bout that. :]

peeta.luvr again
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i have a question, my appologies for not asking before on my previous comment, but do you have to read All of the stories posted on this website?? :]

peeta.luvr
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i'm soooo sorry i ignored your first message!! i didn't know what it ment to "catagorize a page" and i still don't know, so i was wondering if you could help by telling me how to!!! please and thanks :]

peeta.luvr
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How exactly do you give your story a catoragory? Sincerely Critic-AL P.S. Please forgive my spelling.
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I Apologize Mr. Platypus, I have realized you are indeed correct however I don't recall seeing this on the main page where was it? Sincerely Critic-AL P.S. I Hope we haven't got off on the wrong foot.
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I Have no clue what your saying Mr. Platypus I Made Medieval Life Myself I was only editing my own story. Unless you know of another medieval life adventure I Have no idea what your saying. More Sincerely this time Critic-AL
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That seems significantly easier; I'll use the move feature to fix the others. Thanks.

-- Fin
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Hey Mr. Platypus The only story I recall editing was my own called medieval life. So if you think i edited another one than how about telling me which one rather than Insulting me so i don't do it again. Not So Sincerely Critic-AL.
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Um... I discovered a better way to organize my story, but, unfortunately, a produced this blank page in the process: [[Verse/Luka=Answer_correctly| this little baby]]
I don't know if you'd have found it otherwise, but I also got a question: will you hate me if I "fix" the previous four pages? Changing the urls from /CYOA/<page> to /CYOA/Luka/<page>. I'll understand if you're opposed, considering it makes you have to do stuff (delete the old ones, I'm guessing), and I don't really mind if it stays like this but... it looks messy as it is, with the pages split. xD

Also: apologies; please don't hate me.

-- Fin
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I don't know if you've received complaints from any other users recently about this, but there is a syntax error that comes up upon clicking the "Trolling in the Mall" page in SSR. Just a heads up.

-- Pterodactyl

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wow, i do not no what your problem is but you honestly need to calm down, big time....

i never did go into a different story and deliberately delete a different page, if it happened it was on accident and something that i did not mean to do or realize what was happening. i would assume that would be understood rather causing such anger towards me as i'm new here.

still don't see how it's even possible that i would have done something as you accuse me of doing when i only, and i repeat, only edited pages which i created for my story. if i did indeed delete somebody else's page as you claim i did than there is many other ways to handle it then calling me out in pure anger, acting as if i did it on purpose, and using caps as if you are yelling at me.

anyway, thank you for making my first experience on this website a bad one and i will keep that in mind as i come back(if i even bother returning now) and also when talking with other people.

-- pissed off and ready to never come back, Hailey
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I just recieved my second warning about not catergorizing pages correctly or pre-empting them with the story title. However, if I did so with the last few entries I've made within any stories, it was a complete accident. I made every attempt to comply. Your message resounded loud and clear, and to be completely honest, you sound like an impudent asshole with severe control issues who prefers to emphasize tone over content. I'll make no more entries, I assure you. In the future, perhaps treat your writers with a little less insolent rudeness and you might not end up with so many endless pages of half-written drivel. (I'm sure you'll erase this message to eradicate the perceived insult, but at least consider what I've said.) [[User:DickingCream]]

: I've gotten a message like this as well. The story was tagged, as far as I could tell - as it was a story ending, I made sure that it linked back to the original story. What exactly did I forget to do? [[User:Wonder Boy]]

Platypus,

I'vev been writing my first CYOA (the transformation laboratory) and I made a ending page and i got a warning, it was in the right categorys so I'm very confused. -supersmew

Hey Platypus,

I'm working on starting The House on Horny Hill. I neglected to save an intermediate page and so some later ones were deleted as orphaned. Could those be recovered so I only have to re-write the page that I forgot to save earlier?
--[[User:DickHardy|DickHardy]] 23:11, 3 April 2012 (UTC)

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Whoa ^^ I get the feeling you're way stricter than my English teacher xp. My spelling and grammar skills are little more than readable I'm afraid. I'm not native English or anything so.. I'll try ^^ (it's only my third language)

It took me over 15 minutes to even figure out what you'd changed on some of those pages ^^, after figuring that out I was left stupefied as to what was wrong with it in the first place -_-. Looks like my grammar may remain beneath your expectations for quite a while yet.. (completely hopeless)

--[[User:Zoroastra|Zoroastra]]

What do you mean 'title of the story?'

-- Apollo.

Playtpus my man {or bird if you are female}
Great place that you have here and fantastic stories going down but l have a slight problem here.
Whenever l try to edit Smutty Sex Romp then this comes up "Permission error...users and bureaucrats allowed."
What in the NINE HELLS does that mean?

-- Apollo

Platypus, sorry i've been no here for a while.....just tell me what ''Choose your own adventure'' are you? I mean what category are you?

Starforce

Ah, OK. But what do you mean by title?

--Starforce

I just made Category: Randy Orton good now?

--Starforce

Then all my pages have the category, if not, example the Pokemon Trainer Academy is PKMN PTA not Pokemon Adventure, it's not my fault it's the creator fault.

--Starforce

--MaxJose

DUDE DID YOU DELETE A BUNCH OF MY STORY PLEASE RESPOND I NEED TO KNOW THIS AND IF YOU DID WHY.

--MaxJose

dude i was wondering if you can find out who did it or if you can get it back i really need this.

== Re: deleteme ==

Oh shit, I guess that makes a lot more sense now that I think about it. Whoops.

My apologies, man. --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 03:23, 1 April 2012 (UTC)

Hi. Something has happened to my story. I keep trying to get my page back but it's blank. I clicked restore and it says it's done but the page still says it's been blanked. How or who did that? Was it when I was editing? Could you restore my page/s for me as I can't seem to find out how.
Continuation
*hi again. I know you fixed it but my page was blanked again. Could you tell me how it's happening. All I did was edit the first page of text. I didn't touch the catagory link or the options i only changed the dialog. Is it something I'm doing by mistake. If it happens again how do i fix it myself so i dont have to bother you. If you couldn't tell I'm new at this*

CaptainMorgan30

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Hello. I'm sorry for bothering you, but I have two questions.
1. Can you delete this page for me? http://editthis.info/choose_your_own_adventure/The_next_morning.._*Black_Dress_2%2BDuran%2BMercs*
Thank you very much. The title for the page doesn't fit with the rest of the story and I seemed to have failed at formatting it correctly which leads me to...

2. I'm a little more than confused at how to make the link appear at the top of the page (under the title of said page) which allows you to go back to a point in the story. I've read the tutorial page and stared at the coding for the page trying to figure it out, but I'm utterly perplexed at it. I'd be extremely grateful if you could shed some light on it for me. --[[User:Happyazngirl|Happyazngirl]] 05:46, 12 April 2012 (UTC)

Sorry Platipus,i forgot to do that.Anyway,do you like how i edited your story?

== iWant Sex ==

Hey Platypus,
I'm new to choose your own adventures, and I really can't figure out anything to write about. However, I read your iWant Sex story, and I got many ways it could keep going. What I guess I'm saying, is this: would you mind if I added to iWant Sex?
Bight99

I'd like to thank you on the advice. I read most of the stuff on creating/editing posts. And I wasn't sure what categories meant, so I skipped adding it on my CYOA. Thank you, as in my first stages of this creation any help at all I appreciate. I'm still not sure if I did the right thing, but nevertheless, THANK YOU. :)

== The Neighbors ==

Hey, Platypus, I got your message about leaving a subject, or whatever, but I don't know how to do that. Could you show me exactly how to do what you said?

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== Oops! ==

Sorry... I just had an idea bubble up... I'll try to allocate at least an hour or two for you to push the story in a direction you like from now on. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

== Pokesex ==

Thanks for the heads up Platypus. I need to remember to add the title. xD
-- Ghengar
== Name of wiki changed ==

More info here:

http://editthis.info/create_your_own_adventure/Wiki_Name_Change_Information

==Pokesex==
Thanks for the heads up about including the titles, I'll be sure to do that from now on. You might be able to see through my edit history (on pokesex) my many, many failed attempts at fixing the previous pages. How should I go about it?

Okay sorry, I will be posting complete pages from now on. It was my first time editing, so I wasn't sure how things worked.
-Thisisme

== Uncategorized pages ==

Sorry, this is my first story, and I down really know all about how to categorize pages besides putting category at the bottom-abcdefg

== Uncategorized pages ==

I don't know how to categorise stories either. Sorry! That's ok if you edit or delete the page that you think is not correctly written! --[[User: Lovetoread|Lovetoread]]
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Thanks Platypus!! Now I know how to categorise! ^_^

Uh...Plat..can you please tell me which pages I should categorize? I'm sure that every page has been categorized...If the gamebook is Elements of the Earth, can you leave it in the abandoned stories? I'll get back to it later.

--[[User:Timewalker|Timewalker]] 06:18, 30 September 2012 (UTC)

EBO:LeftStraight

Timewalker — Sat, 29 Sep 2012 09:42:54 GMT

Timewalker: Created page with 'You head straight. Now where?'

You head straight. Now where?

EBO: Left

Timewalker — Sat, 29 Sep 2012 09:42:30 GMT

Timewalker:

You turn left. Now where?

[[EBO:LeftLeft|Go left]]

[[The Spacers/ElijahBaley/Outside|Go right]]

[[EBO:LeftStraight|Go straight]]

[[EBO:LeftBacward|Go backward.]]

[[Category:The Spacers]] [[Category:Elijah Baley]]

The Spacers/ElijahBaley/House

Timewalker — Sat, 29 Sep 2012 09:41:29 GMT

Timewalker:

Your estate is small. R. Daneel is sitting away in a corner, reading a few files. A bed is near the end of the room, and there is a minikitchen with a robot working. Next to them are book films. You can also leave to Fastolfe's place, Wheeler's place or Gladia's place. There is also some other places you can go to. So now what?

[[The Spacers/ElijahBaley/Suspect/HanFastolfe|Go to Fastolfe's estate]]

[[The Spacers/ElijahBaley/Suspect/MemphisWheeler|Go to the house of Wheeler]]

[[The Spacers/ElijahBaley/Suspect/GladiaDelmarre|Visit Gladia]]

[[The Spacers/ElijahBaley/Outside|Step outside]]

[[The Spacers/ElijahBaley/House/DaneelOlivaw|Speak to Daneel]]

[[The Spacers/ElijahBaley/House/BookFilms|View the book films]]

[[The Spacers/ElijahBaley/House/Sleep|Go to sleep]]

[[The Spacers/ElijahBaley/House/Kitchen|Eat something]]

EBO:Faint

Timewalker — Sat, 29 Sep 2012 09:40:57 GMT

Timewalker:

You faint in all this painstaking exposure to the light.

[[The Spacers/ElijahBaley/House|Where do you end up]]?

EBO:Faint

Timewalker — Sat, 29 Sep 2012 09:39:12 GMT

Timewalker: Created page with 'You faint in all this painstaking exposure to the light. Where do you end up?'

You faint in all this painstaking exposure to the light.

[[The Spacers/ElijahBaley/House|Where do you end up]]?

EBO:LeftLeftLeftLeft

Timewalker — Sat, 29 Sep 2012 09:38:19 GMT

Timewalker:

You go left yet yet again. Now where?

[[EBO:Faint|Go left]]

[[EBO:LeftLeftLeft|Go right]]

[[EBO:Faint|Go straight]]

[[EBO:Faint|Go backwards]]

[[Category: The Spacers]] [[Category: Elijah Baley]]

EBO:LeftLeftLeftLeft

Timewalker — Sat, 29 Sep 2012 09:38:08 GMT

Timewalker: Created page with 'You go left yet yet again. Now where? Go left [[EBO:LeftLeftLeft|Go right [[EBO:Faint|Go s…'

You go left yet yet again. Now where?

[[EBO:Faint|Go left]]

[[EBO:LeftLeftLeft|Go right

[[EBO:Faint|Go straight]]

[[EBO:Faint|Go backwards]]

[[Category: The Spacers]] [[Category: Elijah Baley]]

EBO:LeftLeftLeft

Timewalker — Sat, 29 Sep 2012 09:34:49 GMT

Timewalker: Created page with 'You go left yet again. Now where? Go left Go right [[EBO:LeftLeftLeftStraight|Go …'

You go left yet again. Now where?

[[EBO:LeftLeftLeftLeft|Go left]]

[[EBO:LeftLeft|Go right]]

[[EBO:LeftLeftLeftStraight|Go straight]]

[[EBO:LeftLeftLeftBackwards|Go backwards]]

[[Category:The Spacers]] [[Category:Elijah Baley]]

EBO:LeftLeft

Timewalker — Sat, 29 Sep 2012 09:31:40 GMT

Timewalker:

You go left again. Now where?

[[EBO:LeftLeftLeft|Go left]]

[[EBO: Left|Go right]]

[[EBO:LeftLeftStraight|Go straight]]

[[EBO:LeftLeftBackwards|Go backwards]]

[[Category: The Spacers]] [[Category: Elijah Baley]]

EBO:LeftLeft

Timewalker — Sat, 29 Sep 2012 09:31:27 GMT

Timewalker: Created page with 'You go left again. Now where? Go left Go right Go straight [[EB…'

You go left again. Now where?

[[EBO:LeftLeftLeft|Go left]]

[[EBO:Left|Go right]]

[[EBO:LeftLeftStraight|Go straight]]

[[EBO:LeftLeftBackwards|Go backwards]]

[[Category: The Spacers]] [[Category: Elijah Baley]]

EBO: Left

Timewalker — Sat, 29 Sep 2012 09:07:31 GMT

Timewalker:

You turn left. Now where?

[[EBO:LeftLeft|Go left]]

[[The Spacers/ElijahBaley/Outside|Go right]]

[[EBO:LeftStraight|Go straight]]

[[EBO:LeftBacward|Go backward.]]

[[Category:The Spacers]] [[Category:Elijah Baley]]

EBO: Left

Timewalker — Sat, 29 Sep 2012 09:06:44 GMT

Timewalker:

You turn left. Now where?

[[EBO:LeftLeft|Go left]]

[[The Spacers/ElijahBaley/House/Outside|Go right]]

[[EBO:LeftStraight|Go straight]]

[[EBO:LeftBacward|Go backward.]]

[[Category:The Spacers]] [[Category:Elijah Baley]]

EBO: Left

Timewalker — Sat, 29 Sep 2012 09:06:03 GMT

Timewalker: Created page with 'You turn left. Now where? Go left Go right Go straight [[EBO:LeftBacwar…'

You turn left. Now where?

[[EBO:LeftLeft|Go left]]
[[The Spacers/ElijahBaley/House/Outside|Go right]]
[[EBO:LeftStraight|Go straight]]
[[EBO:LeftBacward|Go backward.]]

The Spacers/ElijahBaley/Outside

Timewalker — Sat, 29 Sep 2012 09:01:47 GMT

Timewalker:

Ahh, the fresh air troubles you and the winds of change make you nervous. But it is time to brave the Outside.

[[EBO: Left|Go left]]

[[EBO: Right|Go right]]

[[EBO: Straight|Go straight]]

[[The Spacers/ElijahBaley/House|Go backward]]

[[Category:The Spacers]] [[Category:Elijah Baley]]

The Spacers/ElijahBaley/Outside

Timewalker — Sat, 29 Sep 2012 09:00:33 GMT

Timewalker: Created page with 'Ahh, the fresh air troubles you and the winds of change make you nervous. But it is time to brave the Outside. Go left [[EBO: Right|<font…'

Ahh, the fresh air troubles you and the winds of change make you nervous. But it is time to brave the Outside.

[[EBO: Left|Go left]]
[[EBO: Right|Go right]]
[[EBO: Straight|Go straight]]
[[The Spacers/ElijahBaley/House|Go backward]]

The Spacers/ElijahBaley/House

Timewalker — Sat, 29 Sep 2012 08:18:43 GMT

Timewalker:

Your estate is small. R. Daneel is sitting away in a corner, reading a few files. A bed is near the end of the room, and there is a minikitchen with a robot working. Next to them are book films. You can also leave to Fastolfe's place, Wheeler's place or Gladia's place. There is also some other places you can go to. So now what?

[[The Spacers/ElijahBaley/Suspect/HanFastolfe|Go to Fastolfe's estate]]

[[The Spacers/ElijahBaley/Suspect/MemphisWheeler|Go to the house of Wheeler]]

[[The Spacers/ElijahBaley/Suspect/GladiaDelmarre|Visit Gladia]]

[[The Spacers/ElijahBaley/Outside|Step outside]]

[[The Spacers/ElijahBaley/House/DaneelOlivaw|Speak to Daneel]]

[[The Spacers/ElijahBaley/House/BookFilms|View the book films]]

[[The Spacers/ElijahBaley/House/Sleep|Go to sleep]]

[[The Spacers/ElijahBaley/House/Kitchen|Eat something]]

The Spacers/ElijahBaley/Suspect/GladiaDelmarre

Timewalker — Sat, 29 Sep 2012 08:17:53 GMT

Timewalker:

Gladia! You had met her when you had gone to Solaria.

"Hello Gladia, are we viewing or seeing?" you question.

"I assure you we are seeing."

"I just want to know about Memphis Fastolfe."

'''HOW TO TALK:''' Look at the above URL. After /Suspect/GladiaDelmarre, add a slash (/) and put in a word. Pages will tell you which word to say. For now, you can add in a 'Homicide' word to start the conversation. There can also be easter eggs!

[[The Spacers/ElijahBaley/Suspect/HanFastolfe|Go to Fastolfe's estate]]

[[The Spacers/ElijahBaley/Suspect/MemphisWheeler|Speak to Wheeler]]

[[The Spacers/ElijahBaley/House|Go to your estate]]

[[Category:The Spacers|Suspect Gladia Delmarre]] [[Category:Elijah Baley|Suspect Gladia Delmarre]]

The Spacers/ElijahBaley/Suspect/MemphisWheeler

Timewalker — Sat, 29 Sep 2012 08:15:38 GMT

Timewalker:

"So you are the father of the late Dr. Fastolfe Memphis, are you?" you ask.

"Yes I am."

"Good, because I want to discuss the murder with you."

'''HOW TO TALK:''' Look at the above URL. After /Suspect/MemphisWheeler, add a slash (/) and put in a word. Pages will tell you which word to say. For now, you can add in a 'Homicide' word to start the conversation. There can also be easter eggs!

[[The Spacers/ElijahBaley/Suspect/HanFastolfe|Speak to Fastolfe]]

[[The Spacers/ElijahBaley/Suspect/GladiaDelmarre|Speak to Gladia]]

[[The Spacers/ElijahBaley/House|Go to your house]]

[[Category:The Spacers|Suspect Memphis Wheeler]] [[Category:Elijah Baley|Suspect Memphis Wheeler]]

The Spacers/ElijahBaley/Suspect/HanFastolfe

Timewalker — Sat, 29 Sep 2012 08:08:00 GMT

Timewalker:

"So, Elijah 'Lije' Baley, we meet again. So what happened to the Medievalists at Earth?"

"A school of emigrants has been completed, and my son Bentley Baley and a few others have joined it. Now all we need are permission from the Spacer worlds."

"Ah, Elijah Baley, I don't think that is possible, unless you clear my name in this case. It would help in turning a few worlds in our favour, and we have only Earth and Solaria with us."

"Hmm, so I have a few things I want to talk with you about."

'''HOW TO TALK:''' Look at the above URL. After /Suspect/HanFastolfe, add a slash (/) and put in a word. Pages will tell you which word to say. For now, you can add in a 'Homicide' word to start the conversation. There can also be easter eggs!

[[The Spacers/ElijahBaley/Suspect/MemphisWheeler|Go to the house of Memphis]]

[[The Spacers/ElijahBaley/Suspect/GladiaDelmarre|Go to the house of Gladia]]

[[The Spacers/ElijahBaley/House|Go to your estate]]

[[Category:The Spacers|Suspect Han Fastolfe]] [[Category:Elijah Baley|Suspect Han Fastolfe]]

The Spacers/ElijahBaley/KosmosMurder

Timewalker — Sat, 29 Sep 2012 08:06:15 GMT

Timewalker:

You command Daneel to walk in the recreational garden ahead of your ship. You sit on a bench and ask him more of the victim.

"Doctor Memphis Fastolfe was a tall, skinny man who recieved a doctorate in robotics from the Robotics Institute, a institution established in Aurora for searching the secret to the humaniform robot which only Dr. Han Fastolfe knows. Memphis was bred under thosee conditions, and thus he wants to expiriment on the robot."

"But Fastolfe could have denied at that point..."

"Fastolfe was, I hope I am not breaking the First Law of Robotics, arrogant. He thought that Memphis could not obtain the secret. Well, Memphis almost did, befroe his demise."

"Hmm... who are the other suspects excluding Fastolfe?"

"There is the head of the Institute called Dr. Amadiro, who's motives are to get the secret."

"But why would this Amadiro have to vanquish Memphis for that?"

"You are correct, partner Elijah. You have to prove Fastolfe safe."

[[The Spacers/ElijahBaley/Kosmos|To the hotel]]

[[Category:The Spacers|Kosmos Murder]] [[Category:Elijah Baley|Kosmos Murder]]

The Spacers/ElijahBaley/Ship

Timewalker — Sat, 29 Sep 2012 08:05:40 GMT

Timewalker:

You sight someone coming next to you. Is it a human? Is it a robot? No! It's your humaniform robot partner, [[The Spacers/DaneelOlivaw|'''R. Daneel Olivaw''']]! You dash towards him in joy and ask him about the details of the homicide. He responds by telling you that a roboticist was murdered.

"Who is he?" you ask.

"His name was Fastolfe."

"Fastolfe? FASTOLFE? You mean the same one who created you? The same one who came to Spacetown? The same one living on Aurora? '''THE SAME [[The Spacers/HanFastolfe|DR. HAN FASTOLFE]]?'''"

"No partner Elijah. This is Dr. Memphis Fastolfe, son of Prof. Memphis Wheeler. Wheeler was a great friend of our Fastolfe, thus he named his son after him."

"Oh, and what was he doing on uh... Cosmost?"

"Kosmos, partner Elijah. He was doing expiriments on the second humaniform robot, R. Jander Panell^, and the grounds of Kosmos is a wonderful place to do this. Actually, it is not, but Dr. Han Fastolfe, who did not want Memphis to learn about the humaniform robot, directed him there."

"Thus our Fastolfe had a motive to do that."

"And means and oppurtunity to do that, partner Elijh. A Auroran can freely access other worlds. Also, Memphis was killed by a blunt weapon. Oh, and we have reached Kosmos."

"I don't belive that Fasto-"

"He says he did not do it. I am sure of that, and I presume you do too."

Daneel was correct. Fastolfe would never lie, or atleast in these matters anyway. And of course, you have reached the planet. Do you want to walk in the gardens while discussing the matteer of the homicide or do you rush to the hotel?"

[[The Spacers/ElijahBaley/KosmosMurder|Discuss the homicide]]

[[The Spacers/ElijahBaley/Kosmos|To the hotel!]]

^Jander Panell was the victim of The Robots of Dawn. This happened before his shutdown.

[[Category:The Spacers|Ship]] [[Category:Elijah Baley|Ship]]

The Spacers/ElijahBaley

Timewalker — Sat, 29 Sep 2012 08:04:58 GMT

Timewalker:

'''NOTE: This story takes place before the events of the Robots of Dawn'''

R. Ernest Kipling moves next to you. This is a primitive Earth robot. '''It''', like every robot, says: Commissioner wants you. Now.

You respond: Okay. Go away!

The robot goes back due to the Second Law. You make your way into the Department.

"Anymore problems with the Spacers?" you ask.

"Yes, Lije. You have to go to Kosmos." says the Commisioner.

"So who has died now?"

"A roboticist called..."

"Yes Commisioner, what is he called?"

"You shall learn later."

[[The Spacers/ElijahBaley/Ship|Continue to the ship]]

[[Category:The Spacers|Elijah Baley]] [[Category:Elijah Baley|Elijah Baley]]

Category:Elijah Baley

Timewalker — Sat, 29 Sep 2012 07:57:36 GMT

Timewalker:

These are all the pages in ''[[The Spacers]]'' where you play as Elijah Baley.

[[Category:The Spacers]]

Category:Elijah Baley

Timewalker — Sat, 29 Sep 2012 07:56:55 GMT

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These are all the pages in ''[[The Spacers]]'' where you play as Elijah Baley.

Category:Elijah Baley

Timewalker — Sat, 29 Sep 2012 07:56:36 GMT

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These are all the pages in ''[[The Spacers]]'' where you play as Elijah Baley.

Category:Elijah Baley

Timewalker — Sat, 29 Sep 2012 07:56:18 GMT

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These are all the pages in [[''The Spacers'']] where you play as Elijah Baley.

The Spacers/ElijahBaley/Kosmos

Timewalker — Sat, 29 Sep 2012 07:54:21 GMT

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"Partner Elijah, it is not a hotel. It is an estate, next to the estate of Dr. Han Fastolfe, Prof. Memphis Wheeler and Ms. Gladia Solaria."

"Uh, Daneel, is Gladia Solaria the same person as the Gladia Delmarre whom we met on Solaria?" you ask.

"Yes Partner Elijah, why do you ask?" Daneel responds.

"Because..how is she involved in this case?"

"I have been given the detail that Memphis Fastolfe was the husband of Gladia Solaria, or as you prefer, Gladia Delmarre."

What? Only investigating her could find out.

[[The Spacers/ElijahBaley/Suspect/HanFastolfe|Speak to Fastolfe]]

[[The Spacers/ElijahBaley/Suspect/MemphisWheeler|Speak to Wheeler]]

[[The Spacers/ElijahBaley/Suspect/GladiaDelmarre|Speak to Gladia]]

[[The Spacers/ElijahBaley/House|Go to your estate]]

[[Category:The Spacers|Kosmos]] [[Category:Elijah Baley|Kosmos]]

The Spacers/ElijahBaley/Kosmos

Timewalker — Sat, 29 Sep 2012 07:36:39 GMT

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The Spacers/ElijahBaley/KosmosMurder

Timewalker — Sat, 29 Sep 2012 07:35:40 GMT

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The Spacers/ElijahBaley

Timewalker — Sat, 29 Sep 2012 07:34:45 GMT

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The Spacers/ElijahBaley/Ship

Timewalker — Sat, 29 Sep 2012 07:33:58 GMT

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The Spacers/ElijahBaley

Timewalker — Sat, 29 Sep 2012 07:31:35 GMT

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The Spacers

Timewalker — Sat, 29 Sep 2012 07:30:51 GMT

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'''The Spacers''' is a fanfiction tale that revolves around Isaac Asimov's Robot series. This tale consists of a detective called Elijah Baley from Earth that teams up with a robot, coming from a Spacer world. This robot is called R. Daneel Olivaw. One more thing, this robot looks like an exact human. You also have another robot, a normal one, called R. Giskard Revlentlov. Yes, the R stands for Robot. It's also a good thing to Wikipedia The Three Laws of Robotics before you begin. Now please choose the character you are playing as (all of them have a diffrent story):

'''[[The Spacers/ElijahBaley|Elijah Baley]]''': The main character and a detective from Earth.

'''[[The Spacers/Dr.HanFastolfe|Dr. Han Fastolfe]]''': A scientist from a Spacer planet and the inventor of Daneel and Giskard.

'''[[The Spacers/R.DaneelOlivaw|R. Daneel Olivaw]]''': A humaniform robot created by Fastolfe.
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The Spacers

Timewalker — Sat, 29 Sep 2012 07:30:35 GMT

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'''The Spacers''' is a fanfiction tale that revolves around Isaac Asimov's Robot series. This tale consists of a detective called Elijah Baley from Earth that teams up with a robot, coming from a Spacer world. This robot is called R. Daneel Olivaw. One more thing, this robot looks like an exact human. You also have another robot, a normal one, called R. Giskard Revlentlov. Yes, the R stands for Robot. It's also a good thing to Wikipedia The Three Laws of Robotics before you begin. Now please choose the character you are playing as (all of them have a diffrent story):

'''[[The Spacers/ElijahBaley|Elijah Baley]]'''>: The main character and a detective from Earth.

'''[[The Spacers/Dr.HanFastolfe|Dr. Han Fastolfe]]''': A scientist from a Spacer planet and the inventor of Daneel and Giskard.

'''[[The Spacers/R.DaneelOlivaw|R. Daneel Olivaw]]''': A humaniform robot created by Fastolfe.
[[Category:The Spacers]]

The Spacers/ElijahBaley/Kosmos

Timewalker — Sat, 29 Sep 2012 07:03:51 GMT

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"Partner Elijah, it is not a hotel. It is an estate, next to the estate of Dr. Han Fastolfe, Prof. Memphis Wheeler and Ms. Gladia Solaria."

"Uh, Daneel, is Gladia Solaria the same person as the Gladia Delmarre whom we met on Solaria?" you ask.

"Yes Partner Elijah, why do you ask?" Daneel responds.

"Because..how is she involved in this case?"

"I have been given the detail that Memphis Fastolfe was the husband of Gladia Solaria, or as you prefer, Gladia Delmarre."

What? Only investigating her could find out.

[[The Spacers/ElijahBaley/Suspect/HanFastolfe|Speak to Fastolfe]]

[[The Spacers/ElijahBaley/Suspect/MemphisWheeler|Speak to Wheeler]]

[[The Spacers/ElijahBaley/Suspect/GladiaDelmarre|Speak to Gladia]]

[[The Spacers/ElijahBaley/House|Go to your estate]]

[[Category:The Spacers]]

The Spacers/ElijahBaley/House

Timewalker — Sat, 29 Sep 2012 06:50:19 GMT

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Your estate is small. R. Daneel is sitting away in a corner, reading a few files. A bed is near the end of the room, and there is a minikitchen with a robot working. Next to them are book films. You can also leave to Fastolfe's place, Wheeler's place or Gladia's place. There is also some other places you can go to. So now what?

[[The Spacers/ElijahBaley/Suspect/HanFastolfe|Go to Fastolfe's estate]]

[[The Spacers/ElijahBaley/Suspect/MemphisWheeler|Go to the house of Wheeler]]

[[The Spacers/ElijahBaley/Suspect/GladiaDelmarre|Visit Gladia]]

[[The Spacers/ElijahBaley/Outside|Step outside]]

[[The Spacers/ElijahBaley/House/DaneelOlivaw|Speak to Daneel]]

[[The Spacers/ElijahBaley/House/BookFilms|View the book films]]

[[The Spacers/ElijahBaley/House/Sleep|Go to sleep]]

[[The Spacers/ElijahBaley/House/Kitchen|Eat something]]

The Spacers/ElijahBaley/House

Timewalker — Sat, 29 Sep 2012 03:34:37 GMT

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The Spacers/ElijahBaley/Suspect/GladiaDelmarre

Timewalker — Sat, 29 Sep 2012 03:31:40 GMT

Timewalker: Created page with 'Gladia! You had met her when you had gone to Solaria. "Hello Gladia, are we viewing or seeing?" you question. "I assure you we are seeing." "I just want to know about Memphis …'

Gladia! You had met her when you had gone to Solaria.

"Hello Gladia, are we viewing or seeing?" you question.

"I assure you we are seeing."

"I just want to know about Memphis Fastolfe."

'''HOW TO TALK:''' Look at the above URL. After /Suspect/GladiaDelmarre, add a slash (/) and put in a word. Pages will tell you which word to say. For now, you can add in a 'Homicide' word to start the conversation. There can also be easter eggs!

[[The Spacers/ElijahBaley/Suspect/HanFastolfe|Go to Fastolfe's estate]]

[[The Spacers/ElijahBaley/Suspect/MemphisWheeler|Speak to Wheeler]]

[[The Spacers/ElijahBaley/House|Go to your estate]]

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The Spacers/ElijahBaley/Suspect/MemphisWheeler

Timewalker — Sat, 29 Sep 2012 03:14:13 GMT

Timewalker: Created page with '"So you are the father of the late Dr. Fastolfe Memphis, are you?" you ask. "Yes I am." "Good, because I want to discuss the murder with you." '''HOW TO TALK:''' Look at the a…'

"So you are the father of the late Dr. Fastolfe Memphis, are you?" you ask.

"Yes I am."

"Good, because I want to discuss the murder with you."

'''HOW TO TALK:''' Look at the above URL. After /Suspect/MemphisWheeler, add a slash (/) and put in a word. Pages will tell you which word to say. For now, you can add in a 'Homicide' word to start the conversation. There can also be easter eggs!

[[The Spacers/ElijahBaley/Suspect/HanFastolfe|Speak to Fastolfe]]

[[The Spacers/ElijahBaley/Suspect/GladiaDelmarre|Speak to Gladia]]

[[The Spacers/ElijahBaley/House|Go to your house]]

[[Category:The Spacers]]

The Spacers/ElijahBaley/Suspect/HanFastolfe

Timewalker — Sat, 29 Sep 2012 03:05:08 GMT

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"So, Elijah 'Lije' Baley, we meet again. So what happened to the Medievalists at Earth?"

"A school of emigrants has been completed, and my son Bentley Baley and a few others have joined it. Now all we need are permission from the Spacer worlds."

"Ah, Elijah Baley, I don't think that is possible, unless you clear my name in this case. It would help in turning a few worlds in our favour, and we have only Earth and Solaria with us."

"Hmm, so I have a few things I want to talk with you about."

'''HOW TO TALK:''' Look at the above URL. After /Suspect/HanFastolfe, add a slash (/) and put in a word. Pages will tell you which word to say. For now, you can add in a 'Homicide' word to start the conversation. There can also be easter eggs!

[[The Spacers/ElijahBaley/Suspect/MemphisWheeler|Go to the house of Memphis]]

[[The Spacers/ElijahBaley/Suspect/GladiaDelmarre|Go to the house of Gladia]]

[[The Spacers/ElijahBaley/House|Go to your estate]]

[[Category:The Spacers]]

The Spacers/ElijahBaley/Suspect/HanFastolfe

Timewalker — Sat, 29 Sep 2012 03:04:30 GMT

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"So, Elijah 'Lije' Baley, we meet again. So what happened to the Medievalists at Earth?"

"A school of emigrants has been completed, and my son Bentley Baley and a few others have joined it. Now all we need are permission from the Spacer worlds."

"Ah, Elijah Baley, I don't think that is possible, unless you clear my name in this case. It would help in turning a few worlds in our favour, and we have only Earth and Solaria with us."

"Hmm, so I have a few things I want to talk with you about."

'''HOW TO TALK:''' Look at the above URL. After /Suspect/HanFastolfe, add a slash (/) and put in a word. Pages will tell you which word to say. For now, you can add in a 'Homicide' word to start the conversation. There can also be easter eggs!

[[The Spacers/ElijahBaley/Suspect/MemphisWheeler|Go to the house of Memphis]]

[[The Spacers/ElijahBaley/Suspect/GladiaDelmarre|Go to the house of Gladia]]

[[The Spacers/ElijahBaley/House|Go to your estate]]

The Spacers/ElijahBaley/Suspect/HanFastolfe

Timewalker — Sat, 29 Sep 2012 03:04:10 GMT

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"So, Elijah 'Lije' Baley, we meet again. So what happened to the Medievalists at Earth?"

"A school of emigrants has been completed, and my son Bentley Baley and a few others have joined it. Now all we need are permission from the Spacer worlds."

"Ah, Elijah Baley, I don't think that is possible, unless you clear my name in this case. It would help in turning a few worlds in our favour, and we have only Earth and Solaria with us."

"Hmm, so I have a few things I want to talk with you about."

'''HOW TO TALK:''' Look at the above URL. After /Suspect/HanFastolfe, add a slash (/) and put in a word. Pages will tell you which word to say. For now, you can add in a 'Homicide' word to start the conversation. There can also be easter eggs!

[[The Spacers/ElijahBaley/Suspect/MemphisWheeler|Go to the house of Memphis]]
[[The Spacers/ElijahBaley/Suspect/GladiaDelmarre|Go to the house of Gladia]]
[[The Spacers/ElijahBaley/House|Go to your estate]]

The Spacers/ElijahBaley/Ship

Timewalker — Sat, 29 Sep 2012 02:53:41 GMT

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You sight someone coming next to you. Is it a human? Is it a robot? No! It's your humaniform robot partner, [[The Spacers/DaneelOlivaw|'''R. Daneel Olivaw''']]! You dash towards him in joy and ask him about the details of the homicide. He responds by telling you that a roboticist was murdered.

"Who is he?" you ask.

"His name was Fastolfe."

"Fastolfe? FASTOLFE? You mean the same one who created you? The same one who came to Spacetown? The same one living on Aurora? '''THE SAME [[The Spacers/HanFastolfe|DR. HAN FASTOLFE]]?'''"

"No partner Elijah. This is Dr. Memphis Fastolfe, son of Prof. Memphis Wheeler. Wheeler was a great friend of our Fastolfe, thus he named his son after him."

"Oh, and what was he doing on uh... Cosmost?"

"Kosmos, partner Elijah. He was doing expiriments on the second humaniform robot, R. Jander Panell^, and the grounds of Kosmos is a wonderful place to do this. Actually, it is not, but Dr. Han Fastolfe, who did not want Memphis to learn about the humaniform robot, directed him there."

"Thus our Fastolfe had a motive to do that."

"And means and oppurtunity to do that, partner Elijh. A Auroran can freely access other worlds. Also, Memphis was killed by a blunt weapon. Oh, and we have reached Kosmos."

"I don't belive that Fasto-"

"He says he did not do it. I am sure of that, and I presume you do too."

Daneel was correct. Fastolfe would never lie, or atleast in these matters anyway. And of course, you have reached the planet. Do you want to walk in the gardens while discussing the matteer of the homicide or do you rush to the hotel?"

[[The Spacers/ElijahBaley/KosmosMurder|Discuss the homicide]]

[[The Spacers/ElijahBaley/Kosmos|To the hotel!]]

^Jander Panell was the victim of The Robots of Dawn. This happened before his shutdown.

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The Spacers/ElijahBaley/Suspect/HanFastolfe

Timewalker — Sat, 29 Sep 2012 02:50:25 GMT

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"So, Elijah 'Lije' Baley, we meet again. So what happened to the Medievalists at Earth?

The Spacers/ElijahBaley/Kosmos

Timewalker — Sat, 29 Sep 2012 02:48:51 GMT

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"Partner Elijah, it is not a hotel. It is an estate, next to the estate of Dr. Han Fastolfe, Prof. Memphis Wheeler and Ms. Gladia Solaria."

"Uh, Daneel, is Gladia Solaria the same person as the Gladia Delmarre whom we met on Solaria?" you ask.

"Yes Partner Elijah, why do you ask?" Daneel responds.

"Because..how is she involved in this case?"

"I have been given the detail that Memphis Fastolfe was the husband of Gladia Solaria, or as you prefer, Gladia Delmarre."

What? Only investigating her could find out.

[[The Spacers/ElijahBaley/Suspect/HanFastolfe|Speak to Fastolfe]]

[[The Spacers/ElijahBaley/Suspect/MemphisWheeler|Speak to Wheeler]]

[[The Spacers/ElijahBaley/Suspect/GladiaDelmarre|Speak to Gladia]]

[[Category:The Spacers]]

The Spacers/ElijahBaley/Kosmos

Timewalker — Sat, 29 Sep 2012 02:48:33 GMT

Timewalker: Created page with '"Partner Elijah, it is not a hotel. It is an estate, next to the estate of Dr. Han Fastolfe, Prof. Memphis Wheeler and Ms. Gladia Solaria." "Uh, Daneel, is Gladia Solaria the sa…'

"Partner Elijah, it is not a hotel. It is an estate, next to the estate of Dr. Han Fastolfe, Prof. Memphis Wheeler and Ms. Gladia Solaria."

"Uh, Daneel, is Gladia Solaria the same person as the Gladia Delmarre whom we met on Solaria?" you ask.

"Yes Partner Elijah, why do you ask?" Daneel responds.

"Because..how is she involved in this case?"

"I have been given the detail that Memphis Fastolfe was the husband of Gladia Solaria, or as you prefer, Gladia Delmarre."

What? Only investigating her could find out.

[[The Spacers/ElijahBaley/Suspect/HanFastolfe|Speak to Fastolfe]]
[[The Spacers/ElijahBaley/Suspect/MemphisWheeler|Speak to Wheeler]]
[[The Spacers/ElijahBaley/Suspect/GladiaDelmarre|Speak to Gladia]]

[[Category:The Spacers]]

The Spacers/ElijahBaley/KosmosMurder

Timewalker — Sat, 29 Sep 2012 02:39:33 GMT

Timewalker: Created page with 'You command Daneel to walk in the recreational garden ahead of your ship. You sit on a bench and ask him more of the victim. "Doctor Memphis Fastolfe was a tall, skinny man who …'