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User talk:Platypus

2013-12-06T16:21:19Z

22xander:

Since this page has become rather cluttered, I've moved old discussions to the archive pages below. Feel free to leave new messages here. I'll get back to you ASAP!

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>Add new comments below. Do not add new comments to the archives.

User: Mreurotic
Date: 10/10/2013
Hey, I messaged you once before, and was now curious about something. Is there a way to find out when new pages within your story are added? I ask this because I come on weekly, and hate having to travel through every option to see if there is anything new. I was also wondering if you had your own website somewhere, and if you did, could you share it? Thank you.

P.S. If you, or anyone reading this, wanted to email me, you can at townsville_strikers@hotmail.com

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Hey, quick question: I forgot my password, and was wondering if there was anyway to recover it? if not, that's okay, was just curious. - Kanin452, 12-5-13

Thank you for the constructive criticism without being a jerk, and for not deleting my contribution. I admit that was my very first edit on the site. Your adventure is my favourite on the site so far and I may have gotten a bit carried away! - ThaneOfAss

Still new to site. I see your warning and am trying to figure out what you mean it. I'm just working on structure atm and apologize if I left out something important but i'm still working around the main structure and am not finished so please don't delete my work. My thanks, ~ MixedMojo

Hey there - just wondered if you'd like to read and/or comment on my story. Am new to the site. The story is [[The Punishment of Claire and Cassandra]]. Any tips/criticisms on the story or using the wiki would be most appreciated. [[User:Hornlarry|Hornlarry]] 00:09, 15 August 2013 (UTC)

User:creat0r
Yeah, I know I'm not the best at grammar, and I know I forgot the location in the status bar. *facepalms*

Anyways, maybe you or someone else good at grammar could review the pages I make? I don't want to impose or force you to work.
Just asking! Anyways, thank you so much for fixing my little problems. :)
User:creat0r
What do you mean? I looked over my additions and I can't see any problems.
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User:Mreurotic
Sorry if my grammar isn't up to standards. I love that story arc, yet since nothing was added for a while, I thought I could help. I can see 1 punctuation error, yet that is it. Sorry if I make mistakes.

User: Mreurotic
I do admit that I am distracted at times, often writing an addition to your things, as well as on another site trying a 'choose your own adventure' style thing with the comments. I will take into consideration your advice, and re-edit what I have put up to keep it up to your standard. I hope that you do find my writing up to standard, as part of my dream is to become a writer, and this is good experience for me to learn.

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User:RoodyPoo
Uhhh...don't delete my page. It's obviously a WIP. Let me finish it before you decide if it's good enough or not.
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User:Masterdill22
Hey, i just recieved your message about leaving my title to the category thing, and I'm somehwat confused... i dont mind if you edit them to meet the requirements, oh and also, how easy is my story to access right now since its just been created?
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Hey, sorry. How do I add my title to the category thing?

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I am just curious as to why my pages On Xozen Infection? I am very confused.If i did something wrong please inform before you delete it. *Seth Xozen*

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I apologize for misspelling "brakes" in Rampage. Thanks for the heads up. -[[User:Tower0505|Tower0505]]

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Quick question, how do I make my story available to the public? -[[User:RedJenny69|Jessica<3]]

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I wanted to try to fix the 'Hot Mom' pages that you deleted because they weren't catagorized but my first and only attempt failed so feel free to delete that attempt. I was trying to keep the original content and just add what ever it was missing but couldn't make it work. Didn't mean to side-step your authority or anything like that and apologize if it created a miss understanding. - Black Dragon 25
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Hey how do I add the title to the catagory? - Yougotmyshirt

It's great the sight has decreased the page load time. It was getting to unbearable levels. However the 20 page per hour thing is god awful. Can that be edited some how so ppl are not waiting a whole hour? Like say down to 2 or 3 per minute.--[[User:Yihman1|Yihman1]] 05:02, 20 April 2013 (UTC)

Hi, youve sent me 2 warnings on page catagorization. I'm new here, how do I do that? 6 june 2013

== alternative site? ==

Hi,

These last months the site has been unbearably slow making it practically unusable, and despite repeated contacts the site admin Rob Kohr does not seem interested in acknowledging that his quick fixes aren't real solutions. Since I see no indication on his part a comprehensive fix restoring this site to normal responsiveness is forthcoming any time soon, I'd like to ask you if you know of any other free wiki site with a no-censorship policy, Platypus? Regards, [[User:Anedwcan|Anedwcan]] 06:16, 8 July 2013 (UTC)

== Views ==

Really quick question, I can't see the amount of views I am getting per page anymore. Is this the same for everybody or did I change a setting?

Thanks, Bojangles

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Hello! Just curious about why you deleted my page. - [[User:FrozenFlamingFire|FFF]]

In regards to your last comment on my talk page, I just wanted to say that I respect that rampage is your story, and if you don't want me posting there, then just say the word; I will respect that.

I put up a couple of stories last night, one of which I found in a folder which I thought I had posted a long time ago, the other of which I wrote in a bit of a hurry. For that reason, I must have forgotten to make sure that they conformed to your preferred punctuation style, and I apologize for that.

In regard to your last comment on my talk page, allow me to say, "Thank you". You said everything I had hoped you would say, and I feel encouraged to keep writing, and to follow http://editthis.info/create_your_own_adventure/Punctuation_with_dialogue.

My academic background is in descriptive grammar, and I have since moved to work with editing, which is of course prescriptive, but I never work with fiction writing, so I haven't had cause to study use of punctuation in quotations before.

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User: Hwolin

Sorry about any grammar mistakes, I thought I had looked over it and caught them. Do you mind letting me know what I missed so I'm more aware of it next time?

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Hey it's me again. It seems that stories haven't been featured in a while. Are they chosen by the someone or can we just replace it with our own every week?

Thanks-Bojangler Aug/20/2013

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User:Darkrage6

Sorry for the way i've been acting, i'm not trying to get banned. Sometimes I don't always think before I post due to my Aspberger's Syndrome, I was out of line with what I said before and I regret it. I appreciate you showing what I did wrong with my last entry, that really helped me. So i'm going to take your advice and try and start my own story, i'll consider myself lucky if I turn out to be even half as good of a writer as you are, i'll try not to make my grammar look too sloppy. I actually did well in my English classes in college, but I guess it's not always so easy to adapt your skills at writing papers into writing stories on sites like this.
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I'll keep that in mind. Thanks. - Azmor

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Hi This is Pedobear12
Thank you for showing me how to add the category into the story, I was trying to do that, but gave up. turns out i was almost there :)
Anyway I was wondering if you could tell me how to make different lines in a single story merge.
In other words if one decision was made, how do I make the lines merge with a bit down the line decisions of a different set.
What I am getting at is that if you choose a path it may lead to being captured or death.
if you choose the other path one of the decisions in that path could have the same result.
So instead of retyping it, I want to know how to direct the page to that same ending, especially if I think that ending was writen well?
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Hey this is Gaydude, I'm new with all these things, I have the basics like making a page and stuff down. Don't know a thing about adding the category thingy and also about merging parts of the story.

== Incomplete pages /options/status bar/category from the previous page. ==

Hey thanks for the feedback. I am fairly new to this site and don't yet know how to make new pages, add choices or add category bar. I don't mean to leave the story on a limb, it's just I don't know how to add options and selections. Could you message me and explain these to me if it's not too much trouble.

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EDIT: Interesting how the masculine/feminine forms persist from the the word's French roots. I didn't know that!

I dont know how to create the page with a catagory how do i do that? 22xander

Go to the man

2013-11-01T01:32:45Z

22xander: Created page with 'You go willingly into the mans arms, it seems this is ware the dog was from. He brings you inside along with all the other dogs and places you in a pen with some other dogs. You'…'

You go willingly into the mans arms, it seems this is ware the dog was from. He brings you inside along with all the other dogs and places you in a pen with some other dogs. You're looking around the pen when you smell something funny coming from one of the dogs. this dog don't have the thing you have between your legs, it is more like what you used to have as a girl. Instinct comes in as the thing between your legs elongates and you put your for paws on her. You enter her and her pussy tightens around your knot. You're kept as a breeding dog the rest of your natural life. Forgetting your life as a girl forevermore.

Lick off the peanut-butter

2013-11-01T01:22:44Z

22xander: Created page with 'You remember that peanut-butter is your favored treat so you start to lick her lower body clean of peanut-butter. It seams to be concentrated near her privets. As you lick inside…'

You remember that peanut-butter is your favored treat so you start to lick her lower body clean of peanut-butter. It seams to be concentrated near her privets. As you lick inside of her folds she shudders with pleasure and a new treat seams to be seeping from within her. It's good so you continue to lick and it continues to come out. After some time she pushes you off, it seems its done for today. But wait she's hugging you now and the thing in between your legs begins to elongate. She strokes it and it feels so good that you don't resist. She now puts her mouth on it and it pulsates with pleasure. Something's coming out of it and your sister is gulping it down mouthful by mouthful. Once you're done she gets up smiling. You'r relationship has changed dramatically, you continue in this happiness for years until the doggy body dies and you rise to heaven with his sole.

Go up to your sister's room

2013-11-01T01:04:07Z

22xander: Created page with 'You look around your sister's room seeing the familiar bed and stuff all around. You than see your sister sitting on her bed, naked. She seems to have spilled peanut-butter all o…'

You look around your sister's room seeing the familiar bed and stuff all around. You than see your sister sitting on her bed, naked. She seems to have spilled peanut-butter all over herself. You decide to...

*[[lick off the peanut-butter]]

*[[leave her room]]

Stay there wagging your tail hoping for the best

2013-11-01T00:53:39Z

22xander: Created page with 'As you sit their your whole family gathers inculcating your dad, mom, and older sister. You hear them discus what to do with you, a dog they found on their porch. Your sister con…'

As you sit their your whole family gathers inculcating your dad, mom, and older sister. You hear them discus what to do with you, a dog they found on their porch. Your sister convinces your parents to wait and see if a flier will bring your owner and if not to keep you. The dog's owner never came and you lived for a month when you decide to...

*[[go to the backyard]]

*[[go up to your sister's room]]

Go down the ally the dog was going to.

2013-11-01T00:31:01Z

22xander:

You look down the ally hoping that there might be something interesting for a pup like you. When you reach the end of the ally you find a man waiting their with open arms and several dogs around him. As you think fast you decide to...

*[[go to the man]]

*[[run away down the ally]]

Go down the ally the dog was going to.

2013-11-01T00:29:46Z

22xander: Created page with 'You look down the ally hoping that there might be something interesting for a pup like you. When you reach the end of the ally you find a man waiting their with open arms and sev…'

Follow your parents back to your house.

2013-11-01T00:23:56Z

22xander: Created page with 'You think that it would be nice to go home and see your house so you follow your now distant parents. The home is as good as ever but you decide that it would not be best to frig…'

You think that it would be nice to go home and see your house so you follow your now distant parents. The home is as good as ever but you decide that it would not be best to frighten your parents tonight so you just sleep on the porch. The next morning you wake up to see your father looking down at you and you momentarily forget that your a dog. But soon you remember and decide what you should do for the remainder of your puppy life. You...

*[[stay there wagging your tail hoping for the best]]

*[[run away afraid that your dad will send you to the pound]]

Possess the dog

2013-11-01T00:16:10Z

22xander: Created page with 'You feel something strange in between your legs, something that wasn't their before. It swings a little as you walk and feels odd. you lay down and lay onto your back to see it p…'

You feel something strange in between your legs, something that wasn't their before. It swings a little as you walk and feels odd. you lay down and lay onto your back to see it properly. It looks kind of like what the boy in your class in between his legs, you saw when the two of you played doctor at his house. You roll back deciding that you would learn more later on. Now you...

*[[follow your parents back to your house.]]

*[[go down the ally the dog was going to.]]

Remember all the ghost moves you've seen and go a'haunting

2013-11-01T00:01:10Z

22xander:

The first thing you do is...

*[[go around town, going through walls, and generally exploring]]

*[[try to possess the robed man]]

*try to [[possess the dog]] you saw just before you, um, died.

Try to possess the robed man

2013-10-31T23:58:35Z

22xander:

== BAD END ==
The robed man is a priest and he banishes you to a hell unimaginably horrible in witch you stay tormented forever.

Get reincarnated
[http://editthis.info/create_your_own_adventure/%2BInfinity]

Remember all the ghost moves you've seen and go a'haunting

2013-10-31T23:56:40Z

22xander:

The first thing you do is...

*[[go around town, going through walls, and generally exploring]]

*[[try to possess the robed man]]

*[[try to possess the dog you saw just before]]

Female Kiddie Death

2013-10-31T23:56:00Z

22xander:

You look around and see your parents. They're weeping as you run to them pleading for them to stop saying that your alright, but they cant hear you. You suddenly face the fact that you'r dead and start weeping near your parents. As they leave you get up and...

*[[follow them home]]

*[[decide to go on]]

*[[remember all the ghost moves you've seen and go a'haunting]]

Try to possess the robed man

2013-10-31T23:52:01Z

22xander: Created page with '== BAD END == The robed man is a priest and he banishes you to a hell unimaginably horrible in witch you stay tormented forever.'

== BAD END ==
The robed man is a priest and he banishes you to a hell unimaginably horrible in witch you stay tormented forever.

Remember all the ghost moves you've seen and go a'haunting

2013-10-31T23:49:15Z

22xander: Created page with 'The first thing you do is... -go around town, going through walls, and generally exploring -try to possess the robed man -[[try to possess the dog you saw just before]…'

The first thing you do is...

-[[go around town, going through walls, and generally exploring]]

-[[try to possess the robed man]]

-[[try to possess the dog you saw just before]]

Female Kiddie Death

2013-10-31T23:41:57Z

22xander: Created page with 'You look around and see your parents. They're weeping as you run to them pleading for them to stop saying that your alright, but they cant hear you. You suddenly face the fact th…'

You look around and see your parents. They're weeping as you run to them pleading for them to stop saying that your alright, but they cant hear you. You suddenly face the fact that you'r dead and start weeping near your parents. As they leave you get up and...

-[[follow them home]]

-[[decide to go on]]

-[[remember all the ghost moves you've seen and go a'haunting]]