Talk:Oops! You're Naked!
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(Flex, time to impress. Come and climb in my bed. Don't be shy, do your thing. It's all in my head.)
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Revision as of 21:26, 7 July 2016
You know, we never got the reason for why she was here or what she was here for. I assume that it's for vacation but vacation from what job? What is she here for? Where is she, anyway? What are Shoreline Communities? Is there a actual city where this takes place? Is she at bloody home? Is that really what's happening here?
Really? We don't even get a description beyond her chest, hips, or hair? Hell, we don't even get anything more then hair length! For fuck's sake, the "looking into a mirror to provide a description of the protagonist" thing is used very, very often in books but come on, no one even tried...
Is opening the window an option? It might not help but it's a more logical option then, say, becoming a fucking superhero!
Alright, she has-blue! She has blue eyes! And, erm- blonde! Blonde hair! There! SOMETHING to work with!
