Walk up to him and say hi

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He looks at you puzzled and says, "H-Hi." Then he turns around and goes to another part of the store, but curious and cautious you follow him. He slightly turns his head and sees you following him. He takes a chance and turns around. "Is there something you need?" he asks you.
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He looks at her puzzled and says, "H-Hi." Then he turns around and goes to another part of the store, but curious and cautious Crimson follows him. He slightly turns his head and sees her walking behind him. He takes a chance and turns around to face her. "Is there something you need?" he asks her.
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"No," you tell him. "It's just that you look nervous and it seems weird to be nervous and unhappy on such a beautiful day."
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"No," she tells him. "It's just that you look nervous and it seems weird to be nervous and unhappy on such a beautiful day."
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"Whether I'm happy or nervous shouldn't concern you at all," he says, avoiding your eyes.
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"Whether I'm happy or nervous shouldn't concern you at all," he says, avoiding her eyes.
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"I guess it doesn't, but you still shouldn't go around on days like this sighing like that. If you do, bits of your happiness and fortune will come out."  
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"I guess it doesn't, but you still shouldn't go around on days like this sighing like that. If you do, bits of your happiness and fortune will be blown out."  
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The boy seems amused by your superstitious beliefs and says, "Okay, I won't sigh like that anymore if you tell me your name. I'm Nelo."
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The boy seems amused by her superstitious beliefs and says, "Okay, I won't sigh like that anymore if you tell me your name. I'm Nelo."
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"Nelo." You say trying his name out. You look at him and see that he is looking back at you expecting you to tell him your name. Even though you know it's not a good idea to hand out your name to anybody you walk up to you figure since there is no way you'll ever meet each other again you say, "My name is Crimson." and you shake hands.
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"Nelo," she says, trying his name out. She looks at him and sees that he is looking back at her. Expecting her to tell him her name. Even though she knows it's not a good idea to hand out her name to someone she's just walked up to, she figures since there is no way they'll ever meet each other again she says, "My name is Crimson."
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"Crimson," he says, trying out your name this time. He smiles, but it is quickly replaced with a look of tired frustration as he turns around and looks passed Crimson at someone walking towards them. Crimson follows his gaze and turns around. She hadn't heard him come in and began to feel very suspicious.
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"Hey Nel!" Calls the tall pale, white beautiful man swiftly and gracefully advance toward them. Nelo mutters something, that sounds like an explicit, in answer the mans greeting. The man reaches Nelo and Crimson in barely any time at all. Making Crimson even more suspicous.
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She...
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[[Tries to secretly expose the man as a vampire]]
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[[Decides to watch him very carefully]]

Current revision as of 22:36, 3 July 2009

He looks at her puzzled and says, "H-Hi." Then he turns around and goes to another part of the store, but curious and cautious Crimson follows him. He slightly turns his head and sees her walking behind him. He takes a chance and turns around to face her. "Is there something you need?" he asks her.

"No," she tells him. "It's just that you look nervous and it seems weird to be nervous and unhappy on such a beautiful day."

"Whether I'm happy or nervous shouldn't concern you at all," he says, avoiding her eyes.

"I guess it doesn't, but you still shouldn't go around on days like this sighing like that. If you do, bits of your happiness and fortune will be blown out."

The boy seems amused by her superstitious beliefs and says, "Okay, I won't sigh like that anymore if you tell me your name. I'm Nelo."

"Nelo," she says, trying his name out. She looks at him and sees that he is looking back at her. Expecting her to tell him her name. Even though she knows it's not a good idea to hand out her name to someone she's just walked up to, she figures since there is no way they'll ever meet each other again she says, "My name is Crimson."

"Crimson," he says, trying out your name this time. He smiles, but it is quickly replaced with a look of tired frustration as he turns around and looks passed Crimson at someone walking towards them. Crimson follows his gaze and turns around. She hadn't heard him come in and began to feel very suspicious.

"Hey Nel!" Calls the tall pale, white beautiful man swiftly and gracefully advance toward them. Nelo mutters something, that sounds like an explicit, in answer the mans greeting. The man reaches Nelo and Crimson in barely any time at all. Making Crimson even more suspicous.

She...

Tries to secretly expose the man as a vampire

Decides to watch him very carefully

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