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Velantian at 21:12, 1 October 2011

2011-10-01T21:12:15Z

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	"Whoa, down girl," you think to yourself.		"Whoa, down girl," you think to yourself.

-	*[[He ~~didn't mean any harm~~]]	+	*[[He should have knocked]]
	*[[Tell him to get out]]		*[[Tell him to get out]]

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Velantian at 19:52, 1 October 2011

2011-10-01T19:52:38Z

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-	~~As soon as he steps into your room your~~ brother Jardon ~~says,~~ "Hey Kayde"	+	Your brother Jardon is standing in the doorway. "Hey Kayde, ah, in
-		+	heat again?"
-	~~You sit there shocked. He stands there, shocked.~~	+

	"Get out!" you yell.		"Get out!" you yell.
		+
		+	"Sorry, I forget how crabby you get when you're in heat." With a sly
		+	grin on his face he glides through the doorway, for a big guy he moves
		+	very gracefully. He closes the door and reaches for your comfy old
		+	bathrobe that is hanging from the hook on the back of the door. He
		+	holds out the robe for you as you slide out of bed. "You should really
		+	put up a sign like 'Private Time' or lock the door or something. it
		+	could save you a lot of embarrassment."
		+
		+	"I'm not embarrassed, I'm pissed, and there is no need for a sign if
		+	people would just knock on the damn door" You grab the robe he is offering.
		+
		+	"Pissed that I didn't knock or pissed that you didn't get to finish?"

-	~~"Sorry" he mumbles, but he continues to~~ stand ~~there, stupidly staring at~~ you. ~~He looks embarrassed but there is something else too~~.	+	You stand chest to chest with him you poking him with a finger to
		+	emphasize each word. "Both, and," (poke) "I" (poke) "am" (poke) "not
		+	crabby when I'm in heat!" (poke, poke poke).

-	~~You remove the toy and wave it at him.~~ "~~Don't just stand there staring at me, hand me my robe~~" ~~you snort~~.	+	"Feel better?" Jardon asks calmly.

-	~~He shuffles~~ his ~~hooves and stammers incoherently~~.	+	Actually you do, just being this close to a real stallion, his scent
		+	all around you, has a calming effect. Damn he smells good!

-	~~Your eyes wander~~ down ~~his body~~, ~~as if seeing him for the first time; your little brother. Not that little any more. He has grown up well, strong, large, and beautiful really. Almost against your will~~ you ~~glance down at his crotch. You see a huge swelling, getting larger by the second~~.	+	"Whoa, down girl," you think to yourself.

	*[[He didn't mean any harm]]		*[[He didn't mean any harm]]

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As soon as he steps into your room your brother Jardon says, "Hey Kayde"

You sit there shocked. He stands there, shocked.

"Get out!" you yell.

"Sorry" he mumbles, but he continues to stand there, stupidly staring at you. He looks embarrassed but there is something else too.

You remove the toy and wave it at him. "Don't just stand there staring at me, hand me my robe" you snort.

He shuffles his hooves and stammers incoherently.

Your eyes wander down his body, as if seeing him for the first time; your little brother. Not that little any more. He has grown up well, strong, large, and beautiful really. Almost against your will you glance down at his crotch. You see a huge swelling, getting larger by the second.

*[[He didn't mean any harm]]
*[[Tell him to get out]]

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