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Bardo75 — Sat, 06 Aug 2016 03:50:42 GMT

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Copying Platypus and creating archives! But please, don't leave me messages on my archive pages. Leave them here...

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Leave me a message. Naughty, nice, happy, sad, I love talking to people so want to hear from you!

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Hey I just got back here coz i havent been active for a while though. So far I cant write story without inspiration. Well I think I can move on from that except playing computer or CF.--[[User:michaeltamayo|GUY WITHOUTBALLS]]
== [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] ==

I know trans women don't generally get treated that way in real life, but I may be injecting a bit of my own fantasy into it. I mean, the whole thing started as my fantasies so lol. Surprisingly progressive rapists and burglars. In real life trans women struggle to get practically anyone who knows to accept them as a real woman.

But they are real women, and unless it's really necessary to the story overall I'd rather not have it be a big huge thing every time I want to write a sex scene for her. The alternative is me writing Janet being beaten or tortured by the burglars for having a dick, and I don't want to do that. Not right there, at least. Maybe in another branch and done by someone else.

As for your friend, I would ask them what to refer to them as. I'm betting she/her but it's better to ask and be sure. Then try to use those pronouns as often as possible as long as it's safe, even if they're not around. Like unless you would be revealing their transgender status to someone they want to keep it a secret to, it's best to keep using it. It may take some getting used to but it's worth it to show them you care enough about them.

They'll likely face many people who, often intentionally, will call them by the wrong pronouns. Having someone consistently use the right pronouns and name is a huge boost in confidence.

I'll see what I can do for the cafe next. I've kinda been doing things as they occur to me :v --[[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 06:21, 26 May 2016 (UTC)

Try not to think of it in terms of you feeling like a guy. Think of it like, you feel like yourself, a woman, but your birth certificate says male, your parents raised you as a boy, you have a penis (which is not always a problem, plenty of trans women don't have a problem having a penis, it's other people that have the problem with it,) and unless you got the hint early and everybody was okay with it, you've seen a guy in the mirror your whole life. There's a lot more to it but that's the gist.

You want to look how you feel, you want people to acknowledge that you're a woman, you don't want to have the same conversations, the same questions every time someone finds out, you just went to be you, but all of this is difficult to accomplish.

Sorry about Marie's story. I kind of used her branch as a dumping ground for my darker thoughts for some reason. I was remembering pretty dark times and wanted to get those out. I was considering adding a couple of other characters once I've got more done on the ones I have on there. I have some ideas. Happier ones. Keep an eye out for those :v. --[[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 06:53, 26 May 2016 (UTC) p.s. the answer is yes, I am, but don't tell anyone plz?.

I've considered getting a keyboard to use for my tablet, but the problem is we never have more than a couple dollars to spare. That, and my charger (which wasn't made for a tablet) uses the USB port and isn't very effective, so I have to keep it plugged in most of the time. If I had a replacement for the original charger this wouldn't be a problem, though.

It would only be a quick fix, but I would swing it if I could. Having a laptop would open up a lot more options even if it was a cheap one, and I'm hoping I can get one soon, or get the one I have to function as more than a paperweight. This tablet just generally refuses to work for making digital art, for instance.

The rules thing, I mean I can kinda understand because I guess they didn't even have a rules page for a while? But me personally I always try to find out just what's allowed somewhere before I put something up. I hate running into situations where I'm breaking rules or just generally fudging everything because I didn't know. Ran into that with the DeviantArt account I had made a long time ago for my explicit art. Which they don't allow. :v

Sorry. -- [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 20:52, 27 May 2016 (UTC)

Bluetooth. So, I have a wireless mouse that I wanted to see if it would pair with my tablet. Idk if the mouse is bluetooth or not but I figured I'd give it a shot. Well, after searching all through my settings, it looks like my tablet might not even be capable of Bluetooth. So, that's out I guess.

Having a chat based cyoa does sound like an interesting idea! --[[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 19:36, 29 May 2016 (UTC)

Well, the back of it says Nextablet and I think it's android 4.1. Beyond that I'm not sure what information is important.

I've seen some terrible messages but I've never seen any quite that bad that I could still sorta tell what they were saying. I've seen some that were probably drunk at the time that, they were clearly typing something but fuck if I was ever going to learn what it was.

Makes me think of those ciphers where you're supposed to read one letter as another letter, like cddc actually means abba or ere means bob, but if they did it with whole words instead of letters. Like idk fish means cat and tree means deepthroat or something.

If you don't want to copy mine because you don't want to copy someone then it doesn't matter to me if you do. If you don't want to copy it because it's a huge pain in the ass then that's perfectly understandable, there's probably so many easier ways to do that and I just don't know them lol.

I was initially going to do mine so it looked more like AIM or YIM, which was kind of how it ended up looking the first way I did it, but your words in bubbles gave me the idea to try to make it look more like Facebook Messenger app, so I fiddled with that til it looked more or less like I wanted. Thank you for sharing that :v. -- [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 04:51, 30 May 2016 (UTC)

Thank you for making the template! I'll keep using that format for that conversation/that character's branch whenever chat comes up, but I think I may try something else for other characters/conversations.

I'm thinking something more along the lines of a box that looks kinda like a yahoo messenger window, especially if I can make it scroll vertically within the box. That seems like it'd be easier to reuse/make a template of, though I've never made one before personally.

I really need to get back to writing in general but IRL stuff's been on my mind. Rent stuff. -- [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 18:33, 6 June 2016 (UTC)

I will keep the offer in mind :v. I'm looking into a bunch of different things to hopefully keep this from happening again in the future. I completely understand not having anything left by the end of the month, not just from our current situation, pretty much my entire life has been like that with my family. We moved across the country because we couldn't afford the house we were living in. We were never able to keep a house longer than like a couple years, and we kept moving back in with my grandparents.

But yeah, if we can get through this month we're going to do everything we can to keep it from getting to this point again. Editing/proofreading definitely falls within the realm of things I can do, thank you for offering :v. -- [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 17:49, 13 June 2016 (UTC)

Thank you :v.

I was actually coming on here to message you. I've been thinking about the problem with the chat bubbles. I was wondering if wrapping them in a frame like a table or something might give a rightmost side for the bubble to stick to? Something kind of like the other chat window I was working on, perhaps, or at least the part that scrolls?

I barely know how to use templates, but I was thinking if there was a way to put like a template within a template or something it might be possible? Thought I'd bring it up and see what you thought. -- [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 04:26, 20 June 2016 (UTC)

You probably saw, but I sorted the problem with the bubbles out and made a phone template to go with them! I'm thinking about reusing the code from the bubble templates and making two more universal chat bubble templates, though.

The bubbles were pretty much entirely you, I just added some bits to make it do the thing. I didn't see any solutions for making the jc101 bubble stick to the right without ignoring the rest of the page, ''and'' only expand inward instead of off the right, so I had to make it float right, then force it to stack properly with the harukosama bubbles by giving them both a margin in the opposite direction.

It kinda feels like a cheap solution but it's the only thing I could get to work. The first time I applied the float right, all the bubbles just kind of mixed together.

Then I spent way too long obsessing over the phone template until it got to what it looks like now. Once I was done with everything I spent several minutes just scrolling the chat window up and down and giggling to myself.

I made the phone and my other chat window template to more or less be usable by whoever. Maybe it'd work for if you wanted to go with your idea for a story with texts? One thing I'm curious about though is, I only know how the phone template looks on mobile, I'm hoping the desktop version doesn't have an annoying scroll bar or anything.

I've been obsessed with coding these things since I started figuring things out but I still haven't gotten back into the swing of writing yet. Thank you for showing me it was possible to do more than just put text on a page here. Once I do get back to writing, there's so much more I still want to do. -- [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 06:15, 22 June 2016 (UTC) (P.S. Sorry I'm rambling. I'm just really excited.)

Thanks! I didn't know there were scroll bars in the chatroom template but that doesn't matter as much. I made the box to scroll but I didn't know if the scroll bars would be different on desktop or not. I need to rewrite the context but I was kind of going for a chat window like Yahoo Messenger and I made sure the message field and the "typing" field would scroll if the text got too long instead of stretching.

I was more worried about the smartphone text template, but I used basically the same scrolling window code for that as I used for the messenger window so I assume there is one there too. On my screen, the scroll bar is barely a sliver that only appears when I scroll up and down so it's not obtrusive, which I guess is what I'm more worried about especially with the chat bubbles on the right side. Thank you for letting me know what that looked like :v -- [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 09:10, 22 June 2016 (UTC)

Go right ahead :v. I was kinda hoping more people would use the templates than just me, though I might still change some things about the templates, so let me know if I break something if I do?

I'm going to experiment with a couple things. Since I know I can use {{{}}} to change parts of the code itself, I'm going to look into allowing the person using the template to change things like color schemes for the chat window and font, and I may be able to make a universal chat bubble that you can put to the left or right as needed as well as changing the color of the text and the bubble. Could make things much easier and more versatile to use :v-- [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 19:37, 28 June 2016 (UTC)

Sorry the new text bubble template is a bit complicated to use. I tried to make it as streamlined as possible, as in people using it not having to out in a bunch of code themselves, while still giving as many options as needed, but there were some things I just couldn't figure out how to simplify.

I might have been able to replace the short margin by making it the same variable as the alignment, so if it was set to float left or right then the 5px margin would be on the same side, but I couldn't think of a way to make the 20px margin automatically set to the opposite side, and if I removed it entirely it would just be stacked bubbles of mostly the same width which would defeat the purpose of designing them that way in the first place.

If you went to mess with the code or make the names of the variables less wordy you can totally do that though, I just gave them the first names that came to mind.

A yeah I made it so the bubbles can be told to either float left or float right, and hopefully the part of the code that says "clear: both;" will make it so that even if the bubbles are put in a larger field they won't float next to each other and I won't have to change the margins again if I try to do something like that. That's how that's supposed to work, anyway, but I'm not sure if I did it right.

I hate the 20 minute rule. It seems mostly unnecessary for it to be that long, and I haven't been able to successfully link anything at all because of it. My session keeps timing out before I can submit the captcha. Which is gonna suck if I ever want to start my planned idea for a more point and click type cyoa (not that I need another unfinished project but yknow.)

I did have an idea though for your emoticons and I was thinking it might work better for you than for me because the one website I've found that does technically work on mobile is still absolutely terrible on mobile, but there are websites that make pixel art into CSS code, you just have to figure out how to restructure the code so it works on this site. But it should be more or less the same structure as that space invader pixel art object you added to my talk page when it's done. You could make pixel art emoticons then use them instead of external images. And you can probably make those into a template, too.

I spent probably 6 hours making that phone and getting the bubbles to do what I wanted the first time around. Probably more since then. Like I'm sure you'd have figured all of this out too if you spent several hours doing virtually nothing but poking at it until it worked, but I'm sure you have other things going on in your life, and you've actually been doing other things around the site. Meanwhile, I have things I probably ''should'' be doing, but I fixate on anything ''but'' what I need to be doing instead.

I'm glad I've learned so much, and maybe it'll apply to other ends later, but the fact that I spent so much concentrated time and effort learning how to code these things for choose your own smut isn't something I feel particularly proud of lol.

However you decide to proceed with your text project, best of luck :v -- [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 07:09, 29 June 2016 (UTC) (P.S. sorry for such a long message.)

'''kushagragour.in/lab/picssel-art/''' this one was the one i found that worked for pixels. The table smiley you put in my talk page, idk why but it's weirdly stretched vertically. The tool at this link puts out a code that looks a lot like that space invader you put on my talk page except using px instead of em. I don't have the patience for it because the input box is tiny and it doesn't respond if I zoom into it, so I have to be zoomed out to do everything. Would be different if I were on a computer, though. I was going to use it for something else.

I was thinking about using chyoa as well, and I might do so in the future, but at first I came here because chyoa had rules against what I had in mind for writing. I came here initially to write my ideas for Marie, and chyoa has rules against some of the things I had planned.

I don't just enjoy writing and art. If I'm not doing or haven't done something creative in some way I feel like I'm wasting my time. Even though half the time I can't will myself to even pick up my sketchbook. I don't think I'm a very good artist yet, or writer, but I keep trying because I feel like I need to, even if I never finish anything.

Writing here was a bit of a big step for me because prior to this I barely shared any of my work anywhere. Mostly because I never finish anything, though this medium kind of favors unfinished works, it would seem.

I used to play a lot of videogames, before my laptop died, before I moved and had to leave a ps3 behind. Not that I really got to use the ps3 all that much while I was there, other people kept hogging it. I'd kill to play fallout. Any fallout. Even 1 and 2.

Lately I've been stuck with Pixel Dungeon (which I both recommend playing and staying as far away from as possible. It's addictive and frustrating as hell.) and the basketball mini game that Facebook messenger has. I had fallout shelter but after a while that kinda becomes just, the same thing over and over.

For what it's worth, I haven't really noticed anything wrong with the way you write that I myself as a native English speaker wouldn't do. And I don't know any Chinese at all so you're a leg up on me there.

I'm going to bed though. I'm dead tired and I plan to do stuff tomorrow. I hope you have a good day! Sorry for the long message again. -- [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 08:39, 29 June 2016 (UTC)

== [[User:Teejay|Teejay]] ==

E-mail sent. I was offline all day today, just now had a chance to pop on.

You. You are my dirty nerdy girl. *blows kiss* -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

I know zilch about programming. Strictly an applications guy.

How many computer programmers does it take to change a light bulb joke?

100. 1 to change the joke, and 99 to submit "How many programmers does it take to change a light bulb? Incorrect, that is a hardware problem." -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Email replied to. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

At least they tried, and despite a few typos, I thought they did a reasonable job. It's not the best I've ever read, but it's not anywhere near the worst either. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

You could tell that the author was young and male. But with a bit more practice, they'll learn what words to avoid and their writing will mature.

It took me a few years to get it down. This was my first successful effort: www.literotica.com/s/alexandra-1

It's not easy to write from a woman's perspective if you're male, but it is doable. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

How about "The Best New Breasts"? -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

I don't know if I have such a hat, but I'll try.

"The Breast New Thing!" "Perfect For Breast Men!" "New Discovery -- Stay Abreast!" -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

I'll post one more option for The Exhibitionist, and hope it cheers you up. And I'll beam over nice thoughts. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Glad to hear it. I'll still send over nice thoughts. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Send the rain over here, we could use it. :) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Just reading that link made ME want to slice that teacher's throat. I can't stand when authority figures (of any gender) use their position to abuse vulnerable minors. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

I know it's real. And you've been through things I don't even want to imagine. I hope you always have a loving, caring partner from now on who can help you keep what happened quelled. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Just read what you posted in reply to Fredhot16. And now I feel ''really'' honored. You know very well why.

P.S. -- I think you're a beautiful person. And that has nothing to do with your looks (although you are nice looking.) You've been through so much, and somehow emerged without being totally shattered. You're a terrific writer and an amazing an courageous human being. Like I've said before, I wish you and your husband and child many years of happiness together as a family. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

I have not played any of the Fallout games.

I read your blog, remember? I know the horrors you experienced.

If I had met you while you were in high school, I would have taken you in and gotten you clean and sober. Or at least done everything possible to do so. I actually did that for the daughter of a friend when she went through her very rough high school years (both her parents were strung out on drugs.) This particular person is about 2-3 years older than you.

Like I said, you're amazing. And awesome. I wouldn't wish what you went through on my worst enemy if I had one. Any you came through it, surviving somehow. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Sticking to the questions you asked: you did a fantastic job of writing that. I can't write 1/10 that well. (I suppose you're particularly good at writing scenes like that because you can draw on actual memories.) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

I see you're reviewing stories. What do you think of this one? :)

http://www.editthis.info/create_your_own_story/A_Day_At_The_Races

-- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

If you want a nice, short, sane adult story to review to take your mind off The Devil's Daughter, I recommend A Big Ugly Story. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Your review was quite accurate. And a description of exactly what I was aiming for -- realistic physical descriptions, quick on the sex since it is in the Adult stories section. Glad I achieved my goal, even if my work on the story petered out relatively quickly. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Yes, there is feedback on the review. Unless you meant your review of the End of the World, in which case, i agree with your review. For my feedback on your review of my story see the comment just above this one. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

I would not dare to insist you do anything, but I would suggest that your next story review by the completed adult story "Megan". -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Whew! I'm finally done moving. Now I can get back online. I missed you. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Thank you. I'll like it a lot better once everything is unpacked and installed. :) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

==[[User:117|117]]==
Hey there, got your message on my talk. Thanks for the compliments, didn't think anyone was reading, it made my day. Just remember, when you read my stories; it doesn't have to end in sex :D
Do you think you could leave a link or something on my story where I went wrong? I got lost trying to find the correct story branch that I was looking for. -- [[User:117|117]]
P.S: Still getting used to messaging people on here. 26 May 2016

There we go. I've edited it and I think that's everything. Thanks for looking out. --[[User:117|117]] 27 May 2016
==[[User:Platypus|Platypus]]==

The whole pink dildo thing makes me think of the thirteen-year-olds in science class snickering because the teacher said 'Uranus'. Yes, I think this one is very young.

The idea of an invisible story is kind of amusing, though. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 16:43, 26 May 2016 (UTC)

That penis is between you & Zenclair. I'm not touching it. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 09:57, 27 May 2016 (UTC)

Your fantasy is no stranger than many of the fantasies that make up SSR, and it's possibly more normal than many. I'm sure I can find a place in SSR where it could be worked in. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:36, 1 June 2016 (UTC)

You new review idea looks like it's got potential, especially since the old reviewer seems to have permanently retired. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:46, 3 June 2016 (UTC)

I've never played any of the Fallout games, although I was in a D&D campaign where we had to save Harry Potter from the threat of Nuka-Cola, with some help from the Men In Black. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 16:55, 16 June 2016 (UTC)

Thanks for the heads up about Life of a 13 year old. I'd rather not be the site censor, but I suppose someone has to be. And the whole idea of a uterus-piercing path sounds pretty vile. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:26, 29 June 2016 (UTC)

==Fredhot16==
You might want to sit down and get comfortable. I know we haven' talked in about a month so here's a month's worth of talking. (Note: This may seem incomplete but that's because my computer is a bit wonky and what I had previously wrote disappeared when I had to close the window. I'll finish it later.)

Darky:

Sex scenes: You know what...I don't necessarily DISAGREE with you.

Think I've been here too long: Hey, remember the Adult Story CYOA "Now you're a girl!"? I found myself thinking about how the potential was wasted in the story as one could easily write the guy exploring his new body and it wouldn't even be too outlandish. The thought made me realize I've been hanging around the dark sections of Create Your Own Story for too long. And yet I can't...stop...looking... P.S The sheer scale of spelling and grammar mistakes on this website is just short of "Kill myself by setting myself on fire" depressing. Nobody even tried to double check their work and fix common mistakes. Spell checking isn't hard! Ah, well, guess there's only one thing to do: I call forth the power of Grammarskull! ‎

Too many ideas: I think the biggest problem I have is that I have too many story ideas to work on. There's about 5 CYOSs listed on my introduction page and I have about 15-17 story ideas outside of this website. The sheer amount of content I have planned for all of these ideas is truly staggering. That's why I haven't been able to pull my weight on the collaboration with Teejay over Anime School. Also, this is the month of Ramadan so I won't be able to touch any of the Adult CYOSs until July 7 or, at the very most, July 10. Edit: Heh. You really want to compare? Just say the word.

Anime School:

Common descriptions in CYOS: I've noticed that common breast descriptions are either of the buxom variety or they are commonly described as "small and perky". Are...are small and perky breasts really that popular? Also, the habit of describing breasts by band width and cup size like 52D or 42B is WAY too common around here. Writing is supposed to help you imagine what's been written. Using measurements as descriptions doesn't help visualize breasts as I don't think most people could quickly imagine what the size of the chest is by knowing the bandwidth and cup size like that. I mean, if you're using measurements in a profile, that's...possibly acceptable but it doesn't do to be in the actual narration.

CYOS that needs some love: There's this CYOS called One Princess, Four Princes, Choices in the Mature Story section that's woefully without much content. Maybe you could give it some good old CYOS love?

--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 17:23 (Louisiana Time), 9 June 2016

Well, if it makes you feel any better, I'd rather read about YOUR sexual adventures then the sexual adventures those fictional women with breasts the size of their heads. Also, I don't think they're really trying to learn how women work, just how ''BEWBS'' work. Eh, at least they're learning ''something''. I'll give them that. Edit: and by them learning, I was forced to learn it as well! And knowing is half the battle! The other half, apparently, is lots of rampant sex. --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 01:17 (Louisiana Time), 11 June 2016

Oh. Ah, well, you see, I wasn't really-I can see why you would think that but-come on, I don't really think that you don't have a life! You look like the coolest OG, yo! You know...just lying on the couch...in a dress, gown, negligee, whatever... presumably sleeping off a hangover...well, your "Winnie the Pooh" thing under the pillow looks kinda neat. That definitely proves you have a life! Also, how long until you get a better internet connection?--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 15:57 (Louisiana Time), 12 June 2016

Hey! How do you know I'm not a girl, too?--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 16:28 (Louisiana Time), 12 June 2016

Alright, 4 things:

A. Random question: who do you like, Wolverine or Cyclops?

B. Are the pictures you've put on your page pictures of you or just random pictures?

C.Hmmm. Could be a girl. May be I'm just a anthropomorphic "grill". What if I am? Would it matter?

D. You know, I think you just might be one of-scratch that, the ''only'' writer on this website I have a inkling of respect for because you're the only writer who actually CARES about her work, who's trying to ''write''. You seem to put more effort in your writing then I've seen in 90% of adult CYOSs and for that, you have my regard.

--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 12:44 (Louisiana Time), 14 June 2016
(Will finish later, busy at the moment.)

A. Huh. O.K, I get that. There's actually a explanation for why you might have heard of Wolverine much more. Here's the link: tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/WolverinePublicity He's the best at what he does and what he does is make gratuitous appearances to artificially hook in readers. I'm more of a Cyclops man but that's mostly because Cyclops gets so little love from fans, he's actually pretty cool, and I truly think that Wolverine is really ''fucking'' overrated. I mean, yeah, he deserves some respect but not the goddamn ''worship'' he's been getting. It's why I found Wolverine's part in X-Men: Apocalypse to be hilarious as it was basically a cameo!

B.

C. Uuuummmm...I'm not transgender. I'm just a dude trying to mess with you. I do that often in real life. Don't worry, I'll keep your secret. And yeah, I'm of the same mind on transgenders.

D. You're welcome. When Ramadan ends, I'll try to read your stuff for real. I'll be filling the discussion tabs with my comments and, I'll warn you, they may be a bit...caustic. I only mean well, though, and I'll try to be as fair as I can without seeming too harsh or too lenient.

E. Yeah, I'm a Fallout fan. I've played Fallout 3, Fallout New Vegas, (both on the PC) and Fallout 4 on the PS4. I'm currently playing New Vegas, which I'm really liking, and just starting Fallout 4. Edit: I cut out my previous statement because I realized that I didn't really remember what happened back then and I couldn't read your thing to be sure. But I still believe that it wouldn't really happen. It was just a mercenary and two Institute technicians. I really doubt that the Institute would waste time like that. Also, I'm afraid that my computer wouldn't let Fallout 3 play so I can't really be sure about your depiction of Moira Brown and I can't read the Wasteland Guide anyway because it's Ramadan. Look up Brown's speech about why she's doing this. It might help and even if it doesn't, it's not a bad speech. P.S. Ever thought of trying Fallout New Vegas as part of your Fallout thing? Edit: Here's Moira's speech below:

"Well, look around at the world we live in. It may be okay to you, but I've read about what it used to be like, and this isn't it. So we all need something that keeps us going, despite all the terrible things around us. For me, it's things like this book... did you ever try to put a broken piece of glass back together? Even if the pieces fit, you can't make it whole again the way it was. But if you're clever, you can still use the pieces to make other useful things. Maybe even something wonderful, like a mosaic. Well, the world broke just like glass. And everyone's trying to put it back together like it was, but it'll never come together the same way... the Wasteland Survival Guide isn't much towards that lofty goal, but it's an important one. And that's why I need your help. I don't think I can do it alone."

F. "And yes, I will be writing lots of rape scenes for it, I have been thinking about writing more of these for this site lately. Why rape? Because, you know how many stories I have read on here that the woman is raped, that make me want to scream at the author, or make me honestly a bit scared of some of the people on this site, if they actually view women the way they write? Since it is a prevalent theme in many places here, and since the fallout world would actually be a world where almost every woman would be a victim of it, I want to at least make the readers think about what it is like to be a woman in that situation. Put my readers in my shoes, so they know women are not just some random hole that exists for a penis, but are real, thinking people. That it has dramatic, traumatic effects on someone, to have their body violated. So, I write what many people on here seem to want, but my way." Go ahead. Perhaps I could direct you to some other rape scenes in other works so you could fix them? I'm unfortunately witness to more fictional rape scenes then I want to admit.

G. Erm...(clears throat) I, um, heard something about a, erm, "gangbang". (Blushes) You don't have to if you don't want but I'd like to hear about it. Not now, though. Just around the second week of July, around July 7 or 10.

H. Do swimsuits that become semi-translucent when wet exist in real life or was this a case of "pulling out of thin air for the sake of sexiness"?

I. Here's a little note about originality from TV Tropes's "So You Want To / Be Original":"The first paradox is that it is impossible to create anything truly "new". One cannot create something from nothing. Every fictional work (with a few exceptions) is based on previous works...The second paradox is to realize that unlimited creative freedom actually puts limits on one's ability to create a story. Conversely, narrowing one's creative options actually helps to make creativity unlimited...;Those who cannot remember the past are condemned to repeat it'. If you don’t see how people before you made stories, it's very likely that you will unwittingly repeat the same ideas. And even worse, you might think that you were the first to come up with those ideas." Edit: In short, --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 13:13 (Louisiana Time), 15 June 2016

Yep. I definitely understand the average CYOS reader or at least the average CYOS writer. God, do I wish I don't. You know, sometimes I wonder, "Why? Why do I get so pissed off at Adult CYOSs? They're not actual stories, I know that they're just made for wanking so why do I care?" Four reasons: Quality concern. Concern for reputation of website. Uncomfortable reading. Love of writing. So, that's why I get so pissed off at the average Adult CYOS. When Ramadan ends, I'm going to go through a plethora of Adult CYOS and give my comments on them. I might seem a bit harsh but I ultimately mean well, for the CYOS and the website as a whole. P.S Do you mind reviewing "Escape from Syria" in the Mature Story section or "The Devil's Daughter" in the Adult Story section?--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 11:16 (Louisiana Time), 19 June 2016

By the way, your "cum bath" fantasy isn't all that weird, even by what I've read on this website. Ever wanted to fuck a statue in a museum, try to give a BJ to cliche serial killer who just murdered your boyfriend who you were having sex with at the time, or fuck a werecat? Edit: Let me clarify, those were sexual fantasies that I had found swimming in the dark depths of the Adult CYOS section and by "werecat", I meant a guy who transformed from a human into a cat. Example: Bastet from World of Darkness. --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 19:01 (Louisiana Time), 19 June 2016

Honestly, I think it's kinda...garbage. One of the things that piss me off is the writer's idea that seduction means flashing the guy. It's just so....you know. ''Simple''. But hey, don't mind me. I'm just a reader with an opinion.--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 19:01 (Louisiana Time), 19 June 2016

The statue sex comes from "Oops! You're Naked!" and from what I remember (no matter how hard I try to forget), the protagonist didn't get turned into a statue but managed to get into a threesome with a guard and the same statue she was fucking and, later on, the protagonist and the guard went to his place to fuck. And it just ends there. The protagonist, by the way, has big breasts and big hips but we know little else of what she has. I like to imagine that's all, just a talking bust and hips. It's goddamn terrifying but I'd rather be scared then bored because it's just the same thing you get in every 4 out of 5 Adult CYOSs. --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 15:32 (Louisiana Time), 20 June 2016

Here's my two cents about "The Devil's Daughter": just as your average Adult CYOS is an exercise in hedonism, The Devil's Daughter is an exercise in depravity. --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 15:55 (Louisiana Time), 20 June 2016

You've seen this CYOS that's been getting written a lot recently? It's called "ASOIAF Sexy Edition". --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 15:59 (Louisiana Time), 20 June 2016

Distraction? Maybe. Don't see how it would work for someone who's right in front of you and I would expect someone trying to use their "womanly wiles" to be more subtle and more intelligent then a drunk college girl.--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 16:24 (Louisiana Time), 20 June 2016

You mean hentai? You know, I can actually imagine The Devil's Daughter as an animated hentai but as one of the more unsettling and unholy hentais that I'd abandon once I realize what I'm getting into to. Hey, I have standards!

The bit with the doctor in Escape from Syria is a bit iffy as we didn't need the description about his...ejaculate.

Yeah, I mentioned the Bastet from World of Darkness because I was hoping you would be interested and try to look it up. You really should look up World of Darkness, it's pretty cool. There's plenty of pdfs on the internet and on Scribd.

You know, I'm not an expert on Satanism but I don't think that Satanists would approve of the protagonist's behavior. Hell, there's actually many types of Satanism like Theistic Satanism, and The Church of Satan, and the Temple of Set. None of them seem likely to enlist hedonistic monsters that try to summon real life demons by any means necessary. I don't think the writer specifies what type of Satanism the protagonist does so I actually think, from the stated goal of the protagonist and the protagonist's cruelties, that she's just enrolled in a typical evil Devil worshiping cult rather then real Satanism. You know, the type of cult that usually ends up as a C grade minor villain in a show like Supernatural or Buffy: The Vampire Slayer.

P.S Sorry for dropping The Devil's Daughter on you. I didn't know how long it was. From your notes, it looks worse then I thought from my first glance. And yet that only makes me more curious about it. Damn it.--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 11:37 (Louisiana Time), 21 June 2016

Alright, here's another suggestion for review: The End of the World. Look up Crossed by Garth Ennis. This CYOS is inspired by it...and maybe more then "inspired". --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 00:33 (Louisiana Time), 22 June 2016

This might seem...unusual for me to ask but would you play a card game where losing meant you had to lose a piece of clothing?--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 10:18 (Louisiana Time), 22 June 2016

Have you ever heard of Limbo of the Lost? It's not a CYOS, it's a game. One of the greatest games ever made, if I do say so myself. --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 20:55 (Louisiana Time), 22 June 2016

I've seen the "End of the World" review. All of your reviews, in fact. You're not doing too bad. Keep going. For your next CYOS, how about "The Life of a Medieval Princess"? It may not good but it's definitely more sane then the one you're doing right now. Sand in a vagina...for God's sake. P.S "End of the World" is more D grade in my opinion but it does have about three things above the average Adult CYOS such as "Life of a 13 Year Old": there is a ''story'' to it, it actually has some semblance of morality, and the protagonist is actually allowed to be noble, courageous, and even heroic. I gotta tel you, that is something I've learned not to expect from Adult Story CYOSs. Nothing against your review, however. I'm just a reader with an opinion, to borrow the catchphrase of an awesome reviewer named SF Debris. --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 14:29 (Louisiana Time), 25 June 2016

So was strip poker and naked twister the only type of games you've played or have you played more games like that game where you have a conversation on the phone while having sex and you try not to give any clue that you're having sex at the moment to the person at the other end of the line? P.S. I suppose you haven't told any stories about...erm, naked twister on your blog? --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 01:45 (Louisiana Time), 29 June 2016

Could you check on Dungeons and Dragons in the Adult CYOS section and tell me what edition it is?--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 19:04 (Louisiana Time), 30 June 2016

Yeah, that's exactly what I needed. Thanks. So, it's about maybe a week or less until Ramadan ends. I don't how to feel about this. On the one hand, I can finally resume my calling on this website (shit-tons of edits and comments in the discussion tabs) and read your stuff. On the other hand...I know that little of the Adult CYOSs on here are worth reading even if only for erotic purposes and that I'll come back to the blasé and caustic attitude I had before Ramadan. The closest analog is, after not having food for a long time, I find a ton of horrible food and I chow it all down but soon, when I'm as full as I can be, I realize what I'm eating and don't touch until I am truly desperate. DirtyMe, I have the feeling that your stuff just might be the only adult CYOSs I'll be really reading on this website. Just five more days, at the very least. --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 01:15 (Louisiana Time), 1 July 2016

I've heard that you may have experience with glory holes so I want to know, for my own reasons but if you ask nicely, I'll tell you, can a vagina fit on or through a glory hole?--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 02:31 (Louisiana Time), 2 July 2016

Well. Ramadan's long over. I can now read Adult CYOSs. And I don't care about them anymore. Just...no. I just don't care. I put some serious thought into a one and I found myself wanting to take a shower. The blandness, sleaziness, and quite frankly horribleness killed any real interest I had in Adult CYOSs. Just...I don't want to endure that nonsense anymore. --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 09:40 (Louisiana Time), 12 July 2016

The question came from a video on Youtube. Here's the link: www.youtube.com/watch?v=t6ejgls3MOY
I recommend that you watch the rest of the playthrough, it's some great stuff.
P.S You remember Velma from Scooby-Doo? Glasses, orange sweater, always explains the mystery at the end? Yeah, there seems to be a lot of hentai on the internet. Just google "velma hentai". I'm not surprised that there ''is'' hentai of Velma, just that she seems to overshadow Daphne. (Purple-wearing chick, possible love interest of Freddy (blonde dude, behind all the traps, always splits up with Velma and Daphne)).
--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 16:12 (Louisiana Time), 4 August 2016
== [[User:Darkfry|Darkfry]] ==

I just wanted to thank you for the friendly help you offered me a few days ago, I am really new to writing stories in this format so it is taking me a while to get a handle on all the correct ways to link things together. It is really nice to have someone looking out for these thing. P.S. I only just figured out how to respond to a message so that's why it's taken me this long to thank you. I am really happy to take advice from people on how to do things, hope I am a good student. By the way I am not sure how the signature thing works so I hope this works... --[[User:Darkfry|Darkfry]] 13:38, 31 May 2016 (UTC)

Yes, I am over 18, I'll give some thought to your Exhibitionist story, no serious ideas right now but I am sure can think of something you would enjoy writing (; --[[User:Darkfry|Darkfry]] 08:02, 2 June 2016 (UTC)

I am not too sure how you want the option formatted, I left you an option under the link you have created on the stories front page. Hope you have fun.--[[User:Darkfry|Darkfry]] 10:36, 2 June 2016 (UTC)

That is a rather interesting piece of information, I suppose the symbolism is something I could consider working into the story, the story is supposed to be location neutral (it could be in any country), so it does need to relate to a broad variety of cultures, and things like that can add depth. I hope you are enjoying the story so far. Glad someone is reading it. :) --[[User:Darkfry|Darkfry]] 10:57, 3 June 2016 (UTC)

So I wanted some advice on a couple of things, is creating sub categories for your story an issue? Basically the story is told from 2 perspectives ie, that of Hart and Yale. I want to have a separate category for each although maintain the main category as well for each ie. each page would link to 2 categories. Would this be frowned upon?
Secondly if I want to change the name of a page link, is it okay to simply copy the content from the old link into a new link and delete the content in the old link, or does that leave a mess behind for someone else to clean up? Is the a better way of moving the content?
Thanks in advance. --[[User:Darkfry|Darkfry]] 19:59, 20 June 2016 (UTC)
Thank you again, I am thinking of updating all my pages to have a unique identifier to the story although I must say it does bug me that in the category index page all the pages are then listed with the story header prefixed it is a pity that there isn't a way for the index to show a chosen page title. Would it be terrible to index it with a post-fix identifier, as instead of "Hyde Road - Go to next page" it was "Go to next page - Hyde Road". Is that too non-conformist of me? Anyway I think I have the subcategory thing understood now except I seemed to have some issue in getting it to list the subcategory under the correct letter in the main categories index as in I wanted it to list Hyde road - Carla Yale under C not H but I couldn't seem to get that right. Anyway main reason I want to add the subcategory is I want to create a set of pages that would basically be my background notes. I would like to have a bunch of pages that explain the world as well as bunch of random story facts that I need to keep track of while writing but don't want them to show up in the main index, but rather under the sub-index, if that isn't too confusing. I don't really want the average reader to be reading them by accident because they will have spoilers in them, but I would like them available online. I am presuming that it wouldn't be a problem for these pages only to have the subcategory as their category.
Again sorry for all the questions, and thank you for taking the time to answer. I am trying to add little bit by little bit to the story so afraid it's taking me quite some time to get it all down, but I think it is getting there.--[[User:Darkfry|Darkfry]] 08:56, 27 June 2016 (UTC)

Hmm, I did try that but it isn't working the way I would have expected, when I type it like that it puts the tile of the page in the subcategory under C but in the main category the subcategory remains unchanged. So basically under Hyde Road, the page "attempt to start a conversation" is listed in A but in Hyde Road - Carla Yale it is listed under C. What I want is Hyde Road - Carla Yale. I don;t know maybe I broke something :/ I'll update all the Carla Yale pages and see if it fixes it... --[[User:Darkfry|Darkfry]] 10:12, 27 June 2016 (UTC)

Yes, I am following how it works, so it's working as intended. Unfortunately I was trying to do something slightly different so that's where the confusion is coming in I think. I think I know where I went wrong. Will get back to you in a second. --[[User:Darkfry|Darkfry]] 10:25, 27 June 2016 (UTC)

Alright, sorry I had to disappear, the world was ending, sort of. Anyway, yes I understand the whole where the category name is coming from... was a bit of a stupid from my side. The category page gets it's category name from category listed in the subcategories index page... which is obvious when I think about it... anyways thank you, you helped me understand it a lot better.--[[User:Darkfry|Darkfry]] 14:31, 27 June 2016 (UTC)

== Other ==

I'm following basically the same rules as you but I decided to work from Z to A under the assumption a lot of people start moving things to the pit and give up way before they get to the end. I did find a story from 2011 with less than 20 pages somewhere under 'Y' I think. -- [[User:Hellspawn|Hellspawn]] 9:00 29 May 2016 GMT

Hey, I just wanted to say thank you for editing may talk/about me what so ever. I m just getting started with this whole "wiki" thing. ... And to prove it I nearly messed up your talk page. nearly. --[[User:Zehir|Zehir]] 16:44, 6 June 2016 (UTC)--

Thanks for the notes and advice. Very much appreciated. Really wasn't looking to get into a flame war with anyone, but also would expect more of a welcome to the site than what I got. Hoping to simply move on and not be chased out.
--[[User:Bardo75|Bardo75]] 02:51, 29 June 2016 (UTC)

When you get a chance, please check out the new story I've started on. It's called Just Say Yes. Clearly just at the beginning stages, but would really appreciate your feedback.
--[[User:Bardo75|Bardo75]] 21:43, 5 July 2016 (UTC)

I took your comment about the wife having an affair and decided to run with it. Ended up taking an unexpectedly dark turn, but that's what I love about writing. You never really know where you're going to end up.
--[[User:Bardo75|Bardo75]] 03:50, 6 August 2016 (UTC)

== Messages from Clara ==

Hello.

== From TheWriter (Female, btw) ==

Hi

I read some of your stuff. You seem like a fun girl.

Like I said, I'm attracted to you either way. I know a sex site we could possibly chat, if you're interested. Or if you're scared I'm some weirdo, that's cool too.

== [[User:Underside|Underside]] ==

Ah, I didn't really know the protocol. I tried reading the rules to make sure I was doing everything right. I'll revert it for now and leave a message asking about it.--Underside 14:28, 14 July 2016 (UTC)

Yeah, I'm getting the timeout error too. I'm trying to add an explanation to the main index to show where to edit. Also can you define "notoc" for me?

Okay, yeah the table of contents was ugly with the linked row. I'm halfway through reverting pages again. There goes a bunch of work down the drain. :p --[[User:Underside|Underside]] 02:22, 15 July 2016 (UTC)

I put everything back. It seemed like a good idea at the time, but I think it just ended up being needlessly complicated. :(
I looked at your system for [[The Review]]. Have you considered using the story name for your link, pagecount and name of review? You could probably format the template to use one variable for all of it.--[[User:Underside|Underside]] 02:51, 15 July 2016 (UTC)

Yeah, I saw that it looks the same after it parses. I'm thinking you could simplify the template though. Like: <nowiki>{{The Review|story=The End of the World|synopsis=While it may not be the end of the world, it is the end of life as we know it. Can you survive the infection ravaging your town? Can you find love or happiness if you do?}}}}</nowiki> but use the ''story'' variable to define the other links. I don't know if it's possible with the restrictions on the wiki though. You're probably way more experienced on here than I am, I've already learned a lot of things the Tutorial doesn't cover. Would you mind if I took a crack at making a more concise Review template for practice?

I forgot to timestamp my last message, sorry. I made a quick ''[[The Review/PG-13 Stories/Adventures at Hogwarts|Adventures at Hogwarts]]'' review and tried to add to the list. It shows what I meant by more concise template. Feel free to scrap it if it doesn't fit. --[[User:Underside|Underside]] 04:18, 15 July 2016 (UTC)

I'm not sure I'm making myself clear. I wasn't talking about the content of the reviews, just the formating of the template. I've spent far more time on this site formatting and fixing typos than writing or reading the stories.
I'm not sure what you meant by "''Now I know what you mean by the review itself, not the template on the pages.''" I thought it was clear that I ''am'' talking about the template.
I'm trying to give people the same amount of information by doing less typing. I'll demonstrate what I mean with the first few entries on the [[The_Review/PG-13_Stories/Page_1|PG-13 list]]. I've changed them to use the same template as my ''Adventures at Hogwarts'' review. I'm going to have to get to bed, but I've been enjoying our discussion. --[[User:Underside|Underside]] 04:56, 15 July 2016 (UTC)

Your welcome. I'm pretty new to wikis, this being the first one I've tried editing, but I've got years of experience in a few programming languages so things like that are going to stick out for me. I'm still learning the limitations of how I can edit here. I was looking for a simple place to work on an IF story but got caught up learning all the syntax and wiki etiquette. --[[User:Underside|Underside]] 05:43, 15 July 2016 (UTC)

I added a few pages to the [[It's_programming_time!/Batch|/Batch]] section. It's all really basic stuff but it should help get people started. It still needs a bunch of work but it's more informative. --[[User:Underside|Underside]] 04:05, 16 July 2016 (UTC)

Yeah, I tried a few different things looking for a workaround for that twenty minute interval between including an outside url. If I add them all at once but can access them separately through a template it saves time. There's probably a limit to how much you can add before it takes a toll on the server though.--[[User:Underside|Underside]] 13:54, 18 July 2016 (UTC)

Find somewhere quiet to pull over

Bardo75 — Thu, 04 Aug 2016 23:50:24 GMT

Bardo75:

You pull off the busy street and drive around behind a swanky clothing store that has closed for the evening. Parking between two large dumpsters, you turn off the headlights and power your seat back. You then put your hand to your wife's face and pull her up to look at you.

"Fuck me, Janice. Fuck me one last time."

You're not sure it's the best thing to do right now, but for some reason it's the only thing you can think of. You can't lose the image of your wife riding Marcus, but maybe fucking her will help to make it go away. You are confused. You are angry. You are sad. You want her to want you.

Clearly she doesn't.

Janice just stares at you. It's like she's high. She doesn't say anything. She doesn't do anything. She just stares at you with an odd, emotionless look on her face. It's not what you want from her, so you say the only thing that comes to mind.

"Doar spune da."

Your wife reacts without emotion, but with clear intent. She crawls over and straddles you, hiking up her dress. She isn't wearing any underwear. Your dick is still out, and just hard enough to be effective. Janice reaches down and grabs your cock, then guides it into her hole as she settles down onto it. She reaches up and puts her hands on the seat behind your head, and begins a slow, steady rhythm. You put your hands on her hips and help to keep the motion steady. There, in your parked SUV, you fuck your wife for what is probably the last time. Janice is rolling her hips back and forth, forcing her cunt to massage your cock. You look at her face...trying to look into her eyes...hoping to see some sign that she is enjoying herself. Instead she just stares at you...past you. Janice picks up the pace, rolling over your cock harder and faster. Her breathing gets heavier, but her face remains emotionless. You still can't get the idea of another man being in this position out of your mind. How many times has Janice done this to Marcus? Who else has she been sleeping with? How many men has she fucked, while you have been faithful. While you have been working to provide for her?

Janice continues to increase the speed and intensity. She is fucking you hard, now. Her breathing is fast, and her mouth remains open. Occasionally she lets out a short moan. You slide your hands from her hips up to her shoulders, and change the rhythm from sliding back and forth to a bounce, up and down. With each bounce, you thrust back up into her, squeezing her shoulders and pushing her back down into your cock. She is no longer fucking you. You are fucking her.

You have taken control. You are in charge.

You continue to hammer into your wife as she bounces up and down on your cock. You move your hands from her shoulders to your neck...and tighten your grip.

Your move seems to break the spell. Janice's eye widen, and she reaches to try and pull your hands from her neck.

"Don't stop fucking me!" you yell at her.

She stuggles to stop you.

"Doar spune da."

You wife stops struggling and leans back, resting her hands on your knees as she slides up and down on your cock.

You squeeze tighter.

"Keep fucking me, Janice. I'm going to fuck you to death. Doar spune da. Keep fucking me. Doar spune da. Fuck me to death."

Janice continues to fuck you. Her pussy squeezes at your cock as she rides up and down on it. Her face turns red as you continue to tighten your clutch around her throat, but she doesn't stop. She keeps fucking.

Then she slows down.

You roll her over and lay her back across the seats, and keep fucking her. You don't let go of her throat, squeezing with all of your strength as you slam your cock into her, slapping your pelvis against hers. She is your wife, and she will do what you want her to. She will fuck you when you want her to. She is your wife. She is yours.

Your head explodes along with your cock. You feel like you might pass out as you fill your wife with cum. A couple more hard, deep thrusts and you push the last few drops into her.

Then you look down at your dead wife.

Your hands are still crushing her throat. Her eyes are wide and lifeless, and her body is completely limp.

Fuck.

What do you do?

[[Category: Just Say Yes]]

Find a buxom wench to try your power on

Bardo75 — Thu, 04 Aug 2016 23:43:19 GMT

Bardo75:

As you walk out into the sunlight from the fortune teller's tent, you start to wonder if that really just happened. Maybe you're asleep and this is all just a dream? After a moment of reflection you decide it really doesn't matter. If you are dreaming, then there are no real consequences for your actions and you can do whatever you want. If you aren't dreaming, and you really have the ability to get people to do whatever you want them to...then you can get people to do whatever you want them to!! The thought that you might actually have the power to control the will of anyone you wish is exciting. When you start to notice the number of beautiful women walking around the fairgrounds, and you realize you could have any one of them, your cock twitches a bit. You need to try this thing again and see if it really works. As you wander around the renaissance festival grounds, you start to look in earnest for your next test subject. Finally you spot one, like a lion spotting a lone gazelle, off on her own and vulnerable. She is a short, curvy young woman in her early 20's. Her dark hair is done up in some sort of medieval headdress, and her huge breasts are barely contained by the corset of her costume. She appears to be the lone proprietor of a food stand that sells pickles and Scotch eggs. The stand is actually just one section of several in a long building. Many of the others have lines of at least a few people, your the buxom young woman you are watching is currently alone. You stride confidently toward her, and she smiles at you with large doe eyes.

"Greetings, my Lord. How art thou?" she says as you approach.

"I am fantastic," you say confidently. "What's your name."

"I am Ophelia," she replies. "What is your name, my Lord?"

Ignoring her question, you say "I see you sell large pickles.

"Why yes, my Lord," she replies. "We have the finest pickles in the realm."

"Would you like to see my pickle?" you ask.

The young wench looks embarrassed and clearly doesn't know how to respond. "Umm...excuse me?" she finally says.

"I would love to show you my pickle," you tell her.

"Uh...no thank you," she says uncomfortably.

You smile at her and say, "Why don't you take me in back of your little shop and let me stick my pickle in you."

She seems to be passing from embarrassment to annoyance, and replies with an edge in her voice. "Listen, mister," she says. "I have a boyfriend and am not into old guys. Maybe you've had a bit too much ale today. I think you go walk it off."

You continue to smile at her for a minute, then say the magic phrase, "Doar spune da."

Young Ophelia looks you up and down, then lifts the counter hatch to let you into her shop and says, "I'd like to show you something, my Lord. Please, come with me."

You walk into the small stand and follow her as she passes through a heavy curtain into a back room. Roughly the size of a large closet, it's basically a combination storage and prep room, with an exit out the back. When you are both past the curtain and in the small room, Natalie turns to face you.

"Please show me your big pickle, my Lord," she says as she reaches down to rub your hardening cock through your shorts.

No need for foreplay here. You drop your shorts and proudly show the young wench your man meat.

"That is a fine cock, my Lord," she says. "Now what will you do with it?"

You could get used to this. "Turn around and bend over, and I'll show you a magic trick," you say.

Ophelia complies, turning her back to you and bending over. You lift up her long dress and see she is wearing some kind of large, frilly undergarment. Again not seeing the need to be subtle, you pull them down and expose her big, white ass. You slide your cuck between her legs and rub it up against her moist cunt.

"Hocus pocus," you say. "Now see how I make my cock disappear."

Clearly you are enjoying yourself, and you chuckle at your silly joke as you press the head of your cock into the young woman's waiting hole. Her pussy is very tight, and you have to take care sliding all the way in. Her pussy quickly accepts you, however, and soon you are balls deep in the young woman's cunt.

You put your hands an her large hips and start to fuck her properly. Her tight pussy feels amazing on your cock, and your body is slapping against her huge ass. Ophelia is leaning over a large case of something or other, grabbing it for support as you slam into her over and over. Her big, round ass begs you to smack it, so you rear back and slap it hard along with one of your thrusts. This elicits a loud yelp from the girl, but she doesn't seem to want you to stop. You continue to fuck her from behind, smacking her ass a few more times. A large, red, hand-shaped welt is appearing on her bright white ass cheak, and you are just about to cum. To finish the image, you pull out at the last second a blast a load across her rear end. You grab your cock and squeeze out a couple of last spurts and then step back to admire your masterpiece.

"Thank you, my Lord," she says. "That was a very nice magic trick."

"Anytime," you say, as you hike up your shorts and step back out of the little shop.

What a great day.

What now?

[[Category: Just Say Yes]]

Find somewhere quiet to pull over

Bardo75 — Thu, 04 Aug 2016 01:03:46 GMT

Bardo75:

You pull off the busy street and drive around behind a clothing store that has closed for the evening. Parking between two large dumpsters, you turn off the headlights and power your seat back. You then put your hand to your wife's face and pull her up to look at you.

"Fuck me, Janice. Fuck me one last time."

You're not sure it's the best thing to do right now, but for some reason it's the only thing you can think of. You can't get the image of your wife riding Marcus, and maybe fucking her will help to make that thought go away. You are confused. You want her to want you.

Clearly she doesn't.

Janice just stares at you. It's like she's high. She doesn't say anything. She doesn't do anything. She just stares at you with an odd, expressionless look on her face. It's not what you want from her, so you say the only thing that comes to mind.

"Doar spune da."

Your wife reacts without emotion, but with clear intent. She crawls over and straddles you, hiking up her dress. You see she isn't wearing any panties. Your dick is still out, and just hard enough to be effective. Janice reaches down and grabs your cock, then guides it into her hole as she settles down onto it. She reaches up and puts her hands on the seat behind your head, and begins a slow, steady rhythm. You put your hands on her hips and help to keep the motion steady. There, in your parked SUV, you fuck your wife for what is probably the last time. Janice is rolling her hips back and forth, forcing her cunt to massage your cock. You look at her face...trying to look into her eyes...hoping to see some sign that she is enjoying herself. Instead she just stares at you...past you. Janice picks up the pace, rolling over your cock harder and faster. Her breathing gets heavier, but her face remains emotionless. You still can't get the idea of another man being in this position out of your mind. How many times has Janice done this to Marcus? Who else has she been sleeping with? How many men has she fucked, while you have been faithful. While you have been working to provide for her?

Janice continues to increase the speed and intensity. She is fucking you hard, now. Her breathing is fast, and her mouth remains open. Occasionally she lets out a short moan. You slide your hands from her hips up to her shoulders, and change the rhythm from sliding back and forth to a bounce, up and down. With each bounce, you thrust back up into her, squeezing her shoulders and pushing her back down into your cock. She is no longer fucking you. You are fucking her.

You have taken control. You are in charge.

You continue to hammer into your wife as she bounces up and down on your cock. You move your hands from her shoulders to your neck...and tighten your grip.

Your move seems to break the spell. Janice's eye widen, and she reaches to try and pull your hands from her neck.

"Don't stop fucking me!" you yell at her.

She stuggles to stop you.

"Doar spune da."

You wife stops struggling and leans back, resting her hands on your knees as she slides up and down on your cock.

You squeeze tighter.

"Keep fucking me, Janice. I'm going to fuck you to death. Doar spune da. Keep fucking me. Doar spune da. Fuck me to death."

Janice continues to fuck you. Her pussy squeezes at your cock as she rides up and down on it. Her face turns red as you continue to tighten your clutch around her throat, but she doesn't stop. She keeps fucking.

Then she slows down.

You roll her over and lay her back across the seats, and keep fucking her. You don't let go of her throat, squeezing with all of your strength as you slam your cock into her, slapping your pelvis against hers. She is your wife, and she will do what you want her to. She will fuck you when you want her to. She is your wife. She is yours.

Your head explodes along with your cock. You feel like you might pass out as you fill your wife with cum. A couple more hard, deep thrusts and you push the last few drops into her.

Then you look down at your dead wife.

Your hands are still crushing her throat. Her eyes are wide and lifeless, and her body is completely limp.

Fuck.

What do you do?

[[Category: Just Say Yes]]

Find somewhere quiet to pull over

Bardo75 — Thu, 04 Aug 2016 00:34:38 GMT

Bardo75:

Ignore her and get in the car

Bardo75 — Thu, 04 Aug 2016 00:34:01 GMT

Bardo75:

Find somewhere quiet to pull over

Bardo75 — Thu, 04 Aug 2016 00:31:42 GMT

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You don't know what to do, but you know you can't keep driving. You pull off the busy street and drive around behind a clothing store that has closed for the evening. Parking between two large dumpsters, you turn off the headlights and power your seat back. You then put your hand to your wife's face and pull her up to look at you.

"Fuck me, Janice. Fuck me one last time."

You're not sure it's really the right thing to do, but for some reason it's the only thing you can think of. You can't get the image of your wife riding Marcus, and maybe fucking her will help to make that thought go away. You are confused. You want her to want you.

Clearly she doesn't.

Janice just stares at you. It's like she's high. She doesn't say anything. She doesn't do anything. She just stares at you with an odd, expressionless look on her face. It's not what you want from her, so you say the only thing that comes to mind.

"Doar spune da."

Your wife reacts without emotion, but with clear intent. She crawls over and straddles you, hiking up her dress. You see she isn't wearing any panties. Your dick is still out, and just hard enough to be effective. Janice reaches down and grabs your cock, then guides it into her hole as she settles down it. She reaches up and puts her hands on the seat behind your head, and begins a slow, steady rhythm. You put your hands on her hips and help to keep the motion steady. There, in your parked SUV, you fuck your wife for what is probably the last time. Janice is rolling her hips back and forth, forcing her cunt to massage your cock. You look at her face...trying to look into her eyes...hoping to see some sign that she is enjoying herself. Instead she just stares at you...past you. Janice picks up the pace, her pussy rolling over your cock harder and faster. Her breathing gets heavier, but her face remains emotionless. You still can't get the idea of another man being in this position out of your mind. How many times has Janice done this to Marcus? Who else has she been sleeping with? How many men has she fucked, while you have been faithful. While you have been working to provide for her?

What do you do?

[[Category: Just Say Yes]]

Ignore her and get in the car

Bardo75 — Thu, 04 Aug 2016 00:30:45 GMT

Bardo75:

You decide it's best to avoid a public fight, so you bite your tongue, finish packing up the SUV, and head home.

After a long period of silence, Janice turns to you and says, "I want a divorce."

You feel like you've just been punched in the gut. While you are definitely not the perfect couple, her words are still shocking to you. You are taken completely by surprise and have no idea what to say, so you don't say anything. Instead you simply stare at the road and continue driving.

"I've been fucking Marcus for a year," she continues. "He's a real man and knows how to treat a woman. I want you to move out of the house. I'll be spending the night with Marcus tonight, and expect you to be gone in the morning."

You continue to drive, staring silently forward. Marcus is a personal trainer at the gym Janice works out at. He is about 6'3" and very muscular, looking more like an NFL linebacker than a trainer at your local gym.

"Don't you have anything to say for yourself?" she says spitefully.

You are full of so many emotions you simply can't think straight. You are sad, hurt, shocked, confused. But most of all, right at this moment, you are really, really pissed off.

"Suck my dick!" you shout at her.

Janice laughs at you. A wicked laugh that is full of contempt. "I'll be sucking a dick tonight, but it sure as hell won't be yours!"

Without stopping the car, you turn to look at your soon to be ex-wife and say the words, "Doar spune da."

For a moment Janice just stares at you, an odd emotionless expression on her face. Then, without a word, she unbuckles her seat belt, leans over to you, and pulls your dick out of your shorts.

Even though you just told her to suck your dick, you are still shocked that she is really going to do it. Even when you were young and actually enjoying your sex life together, Janice would never have gone down on you in public. Now, as you drive down a major city street on a Saturday night, your wife takes your cock into her mouth and starts to suck you off.

You are more confused than ever. The blow job is amazing. Janice is sucking your dick like it's the only thing in the world that she wants right now. But you also know that she is doing it only because of your new ability to force her. The enthusiasm she is showing your cock has you already on the verge of cumming. At the same time, all you can imagine is your wife doing the same thing to Marcus' big, black cock. The way she is holding your balls and slurping up and down your shaft makes you want to pull over and fuck her. The thought of her cheating for the last year makes you want to strangle her.

You don't know what to do, but you know you can't keep driving. You pull off the busy street and drive around behind a clothing store that has closed for the evening. Parking between two large dumpsters, you turn off the headlights and power your seat back. You then put your hand to your wife's face and pull her up to look at you.

"Fuck me, Janice. Fuck me one last time."

You're not sure it's really the right thing to do, but for some reason it's the only thing you can think of. You can't get the image of your wife riding Marcus, and maybe fucking her will help to make that thought go away. You are confused. You want her to want you.

Clearly she doesn't.

Janice just stares at you. It's like she's high. She doesn't say anything. She doesn't do anything. She just stares at you with an odd, expressionless look on her face. It's not what you want from her, so you say the only thing that comes to mind.

"Doar spune da."

Your wife reacts without emotion, but with clear intent. She crawls over and straddles you, hiking up her dress. You see she isn't wearing any panties. Your dick is still out, and just hard enough to be effective. Janice reaches down and grabs your cock, then guides it into her hole as she settles down it. She reaches up and puts her hands on the seat behind your head, and begins a slow, steady rhythm. You put your hands on her hips and help to keep the motion steady. There, in your parked SUV, you fuck your wife for what is probably the last time. Janice is rolling her hips back and forth, forcing her cunt to massage your cock. You look at her face...trying to look into her eyes...hoping to see some sign that she is enjoying herself. Instead she just stares at you...past you. Janice picks up the pace, her pussy rolling over your cock harder and faster. Her breathing gets heavier, but her face remains emotionless. You still can't get the idea of another man being in this position out of your mind. How many times has Janice done this to Marcus? Who else has she been sleeping with? How many men has she fucked, while you have been faithful. While you have been working to provide for her?

What do you do?

*[[Find somewhere quiet to pull over]]
*[[Make the bitch walk home!]]

[[Category: Just Say Yes]]

Find a buxom wench to try your power on

Bardo75 — Wed, 03 Aug 2016 04:23:00 GMT

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Ignore her and get in the car

Bardo75 — Tue, 02 Aug 2016 02:34:29 GMT

Bardo75:

You decide it's best to avoid a public fight, so you bite your tongue, finish packing up the SUV, and head home.

After a long period of silence, Janice turns to you and says, "I want a divorce."

Even though you're not exactly the perfect couple, her words are shocking to you. You are taken completely by surprise and have no idea what to say, so you don't say anything and just stare at the road and continue driving.

"I've been fucking Marcus for a year," she continues. "He's a real man and knows how to treat a woman. I want you to move out of the house. I'll be spending the night with Marcus tonight, and expect you to be gone in the morning."

You continue to drive, staring silently forward. Marcus is a personal trainer at the gym Janice works out at. He is about 6'3" and very muscular, and looks very much like he should be a linebacker in the NFL.

"Don't you have anything to say for yourself?" she says spitefully.

You are full of so many emotions you simply can't think straight. You are sad, hurt, shocked, confused. But most of all, right at this moment, you are really, really pissed off.

"Suck my dick!" you shout at her.

Janice laughs at you. A wicked laugh that is full of contempt. "I'll be sucking a dick tonight, but it sure as hell won't be yours!"

Without stopping the car, you turn to look at your soon to be ex-wife and say the words, "Doar spune da."

For a moment Janice just stares at you, an odd emotionless expression on her face. Then, without a word, she unbuckles her seat belt, leans over to you, and pulls your dick out of your shorts.

Even though you just told her to suck your dick, you are still shocked that she is really going to do it. Even when you were young and actually enjoying your sex life together, Janice would never have gone down on you in public. Now, as you drive down a major city street on a Saturday night, your wife takes your cock into her mouth and starts to suck you off.

You are more confused than ever. The blow job is amazing. Janice is sucking your dick like it's the only thing in the world that she wants right now. At the same time, all you can imagine is your wife's mouth on Marcus' big, black cock. The way she is holding your balls and slurping up and down your shaft makes you want to pull over and fuck her. The thought of her cheating for the last year makes you want to pull over and strangle her.

What do you do?

*[[Pull over and fuck her]]
*[[Pull over and strangle her]]
*[[Pull over and do both]]

[[Category: Just Say Yes]]

Ignore her and get in the car

Bardo75 — Tue, 02 Aug 2016 02:29:55 GMT

Bardo75:

You decide it's best to avoid a public fight, so you bite your tongue, finish packing up the SUV, and head home.

After a long period of silence, Janice turns to you and says, "I want a divorce."

Even though you're not exactly the perfect couple, her words are shocking to you. You are taken completely by surprise and have no idea what to say, so you don't say anything and just stare at the road and continue driving.

"I've been fucking Marcus for a year," she continues. "He's a real man and knows how to treat a woman. I want you to move out of the house. I'll be spending the night with Marcus tonight, and expect you to be gone in the morning."

You continue to drive, staring silently forward. Marcus is a personal trainer at the gym Janice works out at. He is about 6'3" and very muscular, and looks very much like he should be a linebacker in the NFL.

"Don't you have anything to say for yourself?" she says spitefully.

You are full of so many emotions you simply can't think straight. You are sad, hurt, shocked, confused. But most of all, right at this moment, you are really, really pissed off.

"Suck my dick!" you shout at her.

Janice laughs at you. A wicked laugh that is full of contempt. "I'll be sucking a dick tonight, but it sure as hell won't be yours!"

Without stopping the car, you turn to look at your soon to be ex-wife and say the words, "Doar spune da."

For a moment Janice just stares at you, an odd emotionless expression on her face. Then, without a word, she unbuckles her seat belt, leans over to you, and pulls your dick out of your shorts.

Even though you just told her to suck your dick, you are still shocked that she is really going to do it. Even when you were young and actually enjoying your sex life together, Janice would never have gone down on you in public. Now, as you drive down a major city street on a Friday night, your wife takes your cock into her mouth and starts to suck you off.

You are more confused now than ever. The blow job is amazing. Janice is sucking your cock like it's the only thing in the world that she wants right now. At the same time, all you can imagine is your wife's mouth on Marcus's big, black dick. The way she is holding your balls and slurping up and down your shaft makes you want to pull over and fuck her. The thought of her cheating for the last year makes you want to pull over and strangle her.

What do you do?

*[[Pull over and fuck her]]
*[[Pull over and strangle her]]
*[[Pull over and do both]]

[[Category: Just Say Yes]]

Find your family and get out of here!

Bardo75 — Tue, 02 Aug 2016 02:28:43 GMT

Bardo75:

You spend the next hour wandering around looking for at least one face you recognize. Eventually you find your wife, Janice. She is carrying several large bags. Clearly she has enjoyed her time with your money.

"There you are," she says. "Tommy ran into a couple of friends from school, and Suzy's date is picking her up here, so it's just us. I'm exhausted from all this walking, so please take me home now."

She hands you all of the bags she's been carrying and leads the way to the exit gates. As you follow behind her, you think about your wife. The two of you met just after college. She was an ex-cheerleader and had gotten a job as a personal trainer for a large, local gym. While your early sex life was very good, she was pregnant with the twins after only a year of marriage and things have been much cooler ever since. You still have sex once in a while -- though only when she initiates it -- but it's been a very long time since you felt anything like you did this afternoon with the gypsy.

At least she still kept in shape. One thing Janice still cared about was her looks. She quit working for pay when the twins were born. You had a decent job as a tax attorney at the time and were on the fast track to partner. But Janice still worked out every day. Even at 44, her body rivaled that of women half her age. You watch her walk ahead of you, her 5'5" body perfectly filling the light cotton sun dress she wore today. She knows she has a great body, and she loves to show it off. Of course, that just makes you all the more frustrated when she doesn't let you have your way with it once in a while.

"Jesus, Janice. How much shit did you buy today?"

You remember thinking it was a good idea to park at the far end of the lot, to make it easier getting out. Of course you failed to consider the sheer magnitute of your wife's desire to spend your paychecks. As she approaches your SUV, she turns around with her hands on her hips and gives you the "what's your fucking problem" look.

"Don't get all cranky now," she says. "I just got a few things. Hurry up...I want to get out of here."

You unlock the car so she can get in, then pop the back and pack away all the bags.

"Maybe if you'd show some fucking appreciation once in a while," you say -- a bit too loudly.

Janice turns around and looks at you. "What did you say?"

What do you do?

*[[Show her exactly what you mean by appreciation]]
*[[Ignore her and get in the car]]

[[Category: Just Say Yes]]

Ignore her and get in the car

Bardo75 — Tue, 02 Aug 2016 02:27:13 GMT

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You decide it's best to avoid a public fight, so you bite your tongue, finish packing up the SUV, and head home.

After a long period of silence, Janice turns to you and says, "I want a divorce."

Even though you're not exactly the perfect couple, her words are shocking to you. You are taken completely by surprise and have no idea what do say, so you don't say anything and just stare at the road as you mindlessly keep driving.

"I've been fucking Marcus for a year," she continues. "He's a real man and knows how to treat a woman. I want you to move out of the house. I'll be spending the night with Marcus tonight, and expect you to be gone in the morning."

You continue to drive, staring silently forward. Marcus is a personal trainer at the gym Janice works out at. He is about 6'3" and very muscular, and looks very much like he should be a linebacker in the NFL.

"Don't you have anything to say for yourself?" she says spitefully.

You are full of so many emotions you simply can't think straight. You are sad, hurt, shocked, confused. But most of all, right at this moment, you are really, really pissed off.

"Suck my dick!" you shout at her.

Janice laughs at you. A wicked laugh that is full of contempt. "I'll be sucking a dick tonight, but it sure as hell won't be yours!"

Without stopping the car, you turn to look at your soon to be ex-wife and say the words, "Doar spune da."

For a moment Janice just stares at you, an odd emotionless expression on her face. Then, without a word, she unbuckles her seat belt, leans over to you, and pulls your dick out of your shorts.

Even though you just told her to suck your dick, you are still shocked that she is really going to do it. Even when you were young and actually enjoying your sex life together, Janice would never have gone down on you in public. Now, as you drive down a major city street on a Friday night, your wife takes your cock into her mouth and starts to suck you off.

You are more confused now than ever. The blow job is amazing. Janice is sucking your cock like it's the only thing in the world that she wants right now. At the same time, all you can imagine is your wife's mouth on Marcus's big, black dick. The way she is holding your balls and slurping up and down your shaft makes you want to pull over and fuck her. The thought of her cheating for the last year makes you want to pull over and strangle her.

What do you do?

*[[Pull over and fuck her]]
*[[Pull over and strangle her]]
*[[Pull over and do both]]

[[Category: Just Say Yes]]

Go to the SUV

Bardo75 — Tue, 02 Aug 2016 00:41:58 GMT

Bardo75:

You walk toward your vehicle as you continue to work your meat, and step in behind to get a closer look. The young stud is giving Janice a fast and furious pounding, and your wife seems to be having an out of body experience. Her head is tilted back, her eyes staring up, and her mouth hangs open as she repeats short yelps of "oh, oh, uh, uh, oh, oh, uh, uh." Seeing another man slamming his cock into your wife is surprisingly arousing, and you start to really hammer home on your own manhood. At this point young Rob rolls over so he is on his back and your wife is on top. Janice leans forward onto her hands and lifts herself up slightly on her knees, letting the youngster continue to do all the work. His hips are thrusting up with relentless speed as he fucks her with seemingly endless energy. You are so entranced by the scene--and your own cock--that you are slightly startled when the young woman slips past you and crawls into the back of the SUV with them. She has at some point discarded all of her clothing and proceeds to sit on Rob's face, facing your wife. The young stud goes right to town on her clean shaved cunt, shoving his face deep into her pussy. Janice struggles to lift her head and face the girl, and for her efforts is greeted with a deep, passionate kiss.

Not wanting to be the odd man out, you step up and head toward the closest target. Using one hand to hold her steady, you use the other to push your hard cock into Janice's tight asshole. The quick and hard entry elicits a loud "Holy fuck!" from your wife, who then buries her face between the young woman's tits in a futile attempt to muffle her screams. With Rob still slamming his cock like a jackhammer into her pussy, and your cock now pounding deep into her ass, Janice's body shudders with what seems to be one orgasm after another. At the same time, the young woman is holding your wife's face between her tits and is grinding her pussy so hard into Rob's face that you worry if the poor boy can breath. It's all too much for you, as you launch a wad into your wife's ass, filling her with a huge load of hot cum. This triggers a chain reaction of orgasms, as Rob, the young woman, and Janice (who never really stopped cumming) all cum one after the other. Janice collapses onto Rob, and the young woman leans forward onto her. You pull your cock out of your wife's ass and watch as your warm cum drips out and onto Rob's balls. His own softening cock slips out of her pussy, letting another load of cum ooze out from that hole, too. After a few minutes of everybody catching their breath, you all crawl out of the vehicle and gather up your clothing.

While you are pulling your shorts back on, the young woman walks up to you and stretches out her hand. "Hi. My name is Kim. Thanks for the party." With that, the young couple walks off hand-in-hand to find their own car.

Janice seems a bit stiff, and maybe a bit lightheaded, as she pulls her dress back on and walks around to the passenger side door. Thinking about the day you've had, you simply shake your head and walk to the driver's side. It's been one crazy day...and it's not over yet!

Where to now?

*[[Take your wife home and go trolling for more]]
*[[Take your wife trolling with you]]
*[[Go home and go to bed]]

[[Category: Just Say Yes]]

Go to the SUV

Bardo75 — Tue, 02 Aug 2016 00:33:03 GMT

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You walk toward your vehicle as you continue to work your meat, and step in behind to get a closer look. The young stud is giving Janice a fast and furious pounding, and your wife seems to be having an out of body experience. Her head is tilted back, her eyes staring up, and her mouth hangs open as she repeats short yelps of "oh, oh, uh, uh, oh, oh, uh, uh." Seeing another man slamming his cock into your wife is surprisingly arousing, and you start to really hammer home on your own manhood. At this point young Rob rolls over so he is on his back and your wife is on top. Janice leans forward onto her hands and lifts herself up slightly on her knees, letting the youngster continue to do all the work. His hips are thrusting up with relentless speed as he fucks her with seemingly endless energy. You are so entranced by the scene--and your own cock--that you are slightly startled when the young woman slips past you and crawls into the back of the SUV with them. She has at some point discarded all of her clothing and proceeds to sit on Rob's face, facing your wife. The young stud goes right to town on her clean shaved cunt, shoving his face deep into her pussy. Janice struggles to lift her head and face the girl, and for her efforts is greeted with a deep, passionate kiss.

Not wanting to be the odd man out, you step up and head toward the closest target. Using one hand to hold her steady, you use the other to push your hard cock into Janice's tight asshole. The quick and hard entry elicits a loud "Holy fuck!" from your wife, who then buries her face between the young woman's tits in an apparent attempt to muffle her screams. With Rob still slamming his cock like a jackhammer into her pussy, and your cock now pounding deep into her ass, Janice's body shudders with what seems to be one orgasm after another. At the same time, the young woman is holding your wife's face between her tits and is grinding her pussy so hard into Rob's face that you worry if the poor boy can breath. It's all too much for you, as you launch a wad into your wife's ass, filling her with a huge load of hot cum. This triggers a chain reaction of orgasms, as Rob, the young woman, and Janice (who never really stopped cumming) all cum one after the other. Janice collapses onto Rob, and the young woman leans forward onto her. You pull your cock out of your wife's ass and watch as your warm cum drips out and onto Rob's balls. His own softening cock slips out of her pussy, letting another load of cum ooze out from that hole, too. After a few minutes of everybody catching their breath, you all crawl out of the vehicle and gather up your clothing.

As you are pulling your shorts back on, the young woman walks up to you and stretches out her hand. "Hi. My name is Kim. Thanks for the party." With that, the young couple walks off hand-in-hand to find their own car.

Janice seems a bit stiff, and maybe a bit lightheaded, as she pulls her dress back on and walks around to the passenger side door. Thinking about the day you've had, you simply shake your head and walk to the driver's side. It's been one crazy day...and it's not over yet!

Where to now?

*[[Take your wife home and go trolling for more]]
*[[Take your wife trolling with you]]
*[[Go home and go to bed]]

[[Category: Just Say Yes]]

As if the young man wants to have a turn with your wife

Bardo75 — Mon, 01 Aug 2016 23:36:18 GMT

Bardo75:

"You want some of this, too?" you ask.

The young man licks his lips and takes a half-step forward, then stops to look back at the girl standing to his right.

"Go ahead, Rob," she says. "Consider it an early birthday present."

That's all the permission he needs as he drops his pants and steps out of them, grabs his cock, and walks to your wife. Janice has had just enough time to stand up and turn around to see what's going on. Now she looks at the young man walking toward her with his dick in his hand. She gives you a devilish grin, pulls her dress up over hear head and tosses it behind her, then lays back into the SUV and spreads her legs apart.

You watch the young man, apparently named Rob, as he goes right to work. With Janice's pussy well lubed from the pounding you just gave her, he crawls up on her and slides his cock right inside. Janice wraps her legs around the young stud and reaches her arms around his back as he proceeds to fuck her hard and fast.

You look back at the young woman and see she has one hand down the front of her jean shorts, and is clearly excited by what is happening.

What do you do?

*[[Jerk off with her]]
*[[Step up behind her]]

[[Category: Just Say Yes]]

Fuck her here and now

Bardo75 — Mon, 01 Aug 2016 23:33:53 GMT

Bardo75:

Your dick is hard and you know just what it needs, so you quickly pull off your shorts and step in between your wife's legs. Janice looks at you and bites her lip in anticipation as your rub your cock along her wet pussy lips. You slide back and forth, teasing her with the tip of your cock and she starts to breath a bit heavier.

"Put it in me, Michael. I want your cock inside of me."

Great minds think alike! You push the tip of your hard cock into her wet pussy. Janice tips her head back and pushes her hands against your abdomen.

"Oh...yes. Now fuck me, Michael. Fuck my pussy."

You grab her thighs for leverage and start to properly fuck your wife. Your pelvis slams against her ass as you pull her feet up over your shoulders.

"Yes...yes...fuck me...yes!"

You pound her deeper and faster. The slap, slap, slap of your bodies echoing across the open lot, while your wife's moans of ecstasy grow louder with each thrust.

"Yes...yes...yes. Oh fuck, yes! Fuck me, Michael. Fuck me harder! Yes!"

You spread her legs apart and lean forward on your hands, fucking Janice with everything you've got. You take a nipple into your mouth and suck, then bite. Janice calls out in pleasure and you feel her pussy quiver in orgasm around your cock.

"Oh God! Oh fuck! I'm cumming! Oh fuck yes!"

Your wife's orgasm pushes you over the edge, and you shoot a full load of cum deep inside of her. Janice reaches around and grabs your ass, pulling your body tight against hers, as her pussy milks every last drop from your cock.

You relax and lay down on top of your wife, and she wraps her arms and legs around you. As you lay there together in the back of your open SUV, you hear a noise coming from behind you. Startled, you hop off Janice and step out of the vehicle, only to come face to face with a young couple, both in their early twenties, clearly enjoying the show.

What do you do?

*[[Put your clothes on and drive home]]
*[[As if the young man wants to have a turn with your wife]]
*[[Ask if they want to come back to your place]]

[[Category: Just Say Yes]]

Show her exactly what you mean by appreciation

Bardo75 — Sun, 31 Jul 2016 23:52:14 GMT

Bardo75:

The elation you felt an hour ago is gone, and you're finally just fed up.

"I said maybe you could fuck me once in a while and earn some of that money you love to spend!"

Your wife's face turns bright red as she glares at you with contempt. "You'll be lucky if I ever touch that little prick of yours again! Now take me home!" She turns around and folds her arms, staring ahead in silence.

Calmly, you say the phrase you were taught by the gypsy fortune-teller: "Doar spune da."

You can't see her face, but there is a noticeable change in your wife's body language the moment you finish speaking. Her shoulders seem to relax, and her head tilts slightly to one side. Without speaking, she opens the SUV door and exits the vehicle, walking around to where you stand in the rear. As she approaches, you can see the hunger in her eyes. She walks up and wraps her arms around the back of your neck, pulling your face to hers. About six inches shorter than your 5'11" frame, she is forced to stand on her toes as she kisses you hard.

You can't remember the last time Janice kissed you like this, but now you quickly remember how good it feels. Your tongues dance around each other as you grab her waist and pull her body tight to yours.

You squeeze your arms around your wife's waist and pick her up. She wraps her legs around you and kisses you harder, as you turn around and lay her back into the open SUV. You pull your mouth from hers and look down at her. She lays her head back on the bags, and releases you from the leg lock around your waist. Laying back with her hands resting over her head, she pulls her feet in to rest on the edge of the SUV and spreads her knees wide. As her dress falls back over her knees, you can see that your wife is not wearing any panties.

What do you do next?
*[[Fuck her here and now]]
*[[Eat some pussy]]
*[[Fuck your wife in the ass]]

[[Category: Just Say Yes]]

Eat some pussy

Bardo75 — Sun, 31 Jul 2016 23:50:58 GMT

Bardo75:

Her neatly shaven pussy is in plain view. You can see the wetness already starting to drip out, and you grab one of her legs in your left hand. Your right hand slides over her wet bush and you run your fingers through the short curls above her pussy, while your thumb starts to rub her clit. Pulling the leg in your left hand to your face, you kiss and lick your way from her ankle down to her inner thigh. Janice lets out a soft moan as you continue to work her clit with your right thumb, and your tongue works its way to her hole. You move your face between her thighs and lick gently up the outer lips of her pussy. Using both hands to spread her thighs apart, your tongue first licks the lips, then slides inside them. The heat warms your face as her hot juices cover your lips. You alternate between using your tongue to fuck your wife, and rolling it around her clit. Janice begins to moan as you pick up the pace. You slide one hand up under her dress to her chest, pinching a nipple in your fingers, while the other hand slips under her ass and pulls her hips tighter to your face. You push your tongue into her as deeply as you can, sucking at her pussy as you pull out, over and over again. Finally you feel her back arch as Janice starts to cum. You smear her wet juice all over your face as your continue to eat her pussy through the orgasm.

"Oh, God...oh...yes!"

You stand back up and look down at your wife...laying back with her arms up over her head, her dress up over her hips and pussy dripping wet.

What next?

*[[Fuck her here and now]]
*[[Fuck your wife in the ass]]

[[Category: Just Say Yes]]

Step up behind her

Bardo75 — Sun, 31 Jul 2016 23:44:58 GMT

Bardo75:

You casually walk around behind the young lady with her hand down her pants and step in close. Your shorts are still on the ground by your SUV, where Janice is still getting pounded, and your cock is rock hard in your hand. Not one to be shy, you lean forward against the young woman and press your meat against her.

"I wondered when it was going to be our turn," she says. "My name is Kim. Will you fuck me now?"

"Gladly," you say, as you pull her shorts and panties off.

Kim leans forward, putting one hand on her knee while the other continues to rub her clit. You press the head of your cock against her wet pussy and it slips right in.

"Fuck me as hard as my boyfriend is fucking your wife," she says.

You gladly oblige and start slamming her hard from behind. It's been a long time since you had another pussy around your cock, and it feels good. It invigorates you and you pound her harder.

"Harder," she says. "I like it rough!"

You grab Kim's hair and give it a rough tug, pulling her head up.

"That's it. Show me who's boss."

Looking into the back of the SUV, you see that Janice has rolled over on top of her young stud and is giving his cock a good ride. Kim continues to rub furiously at her clit as you slam hard into her. Pulling her hair back hard, you slap her bare ass with your other hand.

"Oh! Yes, I've been bad. Show me how bad I've been," she says.

You keep smacking her ass until it's red and welted, and you are getting close to cumming. Just in the nick of time, you pull your cock from Kim's cunt and yank her head down so her face is at dick level, then blow your wad across her face. Kim opens her mouth and sticks out her tongue, catching what she can. You squeeze the last few drops out and rub your cock across her face.

"Thank you," she says. "That was exactly what I deserved."

Rob is now apparently done fucking your wife, as you look over and see him zipping up his pants and walking toward you. He puts his arm around Kim, gives her a deep kiss, and says to you, "Thanks for the fun. We'll see you around." With that, the walk off toward their car.

You walk over and pull your shorts back on, and watch as Janice pulls her dress back over her head. You both get into the SUV without saying a word and drive out of the lot.

Where to now?

*[[Take your wife home and go trolling for more]]
*[[Take your wife trolling with you]]
*[[Go home and go to bed]]

[[Category: Just Say Yes]]

Step up behind her

Bardo75 — Sun, 31 Jul 2016 03:58:13 GMT

Bardo75:

Step up behind her

Bardo75 — Sun, 31 Jul 2016 03:41:08 GMT

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Jerk off with her

Bardo75 — Sun, 31 Jul 2016 03:29:22 GMT

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You feel like she has the right idea, and since you still haven't put your shorts back on, you grab your hardening cock and start stroking.

Rob is giving Janice a thorough fucking, his ass bouncing up and down in the back of your SUV as he pounds his cock over and over into her pussy.

"Yes, yes, yes, oh, oh, yes, yes, yes, oh, yes."

Your own cock is good and hard now, and you pick up the pace a bit as you stoke yourself and watch your wife getting rammed by a stranger. Glancing over at the young woman, you see she is also watching them fuck, her hand moving vigorously inside her shorts. She also looks back at you a couple times...looking you in the eyes, then down to your cock, then back up again.

This whole thing is getting pretty intense. Janice is clearly cumming again, and you are getting close yourself. Rob shows no signs of slowing down any time soon, and the young beauty nearby has her eyes closed now and her head tipped back.

What now?

*[[Step up behind her]]
*[[Go to the SUV]]
*[[Keep on jerking]]

[[Category: Just Say Yes]]

As if the young man wants to have a turn with your wife

Bardo75 — Sun, 31 Jul 2016 02:44:57 GMT

Bardo75:

"You want some of this, too?" you ask.

The young man licks his lips and takes a half-step forward, then stops and look back at the girl standing to his right.

"Go ahead, Rob," she says. "Consider it an early birthday present."

That's all the permission he needs as he drops his pants and steps out of them, grabs his cock, and walks to your wife. Janice has had just enough time to stand up and turn around to see what's going on. Now she looks at the young man walking toward her with his dick in his hand. She gives you a devilish grin, pulls her dress up over hear head and tosses it behind her, then lays back into the SUV and spreads her legs apart.

You watch the young man, apparently named Rob, as he goes right to work. With Janice's pussy well lubed from the pounding you just gave her, he crawls up on her and slides his cock right inside. Janice wraps her legs around the young stud and reaches her arms around his back as he proceeds to fuck her hard and fast.

You glance back at the young woman and see she has one hand down the front of her jean shorts, and is clearly enjoying the show.

What do you do?

*[[Jerk off with her]]
*[[Step up behind her]]

[[Category: Just Say Yes]]

As if the young man wants to have a turn with your wife

Bardo75 — Sun, 31 Jul 2016 02:44:02 GMT

Bardo75:

"You want some of this, too?" you ask.

The young man licks his lips and takes a half-step forward, then stops and look back at the girl standing to his right.

"Go ahead, Rob," she says. "Consider it an early birthday present."

That's all the permission he needs as he drops his pants and steps out of them, grabs his cock, and walks to your wife. Janice has had just enough time to stand up and turn around to see what's going on. Now she looks at the young man walking toward her with his dick in his hand. She gives you a devilish grin, pulls her dress up over hear head and tosses it behind her, then lays back into the SUV and spreads her legs apart.

You watch the young man, apparently named Rob, as he goes right to work. With Janice's pussy well lubed from the pounding you just gave her, he crawls up on her and slides his cock right inside. Janice wraps her legs around the young stud and reaches her arms around his back as he proceeds to fuck her hard and fast.

You glance back at the young woman and see she has slid one hand into her jean shorts, and is clearly enjoying the show.

What do you do?

*[[Jerk off with her]]
*[[Step up behind her]]

[[Category: Just Say Yes]]

As if the young man wants to have a turn with your wife

Bardo75 — Sun, 31 Jul 2016 02:40:35 GMT

Bardo75: Created page with '"You want some of this, too?" you ask. The young man licks his lips and takes a half-step forward, then stops and look back at the girl standing to his right. "Go ahead, Rob,…'

"You want some of this, too?" you ask.

The young man licks his lips and takes a half-step forward, then stops and look back at the girl standing to his right.

"Go ahead, Rob," she says. "Consider it an early birthday present."

That's all the permission he needs as he drops his pants and steps out of them, grabs his cock, and walks to your wife. Janice has had just enough time to stand up and turn around to see what's going on. Now she looks at the young man walking toward her with his dick in his hand. She gives you a devilish grin, pulls her dress up over hear head and tosses it behind her, then lays back into the SUV and spreads her legs apart.

You watch the young man, apparently named Rob, as he doesn't hesitate a bit and goes right to work. With Janice's pussy well lubed from the pounding you just gave her, he crawls up on her and slides his cock right inside. Janice wraps her legs around the young stud and reaches her arms around his back as he proceeds to fuck her hard and fast.

You glance back at the young woman and see she has slid one hand into her jean shorts, and is clearly enjoying the show.

What do you do?

*[[Jerk off with her]]
*[[Step up behind her]]

[[Category: Just Say Yes]]

Category:Just Say Yes

Bardo75 — Wed, 06 Jul 2016 01:32:19 GMT

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An index of the pages in the adult story Just Say Yes.

Fuck your wife in the ass

Bardo75 — Tue, 05 Jul 2016 23:56:05 GMT

Bardo75:

Time to show her who's boss. You grab Janice's legs and roll her over onto her stomach, pulling her halfway out of the SUV so her legs drop over the edge. Despite the fact that you are in a public parking lot in broad daylight, there's no stopping now. You pull down your shorts and step up behind your wife's bare ass. You rub your cock along her soaking wet pussy to lube it up a bit, then you press the head of your dick against her tight asshole.

"Oh yes, Michael. Fuck my ass!"

Needing no more encouragement, you grab her hips and slowly push the head of your swollen cock into her ass.

"Oh...owww...yes...ohhh."

Her ass is incredibly tight, but you push slowly onward. Finally you feel the resistance break and you get the head in.

"Oh Michael. Oh yes! Oh God, yes! Fuck my ass, Michael. Fuck me!"

You push in deeper, then start to get a rhythm. Slowly at first -- you've never fucked Janice in the ass before, and you don't know how she'll take it. But she seems to be getting along just fine. She is laying on her face, looking to one side, and she slides a hand down to play with her pussy.

"Oh my God. It feels so good to have you in my ass. Yes! Fuck my ass! Harder!"

You start to pump with voracity. Anyone who is anywhere near you can hear not only Janice's screams of pleasure, but the sound of your pelvis slapping against her ass cheeks.

"Yes! Yes! Yes! Fuck me! Fuck me! Fuck my ass!"

You can feel her rubbing her clit as you slam your cock balls deep into your wife's ass, over and over again. You feel the pressure build in your balls as your wife cums for the second time.

"Oh baby," you say. "I'm going to cum."

"Fill my ass. Fucking fill my ass with your cum!" she screams.

A couple more thrusts and you explode inside of her. You both let out long, loud groans as Janice's ass is filled with your wet, hot cum. You pull at her hips and try to drive in as deep as your cock will go and let her ass squeeze out the last few drops.

You pull your dick out and step back, breathing heavily and looking at your wife -- bare, wet ass hanging out of the back of your SUV...cum oozing out of her gaping asshole and dripping onto the ground.

You hear a sound behind you and turn around to see a young couple, both in their early twenties, staring at you.

What do you do?

*[[Put your clothes on and drive home]]
*[[As if the young man wants to have a turn with your wife]]
*[[Ask if they want to come back to your place]]

[[Category: Just Say Yes]]

Fuck her here and now

Bardo75 — Tue, 05 Jul 2016 23:51:57 GMT

Bardo75:

Your dick is hard and you know just what it needs, so you quickly pull off your shorts and step in between your wife's legs. Janice looks at you and bites her lip in anticipation as your rub your cock along her wet pussy lips. You slide back and forth, teasing her with the tip of your cock and she starts to breath a bit heavier.

"Put it in me, Michael. I want your cock inside of me."

Great minds think alike! You push the tip of your hard cock into her wet pussy. Janice tips her head back and pushes her hands against your abdomen.

"Oh...yes. Now fuck me, Michael. Fuck my pussy."

You grab her thighs for leverage and start to properly fuck your wife. Your pelvis slams against her ass as you pull her feet up over your shoulders.

"Yes...yes...fuck me...yes!"

You pound her deeper and faster. The slap, slap, slap of your bodies echoing across the open lot, while your wife's moans of ecstasy grow louder with each thrust.

"Yes...yes...yes. Oh fuck, yes! Fuck me, Michael. Fuck me harder! Yes!"

You spread her legs apart and lean forward on your hands, fucking Janice with everything you've got. You take a nipple into your mouth and suck, then bite. Janice calls out in pleasure and you feel her pussy quiver in orgasm around your cock.

"Oh God! Oh fuck! I'm cumming! Oh fuck yes!"

Your wife's orgasm pushes you over the edge, and you shoot a full load of cum deep inside of her. Janice reaches around and grabs your ass, pulling your body tight against hers, as her pussy milks every last drop from your cock.

You relax and lay down on top of your wife, and she wraps her arms and legs around you. As you lay there together in the back of your open SUV, you hear a noise coming from behind you. Looking back over your shoulder, you see a young couple, both in their early twenties, clearly enjoying the show.

What do you do?

*[[Put your clothes on and drive home]]
*[[As if the young man wants to have a turn with your wife]]
*[[Ask if they want to come back to your place]]

[[Category: Just Say Yes]]

Eat some pussy

Bardo75 — Tue, 05 Jul 2016 23:47:27 GMT

Bardo75:

You lean in and kiss her neck, nibbling little bites in between kisses. As you work your way down her neck to her cleavage, your hands slide up her thighs and under her dress. You bury your face between her tits, sucking and biting, and put your hands under her ass. You lift up just enough to slide her panties off, and stand up to finish pulling them off her legs.

Her neatly shaven pussy is in plain view. You can see the wetness already starting to drip out, and you grab one of her legs in your left hand. Your right hand slides over her wet bush and you run your fingers through the short curls above her pussy, while your thumb starts to rub her clit. Pulling the leg in your left hand to your face, you kiss and lick your way from her ankle down to her inner thigh. Janice lets out a soft moan as you continue to work her clit with your right thumb, and your tongue works its way to her hole. You move your face between her thighs and lick gently up the outer lips of her pussy. Using both hands to spread her thighs apart, your tongue first licks the lips, then slides inside them. The heat warms your face as her hot juices cover your lips. You alternate between using your tongue to fuck your wife, and rolling it around her clit. Janice begins to moan as you pick up the pace. You slide one hand up under her dress to her chest, pinching a nipple in your fingers, while the other hand slips under her ass and pulls her hips tighter to your face. You push your tongue into her as deeply as you can, sucking at her pussy as you pull out, over and over again. Finally you feel her back arch as Janice starts to cum. You smear her wet juice all over your face as your continue to eat her pussy through the orgasm.

"Oh, God...oh...yes!"

You stand back up and look down at your wife...laying back with her arms up over her head, her dress up over her hips and pussy dripping wet.

What next?

*[[Fuck her here and now]]
*[[Fuck your wife in the ass]]

[[Category: Just Say Yes]]

Show her exactly what you mean by appreciation

Bardo75 — Tue, 05 Jul 2016 23:38:51 GMT

Bardo75:

The elation you felt an hour ago is gone, and you're finally just fed up.

"I said maybe you could fuck me once in a while and earn some of that money you love to spend!"

Your wife's face turns bright red as she glares at you with contempt. "You'll be lucky if I ever touch that little prick of yours again! Now take me home!" She turns around and folds her arms, staring ahead in silence.

Calmly, you say the phrase you were taught by the gypsy fortune-teller: "Doar spune da."

You can't see her face, but there is a noticeable change in your wife's body language the moment you finish speaking. Her shoulders seem to relax, and her head tilts slightly to one side. Without speaking, she opens the SUV door and exits the vehicle, walking around to where you stand in the rear. As she approaches, you can see the hunger in her eyes. She walks up and wraps her arms around the back of your neck, pulling your face to hers. About six inches shorter than your 5'11" frame, she is forced to stand on her toes as she kisses you hard.

You can't remember the last time Janice kissed you like this, but now you quickly remember how good it feels. Your tongues dance around each other as you grab her waist and pull her body tight to yours.

You squeeze your arms around your wife's waist and pick her up. She wraps her legs around you and kisses you harder, as you turn around and lay her back into the open SUV. You pull your mouth from hers and look down at her. She lays her head back on the bags, and releases you from the leg lock around your waist. Laying back with her hands resting over her head, she pulls her feet in to rest on the edge of the SUV and spreads her knees wide.

What do you do next?
*[[Fuck her here and now]]
*[[Eat some pussy]]
*[[Fuck your wife in the ass]]

[[Category: Just Say Yes]]

Fuck your wife in the ass

Bardo75 — Tue, 05 Jul 2016 23:30:01 GMT

Bardo75:

Time to show her who's boss. You grab Janice's legs and roll her over onto her stomach, pulling her halfway out of the SUV so her legs drop over the edge. Despite the fact that you are in a public parking lot in broad daylight, there's no stopping now. You pull down your shorts and step up behind your wife's bare ass. You rub your cock along her soaking wet pussy to lube it up a bit, then you press the head of your dick against her tight asshole.

"Oh yes, Michael. Fuck my ass!"

Needing no more encouragement, you grab her hips and slowly push the head of your swollen cock into her ass.

"Oh...owww...yes...ohhh."

Her ass is incredibly tight, but you push slowly onward. Finally you feel the resistance break and you get the head in.

"Oh Michael. Oh yes! Oh God, yes! Fuck my ass, Michael. Fuck me!"

You push in deeper, then start to get a rhythm. Slowly at first -- you've never fucked Janice in the ass before, and you don't know how she'll take it. But she seems to be getting along just fine. She is laying on her face, looking to one side, and she slides a hand down to play with her pussy.

"Oh my God. It feels so good to have you in my ass. Yes! Fuck my ass! Harder!"

You start to pump with voracity. Anyone who is anywhere near you can hear not only Janice's screams of pleasure, but the sound of your pelvis slapping against her ass cheeks.

"Yes! Yes! Yes! Fuck me! Fuck me! Fuck my ass!"

You can feel her rubbing her clit as you slam your cock balls deep into your wife's ass, over and over again. You feel the pressure build in your balls and as your wife cums for the second time.

"Oh baby," you say. "I'm going to cum."

"Fill my ass. Fucking fill my ass with your cum!" she screams.

A couple more thrusts and you explode inside of her. You both let out long, loud groans as Janice's ass is filled with your wet, hot cum. You pull at her hips and try to drive in as deep as your cock will go and let her ass squeeze out the last few drops.

You pull your dick out and step back, breathing heavily and looking at your wife -- bare, wet ass hanging out of the back of your SUV...cum oozing out of her gaping asshole and dripping onto the ground.

You hear a sound behind you and turn around to see a young couple, both in their early twenties, staring at you.

What do you do?

*[[Put your clothes on and drive home]]
*[[As if the young man wants to have a turn with your wife]]
*[[Ask if they want to come back to your place]]

[[Category: Just Say Yes]]

Fuck your wife in the ass

Bardo75 — Tue, 05 Jul 2016 23:29:39 GMT

Bardo75:

Time to show her who's boss. You grab Janice's legs and roll her over onto her stomach, pulling her halfway out of the SUV so her legs drop over the edge. Despite the fact that you are in a public parking lot in broad daylight, there's no stopping now. You pull down your shorts and step up behind your wife's bare ass. You rub your cock along her soaking wet pussy to lube it up a bit, then you press the head of your dick against her tight asshole.

"Oh yes, Michael. Fuck my ass!"

Needing no more encouragement, you grab her hips and slowly push the head of your swollen cock into her ass.

"Oh...owww...yes...ohhh."

Her ass is incredibly tight, but you push slowly onward. Finally you feel the resistance break and you get the head in.

"Oh Michael. Oh yes! Oh God, yes! Fuck my ass, Michael. Fuck me!"

You push in deeper, then start to get a rhythm. Slowly at first -- you've never fucked Janice in the ass before, and you don't know how she'll take it. But she seems to be getting along just fine. She is laying on her face, looking to one side, and she slides a hand down to play with her pussy.

"Oh my God. It feels so good to have you in my ass. Yes! Fuck my ass! Harder!"

You start to pump with voracity. Anyone who is anywhere near you can hear not only Janice's screams of pleasure, but the sound of your pelvis slapping against her ass cheeks.

"Yes! Yes! Yes! Fuck me! Fuck me! Fuck my ass!"

You can feel her rubbing her clit as you slam your cock balls deep into your wife's ass, over and over again. You feel the pressure build in your balls and as your wife cums for the second time.

"Oh baby," you say. "I'm going to cum."

"Fill my ass. Fucking fill my ass with your cum!" she screams.

A couple more thrusts and you explode inside of her. You both let out long, loud groans as Janice's ass is filled with your wet, hot cum. You pull at her hips and try to drive in as deep as your cock will go and let her ass squeeze out the last few drops.

You pull your dick out and step back, breathing heaving and looking at your wife -- bare, wet ass hanging out of the back of your SUV...cum oozing out of her gaping asshole and dripping onto the ground.

You hear a sound behind you and turn around to see a young couple, both in their early twenties, staring at you.

What do you do?

*[[Put your clothes on and drive home]]
*[[As if the young man wants to have a turn with your wife]]
*[[Ask if they want to come back to your place]]

[[Category: Just Say Yes]]

User talk:DirtyMeStoryTime

Bardo75 — Tue, 05 Jul 2016 21:43:32 GMT

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Hey I just got back here coz i havent been active for a while though. So far I cant write story without inspiration. Well I think I can move on from that except playing computer or CF.--[[User:michaeltamayo|GUY WITHOUTBALLS]]
== [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] ==

I know trans women don't generally get treated that way in real life, but I may be injecting a bit of my own fantasy into it. I mean, the whole thing started as my fantasies so lol. Surprisingly progressive rapists and burglars. In real life trans women struggle to get practically anyone who knows to accept them as a real woman.

But they are real women, and unless it's really necessary to the story overall I'd rather not have it be a big huge thing every time I want to write a sex scene for her. The alternative is me writing Janet being beaten or tortured by the burglars for having a dick, and I don't want to do that. Not right there, at least. Maybe in another branch and done by someone else.

As for your friend, I would ask them what to refer to them as. I'm betting she/her but it's better to ask and be sure. Then try to use those pronouns as often as possible as long as it's safe, even if they're not around. Like unless you would be revealing their transgender status to someone they want to keep it a secret to, it's best to keep using it. It may take some getting used to but it's worth it to show them you care enough about them.

They'll likely face many people who, often intentionally, will call them by the wrong pronouns. Having someone consistently use the right pronouns and name is a huge boost in confidence.

I'll see what I can do for the cafe next. I've kinda been doing things as they occur to me :v --[[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 06:21, 26 May 2016 (UTC)

Try not to think of it in terms of you feeling like a guy. Think of it like, you feel like yourself, a woman, but your birth certificate says male, your parents raised you as a boy, you have a penis (which is not always a problem, plenty of trans women don't have a problem having a penis, it's other people that have the problem with it,) and unless you got the hint early and everybody was okay with it, you've seen a guy in the mirror your whole life. There's a lot more to it but that's the gist.

You want to look how you feel, you want people to acknowledge that you're a woman, you don't want to have the same conversations, the same questions every time someone finds out, you just went to be you, but all of this is difficult to accomplish.

Sorry about Marie's story. I kind of used her branch as a dumping ground for my darker thoughts for some reason. I was remembering pretty dark times and wanted to get those out. I was considering adding a couple of other characters once I've got more done on the ones I have on there. I have some ideas. Happier ones. Keep an eye out for those :v. --[[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 06:53, 26 May 2016 (UTC) p.s. the answer is yes, I am, but don't tell anyone plz?.

I've considered getting a keyboard to use for my tablet, but the problem is we never have more than a couple dollars to spare. That, and my charger (which wasn't made for a tablet) uses the USB port and isn't very effective, so I have to keep it plugged in most of the time. If I had a replacement for the original charger this wouldn't be a problem, though.

It would only be a quick fix, but I would swing it if I could. Having a laptop would open up a lot more options even if it was a cheap one, and I'm hoping I can get one soon, or get the one I have to function as more than a paperweight. This tablet just generally refuses to work for making digital art, for instance.

The rules thing, I mean I can kinda understand because I guess they didn't even have a rules page for a while? But me personally I always try to find out just what's allowed somewhere before I put something up. I hate running into situations where I'm breaking rules or just generally fudging everything because I didn't know. Ran into that with the DeviantArt account I had made a long time ago for my explicit art. Which they don't allow. :v

Sorry. -- [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 20:52, 27 May 2016 (UTC)

Bluetooth. So, I have a wireless mouse that I wanted to see if it would pair with my tablet. Idk if the mouse is bluetooth or not but I figured I'd give it a shot. Well, after searching all through my settings, it looks like my tablet might not even be capable of Bluetooth. So, that's out I guess.

Having a chat based cyoa does sound like an interesting idea! --[[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 19:36, 29 May 2016 (UTC)

Well, the back of it says Nextablet and I think it's android 4.1. Beyond that I'm not sure what information is important.

I've seen some terrible messages but I've never seen any quite that bad that I could still sorta tell what they were saying. I've seen some that were probably drunk at the time that, they were clearly typing something but fuck if I was ever going to learn what it was.

Makes me think of those ciphers where you're supposed to read one letter as another letter, like cddc actually means abba or ere means bob, but if they did it with whole words instead of letters. Like idk fish means cat and tree means deepthroat or something.

If you don't want to copy mine because you don't want to copy someone then it doesn't matter to me if you do. If you don't want to copy it because it's a huge pain in the ass then that's perfectly understandable, there's probably so many easier ways to do that and I just don't know them lol.

I was initially going to do mine so it looked more like AIM or YIM, which was kind of how it ended up looking the first way I did it, but your words in bubbles gave me the idea to try to make it look more like Facebook Messenger app, so I fiddled with that til it looked more or less like I wanted. Thank you for sharing that :v. -- [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 04:51, 30 May 2016 (UTC)

Thank you for making the template! I'll keep using that format for that conversation/that character's branch whenever chat comes up, but I think I may try something else for other characters/conversations.

I'm thinking something more along the lines of a box that looks kinda like a yahoo messenger window, especially if I can make it scroll vertically within the box. That seems like it'd be easier to reuse/make a template of, though I've never made one before personally.

I really need to get back to writing in general but IRL stuff's been on my mind. Rent stuff. -- [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 18:33, 6 June 2016 (UTC)

I will keep the offer in mind :v. I'm looking into a bunch of different things to hopefully keep this from happening again in the future. I completely understand not having anything left by the end of the month, not just from our current situation, pretty much my entire life has been like that with my family. We moved across the country because we couldn't afford the house we were living in. We were never able to keep a house longer than like a couple years, and we kept moving back in with my grandparents.

But yeah, if we can get through this month we're going to do everything we can to keep it from getting to this point again. Editing/proofreading definitely falls within the realm of things I can do, thank you for offering :v. -- [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 17:49, 13 June 2016 (UTC)

Thank you :v.

I was actually coming on here to message you. I've been thinking about the problem with the chat bubbles. I was wondering if wrapping them in a frame like a table or something might give a rightmost side for the bubble to stick to? Something kind of like the other chat window I was working on, perhaps, or at least the part that scrolls?

I barely know how to use templates, but I was thinking if there was a way to put like a template within a template or something it might be possible? Thought I'd bring it up and see what you thought. -- [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 04:26, 20 June 2016 (UTC)

You probably saw, but I sorted the problem with the bubbles out and made a phone template to go with them! I'm thinking about reusing the code from the bubble templates and making two more universal chat bubble templates, though.

The bubbles were pretty much entirely you, I just added some bits to make it do the thing. I didn't see any solutions for making the jc101 bubble stick to the right without ignoring the rest of the page, ''and'' only expand inward instead of off the right, so I had to make it float right, then force it to stack properly with the harukosama bubbles by giving them both a margin in the opposite direction.

It kinda feels like a cheap solution but it's the only thing I could get to work. The first time I applied the float right, all the bubbles just kind of mixed together.

Then I spent way too long obsessing over the phone template until it got to what it looks like now. Once I was done with everything I spent several minutes just scrolling the chat window up and down and giggling to myself.

I made the phone and my other chat window template to more or less be usable by whoever. Maybe it'd work for if you wanted to go with your idea for a story with texts? One thing I'm curious about though is, I only know how the phone template looks on mobile, I'm hoping the desktop version doesn't have an annoying scroll bar or anything.

I've been obsessed with coding these things since I started figuring things out but I still haven't gotten back into the swing of writing yet. Thank you for showing me it was possible to do more than just put text on a page here. Once I do get back to writing, there's so much more I still want to do. -- [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 06:15, 22 June 2016 (UTC) (P.S. Sorry I'm rambling. I'm just really excited.)

Thanks! I didn't know there were scroll bars in the chatroom template but that doesn't matter as much. I made the box to scroll but I didn't know if the scroll bars would be different on desktop or not. I need to rewrite the context but I was kind of going for a chat window like Yahoo Messenger and I made sure the message field and the "typing" field would scroll if the text got too long instead of stretching.

I was more worried about the smartphone text template, but I used basically the same scrolling window code for that as I used for the messenger window so I assume there is one there too. On my screen, the scroll bar is barely a sliver that only appears when I scroll up and down so it's not obtrusive, which I guess is what I'm more worried about especially with the chat bubbles on the right side. Thank you for letting me know what that looked like :v -- [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 09:10, 22 June 2016 (UTC)

Go right ahead :v. I was kinda hoping more people would use the templates than just me, though I might still change some things about the templates, so let me know if I break something if I do?

I'm going to experiment with a couple things. Since I know I can use {{{}}} to change parts of the code itself, I'm going to look into allowing the person using the template to change things like color schemes for the chat window and font, and I may be able to make a universal chat bubble that you can put to the left or right as needed as well as changing the color of the text and the bubble. Could make things much easier and more versatile to use :v-- [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 19:37, 28 June 2016 (UTC)

Sorry the new text bubble template is a bit complicated to use. I tried to make it as streamlined as possible, as in people using it not having to out in a bunch of code themselves, while still giving as many options as needed, but there were some things I just couldn't figure out how to simplify.

I might have been able to replace the short margin by making it the same variable as the alignment, so if it was set to float left or right then the 5px margin would be on the same side, but I couldn't think of a way to make the 20px margin automatically set to the opposite side, and if I removed it entirely it would just be stacked bubbles of mostly the same width which would defeat the purpose of designing them that way in the first place.

If you went to mess with the code or make the names of the variables less wordy you can totally do that though, I just gave them the first names that came to mind.

A yeah I made it so the bubbles can be told to either float left or float right, and hopefully the part of the code that says "clear: both;" will make it so that even if the bubbles are put in a larger field they won't float next to each other and I won't have to change the margins again if I try to do something like that. That's how that's supposed to work, anyway, but I'm not sure if I did it right.

I hate the 20 minute rule. It seems mostly unnecessary for it to be that long, and I haven't been able to successfully link anything at all because of it. My session keeps timing out before I can submit the captcha. Which is gonna suck if I ever want to start my planned idea for a more point and click type cyoa (not that I need another unfinished project but yknow.)

I did have an idea though for your emoticons and I was thinking it might work better for you than for me because the one website I've found that does technically work on mobile is still absolutely terrible on mobile, but there are websites that make pixel art into CSS code, you just have to figure out how to restructure the code so it works on this site. But it should be more or less the same structure as that space invader pixel art object you added to my talk page when it's done. You could make pixel art emoticons then use them instead of external images. And you can probably make those into a template, too.

I spent probably 6 hours making that phone and getting the bubbles to do what I wanted the first time around. Probably more since then. Like I'm sure you'd have figured all of this out too if you spent several hours doing virtually nothing but poking at it until it worked, but I'm sure you have other things going on in your life, and you've actually been doing other things around the site. Meanwhile, I have things I probably ''should'' be doing, but I fixate on anything ''but'' what I need to be doing instead.

I'm glad I've learned so much, and maybe it'll apply to other ends later, but the fact that I spent so much concentrated time and effort learning how to code these things for choose your own smut isn't something I feel particularly proud of lol.

However you decide to proceed with your text project, best of luck :v -- [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 07:09, 29 June 2016 (UTC) (P.S. sorry for such a long message.)

'''kushagragour.in/lab/picssel-art/''' this one was the one i found that worked for pixels. The table smiley you put in my talk page, idk why but it's weirdly stretched vertically. The tool at this link puts out a code that looks a lot like that space invader you put on my talk page except using px instead of em. I don't have the patience for it because the input box is tiny and it doesn't respond if I zoom into it, so I have to be zoomed out to do everything. Would be different if I were on a computer, though. I was going to use it for something else.

I was thinking about using chyoa as well, and I might do so in the future, but at first I came here because chyoa had rules against what I had in mind for writing. I came here initially to write my ideas for Marie, and chyoa has rules against some of the things I had planned.

I don't just enjoy writing and art. If I'm not doing or haven't done something creative in some way I feel like I'm wasting my time. Even though half the time I can't will myself to even pick up my sketchbook. I don't think I'm a very good artist yet, or writer, but I keep trying because I feel like I need to, even if I never finish anything.

Writing here was a bit of a big step for me because prior to this I barely shared any of my work anywhere. Mostly because I never finish anything, though this medium kind of favors unfinished works, it would seem.

I used to play a lot of videogames, before my laptop died, before I moved and had to leave a ps3 behind. Not that I really got to use the ps3 all that much while I was there, other people kept hogging it. I'd kill to play fallout. Any fallout. Even 1 and 2.

Lately I've been stuck with Pixel Dungeon (which I both recommend playing and staying as far away from as possible. It's addictive and frustrating as hell.) and the basketball mini game that Facebook messenger has. I had fallout shelter but after a while that kinda becomes just, the same thing over and over.

For what it's worth, I haven't really noticed anything wrong with the way you write that I myself as a native English speaker wouldn't do. And I don't know any Chinese at all so you're a leg up on me there.

I'm going to bed though. I'm dead tired and I plan to do stuff tomorrow. I hope you have a good day! Sorry for the long message again. -- [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 08:39, 29 June 2016 (UTC)

== [[User:Teejay|Teejay]] ==

E-mail sent. I was offline all day today, just now had a chance to pop on.

You. You are my dirty nerdy girl. *blows kiss* -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

I know zilch about programming. Strictly an applications guy.

How many computer programmers does it take to change a light bulb joke?

100. 1 to change the joke, and 99 to submit "How many programmers does it take to change a light bulb? Incorrect, that is a hardware problem." -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Email replied to. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

At least they tried, and despite a few typos, I thought they did a reasonable job. It's not the best I've ever read, but it's not anywhere near the worst either. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

You could tell that the author was young and male. But with a bit more practice, they'll learn what words to avoid and their writing will mature.

It took me a few years to get it down. This was my first successful effort: www.literotica.com/s/alexandra-1

It's not easy to write from a woman's perspective if you're male, but it is doable. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

How about "The Best New Breasts"? -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

I don't know if I have such a hat, but I'll try.

"The Breast New Thing!" "Perfect For Breast Men!" "New Discovery -- Stay Abreast!" -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

I'll post one more option for The Exhibitionist, and hope it cheers you up. And I'll beam over nice thoughts. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Glad to hear it. I'll still send over nice thoughts. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Send the rain over here, we could use it. :) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Just reading that link made ME want to slice that teacher's throat. I can't stand when authority figures (of any gender) use their position to abuse vulnerable minors. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

I know it's real. And you've been through things I don't even want to imagine. I hope you always have a loving, caring partner from now on who can help you keep what happened quelled. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Just read what you posted in reply to Fredhot16. And now I feel ''really'' honored. You know very well why.

P.S. -- I think you're a beautiful person. And that has nothing to do with your looks (although you are nice looking.) You've been through so much, and somehow emerged without being totally shattered. You're a terrific writer and an amazing an courageous human being. Like I've said before, I wish you and your husband and child many years of happiness together as a family. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

I have not played any of the Fallout games.

I read your blog, remember? I know the horrors you experienced.

If I had met you while you were in high school, I would have taken you in and gotten you clean and sober. Or at least done everything possible to do so. I actually did that for the daughter of a friend when she went through her very rough high school years (both her parents were strung out on drugs.) This particular person is about 2-3 years older than you.

Like I said, you're amazing. And awesome. I wouldn't wish what you went through on my worst enemy if I had one. Any you came through it, surviving somehow. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Sticking to the questions you asked: you did a fantastic job of writing that. I can't write 1/10 that well. (I suppose you're particularly good at writing scenes like that because you can draw on actual memories.) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

I see you're reviewing stories. What do you think of this one? :)

http://www.editthis.info/create_your_own_story/A_Day_At_The_Races

-- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

If you want a nice, short, sane adult story to review to take your mind off The Devil's Daughter, I recommend A Big Ugly Story. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Your review was quite accurate. And a description of exactly what I was aiming for -- realistic physical descriptions, quick on the sex since it is in the Adult stories section. Glad I achieved my goal, even if my work on the story petered out relatively quickly. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Yes, there is feedback on the review. Unless you meant your review of the End of the World, in which case, i agree with your review. For my feedback on your review of my story see the comment just above this one. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

I would not dare to insist you do anything, but I would suggest that your next story review by the completed adult story "Megan". -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Whew! I'm finally done moving. Now I can get back online. I missed you. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Thank you. I'll like it a lot better once everything is unpacked and installed. :) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

==[[User:117|117]]==
Hey there, got your message on my talk. Thanks for the compliments, didn't think anyone was reading, it made my day. Just remember, when you read my stories; it doesn't have to end in sex :D
Do you think you could leave a link or something on my story where I went wrong? I got lost trying to find the correct story branch that I was looking for. -- [[User:117|117]]
P.S: Still getting used to messaging people on here. 26 May 2016

There we go. I've edited it and I think that's everything. Thanks for looking out. --[[User:117|117]] 27 May 2016
==[[User:Platypus|Platypus]]==

The whole pink dildo thing makes me think of the thirteen-year-olds in science class snickering because the teacher said 'Uranus'. Yes, I think this one is very young.

The idea of an invisible story is kind of amusing, though. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 16:43, 26 May 2016 (UTC)

That penis is between you & Zenclair. I'm not touching it. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 09:57, 27 May 2016 (UTC)

Your fantasy is no stranger than many of the fantasies that make up SSR, and it's possibly more normal than many. I'm sure I can find a place in SSR where it could be worked in. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:36, 1 June 2016 (UTC)

You new review idea looks like it's got potential, especially since the old reviewer seems to have permanently retired. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:46, 3 June 2016 (UTC)

I've never played any of the Fallout games, although I was in a D&D campaign where we had to save Harry Potter from the threat of Nuka-Cola, with some help from the Men In Black. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 16:55, 16 June 2016 (UTC)

Thanks for the heads up about Life of a 13 year old. I'd rather not be the site censor, but I suppose someone has to be. And the whole idea of a uterus-piercing path sounds pretty vile. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:26, 29 June 2016 (UTC)

==Fredhot16==
You might want to sit down and get comfortable. I know we haven' talked in about a month so here's a month's worth of talking. (Note: This may seem incomplete but that's because my computer is a bit wonky and what I had previously wrote disappeared when I had to close the window. I'll finish it later.)

Darky:

Sex scenes: You know what...I don't necessarily DISAGREE with you.

Think I've been here too long: Hey, remember the Adult Story CYOA "Now you're a girl!"? I found myself thinking about how the potential was wasted in the story as one could easily write the guy exploring his new body and it wouldn't even be too outlandish. The thought made me realize I've been hanging around the dark sections of Create Your Own Story for too long. And yet I can't...stop...looking... P.S The sheer scale of spelling and grammar mistakes on this website is just short of "Kill myself by setting myself on fire" depressing. Nobody even tried to double check their work and fix common mistakes. Spell checking isn't hard! Ah, well, guess there's only one thing to do: I call forth the power of Grammarskull! ‎

Too many ideas: I think the biggest problem I have is that I have too many story ideas to work on. There's about 5 CYOSs listed on my introduction page and I have about 15-17 story ideas outside of this website. The sheer amount of content I have planned for all of these ideas is truly staggering. That's why I haven't been able to pull my weight on the collaboration with Teejay over Anime School. Also, this is the month of Ramadan so I won't be able to touch any of the Adult CYOSs until July 7 or, at the very most, July 10. Edit: Heh. You really want to compare? Just say the word.

Anime School:

Common descriptions in CYOS: I've noticed that common breast descriptions are either of the buxom variety or they are commonly described as "small and perky". Are...are small and perky breasts really that popular? Also, the habit of describing breasts by band width and cup size like 52D or 42B is WAY too common around here. Writing is supposed to help you imagine what's been written. Using measurements as descriptions doesn't help visualize breasts as I don't think most people could quickly imagine what the size of the chest is by knowing the bandwidth and cup size like that. I mean, if you're using measurements in a profile, that's...possibly acceptable but it doesn't do to be in the actual narration.

CYOS that needs some love: There's this CYOS called One Princess, Four Princes, Choices in the Mature Story section that's woefully without much content. Maybe you could give it some good old CYOS love?

--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 17:23 (Louisiana Time), 9 June 2016

Well, if it makes you feel any better, I'd rather read about YOUR sexual adventures then the sexual adventures those fictional women with breasts the size of their heads. Also, I don't think they're really trying to learn how women work, just how ''BEWBS'' work. Eh, at least they're learning ''something''. I'll give them that. Edit: and by them learning, I was forced to learn it as well! And knowing is half the battle! The other half, apparently, is lots of rampant sex. --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 01:17 (Louisiana Time), 11 June 2016

Oh. Ah, well, you see, I wasn't really-I can see why you would think that but-come on, I don't really think that you don't have a life! You look like the coolest OG, yo! You know...just lying on the couch...in a dress, gown, negligee, whatever... presumably sleeping off a hangover...well, your "Winnie the Pooh" thing under the pillow looks kinda neat. That definitely proves you have a life! Also, how long until you get a better internet connection?--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 15:57 (Louisiana Time), 12 June 2016

Hey! How do you know I'm not a girl, too?--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 16:28 (Louisiana Time), 12 June 2016

Alright, 4 things:

A. Random question: who do you like, Wolverine or Cyclops?

B. Are the pictures you've put on your page pictures of you or just random pictures?

C.Hmmm. Could be a girl. May be I'm just a anthropomorphic "grill". What if I am? Would it matter?

D. You know, I think you just might be one of-scratch that, the ''only'' writer on this website I have a inkling of respect for because you're the only writer who actually CARES about her work, who's trying to ''write''. You seem to put more effort in your writing then I've seen in 90% of adult CYOSs and for that, you have my regard.

--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 12:44 (Louisiana Time), 14 June 2016
(Will finish later, busy at the moment.)

A. Huh. O.K, I get that. There's actually a explanation for why you might have heard of Wolverine much more. Here's the link: tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/WolverinePublicity He's the best at what he does and what he does is make gratuitous appearances to artificially hook in readers. I'm more of a Cyclops man but that's mostly because Cyclops gets so little love from fans, he's actually pretty cool, and I truly think that Wolverine is really ''fucking'' overrated. I mean, yeah, he deserves some respect but not the goddamn ''worship'' he's been getting. It's why I found Wolverine's part in X-Men: Apocalypse to be hilarious as it was basically a cameo!

B.

C. Uuuummmm...I'm not transgender. I'm just a dude trying to mess with you. I do that often in real life. Don't worry, I'll keep your secret. And yeah, I'm of the same mind on transgenders.

D. You're welcome. When Ramadan ends, I'll try to read your stuff for real. I'll be filling the discussion tabs with my comments and, I'll warn you, they may be a bit...caustic. I only mean well, though, and I'll try to be as fair as I can without seeming too harsh or too lenient.

E. Yeah, I'm a Fallout fan. I've played Fallout 3, Fallout New Vegas, (both on the PC) and Fallout 4 on the PS4. I'm currently playing New Vegas, which I'm really liking, and just starting Fallout 4. Edit: I cut out my previous statement because I realized that I didn't really remember what happened back then and I couldn't read your thing to be sure. But I still believe that it wouldn't really happen. It was just a mercenary and two Institute technicians. I really doubt that the Institute would waste time like that. Also, I'm afraid that my computer wouldn't let Fallout 3 play so I can't really be sure about your depiction of Moira Brown and I can't read the Wasteland Guide anyway because it's Ramadan. Look up Brown's speech about why she's doing this. It might help and even if it doesn't, it's not a bad speech. P.S. Ever thought of trying Fallout New Vegas as part of your Fallout thing? Edit: Here's Moira's speech below:

"Well, look around at the world we live in. It may be okay to you, but I've read about what it used to be like, and this isn't it. So we all need something that keeps us going, despite all the terrible things around us. For me, it's things like this book... did you ever try to put a broken piece of glass back together? Even if the pieces fit, you can't make it whole again the way it was. But if you're clever, you can still use the pieces to make other useful things. Maybe even something wonderful, like a mosaic. Well, the world broke just like glass. And everyone's trying to put it back together like it was, but it'll never come together the same way... the Wasteland Survival Guide isn't much towards that lofty goal, but it's an important one. And that's why I need your help. I don't think I can do it alone."

F. "And yes, I will be writing lots of rape scenes for it, I have been thinking about writing more of these for this site lately. Why rape? Because, you know how many stories I have read on here that the woman is raped, that make me want to scream at the author, or make me honestly a bit scared of some of the people on this site, if they actually view women the way they write? Since it is a prevalent theme in many places here, and since the fallout world would actually be a world where almost every woman would be a victim of it, I want to at least make the readers think about what it is like to be a woman in that situation. Put my readers in my shoes, so they know women are not just some random hole that exists for a penis, but are real, thinking people. That it has dramatic, traumatic effects on someone, to have their body violated. So, I write what many people on here seem to want, but my way." Go ahead. Perhaps I could direct you to some other rape scenes in other works so you could fix them? I'm unfortunately witness to more fictional rape scenes then I want to admit.

G. Erm...(clears throat) I, um, heard something about a, erm, "gangbang". (Blushes) You don't have to if you don't want but I'd like to hear about it. Not now, though. Just around the second week of July, around July 7 or 10.

H. Do swimsuits that become semi-translucent when wet exist in real life or was this a case of "pulling out of thin air for the sake of sexiness"?

I. Here's a little note about originality from TV Tropes's "So You Want To / Be Original":"The first paradox is that it is impossible to create anything truly "new". One cannot create something from nothing. Every fictional work (with a few exceptions) is based on previous works...The second paradox is to realize that unlimited creative freedom actually puts limits on one's ability to create a story. Conversely, narrowing one's creative options actually helps to make creativity unlimited...;Those who cannot remember the past are condemned to repeat it'. If you don’t see how people before you made stories, it's very likely that you will unwittingly repeat the same ideas. And even worse, you might think that you were the first to come up with those ideas." Edit: In short, --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 13:13 (Louisiana Time), 15 June 2016

Yep. I definitely understand the average CYOS reader or at least the average CYOS writer. God, do I wish I don't. You know, sometimes I wonder, "Why? Why do I get so pissed off at Adult CYOSs? They're not actual stories, I know that they're just made for wanking so why do I care?" Four reasons: Quality concern. Concern for reputation of website. Uncomfortable reading. Love of writing. So, that's why I get so pissed off at the average Adult CYOS. When Ramadan ends, I'm going to go through a plethora of Adult CYOS and give my comments on them. I might seem a bit harsh but I ultimately mean well, for the CYOS and the website as a whole. P.S Do you mind reviewing "Escape from Syria" in the Mature Story section or "The Devil's Daughter" in the Adult Story section?--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 11:16 (Louisiana Time), 19 June 2016

By the way, your "cum bath" fantasy isn't all that weird, even by what I've read on this website. Ever wanted to fuck a statue in a museum, try to give a BJ to cliche serial killer who just murdered your boyfriend who you were having sex with at the time, or fuck a werecat? Edit: Let me clarify, those were sexual fantasies that I had found swimming in the dark depths of the Adult CYOS section and by "werecat", I meant a guy who transformed from a human into a cat. Example: Bastet from World of Darkness. --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 19:01 (Louisiana Time), 19 June 2016

Honestly, I think it's kinda...garbage. One of the things that piss me off is the writer's idea that seduction means flashing the guy. It's just so....you know. ''Simple''. But hey, don't mind me. I'm just a reader with an opinion.--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 19:01 (Louisiana Time), 19 June 2016

The statue sex comes from "Oops! You're Naked!" and from what I remember (no matter how hard I try to forget), the protagonist didn't get turned into a statue but managed to get into a threesome with a guard and the same statue she was fucking and, later on, the protagonist and the guard went to his place to fuck. And it just ends there. The protagonist, by the way, has big breasts and big hips but we know little else of what she has. I like to imagine that's all, just a talking bust and hips. It's goddamn terrifying but I'd rather be scared then bored because it's just the same thing you get in every 4 out of 5 Adult CYOSs. --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 15:32 (Louisiana Time), 20 June 2016

Here's my two cents about "The Devil's Daughter": just as your average Adult CYOS is an exercise in hedonism, The Devil's Daughter is an exercise in depravity. --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 15:55 (Louisiana Time), 20 June 2016

You've seen this CYOS that's been getting written a lot recently? It's called "ASOIAF Sexy Edition". --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 15:59 (Louisiana Time), 20 June 2016

Distraction? Maybe. Don't see how it would work for someone who's right in front of you and I would expect someone trying to use their "womanly wiles" to be more subtle and more intelligent then a drunk college girl.--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 16:24 (Louisiana Time), 20 June 2016

You mean hentai? You know, I can actually imagine The Devil's Daughter as an animated hentai but as one of the more unsettling and unholy hentais that I'd abandon once I realize what I'm getting into to. Hey, I have standards!

The bit with the doctor in Escape from Syria is a bit iffy as we didn't need the description about his...ejaculate.

Yeah, I mentioned the Bastet from World of Darkness because I was hoping you would be interested and try to look it up. You really should look up World of Darkness, it's pretty cool. There's plenty of pdfs on the internet and on Scribd.

You know, I'm not an expert on Satanism but I don't think that Satanists would approve of the protagonist's behavior. Hell, there's actually many types of Satanism like Theistic Satanism, and The Church of Satan, and the Temple of Set. None of them seem likely to enlist hedonistic monsters that try to summon real life demons by any means necessary. I don't think the writer specifies what type of Satanism the protagonist does so I actually think, from the stated goal of the protagonist and the protagonist's cruelties, that she's just enrolled in a typical evil Devil worshiping cult rather then real Satanism. You know, the type of cult that usually ends up as a C grade minor villain in a show like Supernatural or Buffy: The Vampire Slayer.

P.S Sorry for dropping The Devil's Daughter on you. I didn't know how long it was. From your notes, it looks worse then I thought from my first glance. And yet that only makes me more curious about it. Damn it.--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 11:37 (Louisiana Time), 21 June 2016

Alright, here's another suggestion for review: The End of the World. Look up Crossed by Garth Ennis. This CYOS is inspired by it...and maybe more then "inspired". --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 00:33 (Louisiana Time), 22 June 2016

This might seem...unusual for me to ask but would you play a card game where losing meant you had to lose a piece of clothing?--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 10:18 (Louisiana Time), 22 June 2016

Have you ever heard of Limbo of the Lost? It's not a CYOS, it's a game. One of the greatest games ever made, if I do say so myself. --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 20:55 (Louisiana Time), 22 June 2016

I've seen the "End of the World" review. All of your reviews, in fact. You're not doing too bad. Keep going. For your next CYOS, how about "The Life of a Medieval Princess"? It may not good but it's definitely more sane then the one you're doing right now. Sand in a vagina...for God's sake. P.S "End of the World" is more D grade in my opinion but it does have about three things above the average Adult CYOS such as "Life of a 13 Year Old": there is a ''story'' to it, it actually has some semblance of morality, and the protagonist is actually allowed to be noble, courageous, and even heroic. I gotta tel you, that is something I've learned not to expect from Adult Story CYOSs. Nothing against your review, however. I'm just a reader with an opinion, to borrow the catchphrase of an awesome reviewer named SF Debris. --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 14:29 (Louisiana Time), 25 June 2016

So was strip poker and naked twister the only type of games you've played or have you played more games like that game where you have a conversation on the phone while having sex and you try not to give any clue that you're having sex at the moment to the person at the other end of the line? P.S. I suppose you haven't told any stories about...erm, naked twister on your blog? --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 01:45 (Louisiana Time), 29 June 2016

Could you check on Dungeons and Dragons in the Adult CYOS section and tell me what edition it is?--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 19:04 (Louisiana Time), 30 June 2016

Yeah, that's exactly what I needed. Thanks. So, it's about maybe a week or less until Ramadan ends. I don't how to feel about this. On the one hand, I can finally resume my calling on this website (shit-tons of edits and comments in the discussion tabs) and read your stuff. On the other hand...I know that little of the Adult CYOSs on here are worth reading even if only for erotic purposes and that I'll come back to the blasé and caustic attitude I had before Ramadan. The closest analog is, after not having food for a long time, I find a ton of horrible food and I chow it all down but soon, when I'm as full as I can be, I realize what I'm eating and don't touch until I am truly desperate. DirtyMe, I have the feeling that your stuff just might be the only adult CYOSs I'll be really reading on this website. Just five more days, at the very least. --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 01:15 (Louisiana Time), 1 July 2016

I've heard that you may have experience with glory holes so I want to know, for my own reasons but if you ask nicely, I'll tell you, can a vagina fit on or through a glory hole?--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 02:31 (Louisiana Time), 2 July 2016
== [[User:Darkfry|Darkfry]] ==

I just wanted to thank you for the friendly help you offered me a few days ago, I am really new to writing stories in this format so it is taking me a while to get a handle on all the correct ways to link things together. It is really nice to have someone looking out for these thing. P.S. I only just figured out how to respond to a message so that's why it's taken me this long to thank you. I am really happy to take advice from people on how to do things, hope I am a good student. By the way I am not sure how the signature thing works so I hope this works... --[[User:Darkfry|Darkfry]] 13:38, 31 May 2016 (UTC)

Yes, I am over 18, I'll give some thought to your Exhibitionist story, no serious ideas right now but I am sure can think of something you would enjoy writing (; --[[User:Darkfry|Darkfry]] 08:02, 2 June 2016 (UTC)

I am not too sure how you want the option formatted, I left you an option under the link you have created on the stories front page. Hope you have fun.--[[User:Darkfry|Darkfry]] 10:36, 2 June 2016 (UTC)

That is a rather interesting piece of information, I suppose the symbolism is something I could consider working into the story, the story is supposed to be location neutral (it could be in any country), so it does need to relate to a broad variety of cultures, and things like that can add depth. I hope you are enjoying the story so far. Glad someone is reading it. :) --[[User:Darkfry|Darkfry]] 10:57, 3 June 2016 (UTC)

So I wanted some advice on a couple of things, is creating sub categories for your story an issue? Basically the story is told from 2 perspectives ie, that of Hart and Yale. I want to have a separate category for each although maintain the main category as well for each ie. each page would link to 2 categories. Would this be frowned upon?
Secondly if I want to change the name of a page link, is it okay to simply copy the content from the old link into a new link and delete the content in the old link, or does that leave a mess behind for someone else to clean up? Is the a better way of moving the content?
Thanks in advance. --[[User:Darkfry|Darkfry]] 19:59, 20 June 2016 (UTC)
Thank you again, I am thinking of updating all my pages to have a unique identifier to the story although I must say it does bug me that in the category index page all the pages are then listed with the story header prefixed it is a pity that there isn't a way for the index to show a chosen page title. Would it be terrible to index it with a post-fix identifier, as instead of "Hyde Road - Go to next page" it was "Go to next page - Hyde Road". Is that too non-conformist of me? Anyway I think I have the subcategory thing understood now except I seemed to have some issue in getting it to list the subcategory under the correct letter in the main categories index as in I wanted it to list Hyde road - Carla Yale under C not H but I couldn't seem to get that right. Anyway main reason I want to add the subcategory is I want to create a set of pages that would basically be my background notes. I would like to have a bunch of pages that explain the world as well as bunch of random story facts that I need to keep track of while writing but don't want them to show up in the main index, but rather under the sub-index, if that isn't too confusing. I don't really want the average reader to be reading them by accident because they will have spoilers in them, but I would like them available online. I am presuming that it wouldn't be a problem for these pages only to have the subcategory as their category.
Again sorry for all the questions, and thank you for taking the time to answer. I am trying to add little bit by little bit to the story so afraid it's taking me quite some time to get it all down, but I think it is getting there.--[[User:Darkfry|Darkfry]] 08:56, 27 June 2016 (UTC)

Hmm, I did try that but it isn't working the way I would have expected, when I type it like that it puts the tile of the page in the subcategory under C but in the main category the subcategory remains unchanged. So basically under Hyde Road, the page "attempt to start a conversation" is listed in A but in Hyde Road - Carla Yale it is listed under C. What I want is Hyde Road - Carla Yale. I don;t know maybe I broke something :/ I'll update all the Carla Yale pages and see if it fixes it... --[[User:Darkfry|Darkfry]] 10:12, 27 June 2016 (UTC)

Yes, I am following how it works, so it's working as intended. Unfortunately I was trying to do something slightly different so that's where the confusion is coming in I think. I think I know where I went wrong. Will get back to you in a second. --[[User:Darkfry|Darkfry]] 10:25, 27 June 2016 (UTC)

Alright, sorry I had to disappear, the world was ending, sort of. Anyway, yes I understand the whole where the category name is coming from... was a bit of a stupid from my side. The category page gets it's category name from category listed in the subcategories index page... which is obvious when I think about it... anyways thank you, you helped me understand it a lot better.--[[User:Darkfry|Darkfry]] 14:31, 27 June 2016 (UTC)

== Other ==

I'm following basically the same rules as you but I decided to work from Z to A under the assumption a lot of people start moving things to the pit and give up way before they get to the end. I did find a story from 2011 with less than 20 pages somewhere under 'Y' I think. -- [[User:Hellspawn|Hellspawn]] 9:00 29 May 2016 GMT

Hey, I just wanted to say thank you for editing may talk/about me what so ever. I m just getting started with this whole "wiki" thing. ... And to prove it I nearly messed up your talk page. nearly. --[[User:Zehir|Zehir]] 16:44, 6 June 2016 (UTC)--

Thanks for the notes and advice. Very much appreciated. Really wasn't looking to get into a flame war with anyone, but also would expect more of a welcome to the site than what I got. Hoping to simply move on and not be chased out.
--[[User:Bardo75|Bardo75]] 02:51, 29 June 2016 (UTC)

When you get a chance, please check out the new story I've started on. It's called Just Say Yes. Clearly just at the beginning stages, but would really appreciate your feedback.
--[[User:Bardo75|Bardo75]] 21:43, 5 July 2016 (UTC)

== Messages from Clara ==

Hello.

== From TheWriter (Female, btw) ==

Hi

I read some of your stuff. You seem like a fun girl.

Like I said, I'm attracted to you either way. I know a sex site we could possibly chat, if you're interested. Or if you're scared I'm some weirdo, that's cool too.

Fuck your wife in the ass

Bardo75 — Tue, 05 Jul 2016 21:40:05 GMT

Bardo75:

Time to show her who's boss. You grab Janice's legs and roll her over onto her stomach, pulling her halfway out of the SUV so her legs drop over the edge. Despite the fact that you are in a public parking lot in broad daylight, there's no stopping now. You pull down your shorts and step up behind your wife's bare ass. You rub your cock along her soaking wet pussy to lube it up a bit, then you press the head of your dick against her tight asshole.

"Oh yes, Michael. Fuck my ass!"

Needing no more encouragement, you grab her hips and slowly push the head of your swollen cock into her ass.

"Oh...owww...yes...ohhh."

Her ass is incredibly tight, but you push slowly onward. Finally you feel the resistance break and you get the head in.

"Oh Michael. Oh yes! Oh God, yes! Fuck my ass, Michael. Fuck me!"

You push in deeper, then start to get a rhythm. Slowly at first -- you've never fucked Janice in the ass before, and you don't know how she'll take it. But she seems to be getting along just fine. She is laying on her face, looking to one side, and she slides a hand down to play with her pussy.

"Oh my God. It feels so good to have you in my ass. Yes! Fuck my ass! Harder!"

You start to pump with voracity. Anyone who is anywhere near you can hear not only Janice's screams of pleasure, but the sound of your pelvis slapping against her ass cheeks.

"Yes! Yes! Yes! Fuck me! Fuck me! Fuck my ass!"

You can feel her rubbing her clit as you slam your cock balls deep into your wife's ass, over and over again. You feel the pressure build in your balls and as your wife cums for the second time.

"Oh baby," you say. "I'm going to cum."

"Fill my ass. Fucking fill my ass with your cum!" she screams.

A couple more thrusts and you explode inside of her. You both let out long, loud groans as Janice's ass is filled with your wet, hot cum. You pull at her hips and try to drive in as deep as your cock will go and let her ass squeeze out the last few drops.

You pull your dick out and step back, breathing heaving and looking at your wife -- bare, wet ass hanging out of the back of your SUV...pussy juices dripping onto the grass.

You hear a sound behind you and turn around to see a young couple, both in their early twenties, staring at you.

What do you do?

*[[Put your clothes on and drive home]]
*[[As if the young man wants to have a turn with your wife]]
*[[Ask if they want to come back to your place]]

[[Category: Just Say Yes]]

Fuck her here and now

Bardo75 — Tue, 05 Jul 2016 21:39:34 GMT

Bardo75: Created page with 'Your dick is hard and you know just what it needs, so you quickly pull off your shorts and step in between your wife's legs. Janice looks at you and bites her lip in anticipatio…'

Your dick is hard and you know just what it needs, so you quickly pull off your shorts and step in between your wife's legs. Janice looks at you and bites her lip in anticipation as your rub your cock along her wet pussy lips. You slide back and forth, teasing her with the tip of your cock and she starts to breath a bit heavier.

"Put it in me, Michael. I want your cock inside of me."

Great minds think alike! You push the tip of your hard cock into her wet pussy. Janice tips her head back and pushes her hands against your abdomen.

"Oh...yes. Now fuck me, Michael. Fuck my pussy."

You grab her thighs for leverage and start to properly fuck your wife. Your pelvis slams against her ass as you pull her feet up over your shoulders.

"Yes...yes...fuck me...yes!"

You pound her deeper and faster. The slap, slap, slap of your bodies echoing across the open lot, your wife's moans of ectasy get louder.

"Yes...yes...yes. Oh fuck, yes! Fuck me, Michael. Fuck me harder! Yes!"

You spread her legs apart and lean forward on your hands, fucking Janice with everything you've got. You take a nipple into your mouth and suck, then bite. Janice calls out in pleasure and you feel her pussy quiver in orgasm around your cock.

"Oh God! Of fuck! I'm cumming! Oh fuck yes!"

Your wife's orgasm pushes you over the edge, and you shoot a full load of cum deep inside of her. Janice reaches around and grabs your ass, pulling your body tight against her as her pussy milks the last few drops from your cock.

You relax and lay down on top of your wife, and she wraps her arms and legs around you. As you lay there together in the back of your open SUV, you hear a noise coming from behind you. Looking back over your shoulder, you see a young couple, both in their early twenties, clearly enjoying the show.

What do you do?

*[[Put your clothes on and drive home]]
*[[As if the young man wants to have a turn with your wife]]
*[[Ask if they want to come back to your place]]

[[Category: Just Say Yes]]

Eat some pussy

Bardo75 — Tue, 05 Jul 2016 21:24:11 GMT

Bardo75:

You lean back in and kiss her neck, nibbling little bites in between kisses. As you work your way down her neck to her cleavage, your hands slide up her thighs and under her dress. You bury your face between her tits, sucking and biting, and put your hands under her ass. You lift up just enough to slide her panties off, and stand up to finish pulling them off her legs.

Her neatly shaven pussy is in plain view. You can see the wetness already starting to drip out, and you grab one of her legs in your left hand. Your right hand slides over her wet bush and you run your fingers through the short curls above her pussy, while your thumb starts to rub her clit. Pulling the leg in your left hand to your face, you kiss and lick your way from her ankle down to her inner thigh. Janice lets out a soft moan as you continue to work her clit with your right thumb, and your face works its way to her hole. Finally you lick gently up the outer lips of her pussy. Using both hands to spread her thighs apart, your tongue first licks the lips, then slides inside them. The heat warms your face as her hot juices cover your lips. You alternate between using your tongue to fuck your wife, and rolling it around her clit. Janice begins to moan as you pick up the pace. You slide one hand up under her dress to her chest, pinching a nipple in your fingers, while the other hand slips under her ass and pulls her hips tighter to your face. You push your tongue into her as deeply as you can, sucking at her pussy as you pull out, over and over again. Finally you feel her back arch as Janice starts to cum. You smear her wet juice all over your face as your continue to eat her pussy through the orgasm.

"Oh, God...oh...yes!"

You stand back up and look down at your wife...laying back with her arms up over her head, her dress up over her hips and pussy dripping wet.

What next?

*[[Fuck her here and now]]
*[[Fuck your wife in the ass]]

[[Category: Just Say Yes]]

Show her exactly what you mean by appreciation

Bardo75 — Tue, 05 Jul 2016 21:23:29 GMT

Bardo75:

The elation you felt an hour ago is gone, and you're finally just fed up.

"I said maybe you could fuck me once in a while and earn some of that money you love to spend!"

Your wife's face turns bright red as she glares at you with contempt. "You'll be lucky if I ever touch that little prick of yours again! Now take me home!" She turns around and folds her arms, staring ahead in silence.

Calmly, you say the phrase you were taught by the gypsy fortune-teller: "Doar spune da."

You can't see her face, but there is a noticeable change in your wife's body language the moment you finish speaking. Her shoulders seem to relax, and her head tilts slightly to one side. Without speaking, she opens the SUV door and exits the vehicle, walking around to where you stand in the rear. As she approaches, you can see the hunger in her eyes. She walks up and wraps her arms around the back of your neck, pulling your face to hers. About six inches shorter than your 5'11" frame, she is forced to stand on her toes as she kisses you hard.

You can't remember the last time Janice kissed you like this, but now you remember how good she is at it. Your tongues dance around each other as you grab her waist and pull her body tight to yours.

You squeeze your arms around your wife's waist and pick her up. She wraps her legs around you and kisses you harder, as you turn around and lay her back into the open SUV. You pull her mouth from hers and look down at her. She lays her head back on the bags, and releases you from the leg lock around your waist. Laying back with her hands resting over her head, she pulls her feet in to rest on the edge of the SUV and spreads her knees wide.

What do you do next?
*[[Fuck her here and now]]
*[[Eat some pussy]]
*[[Fuck your wife in the ass]]

[[Category: Just Say Yes]]

Fuck your wife in the ass

Bardo75 — Tue, 05 Jul 2016 21:20:55 GMT

Bardo75:

Time to show her who's boss. You grab Janice's legs and roll her over onto her stomach, pulling her halfway out of the SUV so her legs drop over the edge. Despite the fact that you are in a public parking lot in broad daylight, there's no stopping now. You pull down your shorts and step up behind your wife's bare ass. You rub your cock along her soaking wet pussy to lube it up a bit, then you press the head of your dick against her tight asshole.

"Oh yes, Michael. Fuck my ass!"

Needing no more encouragement, you grab her hips and slowly push the head of your swollen cock into her ass.

"Oh...owww...yes...ohhh."

Her ass is incredibly tight, but you push slowly onward. Finally you feel the resistance break and you get the head in.

"Oh Michael. Oh yes! Oh God, yes! Fuck my ass, Michael. Fuck me!"

You push in deeper, then start to get a rhythm. Slowly at first -- you've never fucked Janice in the ass before, and you don't know how she'll take it. But she seems to be getting along just fine. She is laying on her face, looking to one side, and she slides a hand down to play with her pussy.

"Oh my God. It feels so good to have you in my ass. Yes! Fuck my ass! Harder!"

You start to pump with voracity. Anyone who is anywhere near you can hear not only Janice's screams of pleasure, but the sound of your pelvis slapping against her ass cheeks.

"Yes! Yes! Yes! Fuck me! Fuck me! Fuck my ass!"

You can feel her rubbing her clit as you slam your cock balls deep into your wife's ass, over and over again. You feel the pressure build in your balls and as your wife cums for the second time.

"Oh baby," you say. "I'm going to cum."

"Fill my ass. Fucking fill my ass with your cum!" she screams.

A couple more thrusts and you explode inside of her. You both let out long, loud groans as Janice's ass is filled with your wet, hot cum. You pull at her hips and try to drive in as deep as your cock will go and let her ass squeeze out the last few drops.

You pull your dick out and step back, breathing heaving and looking at your wife -- bare, wet ass hanging out of the back of your SUV...pussy juices dripping onto the grass.

You hear a sound behind you and turn around to see a young couple, both in their early twenties, staring at you.

What do you do?

*[[Put your cock away and drive home]]
*[[As if the man wants to have a turn with your wife]]
*[[Ask if they want to come back to your place]]

[[Category: Just Say Yes]]

Eat some pussy

Bardo75 — Tue, 05 Jul 2016 21:10:26 GMT

Bardo75:

You squeeze your arms around your wife's waist and pick her up. She wraps her legs around you and kisses you harder, as you turn around and lay her back into the open SUV. You pull her mouth from hers and look down at her. She lays her head back on the bags, and releases you from the leg lock around your waist. Laying back with her hands resting over her head, she pulls her feet in to rest on the edge of the SUV and spreads her knees wide.

You lean back in and kiss her neck, nibbling little bites in between kisses. As you work your way down her neck to her cleavage, your hands slide up her thighs and under her dress. You bury your face between her tits, sucking and biting, and put your hands under her ass. You lift up just enough to slide her panties off, and stand up to finish pulling them off her legs.

Her neatly shaven pussy is in plain view. You can see the wetness already starting to drip out, and you grab one of her legs in your left hand. Your right hand slides over her wet bush and you run your fingers through the short curls above her pussy, while your thumb starts to rub her clit. Pulling the leg in your left hand to your face, you kiss and lick your way from her ankle down to her inner thigh. Janice lets out a soft moan as you continue to work her clit with your right thumb, and your face works its way to her hole. Finally you lick gently up the outer lips of her pussy. Using both hands to spread her thighs apart, your tongue first licks the lips, then slides inside them. The heat warms your face as her hot juices cover your lips. You alternate between using your tongue to fuck your wife, and rolling it around her clit. Janice begins to moan as you pick up the pace. You slide one hand up under her dress to her chest, pinching a nipple in your fingers, while the other hand slips under her ass and pulls her hips tighter to your face. You push your tongue into her as deeply as you can, sucking at her pussy as you pull out, over and over again. Finally you feel her back arch as Janice starts to cum. You smear her wet juice all over your face as your continue to eat her pussy through the orgasm.

"Oh, God...oh...yes!"

You stand back up and look down at your wife...laying back with her arms up over her head, her dress up over her hips and pussy dripping wet.

What next?

*[[Fuck her here and now]]
*[[Fuck your wife in the ass]]

[[Category: Just Say Yes]]

Eat some pussy

Bardo75 — Tue, 05 Jul 2016 21:10:01 GMT

Bardo75:

You squeeze your arms around your wife's waist and pick her up. She wraps her legs around you and kisses you harder, as you turn around and lay her back into the open SUV. You pull her mouth from hers and look down at her. She lays her head back on the bags, and releases you from the leg lock around your waist. Laying back with her hands resting over her head, she pulls her feet in to rest on the edge of the SUV and spreads her knees wide.

You lean back in and kiss her neck, nibbling little bites in between kisses. As you work your way down her neck to her cleavage, your hands slide up her thighs and under her dress. You bury your face between her tits, sucking and biting, and put your hands under her ass. You lift up just enough to slide her panties off, and stand up to finish pulling them off her legs.

Her neatly shaven pussy is in plain view. You can see the wetness already starting to drip out, and you grab one of her legs in your left hand. Your right hand slides over her wet bush and you run your fingers through the short curls above her pussy, while your thumb starts to rub her clit. Pulling the leg in your left hand to your face, you kiss and lick your way from her ankle down to her inner thigh. Janice lets out a soft moan as you continue to work her clit with your right thumb, and your face works its way to her hole. Finally you lick gently up the outer lips of her pussy. Using both hands to spread her thighs apart, your tongue first licks the lips, then slides inside them. The heat warms your face as her hot juices cover your lips. You alternate between using your tongue to fuck your wife, and rolling it around her clit. Janice begins to moan as you pick up the pace. You slide one hand up under her dress to her chest, pinching a nipple in your fingers, while the other hand slips under her ass and pulls her hips tighter to your face. You push your tongue into her as deeply as you can, sucking at her pussy as you pull out, over and over again. Finally you feel her back arch as Janice starts to cum. You smear her wet juice all over your face as your continue to eat her pussy through the orgasm.

"Oh, God...oh...yes!"

You stand back up and look down at your wife...laying back with her arms up over her head, her dress up over her hips and pussy dripping wet.

What next>

*[[Fuck her here and now]]
*[[Fuck your wife in the ass]]

[[Category: Just Say Yes]]

Show her exactly what you mean by appreciation

Bardo75 — Tue, 05 Jul 2016 21:05:31 GMT

Bardo75:

The elation you felt an hour ago is gone, and you're finally just fed up.

"I said maybe you could fuck me once in a while and earn some of that money you love to spend!"

Your wife's face turns bright red as she glares at you with contempt. "You'll be lucky if I ever touch that little prick of yours again! Now take me home!" She turns around and folds her arms, staring ahead in silence.

Calmly, you say the phrase you were taught by the gypsy fortune-teller: "Doar spune da."

You can't see her face, but there is a noticeable change in your wife's body language the moment you finish speaking. Her shoulders seem to relax, and her head tilts slightly to one side. Without speaking, she opens the SUV door and exits the vehicle, walking around to where you stand in the rear. As she approaches, you can see the hunger in her eyes. She walks up and wraps her arms around the back of your neck, pulling your face to hers. About six inches shorter than your 5'11" frame, she is forced to stand on her toes as she kisses you hard.

You can't remember the last time Janice kissed you like this, but now you remember how good she is at it. Your tongues dance around each other as you grab her waist and pull her body tight to yours.

What do you do next?
*[[Fuck her here and now]]
*[[Eat some pussy]]
*[[Fuck your wife in the ass]]

[[Category: Just Say Yes]]

Try talking him down

Bardo75 — Tue, 05 Jul 2016 20:59:03 GMT

Bardo75:

"Take it easy pal," you say. "Let's not do anything crazy."

"Fuck you! This bitch owes me some answers." The man then turns back to the fortune-teller and pulls her head back harder.

You put your hands up in an attempt to be as non-threatening as possible. It's been a long time since you were in any kind of actual physical confrontation, and you have no desire to pick a fight with a knife-wielding maniac. Of course, you can't just stand back and watch, either. You take a small step forward and say, "OK buddy, let's all try and relax a bit."

The man half turns in your direction, this time pointing the knife at you. "I told you to get the fuck..."

That was all she needed. With the knife no longer at her neck, the gypsy woman thrusts a knee hard into the man's groin with surprising quickness. He immediately drops the knife and crumples to the ground. The woman stands over him, staring down with venom in her eyes. "Bulangui," she says in disgust, and spits at the man now groaning on the ground. You spot the knife on the ground near your feet and casually pick it up.

The fortune-teller glances over at you, then looks back down at the man lying at her feet. "Now go, and do not come back again," she says. "If you return I shall become quite upset." She speaks calmly, but there is something sinister in her tone.

The man slowly pulls himself off the ground and stands up as best he can. Obviously still in pain, he looks at the woman with a combination of anger and fear, then turns and shuffles out of the tent.

After a couple moments of silence, the gypsy turns to you. Now that you can concentrate, you see that she is truly an exotic woman. Her jet black hair matches perfectly with her olive skin. Though you can see her clearly, it is impossible to judge her age. Her face is exquisite, with not a wrinkle or blemish to be seen. Yet when you look into her dark brown eyes, you see a deep wisdom that only comes with age.

"Are you alright?" you ask.

She regards you for a moment, than smiles and replies "I am fine, my Lord. Thank you for your assistance."

The woman walks up to you and stretches out her hand. "My name is Monisha. What is your name, my Lord?"

You take her hand and reply simply, "Michael."

Monisha brings up her other hand and presses it gently against your chest.

"Thank you, Michael," she says softly. "You have saved my life. I am in your debt."

She steps in closer, one hand holding yours and the other pressing into your chest. As she closes the distance between you, the smell of her perfume fills your nose.

"What is it you desire, my Lord?"

Your head starts to spin as the strong perfume begins to overwhelm you. Her hand pressing to your chest feels warm...then hot. You see her close her eyes, and you are forced to close your own as the entire room seems to spin around you. As your mind swims, visions of your life flash before you. Your wife. Your twins. Your job. Your friends. Images of everything and everyone you know seem to flash through your mind. Then, suddenly, it stops.

You open your eyes and see Monisha opening hers. She lowers her hand from your chest, releasing your hand as well, and takes a step back.

"I see," she says with a smile.

You have no idea what just happened, and this whole thing has been a bit unbelievable. Not sure what else to do, you just stand there and stare at her, trying to wrap your head around the events of the last few minutes.

After watching you quietly for a moment, the gypsy speaks to you.

"I am in your debt, my Lord, and now that debt shall be paid. I see that your life is full of struggle. You struggle to provide for your family. You struggle to satisfy your wife. But mostly you struggle against your own desires. You are a good man, and you often follow the will of others rather than live the life you choose for yourself."

She pauses and looks at you...watching you. Then she continues.

"From this moment forward, you will no longer have to struggle. Others will do as you desire, so you no longer must do as they decide for you. Any time you are denied a request, simply say aloud to them these words: doar spune da. With these words, they will agree to your request. It will become their heart's truest desire."

You have no idea how to respond. This is by far the strangest day you can remember. Is this woman really trying to tell you that you've been granted some sort of magical power? Suddenly another mug of ale sounds pretty good.

"OK then," you say. "Thanks for that, and hope the rest of your day is a bit more subdued. I think I'll just be going."

As you turn to leave, Monisha speaks again. "Do not take this power lightly, my Lord. It is a gift truly to be cherished."

What do you do?

*[[Get out of here]]
*[[Test out your new 'power']]

[[Category: Just Say Yes]]

Michael - 45 year old male

Bardo75 — Tue, 05 Jul 2016 20:52:01 GMT

Bardo75:

You have no idea what your wife and kids are up to, but at this point you couldn't care less. This looks like a great way to kill some time and relax out of the sun for a while. As you slip into the tent, however, you are instantly aware that relaxing is not in your immediate future.

"I'm gonna fuckin' kill you!"

You hear the gruff, male voice as soon as you enter the tent. It's darker than you expected, and your eyes will take a moment to adjust after coming in from the bright sunlight outside. You have no idea who's talking, so you freeze and try to get your bearings.

"What the fuck did you do to me?!"

Whoever, and wherever, he is...he sounds pissed. You squint and try to see the man to whom the voice belongs. Then you hear another voice. This one is calmer, and definitely not a man.

"I did nothing you did not ask for."

The voice is quiet and throaty with a thick Eastern European accent.

As your eyes continue to adjust, you can make out two figures on the other side of a small table against the back wall of the tent. A large man is pressed up against a much smaller woman. He is holding her hair tight in his left hand, pulling her head back and forcing her face up to look at him. In his right hand is a large knife pressed against the woman's throat.

"Fuck you," he says, and presses the knife tighter against her throat.

The details are coming into focus. The man is about six feet tall and in decent shape. He is focused entirely on the woman, and he is tense with rage. The woman is clearly supposed to be a fortune-teller. She is dressed in the obligatory gypsy robes and peasant jewelry. She stands maybe five feet tall, with dark black hair. Her figure is hidden under the flowing garment, but her face looks sharply defined. Unlike him she seems quite calm, despite the dire circumstances. As you look at the scene, her eyes glance in your direction. For the first time the man takes notice of your presence and speaks to you in a very deliberate tone.

"Get the fuck out of here," he says. "This is none of your business."

The gypsy simply continues to look at you.

What do you do?

*[[Do as he said and get the fuck out of there.]]
*[[Try talking him down]]
*[[No time to talk...take him out!]]

[[Category: Just Say Yes]]

Just Say Yes

Bardo75 — Tue, 05 Jul 2016 20:48:05 GMT

Bardo75:

Work in Progress This is my first attempt at an original story. Please be patient. Once there is a basic structure in place, I will open it up to the public. In the meantime, constructive feedback is welcome!

It's a hot August day and you are ready to go home. You came to the local Renaissance Faire with your family, but only after no small bit of cajoling. As you suspected would be the case, about ten minutes after you arrived they all ran off in different directions -- leaving you to wander around by yourself. A couple mugs of ale helped a bit, but now you're simply too hot and tired to care anymore. As you search for somewhere comfortable and shaded to rest, you spot a small tent under a large tree off in a quiet corner of the grounds. A small wooden sign that reads simply "Fortunes" hangs outside. You enter the tent.

Who are you?

*[[Tommy - 18 year old male]]
*[[Suzy - 18 year old female]]
*[[Michael - 45 year old male]]
*[[Janice - 44 year old female]]

[[Category: Just Say Yes]]

Fuck your wife in the ass

Bardo75 — Tue, 05 Jul 2016 20:41:03 GMT

Bardo75:

Time to show her who's boss. You grab Janice's legs and roll her over onto her stomach, pulling her halfway out of the SUV so her legs drop over the edge. Despite the fact that you are in a public parking lot in broad daylight, there's no stopping now. You pull down your shorts and step up behind your wife's bare ass. You rub your cock along her soaking wet pussy to lube it up a bit, then you press the head of your dick against her tight asshole.

"Oh yes, Michael. Fuck my ass!"

Needing no more encouragement, you grab her hips and slowly push the head of your swollen cock into her ass.

"Oh...owww...yes...ohhh."

Her ass is incredibly tight, but you push slowly onward. Finally you feel the resistance break and you get the head in.

"Oh Michael. Oh yes! Oh God, yes! Fuck my ass, Michael. Fuck me!"

You push in deeper, then start to get a rhythm. Slowly at first -- you've never fucked Janice in the ass before, and you don't know how she'll take it. But she seems to be getting along just fine. She is laying on her face, looking to one side, and she slides a hand down to play with her pussy.

"Oh my God. It feels so good to have you in my ass. Yes! Fuck my ass! Harder!"

You start to pump with voracity. Anyone who is anywhere near you can hear not only Janice's screams of pleasure, but the sound of your pelvis slapping against her ass cheeks.

"Yes! Yes! Yes! Fuck me! Fuck me! Fuck my ass!"

You can feel her rubbing her click as you slam your cock balls deep into your wife's ass, over and over again. You feel the pressure build in your balls and as your wife cums for the second time.

"Oh baby," you say. "I'm going to cum."

"Fill my ass. Fucking fill my ass with your cum!" she screams.

A couple more thrusts and you explode inside of her. You both let out long, loud groans as Janice's ass is filled with your wet, hot cum. You pull at her hips and try to drive in as deep as your cock will go and let her ass squeeze out the last few drops.

You pull your dick out and step back, breathing heaving and looking at your wife -- bare, wet ass hanging out of the back of your SUV...pussy juices dripping onto the grass.

You hear a sound behind you and turn around to see a your couple, both in their early twenties, staring at you.

What do you do?

*[[Put your cock away and drive home]]
*[[As if the man wants to have a turn with your wife]]
*[[Ask if they want to come back to your place]]

[[Category: Just Say Yes]]

Fuck your wife in the ass

Bardo75 — Tue, 05 Jul 2016 20:19:39 GMT

Bardo75: Created page with 'Time to show her who's boss. You grab Janice's legs and roll her over onto her stomach, pulling her halfway out of the SUV so her legs drop over the edge. [[Category: Just Say …'

Time to show her who's boss. You grab Janice's legs and roll her over onto her stomach, pulling her halfway out of the SUV so her legs drop over the edge.

[[Category: Just Say Yes]]

Eat some pussy

Bardo75 — Tue, 05 Jul 2016 20:18:08 GMT

Bardo75: Created page with 'You squeeze your arms around your wife's waist and pick her up. She wraps her legs around you and kisses you harder, as you turn around and lay her back into the open SUV. You …'

You squeeze your arms around your wife's waist and pick her up. She wraps her legs around you and kisses you harder, as you turn around and lay her back into the open SUV. You pull her mouth from hers and look down at her. She lays her head back on the bags, and releases you from the leg lock around your waist. Laying back with her hands resting over her head, she pulls her feet in to rest on the edge of the SUV and spreads her knees wide.

You lean back in and kiss her neck, nibbling little bites in between kisses. As you work your way down her neck to her cleavage, your hands slide up her thighs and under her dress. You bury your face between her tits, sucking and biting, and put your hands under her ass. You lift up just enough to slide her panties off, and stand up to finish pulling them off her legs.

Her neatly shaven pussy is in plain view. You can see the wetness already starting to drip out, and you grab one of her legs in your left hand. Your right hand slides over her wet bush and you run your fingers through the short curls above her pussy, while your thumb starts to rub her clit. Pulling the leg in your left hand to your face, you kiss and lick your way from her ankle down to her inner thigh. Janice lets out a soft moan as you continue to work her clit with your right thumb, and your face works its way to her hole. Finally you lick gently up the outer lips of her pussy. Using both hands to spread her thighs apart, your tongue first licks the lips, then slides inside them. The heat warms your face as her hot juices cover your face. You alternate between using your tongue to fuck your wife, and rolling it around her clit. Janice begins to moan as you pick up the page. You slide one hand up under her dress to her chest, pinching a nipple in your fingers, while the other hand slips under her ass and pull her hips closer to your face. You push your tongue into her as deeply as you can, sucking at her pussy as you pull out, over and over again. Finally you feel her back arch as Janice starts to cum. You smear her wet juice all over your face as your continue to eat her pussy through the orgasm.

"Oh, God...oh...yes!"

You stand back up and look down at your wife...laying back with her arms up over her head, her dress up over her hips and pussy dripping wet.

What next>

*[[Fuck her here and now]]
*[[Fuck your wife in the ass]]

[[Category: Just Say Yes]]

Show her exactly what you mean by appreciation

Bardo75 — Tue, 05 Jul 2016 19:47:30 GMT

Bardo75: Created page with 'The elation you felt an hour ago is gone, and you're finally just fed up. "I said maybe you could fuck me once in a while and earn some of that money you love to spend!" Your w…'

The elation you felt an hour ago is gone, and you're finally just fed up.

"I said maybe you could fuck me once in a while and earn some of that money you love to spend!"

Your wife's face turns bright red as she glares at you with contempt. "You'll be lucky if I ever touch that little prick of yours again! Now take me home!" She turns around and folds her arms, staring ahead in silence.

Calmly, you say the phrase you were taught by the gypsy fortune-teller. "Doar spune da."

You can't see her face, but there is a noticeable change in your wife's body language the moment you finish speaking. Her shoulders seem to relax, and her head tilts slightly to one side. Without speaking, she opens the SUV door and exits the vehicle, walking around to where you stand in the rear. As she approaches, you can see the hunger in her eyes. She walks up and wraps her arms around the back of your neck, pulling your face to hers. About six inches shorter than your 5'11" frame, she is forced to stand on her toes as she kisses you hard.

You can't remember the last time Janice kissed you like this, but now you remember how good she is at it. Your tongues dance around each other as you grab her waist and pull her body tight to yours.

What do you do next?
*[[Fuck her here and now]]
*[[Eat some pussy]]
*[[Fuck your wife in the ass]]

[[Category: Just Say Yes]]

Find your family and get out of here!

Bardo75 — Tue, 05 Jul 2016 19:28:45 GMT

Bardo75:

You spend the next hour wandering around looking for at least one face you recognize. Eventually you find your wife, Janice. She is carrying several large bags. Clearly she has enjoyed her time with your money.

"There you are," she says. "Tommy ran into a couple of friends from school, and Suzy's date is picking her up here, so it's just us. I'm exhausted from all this walking, so please take me home now."

She hands you all of the bags she's been carrying and leads the way to the exit gates. As you follow behind her, you think about your wife. The two of you met just after college. She was an ex-cheerleader and had gotten a job as a personal trainer for a large, local gym. While your early sex life was very good, she was pregnant with the twins after only a year of marriage and things have been much cooler ever since. You still have sex once in a while -- though only when she initiates it -- but it's been a very long time since you felt anything like you did this afternoon with the gypsy.

At least she still kept in shape. One thing Janice still cared about was her looks. She quit working for pay when the twins were born. You had a decent job as a tax attorney at the time and were on the fast track to partner. But Janice still worked out every day. Even at 44, her body rivaled that of women half her age. You watch her walk ahead of you, her 5'5" body perfectly filling the light cotton sun dress she wore today. She knows she has a great body, and she loves to show it off. Of course, that just makes you all the more frustrated when she doesn't let you have your way with it once in a while.

"Jesus, Janice. How much shit did you buy today?"

You remember thinking it was a good idea to park at the far end of the lot, to make it easier getting out. Of course you failed to consider the sheer magnitute of your wife's desire to spend your paychecks. As she approaches your SUV, she turns around with her hands on her hips and gives you the "what's your fucking problem" look.

"Don't get all cranky now," she says. "I just got a few things. Hurry up...I want to get out of here."

You unlock the car so she can get in, then pop the back and pack away all the bags.

"Maybe if you'd show some fucking appreciation once in a while," you say -- a bit too loudly.

Janice turn around and looks at you. "What did you say?"

What do you do?

*[[Show her exactly what you mean by appreciation]]
*[[Ignore her and get in the car]]

[[Category: Just Say Yes]]

Find your family and get out of here!

Bardo75 — Tue, 05 Jul 2016 19:24:40 GMT

Bardo75: Created page with 'You spend the next hour wandering around looking for at least one face you recognize. Eventually you find your wife, Janice. She is carrying several large bags. Clearly she ha…'

You spend the next hour wandering around looking for at least one face you recognize. Eventually you find your wife, Janice. She is carrying several large bags. Clearly she has enjoyed her time with your money.

"There you are," she says. "Tommy ran into a couple of friends from school, and Suzy's date is picking her up here, so it's just us. I'm exhausted from all this walking, so please take me home now."

She hands you all of the bags she's been carrying and leads the way to the exit gates. As you follow behind her, you think about your wife. The two of you met just after college. She was an ex-cheerleader and had gotten a job as a personal trainer for a large, local gym. While your early sex life was very good, she was pregnant with the twins after only a year of marriage and things have been much cooler ever since. You still have sex once in a while -- though only when she initiates it -- but it's been a very long time since you felt anything like you did this afternoon with the gypsy.

At least she still kept in shape. One thing Janice still cared about was her looks. She quit working for pay when the twins were born. You had a decent job as a tax attorney at the time and were on the fast track to partner. But Janice still worked out every day. Even at 44, her body rivaled that of women half her age. Of course, that just made you all the more frustrated when she wouldn't let you have your way with it once in a while.

"Jesus, Janice. How much shit did you buy today?"

You remember thinking it was a good idea to park at the far end of the lot, to make it easier getting out. Of course you failed to consider the sheer magnitute of your wife's desire to spend your paychecks. As she approaches your SUV, she turns around with her hands on her hips and gives you the "what's your fucking problem" look.

"Don't get all cranky now," she says. "I just got a few things. Hurry up...I want to get out of here."

You unlock the car so she can get in, then pop the back and pack away all the bags.

"Maybe if you'd show some fucking appreciation once in a while," you say -- a bit too loudly.

Janice turn around and looks at you. "What did you say?"

What do you do?

*[[Show her exactly what you mean by appreciation]]
*[[Ignore her and get in the car]]

[[Category: Just Say Yes]]