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Cannon at 17:41, 9 January 2011

Cannon — Sun, 09 Jan 2011 17:41:09 GMT

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	By the way, do you think ''Nebulous'' is a good name for the distressed ship? I should have introduced a name earlier so I don't have to keep saying 'the drifting ship'.		By the way, do you think ''Nebulous'' is a good name for the distressed ship? I should have introduced a name earlier so I don't have to keep saying 'the drifting ship'.
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		+	*Well, Nebulous is derfived from the Latin: ''nebula'' (“little cloud", "mist”). The ship is esentially cloud-like in the fact that it is drifting, and it is obscured, as clouds will do, by distance. So I would say it is etymologically signifigant, regardless of whether it really is a distressed ship, or if it's the setup to an ambush. --[[User:Cannon\|Cannon]] 17:41, 9 January 2011 (UTC)

Haruz at 22:26, 8 January 2011

Haruz — Sat, 08 Jan 2011 22:26:20 GMT

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	Thanks for fixing those links. I was scratching my head, but now having seen what you've done I realise that it doesn't like italics in the page name.[[User:Haruz\|Haruz]] 21:36, 8 January 2011 (UTC)		Thanks for fixing those links. I was scratching my head, but now having seen what you've done I realise that it doesn't like italics in the page name.[[User:Haruz\|Haruz]] 21:36, 8 January 2011 (UTC)
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		+	By the way, do you think ''Nebulous'' is a good name for the distressed ship? I should have introduced a name earlier so I don't have to keep saying 'the drifting ship'.

Haruz at 21:36, 8 January 2011

Haruz — Sat, 08 Jan 2011 21:36:50 GMT

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	*Well, I '''did''' say it was in the Adult section. I intended it to be serious, but I haven't looked at it for a while, so I'm not sure what direction others may have taken it in. Fantastical is one thing, but sometimes people here add story brnaches that jump into the realm of ridiculous (read: worthy of ridicule) because they are, as noted earlier, mentally deficient children.<br />Sometimes I feel like I can really expand a chunk of someone else's story, but in the case of AiS, I just enjoy watching the story unfold, (with limited audience participation.) I have the feeling that, so long as you keep creative control of the story, it will probably become a Featured Story once it goes past 25 pages. --[[User:Cannon\|Cannon]] 22:45, 7 January 2011 (UTC)		*Well, I '''did''' say it was in the Adult section. I intended it to be serious, but I haven't looked at it for a while, so I'm not sure what direction others may have taken it in. Fantastical is one thing, but sometimes people here add story brnaches that jump into the realm of ridiculous (read: worthy of ridicule) because they are, as noted earlier, mentally deficient children.<br />Sometimes I feel like I can really expand a chunk of someone else's story, but in the case of AiS, I just enjoy watching the story unfold, (with limited audience participation.) I have the feeling that, so long as you keep creative control of the story, it will probably become a Featured Story once it goes past 25 pages. --[[User:Cannon\|Cannon]] 22:45, 7 January 2011 (UTC)
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		+	Thanks for fixing those links. I was scratching my head, but now having seen what you've done I realise that it doesn't like italics in the page name.[[User:Haruz\|Haruz]] 21:36, 8 January 2011 (UTC)

Cannon at 22:45, 7 January 2011

Cannon — Fri, 07 Jan 2011 22:45:38 GMT

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	Re: AiS It will be a gradual process, but thanks for some ideas I could use and feedback on what looks good to the reader. And thanks for your enthusiasm! It is encouraging.[[User:Haruz\|Haruz]] 20:09, 7 January 2011 (UTC)		Re: AiS It will be a gradual process, but thanks for some ideas I could use and feedback on what looks good to the reader. And thanks for your enthusiasm! It is encouraging.[[User:Haruz\|Haruz]] 20:09, 7 January 2011 (UTC)
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		+	*Well, I '''did''' say it was in the Adult section. I intended it to be serious, but I haven't looked at it for a while, so I'm not sure what direction others may have taken it in. Fantastical is one thing, but sometimes people here add story brnaches that jump into the realm of ridiculous (read: worthy of ridicule) because they are, as noted earlier, mentally deficient children.<br />Sometimes I feel like I can really expand a chunk of someone else's story, but in the case of AiS, I just enjoy watching the story unfold, (with limited audience participation.) I have the feeling that, so long as you keep creative control of the story, it will probably become a Featured Story once it goes past 25 pages. --[[User:Cannon\|Cannon]] 22:45, 7 January 2011 (UTC)

Haruz at 20:09, 7 January 2011

Haruz — Fri, 07 Jan 2011 20:09:05 GMT

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	Re: [[Alien Adventure]] I read it and I have some negative and some positive comments. I'm a Christian, and the story seems to focus on sexual organs and sex too much for me. That said, it is well written and has some good creative ideas (I especially liked the laser gun concept). I don't feel comfortable writing that kind of 'adult' stuff though, sorry. One question - is it meant to be serious, or tongue in cheek? It seems to start off fairly serious.<br><br>		Re: [[Alien Adventure]] I read it and I have some negative and some positive comments. I'm a Christian, and the story seems to focus on sexual organs and sex too much for me. That said, it is well written and has some good creative ideas (I especially liked the laser gun concept). I don't feel comfortable writing that kind of 'adult' stuff though, sorry. One question - is it meant to be serious, or tongue in cheek? It seems to start off fairly serious.<br><br>

-	Re: AiS It will be a gradual process, but thanks for some ideas I could use and feedback on what looks good to the reader. And thanks for your enthusiasm! It is encouraging.	+	Re: AiS It will be a gradual process, but thanks for some ideas I could use and feedback on what looks good to the reader. And thanks for your enthusiasm! It is encouraging.[[User:Haruz\|Haruz]] 20:09, 7 January 2011 (UTC)

Haruz at 20:08, 7 January 2011

Haruz — Fri, 07 Jan 2011 20:08:39 GMT

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	*There's usually a whole lot of edits from one or two people each day. [[User:Platypus\|Platypus]], (glory and cheese be upon him) goes through them because he basically runs this place. '''I''' go through them because I enjoy seeing what people are working on. Sometimes I even clean up the formatting of stories that I feel have potential. And the reason you find me so friendly is because you are a good writer who understands basic formatting, floating in a sea of mentally deficient children. There are a few other good writers here, but I don't often find myself interested in their stories.<br />Oh, and personally, I'm waiting to see what happens when you [[Adventures_in_Space/AiS_Promote_Nern\|Promote Lucinha Nern]]. If Khapp lacks initiatve, he's not the man to pilot one of '''my''' ships! I need a captain who can make snap decisions, save the refugees and slingshot around a black hole, all while disarming the sleeper agent, trying to keep the warp drive from overheating, and shooting out of the star system before a galactic bomb explodes. Can you make that happen? --[[User:Cannon\|Cannon]] 23:38, 6 January 2011 (UTC)		*There's usually a whole lot of edits from one or two people each day. [[User:Platypus\|Platypus]], (glory and cheese be upon him) goes through them because he basically runs this place. '''I''' go through them because I enjoy seeing what people are working on. Sometimes I even clean up the formatting of stories that I feel have potential. And the reason you find me so friendly is because you are a good writer who understands basic formatting, floating in a sea of mentally deficient children. There are a few other good writers here, but I don't often find myself interested in their stories.<br />Oh, and personally, I'm waiting to see what happens when you [[Adventures_in_Space/AiS_Promote_Nern\|Promote Lucinha Nern]]. If Khapp lacks initiatve, he's not the man to pilot one of '''my''' ships! I need a captain who can make snap decisions, save the refugees and slingshot around a black hole, all while disarming the sleeper agent, trying to keep the warp drive from overheating, and shooting out of the star system before a galactic bomb explodes. Can you make that happen? --[[User:Cannon\|Cannon]] 23:38, 6 January 2011 (UTC)
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		+	Re: [[Alien Adventure]] I read it and I have some negative and some positive comments. I'm a Christian, and the story seems to focus on sexual organs and sex too much for me. That said, it is well written and has some good creative ideas (I especially liked the laser gun concept). I don't feel comfortable writing that kind of 'adult' stuff though, sorry. One question - is it meant to be serious, or tongue in cheek? It seems to start off fairly serious.<br><br>
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		+	Re: AiS It will be a gradual process, but thanks for some ideas I could use and feedback on what looks good to the reader. And thanks for your enthusiasm! It is encouraging.

Cannon at 23:40, 6 January 2011

Cannon — Thu, 06 Jan 2011 23:40:06 GMT

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	I'll take a look, but another day. Thanks; I'm pleasantly surprised to find someone so friendly so quickly. [[User:Haruz\|Haruz]] 22:38, 5 January 2011 (UTC)		I'll take a look, but another day. Thanks; I'm pleasantly surprised to find someone so friendly so quickly. [[User:Haruz\|Haruz]] 22:38, 5 January 2011 (UTC)

-	*There's usually a whole lot of edits from one or two people each day. [[User:Platypus\|Platypus]], (glory and cheese be upon him) goes through them because he basically runs this place. '''I''' go through them because I enjoy seeing what people are working on. Sometimes I even clean up the formatting of stories that I feel have potential. And the reason you find me so friendly is because you are a good writer who understands basic formatting, floating in a sea of mentally deficient children. There are a few other good writers here, but I don't often find myself interested in their stories.	+	*There's usually a whole lot of edits from one or two people each day. [[User:Platypus\|Platypus]], (glory and cheese be upon him) goes through them because he basically runs this place. '''I''' go through them because I enjoy seeing what people are working on. Sometimes I even clean up the formatting of stories that I feel have potential. And the reason you find me so friendly is because you are a good writer who understands basic formatting, floating in a sea of mentally deficient children. There are a few other good writers here, but I don't often find myself interested in their stories.<br />Oh, and personally, I'm waiting to see what happens when you [[Adventures_in_Space/AiS_Promote_Nern\|Promote Lucinha Nern]]. If Khapp lacks initiatve, he's not the man to pilot one of '''my''' ships! I need a captain who can make snap decisions, save the refugees and slingshot around a black hole, all while disarming the sleeper agent, trying to keep the warp drive from overheating, and shooting out of the star system before a galactic bomb explodes. Can you make that happen? --[[User:Cannon\|Cannon]] 23:38, 6 January 2011 (UTC)
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-	Oh, and personally, I'm waiting to see what happens when you [[Adventures_in_Space/AiS_Promote_Nern\|Promote Lucinha Nern]]. If Khapp lacks initiatve, he's not the man to pilot one of '''my''' ships! I need a captain who can make snap decisions, save the refugees and slingshot around a black hole, all while disarming the sleeper agent, trying to keep the warp drive from overheating, and shooting out of the star system before a galactic bomb explodes. Can you make that happen? --[[User:Cannon\|Cannon]] 23:38, 6 January 2011 (UTC)	+

Cannon at 23:39, 6 January 2011

Cannon — Thu, 06 Jan 2011 23:39:20 GMT

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	*There's usually a whole lot of edits from one or two people each day. [[User:Platypus\|Platypus]], (glory and cheese be upon him) goes through them because he basically runs this place. '''I''' go through them because I enjoy seeing what people are working on. Sometimes I even clean up the formatting of stories that I feel have potential. And the reason you find me so friendly is because you are a good writer who understands basic formatting, floating in a sea of mentally deficient children. There are a few other good writers here, but I don't often find myself interested in their stories.		*There's usually a whole lot of edits from one or two people each day. [[User:Platypus\|Platypus]], (glory and cheese be upon him) goes through them because he basically runs this place. '''I''' go through them because I enjoy seeing what people are working on. Sometimes I even clean up the formatting of stories that I feel have potential. And the reason you find me so friendly is because you are a good writer who understands basic formatting, floating in a sea of mentally deficient children. There are a few other good writers here, but I don't often find myself interested in their stories.

-	Oh, and personally, I'm waiting to see what happens when you [[Adventures_in_Space/AiS_Promote_Nern\|Promote Lucinha Nern]]. If Khapp lacks initiatve, he's not the man to pilot one of '''my''' ships! I need a captain who can make snap decisions, save the refugees and slingshot around a black hole, all while disarming the sleeper agent ~~in the group of refugees~~, trying to keep the warp drive from overheating, and shooting out of the star system before a galactic bomb explodes. Can you make that happen? --[[User:Cannon\|Cannon]] 23:38, 6 January 2011 (UTC)	+	Oh, and personally, I'm waiting to see what happens when you [[Adventures_in_Space/AiS_Promote_Nern\|Promote Lucinha Nern]]. If Khapp lacks initiatve, he's not the man to pilot one of '''my''' ships! I need a captain who can make snap decisions, save the refugees and slingshot around a black hole, all while disarming the sleeper agent, trying to keep the warp drive from overheating, and shooting out of the star system before a galactic bomb explodes. Can you make that happen? --[[User:Cannon\|Cannon]] 23:38, 6 January 2011 (UTC)

Cannon at 23:38, 6 January 2011

Cannon — Thu, 06 Jan 2011 23:38:32 GMT

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	I'll take a look, but another day. Thanks; I'm pleasantly surprised to find someone so friendly so quickly. [[User:Haruz\|Haruz]] 22:38, 5 January 2011 (UTC)		I'll take a look, but another day. Thanks; I'm pleasantly surprised to find someone so friendly so quickly. [[User:Haruz\|Haruz]] 22:38, 5 January 2011 (UTC)
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		+	*There's usually a whole lot of edits from one or two people each day. [[User:Platypus\|Platypus]], (glory and cheese be upon him) goes through them because he basically runs this place. '''I''' go through them because I enjoy seeing what people are working on. Sometimes I even clean up the formatting of stories that I feel have potential. And the reason you find me so friendly is because you are a good writer who understands basic formatting, floating in a sea of mentally deficient children. There are a few other good writers here, but I don't often find myself interested in their stories.
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		+	Oh, and personally, I'm waiting to see what happens when you [[Adventures_in_Space/AiS_Promote_Nern\|Promote Lucinha Nern]]. If Khapp lacks initiatve, he's not the man to pilot one of '''my''' ships! I need a captain who can make snap decisions, save the refugees and slingshot around a black hole, all while disarming the sleeper agent in the group of refugees, trying to keep the warp drive from overheating, and shooting out of the star system before a galactic bomb explodes. Can you make that happen? --[[User:Cannon\|Cannon]] 23:38, 6 January 2011 (UTC)

Haruz at 22:38, 5 January 2011

Haruz — Wed, 05 Jan 2011 22:38:06 GMT

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	*It's looking interesting (and well-written!) so far. If you are interested, I invite you to add to a story I started, called [[Alien Adventure]]. (Adult section) I haven't worked on it for a while, but I wanted there to be an Adult story focused on adventures in outer space, which I feel are under-represented. If you want to focus on your own story for now, or if you are opposed to working on an Adult story, I understand. But, as one of the only other people here who understands grammar, formatting and sci-fi, I would be honored if you did. [[User:Cannon\|Cannon]] 22:28, 5 January 2011 (UTC)		*It's looking interesting (and well-written!) so far. If you are interested, I invite you to add to a story I started, called [[Alien Adventure]]. (Adult section) I haven't worked on it for a while, but I wanted there to be an Adult story focused on adventures in outer space, which I feel are under-represented. If you want to focus on your own story for now, or if you are opposed to working on an Adult story, I understand. But, as one of the only other people here who understands grammar, formatting and sci-fi, I would be honored if you did. [[User:Cannon\|Cannon]] 22:28, 5 January 2011 (UTC)
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		+	I'll take a look, but another day. Thanks; I'm pleasantly surprised to find someone so friendly so quickly. [[User:Haruz\|Haruz]] 22:38, 5 January 2011 (UTC)

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	I'll take a look, but another day. Thanks; I'm pleasantly surprised to find someone so friendly so quickly. [[User:Haruz\|Haruz]] 22:38, 5 January 2011 (UTC)		I'll take a look, but another day. Thanks; I'm pleasantly surprised to find someone so friendly so quickly. [[User:Haruz\|Haruz]] 22:38, 5 January 2011 (UTC)

-	*There's usually a whole lot of edits from one or two people each day. [[User:Platypus\|Platypus]], (glory and cheese be upon him) goes through them because he basically runs this place. '''I''' go through them because I enjoy seeing what people are working on. Sometimes I even clean up the formatting of stories that I feel have potential. And the reason you find me so friendly is because you are a good writer who understands basic formatting, floating in a sea of mentally deficient children. There are a few other good writers here, but I don't often find myself interested in their stories.	+	*There's usually a whole lot of edits from one or two people each day. [[User:Platypus\|Platypus]], (glory and cheese be upon him) goes through them because he basically runs this place. '''I''' go through them because I enjoy seeing what people are working on. Sometimes I even clean up the formatting of stories that I feel have potential. And the reason you find me so friendly is because you are a good writer who understands basic formatting, floating in a sea of mentally deficient children. There are a few other good writers here, but I don't often find myself interested in their stories.<br />Oh, and personally, I'm waiting to see what happens when you [[Adventures_in_Space/AiS_Promote_Nern\|Promote Lucinha Nern]]. If Khapp lacks initiatve, he's not the man to pilot one of '''my''' ships! I need a captain who can make snap decisions, save the refugees and slingshot around a black hole, all while disarming the sleeper agent, trying to keep the warp drive from overheating, and shooting out of the star system before a galactic bomb explodes. Can you make that happen? --[[User:Cannon\|Cannon]] 23:38, 6 January 2011 (UTC)
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-	Oh, and personally, I'm waiting to see what happens when you [[Adventures_in_Space/AiS_Promote_Nern\|Promote Lucinha Nern]]. If Khapp lacks initiatve, he's not the man to pilot one of '''my''' ships! I need a captain who can make snap decisions, save the refugees and slingshot around a black hole, all while disarming the sleeper agent, trying to keep the warp drive from overheating, and shooting out of the star system before a galactic bomb explodes. Can you make that happen? --[[User:Cannon\|Cannon]] 23:38, 6 January 2011 (UTC)	+