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			<title>LoK Wake Up (nude).</title>
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			<description>&lt;p&gt;Totemist:&amp;#32;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;hr /&gt;
&lt;div&gt;Krystal regained consciousness gradually, becoming more and more aware of the thatched roof above her as she rose again into the waking world. She groaned, still half asleep, head pounding, and her bodies needs more demanding than ever. She slowly moved her hand between her legs, stroking her wet pussy as half-formed images of her violated form hold down beneath scaly monsters filled her mind. Eventually the fantasy of her mouth hanging open as the fucking began to overwhelm her mental defenses engaged her mind all the way, and she struggled up and sat on the edge of the rough cot, gazing blearily at the room around her, still somewhat delirious.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
She found herself in a somewhat crude wooden hut, chinked with mud and with some basic furniture scattered around the room and sunlight streaming through the closed shutters of the single window. A pot of some kind of soup hung above a small fire, filling the air with an appetizing smell. Briefly disoriented, she tried to recall how exactly she'd wound up here before memories of the crash rushed back to her. She began to blush a deep crimson under her fur as she realized that the Sharpclaws had almost definitely taken her captive, and she was still on track for getting bent over a table for some poetic justice.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Reaching slowly up, the blue vixen gently squeezed one of her perky breasts and slowly slid a hand over her warm, throbbing pussy. Maybe it wouldn't be so bad? She was definitely hot and ready for her punishment, and maybe if she put all the effort she could into working her hips and learning how to suck cock properly, they'd spare her ass long enough for her to properly stretch herself out...&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
She suppressed a moan, spreading her tight pussy lips with her fingers and wondering how hard the first warrior would have to thrust to penetrate her, when she heard a faint sound outside the door. She reflexively tried to stand before falling back heavily onto the cot, her legs not up to the task. The start seemed to knock her mind back into order, clearing the last of crash-and-heat delirium and she started to think that maybe, just maybe, she's find a way to escape without being violated into willing slavery by a bunch of foul-smelling monsters. She summoned her will and forced the aching void inside her to quiet, at least for the time being, taking stock of her situation.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Looking around, she noticed for the first time that a leather belt lay on a rough wooden table near her, along with a curiously curved heavy knife in a finely crafted sheath, next to her own knife and pistol. Curiously, she looked down and saw that her nude body had been adorned with gold jewelery and decorations, of surprisingly fine craftsmanship, that matched the decor on the belt in style. She slowly stood up, wincing at kinks in her back, and limped over to the table. The belt seemed perfectly sized for her hips, and the simple mechanism buckled easily. She walked a few loops around the room, adjusting the fit and wishing she had a mirror on her. She suspected that she looked pretty good in this get-up, a slutty barbarian queen or tribal priestess on a primitive world...&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
She shut that path of thought down quickly, turning her attention to the heavy knife. Curved inward on its sharp edge, it looked like it would be excellent for clearing heavy brush... Or limbs. The flat edge would also serve very well for breaking bones and busting heads, and all in all it seemed a nastily effective piece of blade-work. She admired the craftsmanship, excellent for such a primitive planet, and attached the sheath to her shiny belt. She checked her pistol and survival fine briefly before putting the modern weapons on her belt as well, modern synthetics clashing strangely with the jungle-beast leather.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Krystal stopped and wondered why, exactly, they had taken her clothes and dressed her up in this shinery and then left her with her weapons. Were they really that cocky, or was she not a prisoner after all? She recalled the smell of what were probably Sharpclaws and distinctly remembered being felt up, and then blushed furiously at her almost instinctive response, feeling her knees go weak at the remembered need to submit to owner of those wandering hands in every way... Forcing her thoughts back on track, she reasoned that they'd most likely left her naked because they'd found her that way. Good thing too, in this heat.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
More noise from outside drew her attention, as a shadow crossed the door. She stood back a ways from the doorway, trying to get herself and under control and slow her breathing before confronting the owner of this hut. Long practice easing her lithe body into a fighting stance, holding the pistol up and uncomfortably aware of the unfamiliar weight of the formidable fighting knife, ill at ease with carrying a weapon she didn't know how to use. Not at all like Fox, who would pick any old thing up off the battlefield as long as he could figure out which end killed people...&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Extraneous thoughts filtered out, to be replaced by pure concentration. The pistol was held ready, but not pointing at the door. Wouldn't do to antagonize the first native she saw, after all. The mind she sensed coming reinforced this: Burbling everyday surface-chatter about the weather and daily life cut with curiosity about a blue figure whose identity Krystal could guess, and blushing, and undercurrent of very... Feminine lust focused on that form.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;UNDER CONSTRUCTION&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
What does Krystal Do?&lt;br /&gt;
*[[LoK Accept the armor.]]&lt;br /&gt;
*[[LoK Accept the armor, but remain topless.]]&lt;br /&gt;
*[[LoK Give in to her lust and remain nude.]]&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Location:[[Liz's Hut]]&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
{{LoKStatus|Equipment=''[[Weapons Belt]], [[Sidearm]], [[Traditional Knife]]''|Health=Unspeakably horny|MP=0|Conquests=0}}&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
[[Category: Legend of Krystal|*]]&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Or, if you want to start where you left off, jump to [[:Category:LoK_Locations|a location in the story]]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
			<pubDate>Fri, 10 Apr 2015 12:45:30 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Totemist</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/create_Your_own_story/Talk:LoK_Wake_Up_(nude).</comments>		</item>
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			<title>LoK Wake Up (nude).</title>
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			<description>&lt;p&gt;Totemist:&amp;#32;Added more text. Will go back later and edit in Intrusive Thoughts.&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;hr /&gt;
&lt;div&gt;Krystal regained consciousness gradually, becoming more and more aware of the thatched roof above her as she rose again into the waking world. She groaned, still half asleep, head pounding, and her bodies needs more demanding than ever. She slowly moved her hand between her legs, stroking her wet pussy as half-formed images of her violated form hold down beneath scaly monsters filled her mind. Eventually the fantasy of her mouth hanging open as the fucking began to overwhelm her mental defenses engaged her mind all the way, and she struggled up and sat on the edge of the rough cot, gazing blearily at the room around her.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
She found herself in a somewhat crude wooden hut, chinked with mud and with some basic furniture scattered around the room and sunlight streaming through the closed shutters of the single window. A pot of some kind of soup hung above a small fire, filling the air with an appetizing smell. Briefly disoriented, she tried to recall how exactly she'd wound up here before memories of the crash rushed back to her. She began to blush a deep crimson under her fur as she realized that the Sharpclaws had almost definitely taken her captive, and she was still on track for getting bent over a table for some poetic justice.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
She squeezed one of her perky breasts and slowly slid a hand over her soaking cunt. Maybe it wouldn't be so bad? She was definitely hot and ready for her punishment, and maybe if she put all the effort she could into working her hips and learning how to suck cock properly, they'd spare her ass long enough for her to properly stretch herself out...&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
She suppressed a moan, spreading her tight pussy lips with her fingers and wondering how hard the first warrior would have to thrust to penetrate her, when she heard a faint sound outside the door. She reflexively tried to stand before falling back heavily onto the cot, her legs not up to the task. the start seemed to knock her mind back into order, and she started to think that maybe, just maybe, she's find a way to escape without being violated into willing slavery by a bunch of foul-smelling monsters. She summoned her and forced the aching void inside her to quiet, at least for the time being, taking stock of her situation.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
She noticed for the first time that a leather belt lay on a rough wooden table near her, along with a curiously curved heavy knife in a finely crafted sheath, next to her own knife and pistol. Curiously, she looked down and saw that her nude body had been adorned with gold jewelery and decorations, of surprisingly fine craftsmanship, that matched the decor on the belt in style. She slowly stood up, wincing at kinks in her back, and limped over to the table. The belt seemed perfectly sized for her hips, and the simple mechanism buckled easily. She walked a few loops around the room, adjusting the fit and wishing she had a mirror on her. She suspected that she looked pretty good in this get-up, a slutty barbarian queen or tribal priestess on a primitive world...&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
She shut that path of thought down quickly, turning her attention to the heavy knife. Curved inward on its sharp edge, it looked like it would be excellent for clearing heavy brush... Or limbs. The flat edge would also serve very well for breaking bones and busting heads, and all in all it seemed a nastily effective piece of blade-work. She admired the craftsmanship, excellent for such a primitive planet, and attached the sheath to her shiny belt. She checked her pistol and survival fine briefly before putting the modern weapons on her belt as well, modern synthetics clashing strangely with the jungle-beast leather.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
She had to stop and wonder why, exactly, they had taken her clothes and dressed her up in this shinery and then left her with her weapons. Were they really that cocky, or was she not a prisoner after all? She recalled the smell of what were probably Sharpclaws and distinctly remembered being felt up, and then blushed furiously at her almost instinctive response, feeling her knees go weak at the remembered need to submit to owner of those wandering hands in every way... Forcing her thoughts back on track, she reasoned that they'd most likely left her naked beacuse they'd found her that way. Good thing too, in this heat.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
More noise from outside drew her attention, as a shadow crossed the door. She stood back a ways from the doorway, trying to get herself and under control and slow her breathing before confronting the owner of this hut. She began to tremble, wondering if she was about to be faced with a demand for her body. What would she say? Did she really even want to refuse?&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;UNDER CONSTRUCTION&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
What does Krystal Do?&lt;br /&gt;
*[[LoK Accept the armor.]]&lt;br /&gt;
*[[LoK Accept the armor, but remain topless.]]&lt;br /&gt;
*[[LoK Give in to her lust and remain nude.]]&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Location:[[Liz's Hut]]&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
{{LoKStatus|Equipment=''[[Weapons Belt]], [[Sidearm]], [[Traditional Knife]]''|Health=Unspeakably horny|MP=0|Conquests=0}}&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
[[Category: Legend of Krystal|*]]&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Or, if you want to start where you left off, jump to [[:Category:LoK_Locations|a location in the story]]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
			<pubDate>Sat, 14 Mar 2015 14:21:23 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Totemist</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/create_Your_own_story/Talk:LoK_Wake_Up_(nude).</comments>		</item>
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			<title>LoK Wake Up (nude).</title>
			<link>http://72.14.177.54/create_Your_own_story/LoK_Wake_Up_(nude).</link>
			<description>&lt;p&gt;Totemist:&amp;#32;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;hr /&gt;
&lt;div&gt;Krystal regained consciousness gradually, becoming more and more aware of the thatched roof above her as she rose again into the waking world. She groaned, still half asleep, head pounding, and her bodies needs more demanding than ever. She slowly moved her hand between her legs, stroking her wet pussy as half-formed images of her violated form hold down beneath scaly monsters filled her mind. Eventually the fantasy of her mouth hanging open as the fucking began to overwhelm her mental defenses engaged her mind all the way, and she struggled up and sat on the edge of the rough cot, gazing blearily at the room around her.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;UNDER CONSTRUCTION&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
What does Krystal Do?&lt;br /&gt;
*[[LoK Accept the armor.]]&lt;br /&gt;
*[[LoK Accept the armor, but remain topless.]]&lt;br /&gt;
*[[LoK Give in to her lust and remain nude.]]&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Location:[[Liz's Hut]]&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
{{LoKStatus|Equipment=''[[Weapons Belt]], [[Sidearm]], [[Traditional Knife]]''|Health=Unspeakably horny|MP=0|Conquests=0}}&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
[[Category: Legend of Krystal|*]]&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Or, if you want to start where you left off, jump to [[:Category:LoK_Locations|a location in the story]]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
			<pubDate>Thu, 15 Jan 2015 11:20:36 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Totemist</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/create_Your_own_story/Talk:LoK_Wake_Up_(nude).</comments>		</item>
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			<title>LoK Give in to the heat and strip naked.</title>
			<link>http://72.14.177.54/create_Your_own_story/LoK_Give_in_to_the_heat_and_strip_naked.</link>
			<description>&lt;p&gt;Totemist:&amp;#32;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;hr /&gt;
&lt;div&gt;Krystal kept trying, to no avail, to concentrate and pay attention to her surroundings, despite the mounting heat both within her cockpit and deep inside her. After two loops through the same area without being able to concentrate properly on her readouts, she sighed and admitted defeat. Slowly, relishing the feeling of relatively cool air of her fur, she stripped out of her tight flightsuit, leaving it discarded on the seat beneath her. She sighed and ran her hands over her sweaty body, slowly transferring into sensual rubbing. She briefly fondled her breasts before her hands moved down, almost of their own accord. She shook her head and kept flying, more easily paying attention to her monitors now.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
The extra concentration didn't last long, however, as the schoolgirl naughtiness of her nudity made her blush and giggle, thinking of what fox would think if he could see her now, his expression as he realized just what he was missing as he beheld her nude and covered in sweat, spread out in her tiny cockpit, ready and eager for a male, any male, to spread open her legs and take her...&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Now where had ''that'' thought come from? She smiled to herself, idly pinching one erect nipple with her free hand. More and more after the last few weeks she'd been thinking about male companionship, or rather the lack thereof in her life. She'd been trying to suppress her libido ever since her breakup and she'd been failing across the board, tempted to put out an offer for a one night stand on some hookup site just to have a halfway decent male drill her, but she'd been too timid to make the jump. Funny how that was.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Instead, she'd been trying to meditate her arousal away, which only succeeded in reducing it for a time. Truth be told, she'd always been an amorous girl, and she'd been holding back her appetites through willpower for a long, long time. It would be nice to finally relax into the arms of an aggressive male, and sate the deep, maddening heat inside her. Idly, she thought of Fox... No, not Fox. Fox was history. Wolf, with his bad-boy demeanor and scars? No, too much of an asshole... It was almost hilarious, she thought, that her list of males to fantasize about getting a good screwing from was as short as the list of males he could get a real screwing from. Suddenly, she broke out in a grin, as she settled on an imaginary partner that would do the trick. Huge, strong, masculine, aggressive, wrapping thick green arms around her as she surrendered and spread her legs to receive what would inevitably be a truly monstrous cock...&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
The Sharpclaw Warrior, everything her carnal desires wanted in a male and deliciously taboo. Why limit herself to just one, though? Blushing, she imagined being held down by a mob of unruly warriors, raising her ass to the air and presenting her femininity to the monsters that would so shortly destroy every orifice her poor body had, perhaps captured and reduced to a pleasure slave, little more than a living fuck doll whose only purpose was to present warm, tight holes to any male who desired a quick fuck. And if she just happened to love every second of her violation...&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Fuck it. Double-checking her autopilot, she reclined her seat back as far as it would go and slid her fingers down to her wet slit, ever so slightly rubbing against her most delicate erogenous zone, images of her small, lithe form being buried beneath mountains of green muscle filling her head. Too, on the edges, an old girlish dream began to resurface, of finding another female to &amp;quot;experiment&amp;quot; with, finally a partner to help her explore the forbidden female form... But what she really needed now was a good dicking. Shameful visions of sultry nights with smiling females and the gentle rub of soft fur on fur stayed on the sidelines of her central fantasy of a particularly huge, hulking warrior taking her ass for the first time, her screams transforming into moans as the massive cock, lubed with cum and pussy juice leaking from her ravaged womanhood, slowly broke in her tailhole to fit his massive girth. She had to admit that both fantasies had most likely been lurking in the back of her mind for a long time, and had only surfaced in the damnable sauna that was her Arwing.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Sliding two fingers into her wet pussy, as her imaginary captors subjected her to sexual torture and degradation that she never would have admitted to wanting to be subjected to in a normal frame of mind, she failed to notice her Arwing circling dangerously low around a range of jagged hills, or the predatory feeling of a number of intelligent minds focusing on her with ill intent, tinged with a deeper, more primal desire. Lost in world of forced penetration and truly excessive showers of cum, she neared climax, fingers sliding faster along her most sensitive places as she imagined her will finally breaking, the constant force-fucking destroying her resolve and will to escape. Turned on just as much by the taboo of fantasizing about being raped into a willing little sex slave as she was by the sexual imagery, she felt the deep, demanding heat within her consume her mind and body as she neared a truly magnificent orgasm, focusing on an image of herself, broken and covered in Sharpclaw seed, cum running like a river from her ass and pussy as she spread her ass cheeks with her delicate hands for the first male of round two to fill her...&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Only to be yanked from her inner world by a pair of heavy impacts on her Arwing, three fingers lick with her own lubricant emerging from between her legs as she suppressed a frustrated groan at the denied climax, distant eyes re-focusing on her surroundings.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Clinging to her cockpit and looking momentarily unsure of what they'd just done, were two hulking Sharpclaw warriors. Krystal blinked in confusion, at least partially sure that she was just seeing after-images from her fantasy. When they shook off the vertigo of hanging on a small craft far, far above the ground and started advancing on her, that doubt vanished. She reached for her holster, before realizing that it was in the suit underneath her. Cursing, she did her best to dis-entangle her sidearm as the warriors hooked their claws underneath the cockpit and pried it open with a groan of tortured metal. The predators leered in at her, and she caught sight of the obvious erections barely concealed within their loincloths. They were massive, bigger by far than anything in her depraved fantasies of a moment ago, even the barely-altered expy of General Scales that she'd pictured grabbing her by the tail and rhythmically raising and lowering her mouth around his cock in an ultimate display of his dominance and her eager, total submission...&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
It occurred to her that, in a way, she deserved to be pinned and violated by these creatures. She'd been fantasizing about being broken down into a whore for monsters while on the job, and because she was careless the universe was quite literally going to shove her indiscretion down her throat. Probably in a few other holes too, she thought as she stared at the bulging males, finding it hard to think about anything beyond how wet she was, how ready to lift her tail and present her rear to the huge, strong warrior so intent on claiming her...&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
The leering Sharpclaw reached in and grabbed the back of her head and began drawing it down onto his cock, claws digging painfully into her fur. That snapped her awake. If he'd only pressed her down gently, but firmly and irresistibly, onto his penis, she would have reluctantly opened her jaws and begun fellating him as her body grew ever hotter and more ready to receive a good, hard cock between her damp thighs. Because he had to twist his claws in the nape of her neck, however, a hotter spark of anger and indignation took hold, and he found himself staring into the barrel of a gun. Briefly.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
The warrior slid off her cockpit, penis waving an obscene farewell as he plummeted to the jungle below. His companion snarled and pinned her arm against her control panel, before her other hand brought up a survival knife to stab through his wrist. Pistol freed, she added two neat holes to his chest before he, too, fell away into the air.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Victorious, she groaned in frustration at the universe teasing her with lustful monsters only to have them, once again, act like total bastards. As the low mountain peak ripped through the patched hull beneath her Arwing, she wondered if she was ever going to catch a break.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
With no time to try and course correct, she scrambled to buckle her emergency harness as her Arwing hit tree in a bewildering rush of green trees and red-tinged impacts. She finally came to rest in the shade of a large tree, head swimming, and made one vain attempt to close her cockpit before leaning back and accepting unconsciousness into her, a sad substitute for something more satisfying.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
After some time, she was vaguely aware of movement, and a powerful musky smell that invaded her nostrils and awakened her body, reminding her of sex and masculinity for reasons she could not recall. A smaller voice warned against danger, but her lust crushed it, and she summoned enough strength to raise her ass in the air a bit, swishing her tail invitingly above her perfect, firm rear and tight, dripping pussy. When this failed to elicit a response, she gave up on it and collapsed back into blackness.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
What does Krystal Do?&lt;br /&gt;
*[[LoK Wake Up (nude).]]&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Location:[[Krystal's Arwing (Flying)]]&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
{{LoKStatus|Equipment=''[[Flightsuit]], [[Sidearm]], [[Survival knife]]''|Health=Uncomfortably Warm|MP=0|Conquests=0}}&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
[[Category: Legend of Krystal|*]]&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Or, if you want to start where you left off, jump to [[:Category:LoK_Locations|a location in the story]]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
			<pubDate>Thu, 15 Jan 2015 11:16:15 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Totemist</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/create_Your_own_story/Talk:LoK_Give_in_to_the_heat_and_strip_naked.</comments>		</item>
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			<title>LoK Wake Up (nude).</title>
			<link>http://72.14.177.54/create_Your_own_story/LoK_Wake_Up_(nude).</link>
			<description>&lt;p&gt;Totemist:&amp;#32;Created page with 'What does Krystal Do? *LoK Accept the armor. *LoK Accept the armor, but remain topless. *LoK Give in to her lust and remain nude.    Location:Liz's Hut  {{LoKStat…'&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;hr /&gt;
&lt;div&gt;What does Krystal Do?&lt;br /&gt;
*[[LoK Accept the armor.]]&lt;br /&gt;
*[[LoK Accept the armor, but remain topless.]]&lt;br /&gt;
*[[LoK Give in to her lust and remain nude.]]&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Location:[[Liz's Hut]]&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
{{LoKStatus|Equipment=''[[Weapons Belt]], [[Sidearm]], [[Traditional Knife]]''|Health=Unspeakably horny|MP=0|Conquests=0}}&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
[[Category: Legend of Krystal|*]]&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Or, if you want to start where you left off, jump to [[:Category:LoK_Locations|a location in the story]]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
			<pubDate>Tue, 16 Dec 2014 10:03:00 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Totemist</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/create_Your_own_story/Talk:LoK_Wake_Up_(nude).</comments>		</item>
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			<title>LoK Give in to the heat and strip naked.</title>
			<link>http://72.14.177.54/create_Your_own_story/LoK_Give_in_to_the_heat_and_strip_naked.</link>
			<description>&lt;p&gt;Totemist:&amp;#32;Created page with 'Krystal kept trying, to no avail, to concentrate and pay attention to her surroundings, despite the mounting heat both within her cockpit and deep inside her. After two loops thr…'&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;hr /&gt;
&lt;div&gt;Krystal kept trying, to no avail, to concentrate and pay attention to her surroundings, despite the mounting heat both within her cockpit and deep inside her. After two loops through the same area without being able to concentrate properly on her readouts, she sighed and admitted defeat. Slowly, relishing the feeling of relatively cool air of her fur, she stripped out of her tight flightsuit, leaving it discarded on the seat beneath her. She sighed and ran her hands over her sweaty body, slowly transferring into sensual rubbing. She briefly fondled her breasts before her hands moved down, almost of their own accord. She shook her head and kept flying, more easily paying attention to her monitors now.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
The extra concentration didn't last long, however, as the schoolgirl naughtiness of her nudity made her blush and giggle, thinking of what fox would think if he could see her now, his expression as he realized just what he was missing as he beheld her nude and covered in sweat, spread out in her tiny cockpit, ready and eager for a male, any male, to spread open her legs and take her...&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Now where had ''that'' thought come from? She smiled to herself, idly pinching one erect nipple with her free hand. More and more after the last few weeks she'd been thinking about male companionship, or rather the lack thereof in her life. She'd been trying to suppress her libido ever since her breakup and she'd been failing across the board, tempted to put out an offer for a one night stand on some hookup site just to have a halfway decent male drill her, but she'd been too timid to make the jump. Funny how that was.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Instead, she'd been trying to meditate her arousal away, which only succeeded in reducing it for a time. Truth be told, she'd always been an amorous girl, and she'd been holding back her appetites through willpower for a long, long time. It would be nice to finally relax into the arms of an aggressive male, and sate the deep, maddening heat inside her. Idly, she thought of Fox... No, not Fox. Fox was history. Wolf, with his bad-boy demeanor and scars? No, too much of an asshole... It was almost hilarious, she thought, that her list of males to fantasize about getting a good screwing from was as short as the list of males he could get a real screwing from. Suddenly, she broke out in a grin, as she settled on an imaginary partner that would do the trick. Huge, strong, masculine, aggressive, wrapping thick green arms around her as she surrendered and spread her legs to receive what would inevitably be a truly monstrous cock...&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
The Sharpclaw Warrior, everything her carnal desires wanted in a male and deliciously taboo. Why limit herself to just one, though? Blushing, she imagined being held down by a mob of unruly warriors, raising her ass to the air and presenting her femininity to the monsters that would so shortly destroy every orifice her poor body had, perhaps captured and reduced to a pleasure slave, little more than a living fuck doll whose only purpose was to present warm, tight holes to any male who desired a quick fuck. And if she just happened to love every second of her violation...&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Fuck it. Double-checking her autopilot, she reclined her seat back as far as it would go and slid her fingers down to her wet slit, ever so slightly rubbing against her most delicate erogenous zone, images of her small, lithe form being buried beneath mountains of green muscle filling her head. Too, on the edges, an old girlish dream began to resurface, of finding another female to &amp;quot;experiment&amp;quot; with, finally a partner to help her explore the forbidden female form... But what she really needed now was a good dicking. Shameful visions of sultry nights with smiling females and the gentle rub of soft fur on fur stayed on the sidelines of her central fantasy of a particularly huge, hulking warrior taking her ass for the first time, her screams transforming into moans as the massive cock, lubed with cum and pussy juice leaking from her ravaged womanhood, slowly broke in her tailhole to fit his massive girth. She had to admit that both fantasies had most likely been lurking in the back of her mind for a long time, and had only surfaced in the damnable sauna that was her Arwing.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Sliding two fingers into her wet pussy, as her imaginary captors subjected her to sexual torture and degradation that she never would have admitted to wanting to be subjected to in a normal frame of mind, she failed to notice her Arwing circling dangerously low around a range of jagged hills, or the predatory feeling of a number of intelligent minds focusing on her with ill intent, tinged with a deeper, more primal desire. Lost in world of forced penetration and truly excessive showers of cum, she neared climax, fingers sliding faster along her most sensitive places as she imagined her will finally breaking, the constant force-fucking destroying her resolve and will to escape. Turned on just as much by the taboo of fantasizing about being raped into a willing little sex slave as she was by the sexual imagery, she felt the deep, demanding heat within her consume her mind and body as she neared a truly magnificent orgasm, focusing on an image of herself, broken and covered in Sharpclaw seed, cum running like a river from her ass and pussy as she spread her ass cheeks with her delicate hands for the first male of round two to fill her...&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Only to be yanked from her inner world by a pair of heavy impacts on her Arwing, three fingers lick with her own lubricant emerging from between her legs as she suppressed a frustrated groan at the denied climax, distant eyes re-focusing on her surroundings.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;UNDER CONSTRUCTION&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
What does Krystal Do?&lt;br /&gt;
*[[LoK Wake Up (nude).]]&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Location:[[Krystal's Arwing (Flying)]]&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
{{LoKStatus|Equipment=''[[Flightsuit]], [[Sidearm]], [[Survival knife]]''|Health=Uncomfortably Warm|MP=0|Conquests=0}}&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
[[Category: Legend of Krystal|*]]&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Or, if you want to start where you left off, jump to [[:Category:LoK_Locations|a location in the story]]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
			<pubDate>Thu, 11 Dec 2014 19:21:28 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Totemist</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/create_Your_own_story/Talk:LoK_Give_in_to_the_heat_and_strip_naked.</comments>		</item>
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			<title>LoK Wake up.</title>
			<link>http://72.14.177.54/create_Your_own_story/LoK_Wake_up.</link>
			<description>&lt;p&gt;Totemist:&amp;#32;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;hr /&gt;
&lt;div&gt;Gradually, Krystal drifted back into consciousness, glancing blearily around the room, confused at the woven ceiling and rough cloth on her bedframe. Wait... Bed? She sat up, wincing at a dull pain in the base of her skull, seeing that she was in a primitive hut with some admittedly nice furniture, in a rustic sort of way. Heirlooms from a relatively wealthy past? She shook off idle thoughts and concentrated on how she'd gotten here in the first place. Stupid Fox, Mining Corp, Courier, Fialing Systems, Goddamnit, Slippy... Ah.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
She cringed slightly, realizing now where she'd remembered the scent she'd picked up before going out of it completely. So now she was a Sharpclaw captive, and, if she remembered correctly, they had at least enough interest in her female form for one to cop a feel while she was out. Or, at least, that's all she'd ''remembered'' that they'd done...&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
She stood up shakily, noting her new outfit. A ridiculous garment just shy of a prostitutes costume, gold and white cloth and engraved jewlery. She blushed, realizing that she's have to move carefully to avoid exposing herself completely while wearing this. Brushing the cloth back into place to preserve what little modesty she had left, she started at a quiet chuckle from the other end of the room.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Turning slowly, cursing herself for her lack of awareness, she caught one of the most surprising sights of her life. Sitting at the table, long legs crossed over a corner, was a vision in green. A tall, shapely, well-endowed female with smooth green skin and a short muzzle beneath dark and playful eyes, a long, thick reptilian tail dancing behind her. This, thought Krystal, was what a Sharpclaw female looked like. Damn.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;quot;I suppose you have some questions, soft-fur,&amp;quot; the smiling lizard-girl intoned, &amp;quot;So let me get the most obvious out of the way: Your ship crashed in the land of the Seven Blades Sharpclaw Tribe, and was little more than a pile of scrap wrapped around you when we found it. The warriors brought you here to recover, where you stayed blissfully asleep on my spare bed for nearly two days. As of now you are effectively property of the Seven Blades, as signified by your ceremonial.. Armour. You will be given room and board and have freedom of movement within the village but may not leave without permission and escort, and you'll have to... Earn your keep while you're here.&amp;quot; She smiled salaciously at the staring vixen.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;quot;Any other questions?&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Krystal stood still for a moment, trying to absorb what the surprisingly curvy female had just told. Inevitably, her mind kept circling back to &amp;quot;E-Earn my keep?&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Does she:&lt;br /&gt;
*[[LoK Ask about what she's expected to do to &amp;quot;earn her keep&amp;quot;.]]&lt;br /&gt;
*[[LoK Ask about the Seven Blades.]]&lt;br /&gt;
*[[LoK Ask about the lizard-girl.]]&lt;br /&gt;
*[[LoK Ask about her &amp;quot;Amour&amp;quot;.]]&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
{{Status|Equipment=''Tribal Armour''|Health=100|MP=0|Level=0}}&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
[[Category: Legend of Krystal]]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
			<pubDate>Thu, 11 Dec 2014 18:19:23 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Totemist</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/create_Your_own_story/Talk:LoK_Wake_up.</comments>		</item>
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			<title>LoK Wake up.</title>
			<link>http://72.14.177.54/create_Your_own_story/LoK_Wake_up.</link>
			<description>&lt;p&gt;Totemist:&amp;#32;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;hr /&gt;
&lt;div&gt;Gradually, Krystal drifted back into consciousness, glancing blearily around the room, confused at the woven ceiling and rough cloth on her bedframe. Wait... Bed? She sat up, wincing at a dull pain in the base of her skull, seeing that she was in a primitive hut with some admittedly nice furniture, in a rustic sort of way. Heirlooms from a relatively wealthy past? She shook off idle thoughts and concentrated on how she'd gotten here in the first place. Stupid Fox, Mining Corp, Courier, Fialing Systems, Goddamnit, Slippy... Ah.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
She cringed slightly, realizing now where she'd remembered the scent she'd picked up before going out of it completely. So now she was a Sharpclaw captive, and, if she remembered correctly, they had at least enough interest in her female form for one to cop a feel while she was out. Or, at least, that's all she'd ''remembered'' that they'd done...&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
She stood up shakily, noting her new outfit. A ridiculous garment just shy of a prostitutes costume, gold and white cloth and engraved jewlery. She blushed, realizing that she's have to move carefully to avoid exposing herself completely while wearing this. Brushing the cloth back into place to preserve what little modesty she had left, she started at a quiet chuckle from the other end of the room.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Turning slowly, cursing herself for her lack of awareness, she caught one of the most surprising sights of her life. Sitting at the table, long legs crossed over a corner, was a vision in green. A tall, shapely, well-endowed female with smooth green skin and a short muzzle beneath dark and playful eyes, a long, thick reptilian tail dancing behind her. This, thought Krystal, was what a Sharpclaw female looked like. Damn.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;quot;I suppose you have some questions, soft-fur,&amp;quot; the smiling lizard-girl intoned, &amp;quot;So let me get the most obvious out of the way: Your ship crashed in the land of the Seven Blades Sharpclaw Tribe, and was little more than a pile of scrap wrapped around you when we found it. The warriors brought you here to recover, where you stayed blissfully asleep on my spare bed for nearly two days. As of now you are effectively property of the Seven Blades, as signified by your ceremonial.. Armour. You will be given room and board and have freedom of movement within the village but may not leave without permission and escort, and you'll have to... Earn your keep while you're here.&amp;quot; She smiled salaciously at the staring vixen.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;quot;Any other questions?&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Krystal stood still for a moment, trying to absorb what the surprisingly curvy female had just told. Inevitably, her mind kept circling back to &amp;quot;E-Earn my keep?&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Doees she:&lt;br /&gt;
*[[LoK Ask about what she's expected to do to &amp;quot;earn her keep&amp;quot;.]]&lt;br /&gt;
*[[LoK Ask about the Seven Blades.]]&lt;br /&gt;
*[[LoK Ask about the lizard-girl.]]&lt;br /&gt;
*[[LoK Ask about her &amp;quot;Amour&amp;quot;.]]&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
{{Status|Equipment=''Tribal Armour''|Health=100|MP=0|Level=0}}&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
[[Category: Legend of Krystal]]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
			<pubDate>Thu, 11 Dec 2014 18:18:39 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Totemist</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/create_Your_own_story/Talk:LoK_Wake_up.</comments>		</item>
		<item>
			<title>LoK Wake up.</title>
			<link>http://72.14.177.54/create_Your_own_story/LoK_Wake_up.</link>
			<description>&lt;p&gt;Totemist:&amp;#32;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;hr /&gt;
&lt;div&gt;Gradually, Krystal drifted back into consciousness, glancing blearily around the room, confused at the woven ceiling and rough cloth on her bedframe. Wait... Bed? She sat up, wincing at a dull pain in the base of her skull, seeing that she was in a primitive hut with some admittedly nice furniture, in a rustic sort of way. Heirlooms from a relatively wealthy past? She shook off idle thoughts and concentrated on how she'd gotten here in the first place. Stupid Fox, Mining Corp, Courier, Fialing Systems, Goddamnit, Slippy... Ah.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
She cringed slightly, realizing now where she'd remembered the scent she'd picked up before going out of it completely. So now she was a Sharpclaw captive, and, if she remembered correctly, they had at least enough interest in her female form for one to cop a feel while she was out. Or, at least, that's all she'd ''remembered'' that they'd done...&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
She stood up shakily, noting her new outfit. A ridiculous garment just shy of a prostitutes costume, gold and white cloth and engraved jewlery. She blushed, realizing that she's have to move carefully to avoid exposing herself completely while wearing this. Brushing the cloth back into place to preserve what little modesty she had left, she started at a quiet chuckle from the other end of the room.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Turning slowly, cursing herself for her lack of awareness, she caught one of the most surprising sights of her life. Sitting at the table, long legs crossed over a corner, was a vision in green. A tall, shapely, well-endowed female with smooth green skin and a short muzzle beneath dark and playful eyes, a long, thick reptilian tail dancing behind her. This, thought Krystal, was what a Sharpclaw female looked like. Damn.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;quot;I suppose you have some questions, soft-fur,&amp;quot; the smiling lizard-girl intoned, &amp;quot;So let me get the most obvious out of the way: Your ship crashed in the land of the Seven Blades Sharpclaw Tribe, and was little more than a pile of scrap wrapped around you when we found it. The warriors brought you here to recover, where you stayed blissfully asleep on my spare bed for nearly two days. As of now you are effectively property of the Seven Blades, as signified by your ceremonial.. Armour. You will be given room and board and have freedom of movement within the village but may not leave without permission and escort, and you'll have to... Earn your keep while you're here.&amp;quot; She smiled salaciously at the staring vixen.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;quot;Any other questions?&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Krystal stood still for a moment, trying to absorb what the surprisingly curvy female had just told. Inevitably, her mind kept circling back to &amp;quot;E-Earn my keep?&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Doees she:&lt;br /&gt;
*[[LoK Remain calm and try to find out more about her situation.]]&lt;br /&gt;
*[[LoK Rush out the door to escape.]]&lt;br /&gt;
*[[(LoK) Attack Liz|attack Liz?]]&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
{{Status|Equipment=''Tribal Armour''|Health=100|MP=0|Level=0}}&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
[[Category: Legend of Krystal]]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
			<pubDate>Thu, 11 Dec 2014 18:09:32 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Totemist</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/create_Your_own_story/Talk:LoK_Wake_up.</comments>		</item>
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			<title>LoK Concentrate and finish the mission.</title>
			<link>http://72.14.177.54/create_Your_own_story/LoK_Concentrate_and_finish_the_mission.</link>
			<description>&lt;p&gt;Totemist:&amp;#32;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;hr /&gt;
&lt;div&gt;Krystal shook her head, as if to clear it, and did her best to focus on the mission. It wouldn't do to die alone in a fiery wreck just because she got a bit hot under the collar.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
After several hours of fruitless flying, she began to wonder if the courier robot was not, in fact, a ghost. A minor, Outsystem Mining Ltd Flying Dutchman that nobody outside a few executives and bored interns actually cared about. The rich mineral deposits simply played havoc with advanced sensors, their sheer concentration making her wonder why no major interests had ever tried setting up mining operations here. Surely the price of extra security to keep the natives from killing your workers would be worth it? Then again, Sauria did have an uncertain reputation from when it sort of...broke into four pieces within recent memory, with the Krazoa spirits evidently being the only thing keeping the moon from being turned into a new ring system by the gravity of its parent body. She shuddered, thanking her birth stars that Andross' mad plan had been foiled. It would have been a cruel end to her life story if she'd been forgotten in a crystal prison, adrift on some nameless asteroid for eternity.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Shaking off her dark thoughts, an even worse companion than her frustrated lust, she tried to focus on finding the damn courier. Try as she might, she seemed to get no closer to her goal of activating the secondary drone, weaving twisting paths through the maze of jagged, volcanic ridges and narrow valleys as she hunts the weak and intermittent signal in vain. The temperature in the small cockpit rose despite her attempts to trade her telepathy for temperature control, as the flightsuit seemed to constrict around her lithe, sweaty frame. Groaning in frustration, she decided to loop around a particularly impressive and rugged mountain range in an attempt to give her sensors a high-altitude scan of the target region and give her scanners every ounce of spare juice she had, noting the surprisingly not volcanic peaks rearing up as if in spite of the prevalence of extinct Ashemounts in the surrounding area. As her Arwing circled the snow-capped peaks, eyes trained carefully on sensor readouts, her engines begin to flicker and whine. The Hell? Snapping to attention, she scrambled to run diagnostics as she fought to keep control of the fighter, praying silently for a minor computer glitch and letting loose a verbalized series of expletives that would have shocked her elderly tutor into a long overdue grave.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Cursing even more foully, she blinked in disbelief at the readout, helpfully informing her that roughly nine out of every ten systems needed to actually make the Arwing fly and keep her protected from the vacuum of space were failing due to recent battle damage, and noting that the systems responsible for automatically monitoring her Arwings internals were not responding. Vaguely, she recalled Slippy saying something about having to re-route her automated diagnostics through a handful of backup computer cores, making them vulnerable to damage... Shit! As she fought to keep her Arwing level in its spiral to an inevitable meeting with the hard, hard ground, she cursed the frog and his family six generations back. Why the Hell should she have to die because just this one time his warnings actually meant something? He should have spouted less jargon and made sure she was actually listening!&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Her eyes flickered desperately to the weather readout. If she could just... There! Sighing in relief at the lucky updraft, she slammed the emergency maneuvering jets into action with her fist, giving her the extra control and power she desperately needed to make her imminent crash survivable. Bracing for a hard landing, she closed her eyes tight as her precious Arwing slammed through the jungle canopy, a symphony of snapping branches and cringe-inducing crashing noises singing her to her collision with the rocky soil. Rocking against against her canopy bubble, she all but blacked out as her starfighter slowly ground to a halt. Taking one last look around as black closed in on her field of vision, she looked at her clock, blinking in surprise at the time. Minutes? That crash felt like four hours of continually smacking trees! Collapsing back onto her seat, she slipped into unconsciousness thinking that she wished the crash had broken part of her canopy open. It's so damn hot...&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Some time later, she felt vague impressions of being lifted up and carried, and later of being in motion in some kind of bumpy vehicle, of a smell familiar enough to warn her of danger but not immediately recognizable, and some cretin with an oversize hand squeezing one of her firm ass cheeks. Trying to tell whoever it is to sod off, the words fail to escape her mouth and she fell the rest of the way into darkness.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
What does Krystal do?&lt;br /&gt;
*[[LoK Wake up.]]&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Location:[[Krystal's Arwing (Flying)]]&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
{{LoKStatus|Equipment=''[[Flightsuit]], [[Sidearm]], [[Survival knife]]''|Health=Uncomfortably Hot, Unconscious|MP=0|Conquests=0}}&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
[[Category: Legend of Krystal|*]]&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Or, if you want to start where you left off, jump to [[:Category:LoK_Locations|a location in the story]]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
			<pubDate>Thu, 11 Dec 2014 17:35:43 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Totemist</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/create_Your_own_story/Talk:LoK_Concentrate_and_finish_the_mission.</comments>		</item>
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			<title>LoK Concentrate and finish the mission.</title>
			<link>http://72.14.177.54/create_Your_own_story/LoK_Concentrate_and_finish_the_mission.</link>
			<description>&lt;p&gt;Totemist:&amp;#32;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;hr /&gt;
&lt;div&gt;Krystal shook her head, as if to clear it, and did her best to focus on the mission. It wouldn't do to die alone in a fiery wreck just because she got a bit hot under the collar.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
After several hours of fruitless flying, she began to wonder if the courier robot was not, in fact, a ghost. A minor, Outsystem Mining Ltd Flying Dutchman that nobody outside a few executives and bored interns actually cared about. The rich mineral deposits simply played havoc with advanced sensors, their sheer concentration making her wonder why no major interests had ever tried setting up mining operations here. Surely the price of extra security to keep the natives from killing your workers would be worth it? Then again, Sauria did have an uncertain reputation from when it sort of...broke into four pieces within recent memory, with the Krazoa spirits evidently being the only thing keeping the moon from being turned into a new ring system by the gravity of its parent body. She shuddered, thanking her birth stars that Andross' mad plan had been foiled. It would have been a cruel end to her life story if she'd been forgotten in a crystal prison, adrift on some nameless asteroid for eternity.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Shaking off her dark thoughts, an even worse companion than her frustrated lust, she tries to focus on finding the damn courier. Try as she might, she seemed to get no closer to her goal of activating the secondary drone, weaving twisting paths through the maze of jagged, volcanic ridges and narrow valleys as she hunts the weak and intermittent signal in vain. The temperature in the small cockpit rose despite her attempts to trade her telepathy for temperature control, as the flightsuit seemed to constrict around her lithe, sweaty frame. Groaning in frustration, she decided to loop around a particularly impressive and rugged mountain range in an attempt to give her sensors a high-altitude scan of the target region and give her scanners every ounce of spare juice she had, noting the surprisingly not volcanic peaks rearing up as if in spite of the prevalence of extinct Ashemounts in the surrounding area. As her Arwing circled the snow-capped peaks, eyes trained carefully on sensor readouts, her engines begin to flicker and whine. The Hell? Snapping to attention, she scrambled to run diagnostics as she fought to keep control of the fighter, praying silently for a minor computer glitch and letting loose a verbalized series of expletives that would have shocked her elderly tutor into a long overdue grave.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Cursing even more foully, she blinked in disbelief at the readout, helpfully informing her that roughly nine out of every ten systems needed to actually make the Arwing fly and keep her protected from the vacuum of space are failing due to recent battle damage, and noting that the systems responsible for automatically monitoring her Arwings internals are not responding. Vaguely, she recalled Slippy saying something about having to re-route her automated diagnostics through a handful of backup computer cores, making them vulnerable to damage... Shit! As she fought to keep her Arwing level in its spiral to an inevitable meeting with the hard, hard ground, she cursed the frog and his family six generations back. Why the Hell should she have to die because just this one time his warnings actually meant something? He should have spouted less jargon and made sure she was actually listening!&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Her eyes flickered desperately to the weather readout. If she can just... There! Sighing in relief at the lucky updraft, she slammed the emergency maneuvering jets into action with her fist, giving her the extra control and power she desperately needed to make her imminent crash survivable. Bracing for a hard landing, she closed her eyes tight as her precious Arwing slammed through the jungle canopy, a symphony of snapping branches and cringe-inducing crashing noises singing her to her collision with the rocky soil. Rocking against against her canopy bubble, she all but blacked out as her starfighter slowly ground to a halt. Taking one last look around as black closed in on her field of vision, she looked at her clock, blinking in surprise at the time. Minutes? That crash felt like four hours of continually smacking trees! Collapsing back onto her seat, she slipped into unconsciousness thinking that she wished the crash had broken part of her canopy open. It's so damn hot...&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Some time later, she felt vague impressions of being lifted up and carried, and later of being in motion in some kind of bumpy vehicle, of a smell familiar enough to warn her of danger but not immediately recognizable, and some cretin with an oversize hand squeezing one of her firm ass cheeks. Trying to tell whoever it is to sod off, the words fail to escape her mouth and she falls the rest of the way into darkness.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
What does Krystal do?&lt;br /&gt;
*[[LoK Wake up.]]&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Location:[[Krystal's Arwing (Flying)]]&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
{{LoKStatus|Equipment=''[[Flightsuit]], [[Sidearm]], [[Survival knife]]''|Health=Uncomfortably Hot, Unconscious|MP=0|Conquests=0}}&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
[[Category: Legend of Krystal|*]]&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
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Or, if you want to start where you left off, jump to [[:Category:LoK_Locations|a location in the story]]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
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&lt;div&gt;Older discussions started before 2010 have been moved to an [[Talk:Main Page/Archive1|archive page]].&lt;br /&gt;
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==HELP==&lt;br /&gt;
Could some people please help me write *[[time machine]]&lt;br /&gt;
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==Rules?==&lt;br /&gt;
Hi, I'm fairly new here. I'm wondering, is there anything that is not allowed in stories/on site? I just don't want my stuff deleted. -Creat0r&lt;br /&gt;
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==Just some trouble==&lt;br /&gt;
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Hi there, I've been writing a C.Y.O.A. and I'm having the problem that I've set three options on my first page; Male, Female and Other. These redirect to different C.Y.O.A.s and it is rather irritating that when I try to chose the male option to advance it comes up with a selection of emo guys that I can use, from a different Catagory. Any help would be appreciated as I will not be able to advance in my writings until it is fixed.&lt;br /&gt;
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Thank you in advance&lt;br /&gt;
            --Xuan Tian Shang Ti&lt;br /&gt;
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Xuan, I had that same problem on my new CYAO. This happens because someone else is already using this as a category name, so it will keep redirecting to their story. It helps to use your story's name in front of the choices or to put a specific phrasingthat noone has used yet.&lt;br /&gt;
For instance say your story is Smurfs in Ireland and you want to give people the choice of being a male or female. You could put Smurfs In Ireland: Male, or I want to be a male smurf&lt;br /&gt;
Hope this helps for anyone else with the same problem.&lt;br /&gt;
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==Main Page Stories==&lt;br /&gt;
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What constitutes a story being on the main page? It seems like people just throw theirs on there. [[User:Theotherguy|Theotherguy]] 07:10, 30 August 2012 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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We're trying to only include a small, representative sampling on the Main Page.  Yes, some people are throwing theirs on there, but those stories are being thrown back off when they're spotted. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:25, 30 August 2012 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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By my understanding, the story has to be of a quality that it can be 'considered' for a feature, not necessarily featured, but close or at the level. By the way, great to see someone took the initiative and did this, the site really needed some tidying. --[[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] 13 September 2012&lt;br /&gt;
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Maybe we should make specific guidelines? Must be this many pages, this quality of writing, etc. etc. [[User:Theotherguy|Theotherguy]] 23:14, 13 September 2012 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Well I would suggest at least having the minimum amount of pages be set to 50, besides the 'Quizzes and Challenges' Section. I'm not sure about the quality of writing, as long as it is understandable and entertaining. --[[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] September 14 2012&lt;br /&gt;
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== Main Page and Its Length ==&lt;br /&gt;
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I'm sure most of you here have noticed this already, but I'd like to just point out. The Main Page is ever growing in it's length. That's great news! That means more adventures, but it comes at a price. The overall size of the page. I thought I'd do a little experiment and see how long it would take me to scroll down from the top to the very bottom. It took me more than 10 seconds. That is a ridiculously long time. Only fine for social media sites such as Facebook.&lt;br /&gt;
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What I'm suggesting is that we need to find a way to successfully organize the Main Page to which the size of it is significantly less, while not having it link off into other pages. Such as replacing the sections with say Collapsible Tables [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Help:Collapsing], so then you can choose which sections you want to look at, perhaps even placing sub tables on top of that.&lt;br /&gt;
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It's certainly worth looking into.  But bear in mind that newbies constantly screw up even the limited formatting currently on the Main Page.  Any further complications to the coding will mean even more intense monitoring and reverting. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:56, 5 May 2012 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Ahh, true. I barely know coding myself, but new people constantly make stories, and sooner or later, mistakes will be made, and those beloved tables will be disfigured. It is possible though, and if someone were able just to implement this idea, it will do wonders for this site. I don't go on often, but when I do, I always notice how long the Main Page is.&lt;br /&gt;
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So, '''IF''' anyone is willing to do this, then by all means, go ahead, it will do wonders for the site, I suggest you ask Platypus though.&lt;br /&gt;
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== YouTube Idea ==&lt;br /&gt;
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I have been a fan of this site for a while. I am an experienced actor and had the idea of adapting some of these stories to YouTube. Essentially, it would be an audiobook of the story where you click a link at the end of the video to make your choice (leading you to the next part of the story). I would like to try it with a shorter story first. If you have a short, well written CYOA story and are interested in sharing your story on YouTube, please let me know your username, the name of the story, and that  I have your permission to record it and put it on YouTube (right below this post) . I would also be happy to hear any input on this idea.          &lt;br /&gt;
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I know a lot about doing that kind of thing, it would be really great if it was animated or something like that. If you need any help working with Youtube CYOAs I can certainly help. I can also do (some) animation if you want. -Creat0r&lt;br /&gt;
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I think this would be awesome! Guys I don't know how long this thread was posted but I would like to continue it. You know in the you adventure stories or something like that you flip to a page to continue? Well, maybe it should be one or two long videos that you pause at choices and the choices have the time you skip to. I might make a video like this on my YouTube! Awesome idea. &lt;br /&gt;
- [[KateFleet]] [[ YouTube : FleetGaming ]]&lt;br /&gt;
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== Family-Friendly Section, Not Family-Friendly ==&lt;br /&gt;
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I recently noticed that about 10 new stories were made, and each of them looked like they should be in the 10+ section. How is stealing a car family friendly? Or discouraging school? Seriously, If I see one more story like that being made, it's going straight to PG-13.&lt;br /&gt;
Note: I am 11 years old, and I don't even think that those stories are appropriate for my age!--[[User:903860|The Adenster]] 01:05, 29 January 2010 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Adenster, family-friendly is generally a relative term. While I dont know the particular stories you speak of, discouraging school or stealing a car CAN be used in a family setting IE. one character has a Huckleberry Finn-ish tendency to skip school and the car can be used as a life lesson piece. Terms like Family-Friendly vary greatly from person to person and are entirely dependent on perception. For example some people believe in spanking their children whilst others dont. One side would consider it &amp;quot;Family-Friendly&amp;quot; whilst the other group would not. Generally if things such as car-stealing or such occur it can be acceptable if put in perspective and used in the context of the story. --[[User:BFEL|BFEL]] 12:13, 7 April 2011 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== New Category ==&lt;br /&gt;
I just had a really great idea, maybe a new category can be made for just new stories, called Not Rated Yet, or whatever. Then, where the story is placed can be decided by somebody, so that sections like &amp;quot;Family-Friendly&amp;quot; are not so populated with stories that aren't appropriate.--[[User:903860|The Adenster]] 01:23, 29 January 2010 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Your points are well taken, and this new group of writers is not writing family friendly material, but I'm somewhat averse to creating a Not Yet Rated section for ''somebody'' to rate, because there's only one sysop active on this site.  My time is limited and I like to get in a little bit of time to work on my own writing. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 03:02, 29 January 2010 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I myself would be interested in assisting with this, Platypus. --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 03:28, 3 March 2010 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Yeah, maybe ratings could be incoporated into reviews. That way unrated stories can move and get a review simultaneously.--[[User:Snowball|Snowball- The Anti-Adult-Content Resistance Leader]] 10:52, 20 January 2012 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== About story page links ==&lt;br /&gt;
I'm kind of a perfectionist and it just hurts my eyes to see the story page links not formatted properly. It's either because people are too lazy or just not well enough informed on how to create proper links. Most pages have something like this:&lt;br /&gt;
* &amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;[[Story Name-Page Name]]&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt; = [[Story Name-Page Name]]&lt;br /&gt;
* &amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;[[Story Name/Page Name]]&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt; = [[Story Name/Page Name]]&lt;br /&gt;
* &amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;[[Story Name: Page Name]]&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt; = [[Story Name: Page Name]]&lt;br /&gt;
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* &amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;[[Story Name/Page Name|Display Name]]&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt; = [[Story Name/Page Name|Display Name]]&lt;br /&gt;
* &amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;[[Story Name/Character: Page Name|Display Name]]&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt; = [[Story Name/Character: Page Name|Display Name]]&lt;br /&gt;
The '''Display Name''' field makes the link show as that to the user, while still linking to the '''Story Name/Page Name''' page. This kind of naming makes the story pages look a lot better while still keeping the pages properly sorted out. I think this is explained on the main page, but it seems a bit unclear. Maybe it could be improved? --[[User:Dreama|Dreama]] 16:00, 25 February 2010 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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It is discussed in the [[Tutorial]], but sometimes it seems as if some of the people who want to write here aren't capable of reading.  &lt;br /&gt;
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Mostly, I like to see consistency within any given story. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 21:16, 25 February 2010 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Is there a way to get the Category page to display just the page names?  In my story, I use the &amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;[[Story Name/Page Name|Page Name]]&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt; idiom, but the category page shows every page with the story prefix and they are all grouped under the same header. --[[User:Shiine|Shiine]] 8:50, 5 July 2010&lt;br /&gt;
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I don't know a way of changing the way the page names are displayed on the Category page, but if you categorize each individual page as &amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;[[Category:Story Name|Page Name]] &amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt;, then the Category page will aphabetize based on whatever you tell it the Page Name is, regardless of what the page name displays as.  --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 19:10, 5 July 2010 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I added a section to [[Tutorial/sleep|the tutorial]] about using the sort key in the category field. --[[User:Shiine|Shiine]] 23:40, 10 Aug 2010&lt;br /&gt;
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== problems with the search bar ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Hello, I just want to say that there seems to be a problem with the search, whenever I type a requist in it comes back with no results, I tried using the report a bug feature but the appears to be broken. --[[User:Tricrotic|Tricrotic]] 11:57, 7 March 2010 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Yeah, the search bar only works when you type in the exact title of a story. Granted, there is a place where you search for pages that begin with _______, that should be the automatic search engine. I don't know much about programming, but it really shouldn't be too hard to move a program that's already been created, just to a different, more accessible place. - veri_disquo (2014)&lt;br /&gt;
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==New Story==&lt;br /&gt;
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If you guys remember me from way back, I used to use this site a lot, then suddenly stopped. Well, I'm back (again), and I've started a new story titled [[Cell]]. I look forward to the reviews of this CYOA story, as it goes through the process of Evolution.--[[User:blablob|blablob]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Are you still working on it? --[[user:blamblegam]]&lt;br /&gt;
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==Questions==&lt;br /&gt;
Are the stories in here copyrighted in anyway? If I want to feature one on a website, can do I need permission of the author or is it public material?&lt;br /&gt;
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The stories here aren't copyrighted.  But it might be polite to mention your intentions to the author beforehand. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 22:53, 14 May 2012 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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If the story is in the Pit, can you edit the story to be in a different category? Because, for this story that I have been editing, I wish to change the maturity since its hard to keep track of every link you put. The Lost City of Atlantice is the story i had been working on for a bit and some of the tags that were created aren't really in the category. Plus, some of my ideas fit into other categories. What should I do? --[[User:sayrppoetry/sayrppoetry]]&lt;br /&gt;
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If you retrieve a story from the Pit, feel free to up its maturity level as needed. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 22:51, 2 April 2012 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Status functionality? ==&lt;br /&gt;
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The tutorial mentions status functionality as if you are able to use variables, but there was no information on how to perform operations on variables (You know, add, subtract, that sort of thing.)  I looked for an article on the issue but didn't find any.  Is this functionality available?&lt;br /&gt;
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No.  You can not perform operations on the variables.  You have to do any adding and subtracting manually on the next page, and if you want options where you have different values for the variables, you have to create multiple paths.  --[[User:Rawar|Rawar]] 19:27, 2 April 2010 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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BTW: I was wanting to experiment with status stuff, so I ended up creating a template page for the [[sandbox]].  Since you can't delete pages, and this might be useful, I replaced it with a basic status bar and left it in the sandbox.  I hope others find it useful.  --[[User:Shiine|Shiine]] 04:27, 19 March 2011 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== New here, and want to know a few things about editting. ==&lt;br /&gt;
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I joined today and want to know if it is okay for me to go through stories fixing some grammar mistakes and spelling. (not that I a grammar freak or saying I am perfect myself.) Some stories i looked at had a dozen mistakes a page and that is just bad for the site. See [[DUDE WHERES MY CAR]], I fixed the main page, leaving in the repitive sentence structure because I was unsure if I should change that. The next pages I looked at were equally plagued. Is there a way to catergorize stories as &amp;quot;being a pain to read because of mistakes&amp;quot;? I did not mean chnaging content, simplly fixing sloppy mistakes. To be sure, I am not planning on reading every story on here to be an English jainitor. I just wondered whose job these things were, Thanks. ~[[User:RandyRift|RandyRift]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I’m not an admin or anything but…&lt;br /&gt;
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There is no real problem or rule against editing pages, especially grammar correction. If you want to fix stories then that’s alright. Hell, even adding new stuff to the story is fine in most cases.   &lt;br /&gt;
The problem with this site is that there are some users who create crappy stories with five pages that have no real plot or proper grammar. People work on their story for a day then leave resulting in many poor stories with no real purpose. So if you want to fix stories then go for it.  &lt;br /&gt;
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--[[User:Fletcher Peninsula|Fletcher Peninsula]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Unfortunately, there are far too many ungrammatical writers out there for me to repair all the things they post.  I am the only active sysop here, and I don't object to anyone trying fix grammar around the site.  We were recently invaded by a Canadian school whose students wanted the thrill of posting on the web despite the fact that many of them had a poor grasp of English.  Their teacher's help made many things worse, not better.  But since they seem to have left, many of their stories are going to be getting moved to the Pit of Abandonned Stories soon. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 01:21, 1 April 2010 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I have another question, why is it that on the category page, (for my story) when I am logged in I see 90 pages, but when not logged in I see 78? (the page lists only that many.) ~[[User:RandyRift|RR]] 3 April 2010&lt;br /&gt;
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== Pictures and Copyrights ==&lt;br /&gt;
I'm not very familiar with finding out what kind of copyrights some picture has on the web and what pictures are free to be posted here, for example, and what pictures may be freely copied and even uploaded here to be displayed. So far I've only been directly linking to pictures on Wikipedia (in very rare occasions anyway), but that's very limited. Anyone know better? --[[User:Dreama|Dreama]] 22:56, 24 April 2010 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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The safest thing is to upload your own pictures to photobucket or something.  However, there are several free stock photo and picture sites out there.  My favorite is http://www.sxc.hu/ .  However, make sure you read the licenses for the photos before using them or linking to them! --[[User:Rawar|Rawar]] 00:42, 28 April 2010 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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There's thousands of free stock photos on [http://www.dreamstime.com/free-photos Dreamstime.com]. Just resize them to a width of 800 for web use. -- [[User:ImmortalDreams|ImmortalDreams]]&lt;br /&gt;
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== A portrait of an American Girl Named Myra. ==&lt;br /&gt;
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If you like the story idea, please help create a scenario for Myra. Remember, do not edit or add onto anyone else's scenario. Create a small one of your own. It doesn't have to be deep! Thank you for contributing!&lt;br /&gt;
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She ought to wear a funky fruit hat. She's 12, was living with her mother in Maine, dad's a deadbeat, moves to Oklahoma for no apparent reason, uncovers alien conspiracy there. Turns out her mother's been replaced by an evil space automaton. She must team up with her drunken embarassment of a father to rescue her from a Dick Dastardly-esque villain who brought the aliens here with a magical voodoo portal, and then find a way to close said portal. Along the way, she learns important lessons regarding metaphysical idealism and beef Wellington. --[[User:Nalanhata|Nalanhata]], June 18&lt;br /&gt;
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== Moving a page ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Is there a way to move pages?  I've looking over a story with terrible spelling problems and [[Tour_the_town|this page]] links to [[A little Tatoo paurlor]] which should be fixed.  -- [[User:TheRick|TheRick]] 05:26, 18 August 2010 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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The page-moving function had to be disabled due to malicious vandals.  However, what you can do is copy the text in the mis-named page, blank that page, edit the page with the mis-named link, and paste the text onto a new page with the correctly spelled name.  Then I'll delete the blanked page.  I'm the only one who can do deletions.  And I do appreciate anyone who actually wants to do some work tidying up the place.  --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:56, 18 August 2010 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Old Geezer ==&lt;br /&gt;
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I'm still having problems with editing Lady Helsing as it says Permission error&amp;quot; when l try to &lt;br /&gt;
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First of all make sure you are logged in... next... if you have been on a single page writing for too long it will automatically log you out so right click copy anything you have if you need to re-log in --[[User:Mezzo|Mezzo]] 17:12, 28 September 2011 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Tags? ==&lt;br /&gt;
What are the tags supposed to do? Because the ones that are for this one are 'porn or death'. --[[User:Heyoeveryone]]&lt;br /&gt;
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== Severe lag of site? ==&lt;br /&gt;
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If so, I think I know why. Remember, this is only a guess (although it's one with backup). I noticed my browser (Chrome) seems to hang on loading the info from TagNimbus, so I tried to visit the TagNimbus site. It seems to be down or dead, and a look at www.IsUp.me told me the whole site seemed to be down for others, too.&lt;br /&gt;
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If it's down, any chance of getting in touch with the owner to restore it? Otherwise, if TagNimbus is finall- I mean unfortunately dead, can we just remove the thing anyways? It didn't seem to change anything and was abused to tag pages with irrelevant tags...&lt;br /&gt;
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But hey, this is all the rambling of one author who just hopes to get the site working so he can get back to writing the gore story he was in the middle of... --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 06:27, 23 April 2011 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==Hello==&lt;br /&gt;
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Hello. Just wanted to say this site looks really cool and interesting, I really look forward to helping stories along or even starting some once I get the hang of it.&lt;br /&gt;
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I should know though, are there any particular rules or anything that aren't immediately obvious or that are mentioned? And where should I start? Any advice for a newbie would be very appreciated. The site is a little unnecessarily complicated.&lt;br /&gt;
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Heyo whoever you are! Best thing you should start on is probably continuing on stories that have been started, but after 10 pages, the author has quit. If you really want to begin a new story, i suggest planning it before you actually type it all out. In your plan you should have: the main storyline, the seperate endings, and of course the characters who are going to be in the story.&lt;br /&gt;
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You should try mind mapping. It's a great way to make branching plot lines. -- [[User:ImmortalDreams|ImmortalDreams]]&lt;br /&gt;
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It's bad to add to the number of all the carcasses you can see on the Main Page. Save those, or if you prefer, get the more severely rotting ones that we lumped in the Pit to decompose. Unfortunately, stories are hard to get rid of, so save them from non-authorship before it's too late. It also makes it easier, since you'd agree with the storyline from the beginning, whereas others end up left behind because there's a lock on the whole thing. For Example, everything might lead to a standstill after everything directs to a page. The rest of the plot is a mystery and starts rotting. Simply because the author him/her self doesn't know how it ends.--[[User:Snowball|Snowball- The Anti-Adult-Content Resistance Leader]] 14:58, 24 January 2012 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Template Appearance Problem ==&lt;br /&gt;
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The templates for my story [[War Pigs]] are coming out all wrong in IE 9, but they look fine in Firefox. Can anybody explain why? It would be greatly appreciated. --[[User:AgentVincent|AgentVincent]] 03:55, 7 July 2011 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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The problem is probably that it's IE9. IE9 enjoys shitting all over everything nice looking on the internet. --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 15:47, 31 July 2011 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== The whole &amp;quot;Anon&amp;quot; thing. ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Anyone else amused by this? Three brief little &amp;quot;attacks&amp;quot; (if you even want to call them that) with an empty threat? I dunno, I guess it just struck me as pathetic and funny. --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 06:26, 12 August 2011 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Yea a real dumbass, but thank God he didn´t write any pages, those would have been real '''attacks''' on the site! :)&lt;br /&gt;
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[[User:Fletcher Peninsula|Fletcher Peninsula]]&lt;br /&gt;
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== Pictures ==&lt;br /&gt;
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I noticed that there was an embedded image button. Being a photo editor, such as myself, I jumped at the idea of adding a picture where they could be used. Unfortunately it says that file adding is disabled. I looked through the General Discussion and i realize that you have had &amp;quot;attacks&amp;quot; in the past but is there a chance that they could be re-added?&lt;br /&gt;
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--[[User:Aegisofawakening|Aegisofawakening]] 01:58, 21 August 2011 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Actually, file adding was disabled due to server-size limitations, not due to attacks.  But images can still be displayed on pages, even if the file itself cannot become part of this site. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 04:09, 21 August 2011 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Thanks! ==&lt;br /&gt;
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I'd just like to say thank you so much!!! Why? Well, a few years back i wrote a few tales ([[Girlngirl High]], [[All Alone]] and [[Teehee!]]). I thought, no way were these stories would ever become hits, all of them are less than 100 pages! And i never finished any of them. So i decided to quit the site for 2 years. Today, i decided to go on and look at my stories, see how they've turned out.&lt;br /&gt;
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I looked down to find out that '''every story i've made has gotten over 1000 views on the first page, with the most being 20 000!!!''' I was just amazed at how my stories were this popular. So i'd just like to say THANK YOU!! I've given the job of continuing the stories to my friend [[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]]. He's a very good friend of mine and he said he'd love to take over. So once again, thank you so much for your support throughout these past 2 years. Also thanks to those people who added pages onto my stories. If you'd like to work on these stories, just ask Heyo for permission and he should promptly allow you. &lt;br /&gt;
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Am i coming back? Nah. Well maybe. --[[User:Unkowhero23]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Actually, you don't need my permission. Just make sure that you don't have many grammatical and spelling errors, and that the pages aren't just one or two sentences. Those are terrible, and with the load times of the site sometimes, you want something more than just that.&lt;br /&gt;
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== Spam ==&lt;br /&gt;
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What's with all the random advertisements lately? It's actually more of a nuisance than those Anon people a little while back. Is this site really such a big deal that people need to go around and post all these ads? - [[User:Jamesparker|Jamesparker]], September 23, 2011&lt;br /&gt;
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Ad's? Where? Link them here. It's best if you name and shame them, and so that their account will be quickly deleted off the site. And I guess it is such a big deal. --[[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] 9 October 2011&lt;br /&gt;
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== Mature, Adult, Bad Taste ==&lt;br /&gt;
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A suggestion, if you will.  Maybe the mature, adult and bad taste story listings should be collectively put on a sub-page separate from the main page?  On reflection, maybe only the Adult and Bad Taste ones.  Those wishing to see those stories wouldn't have any trouble finding them by following the link (from the main page), and it'd render the main page free of offensive language and titles.  Everybody wins?  What'd'y'all think? [[User:JackalRobot|JackalRobot]] 21:12, 20 November 2011 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I have been giving the idea consideration, especially as some people would prefer not to be exposed to even the titles of some of the Adult stories.  And it would help reduce the sheer size of the Main Page. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 00:41, 21 November 2011 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Despite my own story preferences, I agree. I always thought it odd (and not a little family-unfriendly) to give almost equal weight to kiddie stories as well as possibly very kinky adult stuff. As long as you can always go directly to any given page (through a browser bookmark perhaps) I actually suggest adult stories are kept behind a disclaimer screen of some sort. &lt;br /&gt;
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Also, it can broaden the areas for the Adult Stories and free the titles. Then there could be another sub-group for the mild content.--[[User:Snowball|Snowball- The Anti-Adult-Content Resistance Leader]] 14:52, 24 January 2012 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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That is a great idea you have there, and it would be nice to see this happen. However there is a huge flaw I see in this. Recent Changes would still show everything be it a kids story about a kitten, or an adult story about bestiality.--[[User:Yihman1|Yihman1]] 07:04, 27 January 2012 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I have a &amp;quot;Mature&amp;quot; (R rated) story I am writing.  I am considering adding a storyline in which the character gets raped offscreen.  Is that too intense for &amp;quot;Mature&amp;quot;?  Should I post the beginning of the storyline, and the page that links to it, here to be vetted?  --[[User:LaedyRose|LaedyRose]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I don't think an offscreen rape would necessarily need to be put in the Adult section.  At least the Mature section, certainly.  It depends on how much detail you put in.  You might want to put a warning at the beginning of the storyline, simply because rape is a special kind of evil and will break (or make) the story for some readers. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 01:34, 10 April 2013 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Feedback For My Stories ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Hi!  I'm new here, and I'm starting my first story, [[Transformers: War Between Two Worlds]].  I wasn't sure if it should go in the Family Friendly Section or the PG13 Section, so I put it in Family Friendly.  If you have any feedback, read what I have so far and post it here.  This story will take me a while, but as soon as I'm done, I'll get started on another one.  Also, would anyone like to team up with me on a story?  I'm guessing most of you will think I'm crazy, but it's good to check.  TEAMWORK RULES!  I'm not that smart when it comes to wiki editing, so if there's a place where this page would better fit, then please tell me here.&lt;br /&gt;
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Edit Requests (If you would like permission to edit one of my stories, put your username here):&lt;br /&gt;
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Sorry about putting my page in the wrong place, Platypus.  How do you reach the user page?&lt;br /&gt;
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== Finding A Story ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Hi everyone.&lt;br /&gt;
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Just a quickie.&lt;br /&gt;
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1) Is there a story that focuses on something like a haunted house/mansion/what-have-you somewhere? I've skimmed the titles but nothing popped out at me and I've been reading here and there but even though most stories seem to only be like 5-10 pages the sheer number of them means I haven't had a chance to check them all and was hoping someone who'd been around longer knew of one and could point me in the right direction?&lt;br /&gt;
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-- [[User:Captain.Devonin|Cpt. Devonin]]&lt;br /&gt;
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: I don't know of such a story, but this brings up an issue I've been meaning to: it's awfully hard for someone to find anything they might be looking for, if they haven't seen it already. I'm wondering if the allowance of short synopses has been discussed before, or perhaps if we might create categories like [[:Category:Stories that feature supernatural characters|stories that feature supernatural characters]] or [[:Category:Stories that take place in haunted houses|stories that take place in haunted houses]].&lt;br /&gt;
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: --[[User:KC Riley|KC Riley]] 03:39, 21 January 2012 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Well, [[Madman's Mansion]] isn't haunted but its the best one I know of that involves a proper what-have-you-somewhere and decent story length and grammar and punctustion and so on.&lt;br /&gt;
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--[[User:Snowball|Snowball- The Anti-Adult-Content Resistance Leader]] 14:49, 24 January 2012 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Also, how about this: when you enter the main page, there is a link to each level of the stories, then, you can continue on into sub-groups of Ghost, Sci-Fi, Quest, Tragedy, or something like that.--[[User:Snowball|Snowball- The Anti-Adult-Content Resistance Leader]] 13:55, 28 February 2012 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== How to know people are watching? ==&lt;br /&gt;
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I'm new here, and recently finished a short story.&lt;br /&gt;
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But how do I tell if anyone is seeing it? Is there a place on this website to get feedback on the stories?&lt;br /&gt;
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You can see at the bottom of each page how many times the page has been accessed. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 07:16, 28 January 2012 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Platypus, is this still true? I have looked at my page, and do not see a number for how many times it has been accessed. Or was this removed? --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 12:20, 24 February 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Yes, unfortunately, this isn't currently active.  It was always nice to know how often a page has been accessed. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:38, 24 February 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Something wrong? ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Hi, I'm new here. Saw this site and thought it was pretty interesting, and gave it a try. It's fun and I'm currently working on a story. However, I'm getting a feeling I am doing something wrong with creating stories and editing them. If I am doing anything wrong so far, which I am sure I am, please tell me, okays?&lt;br /&gt;
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-Bluedragon&lt;br /&gt;
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So far, so good.  I see nothing wrong with what you're doing. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 14:25, 24 February 2012 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== A page making/organizing resource ==&lt;br /&gt;
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First of all, I don't want to sound like a spammer or advertiser, but since I can code, I thought I'd make a resource for everyone who's interested.&lt;br /&gt;
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I've noticed when making games on here, that it's difficult to keep track of all your pages, and it's still hard to make them even with a mind map. So I made a rather unconventional, very small piece of software using Game Maker. Despite its not too standard interface. It provides an easy and efficient way to organize your pages. You can type and paste your page content into it and then automatically generate the pages in the correct format for this site.&lt;br /&gt;
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I in no way claim that I have ownership rights to the site. I only want to provide a resource for its users in order to make the creating process easier.&lt;br /&gt;
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The file is only 2.3MB.&lt;br /&gt;
Here's the download link(vs1) - [http://www.4shared.com/file/g5M6PSP2/CYOA_-_Page_Organizer.html]&lt;br /&gt;
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Made page recognition easier by showing the link names instead of the page names for the disabled parallel fields of each choice.&lt;br /&gt;
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New download link(vs1.1) - [http://www.4shared.com/file/KF270foj/CYOA_-_Page_Organizer11.html]&lt;br /&gt;
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== Interaction ==&lt;br /&gt;
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How can I communicate with other users of this site, so that we can conspire and work together. I am currently working on a story that is just to much for one person to handle, but I don't understand how I can talk with &amp;quot;helpers&amp;quot;. I just don't get it!-- [[User: Cyclops|Cyclops]]&lt;br /&gt;
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You can click on a user's name to view their profile page, then click on the &amp;quot;discussion&amp;quot; tab to see their talk page.  If you post something on their talk page, they'll see an alert at the top of their screen.  Hopefully, they'll click the alert, go to their talk page, and then write something back on your page. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 23:06, 4 April 2012 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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i think that there needs to be a few changes to this site.  A chatroom.  It would be very easy to find one online and embed it in a page.  Also I believe there should be category pages where all the sci fi pages are in one place with links to it.  Maybe on the mainpage, instead of links to very story, have links to the category listing.  Finally I believe there should be something to let us rate pages (as in 4 out of 5 stars).&lt;br /&gt;
-[[User:Gartonia|Gartonia]]&lt;br /&gt;
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== Salutations. ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Hello, I am one of the new guys here. I just wanted to know if there are any rules that I must adhere to on this site. I mainly made an account just so that I was able to continue on a story that I saw on this website. Well anyway, If you can notify me, please do, Thank You.&lt;br /&gt;
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== Salutations. ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Hello, I am one of the new guys here. I just wanted to know if there are any rules that I must adhere to on this site. I mainly made an account just so that I was able to continue on a story that I saw on this website. Well anyway, If you can notify me, please do, Thank You.&lt;br /&gt;
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== Linking to existing pages ==&lt;br /&gt;
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How does one link back to an existing page, in effect creating a loop?&lt;br /&gt;
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The same way you create a link to a new page: By enclosing the name of the page in square brackets.  For example: &amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt; [[Main Page]] &amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt; links you to [[Main Page]].--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 21:49, 13 June 2012 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Featured Story - A Dead Thing? ==&lt;br /&gt;
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We're 8 days from the 8 month anniversary of the last time the Featured Story section was last updated. Who was last in charge of updating that? --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 07:24, 14 June 2012 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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The idea was proposed by [[User: Occono|Occono]], last seen in 2009.  I said then that I had no objections to such a  feature, but no intention of participating in it.  Anyone volunteering? --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 18:19, 14 June 2012 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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As I understood it, anyone could edit the featured story section, no one in particular was responsible for keeping it reguarly updated. That being said, 8 months is an alarmingly long time. If we´re looking for a story right now to put on there &amp;quot;Megan&amp;quot; (which is already nominated) could do. Although that one might be a bit to... bloody disturbing, to be put there. Another one might be Battle Royal, which has a lot of pages. (Wait, did I just recomend Battle Royal over something else beacuse it was so bloody disturbing? Scary thought!).&lt;br /&gt;
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Overall though, personally I´d want to put a quality story on the featured page. And the simply fact is that there arn´t enough quality storys on this site to maintain a one or two months switch around in my opinion. Also, personally, I´d also not like to see adulth storys be put there, which decresses the story-pool significantly. &lt;br /&gt;
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--[[User:Fletcher Peninsula|Fletcher Peninsula]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Woah, seriously? 8 months? That is amazing. Nevertheless it's a great thing that someone actually bothered to change it. It may be my story, but from 2012 onwards, I was surprised that [[Remember]] was still featured. Congratulations to TheElderOnes. It's been a long time coming, and now you've finally gotten the story featured. Nice.&lt;br /&gt;
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== Compressing the main page ==&lt;br /&gt;
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I started compressing the main page into smaller sortable tables. I just finished the family friendly section, feel free to take over for me if you would like to do the next sections&lt;br /&gt;
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The goal for all of these tables is to keep the list around 10 items, and then have a more stories page for each section. The simpest way to do this is to choose all stories that have 50+ pages. If that leads to too many stories, then make it 100+...&lt;br /&gt;
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If a story is well written, and more than 50 pages, it should trump a story with more pages.&lt;br /&gt;
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Also, please bring the adult section back to the home page with the top items from it. That is the most active section of the site, and it generates a lot of traffic from google. &lt;br /&gt;
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== Separate Wiki for Adult Content ==&lt;br /&gt;
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I don't really like that adult stores are so easily accessible for people that come here looking for non-adult material, such as that they'll pop up as random pages, or can be seen in &amp;quot;Recent Changes&amp;quot;.  Is there any interest in branching Adult content off in to a separate Wiki, and maybe including a link the &amp;quot;Adult Section&amp;quot; in the side-bar?  --[[User:Holvard|Holvard]] 19:56, 31 December 2012 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Unfortunately, the majority of the traffic here is looking for the Adult Content.  Removing it or trying to bury it in some way would most likely kill off the non-adult content. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 20:16, 31 December 2012 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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How extreme is the majority?  As far as I can tell, this is the only active site to make free interactive adult stories, so if there's that much interest I may try to make my own. --[[User:Holvard|Holvard]] 20:56, 31 December 2012 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Would it take a lot of work to put the adult content behind a disclaimer screen?  As long as one had to go through the main page to access the adult site, it might actually ''increase'' traffic to the non-adult content, because people would feel better about, for instance, recommending it to children.  People might feel more comfortable with the site in general if they felt sure that reasonable precautions were being taken. --[[User:LaedyRose|LaedyRose]] 9 April 2012&lt;br /&gt;
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It could work through account settings, and then it being disabled by default, and the option for parental controls. Maybe even an option (that would have to be enabled through account settings) so that only one account could be tied to that IP, and these settings, after being enabled, could be disabled via a parental control password that is set up with the account, that could be different than the account's login password.&lt;br /&gt;
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== Issues With the Site ==&lt;br /&gt;
I've noticed that Create Your Own Adventure pages tend to load slowly, and the last week or so, accessing the site at all has been touch and go.  Is there any particular reason for this?  Is there anything you or we can do about it, or do we just need to be patient?  --[[User:LaedyRose|LaedyRose]] 9 April 2012&lt;br /&gt;
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== Lag of site and page load limits ==&lt;br /&gt;
Is there a problem? When I first started contributing to this site it could sometimes be very slow, but I put that down to traffic at certain times of the day. In the morning in GMT (when the Americas are asleep!) it was usually pretty good. Now, though, I find it's terribly slow whenever I use it, often taking upwards of thirty seconds to a minute to load a single page. What's more, not infrequently it doesn't load the page at all and I instead get a &amp;quot;Uncached page load rate limit reached -&amp;gt; 3 per second;&amp;quot; message. After a couple of those (even if I've only been on the site for ~5 minutes and loaded three or four pages) I get a request to complete a Captcha: &amp;quot;Page loads per hour hit - limit 60. Reset limit by filling in this captcha:&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
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It seems that it's trying to load pages multiple times when I access them? That might explain why it's being so slow, too.&lt;br /&gt;
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*There is indeed a problem: link spammers.  RobKohr has had to deliberately slow down site responsiveness and include that captcha in the hopes of frustrating the spambots so maybe they'll go away and leave us alone.  The messages you're seeing aren't because ''you're'' trying to load more than 3 pages per second.  It's because the bots are trying to load far, far more pages than that per second.  Do I like this solution?  Not really.  It's frustrating.  Can anyone else think of a better one? --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 14:14, 13 May 2013 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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**You guys could require to creat a acc that is activaded by admin/mod to view the content, the login page should always come if a cookie isnt existing and the page itself could be a blank site with minmal text and a field to look in.&lt;br /&gt;
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***You wouldn't even need to create an account to ''view'' the content (that would be counter-intuitive, since you want people to see it) but just to ''edit'' it. I know that's probably far from ideal because the whole point is the Wiki is free for everyone, but at the same time if it's being incredibly slow because of spambots then maybe it's a necessary step?&lt;br /&gt;
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: Is there some reason that the normal solutions (for MediaWiki, let's say the Phalanx extension) can't be applied here? Spam is a rather indiscriminate reality of the Internet that sites are usually protected against without crippling themselves and hoping spambots will get frustrated and go away. They won't, but the users will. --[[User:KC Riley|KC Riley]] 13:06, 25 June 2013 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Linking pictures problems and other errors ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Hello. In my various writing I try to place links to pictures to enhance the story experience. I've been doing this for months and months but lately the site has been completely blocking my ability to place links. The first time I try to post a page with a link it will force me to type in two words to verify that I'm human. After I type in the correct words it will attempt to post the page again but instead I will get this message: &amp;quot;You can only submit one page with a link in it per 20 minute period&amp;quot;. Because of the human verification process I am completely unable to post links. I am fine with only posting one link per twenty minutes but the site has negated any way of posting links as the verification process eats up my one post per twenty minutes. As someone who uses the site often this is a major inconvenience.&lt;br /&gt;
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Furthermore, if the human verification process doesn't stop my attempts at posting a link all the million of other error messages will. Errors such as site load limits or pages per hour or some such. These errors are never correct and seemingly random. I can stomach these messages and plod forward but they are a complete hindrance when it comes to posting links.&lt;br /&gt;
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I have noticed this annoying tendency too. I tried to create a link to the CC-BY legal language, which is what I license my writing using, and find that, since I get the captcha thing, it blocks the link completely by telling me I can only do one external link per 20 minutes. So, it must say 1 time when I first submit, 1 time when I captcha and submit, meaning I can never do anything external. Like, say, link the CC-BY legal language for people to easily read the copyright terms, or provide a picture of an outfit I am thinking of, or whatever. Instead, I need to put a half link in so people can copy and paste, but not go to by directly clicking. Not sure how to get around this -.- --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:45, 17 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Hiya! Are people still active? ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Hey guys. I'm Bloody and I just joined the site. I've noticed the discussion board is a little old, and just wanted to see if others were still active. Guess I just need a little reassurance that I'm not the only one. lol -Bloody&lt;br /&gt;
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== Page loads per second hit - limit 2 ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Has anyone else been getting this message a lot lately? [[User:AgentVincent|AgentVincent]] 21:32, 1 February 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Yes. I have. But I wait about 2 seconds and hit the &amp;quot;reload page&amp;quot; button, and it works. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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That page loads hit per second is extremely annoying. I'm a fast reader, and on short pages, it sometimes pops up. It does so constantly when I'm just trying to get back to pages inside of a story I want to edit or add more to. I also really dislike that &amp;quot;Page hits per hour&amp;quot; message. What's the point of having it? Maybe the site can do away with that? -- [[User:Sophos8|Sophos8]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I don't like it either, but &amp;quot;throttling&amp;quot; the site is one of the techniques that RobKohr is using to frustrate the spam-bots that were filling the site with crap. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 20:21, 13 February 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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It is driving me insane. I can't enjoy this site when everytime i click on another page i get this annoying message. I spend more time reading that than actual story.&lt;br /&gt;
And i just got it when i tried to add here....&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
lol, you should try checking through stories to see if they should be moved to the pit. I see that message so often it isn't funny D: --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 14:00, 1 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
its annoying as hell it would be nice if it was raised to 4&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
How does one &amp;quot;frustrate&amp;quot; a bot?  If anything it will cause people actually interested in this site to turn away.  There has to be a better way to do this.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
== Image linking ==&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Every time I try to link an image, it gives me: &lt;br /&gt;
&amp;quot;You can only submit one page with a link in it per 20 minute period.&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
This happens regardless of whether i add via hyperlinking or as a text url itself.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Any help would be very much appreciated.&lt;br /&gt;
My only other option for this is to upload images to this site, but I'm not sure if I can or not. But the editing tools does support adding images during editing so...&lt;br /&gt;
--[[User:Aelvir|Aelvir]] 15:33, 8 February 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
== Chat Concept ==&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Recently created, and in need of a public announcement. Feel free to use this link and open in separate tabs to keep it alive:&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; '''editthischat.chatango.com'''&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 22:24, 8 May 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Mermaid games? ==&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Can someone please make a adult section mermaid choose sex game or direct me to one... Thanks.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
And i want it to be that you cant change into legs and are cught by fishermen.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Also make the girl mermaid choose a blonde girl.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
And its set in a medieval world thats advanced on slavery and cross breeding and has mutant bugs.&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks.&lt;br /&gt;
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==New here==&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
So I'm working on a story called [[Three sisters]] in the adult section. I'm just wondering if anyone is enjoying it as of yet, its still a WIP and there is still loads of work to be done with it. Anyway let me know if there are things you would like to see in it, or anything else.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
-[[User:Tapdancingfish|Tapdancingfish]] 23:39, 14 August 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==I have questions==&lt;br /&gt;
Ive just joined but having been writting up my own story for months, i want to know if its possible to keep my story hidden from public until im ready for them to read it? Also is there anyway for me to revert unwanted edits by other users (to be honest i dont want any users editing my work unless its to fix grammar)?&lt;br /&gt;
[[User:Blitzbear93|Blitzbear93]] 14:01, 14 September 2014 (UTC)Blitzbear93&lt;br /&gt;
:Hi,&lt;br /&gt;
:I suggest that you create a wiki to write your story, then you blank the page in the last edit. Nobody can read it when opening your wiki, but you can easily retrieve your own story in the revision history page (clicking on the previous archived version). You cannot really prevent any user from editing, but whether it happens, you have the right to make reverts, too, so you can check your work periodically if you are worried about that. You may mention at the beginning of the story the following sentence :&lt;br /&gt;
:''Please do not change or add pages (unless you correct my orthography, which you are welcome to do). Thank you.''&lt;br /&gt;
:Good luck. -- [[User:Girl Mamtha|Girl Mamtha]] 20:10, 26 October 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
== Linking to outside sites ==&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
So, I've been trying for over two hours to upload the first page of my my story. However, submissions with outside links can only be submitted once every 20 minutes, a common sense policy I have no issues with. My problem comes when the first submission attempt loads the page again with a captcha to prove I'm not a spam bot. Entering the captcha, I discover that triggering the Captcha counts as a story submission and makes me wait 20 minutes before I can actually submit it. Annoying, but okay. I wait the 20 minutes, hit submit, and discover that my login has timed out. I log in again to discover that being informed that I timed out COUNTS AS A GODDAMN STORY SUBMISSION. I went around this loop AGAIN, keeping track of the time in an attempt to not have to repeat it, with no more success. It should not be this hard to link to a goddamn discussion/writers collaboration thread on another website.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Oh, and hitting submit and being told you have to wait ALSO counts, so if you misjudge by one minute, you have to wait EVEN MORE.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
EDIT: After another 40 minutes of trying, I have given up and removed the link. This Kraken shall be wrestled another day.&lt;/div&gt;</description>
			<pubDate>Sun, 30 Nov 2014 12:02:22 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Totemist</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/create_Your_own_story/Talk:Main_Page</comments>		</item>
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			<title>LoK Concentrate and finish the mission.</title>
			<link>http://72.14.177.54/create_Your_own_story/LoK_Concentrate_and_finish_the_mission.</link>
			<description>&lt;p&gt;Totemist:&amp;#32;&lt;/p&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;Krystal shook her head, as if to clear it, and did her best to focus on the mission. It wouldn't do to die alone in a fiery wreck just because she got a bit hot under the collar.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
After several hours of fruitless flying, she began to wonder if the courier robot was not, in fact, a ghost. A minor, Outsystem Mining Ltd Flying Dutchman that nobody outside a few executives and bored interns actually cared about. The rich mineral deposits simply played havoc with advanced sensors, their sheer concentration making her wonder why no major interests had ever tried setting up mining operations here. Surely the price of extra security to keep the natives from killing your workers would be worth it? Then again, Sauria did have an uncertain reputation from when it sort of...broke into four pieces within recent memory, with the Krazoa spirits evidently being the only thing keeping the moon from being turned into a new ring system by the gravity of its parent body. She shuddered, thanking her birth stars that Andross' mad plan had been foiled. It would have been a cruel end to her life story if she'd been forgotten in a crystal prison, adrift on some nameless asteroid for eternity.&lt;br /&gt;
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Shaking off her dark thoughts, an even worse companion than her frustrated lust, she tries to focus on finding the damn courier. Try as she might, she seemed to get no closer to her goal of activating the secondary drone, weaving twisting paths through the maze of jagged, volcanic ridges and narrow valleys as she hunts the weak and intermittent signal in vain. The temperature in the small cockpit rose despite her attempts to trade her telepathy for temperature control, as the flightsuit seemed to constrict around her lithe, sweaty frame. Groaning in frustration, she decided to loop around a particularly impressive and rugged mountain range in an attempt to give her sensors a high-altitude scan of the target region and give her scanners every ounce of spare juice she had, noting the surprisingly not volcanic peaks rearing up as if in spite of the prevalence of extinct Ashemounts in the surrounding area. As her Arwing circled the snow-capped peaks, eyes trained carefully on sensor readouts, her engines begin to flicker and whine. The Hell? Snapping to attention, she scrambled to run diagnostics as she fought to keep control of the fighter, praying silently for a minor computer glitch and letting loose a verbalized series of expletives that would have shocked her elderly tutor into a long overdue grave.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Cursing even more foully, she blinked in disbelief at the readout, helpfully informing her that roughly nine out of every ten systems needed to actually make the Arwing fly and keep her protected from the vacuum of space are failing due to recent battle damage, and noting that the systems responsible for automatically monitoring her Arwings internals are not responding. Vaguely, she recalled Slippy saying something about having to re-route her automated diagnostics through a handful of backup computer cores, making them vulnerable to damage... Shit! As she fought to keep her Arwing level in its spiral to an inevitable meeting with the hard, hard ground, she cursed the frog and his family six generations back. Why the Hell should she have to die because just this one time his warnings actually meant something? He should have spouted less jargon and made sure she was actually listening!&lt;br /&gt;
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Her eyes flickered desperately to the weather readout. If she can just... There! Sighing in relief at the lucky updraft, she slammed the emergency maneuvering jets into action with her fist, giving her the extra control and power she desperately needed to make her imminent crash survivable. Bracing for a hard landing, she closed her eyes tight as her precious Arwing slammed through the jungle canopy, a symphony of snapping branches and cringe-inducing crashing noises singing her to her collision with the rocky soil. Rocking against against her canopy bubble, she all but blacked out as her starfighter slowly ground to a halt. Taking one last look around as black closed in on her field of vision, she looked at her clock, blinking in surprise at the time. Minutes? That crash felt like four hours of continually smacking trees! Collapsing back onto her seat, she slipped into unconsciousness thinking that she wished the crash had broken part of her canopy open. It's so damn hot...&lt;br /&gt;
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Some time later, she felt vague impressions of being lifted up and carried, and later of being in motion in some kind of bumpy vehicle, of a smell familiar enough to warn her of danger but not immediately recognizable, and some cretin with an oversize hand squeezing one of her firm ass cheeks. Trying to tell whoever it is to sod off, the words fail to escape her mouth and she falls the rest of the way into darkness.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
What does Krystal do?&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Wake up.]]&lt;br /&gt;
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&lt;br /&gt;
Location:[[Krystal's Arwing (Flying)]]&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
{{LoKStatus|Equipment=''[[Flightsuit]], [[Sidearm]], [[Survival knife]]''|Health=Uncomfortably Hot, Unconscious|MP=0|Conquests=0}}&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
[[Category: Legend of Krystal|*]]&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Or, if you want to start where you left off, jump to [[:Category:LoK_Locations|a location in the story]]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
			<pubDate>Sun, 30 Nov 2014 12:01:00 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Totemist</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/create_Your_own_story/Talk:LoK_Concentrate_and_finish_the_mission.</comments>		</item>
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			<title>Legend of Krystal</title>
			<link>http://72.14.177.54/create_Your_own_story/Legend_of_Krystal</link>
			<description>&lt;p&gt;Totemist:&amp;#32;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;hr /&gt;
&lt;div&gt;This story is loosely based on the Playshapes flash game of the same name and, more directly, the original Legend of Krystal Choose Your Own Adventure, which was moved to Chyoo2/CYOA. The story contains adult themes and content and should not be viewed by those under 18. It is a work of fanfiction and the Author/Authors claim no rights over the characters, names, places, and other Intellectual Property within.&lt;br /&gt;
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Set in the dark vacuum of the void, on the outskirts of the densely inhabited Lylat Star System, orbits a blue-green gem of a world known as Sauria. Beautiful, harsh, and deadly. A moon rather than a proper planet, the gas giant it orbits is so large that it is on the border of becoming a small sun in its own right, the low grade fusion reactions at its core heating its moons enough to create an oasis of warm climates and blue oceans in this otherwise frozen and backwards area of the star system. This prime territory isolated from main Lylat civilization has not gone unnoticed by Outsiders, but they do not concern this tale for now. Many strange creatures inhabit this world, both organic and otherwise, but at present time there is only the one flying blue fox.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
In a battered Arwing bearing the scars of recent battles, our young vixen speeds over jagged mountains and deep valleys. Every bit as beautiful and elegant as her craft, slightly opened flightsuit revealing a hint of luscious cleavage. She grips the joystick tightly, teeth on edge and eyes unfocused as if she's seeing somewhere far away. Her name is Krystal, and this is her story.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
He'd dumped her ''again''. Her mind kept circling back to that, every bit as incredulous as she was the first time she'd though it. Sure, Team Starfox had being doing a lot of dangerous work in the aftermath of the Aparoid Invasion, but she'd thought he'd gotten over his &amp;quot;Chivalrous&amp;quot; streak a long time ago. Apparently not. Either that, or he'd been looking for a way to break things off without directly admitting how rocky their relationship had become, and had run to a familiar story. So like Fox: None braver when people were trying to kill him, but a terrible coward in regular life. Probably with more than a little encouragement from Miyu, the Humie bitch. After all, what better way to show solidarity than a highly public relationship between a legendary local hero and an influential Federation politician?&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
The worst part was that she didn't even have any candidates for a good rebound lay. Her old crone of a tutor had drilled into her that masturbation was &amp;quot;vulgar&amp;quot; at a young age (The bitch) and she still felt uncomfortable doing it, substituting meditation whenever she could. Neither was doing the trick now, and she'd been increasingly frustrated and horny over the last few weeks. Wolf had sent her an absolutely infuriating voicemail inviting her to come see him when she &amp;quot;Came to her senses&amp;quot; and &amp;quot;Decided she wanted a real Alpha Male to teach her a females proper position&amp;quot;, and had been promptly crossed off the list. Falco was just a dick in general, and Slippy... No. Just no. Everyone else she knew that fit even a tenth of her criteria were either old and married or working too closely with Fox to be workable without looking like the stereotypical slutty vengeful ex. Bills had piled up, most of the good Merc Work for clients that were unlikely to stab her in the back or try to trick her into bombing their own facilities for insurance scams was either reserved for multi-member bands or too low paying, and the only jobs she could find to keep flying were low-level missions like this one: Difficult, critically lacking in glamor, and above all tedious as hell.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
So here she was, howling across the empty skies of Sauria (The promised post-war Aid Fleet notably absent), trying to pin down that damned Mining Corp courier robot before her Arwing failed in midair and plowed her into a mountainside. At least she could take solace in the fact that the Pirate Cruiser that had hit her came off at least as bad, if not even worse. In hindsight, she'd probably only survived because they were geared for taking out heavy bulk freighters with long-range missiles and didn't know how to run their point-defenses worth a damn. Maybe they'd get stranded here and eaten by the natives. Serve them right.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Not that it helped her deal with the damned heat much, she noted as she glared of the condensation on the inside of her cockpit. Her climate control had been freaking out in planetary atmospheres for a month now, and the recent battle damage had made it even worse: Not only was it doing nothing to combat the combined effect of the nearby massive Gas Giant and distant Lylat sun, but actually producing its own additional heat in what might have been some insidious plot by her flight computer to boil her in her own cockpit.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
She writhed in her seat, the flightsuit feeling constrictive against her sweat-soaked fur. She toyed with the idea of unzipping a bit to let some of the heat out of her suit, or even strip it off entirely. The thought was tantalizingly naughty, especially with the heat starting to make her &amp;quot;condition&amp;quot; even worse, but this was no place to get careless. There could be Sharpclaws about, after all...&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Does she:&lt;br /&gt;
*[[LoK Unzip just a bit more, to cool off.]]&lt;br /&gt;
*[[LoK Give in to the heat and strip naked.]]&lt;br /&gt;
*[[LoK Concentrate and finish the mission.]]&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Location:[[Krystal's Arwing (Flying)]]&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
{{LoKStatus|Equipment=''[[Flightsuit]], [[Sidearm]], [[Survival knife]]''|Health=Uncomfortably Warm|MP=0|Conquests=0}}&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
[[Category: Legend of Krystal|*]]&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Or, if you want to start where you left off, jump to [[:Category:LoK_Locations|a location in the story]]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
			<pubDate>Sun, 30 Nov 2014 11:49:21 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Totemist</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/create_Your_own_story/Talk:Legend_of_Krystal</comments>		</item>
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			<title>Legend of Krystal</title>
			<link>http://72.14.177.54/create_Your_own_story/Legend_of_Krystal</link>
			<description>&lt;p&gt;Totemist:&amp;#32;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;hr /&gt;
&lt;div&gt;This story is loosely based on the Playshapes flash game of the same name and, more directly, the original Legend of Krystal Choose Your Own Adventure, which was moved to Chyoo2/CYOA. The story contains adult themes and content and should not be viewed by those under 18. It is a work of fanfiction and the Author/Authors claim no rights over the characters, names, places, and other Intellectual Property within.&lt;br /&gt;
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&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Set in the dark vacuum of the void, on the outskirts of the densely inhabited Lylat Star System, orbits a blue-green gem of a world known as Sauria. Beautiful, harsh, and deadly. A moon rather than a proper planet, the gas giant it orbits is so large that it is on the border of becoming a small sun in its own right, the low grade fusion reactions at its core heating its moons enough to create an oasis of warm climates and blue oceans in this otherwise frozen and backwards area of the star system. This prime territory isolated from main Lylat civilization has not gone unnoticed by Outsiders, but they do not concern this tale for now. Many strange creatures inhabit this world, both organic and otherwise, but at present time there is only the one flying blue fox.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
In a battered Arwing bearing the scars of recent battles, our young vixen speeds over jagged mountains and deep valleys. Every bit as beautiful and elegant as her craft, slightly opened flightsuit revealing a hint of luscious cleavage. She grips the joystick tightly, teeth on edge and eyes unfocused as if she's seeing somewhere far away. Her name is Krystal, and this is her story.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
He'd dumped her ''again''. Her mind kept circling back to that, every bit as incredulous as she was the first time she'd though it. Sure, Team Starfox had being doing a lot of dangerous work in the aftermath of the Aparoid Invasion, but she'd thought he'd gotten over his &amp;quot;Chivalrous&amp;quot; streak a long time ago. Apparently not. Either that, or he'd been looking for a way to break things off without directly admitting how rocky their relationship had become, and had run to a familiar story. So like Fox: None braver when people were trying to kill him, but a terrible coward in regular life. Probably with more than a little encouragement from Miyu, the Humie bitch. After all, what better way to show solidarity than a highly public relationship between a legendary local hero and an influential Federation politician?&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
The worst part was that she didn't even have any candidates for a good rebound lay. Her old crone of a tutor had drilled into her that masturbation was &amp;quot;vulgar&amp;quot; at a young age (The bitch) and she still felt uncomfortable doing it, substituting meditation whenever she could. Neither was doing the trick now, and she'd been increasingly frustrated and horny over the last few weeks. Wolf had sent her an absolutely infuriating voicemail inviting her to come see him when she &amp;quot;Came to her senses&amp;quot; and &amp;quot;Decided she wanted a real Alpha Male to teach her a females proper position&amp;quot;, and had been promptly crossed off the list. Falco was just a dick in general, and Slippy... No. Just no. Everyone else she knew that fit even a tenth of her criteria were either old and married or working too closely with Fox to be workable without looking like the stereotypical slutty vengeful ex. Bills had piled up, most of the good Merc Work for clients that were unlikely to stab her in the back or try to trick her into bombing their own facilities for insurance scams was either reserved for multi-member bands or too low paying, and the only jobs she could find to keep flying were low-level missions like this one: Difficult, critically lacking in glamor, and above all tedious as hell.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
So here she was, howling across the empty skies of Sauria (The promised post-war Aid Fleet notably absent), trying to pin down that damned Mining Corp courier robot before her Arwing failed in midair and plowed her into a mountainside. At least she could take solace in the fact that the Pirate Cruiser that had hit her came off at least as bad, if not even worse. In hindsight, she'd probably only survived because they were geared for taking out heavy bulk freighters with long-range missiles and didn't know how to run their point-defenses worth a damn. Maybe they'd get stranded here and eaten by the natives. Serve them right.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Not that it helped her deal with the damned heat much, she noted as she glared of the condensation on the inside of her cockpit. Her climate control had been freaking out in planetary atmospheres for a month now, and the recent battle damage had made it even worse: Not only was it doing nothing to combat the combined effect of the nearby massive Gas Giant and distant Lylat sun, but actually producing its own additional heat in what might have been some insidious plot by her flight computer to boil her in her own cockpit.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
She writhed in her seat, the flightsuit feeling constrictive against her sweat-soaked fur. She toyed with the idea of unzipping a bit to let some of the heat out of her suit, or even strip it off entirely. The thought was tantalizingly naughty, especially with the heat starting to make her &amp;quot;condition&amp;quot; even worse, but this was no place to get careless. There could be Sharpclaws about, after all...&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Does she:&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Unzip just a bit more, to cool off.]]&lt;br /&gt;
*[[LoK Give in to the heat and strip naked.]]&lt;br /&gt;
*[[LoK Concentrate and finish the mission.]]&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Location:[[Krystal's Arwing (Flying)]]&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
{{LoKStatus|Equipment=''[[Flightsuit]], [[Sidearm]], [[Survival knife]]''|Health=Uncomfortably Warm|MP=0|Conquests=0}}&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
[[Category: Legend of Krystal|*]]&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Or, if you want to start where you left off, jump to [[:Category:LoK_Locations|a location in the story]]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
			<pubDate>Sun, 30 Nov 2014 11:48:54 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Totemist</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/create_Your_own_story/Talk:Legend_of_Krystal</comments>		</item>
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			<title>Legend of Krystal</title>
			<link>http://72.14.177.54/create_Your_own_story/Legend_of_Krystal</link>
			<description>&lt;p&gt;Totemist:&amp;#32;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;hr /&gt;
&lt;div&gt;This story is loosely based on the Playshapes flash game of the same name and, more directly, the original Legend of Krystal Choose Your Own Adventure, which was moved to Chyoo2/CYOA. The story contains adult themes and content and should not be viewed by those under 18. It is a work of fanfiction and the Author/Authors claim no rights over the characters, names, places, and other Intellectual Property within.&lt;br /&gt;
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Set in the dark vacuum of the void, on the outskirts of the densely inhabited Lylat Star System, orbits a blue-green gem of a world known as Sauria. Beautiful, harsh, and deadly. A moon rather than a proper planet, the gas giant it orbits is so large that it is on the border of becoming a small sun in its own right, the low grade fusion reactions at its core heating its moons enough to create an oasis of warm climates and blue oceans in this otherwise frozen and backwards area of the star system. This prime territory isolated from main Lylat civilization has not gone unnoticed by Outsiders, but they do not concern this tale for now. Many strange creatures inhabit this world, both organic and otherwise, but at present time there is only the one flying blue fox.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
In a battered Arwing bearing the scars of recent battles, our young vixen speeds over jagged mountains and deep valleys. Every bit as beautiful and elegant as her craft, slightly opened flightsuit revealing a hint of luscious cleavage. She grips the joystick tightly, teeth on edge and eyes unfocused as if she's seeing somewhere far away. Her name is Krystal, and this is her story.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
He'd dumped her ''again''. Her mind kept circling back to that, every bit as incredulous as she was the first time she'd though it. Sure, Team Starfox had being doing a lot of dangerous work in the aftermath of the Aparoid Invasion, but she'd thought he'd gotten over his &amp;quot;Chivalrous&amp;quot; streak a long time ago. Apparently not. Either that, or he'd been looking for a way to break things off without directly admitting how rocky their relationship had become, and had run to a familiar story. So like Fox: None braver when people were trying to kill him, but a terrible coward in regular life. Probably with more than a little encouragement from Miyu, the Humie bitch. After all, what better way to show solidarity than a highly public relationship between a legendary local hero and an influential Federation politician?&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
The worst part was that she didn't even have any candidates for a good rebound lay. Her old crone of a tutor had drilled into her that masturbation was &amp;quot;vulgar&amp;quot; at a young age (The bitch) and she still felt uncomfortable doing it, substituting meditation whenever she could. Neither was doing the trick now, and she'd been increasingly frustrated and horny over the last few weeks. Wolf had sent her an absolutely infuriating voicemail inviting her to come see him when she &amp;quot;Came to her senses&amp;quot; and &amp;quot;Decided she wanted a real Alpha Male to teach her a females proper position&amp;quot;, and had been promptly crossed off the list. Falco was just a dick in general, and Slippy... No. Just no. Everyone else she knew that fit even a tenth of her criteria were either old and married or working too closely with Fox to be workable without looking like the stereotypical slutty vengeful ex. Bills had piled up, most of the good Merc Work for clients that were unlikely to stab her in the back or try to trick her into bombing their own facilities for insurance scams was either reserved for multi-member bands or too low paying, and the only jobs she could find to keep flying were low-level missions like this one: Difficult, critically lacking in glamor, and above all tedious as hell.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
So here she was, howling across the empty skies of Sauria (The promised post-war Aid Fleet notably absent), trying to pin down that damned Mining Corp courier robot before her Arwing failed in midair and plowed her into a mountainside. At least she could take solace in the fact that the Pirate Cruiser that had hit her came off at least as bad, if not even worse. In hindsight, she'd probably only survived because they were geared for taking out heavy bulk freighters with long-range missiles and didn't know how to run their point-defenses worth a damn. Maybe they'd get stranded here and eaten by the natives. Serve them right.&lt;br /&gt;
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Not that it helped her deal with the damned heat much, she noted as she glared of the condensation on the inside of her cockpit. Her climate control had been freaking out in planetary atmospheres for a month now, and the recent battle damage had made it even worse: Not only was it doing nothing to combat the combined effect of the nearby massive Gas Giant and distant Lylat sun, but actually producing its own additional heat in what might have been some insidious plot by her flight computer to boil her in her own cockpit.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
She writhed in her seat, the flightsuit feeling constrictive against her sweat-soaked fur. She toyed with the idea of unzipping a bit to let some of the heat out of her suit, or even strip it off entirely. The thought was tantalizingly naughty, especially with the heat starting to make her &amp;quot;condition&amp;quot; even worse, but this was no place to get careless. There could be Sharpclaws about, after all...&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Does she:&lt;br /&gt;
*[[LoK Give in to the heat and strip naked.]]&lt;br /&gt;
*[[LoK Concentrate and finish the mission.]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Location:[[Krystal's Arwing (Flying)]]&lt;br /&gt;
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{{LoKStatus|Equipment=''[[Flightsuit]], [[Sidearm]], [[Survival knife]]''|Health=Uncomfortably Warm|MP=0|Conquests=0}}&lt;br /&gt;
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[[Category: Legend of Krystal|*]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Or, if you want to start where you left off, jump to [[:Category:LoK_Locations|a location in the story]]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
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			<title>LoK Unzip her flightsuit just a bit further, to cool off.</title>
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			<description>&lt;p&gt;Totemist:&amp;#32;LoK Unzip her flightsuit just a bit further, to cool off. moved to LoK Concentrate and finish the mission.:&amp;amp;#32;Mistaken link.&lt;/p&gt;
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			<title>LoK Concentrate and finish the mission.</title>
			<link>http://72.14.177.54/create_Your_own_story/LoK_Concentrate_and_finish_the_mission.</link>
			<description>&lt;p&gt;Totemist:&amp;#32;LoK Unzip her flightsuit just a bit further, to cool off. moved to LoK Concentrate and finish the mission.:&amp;amp;#32;Mistaken link.&lt;/p&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;Krystal shakes her head, as if to clear it, and does her best to focus on the mission. The rich mineral deposits play havoc with her sensors, making her wonder why no major interests have ever ever tried setting up mining operations here. Surely the price of extra security to keep the natives from killing your workers would be worth it? Then again, Sauria did have an uncertain reputation from when it sort of...broke into four pieces within recent memory, with the Krazoa spirits evidently being the only thing keeping the moon from being turned into a new ring system by the gravity of its parent body. Shuddering, she thanks her birth stars that Andross' madness never had a chance to succeed, leaving her trapped in a crystal prison on a lonely asteroid for eternity.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Try as she might, she gets no closer to her goal of activating the secondary drone, weaving twisting paths through the maze of jagged, volcanic ridges and narrow valleys as she hunts the weak and intermittent signal in vain. The temperature in the small cockpit rises, as the flightsuit seems to constrict around her lithe, sweaty frame. Groaning in frustration, she loops around a particularly impressive and rugged mountain range in an attempt to give her sensors a high-altitude scan of the target region, surprisingly not volcanic despite the prevalence of extinct Ashemounts in the surrounding area. As her Arwing circles the snow-capped peaks, eyes trained carefully on sensor readouts, her engines begin to flicker and whine. Snapping to attention, she scrambles to run diagnostics as she fights to keep control of the fighter, letting loose a series of expletives that would have shocked her elderly tutor into a long overdue grave.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Cursing even more foully, she blinks in disbelief at the readout, helpfully informing her that roughly nine out of every ten systems needed to actually make the Arwing fly and keep her protected from the vacuum of space are failing due to recent battle damage, and noting that the systems responsible for automatically monitoring her Arwings internals are not responding. Vaguely, she recalls Slippy saying something about having to re-route her automated diagnostics through a handful of backup computer cores, making them vulnerable to damage. As she fights to keep her Arwing level in its spiral to an inevitable meeting with the hard, hard ground, she curses the frog and his family six generations back. Why the Hell should she have to die because just this one time his warnings actually meant something? He should have spouted less jargon and made sure she was actually listening!&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Her eyes flicker desperately to the weather readout. If she can just... There! Sighing in relief at the lucky updraft, she slams the emergency maneuvering jets into action with her fist, giving her the extra control and power she desperately needs to make her imminent crash survivable. Bracing for a hard landing, she closes her eyes tight as her precious Arwing slams through the jungle canopy, a symphony of snapping branches and cringe-inducing crashing noises singing her to her collision with the rocky soil. Slamming against the front of her harness, she all but blacks out as her starfighter slowly grinds to a halt. Taking one last look around, she looks at her clock, blinking in surprise at the time. Minutes? That crash felt like four hours of continually smacking trees! Collapsing back onto her seat, she slips into unconsciousness thinking that she wished the crash had broken part of her canopy open. It's so damn hot...&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Some time later, she feels vague impressions of being in motion, of a smell familiar enough to warn her of danger but not immediately recognizable, and an oversize hand squeezing one of her firm ass cheeks. Trying to tell whoever it is to sod off, the words fail to escape her mouth and she falls the rest of the way into darkness.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
What does Krystal do?&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Wake up.]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Location:[[Krystal's Arwing (Flying)]]&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
{{LoKStatus|Equipment=''[[Flightsuit]], [[Sidearm]], [[Survival knife]]''|Health=Uncomfortably Hot, Unconscious|MP=0|Conquests=0}}&lt;br /&gt;
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[[Category: Legend of Krystal|*]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Or, if you want to start where you left off, jump to [[:Category:LoK_Locations|a location in the story]]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
			<pubDate>Sun, 30 Nov 2014 11:47:10 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Totemist</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/create_Your_own_story/Talk:LoK_Concentrate_and_finish_the_mission.</comments>		</item>
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			<title>LoK Concentrate and finish the mission.</title>
			<link>http://72.14.177.54/create_Your_own_story/LoK_Concentrate_and_finish_the_mission.</link>
			<description>&lt;p&gt;Totemist:&amp;#32;&lt;/p&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;Krystal shakes her head, as if to clear it, and does her best to focus on the mission. The rich mineral deposits play havoc with her sensors, making her wonder why no major interests have ever ever tried setting up mining operations here. Surely the price of extra security to keep the natives from killing your workers would be worth it? Then again, Sauria did have an uncertain reputation from when it sort of...broke into four pieces within recent memory, with the Krazoa spirits evidently being the only thing keeping the moon from being turned into a new ring system by the gravity of its parent body. Shuddering, she thanks her birth stars that Andross' madness never had a chance to succeed, leaving her trapped in a crystal prison on a lonely asteroid for eternity.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Try as she might, she gets no closer to her goal of activating the secondary drone, weaving twisting paths through the maze of jagged, volcanic ridges and narrow valleys as she hunts the weak and intermittent signal in vain. The temperature in the small cockpit rises, as the flightsuit seems to constrict around her lithe, sweaty frame. Groaning in frustration, she loops around a particularly impressive and rugged mountain range in an attempt to give her sensors a high-altitude scan of the target region, surprisingly not volcanic despite the prevalence of extinct Ashemounts in the surrounding area. As her Arwing circles the snow-capped peaks, eyes trained carefully on sensor readouts, her engines begin to flicker and whine. Snapping to attention, she scrambles to run diagnostics as she fights to keep control of the fighter, letting loose a series of expletives that would have shocked her elderly tutor into a long overdue grave.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Cursing even more foully, she blinks in disbelief at the readout, helpfully informing her that roughly nine out of every ten systems needed to actually make the Arwing fly and keep her protected from the vacuum of space are failing due to recent battle damage, and noting that the systems responsible for automatically monitoring her Arwings internals are not responding. Vaguely, she recalls Slippy saying something about having to re-route her automated diagnostics through a handful of backup computer cores, making them vulnerable to damage. As she fights to keep her Arwing level in its spiral to an inevitable meeting with the hard, hard ground, she curses the frog and his family six generations back. Why the Hell should she have to die because just this one time his warnings actually meant something? He should have spouted less jargon and made sure she was actually listening!&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Her eyes flicker desperately to the weather readout. If she can just... There! Sighing in relief at the lucky updraft, she slams the emergency maneuvering jets into action with her fist, giving her the extra control and power she desperately needs to make her imminent crash survivable. Bracing for a hard landing, she closes her eyes tight as her precious Arwing slams through the jungle canopy, a symphony of snapping branches and cringe-inducing crashing noises singing her to her collision with the rocky soil. Slamming against the front of her harness, she all but blacks out as her starfighter slowly grinds to a halt. Taking one last look around, she looks at her clock, blinking in surprise at the time. Minutes? That crash felt like four hours of continually smacking trees! Collapsing back onto her seat, she slips into unconsciousness thinking that she wished the crash had broken part of her canopy open. It's so damn hot...&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Some time later, she feels vague impressions of being in motion, of a smell familiar enough to warn her of danger but not immediately recognizable, and an oversize hand squeezing one of her firm ass cheeks. Trying to tell whoever it is to sod off, the words fail to escape her mouth and she falls the rest of the way into darkness.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
What does Krystal do?&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Wake up.]]&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Location:[[Krystal's Arwing (Flying)]]&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
{{LoKStatus|Equipment=''[[Flightsuit]], [[Sidearm]], [[Survival knife]]''|Health=Uncomfortably Hot, Unconscious|MP=0|Conquests=0}}&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
[[Category: Legend of Krystal|*]]&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Or, if you want to start where you left off, jump to [[:Category:LoK_Locations|a location in the story]]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
			<pubDate>Sun, 30 Nov 2014 11:45:55 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Totemist</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/create_Your_own_story/Talk:LoK_Concentrate_and_finish_the_mission.</comments>		</item>
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			<title>LoK Concentrate and finish the mission.</title>
			<link>http://72.14.177.54/create_Your_own_story/LoK_Concentrate_and_finish_the_mission.</link>
			<description>&lt;p&gt;Totemist:&amp;#32;Created page with 'Krystal shakes her head, as if to clear it, and does her best to focus on the mission. The rich mineral deposits play havoc with her sensors, making her wonder why no major inter…'&lt;/p&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;Krystal shakes her head, as if to clear it, and does her best to focus on the mission. The rich mineral deposits play havoc with her sensors, making her wonder why no major interests have ever ever tried setting up mining operations here. Surely the price of extra security to keep the natives from killing your workers would be worth it? Then again, Sauria did have an uncertain reputation from when it sort of...broke into four pieces within recent memory, with the Krazoa spirits evidently being the only thing keeping the moon from being turned into a new ring system by the gravity of its parent body. Shuddering, she thanks her birth stars that Andross' madness never had a chance to succeed, leaving her trapped in a crystal prison on a lonely asteroid for eternity.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Try as she might, she gets no closer to her goal of activating the secondary drone, weaving twisting paths through the maze of jagged, volcanic ridges and narrow valleys as she hunts the weak and intermittent signal in vain. The temperature in the small cockpit rises, as the flightsuit seems to constrict around her lithe, sweaty frame. Groaning in frustration, she loops around a particularly impressive and rugged mountain range in an attempt to give her sensors a high-altitude scan of the target region, surprisingly not volcanic despite the prevalence of extinct Ashemounts in the surrounding area. As her Arwing circles the snow-capped peaks, eyes trained carefully on sensor readouts, her engines begin to flicker and whine. Snapping to attention, she scrambles to run diagnostics as she fights to keep control of the fighter, letting loose a series of expletives that would have shocked her elderly tutor into a long overdue grave.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Cursing even more foully, she blinks in disbelief at the readout, helpfully informing her that roughly nine out of every ten systems needed to actually make the Arwing fly and keep her protected from the vacuum of space are failing due to recent battle damage, and noting that the systems responsible for automatically monitoring her Arwings internals are not responding. Vaguely, she recalls Slippy saying something about having to re-route her automated diagnostics through a handful of backup computer cores, making them vulnerable to damage. As she fights to keep her Arwing level in its spiral to an inevitable meeting with the hard, hard ground, she curses the frog and his family six generations back. Why the Hell should she have to die because just this one time his warnings actually meant something? He should have spouted less jargon and made sure she was actually listening!&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Her eyes flicker desperately to the weather readout. If she can just... There! Sighing in relief at the lucky updraft, she slams the emergency maneuvering jets into action with her fist, giving her the extra control and power she desperately needs to make her imminent crash survivable. Bracing for a hard landing, she closes her eyes tight as her precious Arwing slams through the jungle canopy, a symphony of snapping branches and cringe-inducing crashing noises singing her to her collision with the rocky soil. Slamming against the front of her harness, she all but blacks out as her starfighter slowly grinds to a halt. Taking one last look around, she looks at her clock, blinking in surprise at the time. Minutes? That crash felt like four hours of continually smacking trees! Collapsing back onto her seat, she slips into unconsciousness thinking that she wished the crash had broken part of her canopy open. It's so damn hot...&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Some time later, she felt vague impressions of being in motion, of a smell familiar enough to warn her of danger but not immediately recognizable, and an oversize hand squeezing one of her firm ass cheeks. Trying to tell whoever it is to sod off, the words fail to escape her mouth and she falls the rest of the way into darkness.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
What does Krystal do?&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Wake up.]]&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Location:[[Krystal's Arwing (Flying)]]&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
{{LoKStatus|Equipment=''[[Flightsuit]], [[Sidearm]], [[Survival knife]]''|Health=Uncomfortably Hot, Unconscious|MP=0|Conquests=0}}&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
[[Category: Legend of Krystal|*]]&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Or, if you want to start where you left off, jump to [[:Category:LoK_Locations|a location in the story]]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
			<pubDate>Sun, 30 Nov 2014 11:45:11 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Totemist</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/create_Your_own_story/Talk:LoK_Concentrate_and_finish_the_mission.</comments>		</item>
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			<title>Survival knife</title>
			<link>http://72.14.177.54/create_Your_own_story/Survival_knife</link>
			<description>&lt;p&gt;Totemist:&amp;#32;Created page with 'A standard-issue Cornerian Military utility and wilderness knife, popular across the Lylat system.'&lt;/p&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;A standard-issue Cornerian Military utility and wilderness knife, popular across the Lylat system.&lt;/div&gt;</description>
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			<title>Sidearm</title>
			<link>http://72.14.177.54/create_Your_own_story/Sidearm</link>
			<description>&lt;p&gt;Totemist:&amp;#32;Created page with 'A Standard-issue Cornerian projectile-pistol, suitable for lightly armored infantry and hostile wildlife, ten round capacity.'&lt;/p&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;A Standard-issue Cornerian projectile-pistol, suitable for lightly armored infantry and hostile wildlife, ten round capacity.&lt;/div&gt;</description>
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			<title>Legend of Krystal</title>
			<link>http://72.14.177.54/create_Your_own_story/Legend_of_Krystal</link>
			<description>&lt;p&gt;Totemist:&amp;#32;&lt;/p&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;This story is loosely based on the Playshapes flash game of the same name and, more directly, the original Legend of Krystal Choose Your Own Adventure, which was moved to Chyoo2/CYOA. The story contains adult themes and content and should not be viewed by those under 18. It is a work of fanfiction and the Author/Authors claim no rights over the characters, names, places, and other Intellectual Property within.&lt;br /&gt;
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Set in the dark vacuum of the void, on the outskirts of the densely inhabited Lylat Star System, orbits a blue-green gem of a world known as Sauria. Beautiful, harsh, and deadly. A moon rather than a proper planet, the gas giant it orbits is so large that it is on the border of becoming a small sun in its own right, the low grade fusion reactions at its core heating its moons enough to create an oasis of warm climates and blue oceans in this otherwise frozen and backwards area of the star system. This prime territory isolated from main Lylat civilization has not gone unnoticed by Outsiders, but they do not concern this tale for now. Many strange creatures inhabit this world, both organic and otherwise, but at present time there is only the one flying blue fox.&lt;br /&gt;
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In a battered Arwing bearing the scars of recent battles, our young vixen speeds over jagged mountains and deep valleys. Every bit as beautiful and elegant as her craft, slightly opened flightsuit revealing a hint of luscious cleavage. She grips the joystick tightly, teeth on edge and eyes unfocused as if she's seeing somewhere far away. Her name is Krystal, and this is her story.&lt;br /&gt;
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He'd dumped her ''again''. Her mind kept circling back to that, every bit as incredulous as she was the first time she'd though it. Sure, Team Starfox had being doing a lot of dangerous work in the aftermath of the Aparoid Invasion, but she'd thought he'd gotten over his &amp;quot;Chivalrous&amp;quot; streak a long time ago. Apparently not. Either that, or he'd been looking for a way to break things off without directly admitting how rocky their relationship had become, and had run to a familiar story. So like Fox: None braver when people were trying to kill him, but a terrible coward in regular life. Probably with more than a little encouragement from Miyu, the Humie bitch. After all, what better way to show solidarity than a highly public relationship between a legendary local hero and an influential Federation politician?&lt;br /&gt;
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The worst part was that she didn't even have any candidates for a good rebound lay. Her old crone of a tutor had drilled into her that masturbation was &amp;quot;vulgar&amp;quot; at a young age (The bitch) and she still felt uncomfortable doing it, substituting meditation whenever she could. Neither was doing the trick now, and she'd been increasingly frustrated and horny over the last few weeks. Wolf had sent her an absolutely infuriating voicemail inviting her to come see him when she &amp;quot;Came to her senses&amp;quot; and &amp;quot;Decided she wanted a real Alpha Male to teach her a females proper position&amp;quot;, and had been promptly crossed off the list. Falco was just a dick in general, and Slippy... No. Just no. Everyone else she knew that fit even a tenth of her criteria were either old and married or working too closely with Fox to be workable without looking like the stereotypical slutty vengeful ex. Bills had piled up, most of the good Merc Work for clients that were unlikely to stab her in the back or try to trick her into bombing their own facilities for insurance scams was either reserved for multi-member bands or too low paying, and the only jobs she could find to keep flying were low-level missions like this one: Difficult, critically lacking in glamor, and above all tedious as hell.&lt;br /&gt;
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So here she was, howling across the empty skies of Sauria (The promised post-war Aid Fleet notably absent), trying to pin down that damned Mining Corp courier robot before her Arwing failed in midair and plowed her into a mountainside. At least she could take solace in the fact that the Pirate Cruiser that had hit her came off at least as bad, if not even worse. In hindsight, she'd probably only survived because they were geared for taking out heavy bulk freighters with long-range missiles and didn't know how to run their point-defenses worth a damn. Maybe they'd get stranded here and eaten by the natives. Serve them right.&lt;br /&gt;
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Not that it helped her deal with the damned heat much, she noted as she glared of the condensation on the inside of her cockpit. Her climate control had been freaking out in planetary atmospheres for a month now, and the recent battle damage had made it even worse: Not only was it doing nothing to combat the combined effect of the nearby massive Gas Giant and distant Lylat sun, but actually producing its own additional heat in what might have been some insidious plot by her flight computer to boil her in her own cockpit.&lt;br /&gt;
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She writhed in her seat, the flightsuit feeling constrictive against her sweat-soaked fur. She toyed with the idea of unzipping a bit to let some of the heat out of her suit, or even strip it off entirely. The thought was tantalizingly naughty, especially with the heat starting to make her &amp;quot;condition&amp;quot; even worse, but this was no place to get careless. There could be Sharpclaws about, after all...&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Does she:&lt;br /&gt;
*[[LoK Unzip her flightsuit just a bit further, to cool off.]]&lt;br /&gt;
*[[LoK Give in to the heat and strip naked.]]&lt;br /&gt;
*[[LoK Concentrate and finish the mission.]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Location:[[Krystal's Arwing (Flying)]]&lt;br /&gt;
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{{LoKStatus|Equipment=''[[Flightsuit]], [[Sidearm]], [[Survival knife]]''|Health=Uncomfortably Warm|MP=0|Conquests=0}}&lt;br /&gt;
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[[Category: Legend of Krystal|*]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Or, if you want to start where you left off, jump to [[:Category:LoK_Locations|a location in the story]]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
			<pubDate>Sun, 30 Nov 2014 09:44:07 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Totemist</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/create_Your_own_story/Talk:Legend_of_Krystal</comments>		</item>
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			<title>Legend of Krystal</title>
			<link>http://72.14.177.54/create_Your_own_story/Legend_of_Krystal</link>
			<description>&lt;p&gt;Totemist:&amp;#32;&lt;/p&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;This story is loosely based on the Playshapes flash game of the same name and, more directly, the original Legend of Krystal Choose Your Own Adventure, which was moved to Chyoo2/CYOA. The story contains adult themes and content and should not be viewed by those under 18. It is a work of fanfiction and the Author/Authors claim no rights over the characters, names, places, and other Intellectual Property within.&lt;br /&gt;
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Set in the dark vacuum of the void, on the outskirts of the densely inhabited Lylat Star System, orbits a blue-green gem of a world known as Sauria. Beautiful, harsh, and deadly. A moon rather than a proper planet, the gas giant it orbits is so large that it is on the border of becoming a small sun in its own right, the low grade fusion reactions at its core heating its moons enough to create an oasis of warm climates and blue oceans in this otherwise frozen and backwards area of the star system. Many strange creatures inhabit this world, both organic and otherwise, but at present time there is only the one flying blue fox.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
In a battered Arwing bearing the scars of recent battles, our young vixen speeds over jagged mountains and deep valleys. Every bit as beautiful and elegant as her craft, slightly opened flightsuit revealing a hint of luscious cleavage. She grips the joystick tightly, teeth on edge and eyes unfocused as if she's seeing somewhere far away. Her name is Krystal, and this is her story.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
He'd dumped her ''again''. Her mind kept circling back to that, every bit as incredulous as she was the first time she'd though it. Sure, Team Starfox had being doing a lot of dangerous work in the aftermath of the Aparoid Invasion, but she'd thought he'd gotten over his &amp;quot;Chivalrous&amp;quot; streak a long time ago. Apparently not. Either that, or he'd been looking for a way to break things off without directly admitting how rocky their relationship had become, and had run to a familiar story. So like Fox: None braver when people were trying to kill him, but a terrible coward in regular life. Probably with more than a little encouragement from Miyu, the Humie bitch. After all, what better way to show solidarity than a highly public relationship between a legendary local hero and an influential Federation politician?&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
The worst part was that she didn't even have any candidates for a good rebound lay. Her old crone of a tutor had drilled into her that masturbation was &amp;quot;vulgar&amp;quot; at a young age (The bitch) and she still felt uncomfortable doing it, substituting meditation whenever she could. Neither was doing the trick now, and she'd been increasingly frustrated and horny over the last few weeks. Wolf had sent her an absolutely infuriating voicemail inviting her to come see him when she &amp;quot;Came to her senses&amp;quot; and &amp;quot;Decided she wanted a real Alpha Male to teach her a females proper position&amp;quot;, and had been promptly crossed off the list. Falco was a dick in general, Slippy... No. Just no. Everyone else she knew that fit even a tenth of her criteria were either old and married or working too closely with Fox to be workable without looking like the stereotypical slutty vengeful ex. Bills had piled up, most of the good Merc Work for clients that were unlikely to stab her in the back or try to trick her into bombing their own facilities for insurance scams was either reserved for multi-member bands or too low paying, and the only jobs she could find to keep flying were low-level missions like this one: Difficult, critically lacking in glamor, and above all tedious as hell.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
So here she was, howling across the empty skies of Sauria (The promised post-war Aid Fleet notably absent), trying to pin down that damned Mining Corp courier robot before her Arwing failed in midair and plowed her into a mountainside. At least she could take solace in the fact that the Pirate Cruiser that had hit her came off at least as bad, if not even worse. In hindsight, she'd probably only survived because they were geared for taking out heavy bulk freighters with long-range missiles and didn't know how to run their point-defenses worth a damn. Maybe they'd get stranded here and eaten by the natives.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Not that it helped her deal with the damned heat much, she noted as she glared of the condensation on the inside of her cockpit. Her climate control had been freaking out in planetary atmospheres for a month now, and the recent battle damage had made it even worse: not only was it doing nothing to combat the combined effect of the nearby massive Gas Giant and distant Lylat sun, but actually producing its own additional heat in what might have been some insidious plot by her flight computer to boil her in her cockpit.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
She writhed in her seat, the flightsuit feeling constrictive against her sweat-soaked fur. She toyed with the idea of unzipping a bit to let some of the heat out of her suit, or even strip it off entirely. The thought was tantalizingly naughty, especially with the heat starting to make her &amp;quot;condition&amp;quot; even worse, but this was no place to get careless. There could be Sharpclaws about, after all...&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Does she:&lt;br /&gt;
*[[LoK Unzip her flightsuit just a bit further, to cool off.]]&lt;br /&gt;
*[[LoK Give in to heat and strip naked.]]&lt;br /&gt;
*[[LoK Concentrate and finish the mission.]]&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Location:[[Krystal's Arwing (Flying)]]&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
{{LoKStatus|Equipment=''[[Flightsuit]], [[Sidearm]], [[Survival knife]]''|Health=Uncomfortably Warm|MP=0|Conquests=0}}&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
[[Category: Legend of Krystal|*]]&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Or, if you want to start where you left off, jump to [[:Category:LoK_Locations|a location in the story]]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
			<pubDate>Sun, 30 Nov 2014 09:40:01 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Totemist</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/create_Your_own_story/Talk:Legend_of_Krystal</comments>		</item>
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			<title>Legend of Krystal</title>
			<link>http://72.14.177.54/create_Your_own_story/Legend_of_Krystal</link>
			<description>&lt;p&gt;Totemist:&amp;#32;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;hr /&gt;
&lt;div&gt;This story is loosely based on the Playshapes flash game of the same name and, more directly, the original Legend of Krystal Choose Your Own Adventure, which was moved to Chyoo2/CYOA. The story contains adult themes and content and should not be viewed by those under 18. It is a work of fanfiction and the Author/Authors claim no rights over the characters, names, places, and other Intellectual Property within.&lt;br /&gt;
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Set in the dark vacuum of the void, on the outskirts of the densely inhabited Lylat Star System, orbits a blue-green gem of a world known as Sauria. Beautiful, harsh, and deadly. A moon rather than a proper planet, the gas giant it orbits is so large that it is on the border of becoming a small sun in its own right, the low grade fusion reactions at its core heating its moons enough to create an oasis of warm climates and blue oceans in this otherwise frozen and backwards area of the star system. Many strange creatures inhabit this world, both organic and otherwise, but at present time there is only the one flying blue fox.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
In a battered Arwing bearing the scars of recent battles, our young vixen speeds over jagged mountains and deep valleys. Every bit as beautiful and elegant as her craft, slightly opened flightsuit revealing a hint of luscious cleavage. She grips the joystick tightly, teeth on edge and eyes unfocused as if she's seeing somewhere far away. Her name is Krystal, and this is her story.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
He'd dumped her ''again''. Her mind kept circling back to that, every bit as incredulous as she was the first time she'd though it. Sure, Team Starfox had being doing a lot of dangerous work in the aftermath of the Aparoid Invasion, but she'd thought he'd gotten over his &amp;quot;Chivalrous&amp;quot; streak a long time ago. Apparently not. Either that, or he'd been looking for a way to break things off without directly admitting how rocky their relationship had become, and had run to a familiar story. So like Fox: None braver when people were trying to kill him, but a terrible coward in regular life. Probably with more than a little encouragement from Miyu, the Humie bitch. After all, what better way to show solidarity than a highly public relationship between a legendary local hero and an influential Federation politician?&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
The worst part was that she didn't even have any candidates for a good rebound lay. Her old crone of a tutor had drilled into her that masturbation was &amp;quot;vulgar&amp;quot; at a young age (The bitch) and she still felt uncomfortable doing it, substituting meditation whenever she could. Neither was doing the trick now, and she'd been increasingly frustrated and horny over the last few weeks. Wolf had sent her an absolutely infuriating voicemail inviting her to come see him when she &amp;quot;Came to her senses&amp;quot; and &amp;quot;Decided she wanted a real Alpha Male to teach her a females proper position&amp;quot;, and had been promptly crossed off the list. Falco was a dick in general, Slippy... No. Just no. Everyone else she knew that fit even a tenth of her criteria were either old and married or working too closely with Fox to be workable without looking like the stereotypical slutty vengeful ex. Bills had piled up, most of the good Merc Work for clients that were unlikely to stab her in the back or try to trick her into bombing their own facilities for insurance scams was either reserved for multi-member bands or too low paying, and the only jobs she could find to keep flying were low-level missions like this one: Difficult, critically lacking in glamor, and above all tedious as hell.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
So here she was, howling across the empty skies of Sauria (The promised post-war Aid Fleet notably absent), trying to pin down that damned Mining Corp courier robot before her Arwing failed in midair and plowed her into a mountainside. At least she could take solace in the fact that the Pirate Cruiser that had hit her came off at least as bad, if not even worse. In hindsight, she'd probably only survived because they were geared for taking out heavy bulk freighters with long-range missiles and didn't know how to run their point-defenses worth a damn. Maybe they'd get stranded here and eaten by the natives.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Not that it helped her deal with the damned heat much, she noted as she glared of the condensation on the inside of her cockpit. Her climate control had been freaking out in planetary atmospheres for a month now, and the recent battle damage had made it even worse: not only was it doing nothing to combat the combined effect of the nearby massive Gas Giant and distant Lylat sun, but actually producing its own additional heat in what might have been some insidious plot by her flight computer to boil her in her cockpit.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
She writhed in her seat, the flightsuit feeling constrictive against her sweat-soaked fur. She toyed with the idea of unzipping a bit to let some of the heat out of her suit, or even strip it off entirely. The thought was tantalizingly naughty, especially with the heat starting to make her &amp;quot;condition&amp;quot; even worse, but this was no place to get careless. There could be Sharpclaws about, after all...&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Does she:&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
 *[[LoK Unzip her flightsuit just a bit further, to cool off.]]&lt;br /&gt;
 *[[LoK Concentrate and finish the mission.]]&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Location:[[Krystal's Arwing (Flying)]]&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
{{LoKStatus|Equipment=''[[Flightsuit]], [[Sidearm]], [[Survival knife]]''|Health=Uncomfortably Warm|MP=0|Conquests=0}}&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
[[Category: Legend of Krystal|*]]&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Or, if you want to start where you left off, jump to [[:Category:LoK_Locations|a location in the story]]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
			<pubDate>Sun, 30 Nov 2014 09:38:47 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Totemist</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/create_Your_own_story/Talk:Legend_of_Krystal</comments>		</item>
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			<title>Legend of Krystal</title>
			<link>http://72.14.177.54/create_Your_own_story/Legend_of_Krystal</link>
			<description>&lt;p&gt;Totemist:&amp;#32;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;hr /&gt;
&lt;div&gt;This story is loosely based on the Playshapes flash game of the same name and, more directly, the original Legend of Krystal Choose Your Own Adventure, which was moved to Chyoo2/CYOA. The story contains adult themes and content and should not be viewed by those under 18. It is a work of fanfiction and the Author/Authors claim no rights over the characters, names, places, and other Intellectual Property within.&lt;br /&gt;
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Set in the dark vacuum of the void, on the outskirts of the densely inhabited Lylat Star System, orbits a blue-green gem of a world known as Sauria. Beautiful, harsh, and deadly. A moon rather than a proper planet, the gas giant it orbits is so large that it is on the border of becoming a small sun in its own right, the low grade fusion reactions at its core heating its moons enough to create an oasis of warm climates and blue oceans in this otherwise frozen and backwards area of the star system. Many strange creatures inhabit this world, both organic and otherwise, but at present time there is only the one flying blue fox.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
In a battered Arwing bearing the scars of recent battles, our young vixen speeds over jagged mountains and deep valleys. Every bit as beautiful and elegant as her craft, slightly opened flightsuit revealing a hint of luscious cleavage. She grips the joystick tightly, teeth on edge and eyes unfocused as if she's seeing somewhere far away. Her name is Krystal, and this is her story.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
He'd dumped her ''again''. Her mind kept circling back to that, every bit as incredulous as she was the first time she'd though it. Sure, Team Starfox had being doing a lot of dangerous work in the aftermath of the Aparoid Invasion, but she'd thought he'd gotten over his &amp;quot;Chivalrous&amp;quot; streak a long time ago. Apparently not. Either that, or he'd been looking for a way to break things off without directly admitting how rocky their relationship had become, and had run to a familiar story. So like Fox: None braver when people were trying to kill him, but a terrible coward in regular life. Probably with more than a little encouragement from Miyu, the Humie bitch. After all, what better way to show solidarity than a highly public relationship between a legendary local hero and an influential Federation politician?&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
The worst part was that she didn't even have any candidates for a good rebound lay. Her old crone of a tutor had drilled into her that masturbation was &amp;quot;vulgar&amp;quot; at a young age (The bitch) and she still felt uncomfortable doing it, substituting meditation whenever she could. Neither was doing the trick now, and she'd been increasingly frustrated and horny over the last few weeks. Wolf had sent her an absolutely infuriating voicemail inviting her to come see him when she &amp;quot;Came to her senses&amp;quot; and &amp;quot;Decided she wanted a real Alpha Male to teach her a females proper position&amp;quot;, and had been promptly crossed off the list. Falco was a dick in general, Slippy... No. Just no. Everyone else she knew that fit even a tenth of her criteria were either old and married or working too closely with Fox to be workable without looking like the stereotypical slutty vengeful ex. Bills had piled up, most of the good Merc Work for clients that were unlikely to stab her in the back or try to trick her into bombing their own facilities for insurance scams was either reserved for multi-member bands or too low paying, and the only jobs she could find to keep flying were low-level missions like this one: Difficult, critically lacking in glamor, and above all tedious as hell.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
So here she was, howling across the empty skies of Sauria (The promised post-war Aid Fleet notably absent), trying to pin down that damned Mining Corp courier robot before her Arwing failed in midair and plowed her into a mountainside. At least she could take solace in the fact that the Pirate Cruiser that had hit her came off at least as bad, if not even worse. In hindsight, she'd probably only survived because they were geared for taking out heavy bulk freighters with long-range missiles and didn't know how to run their point-defenses worth a damn. Maybe they'd get stranded here and eaten by the natives.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Not that it helped her deal with the damned heat much, she noted as she glared of the condensation on the inside of her cockpit. Her climate control had been freaking out in planetary atmospheres for a month now, and the recent battle damage had made it even worse: not only was it doing nothing to combat the combined effect of the nearby massive Gas Giant and distant Lylat sun, but actually producing its own additional heat in what might have been some insidious plot by her flight computer to boil her in her cockpit.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
She writhed in her seat, the flightsuit feeling constrictive against her sweat-soaked fur. She toyed with the idea of unzipping a bit to let some of the heat out of her suit, or even strip it off entirely. The thought was tantalizingly naughty, especially with the heat starting to make her &amp;quot;condition&amp;quot; even worse, but this was no place to get careless. There could be Sharpclaws about, after all...&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Does she:&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
    [[LoK Unzip her flightsuit just a bit further, to cool off.]]&lt;br /&gt;
    [[LoK Concentrate and finish the mission.]]&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Location:[[Krystal's Arwing (Flying)]]&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
{{LoKStatus|Equipment=''[[Flightsuit]], [[Sidearm]], [[Survival knife]]''|Health=Uncomfortably Warm|MP=0|Conquests=0}}&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
[[Category: Legend of Krystal|*]]&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Or, if you want to start where you left off, jump to [[:Category:LoK_Locations|a location in the story]]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
			<pubDate>Sun, 30 Nov 2014 09:37:27 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Totemist</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/create_Your_own_story/Talk:Legend_of_Krystal</comments>		</item>
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			<title>Legend of Krystal</title>
			<link>http://72.14.177.54/create_Your_own_story/Legend_of_Krystal</link>
			<description>&lt;p&gt;Totemist:&amp;#32;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;hr /&gt;
&lt;div&gt;This story is loosely based on the Playshapes flash game of the same name and, more directly, the original Legend of Krystal Choose Your Own Adventure, which was moved to Chyoo2/CYOA. The story contains adult themes and content and should not be viewed by those under 18. It is a work of fanfiction and the Author/Authors claim no rights over the characters, names, places, and other Intellectual Property within.&lt;br /&gt;
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Set in the dark vacuum of the void, on the outskirts of the densely inhabited Lylat Star System, orbits a blue-green gem of a world known as Sauria. Beautiful, harsh, and deadly. A moon rather than a proper planet, the gas giant it orbits is so large that it is on the border of becoming a small sun in its own right, the low grade fusion reactions at its core heating its moons enough to create an oasis of warm climates and blue oceans in this otherwise frozen and backwards area of the star system. Many strange creatures inhabit this world, both organic and otherwise, but at present time there is only the one flying blue fox.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
In a battered Arwing bearing the scars of recent battles, our young vixen speeds over jagged mountains and deep valleys. Every bit as beautiful and elegant as her craft, slightly opened flightsuit revealing a hint of luscious cleavage. She grips the joystick tightly, teeth on edge and eyes unfocused as if she's seeing somewhere far away. Her name is Krystal, and this is her story.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
He'd dumped her ''again''. Her mind kept circling back to that, every bit as incredulous as she was the first time she'd though it. Sure, Team Starfox had being doing a lot of dangerous work in the aftermath of the Aparoid Invasion, but she'd thought he'd gotten over his &amp;quot;Chivalrous&amp;quot; streak a long time ago. Apparently not. Either that, or he'd been looking for a way to break things off without directly admitting how rocky their relationship had become, and had run to a familiar story. So like Fox: None braver when people were trying to kill him, but a terrible coward in regular life. Probably with more than a little encouragement from Miyu, the Humie bitch. After all, what better way to show solidarity than a highly public relationship between a legendary local hero and an influential Federation politician?&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
The worst part was that she didn't even have any candidates for a good rebound lay. Her old crone of a tutor had drilled into her that masturbation was &amp;quot;vulgar&amp;quot; at a young age (The bitch) and she still felt uncomfortable doing it, substituting meditation whenever she could. Neither was doing the trick now, and she'd been increasingly frustrated and horny over the last few weeks. Wolf had sent her an absolutely infuriating voicemail inviting her to come see him when she &amp;quot;Came to her senses&amp;quot; and &amp;quot;Decided she wanted a real Alpha Male to teach her a females proper position&amp;quot;, and had been promptly crossed off the list. Falco was a dick in general, Slippy... No. Just no. Everyone else she knew that fit even a tenth of her criteria were either old and married or working too closely with Fox to be workable without looking like the stereotypical slutty vengeful ex. Bills had piled up, most of the good Merc Work for clients that were unlikely to stab her in the back or try to trick her into bombing their own facilities for insurance scams was either reserved for multi-member bands or too low paying, and the only jobs she could find to keep flying were low-level missions like this one: Difficult, critically lacking in glamor, and above all tedious as hell.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
So here she was, howling across the empty skies of Sauria (The promised post-war Aid Fleet notably absent), trying to pin down that damned Mining Corp courier robot before her Arwing failed in midair and plowed her into a mountainside. At least she could take solace in the fact that the Pirate Cruiser that had hit her came off at least as bad, if not even worse. In hindsight, she'd probably only survived because they were geared for taking out heavy bulk freighters with long-range missiles and didn't know how to run their point-defenses worth a damn. Maybe they'd get stranded here and eaten by the natives.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Not that it helped her deal with the damned heat much, she noted as she glared of the condensation on the inside of her cockpit. Her climate control had been freaking out in planetary atmospheres for a month now, and the recent battle damage had made it even worse: not only was it doing nothing to combat the combined effect of the nearby massive Gas Giant and distant Lylat sun, but actually producing its own additional heat in what might have been some insidious plot by her flight computer to boil her in her cockpit.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
She writhed in her seat, the flightsuit feeling constrictive against her sweat-soaked fur. She toyed with the idea of unzipping a bit to let some of the heat out of her suit, or even strip it off entirely. The thought was tantalizingly naughty, especially with the heat starting to make her &amp;quot;condition&amp;quot; even worse, but this was no place to get careless. There could be Sharpclaws about, after all...&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Does she:&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
    *[[LoK Unzip her flightsuit just a bit further, to cool off.]]&lt;br /&gt;
    *[[LoK Concentrate and finish the mission.]]&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Location:[[Krystal's Arwing (Flying)]]&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
{{LoKStatus|Equipment=''[[Flightsuit]], [[Krystal's Staff]]''|Health=Uncomfortably Warm|MP=0|Conquests=0}}&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
[[Category: Legend of Krystal|*]]&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Or, if you want to start where you left off, jump to [[:Category:LoK_Locations|a location in the story]]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
			<pubDate>Sun, 30 Nov 2014 09:36:17 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Totemist</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/create_Your_own_story/Talk:Legend_of_Krystal</comments>		</item>
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			<title>Legend of Krystal</title>
			<link>http://72.14.177.54/create_Your_own_story/Legend_of_Krystal</link>
			<description>&lt;p&gt;Totemist:&amp;#32;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;hr /&gt;
&lt;div&gt;This story is loosely based on the Playshapes flash game of the same name and, more directly, the original Legend of Krystal Choose Your Own Adventure, which was moved to Chyoo2/CYOA. The story contains adult themes and content and should not be viewed by those under 18. It is a work of fanfiction and the Author/Authors claim no rights over the characters, names, places, and other Intellectual Property within.&lt;br /&gt;
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Set in the dark vacuum of the void, on the outskirts of the densely inhabited Lylat Star System, orbits a blue-green gem of a world known as Sauria. Beautiful, harsh, and deadly. A moon rather than a proper planet, the gas giant it orbits is so large that it is on the border of becoming a small sun in its own right, the low grade fusion reactions at its core heating its moons enough to create an oasis of warm climates and blue oceans in this otherwise frozen and backwards area of the star system. Many strange creatures inhabit this world, both organic and otherwise, but at present time there is only the one flying blue fox.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
In a battered Arwing bearing the scars of recent battles, our young vixen speeds over jagged mountains and deep valleys. Every bit as beautiful and elegant as her craft, slightly opened flightsuit revealing a hint of luscious cleavage. She grips the joystick tightly, teeth on edge and eyes unfocused as if she's seeing somewhere far away. Her name is Krystal, and this is her story.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
He'd dumped her ''again''. Her mind kept circling back to that, every bit as incredulous as she was the first time she'd though it. Sure, Team Starfox had being doing a lot of dangerous work in the aftermath of the Aparoid Invasion, but she'd thought he'd gotten over his &amp;quot;Chivalrous&amp;quot; streak a long time ago. Apparently not. Either that, or he'd been looking for a way to break things off without directly admitting how rocky their relationship had become, and had run to a familiar story. So like Fox: None braver when people were trying to kill him, but a terrible coward in regular life. Probably with more than a little encouragement from Miyu, the Humie bitch. After all, what better way to show solidarity than a highly public relationship between a legendary local hero and an influential Federation politician?&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
The worst part was that she didn't even have any candidates for a good rebound lay. Her old crone of a tutor had drilled into her that masturbation was &amp;quot;vulgar&amp;quot; at a young age (The bitch) and she still felt uncomfortable doing it, substituting meditation whenever she could. Neither was doing the trick now, and she'd been increasingly frustrated and horny over the last few weeks. Wolf had sent her an absolutely infuriating voicemail inviting her to come see him when she &amp;quot;Came to her senses&amp;quot; and &amp;quot;Decided she wanted a real Alpha Male to teach her a females proper position&amp;quot;, and had been promptly crossed off the list. Falco was a dick in general, Slippy... No. Just no. Everyone else she knew that fit even a tenth of her criteria were either old and married or working too closely with Fox to be workable without looking like the stereotypical slutty vengeful ex. Bills had piled up, most of the good Merc Work for clients that were unlikely to stab her in the back or try to trick her into bombing their own facilities for insurance scams was either reserved for multi-member bands or too low paying, and the only jobs she could find to keep flying were low-level missions like this one: Difficult, critically lacking in glamor, and above all tedious as hell.&lt;br /&gt;
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So here she was, howling across the empty skies of Sauria (The promised post-war Aid Fleet notably absent), trying to pin down that damned Mining Corp courier robot before her Arwing failed in midair and plowed her into a mountainside. At least she could take solace in the fact that the Pirate Cruiser that had hit her came off at least as bad, if not even worse. In hindsight, she'd probably only survived because they were geared for taking out heavy bulk freighters with long-range missiles and didn't know how to run their point-defenses worth a damn. Maybe they'd get stranded here and eaten by the natives.&lt;br /&gt;
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Not that it helped her deal with the damned heat much, she noted as she glared of the condensation on the inside of her cockpit. Her climate control had been freaking out in planetary atmospheres for a month now, and the recent battle damage had made it even worse: not only was it doing nothing to combat the combined effect of the nearby massive Gas Giant and distant Lylat sun, but actually producing its own additional heat in what might have been some insidious plot by her flight computer to boil her in her cockpit.&lt;br /&gt;
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She writhed in her seat, the flightsuit feeling constrictive against her sweat-soaked fur. She toyed with the idea of unzipping a bit to let some of the heat out of her suit, or even strip it off entirely. The thought was tantalizingly naughty, especially with the heat starting to make her &amp;quot;condition&amp;quot; even worse, but this was no place to get careless. There could be Sharpclaws about, after all...&lt;br /&gt;
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    LoK Unzip her flightsuit just a bit further, to cool off.&lt;br /&gt;
    LoK Concentrate and finish the mission. &lt;br /&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;Older discussions started before 2010 have been moved to an [[Talk:Main Page/Archive1|archive page]].&lt;br /&gt;
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==HELP==&lt;br /&gt;
Could some people please help me write *[[time machine]]&lt;br /&gt;
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==Rules?==&lt;br /&gt;
Hi, I'm fairly new here. I'm wondering, is there anything that is not allowed in stories/on site? I just don't want my stuff deleted. -Creat0r&lt;br /&gt;
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==Just some trouble==&lt;br /&gt;
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Hi there, I've been writing a C.Y.O.A. and I'm having the problem that I've set three options on my first page; Male, Female and Other. These redirect to different C.Y.O.A.s and it is rather irritating that when I try to chose the male option to advance it comes up with a selection of emo guys that I can use, from a different Catagory. Any help would be appreciated as I will not be able to advance in my writings until it is fixed.&lt;br /&gt;
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Thank you in advance&lt;br /&gt;
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Xuan, I had that same problem on my new CYAO. This happens because someone else is already using this as a category name, so it will keep redirecting to their story. It helps to use your story's name in front of the choices or to put a specific phrasingthat noone has used yet.&lt;br /&gt;
For instance say your story is Smurfs in Ireland and you want to give people the choice of being a male or female. You could put Smurfs In Ireland: Male, or I want to be a male smurf&lt;br /&gt;
Hope this helps for anyone else with the same problem.&lt;br /&gt;
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==Main Page Stories==&lt;br /&gt;
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What constitutes a story being on the main page? It seems like people just throw theirs on there. [[User:Theotherguy|Theotherguy]] 07:10, 30 August 2012 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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We're trying to only include a small, representative sampling on the Main Page.  Yes, some people are throwing theirs on there, but those stories are being thrown back off when they're spotted. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:25, 30 August 2012 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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By my understanding, the story has to be of a quality that it can be 'considered' for a feature, not necessarily featured, but close or at the level. By the way, great to see someone took the initiative and did this, the site really needed some tidying. --[[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] 13 September 2012&lt;br /&gt;
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Maybe we should make specific guidelines? Must be this many pages, this quality of writing, etc. etc. [[User:Theotherguy|Theotherguy]] 23:14, 13 September 2012 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Well I would suggest at least having the minimum amount of pages be set to 50, besides the 'Quizzes and Challenges' Section. I'm not sure about the quality of writing, as long as it is understandable and entertaining. --[[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] September 14 2012&lt;br /&gt;
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== Main Page and Its Length ==&lt;br /&gt;
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I'm sure most of you here have noticed this already, but I'd like to just point out. The Main Page is ever growing in it's length. That's great news! That means more adventures, but it comes at a price. The overall size of the page. I thought I'd do a little experiment and see how long it would take me to scroll down from the top to the very bottom. It took me more than 10 seconds. That is a ridiculously long time. Only fine for social media sites such as Facebook.&lt;br /&gt;
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What I'm suggesting is that we need to find a way to successfully organize the Main Page to which the size of it is significantly less, while not having it link off into other pages. Such as replacing the sections with say Collapsible Tables [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Help:Collapsing], so then you can choose which sections you want to look at, perhaps even placing sub tables on top of that.&lt;br /&gt;
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It's certainly worth looking into.  But bear in mind that newbies constantly screw up even the limited formatting currently on the Main Page.  Any further complications to the coding will mean even more intense monitoring and reverting. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:56, 5 May 2012 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Ahh, true. I barely know coding myself, but new people constantly make stories, and sooner or later, mistakes will be made, and those beloved tables will be disfigured. It is possible though, and if someone were able just to implement this idea, it will do wonders for this site. I don't go on often, but when I do, I always notice how long the Main Page is.&lt;br /&gt;
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So, '''IF''' anyone is willing to do this, then by all means, go ahead, it will do wonders for the site, I suggest you ask Platypus though.&lt;br /&gt;
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== YouTube Idea ==&lt;br /&gt;
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I have been a fan of this site for a while. I am an experienced actor and had the idea of adapting some of these stories to YouTube. Essentially, it would be an audiobook of the story where you click a link at the end of the video to make your choice (leading you to the next part of the story). I would like to try it with a shorter story first. If you have a short, well written CYOA story and are interested in sharing your story on YouTube, please let me know your username, the name of the story, and that  I have your permission to record it and put it on YouTube (right below this post) . I would also be happy to hear any input on this idea.          &lt;br /&gt;
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I know a lot about doing that kind of thing, it would be really great if it was animated or something like that. If you need any help working with Youtube CYOAs I can certainly help. I can also do (some) animation if you want. -Creat0r&lt;br /&gt;
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I think this would be awesome! Guys I don't know how long this thread was posted but I would like to continue it. You know in the you adventure stories or something like that you flip to a page to continue? Well, maybe it should be one or two long videos that you pause at choices and the choices have the time you skip to. I might make a video like this on my YouTube! Awesome idea. &lt;br /&gt;
- [[KateFleet]] [[ YouTube : FleetGaming ]]&lt;br /&gt;
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== Family-Friendly Section, Not Family-Friendly ==&lt;br /&gt;
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I recently noticed that about 10 new stories were made, and each of them looked like they should be in the 10+ section. How is stealing a car family friendly? Or discouraging school? Seriously, If I see one more story like that being made, it's going straight to PG-13.&lt;br /&gt;
Note: I am 11 years old, and I don't even think that those stories are appropriate for my age!--[[User:903860|The Adenster]] 01:05, 29 January 2010 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Adenster, family-friendly is generally a relative term. While I dont know the particular stories you speak of, discouraging school or stealing a car CAN be used in a family setting IE. one character has a Huckleberry Finn-ish tendency to skip school and the car can be used as a life lesson piece. Terms like Family-Friendly vary greatly from person to person and are entirely dependent on perception. For example some people believe in spanking their children whilst others dont. One side would consider it &amp;quot;Family-Friendly&amp;quot; whilst the other group would not. Generally if things such as car-stealing or such occur it can be acceptable if put in perspective and used in the context of the story. --[[User:BFEL|BFEL]] 12:13, 7 April 2011 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== New Category ==&lt;br /&gt;
I just had a really great idea, maybe a new category can be made for just new stories, called Not Rated Yet, or whatever. Then, where the story is placed can be decided by somebody, so that sections like &amp;quot;Family-Friendly&amp;quot; are not so populated with stories that aren't appropriate.--[[User:903860|The Adenster]] 01:23, 29 January 2010 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Your points are well taken, and this new group of writers is not writing family friendly material, but I'm somewhat averse to creating a Not Yet Rated section for ''somebody'' to rate, because there's only one sysop active on this site.  My time is limited and I like to get in a little bit of time to work on my own writing. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 03:02, 29 January 2010 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I myself would be interested in assisting with this, Platypus. --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 03:28, 3 March 2010 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Yeah, maybe ratings could be incoporated into reviews. That way unrated stories can move and get a review simultaneously.--[[User:Snowball|Snowball- The Anti-Adult-Content Resistance Leader]] 10:52, 20 January 2012 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== About story page links ==&lt;br /&gt;
I'm kind of a perfectionist and it just hurts my eyes to see the story page links not formatted properly. It's either because people are too lazy or just not well enough informed on how to create proper links. Most pages have something like this:&lt;br /&gt;
* &amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;[[Story Name-Page Name]]&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt; = [[Story Name-Page Name]]&lt;br /&gt;
* &amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;[[Story Name/Page Name]]&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt; = [[Story Name/Page Name]]&lt;br /&gt;
* &amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;[[Story Name: Page Name]]&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt; = [[Story Name: Page Name]]&lt;br /&gt;
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* &amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;[[Story Name/Page Name|Display Name]]&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt; = [[Story Name/Page Name|Display Name]]&lt;br /&gt;
* &amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;[[Story Name/Character: Page Name|Display Name]]&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt; = [[Story Name/Character: Page Name|Display Name]]&lt;br /&gt;
The '''Display Name''' field makes the link show as that to the user, while still linking to the '''Story Name/Page Name''' page. This kind of naming makes the story pages look a lot better while still keeping the pages properly sorted out. I think this is explained on the main page, but it seems a bit unclear. Maybe it could be improved? --[[User:Dreama|Dreama]] 16:00, 25 February 2010 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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It is discussed in the [[Tutorial]], but sometimes it seems as if some of the people who want to write here aren't capable of reading.  &lt;br /&gt;
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Mostly, I like to see consistency within any given story. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 21:16, 25 February 2010 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Is there a way to get the Category page to display just the page names?  In my story, I use the &amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;[[Story Name/Page Name|Page Name]]&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt; idiom, but the category page shows every page with the story prefix and they are all grouped under the same header. --[[User:Shiine|Shiine]] 8:50, 5 July 2010&lt;br /&gt;
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I don't know a way of changing the way the page names are displayed on the Category page, but if you categorize each individual page as &amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;[[Category:Story Name|Page Name]] &amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt;, then the Category page will aphabetize based on whatever you tell it the Page Name is, regardless of what the page name displays as.  --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 19:10, 5 July 2010 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I added a section to [[Tutorial/sleep|the tutorial]] about using the sort key in the category field. --[[User:Shiine|Shiine]] 23:40, 10 Aug 2010&lt;br /&gt;
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== problems with the search bar ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Hello, I just want to say that there seems to be a problem with the search, whenever I type a requist in it comes back with no results, I tried using the report a bug feature but the appears to be broken. --[[User:Tricrotic|Tricrotic]] 11:57, 7 March 2010 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Yeah, the search bar only works when you type in the exact title of a story. Granted, there is a place where you search for pages that begin with _______, that should be the automatic search engine. I don't know much about programming, but it really shouldn't be too hard to move a program that's already been created, just to a different, more accessible place. - veri_disquo (2014)&lt;br /&gt;
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==New Story==&lt;br /&gt;
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If you guys remember me from way back, I used to use this site a lot, then suddenly stopped. Well, I'm back (again), and I've started a new story titled [[Cell]]. I look forward to the reviews of this CYOA story, as it goes through the process of Evolution.--[[User:blablob|blablob]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Are you still working on it? --[[user:blamblegam]]&lt;br /&gt;
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==Questions==&lt;br /&gt;
Are the stories in here copyrighted in anyway? If I want to feature one on a website, can do I need permission of the author or is it public material?&lt;br /&gt;
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The stories here aren't copyrighted.  But it might be polite to mention your intentions to the author beforehand. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 22:53, 14 May 2012 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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If the story is in the Pit, can you edit the story to be in a different category? Because, for this story that I have been editing, I wish to change the maturity since its hard to keep track of every link you put. The Lost City of Atlantice is the story i had been working on for a bit and some of the tags that were created aren't really in the category. Plus, some of my ideas fit into other categories. What should I do? --[[User:sayrppoetry/sayrppoetry]]&lt;br /&gt;
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If you retrieve a story from the Pit, feel free to up its maturity level as needed. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 22:51, 2 April 2012 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Status functionality? ==&lt;br /&gt;
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The tutorial mentions status functionality as if you are able to use variables, but there was no information on how to perform operations on variables (You know, add, subtract, that sort of thing.)  I looked for an article on the issue but didn't find any.  Is this functionality available?&lt;br /&gt;
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No.  You can not perform operations on the variables.  You have to do any adding and subtracting manually on the next page, and if you want options where you have different values for the variables, you have to create multiple paths.  --[[User:Rawar|Rawar]] 19:27, 2 April 2010 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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BTW: I was wanting to experiment with status stuff, so I ended up creating a template page for the [[sandbox]].  Since you can't delete pages, and this might be useful, I replaced it with a basic status bar and left it in the sandbox.  I hope others find it useful.  --[[User:Shiine|Shiine]] 04:27, 19 March 2011 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== New here, and want to know a few things about editting. ==&lt;br /&gt;
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I joined today and want to know if it is okay for me to go through stories fixing some grammar mistakes and spelling. (not that I a grammar freak or saying I am perfect myself.) Some stories i looked at had a dozen mistakes a page and that is just bad for the site. See [[DUDE WHERES MY CAR]], I fixed the main page, leaving in the repitive sentence structure because I was unsure if I should change that. The next pages I looked at were equally plagued. Is there a way to catergorize stories as &amp;quot;being a pain to read because of mistakes&amp;quot;? I did not mean chnaging content, simplly fixing sloppy mistakes. To be sure, I am not planning on reading every story on here to be an English jainitor. I just wondered whose job these things were, Thanks. ~[[User:RandyRift|RandyRift]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I’m not an admin or anything but…&lt;br /&gt;
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There is no real problem or rule against editing pages, especially grammar correction. If you want to fix stories then that’s alright. Hell, even adding new stuff to the story is fine in most cases.   &lt;br /&gt;
The problem with this site is that there are some users who create crappy stories with five pages that have no real plot or proper grammar. People work on their story for a day then leave resulting in many poor stories with no real purpose. So if you want to fix stories then go for it.  &lt;br /&gt;
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Unfortunately, there are far too many ungrammatical writers out there for me to repair all the things they post.  I am the only active sysop here, and I don't object to anyone trying fix grammar around the site.  We were recently invaded by a Canadian school whose students wanted the thrill of posting on the web despite the fact that many of them had a poor grasp of English.  Their teacher's help made many things worse, not better.  But since they seem to have left, many of their stories are going to be getting moved to the Pit of Abandonned Stories soon. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 01:21, 1 April 2010 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I have another question, why is it that on the category page, (for my story) when I am logged in I see 90 pages, but when not logged in I see 78? (the page lists only that many.) ~[[User:RandyRift|RR]] 3 April 2010&lt;br /&gt;
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== Pictures and Copyrights ==&lt;br /&gt;
I'm not very familiar with finding out what kind of copyrights some picture has on the web and what pictures are free to be posted here, for example, and what pictures may be freely copied and even uploaded here to be displayed. So far I've only been directly linking to pictures on Wikipedia (in very rare occasions anyway), but that's very limited. Anyone know better? --[[User:Dreama|Dreama]] 22:56, 24 April 2010 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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The safest thing is to upload your own pictures to photobucket or something.  However, there are several free stock photo and picture sites out there.  My favorite is http://www.sxc.hu/ .  However, make sure you read the licenses for the photos before using them or linking to them! --[[User:Rawar|Rawar]] 00:42, 28 April 2010 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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There's thousands of free stock photos on [http://www.dreamstime.com/free-photos Dreamstime.com]. Just resize them to a width of 800 for web use. -- [[User:ImmortalDreams|ImmortalDreams]]&lt;br /&gt;
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== A portrait of an American Girl Named Myra. ==&lt;br /&gt;
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If you like the story idea, please help create a scenario for Myra. Remember, do not edit or add onto anyone else's scenario. Create a small one of your own. It doesn't have to be deep! Thank you for contributing!&lt;br /&gt;
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She ought to wear a funky fruit hat. She's 12, was living with her mother in Maine, dad's a deadbeat, moves to Oklahoma for no apparent reason, uncovers alien conspiracy there. Turns out her mother's been replaced by an evil space automaton. She must team up with her drunken embarassment of a father to rescue her from a Dick Dastardly-esque villain who brought the aliens here with a magical voodoo portal, and then find a way to close said portal. Along the way, she learns important lessons regarding metaphysical idealism and beef Wellington. --[[User:Nalanhata|Nalanhata]], June 18&lt;br /&gt;
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== Moving a page ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Is there a way to move pages?  I've looking over a story with terrible spelling problems and [[Tour_the_town|this page]] links to [[A little Tatoo paurlor]] which should be fixed.  -- [[User:TheRick|TheRick]] 05:26, 18 August 2010 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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The page-moving function had to be disabled due to malicious vandals.  However, what you can do is copy the text in the mis-named page, blank that page, edit the page with the mis-named link, and paste the text onto a new page with the correctly spelled name.  Then I'll delete the blanked page.  I'm the only one who can do deletions.  And I do appreciate anyone who actually wants to do some work tidying up the place.  --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:56, 18 August 2010 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Old Geezer ==&lt;br /&gt;
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I'm still having problems with editing Lady Helsing as it says Permission error&amp;quot; when l try to &lt;br /&gt;
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First of all make sure you are logged in... next... if you have been on a single page writing for too long it will automatically log you out so right click copy anything you have if you need to re-log in --[[User:Mezzo|Mezzo]] 17:12, 28 September 2011 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Tags? ==&lt;br /&gt;
What are the tags supposed to do? Because the ones that are for this one are 'porn or death'. --[[User:Heyoeveryone]]&lt;br /&gt;
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== Severe lag of site? ==&lt;br /&gt;
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If so, I think I know why. Remember, this is only a guess (although it's one with backup). I noticed my browser (Chrome) seems to hang on loading the info from TagNimbus, so I tried to visit the TagNimbus site. It seems to be down or dead, and a look at www.IsUp.me told me the whole site seemed to be down for others, too.&lt;br /&gt;
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If it's down, any chance of getting in touch with the owner to restore it? Otherwise, if TagNimbus is finall- I mean unfortunately dead, can we just remove the thing anyways? It didn't seem to change anything and was abused to tag pages with irrelevant tags...&lt;br /&gt;
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But hey, this is all the rambling of one author who just hopes to get the site working so he can get back to writing the gore story he was in the middle of... --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 06:27, 23 April 2011 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==Hello==&lt;br /&gt;
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Hello. Just wanted to say this site looks really cool and interesting, I really look forward to helping stories along or even starting some once I get the hang of it.&lt;br /&gt;
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I should know though, are there any particular rules or anything that aren't immediately obvious or that are mentioned? And where should I start? Any advice for a newbie would be very appreciated. The site is a little unnecessarily complicated.&lt;br /&gt;
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Heyo whoever you are! Best thing you should start on is probably continuing on stories that have been started, but after 10 pages, the author has quit. If you really want to begin a new story, i suggest planning it before you actually type it all out. In your plan you should have: the main storyline, the seperate endings, and of course the characters who are going to be in the story.&lt;br /&gt;
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You should try mind mapping. It's a great way to make branching plot lines. -- [[User:ImmortalDreams|ImmortalDreams]]&lt;br /&gt;
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It's bad to add to the number of all the carcasses you can see on the Main Page. Save those, or if you prefer, get the more severely rotting ones that we lumped in the Pit to decompose. Unfortunately, stories are hard to get rid of, so save them from non-authorship before it's too late. It also makes it easier, since you'd agree with the storyline from the beginning, whereas others end up left behind because there's a lock on the whole thing. For Example, everything might lead to a standstill after everything directs to a page. The rest of the plot is a mystery and starts rotting. Simply because the author him/her self doesn't know how it ends.--[[User:Snowball|Snowball- The Anti-Adult-Content Resistance Leader]] 14:58, 24 January 2012 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Template Appearance Problem ==&lt;br /&gt;
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The templates for my story [[War Pigs]] are coming out all wrong in IE 9, but they look fine in Firefox. Can anybody explain why? It would be greatly appreciated. --[[User:AgentVincent|AgentVincent]] 03:55, 7 July 2011 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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The problem is probably that it's IE9. IE9 enjoys shitting all over everything nice looking on the internet. --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 15:47, 31 July 2011 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== The whole &amp;quot;Anon&amp;quot; thing. ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Anyone else amused by this? Three brief little &amp;quot;attacks&amp;quot; (if you even want to call them that) with an empty threat? I dunno, I guess it just struck me as pathetic and funny. --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 06:26, 12 August 2011 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Yea a real dumbass, but thank God he didn´t write any pages, those would have been real '''attacks''' on the site! :)&lt;br /&gt;
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[[User:Fletcher Peninsula|Fletcher Peninsula]]&lt;br /&gt;
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== Pictures ==&lt;br /&gt;
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I noticed that there was an embedded image button. Being a photo editor, such as myself, I jumped at the idea of adding a picture where they could be used. Unfortunately it says that file adding is disabled. I looked through the General Discussion and i realize that you have had &amp;quot;attacks&amp;quot; in the past but is there a chance that they could be re-added?&lt;br /&gt;
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--[[User:Aegisofawakening|Aegisofawakening]] 01:58, 21 August 2011 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Actually, file adding was disabled due to server-size limitations, not due to attacks.  But images can still be displayed on pages, even if the file itself cannot become part of this site. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 04:09, 21 August 2011 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Thanks! ==&lt;br /&gt;
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I'd just like to say thank you so much!!! Why? Well, a few years back i wrote a few tales ([[Girlngirl High]], [[All Alone]] and [[Teehee!]]). I thought, no way were these stories would ever become hits, all of them are less than 100 pages! And i never finished any of them. So i decided to quit the site for 2 years. Today, i decided to go on and look at my stories, see how they've turned out.&lt;br /&gt;
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I looked down to find out that '''every story i've made has gotten over 1000 views on the first page, with the most being 20 000!!!''' I was just amazed at how my stories were this popular. So i'd just like to say THANK YOU!! I've given the job of continuing the stories to my friend [[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]]. He's a very good friend of mine and he said he'd love to take over. So once again, thank you so much for your support throughout these past 2 years. Also thanks to those people who added pages onto my stories. If you'd like to work on these stories, just ask Heyo for permission and he should promptly allow you. &lt;br /&gt;
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Am i coming back? Nah. Well maybe. --[[User:Unkowhero23]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Actually, you don't need my permission. Just make sure that you don't have many grammatical and spelling errors, and that the pages aren't just one or two sentences. Those are terrible, and with the load times of the site sometimes, you want something more than just that.&lt;br /&gt;
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--[[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] 5th September, 2011&lt;br /&gt;
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== Spam ==&lt;br /&gt;
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What's with all the random advertisements lately? It's actually more of a nuisance than those Anon people a little while back. Is this site really such a big deal that people need to go around and post all these ads? - [[User:Jamesparker|Jamesparker]], September 23, 2011&lt;br /&gt;
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Ad's? Where? Link them here. It's best if you name and shame them, and so that their account will be quickly deleted off the site. And I guess it is such a big deal. --[[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] 9 October 2011&lt;br /&gt;
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== Mature, Adult, Bad Taste ==&lt;br /&gt;
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A suggestion, if you will.  Maybe the mature, adult and bad taste story listings should be collectively put on a sub-page separate from the main page?  On reflection, maybe only the Adult and Bad Taste ones.  Those wishing to see those stories wouldn't have any trouble finding them by following the link (from the main page), and it'd render the main page free of offensive language and titles.  Everybody wins?  What'd'y'all think? [[User:JackalRobot|JackalRobot]] 21:12, 20 November 2011 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I have been giving the idea consideration, especially as some people would prefer not to be exposed to even the titles of some of the Adult stories.  And it would help reduce the sheer size of the Main Page. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 00:41, 21 November 2011 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Despite my own story preferences, I agree. I always thought it odd (and not a little family-unfriendly) to give almost equal weight to kiddie stories as well as possibly very kinky adult stuff. As long as you can always go directly to any given page (through a browser bookmark perhaps) I actually suggest adult stories are kept behind a disclaimer screen of some sort. &lt;br /&gt;
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Also, it can broaden the areas for the Adult Stories and free the titles. Then there could be another sub-group for the mild content.--[[User:Snowball|Snowball- The Anti-Adult-Content Resistance Leader]] 14:52, 24 January 2012 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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That is a great idea you have there, and it would be nice to see this happen. However there is a huge flaw I see in this. Recent Changes would still show everything be it a kids story about a kitten, or an adult story about bestiality.--[[User:Yihman1|Yihman1]] 07:04, 27 January 2012 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I have a &amp;quot;Mature&amp;quot; (R rated) story I am writing.  I am considering adding a storyline in which the character gets raped offscreen.  Is that too intense for &amp;quot;Mature&amp;quot;?  Should I post the beginning of the storyline, and the page that links to it, here to be vetted?  --[[User:LaedyRose|LaedyRose]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I don't think an offscreen rape would necessarily need to be put in the Adult section.  At least the Mature section, certainly.  It depends on how much detail you put in.  You might want to put a warning at the beginning of the storyline, simply because rape is a special kind of evil and will break (or make) the story for some readers. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 01:34, 10 April 2013 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Feedback For My Stories ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Hi!  I'm new here, and I'm starting my first story, [[Transformers: War Between Two Worlds]].  I wasn't sure if it should go in the Family Friendly Section or the PG13 Section, so I put it in Family Friendly.  If you have any feedback, read what I have so far and post it here.  This story will take me a while, but as soon as I'm done, I'll get started on another one.  Also, would anyone like to team up with me on a story?  I'm guessing most of you will think I'm crazy, but it's good to check.  TEAMWORK RULES!  I'm not that smart when it comes to wiki editing, so if there's a place where this page would better fit, then please tell me here.&lt;br /&gt;
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New Ideas (for my future stories):&lt;br /&gt;
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Edit Requests (If you would like permission to edit one of my stories, put your username here):&lt;br /&gt;
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Sorry about putting my page in the wrong place, Platypus.  How do you reach the user page?&lt;br /&gt;
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== Finding A Story ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Hi everyone.&lt;br /&gt;
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Just a quickie.&lt;br /&gt;
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1) Is there a story that focuses on something like a haunted house/mansion/what-have-you somewhere? I've skimmed the titles but nothing popped out at me and I've been reading here and there but even though most stories seem to only be like 5-10 pages the sheer number of them means I haven't had a chance to check them all and was hoping someone who'd been around longer knew of one and could point me in the right direction?&lt;br /&gt;
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-- [[User:Captain.Devonin|Cpt. Devonin]]&lt;br /&gt;
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: I don't know of such a story, but this brings up an issue I've been meaning to: it's awfully hard for someone to find anything they might be looking for, if they haven't seen it already. I'm wondering if the allowance of short synopses has been discussed before, or perhaps if we might create categories like [[:Category:Stories that feature supernatural characters|stories that feature supernatural characters]] or [[:Category:Stories that take place in haunted houses|stories that take place in haunted houses]].&lt;br /&gt;
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: --[[User:KC Riley|KC Riley]] 03:39, 21 January 2012 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Well, [[Madman's Mansion]] isn't haunted but its the best one I know of that involves a proper what-have-you-somewhere and decent story length and grammar and punctustion and so on.&lt;br /&gt;
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--[[User:Snowball|Snowball- The Anti-Adult-Content Resistance Leader]] 14:49, 24 January 2012 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Also, how about this: when you enter the main page, there is a link to each level of the stories, then, you can continue on into sub-groups of Ghost, Sci-Fi, Quest, Tragedy, or something like that.--[[User:Snowball|Snowball- The Anti-Adult-Content Resistance Leader]] 13:55, 28 February 2012 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== How to know people are watching? ==&lt;br /&gt;
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I'm new here, and recently finished a short story.&lt;br /&gt;
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But how do I tell if anyone is seeing it? Is there a place on this website to get feedback on the stories?&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks&lt;br /&gt;
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You can see at the bottom of each page how many times the page has been accessed. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 07:16, 28 January 2012 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Platypus, is this still true? I have looked at my page, and do not see a number for how many times it has been accessed. Or was this removed? --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 12:20, 24 February 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Yes, unfortunately, this isn't currently active.  It was always nice to know how often a page has been accessed. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:38, 24 February 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Something wrong? ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Hi, I'm new here. Saw this site and thought it was pretty interesting, and gave it a try. It's fun and I'm currently working on a story. However, I'm getting a feeling I am doing something wrong with creating stories and editing them. If I am doing anything wrong so far, which I am sure I am, please tell me, okays?&lt;br /&gt;
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-Bluedragon&lt;br /&gt;
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So far, so good.  I see nothing wrong with what you're doing. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 14:25, 24 February 2012 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== A page making/organizing resource ==&lt;br /&gt;
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First of all, I don't want to sound like a spammer or advertiser, but since I can code, I thought I'd make a resource for everyone who's interested.&lt;br /&gt;
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I've noticed when making games on here, that it's difficult to keep track of all your pages, and it's still hard to make them even with a mind map. So I made a rather unconventional, very small piece of software using Game Maker. Despite its not too standard interface. It provides an easy and efficient way to organize your pages. You can type and paste your page content into it and then automatically generate the pages in the correct format for this site.&lt;br /&gt;
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I in no way claim that I have ownership rights to the site. I only want to provide a resource for its users in order to make the creating process easier.&lt;br /&gt;
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The file is only 2.3MB.&lt;br /&gt;
Here's the download link(vs1) - [http://www.4shared.com/file/g5M6PSP2/CYOA_-_Page_Organizer.html]&lt;br /&gt;
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Made page recognition easier by showing the link names instead of the page names for the disabled parallel fields of each choice.&lt;br /&gt;
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New download link(vs1.1) - [http://www.4shared.com/file/KF270foj/CYOA_-_Page_Organizer11.html]&lt;br /&gt;
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== Interaction ==&lt;br /&gt;
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How can I communicate with other users of this site, so that we can conspire and work together. I am currently working on a story that is just to much for one person to handle, but I don't understand how I can talk with &amp;quot;helpers&amp;quot;. I just don't get it!-- [[User: Cyclops|Cyclops]]&lt;br /&gt;
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You can click on a user's name to view their profile page, then click on the &amp;quot;discussion&amp;quot; tab to see their talk page.  If you post something on their talk page, they'll see an alert at the top of their screen.  Hopefully, they'll click the alert, go to their talk page, and then write something back on your page. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 23:06, 4 April 2012 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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i think that there needs to be a few changes to this site.  A chatroom.  It would be very easy to find one online and embed it in a page.  Also I believe there should be category pages where all the sci fi pages are in one place with links to it.  Maybe on the mainpage, instead of links to very story, have links to the category listing.  Finally I believe there should be something to let us rate pages (as in 4 out of 5 stars).&lt;br /&gt;
-[[User:Gartonia|Gartonia]]&lt;br /&gt;
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== Salutations. ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Hello, I am one of the new guys here. I just wanted to know if there are any rules that I must adhere to on this site. I mainly made an account just so that I was able to continue on a story that I saw on this website. Well anyway, If you can notify me, please do, Thank You.&lt;br /&gt;
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== Salutations. ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Hello, I am one of the new guys here. I just wanted to know if there are any rules that I must adhere to on this site. I mainly made an account just so that I was able to continue on a story that I saw on this website. Well anyway, If you can notify me, please do, Thank You.&lt;br /&gt;
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== Linking to existing pages ==&lt;br /&gt;
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How does one link back to an existing page, in effect creating a loop?&lt;br /&gt;
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The same way you create a link to a new page: By enclosing the name of the page in square brackets.  For example: &amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt; [[Main Page]] &amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt; links you to [[Main Page]].--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 21:49, 13 June 2012 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Featured Story - A Dead Thing? ==&lt;br /&gt;
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We're 8 days from the 8 month anniversary of the last time the Featured Story section was last updated. Who was last in charge of updating that? --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 07:24, 14 June 2012 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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The idea was proposed by [[User: Occono|Occono]], last seen in 2009.  I said then that I had no objections to such a  feature, but no intention of participating in it.  Anyone volunteering? --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 18:19, 14 June 2012 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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As I understood it, anyone could edit the featured story section, no one in particular was responsible for keeping it reguarly updated. That being said, 8 months is an alarmingly long time. If we´re looking for a story right now to put on there &amp;quot;Megan&amp;quot; (which is already nominated) could do. Although that one might be a bit to... bloody disturbing, to be put there. Another one might be Battle Royal, which has a lot of pages. (Wait, did I just recomend Battle Royal over something else beacuse it was so bloody disturbing? Scary thought!).&lt;br /&gt;
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Overall though, personally I´d want to put a quality story on the featured page. And the simply fact is that there arn´t enough quality storys on this site to maintain a one or two months switch around in my opinion. Also, personally, I´d also not like to see adulth storys be put there, which decresses the story-pool significantly. &lt;br /&gt;
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--[[User:Fletcher Peninsula|Fletcher Peninsula]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Woah, seriously? 8 months? That is amazing. Nevertheless it's a great thing that someone actually bothered to change it. It may be my story, but from 2012 onwards, I was surprised that [[Remember]] was still featured. Congratulations to TheElderOnes. It's been a long time coming, and now you've finally gotten the story featured. Nice.&lt;br /&gt;
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== Compressing the main page ==&lt;br /&gt;
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I started compressing the main page into smaller sortable tables. I just finished the family friendly section, feel free to take over for me if you would like to do the next sections&lt;br /&gt;
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The goal for all of these tables is to keep the list around 10 items, and then have a more stories page for each section. The simpest way to do this is to choose all stories that have 50+ pages. If that leads to too many stories, then make it 100+...&lt;br /&gt;
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If a story is well written, and more than 50 pages, it should trump a story with more pages.&lt;br /&gt;
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Also, please bring the adult section back to the home page with the top items from it. That is the most active section of the site, and it generates a lot of traffic from google. &lt;br /&gt;
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== Separate Wiki for Adult Content ==&lt;br /&gt;
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I don't really like that adult stores are so easily accessible for people that come here looking for non-adult material, such as that they'll pop up as random pages, or can be seen in &amp;quot;Recent Changes&amp;quot;.  Is there any interest in branching Adult content off in to a separate Wiki, and maybe including a link the &amp;quot;Adult Section&amp;quot; in the side-bar?  --[[User:Holvard|Holvard]] 19:56, 31 December 2012 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Unfortunately, the majority of the traffic here is looking for the Adult Content.  Removing it or trying to bury it in some way would most likely kill off the non-adult content. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 20:16, 31 December 2012 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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How extreme is the majority?  As far as I can tell, this is the only active site to make free interactive adult stories, so if there's that much interest I may try to make my own. --[[User:Holvard|Holvard]] 20:56, 31 December 2012 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Would it take a lot of work to put the adult content behind a disclaimer screen?  As long as one had to go through the main page to access the adult site, it might actually ''increase'' traffic to the non-adult content, because people would feel better about, for instance, recommending it to children.  People might feel more comfortable with the site in general if they felt sure that reasonable precautions were being taken. --[[User:LaedyRose|LaedyRose]] 9 April 2012&lt;br /&gt;
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It could work through account settings, and then it being disabled by default, and the option for parental controls. Maybe even an option (that would have to be enabled through account settings) so that only one account could be tied to that IP, and these settings, after being enabled, could be disabled via a parental control password that is set up with the account, that could be different than the account's login password.&lt;br /&gt;
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== Issues With the Site ==&lt;br /&gt;
I've noticed that Create Your Own Adventure pages tend to load slowly, and the last week or so, accessing the site at all has been touch and go.  Is there any particular reason for this?  Is there anything you or we can do about it, or do we just need to be patient?  --[[User:LaedyRose|LaedyRose]] 9 April 2012&lt;br /&gt;
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== Lag of site and page load limits ==&lt;br /&gt;
Is there a problem? When I first started contributing to this site it could sometimes be very slow, but I put that down to traffic at certain times of the day. In the morning in GMT (when the Americas are asleep!) it was usually pretty good. Now, though, I find it's terribly slow whenever I use it, often taking upwards of thirty seconds to a minute to load a single page. What's more, not infrequently it doesn't load the page at all and I instead get a &amp;quot;Uncached page load rate limit reached -&amp;gt; 3 per second;&amp;quot; message. After a couple of those (even if I've only been on the site for ~5 minutes and loaded three or four pages) I get a request to complete a Captcha: &amp;quot;Page loads per hour hit - limit 60. Reset limit by filling in this captcha:&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
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It seems that it's trying to load pages multiple times when I access them? That might explain why it's being so slow, too.&lt;br /&gt;
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*There is indeed a problem: link spammers.  RobKohr has had to deliberately slow down site responsiveness and include that captcha in the hopes of frustrating the spambots so maybe they'll go away and leave us alone.  The messages you're seeing aren't because ''you're'' trying to load more than 3 pages per second.  It's because the bots are trying to load far, far more pages than that per second.  Do I like this solution?  Not really.  It's frustrating.  Can anyone else think of a better one? --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 14:14, 13 May 2013 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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**You guys could require to creat a acc that is activaded by admin/mod to view the content, the login page should always come if a cookie isnt existing and the page itself could be a blank site with minmal text and a field to look in.&lt;br /&gt;
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***You wouldn't even need to create an account to ''view'' the content (that would be counter-intuitive, since you want people to see it) but just to ''edit'' it. I know that's probably far from ideal because the whole point is the Wiki is free for everyone, but at the same time if it's being incredibly slow because of spambots then maybe it's a necessary step?&lt;br /&gt;
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: Is there some reason that the normal solutions (for MediaWiki, let's say the Phalanx extension) can't be applied here? Spam is a rather indiscriminate reality of the Internet that sites are usually protected against without crippling themselves and hoping spambots will get frustrated and go away. They won't, but the users will. --[[User:KC Riley|KC Riley]] 13:06, 25 June 2013 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Linking pictures problems and other errors ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Hello. In my various writing I try to place links to pictures to enhance the story experience. I've been doing this for months and months but lately the site has been completely blocking my ability to place links. The first time I try to post a page with a link it will force me to type in two words to verify that I'm human. After I type in the correct words it will attempt to post the page again but instead I will get this message: &amp;quot;You can only submit one page with a link in it per 20 minute period&amp;quot;. Because of the human verification process I am completely unable to post links. I am fine with only posting one link per twenty minutes but the site has negated any way of posting links as the verification process eats up my one post per twenty minutes. As someone who uses the site often this is a major inconvenience.&lt;br /&gt;
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Furthermore, if the human verification process doesn't stop my attempts at posting a link all the million of other error messages will. Errors such as site load limits or pages per hour or some such. These errors are never correct and seemingly random. I can stomach these messages and plod forward but they are a complete hindrance when it comes to posting links.&lt;br /&gt;
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Please give me some assistance in this regard, I do not want to lose the function of placing links in my stories.&lt;br /&gt;
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I have noticed this annoying tendency too. I tried to create a link to the CC-BY legal language, which is what I license my writing using, and find that, since I get the captcha thing, it blocks the link completely by telling me I can only do one external link per 20 minutes. So, it must say 1 time when I first submit, 1 time when I captcha and submit, meaning I can never do anything external. Like, say, link the CC-BY legal language for people to easily read the copyright terms, or provide a picture of an outfit I am thinking of, or whatever. Instead, I need to put a half link in so people can copy and paste, but not go to by directly clicking. Not sure how to get around this -.- --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:45, 17 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Hiya! Are people still active? ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Hey guys. I'm Bloody and I just joined the site. I've noticed the discussion board is a little old, and just wanted to see if others were still active. Guess I just need a little reassurance that I'm not the only one. lol -Bloody&lt;br /&gt;
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== Page loads per second hit - limit 2 ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Has anyone else been getting this message a lot lately? [[User:AgentVincent|AgentVincent]] 21:32, 1 February 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Yes. I have. But I wait about 2 seconds and hit the &amp;quot;reload page&amp;quot; button, and it works. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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That page loads hit per second is extremely annoying. I'm a fast reader, and on short pages, it sometimes pops up. It does so constantly when I'm just trying to get back to pages inside of a story I want to edit or add more to. I also really dislike that &amp;quot;Page hits per hour&amp;quot; message. What's the point of having it? Maybe the site can do away with that? -- [[User:Sophos8|Sophos8]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I don't like it either, but &amp;quot;throttling&amp;quot; the site is one of the techniques that RobKohr is using to frustrate the spam-bots that were filling the site with crap. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 20:21, 13 February 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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It is driving me insane. I can't enjoy this site when everytime i click on another page i get this annoying message. I spend more time reading that than actual story.&lt;br /&gt;
And i just got it when i tried to add here....&lt;br /&gt;
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lol, you should try checking through stories to see if they should be moved to the pit. I see that message so often it isn't funny D: --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 14:00, 1 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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its annoying as hell it would be nice if it was raised to 4&lt;br /&gt;
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How does one &amp;quot;frustrate&amp;quot; a bot?  If anything it will cause people actually interested in this site to turn away.  There has to be a better way to do this.&lt;br /&gt;
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== Image linking ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Every time I try to link an image, it gives me: &lt;br /&gt;
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This happens regardless of whether i add via hyperlinking or as a text url itself.&lt;br /&gt;
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Any help would be very much appreciated.&lt;br /&gt;
My only other option for this is to upload images to this site, but I'm not sure if I can or not. But the editing tools does support adding images during editing so...&lt;br /&gt;
--[[User:Aelvir|Aelvir]] 15:33, 8 February 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Chat Concept ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Recently created, and in need of a public announcement. Feel free to use this link and open in separate tabs to keep it alive:&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; '''editthischat.chatango.com'''&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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== Mermaid games? ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Can someone please make a adult section mermaid choose sex game or direct me to one... Thanks.&lt;br /&gt;
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And i want it to be that you cant change into legs and are cught by fishermen.&lt;br /&gt;
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Also make the girl mermaid choose a blonde girl.&lt;br /&gt;
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And its set in a medieval world thats advanced on slavery and cross breeding and has mutant bugs.&lt;br /&gt;
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==New here==&lt;br /&gt;
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So I'm working on a story called [[Three sisters]] in the adult section. I'm just wondering if anyone is enjoying it as of yet, its still a WIP and there is still loads of work to be done with it. Anyway let me know if there are things you would like to see in it, or anything else.&lt;br /&gt;
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-[[User:Tapdancingfish|Tapdancingfish]] 23:39, 14 August 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==I have questions==&lt;br /&gt;
Ive just joined but having been writting up my own story for months, i want to know if its possible to keep my story hidden from public until im ready for them to read it? Also is there anyway for me to revert unwanted edits by other users (to be honest i dont want any users editing my work unless its to fix grammar)?&lt;br /&gt;
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:Hi,&lt;br /&gt;
:I suggest that you create a wiki to write your story, then you blank the page in the last edit. Nobody can read it when opening your wiki, but you can easily retrieve your own story in the revision history page (clicking on the previous archived version). You cannot really prevent any user from editing, but whether it happens, you have the right to make reverts, too, so you can check your work periodically if you are worried about that. You may mention at the beginning of the story the following sentence :&lt;br /&gt;
:''Please do not change or add pages (unless you correct my orthography, which you are welcome to do). Thank you.''&lt;br /&gt;
:Good luck. -- [[User:Girl Mamtha|Girl Mamtha]] 20:10, 26 October 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Linking to outside sites ==&lt;br /&gt;
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So, I've been trying for over two hours to upload the first page of my my story. However, submissions with outside links can only be submitted once every 20 minutes, a common sense policy I have no issues with. My problem comes when the first submission attempt loads the page again with a captcha to prove I'm not a spam bot. Entering the captcha, I discover that triggering the Captcha counts as a story submission and makes me wait 20 minutes before I can actually submit it. Annoying, but okay. I wait the 20 minutes, hit submit, and discover that my login has timed out. I log in again to discover that being informed that I timed out COUNTS AS A GODDAMN STORY SUBMISSION. I went around this loop AGAIN, keeping track of the time in an attempt to not have to repeat it, with no more success. It should not be this hard to link to a goddamn discussion/writers collaboration thread on another website.&lt;br /&gt;
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Oh, and hitting submit and being told you have to wait ALSO counts, so if you misjudge by one minute, you have to wait EVEN MORE. Fuck this, I'll just remove the link. Happy now?&lt;/div&gt;</description>
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&lt;div&gt;Older discussions started before 2010 have been moved to an [[Talk:Main Page/Archive1|archive page]].&lt;br /&gt;
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==HELP==&lt;br /&gt;
Could some people please help me write *[[time machine]]&lt;br /&gt;
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==Rules?==&lt;br /&gt;
Hi, I'm fairly new here. I'm wondering, is there anything that is not allowed in stories/on site? I just don't want my stuff deleted. -Creat0r&lt;br /&gt;
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==Just some trouble==&lt;br /&gt;
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Hi there, I've been writing a C.Y.O.A. and I'm having the problem that I've set three options on my first page; Male, Female and Other. These redirect to different C.Y.O.A.s and it is rather irritating that when I try to chose the male option to advance it comes up with a selection of emo guys that I can use, from a different Catagory. Any help would be appreciated as I will not be able to advance in my writings until it is fixed.&lt;br /&gt;
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Thank you in advance&lt;br /&gt;
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Xuan, I had that same problem on my new CYAO. This happens because someone else is already using this as a category name, so it will keep redirecting to their story. It helps to use your story's name in front of the choices or to put a specific phrasingthat noone has used yet.&lt;br /&gt;
For instance say your story is Smurfs in Ireland and you want to give people the choice of being a male or female. You could put Smurfs In Ireland: Male, or I want to be a male smurf&lt;br /&gt;
Hope this helps for anyone else with the same problem.&lt;br /&gt;
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==Main Page Stories==&lt;br /&gt;
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What constitutes a story being on the main page? It seems like people just throw theirs on there. [[User:Theotherguy|Theotherguy]] 07:10, 30 August 2012 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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We're trying to only include a small, representative sampling on the Main Page.  Yes, some people are throwing theirs on there, but those stories are being thrown back off when they're spotted. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:25, 30 August 2012 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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By my understanding, the story has to be of a quality that it can be 'considered' for a feature, not necessarily featured, but close or at the level. By the way, great to see someone took the initiative and did this, the site really needed some tidying. --[[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] 13 September 2012&lt;br /&gt;
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Maybe we should make specific guidelines? Must be this many pages, this quality of writing, etc. etc. [[User:Theotherguy|Theotherguy]] 23:14, 13 September 2012 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Well I would suggest at least having the minimum amount of pages be set to 50, besides the 'Quizzes and Challenges' Section. I'm not sure about the quality of writing, as long as it is understandable and entertaining. --[[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] September 14 2012&lt;br /&gt;
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== Main Page and Its Length ==&lt;br /&gt;
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I'm sure most of you here have noticed this already, but I'd like to just point out. The Main Page is ever growing in it's length. That's great news! That means more adventures, but it comes at a price. The overall size of the page. I thought I'd do a little experiment and see how long it would take me to scroll down from the top to the very bottom. It took me more than 10 seconds. That is a ridiculously long time. Only fine for social media sites such as Facebook.&lt;br /&gt;
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What I'm suggesting is that we need to find a way to successfully organize the Main Page to which the size of it is significantly less, while not having it link off into other pages. Such as replacing the sections with say Collapsible Tables [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Help:Collapsing], so then you can choose which sections you want to look at, perhaps even placing sub tables on top of that.&lt;br /&gt;
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It's certainly worth looking into.  But bear in mind that newbies constantly screw up even the limited formatting currently on the Main Page.  Any further complications to the coding will mean even more intense monitoring and reverting. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:56, 5 May 2012 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Ahh, true. I barely know coding myself, but new people constantly make stories, and sooner or later, mistakes will be made, and those beloved tables will be disfigured. It is possible though, and if someone were able just to implement this idea, it will do wonders for this site. I don't go on often, but when I do, I always notice how long the Main Page is.&lt;br /&gt;
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So, '''IF''' anyone is willing to do this, then by all means, go ahead, it will do wonders for the site, I suggest you ask Platypus though.&lt;br /&gt;
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== YouTube Idea ==&lt;br /&gt;
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I have been a fan of this site for a while. I am an experienced actor and had the idea of adapting some of these stories to YouTube. Essentially, it would be an audiobook of the story where you click a link at the end of the video to make your choice (leading you to the next part of the story). I would like to try it with a shorter story first. If you have a short, well written CYOA story and are interested in sharing your story on YouTube, please let me know your username, the name of the story, and that  I have your permission to record it and put it on YouTube (right below this post) . I would also be happy to hear any input on this idea.          &lt;br /&gt;
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I know a lot about doing that kind of thing, it would be really great if it was animated or something like that. If you need any help working with Youtube CYOAs I can certainly help. I can also do (some) animation if you want. -Creat0r&lt;br /&gt;
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I think this would be awesome! Guys I don't know how long this thread was posted but I would like to continue it. You know in the you adventure stories or something like that you flip to a page to continue? Well, maybe it should be one or two long videos that you pause at choices and the choices have the time you skip to. I might make a video like this on my YouTube! Awesome idea. &lt;br /&gt;
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== Family-Friendly Section, Not Family-Friendly ==&lt;br /&gt;
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I recently noticed that about 10 new stories were made, and each of them looked like they should be in the 10+ section. How is stealing a car family friendly? Or discouraging school? Seriously, If I see one more story like that being made, it's going straight to PG-13.&lt;br /&gt;
Note: I am 11 years old, and I don't even think that those stories are appropriate for my age!--[[User:903860|The Adenster]] 01:05, 29 January 2010 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Adenster, family-friendly is generally a relative term. While I dont know the particular stories you speak of, discouraging school or stealing a car CAN be used in a family setting IE. one character has a Huckleberry Finn-ish tendency to skip school and the car can be used as a life lesson piece. Terms like Family-Friendly vary greatly from person to person and are entirely dependent on perception. For example some people believe in spanking their children whilst others dont. One side would consider it &amp;quot;Family-Friendly&amp;quot; whilst the other group would not. Generally if things such as car-stealing or such occur it can be acceptable if put in perspective and used in the context of the story. --[[User:BFEL|BFEL]] 12:13, 7 April 2011 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== New Category ==&lt;br /&gt;
I just had a really great idea, maybe a new category can be made for just new stories, called Not Rated Yet, or whatever. Then, where the story is placed can be decided by somebody, so that sections like &amp;quot;Family-Friendly&amp;quot; are not so populated with stories that aren't appropriate.--[[User:903860|The Adenster]] 01:23, 29 January 2010 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Your points are well taken, and this new group of writers is not writing family friendly material, but I'm somewhat averse to creating a Not Yet Rated section for ''somebody'' to rate, because there's only one sysop active on this site.  My time is limited and I like to get in a little bit of time to work on my own writing. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 03:02, 29 January 2010 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I myself would be interested in assisting with this, Platypus. --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 03:28, 3 March 2010 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Yeah, maybe ratings could be incoporated into reviews. That way unrated stories can move and get a review simultaneously.--[[User:Snowball|Snowball- The Anti-Adult-Content Resistance Leader]] 10:52, 20 January 2012 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== About story page links ==&lt;br /&gt;
I'm kind of a perfectionist and it just hurts my eyes to see the story page links not formatted properly. It's either because people are too lazy or just not well enough informed on how to create proper links. Most pages have something like this:&lt;br /&gt;
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* &amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;[[Story Name/Page Name]]&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt; = [[Story Name/Page Name]]&lt;br /&gt;
* &amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;[[Story Name: Page Name]]&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt; = [[Story Name: Page Name]]&lt;br /&gt;
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* &amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;[[Story Name/Page Name|Display Name]]&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt; = [[Story Name/Page Name|Display Name]]&lt;br /&gt;
* &amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;[[Story Name/Character: Page Name|Display Name]]&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt; = [[Story Name/Character: Page Name|Display Name]]&lt;br /&gt;
The '''Display Name''' field makes the link show as that to the user, while still linking to the '''Story Name/Page Name''' page. This kind of naming makes the story pages look a lot better while still keeping the pages properly sorted out. I think this is explained on the main page, but it seems a bit unclear. Maybe it could be improved? --[[User:Dreama|Dreama]] 16:00, 25 February 2010 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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It is discussed in the [[Tutorial]], but sometimes it seems as if some of the people who want to write here aren't capable of reading.  &lt;br /&gt;
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Mostly, I like to see consistency within any given story. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 21:16, 25 February 2010 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Is there a way to get the Category page to display just the page names?  In my story, I use the &amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;[[Story Name/Page Name|Page Name]]&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt; idiom, but the category page shows every page with the story prefix and they are all grouped under the same header. --[[User:Shiine|Shiine]] 8:50, 5 July 2010&lt;br /&gt;
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I don't know a way of changing the way the page names are displayed on the Category page, but if you categorize each individual page as &amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;[[Category:Story Name|Page Name]] &amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt;, then the Category page will aphabetize based on whatever you tell it the Page Name is, regardless of what the page name displays as.  --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 19:10, 5 July 2010 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I added a section to [[Tutorial/sleep|the tutorial]] about using the sort key in the category field. --[[User:Shiine|Shiine]] 23:40, 10 Aug 2010&lt;br /&gt;
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== problems with the search bar ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Hello, I just want to say that there seems to be a problem with the search, whenever I type a requist in it comes back with no results, I tried using the report a bug feature but the appears to be broken. --[[User:Tricrotic|Tricrotic]] 11:57, 7 March 2010 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Yeah, the search bar only works when you type in the exact title of a story. Granted, there is a place where you search for pages that begin with _______, that should be the automatic search engine. I don't know much about programming, but it really shouldn't be too hard to move a program that's already been created, just to a different, more accessible place. - veri_disquo (2014)&lt;br /&gt;
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==New Story==&lt;br /&gt;
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If you guys remember me from way back, I used to use this site a lot, then suddenly stopped. Well, I'm back (again), and I've started a new story titled [[Cell]]. I look forward to the reviews of this CYOA story, as it goes through the process of Evolution.--[[User:blablob|blablob]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Are you still working on it? --[[user:blamblegam]]&lt;br /&gt;
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==Questions==&lt;br /&gt;
Are the stories in here copyrighted in anyway? If I want to feature one on a website, can do I need permission of the author or is it public material?&lt;br /&gt;
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The stories here aren't copyrighted.  But it might be polite to mention your intentions to the author beforehand. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 22:53, 14 May 2012 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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If the story is in the Pit, can you edit the story to be in a different category? Because, for this story that I have been editing, I wish to change the maturity since its hard to keep track of every link you put. The Lost City of Atlantice is the story i had been working on for a bit and some of the tags that were created aren't really in the category. Plus, some of my ideas fit into other categories. What should I do? --[[User:sayrppoetry/sayrppoetry]]&lt;br /&gt;
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If you retrieve a story from the Pit, feel free to up its maturity level as needed. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 22:51, 2 April 2012 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Status functionality? ==&lt;br /&gt;
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The tutorial mentions status functionality as if you are able to use variables, but there was no information on how to perform operations on variables (You know, add, subtract, that sort of thing.)  I looked for an article on the issue but didn't find any.  Is this functionality available?&lt;br /&gt;
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No.  You can not perform operations on the variables.  You have to do any adding and subtracting manually on the next page, and if you want options where you have different values for the variables, you have to create multiple paths.  --[[User:Rawar|Rawar]] 19:27, 2 April 2010 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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BTW: I was wanting to experiment with status stuff, so I ended up creating a template page for the [[sandbox]].  Since you can't delete pages, and this might be useful, I replaced it with a basic status bar and left it in the sandbox.  I hope others find it useful.  --[[User:Shiine|Shiine]] 04:27, 19 March 2011 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== New here, and want to know a few things about editting. ==&lt;br /&gt;
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I joined today and want to know if it is okay for me to go through stories fixing some grammar mistakes and spelling. (not that I a grammar freak or saying I am perfect myself.) Some stories i looked at had a dozen mistakes a page and that is just bad for the site. See [[DUDE WHERES MY CAR]], I fixed the main page, leaving in the repitive sentence structure because I was unsure if I should change that. The next pages I looked at were equally plagued. Is there a way to catergorize stories as &amp;quot;being a pain to read because of mistakes&amp;quot;? I did not mean chnaging content, simplly fixing sloppy mistakes. To be sure, I am not planning on reading every story on here to be an English jainitor. I just wondered whose job these things were, Thanks. ~[[User:RandyRift|RandyRift]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I’m not an admin or anything but…&lt;br /&gt;
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There is no real problem or rule against editing pages, especially grammar correction. If you want to fix stories then that’s alright. Hell, even adding new stuff to the story is fine in most cases.   &lt;br /&gt;
The problem with this site is that there are some users who create crappy stories with five pages that have no real plot or proper grammar. People work on their story for a day then leave resulting in many poor stories with no real purpose. So if you want to fix stories then go for it.  &lt;br /&gt;
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--[[User:Fletcher Peninsula|Fletcher Peninsula]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Unfortunately, there are far too many ungrammatical writers out there for me to repair all the things they post.  I am the only active sysop here, and I don't object to anyone trying fix grammar around the site.  We were recently invaded by a Canadian school whose students wanted the thrill of posting on the web despite the fact that many of them had a poor grasp of English.  Their teacher's help made many things worse, not better.  But since they seem to have left, many of their stories are going to be getting moved to the Pit of Abandonned Stories soon. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 01:21, 1 April 2010 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I have another question, why is it that on the category page, (for my story) when I am logged in I see 90 pages, but when not logged in I see 78? (the page lists only that many.) ~[[User:RandyRift|RR]] 3 April 2010&lt;br /&gt;
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== Pictures and Copyrights ==&lt;br /&gt;
I'm not very familiar with finding out what kind of copyrights some picture has on the web and what pictures are free to be posted here, for example, and what pictures may be freely copied and even uploaded here to be displayed. So far I've only been directly linking to pictures on Wikipedia (in very rare occasions anyway), but that's very limited. Anyone know better? --[[User:Dreama|Dreama]] 22:56, 24 April 2010 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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The safest thing is to upload your own pictures to photobucket or something.  However, there are several free stock photo and picture sites out there.  My favorite is http://www.sxc.hu/ .  However, make sure you read the licenses for the photos before using them or linking to them! --[[User:Rawar|Rawar]] 00:42, 28 April 2010 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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There's thousands of free stock photos on [http://www.dreamstime.com/free-photos Dreamstime.com]. Just resize them to a width of 800 for web use. -- [[User:ImmortalDreams|ImmortalDreams]]&lt;br /&gt;
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== A portrait of an American Girl Named Myra. ==&lt;br /&gt;
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If you like the story idea, please help create a scenario for Myra. Remember, do not edit or add onto anyone else's scenario. Create a small one of your own. It doesn't have to be deep! Thank you for contributing!&lt;br /&gt;
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She ought to wear a funky fruit hat. She's 12, was living with her mother in Maine, dad's a deadbeat, moves to Oklahoma for no apparent reason, uncovers alien conspiracy there. Turns out her mother's been replaced by an evil space automaton. She must team up with her drunken embarassment of a father to rescue her from a Dick Dastardly-esque villain who brought the aliens here with a magical voodoo portal, and then find a way to close said portal. Along the way, she learns important lessons regarding metaphysical idealism and beef Wellington. --[[User:Nalanhata|Nalanhata]], June 18&lt;br /&gt;
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== Moving a page ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Is there a way to move pages?  I've looking over a story with terrible spelling problems and [[Tour_the_town|this page]] links to [[A little Tatoo paurlor]] which should be fixed.  -- [[User:TheRick|TheRick]] 05:26, 18 August 2010 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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The page-moving function had to be disabled due to malicious vandals.  However, what you can do is copy the text in the mis-named page, blank that page, edit the page with the mis-named link, and paste the text onto a new page with the correctly spelled name.  Then I'll delete the blanked page.  I'm the only one who can do deletions.  And I do appreciate anyone who actually wants to do some work tidying up the place.  --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:56, 18 August 2010 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Old Geezer ==&lt;br /&gt;
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First of all make sure you are logged in... next... if you have been on a single page writing for too long it will automatically log you out so right click copy anything you have if you need to re-log in --[[User:Mezzo|Mezzo]] 17:12, 28 September 2011 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Tags? ==&lt;br /&gt;
What are the tags supposed to do? Because the ones that are for this one are 'porn or death'. --[[User:Heyoeveryone]]&lt;br /&gt;
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== Severe lag of site? ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Anybody else getting loadtimes of upwards of 5 minutes (multiple refreshes included) for even the shortest of pages? &lt;br /&gt;
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If so, I think I know why. Remember, this is only a guess (although it's one with backup). I noticed my browser (Chrome) seems to hang on loading the info from TagNimbus, so I tried to visit the TagNimbus site. It seems to be down or dead, and a look at www.IsUp.me told me the whole site seemed to be down for others, too.&lt;br /&gt;
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If it's down, any chance of getting in touch with the owner to restore it? Otherwise, if TagNimbus is finall- I mean unfortunately dead, can we just remove the thing anyways? It didn't seem to change anything and was abused to tag pages with irrelevant tags...&lt;br /&gt;
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But hey, this is all the rambling of one author who just hopes to get the site working so he can get back to writing the gore story he was in the middle of... --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 06:27, 23 April 2011 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==Hello==&lt;br /&gt;
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Hello. Just wanted to say this site looks really cool and interesting, I really look forward to helping stories along or even starting some once I get the hang of it.&lt;br /&gt;
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I should know though, are there any particular rules or anything that aren't immediately obvious or that are mentioned? And where should I start? Any advice for a newbie would be very appreciated. The site is a little unnecessarily complicated.&lt;br /&gt;
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Heyo whoever you are! Best thing you should start on is probably continuing on stories that have been started, but after 10 pages, the author has quit. If you really want to begin a new story, i suggest planning it before you actually type it all out. In your plan you should have: the main storyline, the seperate endings, and of course the characters who are going to be in the story.&lt;br /&gt;
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You should try mind mapping. It's a great way to make branching plot lines. -- [[User:ImmortalDreams|ImmortalDreams]]&lt;br /&gt;
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It's bad to add to the number of all the carcasses you can see on the Main Page. Save those, or if you prefer, get the more severely rotting ones that we lumped in the Pit to decompose. Unfortunately, stories are hard to get rid of, so save them from non-authorship before it's too late. It also makes it easier, since you'd agree with the storyline from the beginning, whereas others end up left behind because there's a lock on the whole thing. For Example, everything might lead to a standstill after everything directs to a page. The rest of the plot is a mystery and starts rotting. Simply because the author him/her self doesn't know how it ends.--[[User:Snowball|Snowball- The Anti-Adult-Content Resistance Leader]] 14:58, 24 January 2012 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Template Appearance Problem ==&lt;br /&gt;
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The templates for my story [[War Pigs]] are coming out all wrong in IE 9, but they look fine in Firefox. Can anybody explain why? It would be greatly appreciated. --[[User:AgentVincent|AgentVincent]] 03:55, 7 July 2011 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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The problem is probably that it's IE9. IE9 enjoys shitting all over everything nice looking on the internet. --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 15:47, 31 July 2011 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== The whole &amp;quot;Anon&amp;quot; thing. ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Anyone else amused by this? Three brief little &amp;quot;attacks&amp;quot; (if you even want to call them that) with an empty threat? I dunno, I guess it just struck me as pathetic and funny. --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 06:26, 12 August 2011 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Yea a real dumbass, but thank God he didn´t write any pages, those would have been real '''attacks''' on the site! :)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Pictures ==&lt;br /&gt;
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I noticed that there was an embedded image button. Being a photo editor, such as myself, I jumped at the idea of adding a picture where they could be used. Unfortunately it says that file adding is disabled. I looked through the General Discussion and i realize that you have had &amp;quot;attacks&amp;quot; in the past but is there a chance that they could be re-added?&lt;br /&gt;
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--[[User:Aegisofawakening|Aegisofawakening]] 01:58, 21 August 2011 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Actually, file adding was disabled due to server-size limitations, not due to attacks.  But images can still be displayed on pages, even if the file itself cannot become part of this site. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 04:09, 21 August 2011 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Thanks! ==&lt;br /&gt;
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I'd just like to say thank you so much!!! Why? Well, a few years back i wrote a few tales ([[Girlngirl High]], [[All Alone]] and [[Teehee!]]). I thought, no way were these stories would ever become hits, all of them are less than 100 pages! And i never finished any of them. So i decided to quit the site for 2 years. Today, i decided to go on and look at my stories, see how they've turned out.&lt;br /&gt;
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I looked down to find out that '''every story i've made has gotten over 1000 views on the first page, with the most being 20 000!!!''' I was just amazed at how my stories were this popular. So i'd just like to say THANK YOU!! I've given the job of continuing the stories to my friend [[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]]. He's a very good friend of mine and he said he'd love to take over. So once again, thank you so much for your support throughout these past 2 years. Also thanks to those people who added pages onto my stories. If you'd like to work on these stories, just ask Heyo for permission and he should promptly allow you. &lt;br /&gt;
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Am i coming back? Nah. Well maybe. --[[User:Unkowhero23]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Actually, you don't need my permission. Just make sure that you don't have many grammatical and spelling errors, and that the pages aren't just one or two sentences. Those are terrible, and with the load times of the site sometimes, you want something more than just that.&lt;br /&gt;
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--[[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] 5th September, 2011&lt;br /&gt;
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== Spam ==&lt;br /&gt;
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What's with all the random advertisements lately? It's actually more of a nuisance than those Anon people a little while back. Is this site really such a big deal that people need to go around and post all these ads? - [[User:Jamesparker|Jamesparker]], September 23, 2011&lt;br /&gt;
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Ad's? Where? Link them here. It's best if you name and shame them, and so that their account will be quickly deleted off the site. And I guess it is such a big deal. --[[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] 9 October 2011&lt;br /&gt;
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== Mature, Adult, Bad Taste ==&lt;br /&gt;
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A suggestion, if you will.  Maybe the mature, adult and bad taste story listings should be collectively put on a sub-page separate from the main page?  On reflection, maybe only the Adult and Bad Taste ones.  Those wishing to see those stories wouldn't have any trouble finding them by following the link (from the main page), and it'd render the main page free of offensive language and titles.  Everybody wins?  What'd'y'all think? [[User:JackalRobot|JackalRobot]] 21:12, 20 November 2011 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I have been giving the idea consideration, especially as some people would prefer not to be exposed to even the titles of some of the Adult stories.  And it would help reduce the sheer size of the Main Page. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 00:41, 21 November 2011 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Despite my own story preferences, I agree. I always thought it odd (and not a little family-unfriendly) to give almost equal weight to kiddie stories as well as possibly very kinky adult stuff. As long as you can always go directly to any given page (through a browser bookmark perhaps) I actually suggest adult stories are kept behind a disclaimer screen of some sort. &lt;br /&gt;
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Also, it can broaden the areas for the Adult Stories and free the titles. Then there could be another sub-group for the mild content.--[[User:Snowball|Snowball- The Anti-Adult-Content Resistance Leader]] 14:52, 24 January 2012 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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That is a great idea you have there, and it would be nice to see this happen. However there is a huge flaw I see in this. Recent Changes would still show everything be it a kids story about a kitten, or an adult story about bestiality.--[[User:Yihman1|Yihman1]] 07:04, 27 January 2012 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I have a &amp;quot;Mature&amp;quot; (R rated) story I am writing.  I am considering adding a storyline in which the character gets raped offscreen.  Is that too intense for &amp;quot;Mature&amp;quot;?  Should I post the beginning of the storyline, and the page that links to it, here to be vetted?  --[[User:LaedyRose|LaedyRose]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I don't think an offscreen rape would necessarily need to be put in the Adult section.  At least the Mature section, certainly.  It depends on how much detail you put in.  You might want to put a warning at the beginning of the storyline, simply because rape is a special kind of evil and will break (or make) the story for some readers. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 01:34, 10 April 2013 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Feedback For My Stories ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Hi!  I'm new here, and I'm starting my first story, [[Transformers: War Between Two Worlds]].  I wasn't sure if it should go in the Family Friendly Section or the PG13 Section, so I put it in Family Friendly.  If you have any feedback, read what I have so far and post it here.  This story will take me a while, but as soon as I'm done, I'll get started on another one.  Also, would anyone like to team up with me on a story?  I'm guessing most of you will think I'm crazy, but it's good to check.  TEAMWORK RULES!  I'm not that smart when it comes to wiki editing, so if there's a place where this page would better fit, then please tell me here.&lt;br /&gt;
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New Ideas (for my future stories):&lt;br /&gt;
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Edit Requests (If you would like permission to edit one of my stories, put your username here):&lt;br /&gt;
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Sorry about putting my page in the wrong place, Platypus.  How do you reach the user page?&lt;br /&gt;
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== Finding A Story ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Hi everyone.&lt;br /&gt;
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1) Is there a story that focuses on something like a haunted house/mansion/what-have-you somewhere? I've skimmed the titles but nothing popped out at me and I've been reading here and there but even though most stories seem to only be like 5-10 pages the sheer number of them means I haven't had a chance to check them all and was hoping someone who'd been around longer knew of one and could point me in the right direction?&lt;br /&gt;
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: I don't know of such a story, but this brings up an issue I've been meaning to: it's awfully hard for someone to find anything they might be looking for, if they haven't seen it already. I'm wondering if the allowance of short synopses has been discussed before, or perhaps if we might create categories like [[:Category:Stories that feature supernatural characters|stories that feature supernatural characters]] or [[:Category:Stories that take place in haunted houses|stories that take place in haunted houses]].&lt;br /&gt;
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: --[[User:KC Riley|KC Riley]] 03:39, 21 January 2012 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Well, [[Madman's Mansion]] isn't haunted but its the best one I know of that involves a proper what-have-you-somewhere and decent story length and grammar and punctustion and so on.&lt;br /&gt;
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--[[User:Snowball|Snowball- The Anti-Adult-Content Resistance Leader]] 14:49, 24 January 2012 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Also, how about this: when you enter the main page, there is a link to each level of the stories, then, you can continue on into sub-groups of Ghost, Sci-Fi, Quest, Tragedy, or something like that.--[[User:Snowball|Snowball- The Anti-Adult-Content Resistance Leader]] 13:55, 28 February 2012 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== How to know people are watching? ==&lt;br /&gt;
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I'm new here, and recently finished a short story.&lt;br /&gt;
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But how do I tell if anyone is seeing it? Is there a place on this website to get feedback on the stories?&lt;br /&gt;
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You can see at the bottom of each page how many times the page has been accessed. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 07:16, 28 January 2012 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Platypus, is this still true? I have looked at my page, and do not see a number for how many times it has been accessed. Or was this removed? --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 12:20, 24 February 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Yes, unfortunately, this isn't currently active.  It was always nice to know how often a page has been accessed. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:38, 24 February 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Something wrong? ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Hi, I'm new here. Saw this site and thought it was pretty interesting, and gave it a try. It's fun and I'm currently working on a story. However, I'm getting a feeling I am doing something wrong with creating stories and editing them. If I am doing anything wrong so far, which I am sure I am, please tell me, okays?&lt;br /&gt;
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-Bluedragon&lt;br /&gt;
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So far, so good.  I see nothing wrong with what you're doing. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 14:25, 24 February 2012 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== A page making/organizing resource ==&lt;br /&gt;
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First of all, I don't want to sound like a spammer or advertiser, but since I can code, I thought I'd make a resource for everyone who's interested.&lt;br /&gt;
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I've noticed when making games on here, that it's difficult to keep track of all your pages, and it's still hard to make them even with a mind map. So I made a rather unconventional, very small piece of software using Game Maker. Despite its not too standard interface. It provides an easy and efficient way to organize your pages. You can type and paste your page content into it and then automatically generate the pages in the correct format for this site.&lt;br /&gt;
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I in no way claim that I have ownership rights to the site. I only want to provide a resource for its users in order to make the creating process easier.&lt;br /&gt;
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The file is only 2.3MB.&lt;br /&gt;
Here's the download link(vs1) - [http://www.4shared.com/file/g5M6PSP2/CYOA_-_Page_Organizer.html]&lt;br /&gt;
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Made page recognition easier by showing the link names instead of the page names for the disabled parallel fields of each choice.&lt;br /&gt;
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New download link(vs1.1) - [http://www.4shared.com/file/KF270foj/CYOA_-_Page_Organizer11.html]&lt;br /&gt;
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== Interaction ==&lt;br /&gt;
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How can I communicate with other users of this site, so that we can conspire and work together. I am currently working on a story that is just to much for one person to handle, but I don't understand how I can talk with &amp;quot;helpers&amp;quot;. I just don't get it!-- [[User: Cyclops|Cyclops]]&lt;br /&gt;
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You can click on a user's name to view their profile page, then click on the &amp;quot;discussion&amp;quot; tab to see their talk page.  If you post something on their talk page, they'll see an alert at the top of their screen.  Hopefully, they'll click the alert, go to their talk page, and then write something back on your page. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 23:06, 4 April 2012 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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i think that there needs to be a few changes to this site.  A chatroom.  It would be very easy to find one online and embed it in a page.  Also I believe there should be category pages where all the sci fi pages are in one place with links to it.  Maybe on the mainpage, instead of links to very story, have links to the category listing.  Finally I believe there should be something to let us rate pages (as in 4 out of 5 stars).&lt;br /&gt;
-[[User:Gartonia|Gartonia]]&lt;br /&gt;
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== Salutations. ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Hello, I am one of the new guys here. I just wanted to know if there are any rules that I must adhere to on this site. I mainly made an account just so that I was able to continue on a story that I saw on this website. Well anyway, If you can notify me, please do, Thank You.&lt;br /&gt;
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== Salutations. ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Hello, I am one of the new guys here. I just wanted to know if there are any rules that I must adhere to on this site. I mainly made an account just so that I was able to continue on a story that I saw on this website. Well anyway, If you can notify me, please do, Thank You.&lt;br /&gt;
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== Linking to existing pages ==&lt;br /&gt;
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How does one link back to an existing page, in effect creating a loop?&lt;br /&gt;
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The same way you create a link to a new page: By enclosing the name of the page in square brackets.  For example: &amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt; [[Main Page]] &amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt; links you to [[Main Page]].--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 21:49, 13 June 2012 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Featured Story - A Dead Thing? ==&lt;br /&gt;
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We're 8 days from the 8 month anniversary of the last time the Featured Story section was last updated. Who was last in charge of updating that? --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 07:24, 14 June 2012 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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The idea was proposed by [[User: Occono|Occono]], last seen in 2009.  I said then that I had no objections to such a  feature, but no intention of participating in it.  Anyone volunteering? --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 18:19, 14 June 2012 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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As I understood it, anyone could edit the featured story section, no one in particular was responsible for keeping it reguarly updated. That being said, 8 months is an alarmingly long time. If we´re looking for a story right now to put on there &amp;quot;Megan&amp;quot; (which is already nominated) could do. Although that one might be a bit to... bloody disturbing, to be put there. Another one might be Battle Royal, which has a lot of pages. (Wait, did I just recomend Battle Royal over something else beacuse it was so bloody disturbing? Scary thought!).&lt;br /&gt;
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Overall though, personally I´d want to put a quality story on the featured page. And the simply fact is that there arn´t enough quality storys on this site to maintain a one or two months switch around in my opinion. Also, personally, I´d also not like to see adulth storys be put there, which decresses the story-pool significantly. &lt;br /&gt;
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--[[User:Fletcher Peninsula|Fletcher Peninsula]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Woah, seriously? 8 months? That is amazing. Nevertheless it's a great thing that someone actually bothered to change it. It may be my story, but from 2012 onwards, I was surprised that [[Remember]] was still featured. Congratulations to TheElderOnes. It's been a long time coming, and now you've finally gotten the story featured. Nice.&lt;br /&gt;
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--[[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] 30/06/2012&lt;br /&gt;
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== Compressing the main page ==&lt;br /&gt;
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I started compressing the main page into smaller sortable tables. I just finished the family friendly section, feel free to take over for me if you would like to do the next sections&lt;br /&gt;
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The goal for all of these tables is to keep the list around 10 items, and then have a more stories page for each section. The simpest way to do this is to choose all stories that have 50+ pages. If that leads to too many stories, then make it 100+...&lt;br /&gt;
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If a story is well written, and more than 50 pages, it should trump a story with more pages.&lt;br /&gt;
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Also, please bring the adult section back to the home page with the top items from it. That is the most active section of the site, and it generates a lot of traffic from google. &lt;br /&gt;
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--[[User:RobKohr|RobKohr]] 12:19, 15 August 2012 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Separate Wiki for Adult Content ==&lt;br /&gt;
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I don't really like that adult stores are so easily accessible for people that come here looking for non-adult material, such as that they'll pop up as random pages, or can be seen in &amp;quot;Recent Changes&amp;quot;.  Is there any interest in branching Adult content off in to a separate Wiki, and maybe including a link the &amp;quot;Adult Section&amp;quot; in the side-bar?  --[[User:Holvard|Holvard]] 19:56, 31 December 2012 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Unfortunately, the majority of the traffic here is looking for the Adult Content.  Removing it or trying to bury it in some way would most likely kill off the non-adult content. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 20:16, 31 December 2012 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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How extreme is the majority?  As far as I can tell, this is the only active site to make free interactive adult stories, so if there's that much interest I may try to make my own. --[[User:Holvard|Holvard]] 20:56, 31 December 2012 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Would it take a lot of work to put the adult content behind a disclaimer screen?  As long as one had to go through the main page to access the adult site, it might actually ''increase'' traffic to the non-adult content, because people would feel better about, for instance, recommending it to children.  People might feel more comfortable with the site in general if they felt sure that reasonable precautions were being taken. --[[User:LaedyRose|LaedyRose]] 9 April 2012&lt;br /&gt;
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It could work through account settings, and then it being disabled by default, and the option for parental controls. Maybe even an option (that would have to be enabled through account settings) so that only one account could be tied to that IP, and these settings, after being enabled, could be disabled via a parental control password that is set up with the account, that could be different than the account's login password.&lt;br /&gt;
[[User:UZ9|UZ9]] 21:52, 20 April 2013 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Issues With the Site ==&lt;br /&gt;
I've noticed that Create Your Own Adventure pages tend to load slowly, and the last week or so, accessing the site at all has been touch and go.  Is there any particular reason for this?  Is there anything you or we can do about it, or do we just need to be patient?  --[[User:LaedyRose|LaedyRose]] 9 April 2012&lt;br /&gt;
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== Lag of site and page load limits ==&lt;br /&gt;
Is there a problem? When I first started contributing to this site it could sometimes be very slow, but I put that down to traffic at certain times of the day. In the morning in GMT (when the Americas are asleep!) it was usually pretty good. Now, though, I find it's terribly slow whenever I use it, often taking upwards of thirty seconds to a minute to load a single page. What's more, not infrequently it doesn't load the page at all and I instead get a &amp;quot;Uncached page load rate limit reached -&amp;gt; 3 per second;&amp;quot; message. After a couple of those (even if I've only been on the site for ~5 minutes and loaded three or four pages) I get a request to complete a Captcha: &amp;quot;Page loads per hour hit - limit 60. Reset limit by filling in this captcha:&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
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It seems that it's trying to load pages multiple times when I access them? That might explain why it's being so slow, too.&lt;br /&gt;
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*There is indeed a problem: link spammers.  RobKohr has had to deliberately slow down site responsiveness and include that captcha in the hopes of frustrating the spambots so maybe they'll go away and leave us alone.  The messages you're seeing aren't because ''you're'' trying to load more than 3 pages per second.  It's because the bots are trying to load far, far more pages than that per second.  Do I like this solution?  Not really.  It's frustrating.  Can anyone else think of a better one? --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 14:14, 13 May 2013 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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**You guys could require to creat a acc that is activaded by admin/mod to view the content, the login page should always come if a cookie isnt existing and the page itself could be a blank site with minmal text and a field to look in.&lt;br /&gt;
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***You wouldn't even need to create an account to ''view'' the content (that would be counter-intuitive, since you want people to see it) but just to ''edit'' it. I know that's probably far from ideal because the whole point is the Wiki is free for everyone, but at the same time if it's being incredibly slow because of spambots then maybe it's a necessary step?&lt;br /&gt;
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: Is there some reason that the normal solutions (for MediaWiki, let's say the Phalanx extension) can't be applied here? Spam is a rather indiscriminate reality of the Internet that sites are usually protected against without crippling themselves and hoping spambots will get frustrated and go away. They won't, but the users will. --[[User:KC Riley|KC Riley]] 13:06, 25 June 2013 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Linking pictures problems and other errors ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Hello. In my various writing I try to place links to pictures to enhance the story experience. I've been doing this for months and months but lately the site has been completely blocking my ability to place links. The first time I try to post a page with a link it will force me to type in two words to verify that I'm human. After I type in the correct words it will attempt to post the page again but instead I will get this message: &amp;quot;You can only submit one page with a link in it per 20 minute period&amp;quot;. Because of the human verification process I am completely unable to post links. I am fine with only posting one link per twenty minutes but the site has negated any way of posting links as the verification process eats up my one post per twenty minutes. As someone who uses the site often this is a major inconvenience.&lt;br /&gt;
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Furthermore, if the human verification process doesn't stop my attempts at posting a link all the million of other error messages will. Errors such as site load limits or pages per hour or some such. These errors are never correct and seemingly random. I can stomach these messages and plod forward but they are a complete hindrance when it comes to posting links.&lt;br /&gt;
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Please give me some assistance in this regard, I do not want to lose the function of placing links in my stories.&lt;br /&gt;
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I have noticed this annoying tendency too. I tried to create a link to the CC-BY legal language, which is what I license my writing using, and find that, since I get the captcha thing, it blocks the link completely by telling me I can only do one external link per 20 minutes. So, it must say 1 time when I first submit, 1 time when I captcha and submit, meaning I can never do anything external. Like, say, link the CC-BY legal language for people to easily read the copyright terms, or provide a picture of an outfit I am thinking of, or whatever. Instead, I need to put a half link in so people can copy and paste, but not go to by directly clicking. Not sure how to get around this -.- --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:45, 17 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Hiya! Are people still active? ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Hey guys. I'm Bloody and I just joined the site. I've noticed the discussion board is a little old, and just wanted to see if others were still active. Guess I just need a little reassurance that I'm not the only one. lol -Bloody&lt;br /&gt;
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== Page loads per second hit - limit 2 ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Has anyone else been getting this message a lot lately? [[User:AgentVincent|AgentVincent]] 21:32, 1 February 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Yes. I have. But I wait about 2 seconds and hit the &amp;quot;reload page&amp;quot; button, and it works. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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That page loads hit per second is extremely annoying. I'm a fast reader, and on short pages, it sometimes pops up. It does so constantly when I'm just trying to get back to pages inside of a story I want to edit or add more to. I also really dislike that &amp;quot;Page hits per hour&amp;quot; message. What's the point of having it? Maybe the site can do away with that? -- [[User:Sophos8|Sophos8]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I don't like it either, but &amp;quot;throttling&amp;quot; the site is one of the techniques that RobKohr is using to frustrate the spam-bots that were filling the site with crap. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 20:21, 13 February 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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It is driving me insane. I can't enjoy this site when everytime i click on another page i get this annoying message. I spend more time reading that than actual story.&lt;br /&gt;
And i just got it when i tried to add here....&lt;br /&gt;
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lol, you should try checking through stories to see if they should be moved to the pit. I see that message so often it isn't funny D: --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 14:00, 1 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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its annoying as hell it would be nice if it was raised to 4&lt;br /&gt;
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How does one &amp;quot;frustrate&amp;quot; a bot?  If anything it will cause people actually interested in this site to turn away.  There has to be a better way to do this.&lt;br /&gt;
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== Image linking ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Every time I try to link an image, it gives me: &lt;br /&gt;
&amp;quot;You can only submit one page with a link in it per 20 minute period.&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
This happens regardless of whether i add via hyperlinking or as a text url itself.&lt;br /&gt;
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Any help would be very much appreciated.&lt;br /&gt;
My only other option for this is to upload images to this site, but I'm not sure if I can or not. But the editing tools does support adding images during editing so...&lt;br /&gt;
--[[User:Aelvir|Aelvir]] 15:33, 8 February 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Chat Concept ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Recently created, and in need of a public announcement. Feel free to use this link and open in separate tabs to keep it alive:&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; '''editthischat.chatango.com'''&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 22:24, 8 May 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Mermaid games? ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Can someone please make a adult section mermaid choose sex game or direct me to one... Thanks.&lt;br /&gt;
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And i want it to be that you cant change into legs and are cught by fishermen.&lt;br /&gt;
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Also make the girl mermaid choose a blonde girl.&lt;br /&gt;
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And its set in a medieval world thats advanced on slavery and cross breeding and has mutant bugs.&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks.&lt;br /&gt;
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==New here==&lt;br /&gt;
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So I'm working on a story called [[Three sisters]] in the adult section. I'm just wondering if anyone is enjoying it as of yet, its still a WIP and there is still loads of work to be done with it. Anyway let me know if there are things you would like to see in it, or anything else.&lt;br /&gt;
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-[[User:Tapdancingfish|Tapdancingfish]] 23:39, 14 August 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==I have questions==&lt;br /&gt;
Ive just joined but having been writting up my own story for months, i want to know if its possible to keep my story hidden from public until im ready for them to read it? Also is there anyway for me to revert unwanted edits by other users (to be honest i dont want any users editing my work unless its to fix grammar)?&lt;br /&gt;
[[User:Blitzbear93|Blitzbear93]] 14:01, 14 September 2014 (UTC)Blitzbear93&lt;br /&gt;
:Hi,&lt;br /&gt;
:I suggest that you create a wiki to write your story, then you blank the page in the last edit. Nobody can read it when opening your wiki, but you can easily retrieve your own story in the revision history page (clicking on the previous archived version). You cannot really prevent any user from editing, but whether it happens, you have the right to make reverts, too, so you can check your work periodically if you are worried about that. You may mention at the beginning of the story the following sentence :&lt;br /&gt;
:''Please do not change or add pages (unless you correct my orthography, which you are welcome to do). Thank you.''&lt;br /&gt;
:Good luck. -- [[User:Girl Mamtha|Girl Mamtha]] 20:10, 26 October 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Linking to outside sites ==&lt;br /&gt;
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So, I've been trying for over two hours to upload the first page of my my story. However, submissions with outside links can only be submitted once every 20 minutes, a common sense policy I have no issues with. My problem comes when the first submission attempt loads the page again with a captcha to prove I'm not a spam bot. Entering the captcha, I discover that triggering the Captcha counts as a story submission and makes me wait 20 minutes before I can actually submit it. Annoying, but okay. I wait the 20 minutes, hit submit, and discover that my login has timed out. I log in again to discover that being informed that I timed out COUNTS AS A GODDAMN STORY SUBMISSION. I went around this loop AGAIN, keeping track of the time in an attempt to not have to repeat it, with no more success. It should not be this hard to link to a goddamn discussion/writers collaboration thread on another website.&lt;/div&gt;</description>
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			<description>&lt;p&gt;Totemist:&amp;#32;LoK Open the cockpit to feel the cool wind and listen to the calls of the jungle. moved to LoK Open her flightsuit just a bit, to cool off.:&amp;amp;#32;Re-writing abandoned story, moving pages to suit new version.&lt;/p&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;#REDIRECT [[LoK Open her flightsuit just a bit, to cool off.]]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
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			<title>LoK Open her flightsuit just a bit, to cool off.</title>
			<link>http://72.14.177.54/create_Your_own_story/LoK_Open_her_flightsuit_just_a_bit,_to_cool_off.</link>
			<description>&lt;p&gt;Totemist:&amp;#32;LoK Open the cockpit to feel the cool wind and listen to the calls of the jungle. moved to LoK Open her flightsuit just a bit, to cool off.:&amp;amp;#32;Re-writing abandoned story, moving pages to suit new version.&lt;/p&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;Reaching forward, Krystal hits the canopy release, which results in a hiss of air as the cockpit depressurizes. A multitude of sounds wash over her with the refreshing wind, causing her to close her eyes and sigh, in tune with all of it. Except for that one feeling, slightly stronger now, but still drowned out amongst the jubilant birds surrounding her. Curiously, Krystal scans the surrounding area, but sees nothing unusual in the browns and greens of the surrounding jungle. A small bird zips past her face, snapping her attention back to the immediate vicinity. A flying lizard of some sort lands on the nose of the arwing and stares at her, unfortunately right on top of the intake. &amp;quot;Get off&amp;quot; she says playfully, standing up in the cockpit to shoo away the creature.&lt;br /&gt;
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In the trees below, a very different sort of lizard watches the progress of the two ships, his dull green scales and brown armour providing the perfect camouflage. At the sight of Krystal, he signals another of his species at the base of the trees. This one takes off at a dead sprint, making impressive progress in the dense undergrowth. Easily swinging down from his perch, the first lizard starts off in a different direction with somewhat less urgency. An anticipatory smile splits his fierce visage.&lt;br /&gt;
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In her arwing, Krystal reaches out over the flight controls, trying to scare off her new visitor. The stubborn lizard ignores her efforts. Frustrated, she leans dangerously far forward, but the beast is still out of reach. My staff. Sitting back down, she reaches around behind her seat for her staff. Standing once more, she reaches out to dislodge the creature. It hisses angrily and shoots into the air- straight toward Krystal's face. Surprised, she flails her arms wildly to fend off the little monster. Unfortunately, her staff catches on something and is torn from her grasp, tumbling quickly out of sight. &amp;quot;My staff!&amp;quot; she cries, leaning out of the cockpit to look back at where it fell. That could take days to find... CRACK! Her head whips around as the birds and other beasts scatter. What was that?! The wooden sound came from ahead and to the right. Fox doesn't seem to have noticed anything, but then again his canopy is still sealed. He always does miss the obvious she thinks to herself. CRACK! Suddenly, something slams into Fox's arwing. Almost immediately, Fox performs his infamous barrel roll, hurling whatever it was back into the jungle. The moment his maneuver is complete however, a second object hits, and this one apparently damages the ship's systems on impact, as it begins to lose power. &amp;quot;Fox!&amp;quot; Krystal screams in the communicator. &amp;quot;Are you okay?&amp;quot; There is no response. The extra weight coupled with the initial damage causes the fighter to sink toward the treeline. Krystal manages to make out some kind of hulking reptile clinging to the side before it spins out of sight.&lt;br /&gt;
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CLUNK. Two more of the bipedal creatures land heavily on each sides of the cockpit, putting a strain on the engines. Krystal quickly grabs the joystick before remembering that she left it on autopilot. She reaches for her staff before remembering that that's no longer an option either. Oh no... She feels a huge clawed hand pin her in place as it's owner balances with one foot on the rim of the cockpit. Behind him, she can now see how these beasts got up here- catapults. She struggles wildly, but the creature ignores her, reaching toward his crotch with his free hand. He flicks aside that part of his armour allowing an oversized pink cock to burst free. On the other side, his partner quickly does the same. Both are as long as her forearm, and greater in girth. &amp;quot;What the GMPH!&amp;quot; Krystal is cut off as the first beast grabs her head and forces it onto his bumpy member. Too stunned to respond, she sees his partner start stroking himself out of the corner of her eye. The one in her mouth starts pumping in and out but is unable to get very far past the back of her mouth as she coughs and sputters. She quickly gives up fighting to focus on trying to breath during this onslaught. The beast in her mouth roars and she feels a sticky liquid gush down her throat. I tastes... salty. The lizard spurts again and again, causing the gunk to overflow and coat her muzzle. She swallows reflexively, gasping for air. She feels something hit her chest and looks down to see that the second lizard has coated her flightsuit in the white goo. ''This can't be happening.''  She lashes out again, but while the lizards shrug off her blows she accidentally disengages the autopilot, sending the arwing into a dive. Both creatures dive clear at the last second before it hits the trees. Grabbing desperately for the controls, Krystal manages to pull up just enough for the fighter to hit the jungle floor horizontally. She sees dirt and plant matter flying every where just before she blacks out.&lt;br /&gt;
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Does she:&lt;br /&gt;
*[[LoK Wake up.]]&lt;br /&gt;
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{{Status|Equipment=''Flightsuit''|Health=100|MP=0|Level=0}}&lt;br /&gt;
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[[Category: Legend of Krystal]]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
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			<title>LoK Open her flightsuit just a bit, to cool off.</title>
			<link>http://72.14.177.54/create_Your_own_story/LoK_Open_her_flightsuit_just_a_bit,_to_cool_off.</link>
			<description>&lt;p&gt;Totemist:&amp;#32;Undo revision 229467 by Totemist (Talk)&lt;/p&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;Reaching forward, Krystal hits the canopy release, which results in a hiss of air as the cockpit depressurizes. A multitude of sounds wash over her with the refreshing wind, causing her to close her eyes and sigh, in tune with all of it. Except for that one feeling, slightly stronger now, but still drowned out amongst the jubilant birds surrounding her. Curiously, Krystal scans the surrounding area, but sees nothing unusual in the browns and greens of the surrounding jungle. A small bird zips past her face, snapping her attention back to the immediate vicinity. A flying lizard of some sort lands on the nose of the arwing and stares at her, unfortunately right on top of the intake. &amp;quot;Get off&amp;quot; she says playfully, standing up in the cockpit to shoo away the creature.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
In the trees below, a very different sort of lizard watches the progress of the two ships, his dull green scales and brown armour providing the perfect camouflage. At the sight of Krystal, he signals another of his species at the base of the trees. This one takes off at a dead sprint, making impressive progress in the dense undergrowth. Easily swinging down from his perch, the first lizard starts off in a different direction with somewhat less urgency. An anticipatory smile splits his fierce visage.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
In her arwing, Krystal reaches out over the flight controls, trying to scare off her new visitor. The stubborn lizard ignores her efforts. Frustrated, she leans dangerously far forward, but the beast is still out of reach. My staff. Sitting back down, she reaches around behind her seat for her staff. Standing once more, she reaches out to dislodge the creature. It hisses angrily and shoots into the air- straight toward Krystal's face. Surprised, she flails her arms wildly to fend off the little monster. Unfortunately, her staff catches on something and is torn from her grasp, tumbling quickly out of sight. &amp;quot;My staff!&amp;quot; she cries, leaning out of the cockpit to look back at where it fell. That could take days to find... CRACK! Her head whips around as the birds and other beasts scatter. What was that?! The wooden sound came from ahead and to the right. Fox doesn't seem to have noticed anything, but then again his canopy is still sealed. He always does miss the obvious she thinks to herself. CRACK! Suddenly, something slams into Fox's arwing. Almost immediately, Fox performs his infamous barrel roll, hurling whatever it was back into the jungle. The moment his maneuver is complete however, a second object hits, and this one apparently damages the ship's systems on impact, as it begins to lose power. &amp;quot;Fox!&amp;quot; Krystal screams in the communicator. &amp;quot;Are you okay?&amp;quot; There is no response. The extra weight coupled with the initial damage causes the fighter to sink toward the treeline. Krystal manages to make out some kind of hulking reptile clinging to the side before it spins out of sight.&lt;br /&gt;
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CLUNK. Two more of the bipedal creatures land heavily on each sides of the cockpit, putting a strain on the engines. Krystal quickly grabs the joystick before remembering that she left it on autopilot. She reaches for her staff before remembering that that's no longer an option either. Oh no... She feels a huge clawed hand pin her in place as it's owner balances with one foot on the rim of the cockpit. Behind him, she can now see how these beasts got up here- catapults. She struggles wildly, but the creature ignores her, reaching toward his crotch with his free hand. He flicks aside that part of his armour allowing an oversized pink cock to burst free. On the other side, his partner quickly does the same. Both are as long as her forearm, and greater in girth. &amp;quot;What the GMPH!&amp;quot; Krystal is cut off as the first beast grabs her head and forces it onto his bumpy member. Too stunned to respond, she sees his partner start stroking himself out of the corner of her eye. The one in her mouth starts pumping in and out but is unable to get very far past the back of her mouth as she coughs and sputters. She quickly gives up fighting to focus on trying to breath during this onslaught. The beast in her mouth roars and she feels a sticky liquid gush down her throat. I tastes... salty. The lizard spurts again and again, causing the gunk to overflow and coat her muzzle. She swallows reflexively, gasping for air. She feels something hit her chest and looks down to see that the second lizard has coated her flightsuit in the white goo. ''This can't be happening.''  She lashes out again, but while the lizards shrug off her blows she accidentally disengages the autopilot, sending the arwing into a dive. Both creatures dive clear at the last second before it hits the trees. Grabbing desperately for the controls, Krystal manages to pull up just enough for the fighter to hit the jungle floor horizontally. She sees dirt and plant matter flying every where just before she blacks out.&lt;br /&gt;
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Does she:&lt;br /&gt;
*[[LoK Wake up.]]&lt;br /&gt;
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{{Status|Equipment=''Flightsuit''|Health=100|MP=0|Level=0}}&lt;br /&gt;
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[[Category: Legend of Krystal]]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
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			<description>&lt;p&gt;Totemist:&amp;#32;Blanked the page&lt;/p&gt;
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			<title>Flightsuit</title>
			<link>http://72.14.177.54/create_Your_own_story/Flightsuit</link>
			<description>&lt;p&gt;Totemist:&amp;#32;&lt;/p&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;A tantalizingly right-fitting jumpsuit intended to act as an emergency space-suit in case of emergency ejection. Comfortable, durable, and practical.&lt;br /&gt;
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