He beats on you

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His fist slams into the gut. You gasp as pain rakes through your body, unable to breath, you try to squirm away but your dad is too strong.
His fist slams into the gut. You gasp as pain rakes through your body, unable to breath, you try to squirm away but your dad is too strong.
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you finally manege to suck in some air, before he hits you in the shoulder, the boob, gut, chest, side jaw. Your head snaps back at his last blow and you let out a cry of absolute agony when he breaks your arm with his bear hands.
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you finally manege to suck in some air, before he hits you in the shoulder, the boob, gut, chest, side, jaw. Your head snaps back at his last blow and you let out a cry of absolute agony when he breaks your arm with his bear hands.
You lose consciousness.  
You lose consciousness.  

Current revision as of 00:10, 20 May 2018

His fist slams into the gut. You gasp as pain rakes through your body, unable to breath, you try to squirm away but your dad is too strong.

you finally manege to suck in some air, before he hits you in the shoulder, the boob, gut, chest, side, jaw. Your head snaps back at his last blow and you let out a cry of absolute agony when he breaks your arm with his bear hands.

You lose consciousness.

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