User talk:Blackadder38
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Just so you know... Your means 'belonging to you', as in 'your writing is being posted on a story site'. You're is a contraction of 'you are', as in 'you're writing posts that are going on a story site'. --Platypus 18:06, 7 March 2014 (UTC)
Congratulations on your successful interracial relationship and your children. Since you like interracial stories, here's one [not on this site] I stumbled across:
www(dot)literotica(dot)com(slash)s(slash)lakeysha
I will be following your story on this site and hope it develops well. Best of luck. -- Teejay
I myself am in an interracial relationship. Although, one that is much more rare. I am white, and my husband is Taiwanese. lol, think I have only seen one other couple in a relationship like this. --Dirty Me 11:50, 8 March 2014 (UTC)
Do you want to do all the pages in your story yourself, or if I get some ideas may I add a storyline? -- Teejay
I'm basing my additions on some events that really happened to me when I dated a wonderful black girl... I was about 23 and she was 25. -- Teejay
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Save page
A little tip for all new users when you are writing particularly long texts it is a good idea to save often as I know form experience how frustrating it is when you come to save it you find you are logged out.
Hope this helps love beth xxx
Actually, it will say that, but you won't actually be logged out, and you will notice the "Please remember this is just a preview" thing. Just hit save a second time when it does that to you and it will save just fine.--Dirty Me 14:18, 10 March 2014 (UTC)
Category
Beth, wanted to mention. It seems you forgot the category in your recent posts. You might want to include it before it is edited or removed. --Dirty Me 06:23, 11 March 2014 (UTC)
I have noticed you are having many grammar problems on your writing. I understand it happens, especially for those who's native language is not English. Might I suggest typing the page in Word and doing a grammar check first? Then you can copy and paste it into your story page. This might help with some of the easy to catch grammar/spelling mistakes. --Dirty Me 10:20, 13 March 2014 (UTC)
Ending categories
Beth, just wanted to mention, when creating an ending, remember that you also need to put it in the main category.
I fixed your endings, but for reference, you can copy and paste this to put into the ending pages later:
[[Category: Interracial Extravaganza]]
[[Category: Interracial Extravaganza: Endings]]
IE
Beth, I have read a few of your IE paths, and notice there still seems to be a problem with the punctuation and capitalization. It seems like it would be really helpful if you pasted them in Word or something and did a grammar check before posting the path. It would fix most of the simple mistakes you are making without really taking much time. If you don't have word, but do have a PC, you can also use open office. It is free, and just as good as word.
On a second note, I guess this is just my personal thing. I have noticed all your IE paths lead to racial stereotypes and color/ethnicity. I understand it isn't really my place to judge. It's not my story, and if I don't like it, I shouldn't read it, but, I just wanted to leave my thoughts. There seems to be a lot of "The biggest cock I had ever seen", "It was so big", "my big Puerto Rican cock", etc. but no real depth. The characters normally come across as two dimensional stereotypes that really have no difference, and other than throwing in some common racial oriented words, it seems like there is almost nothing that makes it interracial. I see no different cultural aspects, no different ways of approach, no variation that makes it seem like the character is actually in an interracial relationship. Then again, I know for the audience on this site, it probably doesn't matter. This is just my personal feelings since I am in an interracial marriage. Anyways, I just thought I would leave my impressions here for you. Some of it is fun to read and to imagine, so I am not saying it is horrible. It just seems...shallow. Anyways, I will leave it alone now. Sorry if I offended you, and I understand that you probably won't want to read my opinion nor care about it. --Dirty Me 05:07, 21 March 2014 (UTC)
Response
Thinking about it, I guess you are right. You do seem to have a better grasp of writing for mostly male oriented readers. I guess I just thought of it wrong, because I thought of it as a writing which I could sort of imagine, and since you are the only other woman I really see around here, I was expecting something that I could imagine better. That is not to say that I don't like some of it. I can imagine myself in some of the situations. Just, I was looking at the story wrong. I am not honestly sure how much of my writing the other users here actually like. I know that certain parts of my writing is appreciated by men. I hear that often enough, but I am not sure if my writing is really the greatest for a male dominated environment. It is probably me, not you, who has the flawed stories. Not to say I will stop, I am trying to improve my writing as I turn to writing and selling more stories on Amazon.
If I may ask you though, I have been trying to write not just naughty, but also more realistic, and how real people may react. Or at least how I would. However, I have found, when writing about being raped, or attempting suicide (which I tried twice in real life), I feel I am coming across as more "Boo Hoo, poor me" whiny, or else as emo or something. I don't know if you have ever experienced being raped, molested, used and abused, drugged and getting high, but I have. I have found it is challenging to write about the real horrors women face in a way that actually gets the reader to be able to sympathize, or at least empathize. Do you have any suggestions on how I could improve that, to not only write something that connects with others who have been victims, but so men also can grasp how a woman feels about things like this, and the danger and risk we face everyday of things like this happening? Maybe I could use your advice here to be better able to write something that the readers here will better be able to connect with. So, any suggestions for me? --Dirty Me 15:36, 21 March 2014 (UTC)
Please note, all adult stories have been subcategorized as [[Category:Adult Stories]]. Unless your story is no longer an adult story, why would you remove it from that category? Also, you really don't want to put [[Category:Your story name]] on your story category page. It confuses the wiki, and causes your category page to become a subcategory of your category page. Sort of like talking to yourself, it seems a little crazy. --Dirty Me 05:55, 26 April 2014 (UTC)
