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2022-08-30T19:32:01Z

Jeetajoo: /* Latest Reviews! */

Hello, and welcome to the reviews section! Why was this made? Well for two reasons actually:

*To encourage writers to continue writing
*To increase publicity for stories

Now, this section is still new and I am right now figuring out how I should set this page out. So if you would like to help me, by all means go ahead. Reviews will be rated out of ten, with ten being the highest. I've also set up a How To guide for setting up reviews. Be sure to read through that first if you want to do your own.

As of this moment, I'm trying to review all of the nominated stories that want be featured, besides the 18+ ones. So that's 3 reviews coming soon.

If you have a question concerning this section or would like to request a review, just ask [[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]], and he should answer it as soon as possible; if he doesn't, ask [[User:Platypus|Platypus]].

== [[How To Review & Rules to Reviewing]] ==

Self explanatory, you '''must''' read this if you are planning to write a review on a certain story.

== Latest Reviews! ==

Just place your link and a small preview at the top. Reviews must be at least a paragraph long.

'''Title''': [[Freedom]]

'''Author''': [[User:Wizardbaker|Wizardbaker]]

'''Pages''': 41

'''Reviewed By''': [[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]]

*[[Review: Freedom]]

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'''Title''': [[Remember]]

'''Author''': [[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]]

'''Pages''': 66 as of time of review

'''Reviewed By''': [[User:JackalRobot|JackalRobot]]

*[[Review: Remember]]

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'''Title''': [[Quest of the magician]]

'''Author''': name removed

'''Pages''': 200

'''Reviewed By''': [[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]]

*[[Review: Quest of the magician]]

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'''Title''': [[Inyashas fantasy land|Inyashas Fantasy Land]]

'''Author''': Syxxhidiki

'''Pages''': 24

'''Reviewed By''': [[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]]

*[[Review: Inyashas Fantasy Land]]

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'''Title''': [[Abigail's Tale]]

'''Author''': [[User:Idkname|Idkname]]

'''Pages''': 29

'''Reviewed By''': [[User:Snowball|Snowball]]

*[[Review:Abigail's Tale]]

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'''Title''': [[Awake]]

'''Author''': [[User:Natedog807|Natedog807]]

'''Pages''': 31

'''Reviewed By''': [[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]]

*[[Review: Awake]]

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'''Title''': [[+Infinity]]

'''Started by''': [[User:OmegaScales|OmegaScales]]

'''Pages''': {{PAGESINCAT:+Infinity}}

'''Reviewed by''': [[User:Dwarftopia|Dwarftopia]]

*[[Review: +Infinity]]

== [[Archived Reviews!]] ==

Reviews that have been on this page for a certain length of time get moved here.

[[Category: Reviews|*]]

User:Jeetajoo

2020-09-03T20:53:22Z

Jeetajoo: Blanked the page

Pick up the rock

2006-05-08T21:15:57Z

Jeetajoo:

The rock is light in your hand.

Do you:
*[[QM:Toss the rock in the window at your friend making breakfast]]
*[[QM:Scratch a message in the dirt in front of the house for your friend to read]]
{{QM:Status|Equipment=[[Image:Rock.jpg|Quest of the magician/Rock]],[[Quest of the magician/Tattered Tunic|Tattered Tunic]]|Health=100|MP=10}}

User talk:209.6.236.10

2006-05-01T12:30:08Z

Jeetajoo:

Thank you for the compliments, Sir or Madame Troll. I will have you know that your story was happening after the character had died, thus not being in step with the rules. You can revert all the old pages, and start them from another point in the story where the character is alive, though.

User:Jeetajoo

2006-05-01T12:26:57Z

Jeetajoo:

Hi, I'm Jeet, I just joined. I'm trying to clean up the inappropriate pages in the "Normal" stories.

The Kitty in the Window

2006-04-29T15:01:31Z

Jeetajoo: Revert!

You just woke up from a long night's sleep. It's about 9:42 AM. Nobody is home because it's such a nice day that everybody went outside. But it's still quiet, so you want to snuggle up with your cat, Joojoo. She is nowhere to be found. She's light brown with darker and lighter brown markings. You think that maybe if you silently snoop around for her, she might come out of her hiding spot. Then, while you are looking in the den, you see another cat. It looks like Joojoo but the markings are black and not brown at all. You go up to the cat, and she...

[[The Kitty in the Window/Lets you pet her|Lets you pet her]]

[[The Kitty in the Window/Jumps at you|Jumps at you]]

[[The Kitty in the Window/Doesn't even see you|Doesn't even see you]]

The Kitty in the Window

2006-04-26T19:54:35Z

Jeetajoo: ...

Quest of the magician

2006-04-25T22:34:45Z

Jeetajoo:

You wake up to the smell of bacon frying in a skillet, the sound of rustling in the kitchen, and a stream of light from the window. You just had your three week sleep, something magicians do to rejuvenate their magical skills before long missions, and you are now alert and ready to face the world. Something is wrong however, as you did not expect company.

After waking up and putting on some clothing, do you:
*[[QM:Head directly to the kitchen to see what's cooking]]
*[[QM:Sneak out the window and come around to the front door]]
*[[Quest of the magician/Sleep for another day|Sleep for another day]]

{{QM:Status|Level=1|Equipment=[[Quest of the magician/Tattered Tunic|Tattered Tunic]]|Health=100|MP=10}}

Template:Status

2006-04-25T22:30:37Z

Jeetajoo:

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Template:Status

2006-04-25T22:28:38Z

Jeetajoo:

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The Kitty in the Window

2006-04-25T20:00:39Z

Jeetajoo:

You just woke up from a long night's sleep. It's about 9:42 AM. Nobody is home because it's such a nice day that everybody went outside. But it's still quiet, so you want to snuggle up with your cat, Joojoo. She is nowhere to be found. She's light brown with darker and lighter brown markings. You think that maybe if you silently snoop around for her, she might come out of her hiding spot. Then, while you are looking in the den, you see another cat. It looks like Joojoo but the markings are black and not brown at all. You go up to the cat, and she...

Main Page

2006-04-25T19:54:43Z

Jeetajoo:

Choose Your Own Adventure is a wiki that contains stories where the reader assumes the role of the main character. In each page you chose how the story should progress. If you don't see an option that you would like to pursue, click the edit tab on the top of the page and add a new path to the page. Then you get to write in your own adventure for the hero.

__NOTOC__
==Kid Stories==
'''FOR ALL AGES:'''Please keep it G-PG. Please remove any other content that exceeds this.
*[[The Kitty in the Window]]

==Normal Stories==
'''FOR 12+:'''Please keep it G-PG-13. Please remove any content that exceeds this.
*[[Quest of the magician]]
*[[Superdickery|Superdickery Superman Adventure]]

==Adult Stories==
'''FOR 18+:''' No limits to content.
*[[Legend of the Trailer Park]]
*[[Smutty Sex Romp]]

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==Instructions==
===(Starting Template) ===
'''Copy and paste this for new pages:'''
<pre><nowiki>
Page text here

Do you:
*[[Adventure/Option 1]]
*[[Adventure/Option 2]]
*[[Aventure/Option 3]]
{{Status|Equipment=Equipment|Health=Health|MP=MP}}
</nowiki>
</pre>

===To edit a page===
Just click the edit tab on the top of the page

===To add an option===
<nowiki>[[Adventure name/New option name]]</nowiki>

Options that appear <font color="red">red</font> on the page have no content. Click the link, paste in the above template, and then add your own content.
|

==Rules==
People have a tendency to create branches where the character dies. To prevent the story from being just a tree with all dead ends:
*for each page where you kill the character, you must create at least 2 pages (with content) where he can go on.
*whenever you fill out the last option's page, add another one so the story can go another way.
*please stick to the theme and setting of the story. Although creativity is encouraged, radical plot changes and inconsistencies will ruin the flow.
**If something is off topic, remove it.
*Make a subpage of the original adventure page when adding an option, to save space.
|}

Sleep for another day

2006-04-25T00:43:23Z

Jeetajoo:

Well, you really didn't need that since you were all recharged, but sleep is always nice. While you were sleeping, the person who was downstairs (your friend Nathaniel) assumed that his copy of your "sleep schedule" was off a day, and went home. Now what do you do?

*[[QM:Discover "Lollipop"|Grab your equipment]]
*[[QM:Begin to inhale]]
*[[QM:Look slightly to the left]]

{{QM:Status|Equipment=[[Quest of the magician/Tattered Tunic|Tattered Tunic]]|Health=100|MP=10}}

Go upstairs and grab your spellbook and old dagger.

2006-04-25T00:34:48Z

Jeetajoo:

Knowing that tentacled monsters move very fast, and that the monster was moving towards town, that your valkyrie-girlfriend lives in town, and that tentacled monsters liked doing...things... with scantily-clad young maidens, you use a simple time-stop spell and rush upstairs to your room, where you see ''The Little Big Book of Spells'' and your old-but-sharp dagger resting on your bedside table. You stuff the spellbook into your secretive mage-style tunic, and wield the dagger. The timestop timer runs out, and your clock starts ticking again. Time's a wastin'!

You:
[[Quest of the magician/Rush off towards town to warn the people|Rush off towards town to warn the people]]

[[Quest of the magician/Rush off towards town to protect your girlfriend|Rush of toward town to protect your girlfriend]]

[[Quest of the magician/Use your long-distance magic to kill the monster from here|Use long-distance magic to kill the monster from here]]

[[Quest of the magician/Let the town and your GF die and go off and visit Grandma|Let the town and your GF die and go visit Grandma!]]

{{QM:Status|Equipment=Weapon:The [[Quest of the magician/Old-But-Good Dagger|Old-But-Good Dagger]], Spellbook:[[Quest of the magician/The Little BIg Book of Spells|The Little Big Book of Spells]]Armor:[[Quest of the magician/Tattered Tunic|Tattered Tunic]] |Health=100|MP=10}}

Head directly to the kitchen to see what's cooking

2006-04-25T00:34:09Z

Jeetajoo:

As you enter the kitchen, you see your friend Nathaniel cooking bacon on the wood-burning stove. Although its a nice surprise for you, you are surprised by this, and a little concerned. Your friend turns to greet you, when a look of horror comes over his face. You start to wonder why as poor Nathan is suddenly eaten by a giant monster that reaches through the kitchen window with its enormous tentacles. Had you just snuck out the window you could have saved him! Oh no! The monster then leaves the house and heads for the village.

After seeing this, you:
*[[QM:Eat what's in the kitchen|Eat what's in the kitchen]]
*[[QM:Warn the townspeople|Warn the townspeople]]
*[[QM:go back and attack the monster]]
*[[Quest of the magician/Go upstairs and grab your spellbook and old dagger.|Go upstairs and grab your spellbook and dagger, to avenge Nate's death]]
{{QM:Status|Equipment=[[Quest of the magician/Tattered Tunic|Tattered Tunic]]|Health=100|MP=10}}

Go upstairs and grab your spellbook and old dagger.

2006-04-25T00:29:44Z

Jeetajoo:

Knowing that tentacled monsters move very fast, and that the monster was moving towards town, that your valkyrie-girlfriend lives in town, and that tentacled monsters liked doing...things... with scantily-clad young maidens, you use a simple time-stop spell and rush upstairs to your room, where you see ''The Little Big Book of Spells'' and your old-but-sharp dagger resting on your bedside table. You stuff the spellbook into your secretive mage-style tunic, and wield the dagger. The timestop timer runs out, and your clock starts ticking again. Time's a wastin'!

You:
[[Quest of the magician/Rush off towards town to warn the people|Rush off towards town to warn the people]]

[[Quest of the magician/Rush off towards town to protect your girlfriend|Rush of toward town to protect your girlfriend]]

[[Quest of the magician/Use your long-distance magic to kill the monster from here|Use long-distance magic to kill the monster from here]]

[[Quest of the magician/Let the town and your GF die and go off and visit Grandma|Let the town and your GF die and go visit Grandma!]]

{{QM:Status|Equipment=[[Quest of the magician/Old-But-Sharp Dagger|Old-But-Sharp Dagger]], [[Quest of the magician/Tattered Tunic|Tattered Tunic]]|Health=100|MP=10}}

Head directly to the kitchen to see what's cooking

2006-04-25T00:26:32Z

Jeetajoo:

As you enter the kitchen, you see your friend Nathaniel cooking bacon on the wood-burning stove. Although its a nice surprise for you, you are surprised by this, and a little concerned. Your friend turns to greet you, when a look of horror comes over his face. You start to wonder why as poor Nathan is suddenly eaten by a giant monster that reaches through the kitchen window with its enormous tentacles. Had you just snuck out the window you could have saved him! Oh no! The monster then leaves the house and heads for the village.

After seeing this, you:
*[[QM:Eat what's in the kitchen|Eat what's in the kitchen]]
*[[QM:Warn the townspeople|Warn the townspeople]]
*[[QM:go back and attack the monster]]
*[[Quest of the magician/Go upstairs and grab your spellbook and old dagger.|Go upstairs and grab your spellbook and dagger]]
{{QM:Status|Equipment=[[Quest of the magician/Tattered Tunic|Tattered Tunic]]|Health=100|MP=10}}

Go back to the fireplace

2006-04-24T22:31:50Z

Jeetajoo:

You approach yon fireplace made of stone. You see that your various family drawings are sitting atop the mantle, like always. And then you notice a strange item that wasn't there before. An orb of mind control that you presume that is Nathan's is hovering right above the counter, and a bag of gold there as well.

Do you:
*[[Quest of the magician/Help your friend?|Help your friend?]]
*[[Quest of the magician/Use the orb for your own purposes?|Use the orb for your own purposes]]
*[[Use the debit to go on a seven day rampage of luxurious wealth?|Use the gold to go on a seven day rampage of luxurious wealth?]]
{{QM:Status|Equipment=http://www.pixel2life.com/images/tut_avatar/18685.gif - Fairy Dust, [[Quest of the magician/Tattered Tunic|Tattered Tunic]]|Health=100|MP=10}}

Use the gold to go on a seven-day rampage of luxurious wealth?

2006-04-24T22:15:02Z

Jeetajoo:

You party very hard for 7 days, most of which is a long haze. However, you remember hearing "Yeah baby, harder!" Whispered into your ear. Wonder what it could have meant. Anyway, on the seventh day, after smoking some wild mustard seed mixed with angel dust, you go the roof of the town cathedral, scream, "I am a golden god!" and jump off the roof.

Uh... you know you died after that, right?

{{QM:Status|Equipment=http://www.pixel2life.com/images/tut_avatar/18685.gif - Fairy Dust, [[Quest of the magician/Tattered Tunic|Tattered Tunic]]|Health=0|MP=0}}

Use the gold to go on a seven-day rampage of luxurious wealth?

2006-04-24T22:10:06Z

Jeetajoo: Use the debit to go on a seven day rampage of luxurious wealth? moved to Quest of the magician/Use the gold to go on a seven day rampage of luxurious wealth?

You party very hard for 7 days, most of which is a long swimming haze. On the seventh day, after smoking some weed mixed with angel dust, you go the roof, scream, "I am a golden god," and jump off the roof.

Sprinkle the fairy dust on the wound

2006-04-24T22:07:04Z

Jeetajoo:

It seems at first that nothing is happening, then your friend begins
to moan and wiggling on the floor! Oh God! Did you poison him?! Is he dying?
Suddenly he begins to change...
Nathaniel (or should I say Natalie?) has just turned into a woman! And she is still wearing
only the tattered tunic and undergarment she was wearing a minute ago! (Yes undergarment. Nathaniel/Natalie is a semi-rich man/woman)

After staring in disbelief for who knows how long, you decide to:

*[[QM:Go to the bedroom and fine more suitable clothing for the half naked girl]]
*[[QM:Take a peek under the tunic (well, she is right there, and Nathan would have done it to you.]]
*[[Try and change her back with your limited magic]]

{{QM:Status|Equipment=[[Quest of the magician/Tattered Tunic|Tattered Tunic]]|Health=100|MP=10}}

Climb in the window to help your friend

2006-04-24T22:05:00Z

Jeetajoo:

After stumbling in the window (perhaps the door would have been better) you fall on the floor next to a packet of fairy dust. You pick it up, walking past a dying fire in the fireplace, over to your friend. He is bleeding profusely from an open head wound.

Do you:

[[Sprinkle the fairy dust on the wound]]

[[Take a towel and apply it firmly to the wound]]

[[Go back to the fireplace]]

{{QM:Status|Equipment=http://www.pixel2life.com/images/tut_avatar/18685.gif - Fairy Dust, [[Quest of the magician/Tattered Tunic|Tattered Tunic]]|Health=100}}

Toss the rock in the window at your friend making breakfast

2006-04-24T22:04:31Z

Jeetajoo:

Oh no! You threw the rock too hard, and you've knocked out your friend. He hits the floor with a thud.

Do you:

[[Climb in the window to help your friend]]

[[Leave him lying unconscious, and head towards town]]

{{QM:Status|Equipment=[[Quest of the magician/Tattered Tunic|Tattered Tunic]]|Health=100|MP=10}}

Pick up the rock

2006-04-24T22:03:37Z

Jeetajoo:

The rock is light in you hand.

Do you:
*[[QM:Toss the rock in the window at your friend making breakfast]]
*[[QM:Scratch a message in the dirt in front of the house for your friend to read]]
{{QM:Status|Equipment=[[Image:Rock.jpg|Quest of the magician/Rock]],[[Quest of the magician/Tattered Tunic|Tattered Tunic]]|Health=100}}

Sneak out the window and come around to the front door

2006-04-24T22:01:46Z

Jeetajoo:

Silently you slip out the window and stroll around your cottage. Creeping around the bushes you take a peek into the window. You see your friend Nathaniel cooking up a hot breakfast. There is a small rock at your feet.

Do you:
*[[QM:Pick up the rock]]
*[[QM:Shout hello]]
*[[QM:Go around to the front door and knock]]

{{QM:Status|Equipment=[[Quest of the magician/Tattered Tunic|Tattered Tunic]]|Health=100}}

Sleep for another day

2006-04-24T22:00:47Z

Jeetajoo:

Well, you really didn't need that since you were all recharged, but sleep is always nice. While you were sleeping, the person who was downstairs (your friend Nathaniel) assumed that his copy of your "sleep schedule" was off a day, and went home. Now what do you do?

*[[QM:Discover "Lollipop"]]
*[[QM:Begin to inhale]]
*[[QM:Look slightly to the left]]

{{QM:Status|Equipment=[[Quest of the magician/Tattered Tunic|Tattered Tunic]]|Health=100|MP=10}}

Quest of the magician

2006-04-24T22:00:22Z

Jeetajoo:

You wake up to the smell of bacon frying in a skillet, the sound of rustling in the kitchen, and a stream of light from the window. You just had your three week sleep, something magicians do to rejuvenate their magical skills before long missions, and you are now alert and ready to face the world. Something is wrong however, as you did not expect company.

After waking up and putting on some clothing, do you:
*[[QM:Head directly to the kitchen to see what's cooking]]
*[[QM:Sneak out the window and come around to the front door]]
*[[Quest of the magician/Sleep for another day|Sleep for another day]]

{{QM:Status|Equipment=[[Quest of the magician/Tattered Tunic|Tattered Tunic]]|Health=100|MP=10}}

Quest of the magician/Tattered Tunic

2006-04-24T21:58:39Z

Jeetajoo:

This tunic is the only thing keeping your ass covered. It is a lovely shade of puke-green, with various stains and rips in it. It isn't very good for battle, but it does have nice large pockets for keeping things in. It is also very big, and drags on the ground, giving you a very magician-like appearance. (which is a good thing, right?)

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Grab your dagger and spellbook

2006-04-24T21:53:46Z

Jeetajoo:

You stuff your Old-But-Good dagger and your copy of ''The Little Big Book of Spells'', and stuff them into your tunic's pocket. Now you're ready to kill things!
Do you:
*[[eat it.]]
*[[slay a random monster in hopes of starting this quest]]
*[[eat cheese]]
{{Status|Equipment=Weapon:The [[Quest of the magician/Old-But-Good Dagger|Old-But-Good Dagger]], Spellbook:[[Quest of the magician/The Little BIg Book of Spells|The Little Big Book of Spells]]Armor:[[Quest of the magician/Tattered Tunic|Tattered Tunic]] |Health=100|MP=10}}

Quest of the magician/Old-But-Good Dagger

2006-04-24T21:44:45Z

Jeetajoo:

This wooden-handled dagger is old, given to you from your late Grandpap. The handle is slightly rotten, but comfortable in your hand. The blade has been slightly dulled, but it still can kill a rabbit in 3 seconds flat.

(To return to the story, press your browser's back button)

Grab your dagger and spellbook

2006-04-24T21:41:47Z

Jeetajoo:

Do you:
*[[eat it.]]
*[[slay a random monster in hopes of starting this quest]]
*[[eat cheese]]
{{Status|Equipment=Weapon:The [[Quest of the magician/Old-But-Good Dagger|Old-But-Good Dagger]], Spellbook:[[Quest of the magician/The Little BIg Book of Spells|The Little Big Book of Spells]]|Health=100|MP=10}}

Grab your dagger and spellbook

2006-04-24T21:38:50Z

Jeetajoo: QM:Discover "Lollipop" moved to Quest of the magician/Grab your dagger and spellbook

You invent the pleasant candy known as the lollipop. Well, now you have a weapon. Interesting.

Do you:
*[[eat it.]]
*[[slay a random monster in hopes of starting this quest]]
*[[eat cheese]]
{{Status|Equipment=lollipop?|Health=90}}

Sleep for another day

2006-04-24T21:37:13Z

Jeetajoo:

Well, you really didn't need that since you were all recharged, but sleep is always nice. While you were sleeping, the person who was downstairs (your friend Nathaniel) assumed that his copy of your "sleep schedule" was off a day, and went home. Now what do you do?

*[[QM:Discover "Lollipop"]]
*[[QM:Begin to inhale]]
*[[QM:Look slightly to the left]]

{{QM:Status|Equipment=None|Health=100|MP=10}}

Quest of the magician

2006-04-24T21:34:05Z

Jeetajoo:

Sleep for another day

2006-04-24T21:32:37Z

Jeetajoo: Quest of the magician/Push a small pin into your bicep moved to Quest of the magician/Sleep for another day

Hmm. That was rather unpleasant.

*[[QM:Discover "Lollipop"]]
*[[QM:Begin to inhale]]
*[[QM:Look slightly to the left]]

{{QM:Status|Equipment=None|Health=90}}

Eat what's in the kitchen

2006-04-24T21:29:51Z

Jeetajoo:

You quickly devour everything in the kitchen - the bacon, bread, eggs, some leftover moldy cheese, the wooden table, the two stools, your wood-burning stove, those dust bunnies, 3 cockroaches, the dead flies on the windowsill, the window, and the late Nathaniel.
I don't know how you ate all that, but the wood, glass, insects, and dead friend did not sit well with you. In fact, they killed you.
Next time, make sure things are specific.

{{QM:Status|Equipment=None|Health=0|MP=0}}

Go to Heaven

2006-04-24T21:09:42Z

Jeetajoo: I think you get it...

Use your long-distance magic to kill the monster from here

2006-04-24T21:03:04Z

Jeetajoo:

You summon all your strength to call a lightning bolt to strike the now-faraway tentacle-monster. However, long distance magic takes up much energy to use, and the effort kills you. Nice try!

Meanwhile, the monster feels a slight jolt, but proceeds to move towards the town to crush the townspeople, only sparing your scantily-clad girlfriend for other reasons.

{{QM:Status|Equipment=The Old-But-Sharp Dagger|Health=0|MP=0}}

Go upstairs and grab your spellbook and old dagger.

2006-04-24T21:02:26Z

Jeetajoo:

Stand up to the monster

2006-04-24T21:01:25Z

Jeetajoo:

You stand in the middle of the square and say "Go away, monster!" The monster eats you and you die.

{{QM:Status|Equipment=None|Health=
http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/coffin.gif|MP=10}}

Run for your life

2006-04-24T21:00:51Z

Jeetajoo:

You ran for your life, but it was too quick and caught you. Too bad.

I'm sorry to say it, but you're dead. Maybe someone can e-mail your loved ones to let them know.

{{Status|Equipment=none|Health=0|MP=10}}

Stand there dumbfounded.

2006-04-24T21:00:24Z

Jeetajoo:

You chose to do nothing, the evil monster comes into town and eats people. You are still in the middle of the square, so you:
*[[QM:Run for your life (Level 1)|Run for your life!]]
*[[QM:Stand up to the monster|Stand up to the monster]]

{{QM:Status|Equipment=None|Health=100|MP=10}}

Scream with all your lungs "There's a monster coming!"

2006-04-24T20:59:45Z

Jeetajoo:

You scream loudly, "There's a monster coming!"

One member of the townsfolk turns around and laughs. "Yeah, I bet." He says.

"No really, there is." You argue.

"Oh." He says. "Hmmm."

After the monster enters the town, everyone stares at it. The monster stares back and itches its upper tentacle.

A small child goes up and pats one of the monster's tentacles. "Good doggie."

The docile nature was a cover! The tentacle that the child patted wraps around the poor thing, and messily devours him. The monster proceeds to do the same to the whole town, including you.

Nice going.

{{QM:Status|Equipment=None|Health=
http://www.pso-world.com/images/phpbb/icons/smiles/coffin.gif|MP=0}}

Warn the townspeople

2006-04-24T20:59:12Z

Jeetajoo:

You race towards the village the monster is heading towards, and get there just in time. You stand in the middle of the village and:
*[[QM:Scream with all your lungs "There's a monster coming!"|Scream with all your lungs "There's a monster coming!"]]
*[[QM:Stand there dumbfounded (Level 1)|Stand there dumbfounded]]

{{QM:Status|Equipment=None|Health=100|MP=10}}

Head directly to the kitchen to see what's cooking

2006-04-24T20:58:28Z

Jeetajoo:

Main Page

2006-04-24T20:57:24Z

Jeetajoo: /* (Starting Template) */

Choose Your Own Adventure is a wiki that contains stories where the reader assumes the role of the main character. In each page you chose how the story should progress. If you don't see an option that you would like to pursue, click the edit tab on the top of the page and add a new path to the page. Then you get to write in your own adventure for the hero.

__NOTOC__
==Kid Stories==
'''FOR ALL AGES:'''Please keep it G-PG. Please remove any other content that exceeds this.

==Normal Stories==
'''FOR 12+:'''Please keep it G-PG-13. Please remove any content that exceeds this.
*[[Quest of the magician]]
*[[Superdickery|Superdickery Superman Adventure]]

==Adult Stories==
'''FOR 18+:''' No limits to content.
*[[Legend of the Trailer Park]]
*[[Smutty Sex Romp]]

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{| width="100%"
|- valign="top" bgcolor="#eeffff"
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==Instructions==
===(Starting Template) ===
'''Copy and paste this for new pages:'''
<pre><nowiki>
Page text here

Do you:
*[[Adventure/Option 1]]
*[[Adventure/Option 2]]
*[[Aventure/Option 3]]
{{Status|Equipment=Equipment|Health=Health|MP=MP}}
</nowiki>
</pre>

===To edit a page===
Just click the edit tab on the top of the page

===To add an option===
<nowiki>[[Adventure name/New option name]]</nowiki>

Options that appear <font color="red">red</font> on the page have no content. Click the link, paste in the above template, and then add your own content.
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==Rules==
People have a tendency to create branches where the character dies. To prevent the story from being just a tree with all dead ends:
*for each page where you kill the character, you must create at least 2 pages (with content) where he can go on.
*whenever you fill out the last option's page, add another one so the story can go another way.
*please stick to the theme and setting of the story. Although creativity is encouraged, radical plot changes and inconsistencies will ruin the flow.
**If something is off topic, remove it.
*Make a subpage of the original adventure page when adding an option, to save space.
|}

Quest of the magician

2006-04-24T20:56:40Z

Jeetajoo:

You wake up to the smell of bacon frying in a skillet, the sound of rustling in the kitchen, and a stream of light from the window. You just had your three week sleep, something magicians do to rejuvenate their magical skills before long missions, and you are now alert and ready to face the world. Something is wrong however, as you did not expect company.

After waking up and putting on some clothing, do you:
*[[QM:Head directly to the kitchen to see what's cooking]]
*[[QM:Sneak out the window and come around to the front door]]
*[[QM:Push a small pin into your bicep]]

{{QM:Status|Equipment=None|Health=100|MP=10}}

Template:Status

2006-04-24T20:55:15Z

Jeetajoo: I hope someone who understands what they're doing can do this.

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|-
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|bgcolor="#FFB380" valign="top" width="10%"| MP
|-
| bgcolor="#FFD9BF" valign="top"| {{{Equipment}}}
| bgcolor="#FFD9BF" valign="top"| {{{Health}}}
|bgcolor="#FFD9BF" valign="top"| {{{MP}}}
|}

Template:Status

2006-04-24T20:48:11Z

Jeetajoo: Needs a few more categories

{| width="100%"
| bgcolor="#993333" valign="top" width="100%"| Status (Level 1)
|-
| bgcolor="#FFB380" valign="top" width="80%"| Equipment
| bgcolor="#FFB380" valign="top" width="10%"| Health
|bgcolor="#FFB380" valign="top" width="10%"| MP
|-
| bgcolor="#FFD9BF" valign="top"| {{{Equipment}}}
| bgcolor="#FFD9BF" valign="top"| {{{Health}}}
|bgcolor="#FFD9BF" valign="top"| {{{MP}}}
|}

Scream with all your lungs "There's a monster coming!"

2006-04-24T20:44:19Z

Jeetajoo:

Use your long-distance magic to kill the monster from here

2006-04-24T20:09:12Z

Jeetajoo: ...