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User talk:Platypus

2017-03-06T19:53:08Z

Rogan-thumb:

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@Platypus, you mentioned that I (@Oddbeach) forgot to include a category bar. Would you please tell me where I make this mistake? Thanks :)

Is there a way to change the name of a story the easy way without having to change all the categories, too?--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 8:40 (Louisiana Time), 6 March 2017

@Platypus, in response to your reaction to my ([[User:Rogan-thumb|Rogan-thumb]]) addition to you story; I was wondering whether it would be okay if I were to continue making additions and edits, or if you would prefer me to step back? Which I will happily do so.

@Platypus, understood. I will attempt my own story at some point. Thanks for the tips and the criticism. I'll aim to improve in future. --[[User:Rogan-thumb|Rogan-thumb]]

User talk:Platypus

2017-03-06T16:56:26Z

Rogan-thumb:

Since this page has become rather cluttered, I've moved old discussions to the archive pages below. Feel free to leave new messages here. I'll get back to you ASAP!

*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive1]]
*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive2]]
*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive3]]
*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive4]]
*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive5]]
*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive6]]

 >Add new comments below by clicking on the 'edit' button above. Do not add new comments to the archives. 

@Platypus, you mentioned that I (@Oddbeach) forgot to include a category bar. Would you please tell me where I make this mistake? Thanks :)

Is there a way to change the name of a story the easy way without having to change all the categories, too?--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 8:40 (Louisiana Time), 6 March 2017

@Platypus, in response to your reaction to my [[User:Rogan-thumb|Rogan-thumb]] addition to you story; I was wondering whether it would be okay if I were to continue making additions and edits, or if you would prefer me to step back? Which I will happily do so.

User:Rogan-thumb

2017-03-06T16:56:08Z

Rogan-thumb: Created page with 'Hello, I'm a new user, I am interested in improving and writing new content.'

Hello, I'm a new user, I am interested in improving and writing new content.

User talk:Platypus

2017-03-06T16:53:12Z

Rogan-thumb:

Since this page has become rather cluttered, I've moved old discussions to the archive pages below. Feel free to leave new messages here. I'll get back to you ASAP!

*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive1]]
*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive2]]
*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive3]]
*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive4]]
*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive5]]
*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive6]]

 >Add new comments below by clicking on the 'edit' button above. Do not add new comments to the archives. 

@Platypus, you mentioned that I (@Oddbeach) forgot to include a category bar. Would you please tell me where I make this mistake? Thanks :)

Is there a way to change the name of a story the easy way without having to change all the categories, too?--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 8:40 (Louisiana Time), 6 March 2017

@Platypus, in response to your reaction to my @Rogan-thumb addition to you story; I was wondering whether it would be okay if I were to continue making additions and edits, or if you would prefer me to step back? Which I will happily do so.

Fuck your captive

2017-03-06T03:30:07Z

Rogan-thumb:

You turn to leave the room, as you reach the door to your bedroom you grin to yourself and shake your head, pull a 180 and march right back over to the bound girl.

Her until recently virgin pussy is leaking generous amounts of cum and a little blood onto your bedding.

"You little bitch, that's going to take ages to clean out. And my mother gave me that linen!" You shout at the cum drunk whore still mumbling through the balled up socks wedged in her small mouth.

You tut and shake your head, a thought springs to mind calming your annoyance.

"Well, you can't make an omelette without breaking a few eggs I guess!" You enthusiastically leap on to the bed aligning your stiff shaft with her abused cunt and get right back to the fucking.

Do you:

*[[Continue to fuck her, bound to the bed, for a good long while.]]

*[[Give her one last blast of baby batter, then go and deal with her unconscious father and your broken door.]]

*[[Whilst balls deep in your captive call your mother to ask how best to get blood and cum out of bed linen.]]

Fuck your captive

2017-03-06T03:29:22Z

Rogan-thumb:

You turn to leave the room, as you reach the door to your bedroom you grin to yourself and shake your head, pull a 180 and march right back over to the bound girl.

Her until recently virgin pussy is leaking generous amounts of cum and a little blood onto your bedding.

"You little bitch, that's going to take ages to clean out. And my mother gave me that linen!" You shout at the cum drunk whore still mumbling through the balled up socks wedged in her small mouth.

You tut and shake your head, a thought springs to mind calming your annoyance.

"Well, you can't make an omelette without breaking a few eggs I guess!" You enthusiastically leap on to the bed aligning your stiff shaft with her abused cunt and get right back to the fucking.

Do you:

*[[Continue to fuck her, bound to the bed, for a good long while.]]

*[[Give her one last blast of baby batter.]]

*[[Whilst balls deep in your captive call your mother to ask how best to get blood and cum out of bed linen.]]

Fuck your captive

2017-03-06T02:59:42Z

Rogan-thumb:

You turn to leave the room, as you reach the door to your bedroom you grin to yourself and shake your head, pull a 180 and march right back over to the bound girl.

Her until recently virgin pussy is leaking generous amounts of cum and a little blood onto your bedding.

"You little bitch, that's going to take ages to clean out. And my mother gave me that linen!" You shout at the cum drunk whore still mumbling through the balled up socks wedged in her small mouth.

You tut and shake your head, a thought springs to mind calming your annoyance.

"Well, you can't make an omelette without breaking a few eggs I guess!" You enthusiastically leap on to the bed aligning your stiff shaft with her abused cunt and get right back to the fucking.

Do you:

*[[Continue to fuck her, bound to the bed, for a good long while.]]

*[[Give her one last blast of baby batter.]]

*[[Call your mother to ask how best to get blood and cum out of bed linen.]]

Fuck your captive

2017-03-06T02:56:38Z

Rogan-thumb:

You turn to leave the room, as you reach the door to your bedroom you grin to yourself and shake your head, pull a 180 and march right back over to the bound girl.

Her until recently virgin pussy is leaking generous amounts of cum and a little blood onto your bedding.

"You little bitch, that's going to take ages to clean out. And my mother gave me that linen!" You shout at the cum drunk whore still mumbling through the balled up socks wedged in her small mouth.

You tut and shake your head, a thought springs to mind calming your annoyance.

"Well, you can't make an omelette without breaking a few eggs I guess!" You enthusiastically leap on to the bed aligning your stiff shaft with her abused cunt and get right back to the fucking.

*[[Continue to fuck her, bound to the bed, for a good long while.]]

*[[Give her one last blast of baby batter.]]

*[[Call your mother to ask how best to get blood and cum out of bed linen.]]

Fuck your captive

2017-03-06T02:55:27Z

Rogan-thumb:

You turn to leave the room, as you reach the door to your bedroom you grin to yourself and shake your head, pull a 180 and march right back over to the bound girl.

Her until recently virgin pussy is leaking generous amounts of cum and a little blood onto your bedding.

"You little bitch, that's going to take ages to clean out. And my mother gave me that linen!" You shout at the cum drunk whore still mumbling through the balled up socks wedged in her small mouth.

You tut and shake your head, a thought springs to mind calming your annoyance.

"Well, you can't make an omelette without breaking a few eggs I guess!" You enthusiastically leap on to the bed aligning your stiff shaft with her abused cunt and get right back to the fucking.

*[[Continue to fuck her bound to the bed for a good long while.]]

*[[Give her one last blast of baby batter.]]

*[[Call your mother to ask how best to get blood and cum out of bed linen.]]

Fuck your captive

2017-03-06T02:51:35Z

Rogan-thumb:

You turn to leave the room, as you reach the door to your bedroom you grin to yourself and shake your head, pull a 180 and march right back over to the bound girl.

Her until recently virgin pussy is leaking generous amounts of cum and a little blood onto your bedding.

"You little bitch, that's going to take ages to clean out. And my mother gave me that linen!" You shout at the cum drunk whore still mumbling through the balled up socks wedged in her small mouth.

You tut and shake your head, a thought springs to mind calming your annoyance.

"Well, you can't make an omelette without breaking a few eggs I guess!" You enthusiastically leap on to the bed aligning your stiff shaft with her abused cunt and get right back to the fucking.

*[[Continue to fuck her bound to the bed for a good long while.]].

*[[Give her one last blast of baby batter.]].

*[[Call your mother to ask how best to get blood and cum out of bed linen.]].

Fuck your captive

2017-03-06T02:48:29Z

Rogan-thumb:

You turn to leave the room, as you reach the door to your bedroom you grin to yourself and shake your head, pull a 180 and march right back over to the bound girl.

Her until recently virgin pussy is leaking generous amounts of cum and a little blood onto your bedding.

"You little bitch, that's going to take ages to clean out. And my mother gave me that linen!" You shout at the cum drunk whore still mumbling through the balled up socks wedged in her small mouth.

You tut and shake your head, a thought springs to mind calming your annoyance.

"Well, you can't make an omelette without breaking a few eggs I guess!" You enthusiastically leap on to the bed aligning your stiff shaft with her abused cunt and get right back to the fucking.

[[Continue to fuck her bound to the bed for a good long while.]].

[[Give her one last blast of baby batter.]].

[[Call your mother to ask how best to get blood and cum out of bed linen.]].

Fuck your captive

2017-03-06T02:46:39Z

Rogan-thumb: Created page with 'You turn to leave the room, as you reach the door to your bedroom you grin to yourself and shake your head, pull a 180 and march right back over to the bound girl. Her until rece…'

You turn to leave the room, as you reach the door to your bedroom you grin to yourself and shake your head, pull a 180 and march right back over to the bound girl.
Her until recently virgin pussy is leaking generous amounts of cum and a little blood onto your bedding.
"You little bitch, that's going to take ages to clean out. And my mother gave me that linen!" You shout at the cum drunk whore still mumbling through the balled up socks wedged in her small mouth.
You tut and shake your head, a thought springs to mind calming your annoyance.
"Well, you can't make an omelette without breaking a few eggs I guess!" You enthusiastically leap on to the bed aligning your stiff shaft with her abused cunt and get right back to the fucking.
[[Option]]. Continue to fuck her bound to the bed for a good long while.
[[Option]]. Give her one last blast of baby batter.
[[Option]]. Call your mother to ask how best to get blood and cum out of bed linen.