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Turn her five-month pregnancy into an eight-month pregnancy by adding the paper cones to all the candy

ThaneOfAss — Tue, 04 Apr 2017 20:37:08 GMT

ThaneOfAss:

"You see? Candi has been looking this way three times now, and still she doesn't seem to get it."

"Perhaps she still doesn't think it's enough cotton candy to be worth it? She must see that I'm covered in it, the way I'm holding up my sweater and showing her my belly and tits! And it's practically dripping from my snatch..."

"I don't know... Candi sure eats a lot of cotton candy... Now I've got it!"

"What?" The woman looks at you. "It better not involve staining my precious sweater!"

"No, let's use all the paper cones to make the cotton candy look like much more! I bet Candi won't mind! Perhaps she even eats the cones with her candy..."

The woman nods at this. "It wouldn't surprise me, with what you've been telling me of this Candi girl."
So you begin.

The lady's hole is tightly stuffed with cotton candy, but you bunch up a few paper cones, and press them inside. At first, the cotton candy tries to escape outside, but you scoop it up with another paper cone, which you then mash into her pussy with the rest of them. You need to push both your fists hard into the lady while she presses back with everything she's got. Soon you're rewarded by her belly expanding out considerably and a loud gasping moan escaping her lips.

"It's working!" she pants when you're resting. So far, she's managed to keep her sweater from falling back down onto her sticky and sweaty breasts.

After a while, you're done. The lady looks closer to ten months pregnant, but you still hope this will work. You help the lady to stand up straight and show herself to Candi. She can only take short, shallow breaths, no doubt because of her huge belly.

And your plan works! Candi gasps when she realizes what you've prepared for her and she immediately comes over, a wide grin on her face.

"Oooh... cotton candy! Is all that candy for me?"

Do you:
*[[Tell Candi she can eat as much out of the lady for free]]
*[[Tell Candi she can eat the lady out as long as she allows you to fuck her]]
*[[Ask Candi if she wants to help stuff her gift with even more cotton candy first]]
*[[Leave the carnival now that you've enjoyed some pussy]]
{{SexRompStatus|Location=''[[The Snack Tent]]''|Health=Horny|MP=0|Level=4}}
[[Category: Smutty Sex Romp]]

Turn her five-month pregnancy into an eight-month pregnancy by adding the paper cones to all the candy

ThaneOfAss — Tue, 04 Apr 2017 20:34:56 GMT

ThaneOfAss:

"You see? Candi has been looking this way three times now, and still she doesn't seem to get it."

"Perhaps she still doesn't think it's enough cotton candy to be worth it? She must see that I'm covered in it, the way I'm holding up my sweater and showing her my belly and tits!"

"I don't know... Candi sure eats a lot of cotton candy... Now I've got it!"

"What?" The woman looks at you. "It better not involve staining my precious sweater!"

"No, let's use all the paper cones to make the cotton candy look like much more! I bet Candi won't mind! Perhaps she even eats the cones with her candy..."

The woman nods at this. "It wouldn't surprise me, with what you've been telling me of this Candi girl."
So you begin.

The lady's hole is tightly stuffed with cotton candy, but you bunch up a few paper cones, and press them inside. At first, the cotton candy tries to escape outside, but you scoop it up with another paper cone, which you then mash into her pussy with the rest of them. You need to push both your fists hard into the lady while she presses back with everything she's got. Soon you're rewarded by her belly expanding out considerably and a loud gasping moan escaping her lips.

"It's working!" she pants when you're resting. So far, she's managed to keep her sweater from falling back down onto her sticky and sweaty breasts.

After a while, you're done. The lady looks closer to ten months pregnant, but you still hope this will work. You help the lady to stand up straight and show herself to Candi. She can only take short, shallow breaths, no doubt because of her huge belly.

And your plan works! Candi gasps when she realizes what you've prepared for her and she immediately comes over, a wide grin on her face.

"Oooh... cotton candy! Is all that candy for me?"

Do you:
*[[Tell Candi she can eat as much out of the lady for free]]
*[[Tell Candi she can eat the lady out as long as she allows you to fuck her]]
*[[Ask Candi if she wants to help stuff her gift with even more cotton candy first]]
*[[Leave the carnival now that you've enjoyed some pussy]]
{{SexRompStatus|Location=''[[The Snack Tent]]''|Health=Horny|MP=0|Level=4}}
[[Category: Smutty Sex Romp]]

Buy a whole box of twenty cotton candies to add to others

ThaneOfAss — Tue, 04 Apr 2017 20:31:51 GMT

ThaneOfAss:

"This will do it! " you exclaim, bringing the huge box over.

"I will need to pack you quite tight if we want you to look pregnant for real. So I want you to push back with everything you've got, okay?" you ask her.

"Yes. I'm ready. Make me pregnant with cotton candy. Do it. " The woman seems short of breath. She even forgets about the sweater.

You take out three full cotton candies and bunch them up. Then you insert everything inside the lady's pulsating snatch, and keep inserting your whole hand holding the ball of candy. You keep pushing as hard as you can, not stopping until you see a visible bulge on her stomach.

Then you continue, stuffing her with cotton candy after cotton candy. Most you manage to get inside her, but quite a lot ends up coating her pussy, inner thighs, ass and belly. You even push a cotton candy inside her asshole as a surprise for Candi to find.

Then you take a big wad of cotton candy and intentionally smears it on her mid-riff, forcing her to lift her precious sweater to reveal the undersides of her luscious boobs. She isn't wearing a bra today.

Encouraged, you rip another wad of cotton candy and sneak it up between her large breasts. As soon as she's lifted her sweater completely off her tits, you liberally coat them in cotton candy. You don't want her to be able to cover them with her sweater without staining it, so you make sure each breast is lathered up in cotton candy.

Then you return to the business of stuffing her cunt. In the end, you need to push with both hands, with her pushing back with all her might in some kind of reverse birth position.

Finally, you're done. She definitely looks pregnant now, her belly swollen with sticky candy. And of course, Candi shouldn't be able to miss the fact the lady is covered in cotton candy from breasts to knees. Especially as the lady is dressed only in ruined panty-hose and an expensive sweater she's holding above her round jugs, her hands visibly shaking.

"Oh I'm so incredibly full. Is this it? Is it time?" the woman gasps. "It sure is... a lot of candy."

You look at the box, half filled with the thirty-something paper cones.

Do you:
*[[Turn her five-month pregnancy into an eight-month pregnancy by adding the paper cones to all the candy]]
*[[Call Candi over to eat the auburn-haired woman's pussy]]
*[[Eat that cotton candy out of her yourself]]
{{SexRompStatus|Location=''[[The Snack Tent]]''|Health=Horny|MP=0|Level=4}}
[[Category: Smutty Sex Romp]]

Buy a whole box of twenty cotton candies to add to others

ThaneOfAss — Tue, 04 Apr 2017 20:13:28 GMT

ThaneOfAss:

"This will do it! " you exclaim, bringing the huge box over.

"I will need to pack you quite tight if we want you to look pregnant for real. So I want you to push back with everything you've got, okay?" you ask her.

"Yes. I'm ready. Make me pregnant with cotton candy. Do it. " The woman seems short of breath. She even forgets about the sweater.

You take out three full cotton candies and bunch them up. Then you insert everything inside the lady's pulsating snatch, and keep inserting your whole hand holding the ball of candy. You keep pushing as hard as you can, not stopping until you see a visible bulge on her stomach.

Then you continue, stuffing her with cotton candy after cotton candy. Most you manage to get inside her, but quite a lot ends up coating her pussy, inner thighs, ass and belly. You even push a cotton candy inside her asshole as a surprise for Candi to find.

Then you take a big wad of cotton candy and intentionally smears it on her mid-riff, forcing her to lift her precious sweater to reveal the undersides of her luscious boobs. She isn't wearing a bra today.

Encouraged, you rip another wad of cotton candy and sneak it up between her large breasts. As soon as she's lifted her sweater completely off her tits, you liberally coat them in cotton candy. You don't want her to be able to cover them with her sweater without staining it, so you make sure each breast is lathered up in cotton candy.

Then you return to the business of stuffing her cunt. In the end, you need to push with both hands, with her pushing back with all her might in some kind of reverse birth position.

Finally, you're done. She definitely looks pregnant now. And of course, Candi shouldn't be able to miss the fact the lady is covered in cotton candy from breasts to knees. Especially as the lady is dressed only in ruined panty-hose and an expensive sweater she's holding above her round jugs.

"Oh I'm so incredibly full. Is this it? Is it time?" the woman gasps. "It sure is... a lot of candy."

You look at the box, half filled with the thirty-something paper cones.

Do you:
*[[Turn her five-month pregnancy into an eight-month pregnancy by adding the paper cones to all the candy]]
*[[Call Candi over to eat the auburn-haired woman's pussy]]
*[[Eat that cotton candy out of her yourself]]
{{SexRompStatus|Location=''[[The Snack Tent]]''|Health=Horny|MP=0|Level=4}}
[[Category: Smutty Sex Romp]]

If you let me, that hot chick there will eat it out of you

ThaneOfAss — Tue, 04 Apr 2017 20:10:05 GMT

ThaneOfAss:

The auburn-haired woman looks at Candi. Candi winks at her.

"If she wants to eat cotton candy out of me," the auburn-haired woman says, "why doesn't she put it in me herself?"

"Because she would eat it before she got it into you," you say.

"Ah," the woman says with a nod. "She can't help eating anything with cotton candy, can she? All right. Put your candy in so she can't stop herself from eating me. Just be careful not to get anything on my sweater. It's very expensive."

With one hand, you unzip her skirt and drop it to her feet. You rip out the crotch panel on her pantyhose, exposing her auburn-haired pussy. You spread her labia and push a wad of cotton candy into her snatch. She twitches slightly, clearly supressing a moan. You rip apart the candy and slip each piece up her pussy. She grows wetter as you insert more.

"Have... Have you finished?" the woman asks breathily. "That seems like... a lot of candy. I'm really going to need her tongue... Oh!"

You soon have nothing left but the paper cone the candy came on.

Do you:
*[[Buy another cotton candy to add to the first]]
*[[Let Candi know that it's time to feast]]
*[[Stick your tongue in that sugar-filled snatch]]
{{SexRompStatus|Location=''[[The Snack Tent]]''|Health=Horny|MP=0|Level=4}}
[[Category: Smutty Sex Romp]]

If you let me, that hot chick there will eat it out of you

ThaneOfAss — Tue, 04 Apr 2017 20:09:27 GMT

ThaneOfAss: Added link

The auburn-haired woman looks at Candi. Candi winks at her.

"If she wants to eat cotton candy out of me," the auburn-haired woman says, "why doesn't she put it in me herself?"

"Because she would eat it before she got it into you," you say.

"Ah," the woman says with a nod. "She can't help eating anything with cotton candy, can she? All right. Put your candy in so she can't stop herself from eating me. Just be careful not to get anything on my sweater. It's very expensive."

With one hand, you unzip her skirt and drop it to her feet. You rip out the crotch panel on her pantyhose, exposing her auburn-haired pussy. You spread her labia and push a wad of cotton candy into her snatch. She twitches slightly, clearly supressing a moan. You rip apart the candy and slip each piece up her pussy. She grows wetter as you insert more.

"Have... Have you finished?" the woman asks breathily. "That seems like... a lot of candy. I'm really going to need her tongue... Oh!"

You soon have nothing left but the paper cone the candy came on.

Do you:
*[[Let Candi know that it's time to feast]]
*[[Stick your tongue in that sugar-filled snatch]]
*[[Buy another cotton candy to add to the first]]
{{SexRompStatus|Location=''[[The Snack Tent]]''|Health=Horny|MP=0|Level=4}}
[[Category: Smutty Sex Romp]]

Girl Scout Cookies/Hand 12

ThaneOfAss — Wed, 14 Sep 2016 03:29:12 GMT

ThaneOfAss: Spelling

“Nobody can be this lucky forever,” Claire says when you’re done.

“Care to bet on it?” you ask. “I’ll buy an entire case if I lose.”

“And if you win?”

“I think you know the only thing you have left to bet with.”

Claire pauses and exchanges a glance with Lin. Finally she says, “Okay. But you have to beat both of our hands. If either one of us has a better hand than you, we win.”

“Fine with me, but if I have the best hand I get to fuck both of you.”

Claire nods as Lin shuffles the cards.

You slide your underwear off and toss it with the rest of your clothes. “Since you’ll get to see me undressed either way, I might as well take it off now.” You sit down cross-legged, your cock standing at attention directly in front of the two girls.

Her nervousness makes it hard for her to shuffle and deal easily, but you think there is curiosity mixed in as she keeps glancing towards your cock. Her posture is also more open and revealing indicating that she might be anticipating an encounter as much as she would like to avoid one.

“One card,” Claire says, snapping you out of your daydream.

You look at your cards at disbelief. You’ve been dealt a full house: three aces and two fours. You start to say that you don’t need any cards when you remember that you need to have the very best hand here. A voice in the back of your mind thinks that you need to try for a four-of-a-kind.

* [[Girl Scout Cookies/Hand 12 - Keep the three aces|Keep the three aces]]
* [[Girl Scout Cookies/Hand 12 - Keep the full house|Keep the full house]]

[[Category:Girl Scout Cookies|Hand C]]

Girl Scout Cookies/Hand 10 - Keep the nines and the ace

ThaneOfAss — Wed, 14 Sep 2016 03:24:36 GMT

ThaneOfAss: Spelling

“I’ll take two cards,” you say.

“I need three cards,” Lin says nervously.

“I only need one,” Claire declares.

You look at your new cards as soon as Claire deals them to you. You are very happy to see another nine among them. “Three of a kind,” you say. “Looks like my luck might be holding.”

“I’ve only got a pair of kings,” Lin says.

“This certainly isn’t my lucky hand,” Claire says showing a failed flush draw. “Well, a deal is a deal,” she says, inviting you over.

Claire seems more than ready for you as you kneel behind her. You reach under her arms to cup her full breasts as she leans back against your chest. Like her discarded bra, your hand can’t quite contain the full volume of her tits. You hold what you can, feeling the soft skin squeeze between your fingers as you knead them.

Her nipples are small and soft against your touch, and quite sensitive it would seem. Claire moans as you run your fingers across and around them, encouraging you to rub them harder.

“Go lower,” Claire directs you as she spreads her legs further apart. You quickly comply, sliding a hand from her breast down to cover her pussy. Your fingers run through her wispy hairs, discovering her very wet opening.

You look across at Lin who is watching closely. Her face has a shy curiosity. She wants to watch but doesn’t want anyone to know that she is watching.

As you trace around her opening, Claire pushes her rear back, rubbing against your briefs. You can feel your hard cock sliding up and down the furrow of her ass as your hand makes matching strokes up and down her pussy. “Just like that…” she directs, her thrusting becoming more and more intense.

As good as this is, you hope to save yourself for something more. Claire moans, “Don’t stop!” as you disengage and crawl back to your spot.

* [[Girl Scout Cookies/Hand 11|Continue...]]

[[Category:Girl Scout Cookies|Hand A - Keep the nines and the ace]]

Girl Scout Cookies/Hand 10

ThaneOfAss — Wed, 14 Sep 2016 03:21:01 GMT

ThaneOfAss: Spelling

“I was so close,” Claire mutters again.

“Do you want another chance?” you ask her, an idea forming in your mind. Claire pauses and looks at you with an interested expression. “If you had won that hand it would have been three boxes of cookies, right? We'll play more hand. If I lose, I’ll buy six boxes. If I win, I get to feel the loser’s body.”

Lin gives Claire an uncertain look but Claire is quick to say, “You’re on. You won’t get away this time.” She gathers up the cards and starts shuffling. “You’ll wish you had lost the last hand.”

You’re already imagining your hands running over the contours of the girls’ breasts, asses, and across their pussies, undecided about which one you’d prefer to lose when you realize your cards have arrived and the girls are staring at you to make your decision.

“See, Lin? He’s so distracted this will be easy,” Claire says.

“Don’t be too sure,” you reply.

Your hand contains the two, nine, king, and ace of spades, and the nine of hearts. Lots of options present themselves.

* [[Girl Scout Cookies/Hand 10 - Keep the pair of nines|Keep the pair of nines]]
* [[Girl Scout Cookies/Hand 10 - Keep the nines and the ace|Keep the nines and the ace]]
* [[Girl Scout Cookies/Hand 10 - Keep the four spades|Keep the four spades]]

[[Category:Girl Scout Cookies|Hand A]]

Girl Scout Cookies/Grope their tits

ThaneOfAss — Wed, 14 Sep 2016 03:03:48 GMT

ThaneOfAss: Spelling

"Wow, you girls both have great tits." you say.
Before they cover them you step towards them and begin fondling them, cupping one of each.
"Hey," Claire protests, "This isn't the way it works."
Neither girl makes an attempt to stop you or cover up as you weigh Claire's heavy jugs and pull Lin's nipples, making them even longer. Then you dip down and suck one of Claire's nipples. She protests again and half-heartedly grabs your head, but doesn't force you away with any strength as you lick and suck each nipple. You then move to Lin and suck on her lovely long nipples. She keeps her arms to her sides and just giggles.
Satisfied and eager to continue the game you step back and announce, "Your turn to ask."
They confer briefly and then in unison say,

* [[Girl Scout Cookies/Masterbate|Masterbate]]
* [[Girl Scout Cookies/Lick our feet|Lick our feet]]
* [[Girl Scout Cookies/Answer a question|Answer a question]]

Those wishing to contribute should read the [[Girl Scout Cookies/Editing Notes|notes]] before doing so. Thanks.

[[Category: Girl Scout Cookies| Girl Scout Cookies]]

Girl Scout Cookies/Dare

ThaneOfAss — Wed, 14 Sep 2016 03:00:01 GMT

ThaneOfAss: Spelling

They decide to dare you and after deliberating involving glances at you, head-shaking and whispers, they both nod and agree on something.

"You ask!" Lin says, covering her face.

Claire very calmly, like she was asking for a glass of water, says "Show us your cock."

You can't believe the game leapt to this stage already and you burst out laughing.

You look at the both. Lin opens her hands to see your expression. Claire just stares with a look of expectation.

"Ok, I guess you're serious."

Without further adieu, you undo your pants and push both your pants and boxers down in one motion. Obviously you're not hard yet. Your shirt flops down, covering your cock.

"Raise your shirt!" Claire demands.

You comply and watch them ogle your cock which begins to swell with pride.

"Its getting bigger, wow" Lin says, obviously impressed.

* [[Girl Scout Cookies/Kick your pants off and leave them off|Kick your pants off and leave them off]]
* [[Girl Scout Cookies/Ask them a dare|Ask them a dare]]
* [[Girl Scout Cookies/Ask them a truth|Ask them a truth]]

Those wishing to contribute should read the [[Girl Scout Cookies/Editing Notes|notes]] before doing so. Thanks.

[[Category: Girl Scout Cookies| Girl Scout Cookies]]

Girl Scout Cookies/Truth or Dare

ThaneOfAss — Wed, 14 Sep 2016 02:58:28 GMT

ThaneOfAss: Spelling

Your mind races to think about how you can turn “Truth or Dare” into a game that can be played for stakes. Eventually, the idea comes to you.

“How about Truth or Dare?” you say.

“And exactly how is that going to work?” Claire asks.

“For Truth, you can lie. If you get away with it, you win a box of cookies. If you’re caught, you lose a box. If you accuse someone of lying when they didn’t, you also lose a box. The lie can’t be something trivial, like having 3 pet dogs instead of 2 – it has to be something significant like saying that you hate dogs when you have a pet dog.
If the lie is caught, you must answer truthfully afterwards. If the lie is not caught, the asker can lose another box to get the true answer.

“You can also refuse. In that case, you lose two boxes, unless the asker wants to lose two boxes instead to make you do it anyway.

“At the end of the game, I’ll buy every box I’m “behind”. If you’re ahead, I’ll still buy two boxes.”

Both girls consider this interesting variation. “Sounds kind of complicated,” Lin mutters.

“You’re just chicken,” Claire says. She turns to you, “Okay, but we get to go first.”

“No problem. You two act as a team – I can ask either one of you, and you two decide together what to ask me.”

* [[Girl Scout Cookies/Truth|Truth]]
* [[Girl Scout Cookies/Dare|Dare]]

[[Category: Girl Scout Cookies|Truth or Dare]]

Girl Scout Cookies/Replace your thumb in her ass

ThaneOfAss — Wed, 14 Sep 2016 02:55:07 GMT

ThaneOfAss: Spelling

You pull out of Claire's holes and have her lay at the edge of the bed. Claire pulls her legs back and looks on anxiously as you rub your cock against her slit. You take hold of your meat and press the tip against Claire's asshole. The teen's eyes bulge out of her head as you drive the head of your cock past her anal ring and take her anal virginity. She bites her lip and strokes her clit as you take her tit in your hand.

"It feels so big," she mutters as her ass clamps tightly around your invading shaft.

"You want me to stop?"

"No. Don't stop. Be gentle but don't stop." You can see a look of pain from time to time, but it isn't stopping Claire from working two fingers into herself. Your dick twitches as you begin to piston in and out of her deflowered ass. Claire closes her eyes and seems to be in her own world as she takes your cock and works herself over.

"You like this?" you ask, Claire nodding her response. "Are you gonna be a little ass slut?" She hesitates then nods again.

"Say it," you order.

"I'm a little ass slut."

"Good girl."

"Fuck!" Claire's body clenches as she gasps and moans in orgasm. You pound her quivering body hard, shooting your load into her rectum. You collapse on top of her, your sweaty bodies exhausted as the hour ends.

Do you:
*[[Girl Scout Cookies/Clean up and walk Claire out|Clean up and walk Claire out]]
*[[Girl Scout Cookies/Let Claire rest in your bed|Let Claire rest in your bed]]

[[Category: Girl Scout Cookies|Replace your thumb in her ass]]

Girl Scout Cookies/Stick your thumb in Claire's ass

ThaneOfAss — Wed, 14 Sep 2016 02:52:57 GMT

ThaneOfAss: Spelling

Claire grinds her hips as you slow your fucking and wet your thumb in your mouth. The girl is looking down and is caught by surprise when you press the wet digit against her puckered rosebud. "Oh shit," she exclaims with a stutter as you enter her, "I've never had anything in my butt before." Claire's pussy squeezes you as she gasps while you push your first knuckle into her poop chute. You hold your dick still in her wet snatch as you work your thumb in and out of her ass, the teen grunting as your free hand finds her tit. Claire reaches down and rubs her clit as she stands on her toes and strains to rock on your pole. "Oh yeah, wiggle that thumb in my butt," she whimpers, "Use my butt. Use my pussy. Please, sir. Aaagh."

Do you:
*[[Girl Scout Cookies/Keep your thumb in Claire's ass|Keep your thumb in Claire's ass]]
*[[Girl Scout Cookies/Replace your thumb in her ass|Replace your thumb in her ass]]

[[Category: Girl Scout Cookies|Stick your thumb in Claire's ass]]

No way! Shoo the little pervert away. He shouldn't be seeing this

ThaneOfAss — Sat, 04 Jun 2016 01:33:04 GMT

ThaneOfAss: Grammar and spelling

'''Status: Naked and Caught On Camera'''

You watch as the little boy gives you a nasty smile and pulls out a phone. You see a flash come from the phone as you try to cover yourself. The boy then draws his fingers against the windows of the laundromat, something that looks like a phone number. You grab your phone from your purse and text the number.
"You need to stop" you send to the number.
"If you don't want me to post these pictures everywhere in town, you're gonna do whatever I say. Understand, slut?"

You read over his text, in shock at the situation you're suddenly in. Then your phone buzzes in your hand.

"Go grab some clothespins and put them on your nipples"

The boy is outside, not looking at you as he furiously is typing into his phone.

What do you do:
*[[You are horny enough, go along with everything he says]]
*[[lock yourself in the restroom]]

[[Category: Oops! You're Naked!]]

No way! Shoo the little pervert away. He shouldn't be seeing this

ThaneOfAss — Sat, 04 Jun 2016 01:32:28 GMT

ThaneOfAss: Grammar and spelling

'''Status: Naked and Shot'''

You watch as the little boy gives you a nasty smile and pulls out a phone. You see a flash come from the phone as you try to cover yourself. The boy then draws his fingers against the windows of the laundromat, something that looks like a phone number. You grab your phone from your purse and text the number.
"You need to stop" you send to the number.
"If you don't want me to post these pictures everywhere in town, you're gonna do whatever I say. Understand, slut?"

You read over his text, in shock at the situation you're suddenly in. Then your phone buzzes in your hand.

"Go grab some clothespins and put them on your nipples"

The boy is outside, not looking at you as he furiously is typing into his phone.

What do you do:
*[[You are horny enough, go along with everything he says]]
*[[lock yourself in the restroom]]

[[Category: Oops! You're Naked!]]

You are horny enough, go along with everything he says

ThaneOfAss — Sat, 04 Jun 2016 01:31:12 GMT

ThaneOfAss: Grammar and spelling

'''Status: Naked and Obedient'''

You walk over to a little basket lying in the back of the laundromat, then return to the front of the building. Hoping you can get this little perv off a little faster you take an extra clothespin. You slowly and sensually rub your nipples erect for the boy, and gingerly attach each clothespin. Then you reach between your legs, stroking your clit before pinching the last one on, sending a wave of pleasure through you.

Your phone vibrates "you read my mind bitch, now get on all fours and present yourself to the window"

Once again you are surprised and terrified by the intensity of this little boy, yet have no choice but to comply. Your drooling pussy and ass are now proudly on display for the little pervert.

*bzzt* "Put your phone in your pussy slut, then clip your lips together"

You look back for a second confused, and see the boy with his pants down gripping his penis in one hand and his phone in the other.

Do you:
*[[Go along with the plan]]
*[[Go out and blow him instead]]

[[Category: Oops! You're Naked!]]

Roll Lydia over and take her ass

ThaneOfAss — Tue, 02 Feb 2016 21:52:51 GMT

ThaneOfAss: Grammar

You roll Lydia onto her stomach, find her ass, and spread her scaly cheeks. You're lubed up enough from her pussy that you slide into her anus with ease. Lydia perks up at this new intrusion and rears up. You hang on tight while she bucks beneath you like a wild bronco. You grab hold of her plump breasts and pump your pecker in and out of her ass. Lydia hisses and moans and seems to be in utter ecstasy.

It's a wild ride, squeezing and caressing her tits while she writhes and thrashes under you. You fuck her ass hard and fast, pumping her relentlessly.

"Oh, fuck, yes!" Lydia cries. "You've taken all my holes, one after another! Oh, fuck!"

Her heaving breasts seem to swell in your hands when she cums. The way her anal walls are rippling around your dick quickly proves too much for you. You groan and fill her rectum with jizz.

Do you:
*[[Pop your pecker out of Lydia's ass]]
*[[Keep riding Lydia's rear]]
{{SexRompStatus|Location=''[[The Freak Show Tent]]''|Health=Horny|MP=0|Level=4}}
[[Category: Smutty Sex Romp]]

Turn her five-month pregnancy into an eight-month pregnancy by adding the paper cones to all the candy

ThaneOfAss — Tue, 02 Feb 2016 21:23:06 GMT

ThaneOfAss: Grammer edit and added new choice

"You see? Candi has been looking this way three times now, and still she doesn't seem to get it."

"Perhaps she still doesn't think it's enough cotton candy to be worth it? She must see that I'm covered in it, the way I'm holding up my sweater and showing her my belly and tits!"

"I don't know... Candi sure eats a lot of cotton candy... Now I've got it!"

"What?" The woman looks at you. "It better not involve staining my precious sweater!"

"No, let's use all the paper cones to make the cotton candy look like much more! I bet Candi won't mind! Perhaps she even eats the cones with her candy..."

The woman nods at this. "It wouldn't surprise me, with what you've been telling me of this Candi girl."
So you begin.

The lady's hole is tightly stuffed with cotton candy, but you bunch up a few paper cones, and press them inside. At first, the cotton candy tries to escape outside, but you scoop it up with another paper cone, which you then mash into her pussy with the rest of them. You need to push both your fists hard into the lady while she presses back with everything she's got. Soon you're rewarded by her belly expanding out considerably.

"It's working!" she pants when you're resting. So far, she's managed to keep her sweater from falling back down onto her sticky and sweaty breasts.

After a while, you're done. The lady looks closer to ten months pregnant, but you still hope this will work. You help the lady to stand up and show herself to Candi. She can only take short, shallow breaths, no doubt because of her huge belly.

And your plan works! Candi gasps when she realizes what you've prepared for her and she immediately comes over, a wide grin on her face.

"Oooh... cotton candy! Is all that candy for me?"

Do you:
*[[Tell Candi she can eat as much out of the lady for free]]
*[[Tell Candi she can eat the lady out as long as she allows you to fuck her]]
*[[Ask Candi if she wants to help stuff her gift with even more cotton candy first]]
*[[Leave the carnival now that your work here is done]]
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[[Category: Smutty Sex Romp]]

Take your dick out and cum all over her hot body

ThaneOfAss — Thu, 12 Nov 2015 10:24:45 GMT

ThaneOfAss: Spelling

You cum all over her and she starts eating the cum off herself. You watch her as she swallows your steamy cum then stands up, cleans her clothes and says "You were the best fuck ever. Can you talk?"

[[Make a mouth that you could talk]]

[[Stay quiet and see what happens]]
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[[Category: +Infinity]]

Keep banging Lanie against the copier

ThaneOfAss — Wed, 21 Oct 2015 13:54:12 GMT

ThaneOfAss: Grammar

As the last trickles of come drip into Lanie's fertile slit, you ask her, "Rested yet? Ready for round two?"

"Excuse me?"

You commence banging her rear for all your worth. "Oh my god!" Lanie shouts. "Wait! It's! Oh.. ''Oh!'' Oh god! Oh, yes! Don't stop!"

"Don't worry your pretty tits sweetie, stopping's not on the agenda." God this Lanie is a fine piece! You should have bent her over ages ago. Listen to those wet moans! Lanie's pussy squeezes spongily against you with each thrust. Her thighs have nowhere to go but bang against the machine which seems to be spitting out shots of her knockers faster and faster. It's like watching a flip-book movie of her jiggling breasts. You hump her faster in hopes that the movie speeds up too. It does!

"Oh god! Fuck me, fuck me, fuck me!" screams Lanie.

She's making a lot of noise. Lanie doesn't seem like this would be the first time she's let herself get fucked at the office.

"You like getting fucked like this, eh?"

"Yes!"

"Fucked over the copy machine?" You emphasize the sentence with plunges of your petrified pecker into her pussy: ''Fucked''. ''Over''. ''Copy''. ''Machine!''

''"Yes! Oooo..!"''

"Some new guy? You hear him coming and make pics of your titties and wait for him to fill your soaking snatch with his heavy meat.."

But Lanie isn't able to respond any more. She's a jibbering mess of moans, grunts and squeaks, not to mention the plastic bangs and fizzes of the copier machine, which is getting quite the workout too. You can feel a happy burbling in your loins, and you pull Lanie's arms so that her ass leans back and you thrash against her with all your might -- ''In in in in in!'' Lanie screams and her arms thrash right out of your grasp and flail against the copier cover which knocks against the wall with a loud crack. As Lanie shakes and shivers in orgasm, you plunge your cock in a few more times and explode over her lips, shove it well in and fill her up with juice.

Do you:
* [[Bang Lanie even more]]!
* [[Have Lanie gobble your gobstopper]].
* [[Let Lanie finish her copying]].
* [[Make a Xerox movie]]!

{{SexRompStatus|Location=''[[Your Office]]''|Health=Horny|MP=0|Level=1}}
[[Category: Smutty Sex Romp]]

Try to check in naked

ThaneOfAss — Wed, 07 Oct 2015 00:24:39 GMT

ThaneOfAss: Spelling

'''Status: Naked and exhausted'''

You're too tired to care about your lack of attire and you sure as hell aren't squeezing into smelly wet clothes. You'll wash them in the morning. You grab your wallet from your purse and march straight up to the front desk, not even bothering to cover anything. You ring the bell and a young 22 year old brunette steps out of the office. Her eyes get wide and she looks like she's about to drop her jaw to the floor. Instead she composes herself and asks "What can I do for you, ma'am?"

"I just want a room", you respond. She calls the bellboy to escort you to your room, probably for safety reasons. Neither the clerk nor the bellboy complain about your obvious wardrobe deficit. They are very professional about it the whole time, though the giant bulge betrays his real feelings toward you. Who are you to talk? Your wet, naked pussy is like a billboard that says "Fuck me". You get to your room. What do you do?

*[[Go to the shower and "clean up"]]
*[[Tease the bellboy]]
*[[Go get a drink from the vending machine]]
*[[Pretend to need something and hit on the cute clerk]]
[[Category: Oops! You're Naked!]]

Check into a hotel for the night

ThaneOfAss — Wed, 07 Oct 2015 00:23:48 GMT

ThaneOfAss: Spelling

'''Status: Naked and tired'''

It's not even late but you feel tired. It must be the combination of the heat, the adrenaline rush of being caught naked, the long drive, and the sexual tension of not being able to masturbate the entire trip despite the nudity making you horny as hell. You pull up to a hotel. There aren't many people there, so you feel safe stepping out of the car and searching for your clothes. Good news is you found them, bad news is they're still sweaty and smelly. What do you do?

*[[Get your smelly clothes on and check in]]
*[[Try to check in naked]]
[[Category: Oops! You're Naked!]]

Just act natural

ThaneOfAss — Wed, 07 Oct 2015 00:22:56 GMT

ThaneOfAss: Spelling

'''Status: Naked and calm'''

"Hello, officer, what's the problem?", you ask innocently.
The policeman does a triple take. "Ma'am, why ain't you got clothes on? You know you can't drive butt nekkid here."
"Oh my God, I'm so sorry", you feign genuine surprise, "I was driving home from the nudist club just up the road and I just got so used to it that I forgot to wear clothes!"
You widen your legs a bit and raise your arms, pretending to stretch but really you're just giving the cop a better view of everything. The cop blushes deeply and silently watches you stretch. When you finish, he says "Try to be more careful, ma'am. Never know what can happen on the road. You have a good night now." The cop leaves and you can't believe what just happened. You just got pulled over totally naked and not only did you not get arrested, you didn't even get a speeding ticket! Driving naked rules! What do you do next?

*[[Go through a drive through for food]]
*[[Find a place to masturbate]]
*[[Check into a hotel for the night]]

[[Category: Oops! You're Naked!]]

You get caught speeding

ThaneOfAss — Wed, 07 Oct 2015 00:21:37 GMT

ThaneOfAss: Spelling

'''Status: Naked and busted'''

You are enjoying the thrill of being naked and the wind rushing over your body and then you notice red and blue lights in your mirror. Shit! You're totally naked and you can't reach the clothes you threw in the back of the car. You can't get out of the car and get them either. You are totally screwed now! Or are you?

*[[Act slutty to the cop]]
*[[Cry to the cop]]
*[[Cover yourself with your hands. If he doesn't see genitalia it's not illegal]]
*[[Just act natural]]
*[[Tell the cop off]]

[[Category: Oops! You're Naked!]]

Gas is low; go to the gas station

ThaneOfAss — Wed, 07 Oct 2015 00:20:25 GMT

ThaneOfAss: Spelling

'''Status: Driving bottomless'''

You love driving bottomless. It feels great, like the most natural thing in the world. So natural that after a couple hours of cruising, you get used to it and start focusing less on your nudity and more on your driving. The orange light goes off. You need gas. You pull up to the nearest gas station, get out of the car, select your fuel, and pump until your car is full. You don't even notice all of the other customers staring at you. When your car is full, you walk straight into the building and right toward the cashier as if buying gas with your ass and shaved pussy totally exposed was the most normal thing in the world. You reach for the debit card in your purse and try to hand it to the cashier but all he does is keep staring below your waist. That's when you realize what he's looking at and the blood runs straight to your face. You just pumped gas totally bottomless with your snatch plainly visible for all to see and now you walked up to the register putting your cunt on display for all of the customers and the cashier. What the hell are you going to do now?

*[[Play it cool as if this is a normal thing]]
*[[Flirt with the cashier]]
*[[Joke about your bottomlessness to relieve the tension]]
*[[Make a deal with the cashier]]

[[Category: Oops! You're Naked!]]

Take off your jeans

ThaneOfAss — Wed, 07 Oct 2015 00:19:23 GMT

ThaneOfAss: Spelling

'''Status: Bottomless and feeling better'''

It's naughtier to drive with your cunt exposed but there's little chance of anyone noticing. You pull over, whip off your jeans and toss them in the back seat. You start driving again and notice how much better it feels without those tight jeans on. You cruise down the road enjoying the breeze in your hair and on your twat. You like this a lot and you wonder why you never tried it before. What happens next?

*[[You get hungry and go for fast food]]
*[[Gas is low; go to the gas station]]
*[[Pull into a rest stop]]
*[[You're still too hot, take off your top]]
*[[Explore your cunt]]

[[Category: Oops! You're Naked!]]

Abandon them and keep running. They'll just keep falling down

ThaneOfAss — Wed, 07 Oct 2015 00:03:35 GMT

ThaneOfAss: Spelling

'''Status: Bottomless and adrenalized'''

The panties are so wet they can't be used anymore. They'll just keep slipping down. And putting on sweaty panties would feel terrible in this heat. Besides, you wanted to be naughty. Running around a public pond pantiless with your shirt as a dress is pretty naughty. You enjoy the run so much you don't notice that your "dress" is riding up exposing the bottom of your cunt and most of your ass until you feel a breeze over your bare labia. What do you do?

*[[Let it keep riding up]]
*[[Pull it down]]
*[[Stop running sit down instead]]
*[[A sweaty riding up dress is no good. Take it off.]]

[[Category: Oops! You're Naked!]]

Maybe try kissing her on the mouth

ThaneOfAss — Tue, 25 Aug 2015 19:20:40 GMT

ThaneOfAss: Spelling

You can't take it anymore. You angle your body so that you're lying face to face, your nose an inch from touching hers. You reach up and put your palm against her cheek, and even the dark of the room, you can tell she's opened her eyes.

"What are you doing?" she says.

"Kissing you," you reply. You lean in just enough to gently press your lips to hers, and you feel her exhale through her nostrils, hard. Suddenly, her hand goes to the back of your head, and she's kissing you back. Her tongue invades your mouth slowly, very gently, and twirls around yours. She drapes a leg over yours and presses herself into you with her whole body. You manoeuvre your arms so that you're holding her to you as you kiss, and you groan into her mouth when you feel her press the soft warmth of her mound into your hard-on.

"I'm crazy about you," you whisper in the dark.

"It's mutual," comes her reply.

Before you know it, you're locked with her passionately, kissing and holding on to each other as if the world was ending. Your clothes come off quickly, and you're inside of her before you really even realize it. She clambers atop you, fumbling in the dark, but rides your body with hers. She can't take her lips from yours, and your hands roam the glory that is her body.

It feels like hours pass as the two of you make love, and then finally collapse back onto the couch, fully spent. She shivers against you, and you against her, both in post-orgasmic bliss. She kisses you twice more before she nuzzles her body to yours and drifts off to sleep. You're in heaven.

[[The very next morning, sun-up. With Melanie in your arms.]]

[[Category: The End of the World]]

Keep pounding fast and hope to cum while she is still in sight

ThaneOfAss — Sun, 02 Nov 2014 06:05:22 GMT

ThaneOfAss:

You decide to take advantage and keep going. She tells them she has to rest and she sits on the ground with her pussy exposed to you. Pretty soon you go off, and cum everywhere. Then she disappears, and quickly re-appears right in front of you and grabs your penis. She says "ah finally a cock!" and starts to suck on it. "You don't mind if I become your whore Ryan?" she says. You tell her yes and she inserts your cock into her pussy and goes at it hard. You know you are about to come.

Do you:
*[[High school/ask Kaylee if you come in her pussy in public]]
*[[High school/ switch to her ass and pound her there]]
*[[High school/Pull out and let her titts do the rest. ]]
{{HSTemplate|Health=100|Gender=Male|Social Group=Nerd|Equipment=Calculator,Backpack,notebooks and school books|Boyfriend/Girlfriend=Kalyee}}
[[Category: High School]]

Tell Brittany you need to see her tits so you have inspiration for jerking

ThaneOfAss — Sun, 02 Nov 2014 00:06:43 GMT

ThaneOfAss:

"Well, I'll need to see your tits before that can happen" you announce confidently.

She smiles at you, before removing her top and exposing her lovely melons for you to ogle.

Now what?
*[[Stare at her tits and jerk off]]
*[[Persuade her to have sex with you]]

[[Category: High School]]

Show Brittany your penis

ThaneOfAss — Sun, 02 Nov 2014 00:05:57 GMT

ThaneOfAss:

You open your pants and pull out your pecker. It's hard and throbbing and eager to get closer to her.

"Wow," Brittany says. "I... That's... Wow. Show me what that thing can do. Jerk it for me. I want to see it ''squirt''."

Do you:
*[[Jerk it for Brittany]]
*[[Tell Brittany to get down on her knees and kiss it]]
*[[Tell Brittany you need to see her tits so you have inspiration for jerking]]
{{HSTemplate|Health=100|Gender=Male|Social Group=Athlete|Boyfriend/Girlfriend=|Equipment=Shoes}}
[[Category: High School]]

You also have to go to the bathroom

ThaneOfAss — Sun, 02 Nov 2014 00:05:10 GMT

ThaneOfAss:

"Another one?" Mr. Oaky says. "Fine. Go. Anyone else? Remember, I will not accept "I was in the bathroom" as an excuse if you can't answer something on a test."

You hurry out of the room. At the bathrooms you pause, glance around to make sure no one is in the halls, then duck quickly into the girl's bathroom. Brittany is inside, standing by the sinks.

"Wow," Brittany says. "You're pretty brave, following me in here."

You don't feel brave. You feel desperate for sex. Being alone with Brittany has your cock throbbing with need.

Do you:
*[[Show Brittany your penis]]
*[[Pull Brittany's shirt off]]
{{HSTemplate|Health=100|Gender=Male|Social Group=Athlete|Boyfriend/Girlfriend=|Equipment=Shoes}}
[[Category: High School]]

Grab the freshman

ThaneOfAss — Sun, 02 Nov 2014 00:02:31 GMT

ThaneOfAss:

As she kisses you you grab her waist and kiss her back. Your cock is someone still hard even though you jizzed moments ago and you can't resist the urge to bang this sexy little slut.

You are now the only two left in the shower. You make your way across the shower room, still making out with each other and groping each other's bodies. She is short so you lift her off her feet and push her against the wall. Then you slide your huge cock inside her and bang her against the wall. You are surprised that the loud moans of pleasure she makes do not draw attention to the pair of you. Soon you cum again inside her. Having thoroughly enjoyed yourself you head back to the guy's locker room to get dressed and head to class.

[[History Class]]
{{HSTemplate|Health=100|Gender=Male|Social Group=Athlete|Boyfriend/Girlfriend=|Equipment=Shoes}}
[[Category: High School]]

Continue Showering

ThaneOfAss — Sun, 02 Nov 2014 00:01:04 GMT

ThaneOfAss:

You react casually and just put some shampoo in your hair. Sally smiles at you and walks over the freshman who is still bent over. Sally puts one legs on the floor on either side of the freshman and bends over. Your dick feels amazing in her mouth and it isn't long before you have to cum. You are surrounded by women and don't have alot of room to move so you have no choice but to release your load into her mouth. She sucks it clean, smiles and gets up, walks over to another shower to finish getting clean, then leaves the shower to get dressed.

The song finishes and the other girls follow Sally's lead. The freshman gives you a passionate kiss and places two hands on your ripped chest as she also turns to leave.

[[Grab the freshman]]

[[Walk back to the guy's locker room]]
{{HSTemplate|Health=100|Gender=Male|Social Group=Athlete|Boyfriend/Girlfriend=|Equipment=Shoes}}
[[Category: High School]]

Walk in

ThaneOfAss — Sat, 01 Nov 2014 23:58:43 GMT

ThaneOfAss:

You walk up to the shower still wearing your towel. "Hey there ladies." You smile mischievously and throw your towel to the ground. All of their eyes drop to your big dick. Some come back up to your face. Others linger on your cock or the rest of your amazing body.

As you walk into the shower you count the girls in there, there are about 8. Some of them back away, unsure what to do.
But two of the seniors walk towards you, clearly very turned on by you. Either by your cock or your body, you don't know which.

"What are you doing here, Harry?" One of the girls, Sally a busty senior asks you as she approaches. "Damn! I never realized how hot you are you!"

"Are you blind, Sally?" Another senior asks. "I always knew you were hot, Harry." She says as she passionately kisses you. You feel your dick twitch.

The seniors turn around. "Don't be scared girls it's just Harry."

Then you start showering in one of the showers. You should also use this time to actually get clean before class. A popular Kesha song comes on and all the girls start dancing. One of the girls you've never seen before dances over towards you. She looks like a freshman and has an amazing ass. She smiles sexily at you and turns around. Bumping that ass against your now hardening cock.

You both dance over into the middle of the shower room. Sally starts grinding on the freshman girls front and you feel another girl come up behind you. The freshman starts massaging Sally's big tits just as she massages your now fully hard cock with her ass. Then Sally starts making out with the freshman. Just as you realize this is a competition amongst them to decide who is the most adventurous and the biggest freak you feel another girl crawl under your legs and start licking your balls and the bottom of your shaft. The girls behind you reaches around and pushes the freshman's ass slightly away and fondles the tip of your cock.

The freshman clearly fears she is being outdone and as the one who started dancing with you first she is defensive. She starts grinding on you harder and harder getting lower and lower until she bends over completely putting her hands on the ground giving you a perfect view of her ass and pussy which is less than inches from your raging boner.

[[Continue Showering]]

[[Stick your dick in her]]
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[[Category: High School]]

Just watch them

ThaneOfAss — Sat, 01 Nov 2014 23:51:46 GMT

ThaneOfAss:

You hide behind the lockers. You can see them but they can't see you.

Damn! It's the swim team and they are looking mighty fine naked. One girl is going around slapping all of them on the ass. Then some Kesha comes on and they all start dancing. A couple of them are even grinding their naked bodies against each other. Your huge rock hard cock can't resist and you start stroking it faster and faster until you explode all over the floor. Then you go back and shower in the guys locker room and head to class.

[[History Class]]
{{HSTemplate|Health=100|Gender=Male|Social Group=Athlete|Boyfriend/Girlfriend=|Equipment=Shoes}}
[[Category: High School]]

Ask her if she wants you to spot her

ThaneOfAss — Sat, 01 Nov 2014 23:47:27 GMT

ThaneOfAss:

She turns towards you and smiles.
"Yeah that'd be great, I was just about to do some squats. I know you don't really need anyone to spot you on those. But I'd feel safer if our school's mile record-holder was watching me."

You laugh as you both walk towards the bars.

"I could never run. My boobs are just too big," she says laughing. "They bounce everywhere and they really weigh me down. I have to wear two sports bras just to workout here." She laughs again.

She starts doing squats facing away from you. You can't take your eyes off her amazing ass. Well except when she goes low enough that you can see the top of her breasts.

[[Walk up behind her so that your hard dick is touching her ass]]

[[Pull your shorts off and jack off]]

[[Watch to make sure she is ok]]

{{HSTemplate|Health=100|Gender=Male|Social Group=Athlete|Boyfriend/Girlfriend=|Equipment=Shoes}}
[[Category: High School]]

Lie down next to her

ThaneOfAss — Sat, 01 Nov 2014 23:45:08 GMT

ThaneOfAss:

She lies next to you panting for a bit, then rolls on top of you. You start to make out ferociously then she slides her hand down and rubs your dick from the outside of your running shorts. Soon you are as hard as a rock. She pulls her hand back up to your chest and grinds her naked pussy against your shorts.

[[Pull your shorts off]]

[[Push her head down gently]]
{{HSTemplate|Health=100|Gender=Male|Social Group=Athlete|Boyfriend/Girlfriend=|Equipment=Shoes}}
[[Category: High School]]

User talk:Platypus

ThaneOfAss — Mon, 28 Oct 2013 18:50:24 GMT

ThaneOfAss:

Since this page has become rather cluttered, I've moved old discussions to the archive pages below. Feel free to leave new messages here. I'll get back to you ASAP!

*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive1]]
*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive2]]
*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive3]]

>Add new comments below. Do not add new comments to the archives.

User: Mreurotic
Date: 10/10/2013
Hey, I messaged you once before, and was now curious about something. Is there a way to find out when new pages within your story are added? I ask this because I come on weekly, and hate having to travel through every option to see if there is anything new. I was also wondering if you had your own website somewhere, and if you did, could you share it? Thank you.

P.S. If you, or anyone reading this, wanted to email me, you can at townsville_strikers@hotmail.com

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Thank you for the constructive criticism without being a jerk, and for not deleting my contribution. I admit that was my very first edit on the site. Your adventure is my favourite on the site so far and I may have gotten a bit carried away! - ThaneOfAss

Still new to site. I see your warning and am trying to figure out what you mean it. I'm just working on structure atm and apologize if I left out something important but i'm still working around the main structure and am not finished so please don't delete my work. My thanks, ~ MixedMojo

Hey there - just wondered if you'd like to read and/or comment on my story. Am new to the site. The story is [[The Punishment of Claire and Cassandra]]. Any tips/criticisms on the story or using the wiki would be most appreciated. [[User:Hornlarry|Hornlarry]] 00:09, 15 August 2013 (UTC)

User:creat0r
Yeah, I know I'm not the best at grammar, and I know I forgot the location in the status bar. *facepalms*

Anyways, maybe you or someone else good at grammar could review the pages I make? I don't want to impose or force you to work.
Just asking! Anyways, thank you so much for fixing my little problems. :)
User:creat0r
What do you mean? I looked over my additions and I can't see any problems.
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User:Mreurotic
Sorry if my grammar isn't up to standards. I love that story arc, yet since nothing was added for a while, I thought I could help. I can see 1 punctuation error, yet that is it. Sorry if I make mistakes.

User: Mreurotic
I do admit that I am distracted at times, often writing an addition to your things, as well as on another site trying a 'choose your own adventure' style thing with the comments. I will take into consideration your advice, and re-edit what I have put up to keep it up to your standard. I hope that you do find my writing up to standard, as part of my dream is to become a writer, and this is good experience for me to learn.

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User:RoodyPoo
Uhhh...don't delete my page. It's obviously a WIP. Let me finish it before you decide if it's good enough or not.
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User:Masterdill22
Hey, i just recieved your message about leaving my title to the category thing, and I'm somehwat confused... i dont mind if you edit them to meet the requirements, oh and also, how easy is my story to access right now since its just been created?
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Hey, sorry. How do I add my title to the category thing?

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I am just curious as to why my pages On Xozen Infection? I am very confused.If i did something wrong please inform before you delete it. *Seth Xozen*

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I apologize for misspelling "brakes" in Rampage. Thanks for the heads up. -[[User:Tower0505|Tower0505]]

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Quick question, how do I make my story available to the public? -[[User:RedJenny69|Jessica<3]]

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I wanted to try to fix the 'Hot Mom' pages that you deleted because they weren't catagorized but my first and only attempt failed so feel free to delete that attempt. I was trying to keep the original content and just add what ever it was missing but couldn't make it work. Didn't mean to side-step your authority or anything like that and apologize if it created a miss understanding. - Black Dragon 25
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Hey how do I add the title to the catagory? - Yougotmyshirt

It's great the sight has decreased the page load time. It was getting to unbearable levels. However the 20 page per hour thing is god awful. Can that be edited some how so ppl are not waiting a whole hour? Like say down to 2 or 3 per minute.--[[User:Yihman1|Yihman1]] 05:02, 20 April 2013 (UTC)

Hi, youve sent me 2 warnings on page catagorization. I'm new here, how do I do that? 6 june 2013

== alternative site? ==

Hi,

These last months the site has been unbearably slow making it practically unusable, and despite repeated contacts the site admin Rob Kohr does not seem interested in acknowledging that his quick fixes aren't real solutions. Since I see no indication on his part a comprehensive fix restoring this site to normal responsiveness is forthcoming any time soon, I'd like to ask you if you know of any other free wiki site with a no-censorship policy, Platypus? Regards, [[User:Anedwcan|Anedwcan]] 06:16, 8 July 2013 (UTC)

== Views ==

Really quick question, I can't see the amount of views I am getting per page anymore. Is this the same for everybody or did I change a setting?

Thanks, Bojangles

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Hello! Just curious about why you deleted my page. - [[User:FrozenFlamingFire|FFF]]

In regards to your last comment on my talk page, I just wanted to say that I respect that rampage is your story, and if you don't want me posting there, then just say the word; I will respect that.

I put up a couple of stories last night, one of which I found in a folder which I thought I had posted a long time ago, the other of which I wrote in a bit of a hurry. For that reason, I must have forgotten to make sure that they conformed to your preferred punctuation style, and I apologize for that.

In regard to your last comment on my talk page, allow me to say, "Thank you". You said everything I had hoped you would say, and I feel encouraged to keep writing, and to follow http://editthis.info/create_your_own_adventure/Punctuation_with_dialogue.

My academic background is in descriptive grammar, and I have since moved to work with editing, which is of course prescriptive, but I never work with fiction writing, so I haven't had cause to study use of punctuation in quotations before.

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User: Hwolin

Sorry about any grammar mistakes, I thought I had looked over it and caught them. Do you mind letting me know what I missed so I'm more aware of it next time?

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Hey it's me again. It seems that stories haven't been featured in a while. Are they chosen by the someone or can we just replace it with our own every week?

Thanks-Bojangler Aug/20/2013

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User:Darkrage6

Sorry for the way i've been acting, i'm not trying to get banned. Sometimes I don't always think before I post due to my Aspberger's Syndrome, I was out of line with what I said before and I regret it. I appreciate you showing what I did wrong with my last entry, that really helped me. So i'm going to take your advice and try and start my own story, i'll consider myself lucky if I turn out to be even half as good of a writer as you are, i'll try not to make my grammar look too sloppy. I actually did well in my English classes in college, but I guess it's not always so easy to adapt your skills at writing papers into writing stories on sites like this.
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I'll keep that in mind. Thanks. - Azmor

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Hi This is Pedobear12
Thank you for showing me how to add the category into the story, I was trying to do that, but gave up. turns out i was almost there :)
Anyway I was wondering if you could tell me how to make different lines in a single story merge.
In other words if one decision was made, how do I make the lines merge with a bit down the line decisions of a different set.
What I am getting at is that if you choose a path it may lead to being captured or death.
if you choose the other path one of the decisions in that path could have the same result.
So instead of retyping it, I want to know how to direct the page to that same ending, especially if I think that ending was writen well?
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Hey this is Gaydude, I'm new with all these things, I have the basics like making a page and stuff down. Don't know a thing about adding the category thingy and also about merging parts of the story.

== Incomplete pages /options/status bar/category from the previous page. ==

Hey thanks for the feedback. I am fairly new to this site and don't yet know how to make new pages, add choices or add category bar. I don't mean to leave the story on a limb, it's just I don't know how to add options and selections. Could you message me and explain these to me if it's not too much trouble.

Shove another pineapple up her ass

ThaneOfAss — Mon, 28 Oct 2013 18:22:52 GMT

ThaneOfAss:

Marvelling at your luck of discovering such a kinky devil in this cherry, you grab another pineapple before breaking off the leaves on the one still in her ass for easier access.

Then you get to work on pushing the second pineapple in, using it to force the first one even deeper inside her, causing her to shudder and groan in both pain and pleasure. She starts grunting and moaning through clenched teeth every time you push a little deeper.

"Oh my god keep going!!! This hurts so much but it feels SO GOOD! I can feel them going deeper...holy SHIT you're destroying my ass and ''I LOVE IT''!!!"

It's tough work but eventually you get the second one in far enough for her asshole to close around the base of the leaves, giving her a tail! You wonder for a moment just how deep you've pushed them inside her when her startled gasp catches your attention, "Holy shit, my belly is huge! I look ''pregnant''!" She starts rubbing her stomach while still in shock, the thought of how absolutely full her ass nearly pushing you both over the edge, judging by the gushing river her pussy has become and your huge prick about ready to burst.

Do you:
*[[Shove your dick into her pussy and fuck her senseless]]
*[[Shove a pineapple up her pussy as well]]
*[[Grab her "tail" and twist the pineapple inside her, giving her one awesome anal orgasm]]
{{SexRompStatus|Location=''[[The Food Mart]]''|Health=Horny|MP=0|Level=1}}
[[Category: Smutty Sex Romp]]

Shove another pineapple up her ass

ThaneOfAss — Mon, 28 Oct 2013 18:21:28 GMT

ThaneOfAss:

Marvelling at your luck of discovering such a kinky devil in this cherry, you grab another pineapple before breaking off the leaves on the one still in her ass for easier access.

Then you get to work on pushing the second pineapple in, using it to force the first one even deeper inside her, causing her to shudder and groan in both pain and pleasure. She starts grunting and moaning through clenched teeth every time you push a little deeper.

"Oh my god keep going!!! This hurts so much but it feels SO GOOD! I can feel them going deeper...holy SHIT you're destroying my ass and I LOVE IT!!!"

It's tough work but eventually you get the second one in far enough for her asshole to close around the base of the leaves, giving her a tail! You wonder for a moment just how deep you've pushed them inside her when her startled gasp catches your attention, "Holy shit, my belly is huge! I look ''pregnant''!" She starts rubbing her stomach while still in shock, the thought of how absolutely full her ass nearly pushing you both over the edge, judging by the gushing river her pussy has become and your huge prick about ready to burst.

Do you:
*[[Shove your dick into her pussy and fuck her senseless]]
*[[Shove a pineapple up her pussy as well]]
*[[Grab her "tail" and twist the pineapple inside her, giving her one awesome anal orgasm]]
{{SexRompStatus|Location=''[[The Food Mart]]''|Health=Horny|MP=0|Level=1}}
[[Category: Smutty Sex Romp]]

Fuck her standing up with your hand in her ass

ThaneOfAss — Mon, 28 Oct 2013 18:19:19 GMT

ThaneOfAss:

Her pussy feels so good clenched around your dick that you can help fucking her again. With your hand buried in her bowels, you thrust your prick in and out of her tight twat. you pump her furiously, making her gasp and moan and shudder. You twist and turn your hand inside her rear, forcing her to meet the thrusts of your dick by pushing her from behind. She trembles like a leaf, then cries out as a powerful orgasm vibrates through her body. You grunt loudly as your dick erupts, spurting long jets of semen into her womb.

"Oh, god...," she says with a gasp. "Please, enough... I won't be able to walk for a week. I might not be able to stand!"

Your probing fingertips finally latch onto the lost banana deep inside her rectum.

Do you:
*[[Squish the banana and pull the peel out of her ass]]
*[[Leave the banana lodged in her rectum and keep on fucking her]]
*[[Push the banana further in so you have to go deeper]]
{{SexRompStatus|Location=''[[The Food Mart]]''|Health=Horny|MP=0|Level=1}}
[[Category: Smutty Sex Romp]]

Shove another pineapple up her ass

ThaneOfAss — Mon, 28 Oct 2013 18:06:10 GMT

ThaneOfAss:

Marvelling at your luck of discovering such a kinky devil in this cherry, you grab another pineapple before breaking off the leaves on the one still in her ass for easier access.

Then you get to work on pushing the second pineapple in, using it to force the first one even deeper inside her, causing her to shudder and groan in both pain and pleasure. She starts grunting and moaning through clenched teeth every time you push a little deeper.

"Oh my god keep going!!! This hurts so much but it feels SO GOOD! I can feel them going deeper...holy SHIT you're destroying my ass and I LOVE IT!!!"

It's tough work but eventually you get the second one in far enough for her asshole to close around the base of the leaves. You wonder for a moment just how deep you've pushed them inside her when her startled gasp catch your attention, "Holy shit, my belly is huge! I look ''pregnant''!" She starts rubbing her stomach while still in shock, the thought of how absolutely full her ass nearly pushing you both over the edge, judging by the gushing river her pussy has become and your huge erection about ready to burst.

Do you:
*[[Shove your dick into her pussy and fuck her senseless]]
*[[Shove a pineapple up her pussy as well]]
*[[Grab her "tail" and twist the pineapple inside her, giving her one awesome anal orgasm]]
{{SexRompStatus|Location=''[[The Food Mart]]''|Health=Horny|MP=0|Level=1}}
[[Category: Smutty Sex Romp]]

Shove another pineapple up her ass

ThaneOfAss — Mon, 28 Oct 2013 18:04:35 GMT

ThaneOfAss: Created page with 'Marvelling at your luck of discovering such a kinky devil in this cherry, you quickly grab another pineapple before breaking off the leaves on the one still in her ass for easier…'

Marvelling at your luck of discovering such a kinky devil in this cherry, you quickly grab another pineapple before breaking off the leaves on the one still in her ass for easier access.

Then you get to work on pushing the second pineapple in, using it to force the first one even deeper inside her, causing her to shudder and groan in both pain and pleasure. She starts grunting and moaning through clenched teeth every time you push a little deeper. "Oh my god keep going!!! This hurts so much but it feels SO GOOD! I can feel them going deeper...holy SHIT you're destroying my ass and I LOVE IT!!!"

It's tough work but eventually you get the second one in far enough for her asshole to close around the base of the leaves. You wonder for a moment just how deep you've pushed them inside her when her startled gasp catch your attention, "Holy shit, my belly is huge! I look ''pregnant''!" She starts rubbing her stomach while still in shock, the thought of how absolutely full her ass nearly pushing you both over the edge, judging by the gushing river her pussy has become and your huge erection about ready to burst.

Do you:
*[[Shove your dick into her pussy and fuck her senseless]]
*[[Shove a pineapple up her pussy as well]]
*[[Grab her "tail" and twist the pineapple inside her, giving her one awesome anal orgasm]]
{{SexRompStatus|Location=''[[The Food Mart]]''|Health=Horny|MP=0|Level=1}}
[[Category: Smutty Sex Romp]]

Pry the ex-cherry off the brunette's twat

ThaneOfAss — Mon, 28 Oct 2013 17:09:23 GMT

ThaneOfAss:

It isn't easy, but with some effort you manage to peel the ex-cherry's face off of the brunette's snatch. The brunette hastily collects herself and hurries away, as if she's afraid of being grabbed again.

"What have you done to me?" the former virgin asks. "It's like you've broken a dam or something and now there's a flood loose inside me! I need... I need penis! Or pussy! Or both! ''Anything''!"

Do you:
*[[Stick your dick back in her deflowered snatch]]
*[[Direct her attention to the cucumbers]]
*[[Shove the ex-virgin at a random passing woman]]
{{SexRompStatus|Location=''[[The Food Mart]]''|Health=Horny|MP=0|Level=1}}
[[Category: Smutty Sex Romp]]