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Crawl into the hung guy's stall and hope for the best

Wytod300050 — Fri, 30 Oct 2015 02:32:29 GMT

Wytod300050: Created page with 'You slip beneath the door, into the hot surfer's stall. He's checking himself out in the mirror as he tries to pull off the sweatpants. His back is to you and the plebes of his b…'

You slip beneath the door, into the hot surfer's stall. He's checking himself out in the mirror as he tries to pull off the sweatpants. His back is to you and the plebes of his back are broad, muscled, and tan, leading down into his underwear, which holds his big ass. He has a dusting of hair over his abs and up onto his chest and a thick covering of hair running up and down his legs. His trimmed beard makes him look a bit older but you can still tell he's young. You realize you've gone unnoticed and clear your throat to anounce your presence. As he turns, plenty freaked out you enter his personal space and grab his crotch, reaching around with your other hand to palm his ass.The sounds he was going to make catch in his throat as he realizes what you're there for. His countenance changes and he smirks at you as you feel his body up.
"So," he says, "want me to fuck you or suck you?"

[[Let the surfer suck you]]

[[Let the surfer fuck you]]

[[Category: Big Cock Fun]]

A hot, young black guy selling chocolate bars for a high school fundraiser

Wytod300050 — Sat, 29 Aug 2015 22:55:11 GMT

Wytod300050:

You answer your front door expecting to see your friend Greg. But instead, a young black stud dressed in shorts and a t-shirt is standing on your front porch. He smiles at you uncomfortably, gulping as he scans over your body. He looks down at your crotch, noticing your big erection. He looks to about your age and he is a bit shorter than you. You think you recognize him from the school soccer team though. He is lean and has short cropped hair. He holds up a sheet of paper and a pen, saying, "I'm selling chocolate for a soccer fundraiser at school. I think we go to the same school don't we?"

'So he is part of the soccer team,' you think. 'That explains those legs.' "Umm..yeah we do," you say.

"Cool. So how about it? You want some chocolate?"

He seems more relaxed now as he holds the sheet of paper out for you to take and sign. You grab the paper from him, nodding, and note down how many you want, signing your name at the end. "So how much do I owe you?" you ask, reaching for your wallet, until you realize that your wallet is up in your room. "Shit!" you say, "Come in. My wallets up in my room. I'll go get it." You open the door wider and let him in running up the stairs to grab some money. It's a bit uncomfortable running up the stairs with a hardon tucked into your jeans.

You grab your wallet from your night stand and come downstairs where the boy is waiting patiently. You hand him ten dollars and he tucks it in his pocket.

"They'll be here in two days," he says, turning to walk out the door, but you catch him at the last minute, holding him by the waistband of his shorts. He turns back around, "What the fuck man?"

"You asked me if I wanted some chocolate. I said yes." You pull him back inside and shut the door. You get down on your knees and pull his shorts off, exposing his grey boxer briefs. You love how muscly his thighs and calves are and pull his underwear down his legs. His long 8" cock sits there, perfectly over his balls, ready to get hard. Now what?

*[[Suck the boy's cock]]
*[[Eat that ass]]

[[Category: Big Cock Fun]]

A hot, young black guy selling chocolate bars for a high school fundraiser

Wytod300050 — Sat, 29 Aug 2015 22:54:24 GMT

Wytod300050:

You answer your front door expecting to see your friend Greg. But instead, a young black stud dressed in shorts and a t-shirt is standing on your front porch. He smiles at you uncomfortably, gulping as he scans over your body. He looks down at your crotch, noticing your big erection. He looks to about your age and he is a bit shorter than you. You think you recognize him from the school soccer team though. He is lean and has short cropped hair. He holds up a sheet of paper and a pen, saying, "I'm selling chocolate for a soccer fundraiser at school. I think we go to the same school don't we?"

'So he is part of the soccer team,' you think. 'That explains those legs.' "Umm..yeah we do," you say.

"Cool. So how about it? You want some chocolate?"

He seems more relaxed now as he holds the sheet of paper out for you to take and sign. You grab the paper from him, nodding, and note down how many you want, signing your name at the end. "So how much do I owe you?" you ask, reaching for your wallet, until you realize that your wallet is up in your room. "Shit!" you say, "Come in. My wallets up in my room. I'll go get it." You open the door wider and let him in running up the stairs to grab some money. It's a bit uncomfortable running up the stairs with a hardon tucked into your jeans.

You grab your wallet from your night stand and come downstairs where the boy is waiting patiently. You hand him ten dollars and he tucks it in his pocket.

"They'll be here in two days," he says, turning to walk out the door, but you catch him at the last minute, holding him by the waistband of his shorts. He turns back around, "What the fuck man?"

"You asked me if I wanted some chocolate. I said yes." You pull him back inside and shut the door. You get down on your knees and pull his shorts off, exposing his grey boxer briefs. You love how muscly his thighs and calves are and pull his underwear down his legs. His long 8" cock sits there, perfectly over his balls, ready to get hard. Now what?

*[[Suck that cock]]
*[[Eat that ass]]

[[Category: Big Cock Fun]]

A hot, young black guy selling chocolate bars for a high school fundraiser

Wytod300050 — Sat, 29 Aug 2015 22:52:49 GMT

Wytod300050: Created page with 'You answer your front door expecting to see your friend Greg. But instead, a young black stud dressed in shorts and a t-shirt is standing on your front porch. He smiles at you u…'

You answer your front door expecting to see your friend Greg. But instead, a young black stud dressed in shorts and a t-shirt is standing on your front porch. He smiles at you uncomfortably, gulping as he scans over your body. He looks down at your crotch, noticing your big erection. He looks to about your age and he is a bit shorter than you. You think you recognize him from the school soccer team though. He is lean and has short cropped hair. He holds up a sheet of paper and a pen, saying, "I'm selling chocolate for a soccer fundraiser at school. I think we go to the same school don't we?"

'So he is part of the soccer team,' you think. 'That explains those legs.' "Umm..yeah we do," you say.

"Cool. So how about it? You want some chocolate?"

He seems more relaxed now as he holds the sheet of paper out for you to take and sign. You grab the paper from him, nodding, and note down how many you want, signing your name at the end. "So how much do I owe you?" you ask, reaching for your wallet, until you realize that your wallet is up in your room. "Shit!" you say, "Come in. My wallets up in my room. I'll go get it." You open the door wider and let him in running up the stairs to grab some money. It's a bit uncomfortable running up the stairs with a hardon tucked into your jeans.

You grab your wallet from your night stand and come downstairs where the boy is waiting patiently. You hand him ten dollars and he tucks it in his pocket.

"They'll be here in two days," he says, turning to walk out the door, but you catch him at the last minute, holding him by the waistband of his shorts. He turns back around, "What the fuck man?"

"You asked me if I wanted some chocolate. I said yes." You pull him back inside and shut the door. You get down on your knees and pull his shorts off, exposing his grey boxer briefs. You love how muscly his thighs and calves are and pull his underwear down his legs. His long 8" cock sits there, perfectly over his balls, ready to get hard. Now what?

*[[Suck him off]]
*[[Eat him out]]

[[Category: Big Cock Fun]]

Follow the boy into the dressing rooms

Wytod300050 — Thu, 16 Jul 2015 04:50:37 GMT

Wytod300050:

You grab a black shirt that says "awake" on it in a spindly font and make your way towards the back of the store. You tell the woman sitting towards the back of the room that you have a shirt to try on and she motions you down the hall without even a glance before going back to filing her nails and blowing bubbles with her chewing gum. You walk along the row of the opaque doors, trying to determine which one belongs to the cute boy. The hall is out of veiw of the rest of the store, so you hunch over a bit to be able to peek under the doors. Most of them are empty, one has a lady checking out her own butt in some jeans, and another has a shirtless surfer guy with shoulder length dirty blonde hair slipping out of some sweat pants. You can tell he's hung by the type of underwear he's wearing. He has on a pair of dark blue Hanes; the kind that aren't fitted, but aren't boxer shorts either. They leave a little bit of a pouch in the crotch area, but this guy's thick trouser snake is weighing the cloth down, exposing his v-line.

There's one more stall that you haven't checked yet. Do you...

*[[Check the last stall]]
*[[Crawl into the hung guy's stall and hope for the best]]
[[Category: Big Cock Fun]]

Go get a frappucino (and maybe a hot latino) in Starbucks

Wytod300050 — Thu, 09 Jul 2015 06:27:32 GMT

Wytod300050:

You wouldn't mind some coffee, you think, and waste no time in walking to Starbucks. It's rather dead inside. Two baristas sit lazily behind the counter and three customers sit quietly, sipping their drinks and working on their computers.

One of the baristas stands and takes his place at the cash register. Walking up to the counter, you pull out your wallet and order, flashing him a smile. He's a young hot Latino guy with a cut jawline and a short black quiff with shaved sides. He smiles back, showing you his cute dimples and takes the money from you brushing your finger with his.You wink at him and sit down to wait for your drink, playing on your phone.

Once your drink is ready you walk to the counter. He hands your drink to you and brushes your hand again. You lean in closer and whisper, "You think I could get some extra cream with that?" which makes him gulp and begin to stammer.

"S-ss-sh-sure."

"Great," you reply, flashing him a bright smile. As the two of you head to the isolated bathrooms, you wonder if you're going to have to do all the work. However, the separation from the other customers seems to ease some of his worry as he backs you into a stall and pulls your shirt off over your head. He leans in and kisses you, pushing his tongue into your mouth and moaning slightly. You reciprocate the kiss and unbutton his black work polo, pulling it off of him.

The only question is...who first?

*[[You first]]
*[[Him first]]
[[Category: Big Cock Fun]]

Get the store clerk's attention

Wytod300050 — Sat, 04 Jul 2015 20:53:39 GMT

Wytod300050: Created page with 'Putting on your best smile you approach the handsome clerk. You can practically feel your mouth watering and you can definitely feel the chub beginning in your crotch. "Hey coul…'

Putting on your best smile you approach the handsome clerk. You can practically feel your mouth watering and you can definitely feel the chub beginning in your crotch.

"Hey could I get some help?" you ask politely. "I usually come shopping with someone to tell me if what I try on looks good."

"Yeah, no problem!" the guy beams back.

He meanders around the store with you for the next thirty minutes, helping you pick out some clothes, advising things like: "Try this shirt, the sleeves will cling to your biceps more," or, "These pants would make your butt look a lot better." As you went around the store you saw the Hawaiian boy, looking rather disgruntled, leave the store.

The two of you walk towards the back where the fitting rooms are located, getting away from the other customers and the pulsing of the indie-electronic music playing over the speakers. The person manning the changing rooms must have gone on break or something, because the desk is empty. The store clerk leads you into the hall and finds an empty room at the end. As you walk in you add, "I forgot! I need new underwear too!"

"No problem. You start trying on your clothes and I'll go pick some out for you. Show me what kind you wear."

You smile sheepishly and momentarily break his gaze, "I um...I'm not wearing any right now."

He grins back and gives a little chuckle. "Well here," he says, hands going to his crotch. His biceps flex and twitch as he pops the button on his slacks and quickly pulls the zip. "I wear these," he says, exposing his big bulge to your hungry eyes. In front of you, his light blue briefs, filled with his thick cock, hang out of his slacks. A few wiry hairs crawl out of the waistband, between his cut v-line, and stick out the legs of his underwear, darkening his inner thighs. "Do you think you'd wear something like this?"

Your mouth feels dry but eventually you find your words, "I...I um...I...I guess."

"Cool," he smiles zipping his pants back up and turning to go grab some underwear from the main store.

Once he returns he hands you two pairs of briefs that look almost identical to his. He makes no move to leave you alone so you drop your shorts.

"Woah!" he remarks. You meet his gaze, worried that you freaked him out. Instead you see him grinning, as he compliment, "Nice cock! How big is it?"

"Thanks," you grin back a bit embarrassed, "Ten inches hard." Pulling on one of the pair, you look in the mirror to see how they look. They're alright, but they don't look as great on you as they do on him.

"I don't know. They don't really...do it for me," you tell him.

"Well that's because you aren't wearing them quite right," he says. He shuffles into the small room beside you and undoes his slacks again, letting them fall around his ankles. Your eyes are immediately glued to his bulge as he comes up behind you.

"You've just got to readjust yourself a bit," he says. He pulls them up in the back, to show off your ass and grins at his work. He pulls them lower in the front to expose more of your treasure trail. "Now just adjust your package to fill the pouch."

You try to position yourself in such a way that your bulge looks like his but you can't get it quite right. He steps up closer and reaches his hands around you. "Here," he says reaching into your briefs, "Let me." His big hand reaches under your balls and pulls them forwards, using them to push out your cock. Your softie from his touches helps to fill the pouch too. You stand side by side and compare your bulges, not able to see much difference, even in size.

You notice his eyes haven't left your crotch since you put the briefs on. You catch his gaze briefly, seeing his mouth stretch into a wide grin. He slowly begins to unbutton his shirt, revealing a smooth, milky chest freckled with moles. His muscular pecs sport two pink nipples that stand out at attention and his stomach ripples with six sexy abs.

"Well," he starts, letting his thin shirt fall onto the carpet and closing the door. "I...am twelve..inches...thick," he finishes. You absentmindedly lick your lips and gulp audibly. He looks into your eyes lustfully and bites his lip, letting one of his hands drift down and grab his big juicy cock.

So...what now?

*[[Get on your knees and suck]]
*[[Whip it out]]
[[Category: Big Cock Fun]]

See what goes on in "Casual Male"

Wytod300050 — Sat, 04 Jul 2015 18:58:45 GMT

Wytod300050:

You are just down the street from the building saying "Casual Male" on it. Walking down the sidewalk, to the store, you see people meandering around inside and you don't hear the bassy thump of any music from the interior. You walk through the glass double doors, slightly confused, and realize that it's not a club at all. It's a clothing store.... The walls are lined with clothes displaying geometric shapes and lots of floral print. You half carringly glance to the menswear section on the left side of the store, but are surprised when a young Hawaiian boy that looks your age walks in behind you, lightly groping your ass as he passes. He walks straight to a rack of shorts and grabs two pairs of chubbies. Smiling and winking at you, he makes a beeline for the dressing rooms, giving you a good look at his ass in the dark red chubbies he's already wearing. It looks tight and firm; a perfect bubble butt. Before he rounds the corner, he gives you a coy look over his shoulder.

You start to follow him, before a man in his early twenties catches your gaze. He's a store clerk who has just finished helping a customer and is standing ready to help anyone else who might need his attention. He's very handsome, with light skin and light brown hair quiffed in the front. His dark slacks fit his muscled legs and large package very well and his hazy blue button-up, that matches his eyes, grips his toned biceps and chest. You wouldn't mind getting some help from him, but you wouldn't mind giving a little help to the boy in the changing rooms either.

Do you...

*[[Follow the boy into the dressing rooms]]
*[[Get the store clerk's attention]]
[[Category: Big Cock Fun]]

See what goes on in "Casual Male"

Wytod300050 — Sat, 04 Jul 2015 03:16:26 GMT

Wytod300050:

You are just down the street from the building saying "Casual Male" on it. Walking down the sidewalk, to the store, you see people meandering around inside and you don't hear the bassy thump of any music from the interior. You walk through the glass double doors, slightly confused, and realize that it's not a club at all. It's a clothing store.... The walls are lined with clothes displaying geometric shapes and lots of floral print. You half carringly glance to the menswear section on the left side of the store, but are surprised when a young Hawaiian boy that looks your age walks in behind you, lightly groping your ass as he passes. He walks straight to a rack of shorts and grabs two pairs of chubbies. Smiling and winking at you, he makes a beeline for the dressing rooms, giving you a good look at his ass in the dark red chubbies he's already wearing. It looks tight and firm; a perfect bubble butt. Before he rounds the corner, he gives you a coy look over his shoulder, before

You start to follow him, before a man in his early twenties catches your gaze. He's a store clerk who has just finished helping a customer and is standing ready to help anyone else who might need his attention. He's very handsome, with light skin and light brown hair quiffed in the front. His dark slacks fit his muscled legs and large package very well and his hazy blue button-up, that matches his eyes, grips his toned biceps and chest. You wouldn't mind getting some help from him, but you wouldn't mind giving a little help to the boy in the changing rooms either.

Do you...

*[[Follow the boy into the dressing rooms]]
*[[Get the store clerk's attention]]
[[Category: Big Cock Fun]]

See what goes on in "Casual Male"

Wytod300050 — Sat, 04 Jul 2015 03:08:23 GMT

Wytod300050:

You are just down the street from the building saying "Casual Male" on it. Walking down the sidewalk, to the store, you see people meandering around inside and you don't hear the bassy thump of any music from the interior. You walk through the glass double doors, slightly confused, and realize that it's not a club at all. It's a clothing store.... The walls are lined with clothes displaying geometric shapes and lots of floral print. You half carringly glance to the menswear section on the left side of the store, but are surprised when a young Hawaiian boy that looks your age walks in behind you, lightly groping your ass as he passes. He walks straight to a rack of shorts and grabs two pairs of chubbies. Smiling and winking at you, he makes a beeline for the dressing rooms, giving you a good look at his ass in the dark red chubbies he's already wearing. It looks tight and firm; a perfect bubble butt. Before he rounds the corner, he gives you a coy look over his shoulder, before

You start to follow him, before a man in his early twenties catches your gaze. He's a store clerk who has just finished helping a customer and is standing ready to help anyone else who might need his attention. He's very handsome, with light skin and light brown hair quiffed in the front. His dark jeans fit his muscled legs and large package very well and his hazy blue button-up, that matches his eyes, grips his toned biceps and chest. You wouldn't mind getting some help from him, but you wouldn't mind giving a little help to the boy in the changing rooms either.

Do you...

*[[Follow the boy into the dressing rooms]]
*[[Get the store clerk's attention]]
[[Category: Big Cock Fun]]

Go get a frappucino (and maybe a hot latino) in Starbucks

Wytod300050 — Sat, 20 Jun 2015 04:19:35 GMT

Wytod300050:

You wouldn't mind some coffee, you think, and waste no time in walking to Starbucks. It's rather dead inside. Two baristas sit lazily behind the counter and three customers sit quietly, sipping their drinks and working on their computers.

One of the baristas stands and takes his place at the cash register. Walking up to the counter, you pull out your wallet and order, flashing him a smile. He's a young hot Latino guy with a cut jawline and a black undercut. He smiles back, showing you his cute dimples and takes the money from you brushing your finger with his.You wink at him and sit down to wait for your drink, playing on your phone.

Once your drink is ready you walk to the counter. He hands your drink to you and brushes your hand again. You lean in closer and whisper, "You think I could get some extra cream with that?" which makes him gulp and begin to stammer.

"S-ss-sh-sure."

"Great," you reply, flashing him a bright smile. As the two of you head to the isolated bathrooms, you wonder if you're going to have to do all the work. However, the separation from the other customers seems to ease some of his worry as he backs you into a stall and pulls your shirt off over your head. He leans in and kisses you, pushing his tongue into your mouth and moaning slightly. You reciprocate the kiss and unbutton his black work polo, pulling it off of him.

The only question is...who first?

*[[You first]]
*[[Him first]]
[[Category: Big Cock Fun]]

Go get a frappucino (and maybe a hot latino) in Starbucks

Wytod300050 — Sat, 20 Jun 2015 04:18:34 GMT

Wytod300050: Created page with 'You wouldn't mind some coffee, you think, and waste no time in walking to Starbucks. It's rather dead inside. Two baristas sit lazily behind the counter and three customers sit q…'

You wouldn't mind some coffee, you think, and waste no time in walking to Starbucks. It's rather dead inside. Two baristas sit lazily behind the counter and three customers sit quietly, sipping their drinks and working on their computers.

One of the baristas stands and takes his place at the cash register. Walking up to the counter, you pull out your wallet and order, flashing him a smile. He's a young hot Latino guy with a cut jawline and a black undercut. He smiles back, showing you his cute dimples and takes the money from you brushing your finger with his.You wink at him and sit down to wait for your drink, playing on your phone.

Once your drink is ready you walk to the counter. He hands your drink to you and brushes your hand again. You lean in closer and whisper, "You think I could get some extra cream with that?" which makes him gulp and begin to stammer.

"S-ss-sh-sure."

"Great," you reply, flashing him a bright smile. As the two of you head to the isolated bathrooms, you wonder if you're going to have to do all the work. However, the separation from the other customers seems to ease some of his worry as he backs you into a stall and pulls your shirt off over your head. He leans in and kisses you, pushing his tongue into your mouth and moaning slightly. You reciprocate the kiss and unbutton his black work polo, pulling it off of him.

The only question is...who first?

*[[You]]
*[[Him]]
[[Category: Big Cock Fun]]

Head off to the gym to see if you can "pump some iron" with a hot stud

Wytod300050 — Tue, 16 Jun 2015 22:55:57 GMT

Wytod300050: Created page with 'You decide the gym is a good place to be and so you climb the steps to its entrance and enter through its wide, glass doors. You hit up the gym fairly regularly, in addition to p…'

You decide the gym is a good place to be and so you climb the steps to its entrance and enter through its wide, glass doors. You hit up the gym fairly regularly, in addition to playing sports, leading to your lean-muscled body. As you step inside you see some people working out but it isn't too packed, which is good for cruising. In the main room you see the familiar rows of exercise equipment and the member's pool just outside, filled with some people swimming laps and others cooling off after a hard workout. There's also a basketball court that you can see two black studs playing each other on.

Focusing back on the main room you see a muscular Japanese man near the far wall, probably in his early twenties, lifting some weights as he listens to music through his earbuds. You continue sweeping your eyes over the different equipment. There's a big beefy daddy in the back corner, working his obliques. His skimpy tank clings to his large pecs and show off his huge biceps. His tiny workout shorts show his meaty legs and big butt. Only a few rows away, a young guy looking like he's in his later twenties catches your eye. He kisses a woman who runs off to a pilates class and as he walks into the middle of the room you see the glint of a wedding ring on his finger. He's rugged looking with his dark stubble and toned body. He starts pumping his legs on a large machine and his shorts ride up with every press, giving you a peek at his bumblebee striped bulge.

Swimming in the pool is a younger guy swimming laps in a speedo, probably practicing for a swim team. He's nice and slim, with a tanned, tight body and wavy dirty blond hair. Not to far away from him is a douchey looking frat boy soaking in the hot tub with some of his college buddies being a bit loud. His short bathing suit gives you a good look at his muscled thighs and his chest and abs are ripped from working out. Either of them could be a viable option, or you could try the locker rooms and see who's in there...

*[[Approach the basketball players]]
*[[Approach the hot Japanese stud]]
*[[Approach the big muscle daddy]]
*[[See if the married man's really as straight as he thinks]]
*[[See what the swimmer is up to]]
*[[Get to know the frat boy better]]
*[[Go to the locker room]]
[[Category: Big Cock Fun]]

User talk:Platypus

Wytod300050 — Tue, 16 Jun 2015 17:02:54 GMT

Wytod300050:

Since this page has become rather cluttered, I've moved old discussions to the archive pages below. Feel free to leave new messages here. I'll get back to you ASAP!

*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive1]]
*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive2]]
*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive3]]
*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive4]]

 >Add new comments below by clicking on the 'edit' button above. Do not add new comments to the archives. 

i swear i didn't know it affected everything i thought it on changed when i looked at it,i am sorry for the indecent

Sure, sure. That's why you're vandalizing page after page. If you're going to act like a 12-year-old then go play Call of Duty, kid. '''-[[User:BakaG|BakaG]] 00:51, 11 June 2015 (UTC)'''

 You can sign your messages for convenience by using four ~ (tilde) symbols like so: <nowiki>~~~~</nowiki>. Your name and the date will show up like this: [[User:BakaG|BakaG]] 16:30, 16 November 2014 (UTC) 

Ok thanks! So others can still see my content? [[User:Wytod300050|Wytod300050]] 17:02, 16 June 2015 (UTC)

Hey, I was just wondering why when I am signed out I can't see my contributions to a story? Can others still see them?? [[User:Wytod300050|Wytod300050]] 02:59, 15 June 2015 (UTC)

Thank you for your feedback. I was looking to leave more options for others but that will do [[User:Twjhh|Twjhh]] 17:15, 26 May 2015 (UTC)

Thanks for the feedback! Constructive criticism is always welcome. [[User:Marzipan92]] 22:12, 24 April 2015 (UTC)

Thank you for the heads up on the pages that I forgot to Categorize. [[User:Deathsknight|Deathsknight]] 14:28, 8 March 2015 (UTC)

Hey, is there a way to blank pages automatically, or to mass wipe a category? I'm trying to redo a story, so that would help out a lot. Cheers.
--[[User:Snowball|Snowball]] 18:16, 22 February 2015 (UTC)

That is a really good point. I'll do it manually then. Thanks. --[[User:Snowball|Snowball]] 08:34, 23 February 2015 (UTC)

Roger that. Sorry for my ignorance!-Lasagna

I appreciate your protectiveness of your source material, but try being more hospitable. No reason to delete things when the changes aren't more than link perspectives or minor punctuation problems. You clearly don't want to write all 64,000 pages that would be needed to finish and tie together Rampage, or any other of your stories. So stop impeding people who are helping add more content to the site by wholesale deleting everything anybody writes with 2 missed periods or a run-on sentence or two. Try leaving the message and see if I'll fix it first, at the very least.[[User:Makhai|Makhai]] 13:57, 12 December 2014 (UTC).

Hi there. I see you deleted my work on the story 'A Unique Arrangement'. It was understandable but i now know how to add options/categorize and i was wondering if you could get my deleted work back? I don't really want to have to write it all over again because of a couple of mistakes.
Cheers. [[User:Bammy|Bammy]] 00:40, 11 December 2014 (UTC) [[User:Bammy|Bammy]] 13:29, 11 December 2014 (UTC)

I wpuld like toapologize for the actions that led to the deletion of the page if it were mear grammer problem please repost the page (if possible) and allow me to make corrections. If there was a problem with how I handled the story please tell me so I can make corrections and better furture work. In any case please type back as to know that you received this message

My apologies,
Greg222James

Platypus...this is Bustyalix. You recently messaged me about including the STATUS BAR, but I have no idea how to go about doing so. Is there any way you and I may converse privately? I'd be more than happy to include my personal email address if necessary. Please get back to me on this matter. Thanks!

I'm still new at this, so I don't appreciate the attitude. Yes, it'll take me some time getting used to this HTML like format, yes I'll make some errors now and again, but no that does not mean you have the right to strike an attitude with me. I haven't really worked with a status bar before, and I honestly didn't even realize I had to do anything with it. I'm still learning, rather teaching myself this strange format, so don't come to me in a hard and demeaning tone because I didn't do something the way you wanted it, because I am fairly new at this.

Platypus, this is eatenbypie. I appreciate that you pay attention to things like categorization of pages, but deleting work two hours after being warned and threatening to ban a new user because I missed categorization on 6-8 pages is excessive, especially given that the site doesn't notify you about warnings. Simple oversight on my part, and obviously an oversight given that the rest of the story has proper categorization. -Edit Not bothering to recreate my work on this site.

Apologies for the tense problems. I've been proofreading my stuff since I'm used to writing in past tense, but some things slip through the cracks it seems. As for quirky titles... do you mean the link/page title thing? The first was due to a page collision. I suppose I could have changed the action prompt to something else, but I consider that a part of the story itself, and didn't want to change it due to a collision. Those are rare, I guess. The second was due to a plan where two mini-storylines would converge to the same page... but the actions to get there would be different. In this case I would prefer to use a third page title rather than favor one of the two storylines. The third time I did it... yeah, that was just for my amusement, and it would be a simple matter to limit usage of alternate titles and use them only when needed. So... yeah. [[User:Ironwill|Ironwill]] 02:46, 24 November 2014 (UTC)

Hi Platypus; I got your message. Sorry about the mistake. If it ever happens again let me know and I'll fix it right away. I'm new to the editing, but I really try hard to be professional. Like I said, If there's any more problems, message me and I'll fix them right away. I really enjoy your story and I hope we get along. Please message me back soon so I know you got my message. - ThatOneWritter

Got your message. Didn't see it at first since I posted one after another Sorry 'bout the mistake. Will try to pay more attention to it in the future.-Repoman.

dude what are some of your story's?-Jay The man

will you be adding more to rampage and smutty sex romp? Jay The man

Hey platypus, just a quick question. I have a guy adding to my story using very little detail and it doesn't even follow the story. As the original creator of the story do I have the right to delete these submissions in favor of more descriptive and frankly more linear additions that I plan on making?--[[User:Blackdragon25|Blackdragon25]] 21:47, 4 December 2014 (UTC)
I understand, i just wanne give it a try.
I dont even speak english.
but i want to compliment you for your story

Hello Platypus,
thank you for your helpful (if terse) comments. I was unsure whether the status bar was needed as the second posted page obviously was meant as an ending. [[User:Kyrael|Kyrael]] 19:57, 19 December 2014 (UTC)

Hi Platypus
i'm new and have tried to label like you requested but cant. can you help?
regards. wildside

Heya Platypus, I just wanted to ask you how high the writing standards are for this website, as I'm currently working on a CYOA story that I'd really love to post here... but sometimes my punctuation is lacking. I only ask because I've noticed a lot of people on this page complaining about you deleting their stories/pages. I would hate for that to happen to me.
Also I have another question, how easy is it to move a story to a different age category? - PurpleLemon

== Delete a page ==

Hey Platypus, since you're the only one who can delete pages can you please delete [[EW: Enter the briefing room]] (since I merged it into [[EW: On a tour of the Harry Potter studios‎]]). Thank you -- [[User:NiceGuy|NiceGuy]] 18:55, 1 February 2015 (UTC)

Hello there, I was wondering if you could help me delete two pages of my own story please, for I can't seem to delete them myself. The reason why I want them deleted is because I feel like they are not good ideas for branches anymore, as I once thought they were. They are: [[Lucid dreams/Male/Dream about the shower brunette| Dream about the shower brunette]], [[Lucid dreams/Male/Grab the towels| Clean up mess]]

I thank you for your cooperation. And I will edit in some new and (hopefully) better branches next time. --[[User:Chaomaster|Chaomaster]] 19:50, 21 February 2015 (UTC)

______________________

Platypus, I'm a long time admirer but new contributor to the site, i wasn't sure how else to respond to your message so I wanted to say thank you for your feedback and I'll make the necessary corrections but I am learning still and I ask patience on that score. I do not understand what i am not doing with the categories please explain to me what it is that i am not doing - i have looked at the tutorial and compared scripting and i do not notice what i am not doing that they were doing on this story i am working on please go into further detail and i appologize for the inconvenience [[User:Phreakinsane|Phreakinsane]] 02:20, 2 March 2015 (UTC)

I'm trying to make a Cool Effect bro

== Hope You Don't Mind ==

I hope you don't mind; but I used the warn template, for Nigfin, since he left several pages uncategorised. If you do, I apologise for stepping on your toes. - [[User:Neminis|Neminis]] 19:27, 9 March 2015 (UTC)

Hey platypus, I have a user Maxpower altering my pages with out permission. I know he is just trying to help but he is altering the context or the story and despite my attempts to get him to stop polightly he continues to do it. I don't mind him adding to the story but he has been asked not to alter mine or other's contributions to the story. I would appreciate you having a word with him. Thanks --[[User:Blackdragon25|Blackdragon25]] 19:22, 16 March 2015 (UTC)

In my defence of the above accusations, I would like to bring Blackdragon's attention to the message that appears at the bottom of the edit window. Specifically, if you don't want your writing to be edited mercilessly, then don't submit here. The majority of my recent edits have centered around spelling, grammar, and readability, although I admit that here or there I add some embellishment or make changes to improve consistency and continuity. No one else on here seems to have a problem with that and realize that wikis are designed with collaboration in mind, and collaborative storytelling only makes for better more well rounded stories. In any case, I submit that if he considers his writing to be a sacred text that he changes his story type to private. But I'm definitely done with his whining. He will see no further contributions from me.
[[User:Maxpower|Maxpower]] 05:48, 17 March 2015 (UTC)

== Make it four ==
No pages link to [[Make it four]]. I've asked the original creator what's up. Please don't just delete this; there's a whole string of pages I would like to see (re?)attached to the story. Writing you to see if there perhaps was some kind of technical hiccup that I couldn't find? [[User:Anedwcan|Anedwcan]] 16:09, 18 March 2015 (UTC)

So, I just got that "second warning" of yours, but I have been titling every post since you gave me the first one. Can you please explain to me what it is I am not doing and possibly link me to the offending post? --[[User talk:Jemini|Jemini]]

Never mind, I figured it out. --[[User:Jemini | Jemini]]

== 2 Taboo 4 You Deletion Request ==
Could you please delete the following pages by [[User:Vitalis|Vitalis]] from my story [[2T4U|2 Taboo 4 You]]:
*[[2T4U/Go into mommy's room]]
*[[2T4U/Climb into bed with her]]
*[[2T4U/Snuggle up to her, rubbing your dick against her]]
*[[2T4U/Say "I need help mom"]]
*[[2T4U/Yes, mom suck my dick]]
He didn't adhere to the guidelines I laid out for the story, basically added nothing to the story, and has not fixed his passages after I asked him to. I feel that I have given him enough time to repair the damage. Thank you. --[[User:Elerneron|Elerneron]] 22:08, 21 April 2015 (UTC)

User talk:Platypus

Wytod300050 — Mon, 15 Jun 2015 02:59:06 GMT

Wytod300050:

Since this page has become rather cluttered, I've moved old discussions to the archive pages below. Feel free to leave new messages here. I'll get back to you ASAP!

*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive1]]
*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive2]]
*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive3]]
*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive4]]

 >Add new comments below by clicking on the 'edit' button above. Do not add new comments to the archives. 

i swear i didn't know it affected everything i thought it on changed when i looked at it,i am sorry for the indecent

Sure, sure. That's why you're vandalizing page after page. If you're going to act like a 12-year-old then go play Call of Duty, kid. '''-[[User:BakaG|BakaG]] 00:51, 11 June 2015 (UTC)'''

 You can sign your messages for convenience by using four ~ (tilde) symbols like so: <nowiki>~~~~</nowiki>. Your name and the date will show up like this: [[User:BakaG|BakaG]] 16:30, 16 November 2014 (UTC) 

Hey, I was just wondering why when I am signed out I can't see my contributions to a story? Can others still see them?? [[User:Wytod300050|Wytod300050]] 02:59, 15 June 2015 (UTC)

Thank you for your feedback. I was looking to leave more options for others but that will do [[User:Twjhh|Twjhh]] 17:15, 26 May 2015 (UTC)

Thanks for the feedback! Constructive criticism is always welcome. [[User:Marzipan92]] 22:12, 24 April 2015 (UTC)

Thank you for the heads up on the pages that I forgot to Categorize. [[User:Deathsknight|Deathsknight]] 14:28, 8 March 2015 (UTC)

Hey, is there a way to blank pages automatically, or to mass wipe a category? I'm trying to redo a story, so that would help out a lot. Cheers.
--[[User:Snowball|Snowball]] 18:16, 22 February 2015 (UTC)

That is a really good point. I'll do it manually then. Thanks. --[[User:Snowball|Snowball]] 08:34, 23 February 2015 (UTC)

Roger that. Sorry for my ignorance!-Lasagna

I appreciate your protectiveness of your source material, but try being more hospitable. No reason to delete things when the changes aren't more than link perspectives or minor punctuation problems. You clearly don't want to write all 64,000 pages that would be needed to finish and tie together Rampage, or any other of your stories. So stop impeding people who are helping add more content to the site by wholesale deleting everything anybody writes with 2 missed periods or a run-on sentence or two. Try leaving the message and see if I'll fix it first, at the very least.[[User:Makhai|Makhai]] 13:57, 12 December 2014 (UTC).

Hi there. I see you deleted my work on the story 'A Unique Arrangement'. It was understandable but i now know how to add options/categorize and i was wondering if you could get my deleted work back? I don't really want to have to write it all over again because of a couple of mistakes.
Cheers. [[User:Bammy|Bammy]] 00:40, 11 December 2014 (UTC) [[User:Bammy|Bammy]] 13:29, 11 December 2014 (UTC)

I wpuld like toapologize for the actions that led to the deletion of the page if it were mear grammer problem please repost the page (if possible) and allow me to make corrections. If there was a problem with how I handled the story please tell me so I can make corrections and better furture work. In any case please type back as to know that you received this message

My apologies,
Greg222James

Platypus...this is Bustyalix. You recently messaged me about including the STATUS BAR, but I have no idea how to go about doing so. Is there any way you and I may converse privately? I'd be more than happy to include my personal email address if necessary. Please get back to me on this matter. Thanks!

I'm still new at this, so I don't appreciate the attitude. Yes, it'll take me some time getting used to this HTML like format, yes I'll make some errors now and again, but no that does not mean you have the right to strike an attitude with me. I haven't really worked with a status bar before, and I honestly didn't even realize I had to do anything with it. I'm still learning, rather teaching myself this strange format, so don't come to me in a hard and demeaning tone because I didn't do something the way you wanted it, because I am fairly new at this.

Platypus, this is eatenbypie. I appreciate that you pay attention to things like categorization of pages, but deleting work two hours after being warned and threatening to ban a new user because I missed categorization on 6-8 pages is excessive, especially given that the site doesn't notify you about warnings. Simple oversight on my part, and obviously an oversight given that the rest of the story has proper categorization. -Edit Not bothering to recreate my work on this site.

Apologies for the tense problems. I've been proofreading my stuff since I'm used to writing in past tense, but some things slip through the cracks it seems. As for quirky titles... do you mean the link/page title thing? The first was due to a page collision. I suppose I could have changed the action prompt to something else, but I consider that a part of the story itself, and didn't want to change it due to a collision. Those are rare, I guess. The second was due to a plan where two mini-storylines would converge to the same page... but the actions to get there would be different. In this case I would prefer to use a third page title rather than favor one of the two storylines. The third time I did it... yeah, that was just for my amusement, and it would be a simple matter to limit usage of alternate titles and use them only when needed. So... yeah. [[User:Ironwill|Ironwill]] 02:46, 24 November 2014 (UTC)

Hi Platypus; I got your message. Sorry about the mistake. If it ever happens again let me know and I'll fix it right away. I'm new to the editing, but I really try hard to be professional. Like I said, If there's any more problems, message me and I'll fix them right away. I really enjoy your story and I hope we get along. Please message me back soon so I know you got my message. - ThatOneWritter

Got your message. Didn't see it at first since I posted one after another Sorry 'bout the mistake. Will try to pay more attention to it in the future.-Repoman.

dude what are some of your story's?-Jay The man

will you be adding more to rampage and smutty sex romp? Jay The man

Hey platypus, just a quick question. I have a guy adding to my story using very little detail and it doesn't even follow the story. As the original creator of the story do I have the right to delete these submissions in favor of more descriptive and frankly more linear additions that I plan on making?--[[User:Blackdragon25|Blackdragon25]] 21:47, 4 December 2014 (UTC)
I understand, i just wanne give it a try.
I dont even speak english.
but i want to compliment you for your story

Hello Platypus,
thank you for your helpful (if terse) comments. I was unsure whether the status bar was needed as the second posted page obviously was meant as an ending. [[User:Kyrael|Kyrael]] 19:57, 19 December 2014 (UTC)

Hi Platypus
i'm new and have tried to label like you requested but cant. can you help?
regards. wildside

Heya Platypus, I just wanted to ask you how high the writing standards are for this website, as I'm currently working on a CYOA story that I'd really love to post here... but sometimes my punctuation is lacking. I only ask because I've noticed a lot of people on this page complaining about you deleting their stories/pages. I would hate for that to happen to me.
Also I have another question, how easy is it to move a story to a different age category? - PurpleLemon

== Delete a page ==

Hey Platypus, since you're the only one who can delete pages can you please delete [[EW: Enter the briefing room]] (since I merged it into [[EW: On a tour of the Harry Potter studios‎]]). Thank you -- [[User:NiceGuy|NiceGuy]] 18:55, 1 February 2015 (UTC)

Hello there, I was wondering if you could help me delete two pages of my own story please, for I can't seem to delete them myself. The reason why I want them deleted is because I feel like they are not good ideas for branches anymore, as I once thought they were. They are: [[Lucid dreams/Male/Dream about the shower brunette| Dream about the shower brunette]], [[Lucid dreams/Male/Grab the towels| Clean up mess]]

I thank you for your cooperation. And I will edit in some new and (hopefully) better branches next time. --[[User:Chaomaster|Chaomaster]] 19:50, 21 February 2015 (UTC)

______________________

Platypus, I'm a long time admirer but new contributor to the site, i wasn't sure how else to respond to your message so I wanted to say thank you for your feedback and I'll make the necessary corrections but I am learning still and I ask patience on that score. I do not understand what i am not doing with the categories please explain to me what it is that i am not doing - i have looked at the tutorial and compared scripting and i do not notice what i am not doing that they were doing on this story i am working on please go into further detail and i appologize for the inconvenience [[User:Phreakinsane|Phreakinsane]] 02:20, 2 March 2015 (UTC)

I'm trying to make a Cool Effect bro

== Hope You Don't Mind ==

I hope you don't mind; but I used the warn template, for Nigfin, since he left several pages uncategorised. If you do, I apologise for stepping on your toes. - [[User:Neminis|Neminis]] 19:27, 9 March 2015 (UTC)

Hey platypus, I have a user Maxpower altering my pages with out permission. I know he is just trying to help but he is altering the context or the story and despite my attempts to get him to stop polightly he continues to do it. I don't mind him adding to the story but he has been asked not to alter mine or other's contributions to the story. I would appreciate you having a word with him. Thanks --[[User:Blackdragon25|Blackdragon25]] 19:22, 16 March 2015 (UTC)

In my defence of the above accusations, I would like to bring Blackdragon's attention to the message that appears at the bottom of the edit window. Specifically, if you don't want your writing to be edited mercilessly, then don't submit here. The majority of my recent edits have centered around spelling, grammar, and readability, although I admit that here or there I add some embellishment or make changes to improve consistency and continuity. No one else on here seems to have a problem with that and realize that wikis are designed with collaboration in mind, and collaborative storytelling only makes for better more well rounded stories. In any case, I submit that if he considers his writing to be a sacred text that he changes his story type to private. But I'm definitely done with his whining. He will see no further contributions from me.
[[User:Maxpower|Maxpower]] 05:48, 17 March 2015 (UTC)

== Make it four ==
No pages link to [[Make it four]]. I've asked the original creator what's up. Please don't just delete this; there's a whole string of pages I would like to see (re?)attached to the story. Writing you to see if there perhaps was some kind of technical hiccup that I couldn't find? [[User:Anedwcan|Anedwcan]] 16:09, 18 March 2015 (UTC)

So, I just got that "second warning" of yours, but I have been titling every post since you gave me the first one. Can you please explain to me what it is I am not doing and possibly link me to the offending post? --[[User talk:Jemini|Jemini]]

Never mind, I figured it out. --[[User:Jemini | Jemini]]

== 2 Taboo 4 You Deletion Request ==
Could you please delete the following pages by [[User:Vitalis|Vitalis]] from my story [[2T4U|2 Taboo 4 You]]:
*[[2T4U/Go into mommy's room]]
*[[2T4U/Climb into bed with her]]
*[[2T4U/Snuggle up to her, rubbing your dick against her]]
*[[2T4U/Say "I need help mom"]]
*[[2T4U/Yes, mom suck my dick]]
He didn't adhere to the guidelines I laid out for the story, basically added nothing to the story, and has not fixed his passages after I asked him to. I feel that I have given him enough time to repair the damage. Thank you. --[[User:Elerneron|Elerneron]] 22:08, 21 April 2015 (UTC)

See what goes on in "Casual Male"

Wytod300050 — Sun, 14 Jun 2015 22:58:31 GMT

Wytod300050:

You are just down the street from the building saying "Casual Male" on it. Walking down the sidewalk, to the store, you see people meandering around inside and you don't hear the bassy thump of any music from the interior. You walk through the glass double doors, slightly confused, and realize that it's not a club at all. It's a clothing store.... The walls are lined with clothes displaying geometric shapes and lots of floral print. You half carringly glance to the menswear section on the left side of the store, but are surprised when a young Hawaiian boy that looks your age walks in behind you, lightly groping your ass as he passes. He walks straight to a rack of shorts and grabs two pairs of chubbies. Smiling and winking at you, he makes a beeline for the dressing rooms, giving you a good look at his ass in the dark red chubbies he's already wearing. It looks tight and firm; a perfect bubble butt. Before he rounds the corner, he gives you a coy look over his shoulder, before

You start to follow him, before a man in his early twenties catches your gaze. He's a store clerk who has just finished helping a customer and is standing ready to help anyone else who might need his attention. He's very handsome, with tanned skin and light brown hair worn in an undercut. His dark jeans fit his muscled legs and large package very well and his baby blue polo, that matched his eyes, gripped his toned biceps and chest. You wouldn't mind getting some help from him, but you wouldn't mind giving a little help to the boy in the changing rooms either.

Do you...

*[[Follow the boy into the dressing rooms]]
*[[Get the store clerk's attention]]
[[Category: Big Cock Fun]]

Cum on the Hawaiian boy's face

Wytod300050 — Sun, 14 Jun 2015 22:44:15 GMT

Wytod300050:

The Hawaiian boy pulls your underwear, that are soaked in his hot cum, off his face and pulls his own underwear out of his mouth.

"I wanna taste you! Gimme your cum!" he smiles, sticking out his tongue. That edges you even closer to blowing your load; seeing the boy ready and willing to lap up your boycream.

Groaning at the sight, you pull your rock hard cock out of his fluttering ass and rip off the condom, flinging precum everywhere. You wrap your hand around your dick and rapidly jack your cock to the edge. Getting your hips as close as you can to his face you let your hand fly over your cockhead, causing you to release guttural groans as you get closer and closer to release. You leak a steady stream of sweet precum onto his tongue and clench your eyes, remembering as you watched him let loose.

The boy is a bit impatient you figure, since he shoves a dry finger into your ass and presses down on your prostate. You half whimper, half scream out your pleasure as your red, pulsating cock rockets out rope after rope of fiery cum. The first shot misses his mouth completely and just sits on his face from his hair to his chin. The next five shots fire straight into his mouth and the last few barely reach his chin, pooling with the cum already on his chest. He swishes your cum around in his mouth, savoring it, all the while rubbing your prostate through your orgasm. Before he takes his finger out of you he pulls you down to share a cum filled kiss. You taste your own seed along with him and moan slightly at the sweet taste. Taking your underwear, he cleans the cum off of himself and the wall, before handing them back to you, absolutely soaked.

He hands you his blue Andrew Christians and smiles, "Here, take these. They aren't as wet."

"Thanks," you smile back, slipping them on. You both dress quietly and you pocket the sopping wet briefs, sharing a quick kiss with the sexy Hawaiian boy, before slipping out of the room and walking to your car. You're pretty sure you received several dirty looks from shoppers and employees alike as you left. But nonetheless, you still have most of the day left and you're still feeling plenty horny. So the question is...where next?

*[[Enter one of the 'scrapers]]
*[[Go get a frappucino (and maybe a hot latino) in Starbucks]]
*[[Head off to the gym to see if you can "pump some iron" with a hot stud]]
*[[You've always liked a man in uniform--enter the police department]]
*[[Your highschool is crawling with hot students and teachers alike]]
*[[Hit the dance floor, and maybe you'll score....]]
*[[Call one of your buddies to see what they're up to| Go home and call a friend]]
[[Category: Big Cock Fun]]

Cum on the Hawaiian boy's face

Wytod300050 — Sun, 14 Jun 2015 22:32:39 GMT

Wytod300050:

Cum on the Hawaiian boy's face

Wytod300050 — Sun, 14 Jun 2015 22:25:09 GMT

Wytod300050: Created page with 'The Hawaiian boy pulls your underwear, that are soaked in his hot cum, off his face and pulls his own underwear out of his mouth. "I wanna taste you! Gimme your cum!" he smiles,…'

Do what he asks and fuck him

Wytod300050 — Sun, 14 Jun 2015 21:36:14 GMT

Wytod300050:

"You got any rubbers?" you ask him.

"Yeah. Right pocket," he says, nodding towards his crumpled shorts on the carpeted floor.

Pulling out a condom and small bottle of lube from the shorts, you open the packaging and roll it onto your massive dong. It doesn't roll all the way down, only covering about 3/4 of your meat. You figure that he probably uses them on his own cock and wasn't expecting to be fucked by anyone as big as you are. At this point he is working his hole with three fingers up to the third knuckle, and little breathy moans are escaping through the cloth that covers his face. His face is cute, with dark eyes, a strong jaw, full lips, and high cheekbones; too bad it's covered with your underwear. His coarse, black hair sticks out from the cloth though, spiked up in the front and buzzed short on the sides. You grab his tight thighs and push them to his shoulders, giving you a clear view of his hole.

Squirting some lube on your dick, you sidle up close to him as he pulls his own fingers from his heat with a shuddering squelch. You set the head of your cock on his hole and slowly push in, moaning at the heat. As you start to pump in and out, you raise his neon undies back to your nose again and smell them. It turns you on that you're smelling his balls right now and your hips snap in and out of their own accord, quickening their pace. You fuck into him hard, shoving him into the wall with each thrust, making him whimper in between sniffs of your cummy briefs. Bringing your hands up to his chest you grab his toned boy muscles, before trailing your hands down his faint abs and then to his leaking cock. You graze a finger down the underside of his penis before bringing your hands back to his chest and pinching his small, dark nipples that stand hard at attention. His legs lay hooked over your shoulders while your man snake pummels his prostate and your fingers tweak his sensitive nipples. His cock pours precum as it spasms, aching for release. Your hand wanders down to mindlessly fondle him, while his hands tangle in the back of your hair. He pulls you down to kiss you through your underwear and as your tongues lick at each other through the thin material you can taste your own cum from the past few days. You bring your hands back to his chest and push yourself up, using only your hips to fuck his tight ass. You can feel yourself getting close and you feel his ass begin to tighten as you relentlessly press the head of your cock into his prostate. Trying to be as quiet as possible, you ball up his briefs and shove them into his mouth, letting him taste his own ball sweat. They muffle his moans and all you can hear is the faint slap of your balls against his ass and your heavy breaths.

You continue fucking him until the underwear doesn't help; his moans emanate through the cloth, sounding out with each thrust. You're positive that if they weren't in his mouth he would be saying some pretty dirty things like, "I want your cum," and, "Fuck me till I cry." Your cock is so hard it hurts, but you don't want to cum until he has. Biting your lip, you keep thrusting into his wet heat, the squelching sound of the lube getting louder and louder until...he moans and grunts, and grunts, and grunts, and grunts. White ropes of cum fly out of his cock painting himself and the wall behind him. By the time he's done, two shots have slid down the wall, three shots have hit him in the face, or rather on your Hanes, practically soaking them, and the last five ropes of his cum are pooled in the crevices between his small pecs and abs.

"So, where do you want it?" you ask with a pained smile. The pressure is intense and you're about to blow.

Does he want you to...

*[[Cum on the Hawaiian boy's face]]
*[[Cum in the Hawaiian boy's ass]]
[[Category: Big Cock Fun]]

Do what he asks and fuck him

Wytod300050 — Sun, 14 Jun 2015 21:13:09 GMT

Wytod300050: Created page with '"You got any rubbers?" you ask him. "Yeah. Right pocket," he says, nodding towards his crumpled shorts on the carpeted floor. Pulling out a condom and small bottle of lube from…'

Check the last stall

Wytod300050 — Sun, 14 Jun 2015 05:59:02 GMT

Wytod300050:

You shake your head, shaking out any lustful thoughts of the man, and get your focus back. Your goal is that cute Hawaiian boy with the firm, juicy ass, and you aren't going to let anything distract you. You take a few steps to the next stall and stop in front of it to listen. You hear heavy breaths coming from the other side of the door and try the handle. You open the door just enough to slip through and shut it quietly behind you. The boy is sitting on the bench in the small room with both his feet in the air. His chubbies lay crumpled on the floor, with his shoes, while his neon blue, Andrew Christian briefs are wrapped around his face so that he can smell the sweaty musk of his own taint. One of his hands is wrapped around his long uncut cock, while the other hand has two of its fingers quickly pistoning in and out of his hole. He takes a deep whiff of his underwear and moans quietly, fingering himself even faster. You watch his fingers work his hole open, his tan, round asscheeks on either side. His knees are touching his shoulders and his foreskin flies over his 7" button-head cock.

You strip off your t-shirt and slip out of your athletic shorts, leaving them on top of your shoes. You slide your boxer briefs off your hips and sniff them. They smell strongly of your balls and taint, and are riddled with salty cumstains. You take the blue underwear off the boy's face and he quickly jumps up and begins to apologize, thinking you are a store employee, "Oh god! I'm so fucking sorry! Oh...its you. You scared the shit out of me!" He whispers.
"Sorry," you smile sheepishly, "Here. Lay back." You place your hand on his chest and gently push him back onto the bench, lifting his legs by the knees. You replace his underwear with your own, letting the boy sniff at your musk. He even starts to lick at the cloth, trying to taste the cumstains, which he probably can since you haven't washed them in two days. His dick is rock hard and pointing straight up. You slowly jerk him off, his precum helping to ease the path of your hand. As he begins to return the favor, you raise his balled up undies to your nose and take a deep sniff. He smells extremely musky and salty, and the smells go straight to your cock.

"Holy shit!" He exclaims at the size of your hard cock. You simply smile in response and take another whiff, making your cock twitch. "Gah! Just fuck me!" He says slightly exasperated. As his open hole winks at you, his tongue darts out to lick yesterday's dried load from the crusty crotch.

Do you...
*[[Do what he asks and fuck him]]
*[[Ignore his request and prolong the pleasure]]
[[Category: Big Cock Fun]]

Check the last stall

Wytod300050 — Sun, 14 Jun 2015 05:55:13 GMT

Wytod300050:

Check the last stall

Wytod300050 — Sun, 14 Jun 2015 05:53:30 GMT

Wytod300050: Created page with 'You shake your head, shaking out any lustful thoughts of the man, and get your focus back. Your goal is that cute Hawaiian boy with the firm, juicy ass, and you aren't going to l…'

You shake your head, shaking out any lustful thoughts of the man, and get your focus back. Your goal is that cute Hawaiian boy with the firm, juicy ass, and you aren't going to let anything distract you. You take a few steps to the next stall and stop in front of it to listen. You hear heavy breaths coming from the other side of the door and try the handle. You open the door just enough to slip through and shut it quietly behind you. The boy is sitting on the bench in the small room with both his feet in the air. His chubbies lay crumpled on the floor, with his shoes, while his neon blue, Andrew Christian briefs are wrapped around his face so that he can smell the sweaty musk of his own taint. One of his hands is wrapped around his long uncut cock, while the other hand has two of its fingers quickly pistoning in and out of his hole. He takes a deep whiff of his underwear and moans quietly, fingering himself even faster. You watch his fingers work his hole open, his tan, round asscheeks on either side. His knees are touching his shoulders and his foreskin flies over his 7" button-head cock.

You strip off your t-shirt and slip out of your athletic shorts, leaving them on top of your shoes. You slide your boxer briefs off your hips and sniff them. They smell strongly of your balls and taint, and are riddled with salty cumstains. You take the blue underwear off the boy's face and he quickly jumps up and begins to apologize, thinking you are a store employee, "Oh god! I'm so fucking sorry! Oh...its you. You scared the shit out of me!" He whispers.
"Sorry," you smile sheepishly, "Here. Lay back." You place your hand on his chest and gently push him back onto the bench, lifting his legs by the knees. You replace his underwear with your own, letting the boy sniff at your musk. He even starts to lick at the cloth, trying to taste the cumstains, which he probably can since you haven't washed them in two days. His dick is rock hard and pointing straight up. You slowly jerk him off, his precum helping to ease the path of your hand. As he begins to return the favor, you raise his balled up undies to your nose and take a deep sniff. He smells extremely musky and salty, and the smells go straight to your cock.

"Holy shit!" He exclaims at the size of your hard cock. You simply smile in response and take another whiff, making your cock twitch. "Gah! Just fuck me!" He says slightly exasperated. As his open hole winks at you, his tongue darts out to lick yesterday's dried load from the crusty crotch.

Do you...
*[[Fuck him]]
*[[Ignore his request and prolong the pleasure]]

See what goes on in "Casual Male"

Wytod300050 — Sun, 14 Jun 2015 04:47:47 GMT

Wytod300050:

You parallel park on the side of the street just down from the building saying "Casual Male" on it and step out of your Buick, careful not to get hit by the oncoming traffic. Walking down the sidewalk, to the store, you see people meandering around inside and you don't hear the bassy thump of any music from the interior. You walk through the glass double doors, slightly confused, and realize that it's not a club at all. It's a clothing store.... The walls are lined with clothes displaying geometric shapes and lots of floral print. You half carringly glance to the menswear section on the left side of the store, but are surprised when a young Hawaiian boy that looks your age walks in behind you, lightly groping your ass as he passes. He walks straight to a rack of shorts and grabs two pairs of chubbies. Smiling and winking at you, he makes a beeline for the dressing rooms, giving you a good look at his ass in the dark red chubbies he's already wearing. It looks tight and firm; a perfect bubble butt. Before he rounds the corner, he gives you a coy look over his shoulder, before

You start to follow him, before a man in his early twenties catches your gaze. He's a store clerk who has just finished helping a customer and is standing ready to help anyone else who might need his attention. He's very handsome, with tanned skin and light brown hair worn in an undercut. His dark jeans fit his muscled legs and large package very well and his baby blue polo, that matched his eyes, gripped his toned biceps and chest. You wouldn't mind getting some help from him, but you wouldn't mind giving a little help to the boy in the changing rooms either.

Do you...

*[[Follow the boy into the dressing rooms]]
*[[Get the store clerk's attention]]

Follow the boy into the dressing rooms

Wytod300050 — Sun, 14 Jun 2015 04:41:40 GMT

Wytod300050: Created page with 'You grab a black shirt that says "awake" on it in a spindly font and make your way towards the back of the store. You tell the woman sitting towards the back of the room that you…'

You grab a black shirt that says "awake" on it in a spindly font and make your way towards the back of the store. You tell the woman sitting towards the back of the room that you have a shirt to try on and she motions you down the hall without even a glance before going back to filing her nails and blowing bubbles with her chewing gum. You walk along the row of the opaque doors, trying to determine which one belongs to the cute boy. The hall is out of veiw of the rest of the store, so you hunch over a bit to be able to peek under the doors. Most of them are empty, one has a lady checking out her own butt in some jeans, and another has a guy that is shirtless and slipping out of some sweat pants. You can tell he's hung by the type of underwear he's wearing. He has on a pair of dark blue Hanes; the kind that aren't fitted, but aren't boxer shorts either. They leave a little bit of a pouch in the crotch area, but this guy's thick trouser snake is weighing the cloth down, exposing his v-line.

There's one more stall that you haven't checked yet. Do you...

*[[Check the last stall]]
*[[Crawl into the hung guy's stall and hope for the best]]

See what goes on in "Casual Male"

Wytod300050 — Sun, 14 Jun 2015 04:05:00 GMT

Wytod300050: Created page with 'You parallel park on the side of the street just down from the building saying "Casual Male" on it and step out of your Camry, careful not to get hit by the oncoming traffic. Wal…'

You parallel park on the side of the street just down from the building saying "Casual Male" on it and step out of your Camry, careful not to get hit by the oncoming traffic. Walking down the sidewalk, to the store, you see people meandering around inside and you don't hear the bassy thump of any music from the interior. You walk through the glass double doors, slightly confused, and realize that it's not a club at all. It's a clothing store.... The walls are lined with clothes displaying geometric shapes and lots of floral print. You half carringly glance to the menswear section on the left side of the store, but are surprised when a young Hawaiian boy that looks your age walks in behind you, lightly groping your ass as he passes. He walks straight to a rack of shorts and grabs two pairs of chubbies. Smiling and winking at you, he makes a beeline for the dressing rooms, giving you a good look at his ass in the dark red chubbies he's already wearing. It looks tight and firm; a perfect bubble butt. Before he rounds the corner, he gives you a coy look over his shoulder, before

You start to follow him, before a man in his early twenties catches your gaze. He's a store clerk who has just finished helping a customer and is standing ready to help anyone else who might need his attention. He's very handsome, with tanned skin and light brown hair worn in an undercut. His dark jeans fit his muscled legs and large package very well and his baby blue polo, that matched his eyes, gripped his toned biceps and chest. You wouldn't mind getting some help from him, but you wouldn't mind giving a little help to the boy in the changing rooms either.

Do you...

*[[Follow the boy into the dressing rooms]]
*[[Get the store clerk's attention]]