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==<font color="red">The Twin Empires</font>==
 
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I have this idea that I wish to turn into a story. It takes place in a fantasy world as you control a character of either gender with their own skills, backgrounds and endings. The story is about a great war between two great superpowers: The Empire of Glendia and The Ministry of Zuellni. The war lasted a few decades but in the end, both sides signed a peace treaty separating the continent of Glacia between the two superpowers. After a few years of peace. A group called "Ouroboros" along with the other problems such as the Fuerzan Bandits has begun to wreak havoc around the Ministry of Zuellni. The Ministry assumed that the group called "Ouroboros" came from the Empire and thus, is preparing for another war. Will you let the war continue or let the continent plunge into another age of chaos? What is the group called "Ouroboros" and what are their real motives? You start out in the hometown of the character you chose. As you progress, you'll eventually meet other characters, join a guild and compete in the annual Guild Wars and bring honor to your guild or foil the plan and destroy the group called Ouroboros or even join in the ranks of either superpowers and dominate the other. You can also form a party or even form your own guild. '''You can also add your own characters just send me the detail of the your character and wait for my approval'''. (Please look at the preset character for what to send)
 
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Here are the preset characters:
 
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'''Name''': Raiou<br />
 
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'''Gender''': Male<br />
 
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'''Age''': 19<br />
 
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'''Hometown''': Soddon (Ministry of Zuellni)<br />
 
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'''Abilities''': Skills of a master assassin in which he learned when he was a child and mysterious skill in which he does not know how to activate.<br />
 
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'''Guild''': None<br />
 
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'''Characteristics''': A boy with black spiky hair and amber eyes. Raiou tends to be quiet and serious and always gets to the point. He's not someone who is easily angered and will try to finish a fight as quickly as possible. He wields 2 blades. He mainly uses time magic.<br />
 
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'''Background''': During the Great War, his hometown is destroyed and he was taken up by an assassins' guild and at the age of 7, he was given the title "Black Wolf". After a failed attempt to assassinate Edgar, the hero of the Ministry of Zuellni. The guild has sent assassins in order to kill Raiou for his failure but Edgar managed to defeat them and decided to take Raiou as his adopted son and the adopted brother of Ritz. After the incident, for some reason, Raiou has lost his memories of his childhood.
 
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'''Name''': Ritz<br />
 
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'''Gender''': Female<br />
 
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'''Age''': 19<br />
 
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'''Hometown''': Soddon<br />
 
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'''Guild''': None<br />
 
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'''Characteristics''': A girl with long violet hair and red eyes. Unlike Raiou, Ritz tends to be cheerful, forceful and will try to finish a mission without a bloodshed as much as possible. She is also easily agitated. She fights with a sword like whip called an urumi and can use healing magic but mainly uses offensive magic.<br />
 
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'''Background''': Her mother died during the war prompting Ritz to practice the whip-sword and follow her father's footsteps. During the peaceful years, Edgar has brought Raiou to the family as an adoptive son, much to Ritz dismay but soon they got along. With Raiou training with the twin katanas and Ritz training with the urumi, both form a formidable pair. Ritz has developed lingering feelings for Raiou and wishes to know his pass.<br />
 
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Note: I could accept some names for the different town and villages and names of different characters. I'm also accepting guilds since I'm still planning one. Criticism is accepted.<br />
 
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I've copied your pitch onto the [[Idea Pitches]] page. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 19:47, 11 January 2014 (UTC)
I've copied your pitch onto the [[Idea Pitches]] page. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 19:47, 11 January 2014 (UTC)

Revision as of 04:50, 12 January 2014

I've copied your pitch onto the Idea Pitches page. --Platypus 19:47, 11 January 2014 (UTC)

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