The Adventures of Pinaria
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| + | The original intro to my story got kind of hard for me to write so I decided to rewrite it. You may find the original pieces of what I had originally planned. Instead of having you play as uncle Flynn for a few choices. I decided to start the story off with Flynn telling his tale to a group of children. Uncle Flynn is basically a story teller in the lower industrial part of the grand city of Orioli. I'm going to go and try this new intro and see how it works out. | ||
"Once upon a time, in a land that is hidden by the Eastern Sea Wall that blocks the view of the ocean. A stretch of land that is yet unknown by the touchesof our own hands. Where a man was more valuable than a Clanker. The air hasn't been clouded from the smokes of the factories. Where trees grow in numbers to hide the riches. The same riches we had plundered to nothing but ashes or pebbles. A world full adventure, mystery, riches, and dangers. A world that is yet far more perfect than the Royal Kingdoms of Orioli. A stretch of land that could make kings and queens alike vaults full of gold to the end of time. This.......Pinaria." said Flynn | "Once upon a time, in a land that is hidden by the Eastern Sea Wall that blocks the view of the ocean. A stretch of land that is yet unknown by the touchesof our own hands. Where a man was more valuable than a Clanker. The air hasn't been clouded from the smokes of the factories. Where trees grow in numbers to hide the riches. The same riches we had plundered to nothing but ashes or pebbles. A world full adventure, mystery, riches, and dangers. A world that is yet far more perfect than the Royal Kingdoms of Orioli. A stretch of land that could make kings and queens alike vaults full of gold to the end of time. This.......Pinaria." said Flynn | ||
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"Because I was there." | "Because I was there." | ||
| + | You were on the other side of the room. Trying to think. Uncle Flynn's story wasn't helping you right at this second. You probably heard this story about the fifty time. Maybe more, but you didn't kept count. You tried to summarize the story in your thought so it might actually help you think some more. | ||
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| + | Uncle Flynn went across the giant cliff barrier known as the Eastern Sea Wall. Expanding over hundreds of feet high and probably hundreds of feet thick. You couldn't tell because you didn't see the endless expanding Eastern sea beyond the wall. The reason why nobody went across the wall by air ships anymore. Because those who went over | ||
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Revision as of 16:44, 10 May 2013
The Adventures of Pinaria Vol. I
The original intro to my story got kind of hard for me to write so I decided to rewrite it. You may find the original pieces of what I had originally planned. Instead of having you play as uncle Flynn for a few choices. I decided to start the story off with Flynn telling his tale to a group of children. Uncle Flynn is basically a story teller in the lower industrial part of the grand city of Orioli. I'm going to go and try this new intro and see how it works out.
"Once upon a time, in a land that is hidden by the Eastern Sea Wall that blocks the view of the ocean. A stretch of land that is yet unknown by the touchesof our own hands. Where a man was more valuable than a Clanker. The air hasn't been clouded from the smokes of the factories. Where trees grow in numbers to hide the riches. The same riches we had plundered to nothing but ashes or pebbles. A world full adventure, mystery, riches, and dangers. A world that is yet far more perfect than the Royal Kingdoms of Orioli. A stretch of land that could make kings and queens alike vaults full of gold to the end of time. This.......Pinaria." said Flynn
The children around him start to move in closer to hear his tale.
"Pinaria." continued Flynn, "A world where someone like all of you could become something greater. You could go serve as an apprentice under a Mage. Or even a wizard himself. You could also become the mightiest warrior ever known to be heard of. That could possibly destroy armies before you. You could also become a well known Rogue or Ranger that could shoot a War Balloon out of the sky. You can become anyone in this new world."
"Umm, Mr. Flynn." asked a child.
"Yes, child?" asked Flynn.
"How do you know its real?" asked the child again.
"Because I was there."
You were on the other side of the room. Trying to think. Uncle Flynn's story wasn't helping you right at this second. You probably heard this story about the fifty time. Maybe more, but you didn't kept count. You tried to summarize the story in your thought so it might actually help you think some more.
Uncle Flynn went across the giant cliff barrier known as the Eastern Sea Wall. Expanding over hundreds of feet high and probably hundreds of feet thick. You couldn't tell because you didn't see the endless expanding Eastern sea beyond the wall. The reason why nobody went across the wall by air ships anymore. Because those who went over
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