Afraid of the Dark

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-	Bump, bump	+	'''''Ba-Dump, Ba-Dump.'''''
-	The dirt road wasn't evenly paved as it continued into forest.	+	The dirt road rose and fell as it snaked endlessly into the forest. The canopy of trees flash by, dark pillars of rough bark and imagined faces. Midnight, and while the darkness was an indication the silhouette of the full moon illuminated the shadowy forest like a lighthouse.
-	(15 mins ago)	+	(15 minutes ago..)
-	The cars were passing by one.... then a second... a truck then a van...	+
-	You sit looking outside while listening to your mp3 player.	+
-	Traveling with your sister, and excused for a week from the academy.	+
-	It was relaxing being away from school but where were you going...	+
-	The car slowed down then parked itself by the side of the road. You look at the driver as he gets out and crosses the now empty lane of road.	+	Cars passed by the road the other side of the road a blur of color and noise.
-	You shake your sister "Where's he going??" The same puzzled look on her face as yours.	+	The music player clutched loosely in your hands pumping music, but being sleep deprived each song and its lyrics melded in a foggy incoherent soup.
-	The road was bordered by the forest on both sides. You stare at driver as he heads to a wooden post like toll moving it open.	+	In the other side of the car your sister Melissa slept bundled up shivering.
		+	Being excused from school was always welcomed, but for some reason you don't remember where you were supposed to be going.
		+	(Oh well it probably doesn't matter anyhow.)
		+	You put these thoughts away and let the music carry you off like a siren song to your slumber
		+	BANG!!! followed by a squealing noise then the car turned off.
		+	You were awakened groggily staring out the window wondering where you are.
-	(Back to the present)	+	This was your destination?, questions came boiling up but nobody to answer them.
-	It's been awhile since you entered the dirt road into the forest. Your sister seemed unnerved by the whole situation she was back looking at her phone.	+	The driver ( Who was he again? You can't remember his name ) started walking away from the car.
-	You take of your mp3 player wondering where you're going the driver changing the station on the radio till finally he hit a frequency with a classical song.	+	"Hey, where's he going" you ask noting the anxiousness in your voice, shaking your sister as she ignored your protests.
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		+	The driver looked at you for a moment then proceeded to the woods.
		+	(OMFG were the hell is he going!!!) flashed in constant sequence in your head.
		+	Taking a handful of your sisters jacket you shake her vehemently.
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		+	"WTH WHAT DO YOU WANT!" anger and malice dripping in her voice.
		+	"That guy left us and --" The car door opened and came in the man, you just sat dumbfounded then a jab of pain as your sister took out her frustrations.
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		+	(Back to the present...)
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		+	You had remained silent the rest of the trip.
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		+	Melissa now clutched at her cellphone staring into the glowing screen an air of frustration on her face, and you knew why there was no bars no reception no contact with the outside world.
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		+	Sounds hum as the car radio turns on (I guess hes bored like we are)
		+	What he chooses though is a classical song.
	You:		You:

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Current revision as of 18:43, 29 December 2013

Ba-Dump, Ba-Dump.

The dirt road rose and fell as it snaked endlessly into the forest. The canopy of trees flash by, dark pillars of rough bark and imagined faces. Midnight, and while the darkness was an indication the silhouette of the full moon illuminated the shadowy forest like a lighthouse.

(15 minutes ago..)

Cars passed by the road the other side of the road a blur of color and noise. The music player clutched loosely in your hands pumping music, but being sleep deprived each song and its lyrics melded in a foggy incoherent soup.

In the other side of the car your sister Melissa slept bundled up shivering.

Being excused from school was always welcomed, but for some reason you don't remember where you were supposed to be going. (Oh well it probably doesn't matter anyhow.) You put these thoughts away and let the music carry you off like a siren song to your slumber BANG!!! followed by a squealing noise then the car turned off. You were awakened groggily staring out the window wondering where you are.

This was your destination?, questions came boiling up but nobody to answer them. The driver ( Who was he again? You can't remember his name ) started walking away from the car. "Hey, where's he going" you ask noting the anxiousness in your voice, shaking your sister as she ignored your protests.

The driver looked at you for a moment then proceeded to the woods. (OMFG were the hell is he going!!!) flashed in constant sequence in your head. Taking a handful of your sisters jacket you shake her vehemently.

"WTH WHAT DO YOU WANT!" anger and malice dripping in her voice. "That guy left us and --" The car door opened and came in the man, you just sat dumbfounded then a jab of pain as your sister took out her frustrations.

(Back to the present...)

You had remained silent the rest of the trip.

Melissa now clutched at her cellphone staring into the glowing screen an air of frustration on her face, and you knew why there was no bars no reception no contact with the outside world.

Sounds hum as the car radio turns on (I guess hes bored like we are) What he chooses though is a classical song.

You:

• Keep looking out the window
• Talk to the person next to you