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TheElderOnes: Touchups.

TheElderOnes — Thu, 20 Feb 2014 03:44:25 GMT

Touchups.

TheElderOnes: Changing of pre-page note.

TheElderOnes — Thu, 20 Feb 2014 03:37:48 GMT

Changing of pre-page note.

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-	~~You shouldn't be here.~~	+	Note: This story, much like the ego of a starlet, is highly unstable and likely to change at any given time. Nothing is permanent. To say this story (which I began and abandoned within a month in 2010) is currently being written would be an understatement. I'd love to touch it up and actually make it readable, though, given that I had a few ideas I really liked for it...
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-	~~No, really. You shouldn't.~~ This story ~~is barely even off~~ the ~~ground~~, so... ~~uh... go away. Or~~, ~~peek around. Whatever~~, I~~'m just~~ a ~~line of text~~. ~~I can't MAKE you do anything~~.	+
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-	~~Jerk~~.	+

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TheElderOnes: Revision. WLB Version 2.0 has begun, and I'll be re-writing the other pages so it doesn't suck.

TheElderOnes — Wed, 26 Oct 2011 02:35:15 GMT

Revision. WLB Version 2.0 has begun, and I'll be re-writing the other pages so it doesn't suck.

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	You shouldn't be here.		You shouldn't be here.
-	This story is ~~unfinished, and is not to a point in which I wish to release it to~~ the ~~public~~. ~~However~~, ~~seeing as you are here~~, ~~you might as well read~~ a ~~bit and go to the discussion above to review the story so far~~.	+
		+	No, really. You shouldn't. This story is barely even off the ground, so... uh... go away. Or, peek around. Whatever, I'm just a line of text. I can't MAKE you do anything.
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		+	Jerk.

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-	~~"Jack. Jack. Wake up, Jack."~~

-	The voice rings in your ears, waking you up. You look around. It's still the same classroom, the one you've been in for what seems like an eternity. Your friend, Sarah, is standing over you, nudging you. She tells you that your science class is heading off to the natural caves to study the crystal deposits. You yawn and stand up, and see that you and her are the last people in the room. She pats you on the shoulder, and takes your backpack off the floor. You take it from her, thank her, and follow her out and to the bus loop. The light burns your eyes, but it gets them to adjust quicker. You finally see Sarah quickly. She's no taller than 5'7", you estimate. You've known her since kindergarten, and not much has changed about her. She still has her golden-brown shoulder length hair, and still dresses casually, usually wearing nothing special. Today's no different, and her straight black tee and faded jeans prove that to you.

-	"You gonna get onto the bus or ogle me some more?" She jokes with you, ~~and you laugh~~.~~<br>~~	+	"Jack... Hey, Jack. Wake up, man."
-	"~~Maybe~~ I had planned to do both~~, you~~ have a problem with that, Sarah?" You return, ~~smiling~~.~~<br>~~	+
		+	Groaning, you open your eyes and lift your head off of your desk, looking around the room. Yep, same room you fell asleep in. 403, Ms. Quamos. Your friend, Sarah, is standing over you and poking you.
		+
		+	"Shit..." you mumble, "Everyone already leave?" She smiles and nods, telling you that everyone "just left, like, thirty seconds ago." Today's the day that your science class is heading off to the natural caves, just an hour from your school, to check out the crystal deposits. You yawn and stand up, shaking your head. "I guess we'd best get going then..."
		+
		+	She pats you on the shoulder, and takes your backpack off the floor. You take it from her, thank her, and follow her out and into the bus loop. The light burns your eyes, but it doesn't take long for them to adjust, giving you a damn good view of Sarah. She's no taller than 5 feet, which means that you're a eight inches taller than her. You've known her since kindergarten, and the time has given the two of you a very close-knit friendship that some mistake for love. Sure, you'll very casually compliment her and she'll do the same to you, but you two have already been over it - you're just really, really good friends. Nothing more. But damn... looking at her golden-brown hair, the way it reaches mid-back and seems to float on her black tee... it all fascinates you. And keeping in line with her modern-casual style, you're certain that the pair of jeans she has on is just a bit too small in the waist. Of course, that does accentuate her-
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		+	"Hey! You gonna get onto the bus or ogle me some more?" She jokes with you, smiling back over her shoulder.
		+
		+	"Well... maybe I had planned to do both. You don't have a problem with that, do you, Sarah?" You return, laughing.
		+
	"Not at all."		"Not at all."

-	~~You look across~~ the bus. Sarah has taken a seat somewhat close to the middle of the bus~~. You start to move towards her~~, but ~~then~~ you notice another seat. It's also half empty, and seated in the other half is the girl you've had your eyes on for so long, Jennifer. Sarah motions towards you and points at her seat. Jennifer, on the other hand, hasn't seemed to notice you.	+	Climbing onto the bus, you hesitate a moment. Sarah has taken a seat somewhat close to the middle of the bus, but you notice another seat. It's also half empty, and seated in the other half is the girl you've had your eyes on for so long, Jennifer. Sarah motions towards you and points at her seat. Jennifer, on the other hand, hasn't seemed to notice you.

	The driver looks at you. "Pick a freaking seat, kid. We don't have all day."		The driver looks at you. "Pick a freaking seat, kid. We don't have all day."

-	('''This is your first choice. Choose the girl you want to sit with for the ride to the caves. This choice will change the way you progress through the story, and the group you join.''')	+	('''This is your first choice. Choose the girl you want to sit with for the ride to the caves. This choice will change the way you progress through the story, what happens, and the group you will join.''')

	*[[WLB/Sit with Sarah\|Sit with Sarah]]		*[[WLB/Sit with Sarah\|Sit with Sarah]]
	*[[WLB/Sit with Jennifer\|Sit with Jennifer]]		*[[WLB/Sit with Jennifer\|Sit with Jennifer]]
	[[Category:WhatLiesBeneath]]		[[Category:WhatLiesBeneath]]

TheElderOnes at 04:05, 1 October 2010

TheElderOnes — Fri, 01 Oct 2010 04:05:27 GMT

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	"Jack. Jack. Wake up, Jack."		"Jack. Jack. Wake up, Jack."

-	The voice rings in your ears, waking you up. You look around. It's still the same classroom, the one you've been in for what seems like an eternity. Your friend, Sarah, is standing over you, nudging you. She tells you that your science class is heading off to the natural caves to study the crystal deposits. You yawn and stand up, and see that you and her are the last people in the room. She pats you on the shoulder, and takes your backpack off the floor. You take it from her, thank her, and follow her out and to the bus loop. The light burns your eyes, but ~~get~~ them to adjust quicker. You finally see Sarah quickly. She's no taller than 5'7", you estimate. You've known her since kindergarten, and not much has changed about her. She still has her golden-brown shoulder length hair, and still dresses casually, usually wearing nothing special. Today's no different, and her straight black tee and faded jeans prove that to you.	+	The voice rings in your ears, waking you up. You look around. It's still the same classroom, the one you've been in for what seems like an eternity. Your friend, Sarah, is standing over you, nudging you. She tells you that your science class is heading off to the natural caves to study the crystal deposits. You yawn and stand up, and see that you and her are the last people in the room. She pats you on the shoulder, and takes your backpack off the floor. You take it from her, thank her, and follow her out and to the bus loop. The light burns your eyes, but it gets them to adjust quicker. You finally see Sarah quickly. She's no taller than 5'7", you estimate. You've known her since kindergarten, and not much has changed about her. She still has her golden-brown shoulder length hair, and still dresses casually, usually wearing nothing special. Today's no different, and her straight black tee and faded jeans prove that to you.

	"You gonna get onto the bus or ogle me some more?" She jokes with you, and you laugh.<br>		"You gonna get onto the bus or ogle me some more?" She jokes with you, and you laugh.<br>

TheElderOnes at 06:42, 9 August 2010

TheElderOnes — Mon, 09 Aug 2010 06:42:57 GMT

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	You shouldn't be here.		You shouldn't be here.
-	This story is unfinished, and is not to a point in which I wish to release it to the public, ~~so forget~~ you ~~saw this page~~ and ~~just hit back~~.	+	This story is unfinished, and is not to a point in which I wish to release it to the public. However, seeing as you are here, you might as well read a bit and go to the discussion above to review the story so far.

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TheElderOnes at 05:31, 9 August 2010

TheElderOnes — Mon, 09 Aug 2010 05:31:04 GMT

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	The voice rings in your ears, waking you up. You look around. It's still the same classroom, the one you've been in for what seems like an eternity. Your friend, Sarah, is standing over you, nudging you. She tells you that your science class is heading off to the natural caves to study the crystal deposits. You yawn and stand up, and see that you and her are the last people in the room. She pats you on the shoulder, and takes your backpack off the floor. You take it from her, thank her, and follow her out and to the bus loop. The light burns your eyes, but get them to adjust quicker. You finally see Sarah quickly. She's no taller than 5'7", you estimate. You've known her since kindergarten, and not much has changed about her. She still has her golden-brown shoulder length hair, and still dresses casually, usually wearing nothing special. Today's no different, and her straight black tee and faded jeans prove that to you.		The voice rings in your ears, waking you up. You look around. It's still the same classroom, the one you've been in for what seems like an eternity. Your friend, Sarah, is standing over you, nudging you. She tells you that your science class is heading off to the natural caves to study the crystal deposits. You yawn and stand up, and see that you and her are the last people in the room. She pats you on the shoulder, and takes your backpack off the floor. You take it from her, thank her, and follow her out and to the bus loop. The light burns your eyes, but get them to adjust quicker. You finally see Sarah quickly. She's no taller than 5'7", you estimate. You've known her since kindergarten, and not much has changed about her. She still has her golden-brown shoulder length hair, and still dresses casually, usually wearing nothing special. Today's no different, and her straight black tee and faded jeans prove that to you.

-	"You gonna get onto the bus or ogle me some more?" She jokes with you, and you laugh.	+	"You gonna get onto the bus or ogle me some more?" She jokes with you, and you laugh.<br>
-	"Maybe I had planned to do both, you have a problem with that, Sarah?" You return, smiling.	+	"Maybe I had planned to do both, you have a problem with that, Sarah?" You return, smiling.<br>
	"Not at all."		"Not at all."

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You shouldn't be here.
This story is unfinished, and is not to a point in which I wish to release it to the public, so forget you saw this page and just hit back.

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<br>
"Jack. Jack. Wake up, Jack."

The voice rings in your ears, waking you up. You look around. It's still the same classroom, the one you've been in for what seems like an eternity. Your friend, Sarah, is standing over you, nudging you. She tells you that your science class is heading off to the natural caves to study the crystal deposits. You yawn and stand up, and see that you and her are the last people in the room. She pats you on the shoulder, and takes your backpack off the floor. You take it from her, thank her, and follow her out and to the bus loop. The light burns your eyes, but get them to adjust quicker. You finally see Sarah quickly. She's no taller than 5'7", you estimate. You've known her since kindergarten, and not much has changed about her. She still has her golden-brown shoulder length hair, and still dresses casually, usually wearing nothing special. Today's no different, and her straight black tee and faded jeans prove that to you.

"You gonna get onto the bus or ogle me some more?" She jokes with you, and you laugh.
"Maybe I had planned to do both, you have a problem with that, Sarah?" You return, smiling.
"Not at all."

You look across the bus. Sarah has taken a seat somewhat close to the middle of the bus. You start to move towards her, but then you notice another seat. It's also half empty, and seated in the other half is the girl you've had your eyes on for so long, Jennifer. Sarah motions towards you and points at her seat. Jennifer, on the other hand, hasn't seemed to notice you.

The driver looks at you. "Pick a freaking seat, kid. We don't have all day."

('''This is your first choice. Choose the girl you want to sit with for the ride to the caves. This choice will change the way you progress through the story, and the group you join.''')

*[[WLB/Sit with Sarah|Sit with Sarah]]
*[[WLB/Sit with Jennifer|Sit with Jennifer]]
[[Category:WhatLiesBeneath]]

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	"Jack... Hey, Jack. Wake up, man."		"Jack... Hey, Jack. Wake up, man."

-	Groaning, you open your eyes and lift your head off of your desk, looking around the room. Yep, same room you fell asleep in. 403, Ms. Quamos. Your friend, Sarah, is standing over you and poking you.	+	Groaning, you open your eyes and lift your head off of your desk, looking around the room. Yep, same room you fell asleep in. 403, Geo Sciences with Ms. Quamos. Your friend, Sarah, is standing over you and poking you.

	"Shit..." you mumble, "Everyone already leave?" She smiles and nods, telling you that everyone "just left, like, thirty seconds ago." Today's the day that your science class is heading off to the natural caves, just an hour from your school, to check out the crystal deposits. You yawn and stand up, shaking your head. "I guess we'd best get going then..."		"Shit..." you mumble, "Everyone already leave?" She smiles and nods, telling you that everyone "just left, like, thirty seconds ago." Today's the day that your science class is heading off to the natural caves, just an hour from your school, to check out the crystal deposits. You yawn and stand up, shaking your head. "I guess we'd best get going then..."

-	She pats you on the shoulder, and takes your backpack off the floor. You take it from her, thank her, and follow her out and into the bus loop. The light burns your eyes, but ~~it doesn't take~~ long ~~for them to~~ adjust~~, giving~~ you a damn good view of Sarah. She's no taller than 5 ~~feet~~, which means that you're a eight inches taller than her. You've known her since kindergarten, and the ~~time has~~ given the two of you a very close-knit friendship that some mistake for love. Sure, you'll very casually compliment her and she'll do the same to you, but you two have already been over it - you're just really, really good friends. Nothing more. But damn... looking at her golden-brown hair, the way it reaches mid-back and seems to float on her black tee... it all fascinates you. And keeping in line with her modern-casual style, you're certain that the pair of jeans she has on is just a bit too small in the waist. Of course, that does accentuate her-	+	She pats you on the shoulder, and takes your backpack off the floor. You take it from her, thank her, and follow her out and into the bus loop. The light burns your eyes, but before long, they adjust and give you a damn good view of Sarah. She's no taller than 5'3", which means that you're a full eight inches taller than her. You've known her since kindergarten, and the years have given the two of you a very close-knit friendship that some mistake for love. Sure, you'll very casually compliment her and she'll do the same to you, but you two have already been over it - you're just really, ''really'' good friends. Nothing more. But damn... looking at her golden-brown hair, the way it reaches mid-back and seems to float on her black tee... it all fascinates you. And keeping in line with her modern-casual style, you're certain that the pair of jeans she has on is just a bit too small in the waist. Of course, that does accentuate her-

	"Hey! You gonna get onto the bus or ogle me some more?" She jokes with you, smiling back over her shoulder.		"Hey! You gonna get onto the bus or ogle me some more?" She jokes with you, smiling back over her shoulder.
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	"Not at all."		"Not at all."

-	Climbing onto the bus, you hesitate a moment. Sarah has taken a seat somewhat close to the middle of the bus, but you notice another seat. It's also half empty, and seated in the other half is the girl you've had your eyes on for ~~so long~~, Jennifer. Sarah motions towards you and points at her seat. Jennifer, on the other hand, hasn't seemed to notice you.	+	Climbing onto the bus, you hesitate a moment. Sarah has taken a seat somewhat close to the middle of the bus, but you notice another seat. It's also half empty, and seated in the other half is the girl you've had your eyes on for a few months now, Jennifer. Sarah motions towards you and points at her seat. Jennifer, on the other hand, hasn't seemed to notice you.

	The driver looks at you. "Pick a freaking seat, kid. We don't have all day."		The driver looks at you. "Pick a freaking seat, kid. We don't have all day."
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-	('''This is your first choice. Choose the girl you want to sit with for the ride to the caves. This choice will change the way you progress through the story, what happens, and the group you will join.''')

	*[[WLB/Sit with Sarah\|Sit with Sarah]]		*[[WLB/Sit with Sarah\|Sit with Sarah]]
	*[[WLB/Sit with Jennifer\|Sit with Jennifer]]		*[[WLB/Sit with Jennifer\|Sit with Jennifer]]
	[[Category:WhatLiesBeneath]]		[[Category:WhatLiesBeneath]]