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Saya/Black Dress/2/Borias Hemilton/Mercenaries/The next morning...

Happyazngirl — Sat, 14 Apr 2012 08:38:53 GMT

Happyazngirl: Created page with 'The morning light leaks through your curtains. It hits your eyes, and you wake up with a groan. After rolling around in bed a bit, you get out and do some morning stretches. I…'

The morning light leaks through your curtains. It hits your eyes, and you wake up with a groan. After rolling around in bed a bit, you get out and do some morning stretches. It is a new day.

There are many things you have to do today. You have to leave today to go meet your new husband, but you also promised to introduce Kaleb and his band of mercenaries to the mage. There is still time before you have to leave so you can personally introduce the mage to Kaleb, but you can also leave the task to someone else and use the free time at your leisure. In either case you need to talk to Duran.

You find Duran and, surprisingly, Kaleb outside in the training ring sparring. His mercenary group is standing around the ring, hooting and hollering encouragements at both competitors. If Kaleb's exhausted face is anything to go by, this round's winner is about to be Duran. You are proven correct when, not half a minute later, Kaleb's sword is struck away from his grip and he is on his back staring up at the sky.

"Aye, a mighty good spar. I'd say the score is 6 to 0, in my favor," Duran says as he walks over to Kaleb and reaches his hand out.

"5 to 1," Kaleb responds as he grabs Duran's offered hand and hauls himself up, "I won the first match."

As Kaleb is looking around for his sword, he notices you standing there watching. His face changes from confusion, to surprise, to bashfulness in under a minute.

"M-my lady...uhhhh...Saya...uhh...princess?" he stutters slightly as he bows a bit.

Duran lets out a bark of laughter and slaps Kaleb on the back as he addresses you.

"G'morning lass," he asks, amusement at Kaleb's formality in his eyes, "They've been filled in on the little details, so what are the plans for today?"

[[Saya/Black Dress/2/Borias Hemilton/Mercenaries/Go meet the mage with Kaleb|Take Kaleb and the mercenary to meet the mage personally.]]

[[Saya/Black Dress/2/Borias Hemilton/Mercenaries/Enjoy your free time|Tell Duran to get someone else to take care of mage introduction, while you use the much earned free time at your leisure.]]

{{Princess Status|Equipment=''Black Dress''|Health=100|Stamina=100|Mood=Ready|Gold=100|Silver=00|Copper=00|Possessions=''Mother's Katana, Full Black Leather Armor''}}

[[Category:The life of a medieval princess]]

Saya/Black Dress/2/Borias Hemilton/Mercenaries/Arrange for them to meet with a nearby mage you know

Happyazngirl — Sat, 14 Apr 2012 08:34:39 GMT

Happyazngirl:

You don't like mages much, but if you're gonna help someone, you shouldn't give up halfway trough. As they all look down sadly realizing his arm could be saved but they don't have the means to do it, you shake them out of it by casually saying "Well, I do know some mages trough my father.. I could ask one of them to take a look"

Its as if someone just turned on the lights when all faces in the room turn to you excitedly. Kaleb is the first to recover "You- you'd do that for us? Contact a real mage? Thats.. well.." he struggles for words. You can't help yourself and let out a little giggle "It's no problem, besides, there are some mages who're quite happy if they're given the chance to actually use their powers for something good once in a while. Usually, they're only ever allowed to unleash destruction on enemies.

You remember the last time you met with the mages in the nearby tower vividly. ([[Read Saya and the mages' story]])

Pulling yourself out of your memories, you get up. "I should probably make arrangements beforehand tho and I have to leave town tomorrow, hmm.. do any of you feel like becoming my bodyguards for a while till I can set up a meeting? Shouldn't be more than a week, maybe two, and it'll be difficult to stay in contact otherwise since I don't really know where I'll end up"

The men are quite eager to be bodyguards of a beautiful noblewoman, especially since you're offering to heal one of their own. Initially, Kaleb offers to join you for free, but you refuse to let anyone work for free, so you settle on paying them 25 gold - A very decent price for a mercenary squad with this size and experience, they'd normally cost 50 gold easily but they won't let you pay that much - after that's settled, they happily agree to serve you.

It's gotten late and you decide to return to the castle, surrounded by your new entourage. Since you kinda forgot to tell them, their eyes go wide as you stroll into the royal castle like you own the place and are treated as such as well. They soon learn of your identity and a few of them reflexively start bowing and apologizing for apparently rude behavior. You grin and tell them to just call you Saya, leaving them speechless. You retire to your rooms, Duran and the others will probably fill them in on the details by the morning.

[[Saya/Black Dress/2/Borias Hemilton/Mercenaries/The next morning...|The next morning...]]

{{Princess Status|Equipment=''Black Dress''|Health=100|Stamina=100|Mood=Ready|Gold=125|Silver=00|Copper=00|Possessions=''Mother's Katana, Full Black Leather Armor''}}

[[Category:The life of a medieval princess]]

User talk:Platypus

Happyazngirl — Thu, 12 Apr 2012 05:46:20 GMT

Happyazngirl:

Since this page has become rather cluttered, I've moved old discussions to the archive page below. Feel free to leave new messages here. I'll get back to you ASAP!

*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive1]]
*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive2]]

>Add new comments below. Do not add new comments to the archive.

Hey Platypus,

I'm working on starting The House on Horny Hill. I neglected to save an intermediate page and so some later ones were deleted as orphaned. Could those be recovered so I only have to re-write the page that I forgot to save earlier?
--[[User:DickHardy|DickHardy]] 23:11, 3 April 2012 (UTC)

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Whoa ^^ I get the feeling you're way stricter than my English teacher xp. My spelling and grammar skills are little more than readable I'm afraid. I'm not native English or anything so.. I'll try ^^ (it's only my third language)

It took me over 15 minutes to even figure out what you'd changed on some of those pages ^^, after figuring that out I was left stupefied as to what was wrong with it in the first place -_-. Looks like my grammar may remain beneath your expectations for quite a while yet.. (completely hopeless)

--[[User:Zoroastra|Zoroastra]]

What do you mean 'title of the story?'

-- Apollo.

Playtpus my man {or bird if you are female}
Great place that you have here and fantastic stories going down but l have a slight problem here.
Whenever l try to edit Smutty Sex Romp then this comes up "Permission error...users and bureaucrats allowed."
What in the NINE HELLS does that mean?

-- Apollo

Platypus, sorry i've been no here for a while.....just tell me what ''Choose your own adventure'' are you? I mean what category are you?

Starforce

Ah, OK. But what do you mean by title?

--Starforce

I just made Category: Randy Orton good now?

--Starforce

Then all my pages have the category, if not, example the Pokemon Trainer Academy is PKMN PTA not Pokemon Adventure, it's not my fault it's the creator fault.

--Starforce

--MaxJose

DUDE DID YOU DELETE A BUNCH OF MY STORY PLEASE RESPOND I NEED TO KNOW THIS AND IF YOU DID WHY.

--MaxJose

dude i was wondering if you can find out who did it or if you can get it back i really need this.

== Re: deleteme ==

Oh shit, I guess that makes a lot more sense now that I think about it. Whoops.

My apologies, man. --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 03:23, 1 April 2012 (UTC)

Hi. Something has happened to my story. I keep trying to get my page back but it's blank. I clicked restore and it says it's done but the page still says it's been blanked. How or who did that? Was it when I was editing? Could you restore my page/s for me as I can't seem to find out how.
Continuation
*hi again. I know you fixed it but my page was blanked again. Could you tell me how it's happening. All I did was edit the first page of text. I didn't touch the catagory link or the options i only changed the dialog. Is it something I'm doing by mistake. If it happens again how do i fix it myself so i dont have to bother you. If you couldn't tell I'm new at this*

CaptainMorgan30

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Hello. I'm sorry for bothering you, but I have two questions.
1. Can you delete this page for me? http://editthis.info/choose_your_own_adventure/The_next_morning.._*Black_Dress_2%2BDuran%2BMercs*
Thank you very much. The title for the page doesn't fit with the rest of the story and I seemed to have failed at formatting it correctly which leads me to...

2. I'm a little more than confused at how to make the link appear at the top of the page (under the title of said page) which allows you to go back to a point in the story. I've read the tutorial page and stared at the coding for the page trying to figure it out, but I'm utterly perplexed at it. I'd be extremely grateful if you could shed some light on it for me. --[[User:Happyazngirl|Happyazngirl]] 05:46, 12 April 2012 (UTC)

User talk:Platypus

Happyazngirl — Thu, 12 Apr 2012 05:45:49 GMT

Happyazngirl:

Since this page has become rather cluttered, I've moved old discussions to the archive page below. Feel free to leave new messages here. I'll get back to you ASAP!

*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive1]]
*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive2]]

>Add new comments below. Do not add new comments to the archive.

Hey Platypus,

I'm working on starting The House on Horny Hill. I neglected to save an intermediate page and so some later ones were deleted as orphaned. Could those be recovered so I only have to re-write the page that I forgot to save earlier?
--[[User:DickHardy|DickHardy]] 23:11, 3 April 2012 (UTC)

----

Whoa ^^ I get the feeling you're way stricter than my English teacher xp. My spelling and grammar skills are little more than readable I'm afraid. I'm not native English or anything so.. I'll try ^^ (it's only my third language)

It took me over 15 minutes to even figure out what you'd changed on some of those pages ^^, after figuring that out I was left stupefied as to what was wrong with it in the first place -_-. Looks like my grammar may remain beneath your expectations for quite a while yet.. (completely hopeless)

--[[User:Zoroastra|Zoroastra]]

What do you mean 'title of the story?'

-- Apollo.

Playtpus my man {or bird if you are female}
Great place that you have here and fantastic stories going down but l have a slight problem here.
Whenever l try to edit Smutty Sex Romp then this comes up "Permission error...users and bureaucrats allowed."
What in the NINE HELLS does that mean?

-- Apollo

Platypus, sorry i've been no here for a while.....just tell me what ''Choose your own adventure'' are you? I mean what category are you?

Starforce

Ah, OK. But what do you mean by title?

--Starforce

I just made Category: Randy Orton good now?

--Starforce

Then all my pages have the category, if not, example the Pokemon Trainer Academy is PKMN PTA not Pokemon Adventure, it's not my fault it's the creator fault.

--Starforce

--MaxJose

DUDE DID YOU DELETE A BUNCH OF MY STORY PLEASE RESPOND I NEED TO KNOW THIS AND IF YOU DID WHY.

--MaxJose

dude i was wondering if you can find out who did it or if you can get it back i really need this.

== Re: deleteme ==

Oh shit, I guess that makes a lot more sense now that I think about it. Whoops.

My apologies, man. --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 03:23, 1 April 2012 (UTC)

Hi. Something has happened to my story. I keep trying to get my page back but it's blank. I clicked restore and it says it's done but the page still says it's been blanked. How or who did that? Was it when I was editing? Could you restore my page/s for me as I can't seem to find out how.
Continuation
*hi again. I know you fixed it but my page was blanked again. Could you tell me how it's happening. All I did was edit the first page of text. I didn't touch the catagory link or the options i only changed the dialog. Is it something I'm doing by mistake. If it happens again how do i fix it myself so i dont have to bother you. If you couldn't tell I'm new at this*

CaptainMorgan30

Hello. I'm sorry for bothering you, but I have two questions.
1. Can you delete this page for me? http://editthis.info/choose_your_own_adventure/The_next_morning.._*Black_Dress_2%2BDuran%2BMercs*
Thank you very much. The title for the page doesn't fit with the rest of the story and I seemed to have failed at formatting it correctly which leads me to...

2. I'm a little more than confused at how to make the link appear at the top of the page (under the title of said page) which allows you to go back to a point in the story. I've read the tutorial page and stared at the coding for the page trying to figure it out, but I'm utterly perplexed at it. I'd be extremely grateful if you could shed some light on it for me.

Kaleb

Happyazngirl — Sat, 07 Apr 2012 03:29:08 GMT

Happyazngirl:

'''Measurements:'''

Height: 6'3" (190.5 cm)

Weight: 200 lbs (90.72 kg)

General Description: Tall and lean. Not highly attractive, but he has turned some head due to his rugged looks. His muscles come from hard work and traveling rugged terrain rather than weight lifting. He has brown hair, which he has cut short for easier management. Blue eyes, slightly stubble face,quite tan from traveling, and some scars from battle.

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'''Combat Stats'''

Favorite Weapon : Claymore

Secondary Weapon: Stiletto

Combat power : 50

Unarmed Combat Power : 35

Strength : High (He's a mercenary and has been in more than a few fights where his life was in mortal peril)

Speed : High (He's faster than most soldiers due to his leanness and it gives him an edge in battle. Not to mention he is used to his sword weight so he can swing it around with ease.)

Endurance : High (He can probably get stabbed in the arm and continue fighting with little to no side effect.)

Willpower : High (He knows his values and will keep by them no matter what. It'll take a lot to shake his beliefs.)

Magical Ability : Limited (He knows it exist and that it is quite dangerous.)

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'''Personal Stats'''

Patience: Medium (He can tolerate a round about way of getting to the point, but if it drags on for too long he'll get annoyed.)

Diplomacy: Low (He's usually blunt, but he knows when to use a little discretion.)

Intimidate: High (He's pretty big, and countless battles have left their mark on his body.)

Bluff: Low (Once again he is rather blunt, and more often then not his emotions are on his face.)

Charm: Medium (He can pick up girls at the bar pretty easily, but is slightly clueless to how much his looks contribute to that ease.)

Sneaking: Limited (He's more used to charging in, and breaking open locked doors.)

Acrobatics: Medium (Pretty nimble. Can climb and jump over most things with ease, but a backflip is out of the question.)

Tool Use: Medium (He can disable common traps.)

Survival: Very High (Traveling has taught him some things about living with limited resources.)

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'''General Personality'''

He sometimes comes off as a gruff, blunt, and sometimes scary mercenary. Underneath it all, however, is a pretty nice guy who sometimes gets a little too flustered by beautiful women. His mercenary band are his dearest friend, and he always thinks about their safety and well being first.

[[Category:TLOAMP Characters]]

Kaleb

Happyazngirl — Sat, 07 Apr 2012 03:27:25 GMT

Happyazngirl:

'''Measurements:'''

Height: 6'3" (190.5 cm)

Weight: 200 lbs (90.72 kg)

General Description: Tall and lean. Not highly attractive, but he has turned some head due to his rugged looks. His muscles come from hard work and traveling rugged terrain rather than weight lifting. He has brown hair, which he has cut short for easier management. Blue eyes, slightly stubble face,quite tan from traveling, and some scars from battle.

----

'''Combat Stats'''

Favorite Weapon : Claymore

Secondary Weapon: Stiletto

Combat power : 50

Unarmed Combat Power : 35

Strength : High (He's a mercenary and has been in more than a few fights where his life was in mortal peril)

Speed : High (He's faster than most soldiers due to his leanness and it gives him an edge in battle. Not to mention he is used to his sword weight so he can swing it around with ease.)

Endurance : High (He can probably get stabbed in the arm and continue fighting with little to no side effect.)

Willpower : High (He knows his values and will keep by them no matter what. It'll take a lot to shake his beliefs.)

Magical Ability : Limited (He knows it exist and that it is quite dangerous.)

----

'''Personal Stats'''

Patience: Medium (He can tolerate a round about way of getting to the point, but if it drags on for too long he'll get annoyed.)

Diplomacy: Low (He's usually blunt, but he knows when to use a little discretion.)

Intimidate: High (He's pretty big, and countless battles have left their mark on his body.)

Bluff: Low (Once again he is rather blunt, and more often then not his emotions are on his face.)

Charm: Medium (He can pick up girls at the bar pretty easily, but is slightly clueless to how much his looks contribute to that ease.)

Sneaking: Limited (He's more used to charging in, and breaking open locked doors.)

Acrobatics: Medium (Pretty nimble. Can climb and jump over most things with ease, but a backflip is out of the question.)
Tool Use: Medium (He can disable common traps.)

Survival: Very High (Traveling has taught him some things about living with limited resources.)

----

'''General Personality'''

He sometimes comes off as a gruff, blunt, and sometimes scary mercenary. Underneath it all, however, is a pretty nice guy who sometimes gets a little too flustered by beautiful women. His mercenary band are his dearest friend, and he always thinks about their safety and well being first.

[[Category:TLOAMP Characters]]

Kaleb

Happyazngirl — Sat, 07 Apr 2012 03:25:50 GMT

Happyazngirl: Created page with ''''Measurements:''' Height: 6'3" (190.5 cm) Weight: 200 lbs (90.72 kg) General Description: Tall and lean. Not highly attractive, but he has turned some head due to his rugged…'

'''Measurements:'''

Height: 6'3" (190.5 cm)
Weight: 200 lbs (90.72 kg)

General Description: Tall and lean. Not highly attractive, but he has turned some head due to his rugged looks. His muscles come from hard work and traveling rugged terrain rather than weight lifting. He has brown hair, which he has cut short for easier management. Blue eyes, slightly stubble face,quite tan from traveling, and some scars from battle.

----

'''Combat Stats'''

Favorite Weapon : Claymore
Secondary Weapon: Stiletto
Combat power : 50
Unarmed Combat Power : 35

Strength : High (He's a mercenary and has been in more than a few fights where his life was in mortal peril)
Speed : High (He's faster than most soldiers due to his leanness and it gives him an edge in battle. Not to mention he is used to his sword weight so he can swing it around with ease.)
Endurance : High (He can probably get stabbed in the arm and continue fighting with little to no side effect.)
Willpower : High (He knows his values and will keep by them no matter what. It'll take a lot to shake his beliefs.)
Magical Ability : Limited (He knows it exist and that it is quite dangerous.)

----

'''Personal Stats'''

Patience: Medium (He can tolerate a round about way of getting to the point, but if it drags on for too long he'll get annoyed.)
Diplomacy: Low (He's usually blunt, but he knows when to use a little discretion.)
Intimidate: High (He's pretty big, and countless battles have left their mark on his body.)
Bluff: Low (Once again he is rather blunt, and more often then not his emotions are on his face.)
Charm: Medium (He can pick up girls at the bar pretty easily, but is slightly clueless to how much his looks contribute to that ease.)
Sneaking: Limited (He's more used to charging in, and breaking open locked doors.)
Acrobatics: Medium (Pretty nimble. Can climb and jump over most things with ease, but a backflip is out of the question.)
Tool Use: Medium (He can disable common traps.)
Survival: Very High (Traveling has taught him some things about living with limited resources.)

----

'''General Personality'''

He sometimes comes off as a gruff, blunt, and sometimes scary mercenary. Underneath it all, however, is a pretty nice guy who sometimes gets a little too flustered by beautiful women. His mercenary band are his dearest friend, and he always thinks about their safety and well being first.

[[Category:TLOAMP Characters]]

Other Characters

Happyazngirl — Sat, 07 Apr 2012 01:45:22 GMT

Happyazngirl:

[[Willem]]

[[Duran]]

[[Karl Raingold]]

[[Lord Ruairi]]

[[Dareth]]

[[Cassie]]

[[Betty]]

[[Alexis]] & [[Marie]]

[[Scar]]

[[Kaleb]]

[[Template for creating new characters (do not edit)]]

Author's note : if you don't have any experience editing pages, please experiment around with one of the stories in the
[[Pit of Abandoned Stories]] before editing this story

[[Category:TLOAMP Characters]]

User talk:Zoroastra

Happyazngirl — Mon, 26 Mar 2012 06:25:52 GMT

Happyazngirl: /* happyazngirl */ new section

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==[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]]==

Ah. Yes, I've kept Bloodsport off of the main page because it's not even 1 pages yet. But, what's existing so far can be found at [[Bloodsport:Menu|this here link.]] -- 21:57, 24 January 2012 (UTC)

Just getting back to you on your latest correspondence.

I myself have been taking a break (as if I even do anything to begin with >.>) from the site and have just started coming back. And as for the apostrophe situation, [http://www.grammarbook.com/punctuation/apostro.asp] <--- that might help.

And Bloodsport will resume as soon as I can figure out how I want to portray the scene with the Królowa Krwi before Marissa's first fight. THEN, I need to read some combat pages to see how it should best be done. But, hopefully I'll get my shit together soon. --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 11:39, 2 February 2012 (UTC)

== [[User:Chlo's-closet|Chlo's-Closet]] ==

Ohh! I really like the sea monster idea. That's good! :)
Yes, actually, I do have a specific idea. If you come up with something better, you could use that, just tell me so I can keep the story consistent. I think he developed a spell that could increase your power by a large amount for a small period of time, and the King heard mention of it and bribed him not to tell anyone the spell or to use the spell. The bribe is a princess as a bride, haha. --[[User:Chlo's-closet|Chlo]] 23:34, 23 February 2012 (UTC)

Yay! 300+ pages!!! Anyways, I like the new indifferent storylines! I'm going to go and edit them sometime, but not now becuase I'm very busy in RL. --[[User:Chlo's-closet|Chlo]] 19:47, 23 February 2012 (UTC)

Just so you know, I have continued with options other than the usual grammar/spelling edits. For example, I have created the page with the purplish nightgown in the Amelia arc. I hope I'm not intruding on the story in any way. I think this is ok according to the editor's guide, but I just wanted to check back with you, just in case.--[[User:Chlo's-closet|Chlo]] 22:44, 13 February 2012 (UTC)

I found the Amelia storyline, but if you decide to add a Ruairi storyline, sending me a link is nice, like you did with Saya. I like how you kept with the weird rumors about Lord Ruairi. :) However, I think it'd be even funnier if they were all rumors about how good at manipulating fire he is. XD Since fire is his weak element. Just as a running joke at the beginning (not that I'm trying to make this a comedy/parody, just that a little humor adds to the story). As for the lake name, I agree that it should have a better name. I'm kind of bad at place names though... If you come up with something, post it in Additional Information on Lord Ruairi's Character Page. Thanks. --[[User:Chlo's-closet|Chlo]] 20:59, 13 February 2012 (UTC)

I think it'd be awesome to have Lord Ruairi have a minor appearance in other storylines! However, if Saya met him in a tower, he was probably visiting someone, since he lives in this really excluded lake area. I didn't consider healing spells... he probably knows basics... Just for future reference, you could also play him as antagonist/villain, just as long as you have a good reason for his actions, since he's not evil, just manipulative. In any case, feel free to add a scene with him! I think it's a great idea. --[[User:Chlo's-closet|Chlo]] 15:37, 10 February 2012 (UTC)

By the way, (I know, I know, I'm typing your ears off XD) what is the difference between equipment and possessions in the status indicator? I know that equipment is what she is wearing... but other than that, I'm not entirely certain. Please explain? --Chlo 18:49, 8 February 2012 (UTC)

I saw something similar in that Girl Scout Camp story. I thought it'd be easier to navigate if I just linked them together like that. That's why there's the code thing. --Chlo 18:19, 8 February 2012 (UTC)

You're right about the copy/paste thing, of course. I just wanted to get a move on with the plot, so I did that. Feel free to add extra details like tripping over the heavy dress etc.. In the coming scenes, I plan for there to be more variety.--Chlo 16:45, 8 February 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, the basic plan for Arturia in this case seems to be to go straight to the suitor (ie Lord Ruairi), so that most of the drama will be there. But we'll see what happens, I guess. :) --Chlo 19:14, 7 February 2012 (UTC)

Yay, I'm so happy that you like him! I really can't wait until the scene when he and Arturia meet. (Which is silly, since I'm probably going to be the one writing it.) On another topic, I'm working on the scene where Arturia leaves, and I'm checking back to the Saya scenes you wrote and using them for reference, so things may echo what you've written, just for continuity. And thanks for the tips. :) I'm still getting the hang of things around here.--Chlo 18:56, 7 February 2012 (UTC)

Just letting you know that it is spelled "thought" not "tought". Also, words such as "wonderful", "beautiful", "bashful", etc. only have one L at the end. If you fix these in the continuing parts of the story it would save me a lot of work. Thanks! --Chlo 00:30, 7 February 2012 (UTC)

I like your Princess story. :) Just letting you know that I'll be editing spelling errors and changing sentence structure so that it's slightly easier to read. I may even add more, if I can think of something.--Chlo 00:32, 4 February 2012 (UTC)

==[[User:Platypus|Platypus]]==

I originally blocked oridinary users from moving pages becasue vandals were seriously trashing the site with the move function. But it's been a while since we've have any major vandal activity, so I'll take a shot at unblocking the function. We'll see what happens. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:16, 1 March 2012 (UTC)

If you can find a file-sharing site to upload your pic to, you can put a link to it on a page here. Unfortunately, RobKohr, the system admin, had to disable uploading pics directly to this site due to space considerations. That's not something I can change. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 02:34, 6 March 2012 (UTC)

If you're going to contribute to Rampage, please use proper grammar. Sentences start with capital letters. Sentences end with periods and shouldn't be combined with other sentences using commas. An elipsis is ''always'' three periods, never two. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:01, 16 March 2012 (UTC)

== happyazngirl ==

Hello. I just wanted to drop by and tell you that your story The life of a medieval princess if really awesome and I loved reading through it all (I went through all the paths in one night o.o). I've also been editing some of the pages, so I hope you don't really mind that. --[[User:Happyazngirl|Happyazngirl]] 06:25, 26 March 2012 (UTC)

User talk:Chlo's-closet

Happyazngirl — Mon, 26 Mar 2012 06:20:30 GMT

Happyazngirl:

{{warn1}}--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 10:26, 31 January 2012 (UTC)

It's nice to see someone else who cares about things like proper spelling. If you want to take over Minotaur's Laberynth, I'll move it. As sysop, I can move pages. Ordinary users can't. But generally speaking, if a writer misspells his page title, I'll leave it as a warning to the readers that ''this'' is the skill level of said writer. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 14:31, 2 February 2012 (UTC)

Those database error messages pop up on occasion. You usually don't have to do anything more than wait a moment and try again. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 16:19, 4 February 2012 (UTC)

==Conversations with [[User talk:Zoroastra|Zoroastra]]==
yeah, the -th- and -ll- I m never entirely certain on how to spell ^^, I hope it'll be somewhat better since I actually updated my spelling corrector to English (was using a quite useless dutch spelling corrector so far..

P.S. Please do not edit parameter-names without editing the template or it will show between brackets {{{}}}

-edited template so visible 'possessions:' is spelled correctly, parameters still spelled faulty but would have to be changed on EVERY page as well as the template - might do so if I have the time, not right now. Hint : only change parameter values, not names(parameter names aren't visible anyway)

- I really liked the new character Lord Ruairi, he sounds different from any characters I make somehow.

yea, I'm just figuring out things as I go too ^^, only been about 20 days since I started writing this story.

the original idea was to leave for the suitor immediately, tho I've only gotten side-tracked alot so far xp

[[User:Zoroastra|Zoroastra]]

-This is just a personal preference but, I think it's a good idea to avoid copy-pasting in its entirety, make subtle differences such as :

light dress : you might feel more like taking a horse than the slow carriage

Heavy dress : You can hardly ride a horse in this getup so..

Silky Dress : you can go either way, but they'd probably rather see you get into the carriage since you actually look like a woman for a change. (allows for an extra choice page you don't have in the other two options)

Just to avoid repetition, if someone wants to read another side of the story and starts over with other options, but sees only completely identical pages, they probably won't read it to the point where it actually starts making a difference. Offcourse the bulk of it is still copy-pasted :-)

Stuff like tripping over the heavy dress because you aren't used to it, or getting embarrassed about people looking at you in the silky dress is always a nice bonus, just add or edit a few lines of text.

--[[User:Zoroastra|Zoroastra]]

-updated The monetary system (gold, silver, copper instead of gold only) three different parameter values for the currencies.

-fixed the spelling of 'possessions' parameter name(should be finished now)

P.S. it might be easier to just pick one option for now, and write the other options later or leave them to someone else. Thats what I've been doing mostly. There's no need to write all options at once. Also, asking people to pick the right code there looks a little.. improvised xp.

--[[User:Zoroastra|Zoroastra]]

Possesions is what you own but aren't carrying on you, Example : Saya's katana is on her horse or in the carriage, but she isn't walking around with it unless you go for the leather armor. You can't use these possessions without going back to where they're stored. Equipment is what you have on you ready to use at any time.

-basically : your wallet's normally equipment, but if you forget your wallet at home, it becomes a possession xp

P.S. I also think it's a funny idea to mention it under equipment if you're tied up or caught in something, tho thats just a personal preference.

--[[User:Zoroastra|Zoroastra]]

-Got an idea : Would like to use Lord Ruairi in Saya's storyline [[Arrange_for_them_to_meet_with_a_nearby_mage_you_know|here]], I do realize he doesn't have healing abilities, but one mage is as good as any other to Saya lol. If thats OK I'll add that part of the storyline after I have a bit of an idea about who lord Ruairi is from your storyline.

--[[User:Zoroastra|Zoroastra]]

-Started an Amelia-storyline with lord Ruairi, offcourse, I'll wait with continuing the story untill I know more about him from your storyline. Bound to be interesting how different it'll turn out.

- Also : Do you have a name for the lake where lord Ruairi lives? I called it 'Lake Ruairi' for now, but it might be better with a fancier name ^^

--[[User:Zoroastra|Zoroastra]]

hehe, forgot about the link since its pretty much the only Amelia storyline so far ^^

adding an option here and there isn't a problem, especially if the story is way past that point allready (who knows if I'll ever get back to it otherwise)

a nice rule may be to only add an option if the original author has allready added his favorite option. Don't take the story beyond the point where the original author is tho. (you might interfere with the way the story was intended to go)

As for lake names : Aurora(kinda cool, means reflection of light), Lough Neagh(weird name lol), Loch Ness(you probably know the monster of Loch Ness), Bodensee (Neat lake in germany, been there), I'm just coming up with existing lake names tho xp

I think I'll go with Lake Aurora for now, lemme know if you find something you like better? :p

Added the fire-wielding rumors surrounding lord Ruairi [[A mysterious lord to whom your father owes a huge personal debt *Purple Dress 2*|here]]

- Fixed some equipment issues with your Arturia storyline (the hidden blade is a shortsword strapped to the thigh and hidden by the sleeves of the silky dress, it isn't small enough to hide under a pillow tho, you also can't carry it under the heavy dress)

- added a line of text here and there, you probably won't notice tho since it doesn't really change anything(mostly toughts on clothing or equipment unique to that option) xp. I just kinda felt like it.

[[Put the Beautiful Necklace and the Blade on top of the folded dress.]] - added paragraph at top of page.

[[Put the Blade under your pillow]] - added paragraph at top of page.

[[Wake him up and demand to know who he is, with the dagger at his throat-The life of a medieval princess]] - added page.

P.S. you can easily keep track of what changes in the story if you go to the category page and select 'related changes' in the left side menu (2nd option in toolbox, only works when you're on a stories' category page for some reason) or you can [http://editthis.info/choose_your_own_adventure/?namespace=&target=Category%3AThe+life+of+a+medieval+princess&limit=500&title=Special%3ARecentChangesLinked] Click here

--[[User:Zoroastra|Zoroastra]]

-Edited the *Light_Dress* options for Arturia to make them more unique, let me know what you think :

[[A mysterious lord to whom your father owes a huge personal debt *Light Dress 1*]]

[[A mysterious lord to whom your father owes a huge personal debt *Light Dress 2*]]

P.S. I'll edit the Amelia/Ruairi and Arturia/Ruairi storylines so they're more or less in sync with each other. The underlying idea is to see the different reactions of the various heroines to the same circumstances after all.

--[[User:Zoroastra|Zoroastra]]

Added [[TLOAMP Ruairi's Guards|Ruairi's guards]] : construct-like warriors wielding mighty greatswords, (Spoiler)The trick behind their creation is to summon a water spirit into a prepared set of armor.

--[[User:Zoroastra|Zoroastra]]

Do you have any ideas for the debt between Ruairi and the father? I don't require anything definite or specific - just a vague idea would be welcome.

hmm, the spell and the bribe aren't bad ideas, but maybe something more country-wide rather than a spell that works on one person? Like a way to tame sea monsters so your trade ships can safely pass trough monster-infected waters increasing your nation's wealth (and military power if you unleash the sea monsters against an enemy fleet) or a spell that turns large amounts of water undrinkable for a long time which could have a devastating impact on any country it was used against. Or if you want to keep it really personal it could be a spell to increase fertility and make you some siblings - "having only one child has always been a great cause of concern for your dad after all..." xp

Just some rough ideas.

I was kinda hoping you'd say that ^^. Tamed Sea Monsters it is.

--[[User:Zoroastra|Zoroastra]]

Made a section about spells used in the story [[TLOAMP Spellbook|Spellbook]].

If you want to, you could add the water-magic spells Ruairi uses.

Also made a rough world map : [[TLOAMP Maps|Maps]], might be useful for getting an idea as to where you're traveling to and how much distance there is between your point of departure and arrival. Offcourse, there aren't many areas on the map yet. In case you feel like adding some, it can be downloaded at 4shared.com (there's a link on the maps page). Just send any updated version to my e-mail (van_gucht_kris@hotmail.com) and I'll replace it.

--[[User:Zoroastra|Zoroastra]]

==deleting pages==
Yes, deleting pages is one of my sysop functions. If you create a page and then change your mind, just blank it out (ie, edit it and then save it without any text in it). I'll spot the blank page and delete it for you. As long as you don't go crazy creating and blanking pages by the dozen, it's no problem. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 22:35, 7 February 2012 (UTC)

== happyazngirl ==

Hello. I'm so sorry if this isn't the place to put this. I'm still really new to all of this and I'm baby footing my way through everything.
I just wanted to drop by to say that your character, Ruairi, I completely adore even though he's only been introduced. I ''might'' be trying my hand at adding some chapters to The life of a medieval princess. Might, of course being the operative word. I've also been editing some pages for spelling mistakes and grammar, so I hope you don't mind. --[[User:Happyazngirl|Happyazngirl]] 06:20, 26 March 2012 (UTC)

User talk:Chlo's-closet

Happyazngirl — Mon, 26 Mar 2012 06:17:53 GMT

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Happyazngirl — Mon, 26 Mar 2012 06:08:34 GMT

Happyazngirl:

Hello. I'm not much of a writer, so I probably won't be adding any new stories or chapters any time soon.
That being said I do have some ideas and I might add to some stories, though it takes me a while to get all the details done and to write it to the point where I am satisfied.
I don't mind brain storming to come up with new ideas or editing things for grammar, spelling mistakes, or plot hole.

I'm still trying to learn how to navigate this place so if I mess something up I do sincerely apologize.

Mia/Red Light/look her in the eyes

Happyazngirl — Sun, 25 Mar 2012 08:30:58 GMT

Happyazngirl:

You look in her eyes to see if she wants you to stop hugging her, you don't really want to stop hugging her, but you don't want to upset her either. You're staying at her house after all, so you should make sure to respect her wishes.

As you gaze in her eyes you see something there you can't quite place, but it attracts you and makes the warm feeling spread inside of you. After you sat there gazing at her for a while, she gently pushes you down on the bed. You let out a little moan, surprising yourself. The woman chuckles, opens your dress and traces your chest and stomach with her fingers lightly touching your skin, you feel a tingling fire spread trough your body where she touches you and start panting heavily.
You then feel a wet sensation on your left breast and look down to see her tongue tracing in circles around your mound until her tongue reaches your nipple, you gasp and your breath is stuck in your throat at the sensation as she suckles on your nipple, lightly biting it. Your hands grasp the bedsheets on either side of you as she puts one of her hands on your other breast, kneading it and you feel her other hand slide down your body, tracing your stomach, caressing you navel and eventually moving down between your legs, stroking your thighs.
She then proceeds to kiss you on the lips - you think for a moment women shouldn't kiss each other on the lips, that's something only a man and a woman do - but that thought leaves you when you feel two of her fingers tracing your labia and you scream in her mouth while your body goes in spasms. This allows her to slip her tongue inside your mouth and she starts to tangle her tongue with yours.
You can't really think straight anymore so you just do your best to respond to her movements, releasing your hold of the bedsheets, you place your hands on her side holding her close to you, she moves her hands behind your head and moves on to kissing and licking your neck and nuzzling your collarbone. You entangle your legs with hers while you make out and start rubbing your hands all over her body clumsily trying to make her feel the same way you do. She smiles and moves down, pulling your legs over her shoulders,then she moves down and runs her tongue over your labia, you feel like your entire being is drawn into her tongue as she licks up and down your sheath. Then you feel her soft tongue enter you slightly and lick you inside, making you trash about the place in ecstasy. You can feel her tongue hitting something inside of you that stops her from entering you any further. She licks it eagerly and you feel electricity coursing trough your body as your body spasms about wildly again. She keeps licking you and sucking up the juices that come out of you. You have a worried thought that you might be peeing on her for a second before you lose consciousness.

[[You wake up alone in the bed the next morning]]

{{Princess Status|Equipment=''Naked & Horny''|Health=100|Stamina=50|Mood=Horny|Gold=00|Silver=00|Copper=00|Possessions=''none''}}

[[Category:The life of a medieval princess]]

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Happyazngirl — Sun, 25 Mar 2012 08:27:23 GMT

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Hello. I'm not much of a writer, so I probably won't be adding any new stories or chapters any time soon. That being said I don't mind brain storming to come up with new ideas or editing things for grammar, spelling mistakes, or plot hole.

Saya/Black Dress/2/Borias Hemilton/Mercenaries

Happyazngirl — Sun, 25 Mar 2012 07:58:21 GMT

Happyazngirl:

Though his behavior is strange at best, there's something about him that makes you feel like his intentions aren't hostile. You decide to trust your instincts like you usually do and follow behind him. He leads you trough some dark alleys to a cheap inn with a bad reputation. You've been there occasionally, when you were trying to pick a fight mostly. It's full of mercenaries, thugs, shady characters and the owner himself forced a lot of people to pay him protection money. Well, he still pretty much receives protection money from them, but the circumstances have changed significantly since you got involved a while back.. ([[Read the story of the shady bar owner]])

The large man walks inside and you follow. He still hasn't said a word and when you tried to talk to him he just shook his head and motioned for you to follow him. He opens the door to one of the rooms and as you step inside, you see a small mercenary band has taken up residence here. You also notice several of them are wounded, he must've dragged you here to heal them. The mercenaries greet the man that brought you here, but their eyes pop out of their sockets as you enter with him.

"Wow folks, look at this, Carlos brought a woman" one of them shouts. "I knew you could do it man!" another adds while patting him on the back. Carlos, as he seems to be called, seems flustered for a second, he probably hadn't thought of that yet. Then he shakes his head and grabs some bandages nearby, handing them to you as he points over to the 4 wounded mercs in the back of the room. You nod, take the bandages and walk over to the wounded looking over the others in the room, you see there are 17 mercs in total, all crawled into a single room.

As you walk over to the wounded mercs, the others finally get the picture. "Ah- you mean, she's a healer?" one of them asks, Carlos simply nods. As you kneel over the wounded mercs they look at you happily. They're probably more happy about your looks than confident in your medical skills though. One of the mercs, A tall, muscular man who is strangely attractive although he looks rough and unkempt, walks over to you. The aura about him immediately identifies him as the leader of this mercenary group.

"You're a healer?" he asks in what is probably his best attempt at being polite. You have to suppress a giggle at how rude and violent it sounds regardless of his intentions.

You reply :

[["Not by trade, but I know what I'm doing"]]

[["Yeah, your friend over there kidnapped me"]]

[[Play a prank and yell "Please don't hurt me! I'll do whatever you want!"]]

[["That's right, and you are?" Sounding every bit the aristocrat you actually are]]

{{Princess Status|Equipment=''Black Dress''|Health=90|Stamina=70|Mood=Amused|Gold=150|Silver=00|Copper=00|Possessions=''Mother's Katana, Full Black Leather Armor''}}

[[Category:The life of a medieval princess]]

Saya/Black Dress/2/Borias Hemilton/Red Light/dodge

Happyazngirl — Sun, 25 Mar 2012 07:43:50 GMT

Happyazngirl:

He tries again and grabs air, then repeats that over and over again single-mindedly. just as you wonder how long it'll take before he realizes he'll have to try something else if he wants to stand any chance of catching you, some of the others walk over and ask what the problem is. Before you can reply, one of the bouncers recognizes you from an earlier visit.

"M-miss Saya!" he exclaims and suddenly starts apologizing profusely. You sigh and tell him to keep it down, you don't want to be noticed by everyone downstairs. "I-I'm sorry miss, I'll make sure this idiot is properly discipl-" You cut off his torrent of disgusting politeness with an annoyed sigh and a wave of your hand. "No need, i enjoyed toying with him and he was only doing his job. I prefer people don't believe its me too easily. Else my name will get abused too much" You pat the highly confused man on the back and walk into the dressing room.

Now, question is, what are you here for?

[[Browse through the normal outfits]]

[[Browse trough the kinky outfits]]

[[Browse through the cosplay outfits]]

[[Wait for one of the girls to show up]]

[[Undress yourself]]

{{Princess Status|Equipment=''Black Dress''|Health=100|Stamina=100|Mood=Playfull|Gold=150|Silver=00|Copper=00|Possessions=''Mother's Katana, Full Black Leather Armor''}}

[[Category:The life of a medieval princess]]

Saya/Black Dress/2/Borias Hemilton/Red Light/dodge

Happyazngirl — Sun, 25 Mar 2012 07:37:49 GMT

Happyazngirl:

He tries again and grabs air, then repeats that over and over again single-mindedly. just as you wonder how long it'll take before he realizes he'll have to try something else if he wants to stand any chance of catching you, some of the others walk over and ask what the problem is. Before you can reply, one of the bouncers recognizes you from an earlier visit.

"M-miss Saya!" he exclaims and suddenly starts appologizing profusely. You sigh and tell him to keep it down, you don't want to be noticed by everyone downstairs. "I-I'm sorry miss, I'll make sure this idiot is properly discipl-" You cut off his torrent of disgusting politeness with an annoyed sigh and a wave of your hand. "No need, i enjoyed toying with him and he was only doing his job. I prefer people don't believe its me too easily. Else my name will get abused too much" You pat the highly confused man on the back and walk into the dressing room.

Now, question is, what are you here for?

[[Browse through the normal outfits]]

[[Browse through the kinky outfits]]

[[Browse through the cosplay outfits]]

[[Wait for one of the girls to show up]]

[[Undress yourself]]

{{Princess Status|Equipment=''Black Dress''|Health=100|Stamina=100|Mood=Playfull|Gold=150|Silver=00|Copper=00|Possessions=''Mother's Katana, Full Black Leather Armor''}}

[[Category:The life of a medieval princess]]