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-	*[[Sid/Magic]] > continue ground pound intro;leave open branch magic	+	*[[Sid/Head out]] > wear normal smelly fur and sleep(bored end)
-	*[[Sid/The Sea]] > home, negative, no-adventure option	+
-	*[[Sid/The Border]] > can't enter the border bc too dangerous	+
	*[[Sid/The Beach]] > swim: get dragged into Atlantice		*[[Sid/The Beach]] > swim: get dragged into Atlantice

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The following are abandoned stories from the pit that are planned to be incorporated into a larger story. Feel free to help create and contribute (but keep in mind that I will be harsh in editing your page if it's erroneous in grammar, voice, and formatting). Talk to me if you want to edit or have further questions. Thank you :) --Completionist 18:02, 15 April 2014 (UTC)

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Contents 1 Integrated Stories 2 Unintegrated Stories, by Category 3 Red-links Section List 4 Priority Pages 5 Clean-up 6 Comments/Concerns/Compliments/Criticisms: "C-Section"

Integrated Stories

See Category: The Abandoned Timeline [[1]]

Unintegrated Stories, by Category

• numbers in "()" indicate the original number of content in the particular story. Those without either have an unknown count of pages or have already been integrated into the story.

Mystery:

• Window

Red-links Section List

This is the place where we leave out a few red-links in a story for other people to branch out from. Note: The link will consist of the page containing the red-link, not the red-link itself. This will help whoever is writing to stay consistent with the details and formatting.

Planet Creator:

• PC:Add an ocean
• PC:Heat it up
• PC:Add some mountains
• PC:Adjust the atmosphere
• PC:Fastforward in Time

The Lost City of Atlantice:

• TLCA/Believe > Negotiate branch
• TLCA/Don’t Believe > Atlantice Branch
• Run through the trees to the ocean > jump > water
• You sleep in

The Adventures of Sid:

• Float down a river in a box. > waterfall scene

The Rush to Class:

• Tell a teacher > 2: further branching; Enchanted Carrot discovery
• Ask to move lockers > 2: further branching; Enchanted Carrot discovery
• TRTC/Locker > Enchanted Carrot intro
• Bananas
• TRTC/Female > Female POV, (conquering bullying build-up)
• TRTC/Male > Male POV (Mystery build-up)
• Go to your first class > Janitor POV (Air freshen branch)
• Wake up in 1 hour > Janitor POV (teacher branches)
• Hurry and stuff it in your pocket > cleanup and add content
• Ask principle for a band-aid > detention branch

Adventure:

• Go to town
• Go inside the log house
• To keep walking >fix branches

A Random Adventure:

• a random adventure
• a random adventure/push wall
• a random adventure/waitfordeath

So much random ya?

• SMRY?/Team Work

Adventure and Town of Barrhead:

• ToB/Main St.

Priority Pages

These pages have already have branches planned out and are in priority of editing before others:

Sid

• Sid/Head out > wear normal smelly fur and sleep(bored end)
• Sid/The Beach > swim: get dragged into Atlantice

The Rush to Class

• TRTC/Apology > go home and feel bad. Cry yourself to sleep
• TRTC/Megan Talk > nod: be my friend > good friends

Clean-up

Quick-edits: Non-red-linked pages, but are in need of content/ grammar fixes/ options that don't end up in death.

Comments/Concerns/Compliments/Criticisms: "C-Section"

Put on here whatever discussion on the story you want to talk about.