Tell her The truth

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"My-My?" Her heavenly voice tries to get your attention.
"My-My?" Her heavenly voice tries to get your attention.
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But all you could mumble was:
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But all you could mumble was: "This adventure is the problem. If I refuse the call, I could let my family die, but if I accept this fate, I could get killed and die in vain."
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"I hope I don't get killed"
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Claudia: WHAT?! Why would you think Iris would ever let such a thing happen?
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"WHAT?!" Claudia jumped up and sat in the space between passager and driver.
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You respond bitterly. "Because we're her soldiers and that's what soldiers do! They die!"
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"Why would you think Iris would ever let such a thing happen?"
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Your mom hits you!
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You hissed and looked away from her glowing presence then responded bitterly. "Because we're her soldiers and that's what soldiers do! They die!"
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Mom: This is exactly why your school is about to call social services on me, talking about that scrap to your self!
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You felt an adult hand hit the back of your head. Through the angel's glow you barely see your mother's angry expression.
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Mom says. "This is exactly why your school is about to call social services on me, talking about that crap to your self!"
Myona: SO keep talking to myself anout other stuff?
Myona: SO keep talking to myself anout other stuff?
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Mom: NO STOP talking to yourself about ANYTHING! Geez... just crazy like your father.....
Mom: NO STOP talking to yourself about ANYTHING! Geez... just crazy like your father.....
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Claudia: I'm sorry My-My.
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Claudia pouts "I'm sorry My-My."
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Since Claudia appeared you have been talking to yourself more than usual. Before, you use to write about subjects adults consider taboo to teens. Instead of just discussing it with you, your teachers reported these 'disturbing' to your parents and authorize you to go to therapy. Now with Iris, you've become worst.
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Myona mumbles: I cant talk to you right now.
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You mumble: I cant talk to you right now.
Mom: mumble mumble mumble! Mumble!
Mom: mumble mumble mumble! Mumble!
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You get an irriated look on your face as you yelled. "Fine! I'll stop!"
You get an irriated look on your face as you yelled. "Fine! I'll stop!"
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Claudia: Well, I'll talk and you listen. Iris is a kind and thoughtful person, and she wouldn't throw you in war to die.Trust me she's told me herself that she would help all of us be absolutely safe.  
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Claudia: Well, I'll talk and you listen. Iris is a kind and thoughtful person, and she wouldn't throw you in war to die.Trust me she's told me herself that she would help all of us be absolutely safe. Besides, we're going to be magical! And we're going to have a fun time and meet new and..!
Myona: *about to say something*
Myona: *about to say something*

Revision as of 14:14, 1 July 2012

You wanted to tell Claudia every single thought that was going through your head, the mental images that was tearing at your soul.

"My-My?" Her heavenly voice tries to get your attention.

But all you could mumble was: "This adventure is the problem. If I refuse the call, I could let my family die, but if I accept this fate, I could get killed and die in vain."

"WHAT?!" Claudia jumped up and sat in the space between passager and driver.

"Why would you think Iris would ever let such a thing happen?"

You hissed and looked away from her glowing presence then responded bitterly. "Because we're her soldiers and that's what soldiers do! They die!"

You felt an adult hand hit the back of your head. Through the angel's glow you barely see your mother's angry expression.

Mom says. "This is exactly why your school is about to call social services on me, talking about that crap to your self!"

Myona: SO keep talking to myself anout other stuff?

Mom: NO STOP talking to yourself about ANYTHING! Geez... just crazy like your father.....

Claudia pouts "I'm sorry My-My." Since Claudia appeared you have been talking to yourself more than usual. Before, you use to write about subjects adults consider taboo to teens. Instead of just discussing it with you, your teachers reported these 'disturbing' to your parents and authorize you to go to therapy. Now with Iris, you've become worst.

You mumble: I cant talk to you right now.

Mom: mumble mumble mumble! Mumble! You get an irriated look on your face as you yelled. "Fine! I'll stop!"

Claudia: Well, I'll talk and you listen. Iris is a kind and thoughtful person, and she wouldn't throw you in war to die.Trust me she's told me herself that she would help all of us be absolutely safe. Besides, we're going to be magical! And we're going to have a fun time and meet new and..!

Myona: *about to say something*

Claudia: Don't WORRY. Have some faith!

WHAT DO YOU SAY TO HER?!

* You're glasses are far too Rosy for this world

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Relationship with Claudia has increased

MP Year 1
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