Keep talking/boy (Lil)

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"My sister is sitting over there," he points to the back of the bus.  The girl has dark black hair with streaks of blonde. She has on thick eyeliner and has the hood of her jacket pulled over her head. "Her name's Emily."
"My sister is sitting over there," he points to the back of the bus.  The girl has dark black hair with streaks of blonde. She has on thick eyeliner and has the hood of her jacket pulled over her head. "Her name's Emily."
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''I see... hey! You two want to come meet my friends? They're real nice.''
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"I see... hey! You two want to come meet my friends? They're real nice."
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''Sure! We'd love to! Right Emily?''
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"Sure! We'd love to! Right Emily?"
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''Sure. Whatever.''
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"Sure. Whatever," she shrugged.
The bus comes to a stop and you get off.
The bus comes to a stop and you get off.

Current revision as of 02:08, 20 January 2011

"So you new here?"

"Yeah."

"Cool"

"My sister is sitting over there," he points to the back of the bus. The girl has dark black hair with streaks of blonde. She has on thick eyeliner and has the hood of her jacket pulled over her head. "Her name's Emily."

"I see... hey! You two want to come meet my friends? They're real nice."

"Sure! We'd love to! Right Emily?"

"Sure. Whatever," she shrugged.

The bus comes to a stop and you get off.

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