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-‘I will die,’ she thought, ‘and I want to.’

Pandafoxygirl — Sun, 17 Jan 2010 16:16:18 GMT

Pandafoxygirl: Created page with ''I will die' she thought feeling pain in your entire body 'and I want to.' Thinking this she collapses. She's dead. END Category:Burning Leaves'

'I will die' she thought feeling pain in your entire body 'and I want to.'

Thinking this she collapses.

She's dead.

END

[[Category:Burning Leaves]]

-Fuscia Frozen

Pandafoxygirl — Sun, 17 Jan 2010 16:12:16 GMT

Pandafoxygirl:

"Fuchsia, Fuchsia!!" A voice that seemed to be miles away screamed.

Fuchsia was flowing somewhere, it was pitch dark there and Fuchsia had no idea where she was, she just tried to find a way out so she walked in the direction where the voice came from.

"Fuchsia, wake up at once!!" she heard again and slowly a light began appearing.

Fuchsia slowly opened her eyes and saw Alice, her mother. Alice's purple eyes were full of fear, sadness and rage as she walked from one side to another.

"Wa's up?" Fuchsia mumbled shielding her eyes from the light that entered her room.

"We're going" Alice sniffled.

"Okay, okay, just call me when you need me" Fuchsia mumbled calmly thinking that her parents were just going to shop and turning under the covers.

"You don't seem to understand, we're going, we're moving, so just stop being lazy and pack your stuff" Alice halfly screamed pulling Fuchsia out of her bed.

"WHAT!!??" Fuchsia screamed pulling her arm out of her mothers grip, "but I don't want to go!!"

"Look, I just can't stand your father so we're going" Alice yelled, tears flowing out of her eyes.

"And why so suddenly?" Fuchsia screamed with a over beaten voice "oh whatever, I'm staying, that you know!!"

"No way, you're coming with me want it or not, and no but's" Alice cried walking out of the messy room.

"I HATE YOU!!!" Fuchsia screamed with all her power as tears came down her cheeks, she sat down on her bed and insisted to pack her stuff.

Fuchsia:

[[-Sees that there is no other option and begins to pack her stuff.]]

[[-Insists to pack in any way.]]

[[Category:Burning Leaves]]

-Fuscia Frozen

Pandafoxygirl — Sun, 17 Jan 2010 16:11:40 GMT

Pandafoxygirl: Created page with '"Fuchsia, Fuchsia!!" A voice that seemed to be miles away screamed. Fuchsia was flowing somewhere, it was pitch dark there and Fuchsia had no idea where she was, she just tried…'

-Sit down on the chair and don't move.

Pandafoxygirl — Sun, 17 Jan 2010 16:01:22 GMT

Pandafoxygirl:

Loli started walking to the chair the nurse was talking about and sat down. Before Loli could say something else, the nurse started cutting her hair and Loli didn’t move even a finger because she was scared that the nurse would cut her in her ear.

After a few minutes Loli looked in the mirror again and she didn’t know how to thank the nurse for all she had done for her, "thanks" was all she could bring out.

"It wasn't a big deal" the nurse replied "you still look very hungry, go to your bed, the others should already be there, and I'll make some more food for you."

What will Loli do?:

[[-Listen to the nurse and go to your bed.]]

[[-Don't listen and escape through the window as soon as the nurse has gone.]]
[[Category: Burning Leaves]]

-Ask where she got the scissors from.

Pandafoxygirl — Sun, 17 Jan 2010 15:58:19 GMT

Pandafoxygirl:

"Hey, where did you get that scissors from? They weren't here a minute ago" Loli asked surprised.

"I got them with a little magic spell, didn't you hear me say ''sagsha kros''?" the nurse said and another pair of scissors appeared in her hand.

"Cool" Loli said.

"Okay, now sit on this chair and don't move or I will cut your ear" the nurse said.

What will Loli do?:

[[-Sit down on the chair and don't move.]]

[[-Say you're okay with this haircut.]]

[[-Grab the scissors and attack the nurse.]]
[[Category: Burning Leaves]]

-"Oh, yes please."

Pandafoxygirl — Sun, 17 Jan 2010 15:55:00 GMT

Pandafoxygirl:

"Oh, yes please" Loli answered with enthousiasm.

"Okay then, follow me."

The nurse walked towards a door and Loli followed her. When they were inside the bathroom, Loli saw a big bath. She took off her dirty, teared and old clothes and got inside the bath. The nurse washed her and from the dirty and black person that she was, she became clean again.

When Loli got out of the bath she was dried with a towel. The nurse put her in a new and clean pajamas. It was a pretty blue pajamas. Then the nurse brushed Loli's hair, which wasn't black anymore; now it was beautiful long, straight and gold blonde hair. Then Loli had to brush her teeth, which were black and dirty and after she finished brushing them for a half hour, they were as white as pearls. Then she looked at herself in a mirror. She was surprised because that was the first time she saw herself and she couldn't believe she was so thin and that she was so clean after years and years of being dirty.

"Wow" Loli said "I didn’t knew I was so beautiful, the only problem is that my bang is so long that I can't even see."

"No problem, I'll cut it for you, and it will be better if I cut your hair too, it's really too long" the nurse said and got scissors out of nowhere.

What does Loli do?:

[[-Ask where she got the scissors from.]]

[[-Stay quiet and let her cut your hair.]]
[[Category:Burning Leaves]]

-Eat the bacon and eggs.

Pandafoxygirl — Sun, 17 Jan 2010 15:14:41 GMT

Pandafoxygirl:

Loli began eating and she found it out to be the most delicious thing she had ever eaten.

"What is this?" she asked the nurse, who seemed to be surprised by that question.

"Don’t you know?" the nurse asked. "That's bacon and eggs and some orange juice. It’s a very typical plate from England."

"Really?" Loli said "I never have eaten this before, but I have to say, it’s delicious."

When Loli finished eating, the nurse said, "Do you want to take a warm bath? I think that you will like it."

What does Loli reply?:

[[-"Oh, yes please."]]

[[-"No thanks."]]
[[Category:Burning Leaves]]

-‘I will die,’ she thought, ‘but I don’t want to, I have to keep on.’

Pandafoxygirl — Sun, 17 Jan 2010 15:08:17 GMT

Pandafoxygirl:

'I will die,' she thought 'but I don’t want to, I have to keep on.'

She opened her eyes and without knowing how she was able to do it, she got on her staggering foott and started walking again. She had no idea where she got that power from but she couldn’t control her foott anymore.

She had been walking for hours, even the sun already was rising from behind the mountains, and she didn’t knew where she was going, she couldn’t feel anything anymore, and after she came out of the forest she had been walking through for a lot of time, there came a big, white castle in sight. She was surprised to see something that beautyful and out of nowhere her sense of life came back, she screamed, the pain was to strong, and she fainted, again…

When she woke up again she didn’t feel the cold anymore, although the hunger and the pain were still there, but what she found out to be strange was that she was lying on something soft, warm and dry.

'Where am I?' she thought, 'I can hear voices, did someone find me?'

Loli opened her drowsy eyes a bit and saw that she was lying on a bed and that some people were standing around her.

"Look, she’s waking up" a young woman's voice said somewhat excited.

What will Loli ask first?:

[[-“Where am I?”]]

[[-"Who are you?"]]

[[-"Am I dead?"]]
[[Category:Burning Leaves]]

-Walk across the street in search for a little bit of food or for something to keep warm.

Pandafoxygirl — Sun, 17 Jan 2010 15:06:56 GMT

Pandafoxygirl:

Loli walked across the cold and dark street in search for a little bit of food or for something to keep warm, no mather what it was, but she couldn’t find anything. She kept walking and walking until she fell down on the ground, passing out.

When she woke up she didn’t know where she was but she could feel the messy, cold and wet floor under her and she was to tired to open her eyes, the only thing she knew except of laying on a cold, wet and messy floor, was that she was still outside in the rain and that her hunger and cold were so extreme that she couldn’t almost feel it anymore.
'I'd wish Street was here' Loli thought 'she'll know what to do' but Street was nowhere.

What will she think?:

[[-‘I will die,’ she thought, ‘but I don’t want to, I have to keep on.’]]

[[-‘I will die,’ she thought, ‘and I want to.’]]
[[Category:Burning Leaves]]

-Lolita/Loli Burned

Pandafoxygirl — Sun, 17 Jan 2010 15:05:20 GMT

Pandafoxygirl:

It was a dark stormy night in August. Everyone was sleeping and dreaming in a warm and soft bed, except one. Her name was Lolita Burned but she used to call herself Loli, and so did others, she was a homeless orphan who lived on the street. She didn’t have any friends whose home she could sleep at. She did knew some other homeless kids from the 'street kids' club but no one else except for the look of them. She was starving from an eating hunger in her stomach and an icy cold.

What should she do?:

[[-Walk across the street in search for a little bit of food or for something to keep warm.]]

[[-Sit down somewhere, hiding from the rain and trying to warm yourself.]]

[[-Keep walking and think about how much you wanna die.]]
[[Category:Burning Leaves]]

Begin the story

Pandafoxygirl — Sun, 17 Jan 2010 15:03:27 GMT

Pandafoxygirl:

First of all, decide from whose eyes you wanna see the story happen:

[[-Lolita/Loli Burned]] (powers: Fire control, Elasticity, Mediumship, Telescopic vision and Puppet master)

[[-Fuscia Frozen]] (powers: Freezing, Will command, Water control, Shadow creep and Telekinesis)

[[-Lilly Leaf]] (powers: Air control, Copycat, Electric manipulation, Healing and Shape shifting)

[[-Rose Leaf]] (powers: Plant manipulation, Sound manipulation, Shield, Premonition and Lie detection)
[[Category:Burning Leaves]]

Burning Leaves

Pandafoxygirl — Sun, 17 Jan 2010 14:59:13 GMT

Pandafoxygirl:

Hey everybody, I'll start of with introducing a bit:
When I become big, I want to be a writer and Burning Leaves is one of the stories I've been working on.
Burning leaves is gonna be a trilogy about four girls: Lolita (Loli for short) Burned, Fuchsia Frozen, Rose Leaf and Lilly Leaf.
The four girls have special powers and are invited for a school where they'll learn controling those powers.

Actually I don't have a name for the real story yet but the first book of the trilogy will be called Burning Leaves, the second Frozen Leaves and the third will be Frozen Fire or Burning Ice (haven't decided yet).

Well about editing the story: If anyone except me will edit this story I´ll delete the edited part so that it's clear.

[[Begin the story]]
[[Category:Burning Leaves]]

User talk:Platypus

Pandafoxygirl — Sun, 17 Jan 2010 08:09:38 GMT

Pandafoxygirl: /* Thanks */

Since this page has become rather cluttered, I've moved old discussions to the archive page below. Feel free to leave new messages here. I'll get back to you ASAP!

== About Contributing ==
I'm more than happy to follow you're guidelines but you weren't very specific about what you didn't like. I am
new to site, so bear with me. How did I deviate from the story style for one thing, I thought I followed it quite accuratley
from what I had read until that point. The page your reffering to that was a dead end, I was going to finish editing it
actually, it wasn't finished, I was going to have him go back to his apartment. (the arc had to logically end at some point,
but I realised you probly didn't want me to end the story). I didn't finish since I had to eat dinner lol. Also, my grammar
is fine and if anything only needs minor editing. What structuring? You mean text codes? How are they wrong?
Anyhoo, hope you get back to me,
Numenorean

- Dear Platypus,
We, the users behind "'''Hey its'''", would like to thank you for the unban. We promise
not to be abusive to others' stories or the site - yes, other users' stories have unlimited possibilities,
but it adds that special zazz to ours. We would like to call a truce between us, and an agreement for you to leave our edits
alone or a notification of said edit.
Thank you,
'''Jims Barbeque'''

== Deletions Requested ==
In my efforts to make second person stories have choices only involving the protagonist, I have made three pages unnecessary:
*[[Screams her head off]]
*[[Agree enthusiastically]]
*[[Wait for your next move]]

Their content was rolled into the previous pages. --[[User:Torg|Torg]] 10:37, 15 October 2009 (PDT)

P.S. For all of my griping, I do appreciate the editing you've done on my pages. Thanks. --[[User:Torg|Torg]] 10:41, 15 October 2009 (PDT)

Sorry about the little mess, but I prefer the hyphen over the slash. Anyway, here are the blanked pages:
*[[Nightcaps/Stare back]]
*[[Nightcaps/Keep staring]]
*[[Nightcaps/Jeffrey's leaving?]]
*[[Nightcaps/What's wrong?]]
*[[Nightcaps/Holding Jeffrey's hand]]
Oh and if I can ever make it easier on you by doing something differently (still getting the hang of CYOA, not to mention wiki-editing in general), don't hesitate to point out my noobery. I obviously don't need to invite you to change anything that... well, that you would change anyway, haha. Thanks! [[User:NightChime|NightChime]] 03:00, 19 October 2009 (PDT)

[[User talk:Platypus/Archive1]]

== Please Contribute more! ==

You're probably the user that is on this site the most and are really creative, can you please contribute more to my story, "High School?"(Just not Gothic male or female please!)

Thanks--[[User:Gr1mm|Gr1mm]]

'''EDIT''':
Hey, there is something I would like you to do on my High School story. the link is here: *[["Um, well I thought we were going to....Well....You know....Do it...." you say nervously and embarassed.]] It's the ONLY thing (so far) that I would like you to do on goth. I chose you, because you're incredibly descriptive, you're good at writing all the sex and stuff, and you're pretty much one of the only trustworthy people on here. You can also edit any other page that branches off of that little page(if you know what I mean; I'm not good at explaining). I think it would be pretty cool if you used one of the props already in equipment. (it's in '''''Bold Italic''''') And weird stuff could happen, like their eyeliner, or their lipstick smears and ''stuff''. And if you want, Allison can use anything she has in her room (Use your imagination ;) ). And If it wouldn't bother you, you could do both points of view, from Jace's and Allison's point of view. It'll also show you what's already in her inventory. (Allison's point of view:*[["Um, well I thought we were going to....Well....You know....Do it...." Jace asks nervously.]])Please, if you get this, leave me a comment on my discussions page.

Thanks--[[User:Gr1mm|Gr1mm]]

== Hey Platypus ==

Hey platypus. You know my story, [[13 years]]. While it may not be a CYOA, I don't know where else to put it. So even though it doesn't belong here, can I continue doing it? PLEEASSSE? With a cherry on top(lol)?--[[User:Blablob|Blablob]] 06:25, 17 October 2009 (PDT)

Okay, well about the [[13 years]] topic, I'll fix it tomorrow. I will add choices instead, so no worries.--[[User:Blablob|Blablob]] 17:00, 17 October 2009 (PDT)

== Telling when a story was last worked on ==

Is there a way to tell when a story was last added to? I want to do a bit of maintenance and move some stories into the Pit of Abandoned Stories, but unless I check every page, it's hard to tell if the story's been inactive since it was started last year, or if someone just added a page last Tuesday. Thanks. --[[User:Rawar|Rawar]] 15:25, 27 October 2009 (PDT)

==Tutorial==
I have started a [[Tutorial]]. If you want to give me a couple days, I can finish most of the pages myself (except for the video embedding. I'm not even sure that's possible. I heard someone talk about it in a story though.), but there may be some topics I've overlooked. If there are, would you please add them? Would you also make sure the info I included is accurate? Lastly, I'm not really sure where the appropriate place to put it would be. Right now it's residing in the G stories section. Maybe you can find a good place for it. --[[User:Rawar|Rawar]] 22:46, 28 October 2009 (PDT)

== Reversion needed? ==
Looks like the main page may need to be reverted. All the PG-13 stories found their way into the Quizzes section. Looks like it's a job only a sysop can do. --[[User:Rawar|Rawar]] 13:45, 30 October 2009 (PDT)

== What do you mean? ==

When you posted me about me taking away catagories for my pages, I misunderstood you. Do you mean you want me to start putting them, or not deleting them? I'm not the one who's been getting rid of them. In fact, I wouldn't even know how. Please don't delete my pages.--[[User:Blablob|Blablob]] 13:10, 13 November 2009 (PST)

what are you talking about? I never deleted it. Honostly! But, uh, yeah, I'll make sure I make catagories for my pages.--[[User:Blablob|Blablob]] 18:14, 13 November 2009 (PST)

After a little bit of thought, I've come to a decision. I'll be leaving the website. Er..I guess a better way to put is I won't be editing anymore. I used to do it all the time, but I just find it kind of boring now. So, yeah, see ya later, I guess.--[[User:Blablob|Blablob]] 16:15, 14 November 2009 (PST)

== Blablob is BACK, baby! ==

Hello, I'm back. Yes, after a while of thought and whatnot, I decided I'd give this place a second go. Now, my other stories--13 years, Icarly, and a few others--it's all behind me. I'm going to start focusing more on PG 13 stories rather than mature stories, and I'll probably work on 1 story, and make it really good, rather than making a bunch of stories. It won't be anything like 13 years: a long story with long chapters with barely any choices to make; I'm coming back for a fresh start. So, I hope you are glad to have me back, and I promise to take consideration into my mistakes in the past.--[[User:Blablob|Blablob]] 13:28, 19 December 2009 (UTC)

== Sorry About The Grammar ==

Last night I was pretty tired when I was typing all of that storyline. I ended up kind of ignoring all my mistakes... Thanks for the future reminder though.
--[[User:Kevinsims22|Orpheus]] 21:27, 24 December 2009 (UTC)

== A story ==

I know its not you genre of writing... But I found a story in the pit of abandoned stories that had nothing in it so i decided to take hold of it.. I was wondering if maybe you could help me out with it considering I know how great you are with your stories. Write now I only have about ten or so pages on it but I want it to be restored and out of the grave yard so I was wondering if you could help me with 5,000 B.C. [http://editthis.info/choose_Your_Own_Adventure/5,000_B.C.]

--[[User:Kevinsims22|Orpheus]] 03:07, 26 December 2009 (UTC)

== Guess I should report this to you ==

So while reading Warhammer: Sartosa, City of Pirates about a week ago I reached the page [[knock at the door]] which had an odd code.

http:// editthis.info/choose_your_own_adventure/Password_here

Supposedly a browser was to appear in which you could enter the password but obviously it’s not working. I briefly read the Wikipedia help articles but found no helpful information on how to fix it. So I used categories to cheat and get to the next page. I would have told you earlier but for some reason I did not.

So I’m wondering if this is some sort of bug that happened when the database was transferred and if it can be fixed. If not I can just start a new page at the page were you get the password and copy the entire story into a new story arc identical to the normal one except that you know the password.

Also, happy New Year and merry Christmas in arrears. (If you’re into that sort of thing).

[[User:Fletcher Peninsula]]

== Hey Platypus!! :D ==

This is what you wrote (I'll put in bold the things I wrote): Please follow the style of the story you are working on '''I don't get it, do you mean by this that I have to continue writing pages for Burning Leaves or does it mean that I have to write in third person in every page where I write? (which is the style I normally use)''' . The pages in University Daze do not start with dashes '''What are dashes? (I searched in my dictionary and it described the word as lines but I don't think it means that)''' . And again, include the category on every page you write. '''I would do that if I knew how to but I don't (*sigh* I still have a lot to learn about CYOA). Btw what to you mean with again? You never told me to before.'''

-pandafoxygirl- 17 January 2010 at 8:34 am (European time)

== Thanks ==

Oh, now I get it (I think), thanks. It's just that I'm actually Dutch, I'm pretty good at English but I still have to learn a lot.

Oh sorry then, I didn't think of it that way.

Okay then, from now on I'll also add categories to the page.

Thanks for helping me out ^_^;

pandafoxygirl 08:09, 17 January 2010 (UTC)

User talk:Platypus

Pandafoxygirl — Sun, 17 Jan 2010 08:09:10 GMT

Pandafoxygirl: /* Thanks */ new section

Tell him no thanks and that you'd rather walk

Pandafoxygirl — Sun, 17 Jan 2010 08:01:04 GMT

Pandafoxygirl:

"No thanks," you say not completely trusting him. "I prefer walking."

The guy looks a bit dissapointed but then says, "Okay then, it's up to you" and with that he drives off, leaving you alone.

''I should have agreed,'' you think as you look the at the way you still have to walk and begin walking up the hill.

After what feels like eternity, you finally arrive at the student center.

You enter the building and see a long line of first year students waiting to get their ID. When you make it to the head of the line, after another eternity, you are greeted by a jovial sort of woman behind the reception desk.

"Are you one of the new students?" she asks. "If so, do you have your papers?"

Do you:
*[[Rummage through your duffel for your papers]]
*[[Tell her that you've forgotten them]]
*[[Say that you're in the wrong place and leave]]
{{UnivStatus|Health=100|Height=5’ 8”|Weight=121 lbs|Gender=Female|Equipment=duffel with papers}}
[[Category: University Daze]]

User:Pandafoxygirl

Pandafoxygirl — Sun, 17 Jan 2010 07:57:13 GMT

Pandafoxygirl:

Hi there, I'm pandafoxygirl.

My hobbies are drawing, reading, writing, surfing the internet, listening to music, making new friends, talking/chatting with friends, playing computer games, etc.

My favourite book genres are action, adventure, fantasy, friendship, romance, suspense, general, science-fiction, mystery and a lot more.

I like animals, reading, drawing, writing, adventure, etc.

I don't like vegetables, cheese, that other people edit my stories (which happens a lot here on CYOA, nearly all the pages I have written are beeing edited, I really hate it when something like that happens, don't they get that I put a lot of work in it) and some things more.

I spend my free time surfing the internet (normally forums), listening to music, reading, writing or drawing.

I write a lot of stories but have only publiced two of my stories on the internet yet: one here on CYOA (''Burning Leaves'') and one on serebii (''Zoey's Pokémon adventure'')(www.serebiiforums.com). However I also like playing RPG (RolePlay Games) and have three on Gaia (www.gaiaonline.com) which are called ''Burning Leaves'' (similar to the story here but more expanded), ''Pokémon adventures'' (this one is more or less closed since nobody posts on it anymore) and ''Code Lyoko: XANA Returns'' which has just started.

On every other forum, if you see someone who's username is pandafoxygirl, it will be me. This is however except for DA (www.deviantart.com) where I'm called animepandalover.

User talk:Platypus

Pandafoxygirl — Sun, 17 Jan 2010 07:36:05 GMT

Pandafoxygirl: /* Hey Platypus!! :D */

User talk:Platypus

Pandafoxygirl — Sun, 17 Jan 2010 07:32:40 GMT

Pandafoxygirl: /* Hey Platypus!! :D */ new section

Tell him no thanks and that you'd rather walk

Pandafoxygirl — Sat, 16 Jan 2010 20:23:47 GMT

Pandafoxygirl:

"No thanks" you say not completely trusting him "I prefer walking."

The guy looks a bit dissapointed but then says: "okay then, it's up to you" and with this he drives off leaving you with your luggage.
'I should have agreed' you think as you look the at the way you still have to walk and begin walking up the hill carrying your heavy luggage.

After what looked like eternity, you finally arrive at the student center.

You enter the building and see a long line of first year students waiting to get their ID.

You:

[[-Don't want to wait in the line and pass everybody ignoring comments so you can get your ID fast.]]

[[-Wait patiently in the line.]]

[[-Why the hell do you need an ID? You can handle without it.]]
{{UnivStatus|Health=100|Height=5’ 8”|Weight=121 lbs|Gender=Female|Equipment=duffel full of textbooks}}

Tell him no thanks and that you'd rather walk

Pandafoxygirl — Sat, 16 Jan 2010 20:15:53 GMT

Pandafoxygirl: Created page with '"No thanks" you say not completely trusting him "I prefer walking." The guy looks a bit dissapointed but then says: "okay then, it's up to you" and with this he drives off leavi…'

-Turn off the alarm clock and get up.

Pandafoxygirl — Sun, 06 Sep 2009 10:35:54 GMT

Pandafoxygirl:

Gina turned off the alarm clock and stood up, she walked over to the calendar and saw that today was her tenth birthday. She jumped in excitement and runned over to her twin brother's room.

"Hey Dion wake up!! It's our birthday!!" Gina screamed excited in her brother's ears.

"Ah, stop shouting!!" Dion covered his ears in hurt, "sheesh, what's the matter with you, have you any idea how early it is?"

"Well, we have to wake up early today or we won't be able to get our pokémon!" Gina sweatdropped.

Dion's eyes became wide "AAAAHHHH!!!!! GINA WE HAVE TO HURRY OR WE'LL BE LATE FOR OUR POKÉMON!!!" Dion cried in horror.

"That' what I've been trying to tell you for two minutes already," Gina exclaimed as she slapped herself mentally.

In reality Dion and Gina looked a lot like each other except of them being twins from two different eggs, sure, they were a boy and a girl and they had different heights and different eye and hair colours but from personality they looked the same: they were wild and brave and active and lazy in one, they were creative and they liked the same things.

"Hurry, we have to hurry!!" Dion screamed racing through the whole house in order to prepare himself.

What should Gina do?:

[[-Take it easy and do your things in normal tempo.]]

[[-Hurry, you don't want to be late after all.]]
{{PokeStat|Equipment='''None'''|Health=N/A|Level=N/A}}
[[Category: Pokemon]]

User talk:PokeFREAK258

Pandafoxygirl — Sun, 06 Sep 2009 10:10:31 GMT

Pandafoxygirl: Stop editing my story please

DO NOT REMOVE categories from pages. EVER. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:48, 27 August 2009 (PDT)

Second and last warning. Do not delete categories or you will be banned from the site. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 18:46, 27 August 2009 (PDT)

== Stop editing my story please ==

Hey PokeFREAK258, please stop editing the part of the Hoenn region from the Pokemon-Your Adventure story please, I already have the whole storyline planned.

Talk:-Insist that you want your pokémon now.

Pandafoxygirl — Sun, 06 Sep 2009 10:07:33 GMT

Pandafoxygirl: