Saya/Black Leather - Revision history

Zoroastra at 08:36, 2 March 2015

2015-03-02T08:36:08Z

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-	[[Saya/Black Leather/1\|Say your goodbyes to everyone]]	+	[[Saya/Black Leather/3\|Say your goodbyes to everyone]]

	[[Saya/Black Leather/2\|Say your goodbyes to a handful of people you like]]		[[Saya/Black Leather/2\|Say your goodbyes to a handful of people you like]]

-	[[Saya/Black Leather/3\|Leave without a fuss]]	+	[[Saya/Black Leather/1\|Leave without a fuss]]

Zoroastra at 21:31, 1 March 2012

2012-03-01T21:31:47Z

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-	[[Saya/Black Leather/~~Say your goodbyes to everyone~~\|Say your goodbyes to everyone]]	+	[[Saya/Black Leather/1\|Say your goodbyes to everyone]]

-	[[Saya/Black Leather/~~Say goodbye to friends~~\|Say your goodbyes to a handful of people you like]]	+	[[Saya/Black Leather/2\|Say your goodbyes to a handful of people you like]]

-	[[Saya/Black Leather/~~Leave without a fuss~~\|Leave without a fuss]]	+	[[Saya/Black Leather/3\|Leave without a fuss]]

Zoroastra: Saya/Black Leather/Getting Dressed moved to Saya/Black Leather

2012-03-01T21:06:04Z

Saya/Black Leather/Getting Dressed moved to Saya/Black Leather

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Zoroastra at 16:42, 1 March 2012

2012-03-01T16:42:48Z

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-	[[Say your goodbyes to everyone. Black Leather\|Say your goodbyes to everyone]]	+	[[Saya/Black Leather/Say your goodbyes to everyone\|Say your goodbyes to everyone]]

-	[[Say your goodbyes to a handfull of people you like. Black Leather\|Say your goodbyes to a handful of people you like]]	+	[[Saya/Black Leather/Say goodbye to friends\|Say your goodbyes to a handful of people you like]]

-	[[Leave without a fuss. Black Leather\|Leave without a fuss]]	+	[[Saya/Black Leather/Leave without a fuss\|Leave without a fuss]]

Zoroastra: Saya/BL/Getting Dressed moved to Saya/Black Leather/Getting Dressed: 'BL' sounds embarrassing

2012-03-01T15:57:58Z

Saya/BL/Getting Dressed moved to Saya/Black Leather/Getting Dressed: 'BL' sounds embarrassing

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Revision as of 15:57, 1 March 2012

Zoroastra: Your favorite : a not-so-feminine black leather armor that looks more dazzling on you than any dress. On your hip rests the flawless katana you inherited from your mother. moved to Saya/BL/Getting Dressed: Editing story parameters

2012-03-01T15:57:10Z

Your favorite : a not-so-feminine black leather armor that looks more dazzling on you than any dress. On your hip rests the flawless katana you inherited from your mother. moved to Saya/BL/Getting Dressed: Editing story parameters

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Revision as of 15:57, 1 March 2012

Chlo's-closet: Spelling/grammar

2012-02-26T19:10:36Z

Spelling/grammar

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	You slip on your favorite light armor for traveling and your flawless Katana, a memento of your mother's.		You slip on your favorite light armor for traveling and your flawless Katana, a memento of your mother's.

-	as you leave your room, Willem, one of the servants, runs up to you.	+	As you leave your room, Willem, one of the servants, runs up to you.

-	You turn and look him over, You know him quite well since you have a habit of sleeping in the stables with your horse. Your father and the maids kept telling you a lady shouldn't sleep in such a place. Until you dryly remarked "Does that mean mom isn't a lady?".	+	You turn and look him over. You know him quite well since you have a habit of sleeping in the stables with your horse. Your father and the maids kept telling you a lady shouldn't sleep in such a place. Until you dryly remarked "Does that mean mom isn't a lady?".

	"Yes Willem?" you say while seductively brushing your hair aside.		"Yes Willem?" you say while seductively brushing your hair aside.

-	The stable boy blushes a bit but quickly collects himself. "Your escort is ready my lady".	+	The stable boy blushes a bit, but quickly collects himself. "Your escort is ready, my lady".

-	"I see~~, tell~~ them I'll be joining them shortly"	+	"I see. Tell them I'll be joining them shortly."

	You wonder if you should go say your goodbyes to the people you know or just leave without any drama...		You wonder if you should go say your goodbyes to the people you know or just leave without any drama...

Zoroastra: Undo revision 138500 by Zoroastra (Talk)

2012-02-08T11:34:33Z

Undo revision 138500 by Zoroastra (Talk)

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	[[Say your goodbyes to everyone. Black Leather\|Say your goodbyes to everyone]]		[[Say your goodbyes to everyone. Black Leather\|Say your goodbyes to everyone]]

-	[[Say your goodbyes to a ~~handful~~ of people you like. Black Leather\|Say your goodbyes to a handful of people you like]]	+	[[Say your goodbyes to a handfull of people you like. Black Leather\|Say your goodbyes to a handful of people you like]]

	[[Leave without a fuss. Black Leather\|Leave without a fuss]]		[[Leave without a fuss. Black Leather\|Leave without a fuss]]

Zoroastra: Undo revision 138500 by Zoroastra (Talk)

2012-02-08T11:33:35Z

Undo revision 138500 by Zoroastra (Talk)

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-	[[Say your goodbyes to a handful of people you like. Black Leather\|Say your goodbyes to a ~~handfull~~ of people you like]]	+	[[Say your goodbyes to a handful of people you like. Black Leather\|Say your goodbyes to a handful of people you like]]

	[[Leave without a fuss. Black Leather\|Leave without a fuss]]		[[Leave without a fuss. Black Leather\|Leave without a fuss]]

Zoroastra at 11:32, 8 February 2012

2012-02-08T11:32:46Z

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	[[Say your goodbyes to everyone. Black Leather\|Say your goodbyes to everyone]]		[[Say your goodbyes to everyone. Black Leather\|Say your goodbyes to everyone]]

-	[[Say your goodbyes to a handful of people you like. Black Leather\|Say your goodbyes to a ~~handful~~ of people you like]]	+	[[Say your goodbyes to a handful of people you like. Black Leather\|Say your goodbyes to a handfull of people you like]]

	[[Leave without a fuss. Black Leather\|Leave without a fuss]]		[[Leave without a fuss. Black Leather\|Leave without a fuss]]

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-	[[Saya/Black Leather/1\|Say your goodbyes to everyone]]	+	[[Saya/Black Leather/3\|Say your goodbyes to everyone]]

	[[Saya/Black Leather/2\|Say your goodbyes to a handful of people you like]]		[[Saya/Black Leather/2\|Say your goodbyes to a handful of people you like]]

-	[[Saya/Black Leather/3\|Leave without a fuss]]	+	[[Saya/Black Leather/1\|Leave without a fuss]]

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-	[[Saya/Black Leather/~~Say your goodbyes to everyone~~\|Say your goodbyes to everyone]]	+	[[Saya/Black Leather/1\|Say your goodbyes to everyone]]

-	[[Saya/Black Leather/~~Say goodbye to friends~~\|Say your goodbyes to a handful of people you like]]	+	[[Saya/Black Leather/2\|Say your goodbyes to a handful of people you like]]

-	[[Saya/Black Leather/~~Leave without a fuss~~\|Leave without a fuss]]	+	[[Saya/Black Leather/3\|Leave without a fuss]]

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-	[[Say your goodbyes to everyone. Black Leather\|Say your goodbyes to everyone]]	+	[[Saya/Black Leather/Say your goodbyes to everyone\|Say your goodbyes to everyone]]

-	[[Say your goodbyes to a handfull of people you like. Black Leather\|Say your goodbyes to a handful of people you like]]	+	[[Saya/Black Leather/Say goodbye to friends\|Say your goodbyes to a handful of people you like]]

-	[[Leave without a fuss. Black Leather\|Leave without a fuss]]	+	[[Saya/Black Leather/Leave without a fuss\|Leave without a fuss]]

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	[[Say your goodbyes to everyone. Black Leather\|Say your goodbyes to everyone]]		[[Say your goodbyes to everyone. Black Leather\|Say your goodbyes to everyone]]

-	[[Say your goodbyes to a ~~handful~~ of people you like. Black Leather\|Say your goodbyes to a handful of people you like]]	+	[[Say your goodbyes to a handfull of people you like. Black Leather\|Say your goodbyes to a handful of people you like]]

	[[Leave without a fuss. Black Leather\|Leave without a fuss]]		[[Leave without a fuss. Black Leather\|Leave without a fuss]]

←Older revision		Revision as of 11:33, 8 February 2012
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	[[Say your goodbyes to everyone. Black Leather\|Say your goodbyes to everyone]]		[[Say your goodbyes to everyone. Black Leather\|Say your goodbyes to everyone]]

-	[[Say your goodbyes to a handful of people you like. Black Leather\|Say your goodbyes to a ~~handfull~~ of people you like]]	+	[[Say your goodbyes to a handful of people you like. Black Leather\|Say your goodbyes to a handful of people you like]]

	[[Leave without a fuss. Black Leather\|Leave without a fuss]]		[[Leave without a fuss. Black Leather\|Leave without a fuss]]