User talk:Yihman1
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Please try to properly punctuate your work. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 00:54, 29 June 2011 (UTC) | Please try to properly punctuate your work. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 00:54, 29 June 2011 (UTC) | ||
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| + | You have good plot ideas, but you are seriously undermining your work with poor grammar, especially when you fail to punctuate dialogue properly. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 14:33, 30 June 2011 (UTC) | ||
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Please make sure you include the category and status bar on the pages you post. --Platypus 15:45, 3 June 2011 (UTC)
Please try to work with the existing style of the story. The other pages in the story do not have underlines or name the page links with question marks. --Platypus 15:58, 4 June 2011 (UTC)
Please try to properly punctuate your work. --Platypus 00:54, 29 June 2011 (UTC)
You have good plot ideas, but you are seriously undermining your work with poor grammar, especially when you fail to punctuate dialogue properly. --Platypus 14:33, 30 June 2011 (UTC)
