Talk:Sixty Minutes
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Author's Note
Just a few things I'd like to mention.
- Writing: If you see a page you'd like to write that hasn't been written yet then feel free to add it. I'm leaving this story open for anyone to add to it. Just keep things consistant, both in the world of the game and in the way you set up the page (i.e don't forget to include the time remaining and make sure it doesn't start counting up) while starting each new page with "SM:" to signify it is part of this story.
- Editing: If while reading through the story you notice some spelling or grammar issues (I'm not perfect... yet :)) feel free to correct them as well as any formatting issues. I try to proofread every page before, and after I submit it but there are things I miss from time to time and I'm no english professor when it comes to grammar.
- Feedback: If you'd like to comment on the story you can either include it here or on my talk page as I will see it either way. All feedback is appreciated, even if it is only to tell me how terrible my writing is (though if you are going to do that try to also make it constructive) or something like that.
I hope you enjoy reading, adding to, or even just editing the story. You can click here to go back to the main page of the story. -- Captain Devonin
Credit/Thanks
I'd like to give credit to and thank the following for their help.
- TheElderOnes: Fixing spelling/grammar.
- Teejay: Writing some pages.
- Snowball: Spelling fixes. A lot of copy/pasting.
- Camper9: Spelling fixes.
If you've contributed and you aren't here feel free to add yourself!
Inappropriate Content
After my writing binge yesterday I got to thinking about what I'd actually written and realized that some of it may go beyond the PG-13 boundry. I plan to rewrite a couple of pages to tone them down, but it makes me wonder if other pages I've written may have the same problem. As such, please let me know here if you read anything that you feel violates the PG-13 boundry and tell me where it is/link it so I can edit it (or since this is a public story, you can edit if you want.)
To-Do List
Just wanted to post this cause I keep losing track of what I still need to write/fix. If anyone else reading uses this to find some redlinks to add to, be my guest.
- Bar Arc
- Church St. Arc
- Reynolds' St. Arc
- 32nd St. Arc
- Jayne's Ave. Arc
- Pacific Mall Arc
- Hospital Arc
- Alexis' Arc
- Surfer's Arc
- Grammar/Spelling Check
- Remove redundant uses of the word "can." i.e. "You can see" should be "You see," and "You can feel" should be "You feel."
- Reformat existing pages with the new layout/status bar (~150 left) (Exception: Ending pages, it looks better without them.) (Completed: A, B, E, H, J, Q)
- Rewrite Some Endings (change things up on some to make them less reptitive, make them actually good)
