An Adventurous and Magical Tale

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Your friend Dexter wakes you. You're feeling very grumpy. You were dreaming of sweet chocolate pouring from a majestic waterfall while flowers made of pistachio nuts and marshmallows called out to be eaten.
Your friend Dexter wakes you. You're feeling very grumpy. You were dreaming of sweet chocolate pouring from a majestic waterfall while flowers made of pistachio nuts and marshmallows called out to be eaten.
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You wake up in your grand room. As the great King Mackee's royal magician, you are provided with a luxurious life. However, today you aren't feeling too comfortable. Getting out of your silky giant bed with its thirty fluffy pillows is always hard. Today it was four times as difficult.  
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You wake up in your grand room. As the great King Mackee's royal magician, you are provided with a luxurious life. However, today you aren't feeling too comfortable. Getting out of your silky giant bed with its thirty fluffy pillows is always hard. Today it is four times as difficult.  
Dexter, the king's royal chef, knows you are not to be disturbed before lunch.  
Dexter, the king's royal chef, knows you are not to be disturbed before lunch.  
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''What are you waking me at this hour'', you grumble at him.  
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''What are you waking me at this hour for?'', you grumble at him.  
Dexter laughs, ''You forgot? It's the day of the great feast! The king insists the whole kingdom should start preparing for tonight as soon as possible!''
Dexter laughs, ''You forgot? It's the day of the great feast! The king insists the whole kingdom should start preparing for tonight as soon as possible!''

Revision as of 19:16, 11 January 2012

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Your friend Dexter wakes you. You're feeling very grumpy. You were dreaming of sweet chocolate pouring from a majestic waterfall while flowers made of pistachio nuts and marshmallows called out to be eaten.

You wake up in your grand room. As the great King Mackee's royal magician, you are provided with a luxurious life. However, today you aren't feeling too comfortable. Getting out of your silky giant bed with its thirty fluffy pillows is always hard. Today it is four times as difficult.

Dexter, the king's royal chef, knows you are not to be disturbed before lunch.

What are you waking me at this hour for?, you grumble at him.

Dexter laughs, You forgot? It's the day of the great feast! The king insists the whole kingdom should start preparing for tonight as soon as possible!

You turn Dexter into a pony

You turn Dexter into a sumptuous breakfast

You roll out of bed

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