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		+	*[[Keep walking to find the end of the forest]] > Join Sky
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	'''[[A random adventure|A Random Adventure]]'''		'''[[A random adventure|A Random Adventure]]'''

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The following are abandoned stories from the pit that are planned to be incorporated into a larger story. Feel free to help create and contribute (but keep in mind that I will be harsh in editing your page if it's erroneous in grammar, voice, and formatting). Talk to me if you want to edit or have further questions. Thank you :) --Completionist 18:02, 15 April 2014 (UTC)

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Contents 1 Integrated Stories 2 Red-links Section List 3 Priority Pages 4 Clean-up 5 Comments/Concerns/Compliments/Criticisms: "C-Section"

Integrated Stories

See Category: The Abandoned Timeline [[1]]

Red-links Section List

This is the place where we leave out a few red-links in a story for other people to branch out from. Note: The link will consist of the page containing the red-link, not the red-link itself. This will help whoever is writing to stay consistent with the details and formatting.

Planet Creator

• PC:Add an ocean
• PC:Heat it up
• PC:Add some mountains
• PC:Adjust the atmosphere
• PC:Fastforward in Time

The Lost City of Atlantice

• TLCA/Believe > Negotiate branch
• TLCA/Don’t Believe > Atlantice Branch
• Run through the trees to the ocean > jump > water
• You sleep in

The Adventures of Sid

• Float down a river in a box. > waterfall scene
• Sid/Magic = magic branch left open

The Rush To Class

• Tell a teacher > 2: further branching; Enchanted Carrot discovery
• Ask to move lockers > 2: further branching; Enchanted Carrot discovery
• TRTC/Locker > Enchanted Carrot intro
• Bananas
• TRTC/Female > Female POV, (conquering bullying build-up)
• TRTC/Male > Male POV (Mystery build-up)
• Go to your first class > Janitor POV (Air freshen branch)
• Wake up in 1 hour > Janitor POV (teacher branches)
• Hurry and stuff it in your pocket > cleanup and add content
• Ask principle for a band-aid > detention branch

Adventure

• Go to town
• Go inside the log house
• Ad/Opposite > Ignore/Talk to Sid
• Keep walking to find the end of the forest > Join Sky

A Random Adventure

• a random adventure
• a random adventure/push wall
• a random adventure/waitfordeath

So much random ya?

• SMRY?/Team Work

Town of Barrhead

• ToB/Main St.

Priority Pages

These pages have already have branches planned out and are in priority of editing before others:

Sid

• Sid/Head out > wear normal smelly fur and sleep(bored end)
• Sid/The Beach > swim: get dragged into Atlantice
• Sid/GP Sloth Guard > cave, castle

The Rush to Class

• TRTC/Apology > go home and feel bad. Cry yourself to sleep
• TRTC/Megan Talk > nod: be my friend > good friends

Mystery:

• Rock > 3 opts; 1 true
• 29239 > Climb out and?

Clean-up

Quick-edits: Non-red-linked pages, but are in need of content/ grammar fixes/ options that don't end up in death.

Comments/Concerns/Compliments/Criticisms: "C-Section"

Put on here whatever discussion on the story you want to talk about.