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I fixed some of the grammar on [[Kelly gets caught by Dan]], but there is still a problem with the last sentence, and I am not sure how to fix. Please check [[Talk:Kelly gets caught by Dan]] for my feedback. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 02:41, 15 March 2016 (UTC) | I fixed some of the grammar on [[Kelly gets caught by Dan]], but there is still a problem with the last sentence, and I am not sure how to fix. Please check [[Talk:Kelly gets caught by Dan]] for my feedback. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 02:41, 15 March 2016 (UTC) | ||
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| + | I think the problem is, my writing style is very different, and my perspective is different. I am a girl, so I write from that perspective (Although aimed towards male readers), so my language and methods of description is different. I would worry I am changing too much of your content, that is why I just tried to fix some specific grammar issues and clarify a little, rather than rewriting it.--[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:22, 15 March 2016 (UTC) | ||
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Please make sure to include the title of the story as a category on each page you post. If you don't know how to add categories, please review the Tutorial, especially Basic page format.--Platypus 18:58, 2 March 2016 (UTC)
Sorry to bother you but why is the CYOA or CYOS in third-person point of view instead of second-person point of view? Also, Do you mind if I edit this as well? Just as help. Also, sorry for the later edits. (Time Travel.)-User:Fredhot16
Erm, I just saw your latest edit. Are you sure you want to keep the second option and not change it into something that doesn't sound like the reader had missed out a on lot? I mean, are you trying to say that NOTHING else might have happened that day? The whole day was a waste?-User:Fredhot16
So is it just a team of three or are there more that don't have names?-User:Fredhot16
Dirty Me's talk
I fixed some of the grammar on Kelly gets caught by Dan, but there is still a problem with the last sentence, and I am not sure how to fix. Please check Talk:Kelly gets caught by Dan for my feedback. --Dirty Me 02:41, 15 March 2016 (UTC)
I think the problem is, my writing style is very different, and my perspective is different. I am a girl, so I write from that perspective (Although aimed towards male readers), so my language and methods of description is different. I would worry I am changing too much of your content, that is why I just tried to fix some specific grammar issues and clarify a little, rather than rewriting it.--Dirty Me 08:22, 15 March 2016 (UTC)
