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Still working on some of my main story lines, and haven't got to some of the tragedy yet, but hopefully my story is ok so far. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 18:42, 28 February 2014 (UTC) | Still working on some of my main story lines, and haven't got to some of the tragedy yet, but hopefully my story is ok so far. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 18:42, 28 February 2014 (UTC) | ||
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| + | As [[User:Teejay|Teejay]] expressed earlier; you're an excellent writer. The choices in your story are varied, allowing for different interractions between the characters and the option of avoiding erotic scenes, while at the same time never straying too far from the main plot. With just the right amount of details, the reader is able to get a clear picture of the places and characters. | ||
| + | To sum it up; I think it's more than just 'ok'. I think it's looking very good and, like earlier, I hope to see more of it. --[[User:ArthurKung|ArthurKung]] 20:08, 28 February 2014 (UTC) | ||
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Please make sure to include the title of the story as a category on each page you post. If you don't know how to add categories, please review the Tutorial, especially Basic page format.--Platypus 20:26, 17 September 2012 (UTC)
Also, at least is two words, not one word!
Second warning. Uncategorized pages will be edited or deleted.--Platypus 19:35, 23 September 2012 (UTC)
Final warning. Your uncategorized pages are now being deleted. If you continue to post uncategorized pages, you will be banned from the site.--Platypus 23:59, 3 November 2012 (UTC)
Hey, thanks for you contributions to my story You Are An Orc. But if you could please have more than one decision at the end of each page, that would be really cool. Thanks. - Kanin452 Jan 23, 2014
If you're going to contribute to one of my stories, such as Rampage, you need to use proper grammar and punctuation. Please review punctuation with dialogue before posting again. --Platypus 22:24, 15 February 2014 (UTC)
So, hopefully ok so far
Still working on some of my main story lines, and haven't got to some of the tragedy yet, but hopefully my story is ok so far. --Dirty Me 18:42, 28 February 2014 (UTC)
As Teejay expressed earlier; you're an excellent writer. The choices in your story are varied, allowing for different interractions between the characters and the option of avoiding erotic scenes, while at the same time never straying too far from the main plot. With just the right amount of details, the reader is able to get a clear picture of the places and characters. To sum it up; I think it's more than just 'ok'. I think it's looking very good and, like earlier, I hope to see more of it. --ArthurKung 20:08, 28 February 2014 (UTC)
