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The following are abandoned stories from the pit that are planned to be incorporated into a larger story. Feel free to help create and contribute (but keep in mind that I will be harsh in editing your page if it's erroneous in grammar, voice, and formatting). Talk to me if you want to edit or have further questions. Thank you :) --Completionist 18:02, 15 April 2014 (UTC)

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Contents 1 Integrated Stories 2 Unintegrated Stories, by Category: 3 Red-links Section List 4 Priority Pages 5 Clean-up 6 Comments/Concerns/Compliments/Criticisms: "C-Section"

Integrated Stories

See Category: The Abandoned Timeline [[1]]

Unintegrated Stories, by Category:

• numbers in "()" indicate the original number of content in the particular story. Those without either have an unknown count of pages or have already been integrated into the story.

Adventure:

• Adventure

Jobs:

• The Grand Plan(8)

Magical Misc:

• The Magic Rope(6)
• Fri's Quest Pt. 1(8)

Random/Anything can happen:

• So much random ya?(7)

Mystery:

• Window(7)

Misc:

• BOOM! (1)

Red-links Section List

This is the place where we leave out a few red-links in a story for other people to branch out from. Note: The link will consist of the page containing the red-link, not the red-link itself. This will help whoever is writing to stay consistent with the details and formatting.

Planet Creator:

• PC:Add an ocean
• PC:Heat it up
• PC:Add some mountains
• PC:Adjust the atmosphere
• PC:Fastforward in Time

The Lost City of Atlantice:

• Accept his challenge
• Run through the trees to the ocean > jump > water
• You sleep in

The Adventures of Sid:

• Float down a river in a box. > waterfall scene
• Sid/Be bored > dress up choice
• Sid/Punchopen > do nothing choice
• Sid/HBored > hospital leave (transition to Sid/Explore)
• Sid/Bandages > sit there branch

Adventure and Town of Barrhead:

• ToB/Main St.

The Rush to Class:

• Tell a teacher > 2: further branching; Enchanted Carrot discovery
• Ask to move lockers > 2: further branching; Enchanted Carrot discovery
• TRTC/Locker > Enchanted Carrot intro
• Bananas
• TRTC/Female > Female POV, (conquering bullying build-up)
• TRTC/Male > Male POV (Mystery build-up)
• Go to your first class > Janitor POV (Air freshen branch)
• Wake up in 1 hour > Janitor POV (teacher branches)
• TRTC/Tito > note: consecutive pgs from here down
• Grab the bag and run
• Hurry and stuff it in your pocket
• Ask principle for a band-aid
• Go home and skip detention all together

A Random Adventure:

• a random adventure
• a random adventure/push wall
• a random adventure/waitfordeath

Priority Pages

These pages have recently been categorized into the story and are in priority of editing before others:

Sid

• Sid/Magic > continue ground pound intro;leave open branch magic
• Sid/The Sea > home, negative, no-adventure option
• Sid/The Border
• Sid/Sky > Team-up with John Sky
• Sid/Kids

The Rush to Class

• TRTC/Home

Clean-up

Quick-edits: Non-red-linked pages, but are in need of content/ grammar fixes/ options that don't end up in death.

• TRTC/Cafe
• Turn to page 18.

Comments/Concerns/Compliments/Criticisms: "C-Section"

Put on here whatever discussion on the story you want to talk about.