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Manichimon — Thu, 07 Mar 2013 23:47:16 GMT

Manichimon:

*ZIP*
Out flops your penis. All four girls crawl over to you. Amy lifts her shirt over her head and her skirt drops to the floor. She wraps her cunt around your cock and rides you till you cum. Each of the girls get you to cum twice inside their pussys and once in their mouths. You suggest that the boys may not be as large as you but they should fuck the boys in the room. Each boy got a 11 year old girl to fuck.

[[Leave the orgy to find more pussy]]
{{Foster Status|Identity=Jack Foster, [[Camp Counselor]]}}
[[Category:The Story of Jack Foster]]

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Manichimon — Thu, 07 Mar 2013 23:46:31 GMT

Manichimon:

A nerdy 15 year old high school student

Manichimon — Thu, 07 Mar 2013 23:24:03 GMT

Manichimon:

As you wake up to get ready for school, you see a very old man with a large beard sitting beside your bed.

"Who the hell are you? MOM, there's a pervert in my room!"

She doesn't answer and the guy continues to look at you.

You run out the room and see her frozen. In fact everything in the house is frozen. You look amazed as the man comes over to you.

"I'm no stalker Matt."

"How did you know my name?"

"Simple. I am god, and I am retiring. I have decided to give you all my powers." For some reason you know it's true but you're still worried.

"Does that mean I'm going to be completely holy and everything?" God laughs and explains that that was just him going senile, that he lived having fun his whole life until he went senile, created The Great Flood, and after that spent his time not interfering and waiting for someone who could take over his job. You believe it all and gratefully accept his gift. As he starts to disappear he gives one last comment.

"Take it easy for a while, get used to your powers. Otherwise you'll die from the strain."

So you just became a God.

What to do now?:

*[[Use the new powers to destroy the world]]
*[[Take it slow and go to school]]
*[[Go find out what your family is doing]]
*[[Take a stroll around the neighborhood]]

[[Category: The New God]]

Go to your second mission

Manichimon — Tue, 01 Jan 2013 00:36:31 GMT

Manichimon:

You walk into the front office of the local impound lot. Behind the filthy counter is a man reading a porn magazine. He looks up from his erotica and meets your gaze. “Can I help you?” he asks.
 Heart beating, you reply, “Yes, my car was towed. I believe you have it. It’s a black Expedition.”
 “License plate number?”
 You peer onto a piece of paper. The paper reads

<pre>Impound lot
Black Ford Expedition
2390-KN
under front seat
025</pre>
 “2390-KN,” you read aloud.
 He types something into his computer. After a moment, he says, “Yep, we have it. Just got it yesterday.”
 “May I see it?”
 He laboriously gets up from his desk and motions you to follow him. The two of you walk through the back door and out into the car lot. The bright mid-day sun beats down on your head and neck as you cross the car lot to the back corner. “So are you here to reclaim your car? Because it’s pretty beat up.”
 "No, I just left some papers in the car,” you reply.
 The man approaches a black Ford Explorer with the back bumper mashed in, the side all scratched up, and the back door mashed up and held to the car with rope. He asks you, “This the one?”
 “Yeah, this is it. Gee, beat up is a bit of an understatement.”
 “Someone used it for a robbery,” he says. “The police managed to stop them at the expense of the car.”
 You open up the driver’s side door and reach under the seat. You pull out a black briefcase. “Thanks for your help,” you say, “but you can keep the car.”

[[Read the mission briefing]]
 [[Continue to the second mission]]

[[Category:Agent Black]]

Strangle him with the wire

Manichimon — Tue, 01 Jan 2013 00:34:43 GMT

Manichimon:

You slowly open the closet door and creep out. You sneak up close to your target as you pull out your wire and tighten it up in your grip. You swing your arms over the target’s neck and pull the wire up around his neck. He begins thrashing his legs and trying to pull the wire off his neck, but to no avail. Finally, his movements slow down and finally cease. His arms drop to his sides and his whole body goes limp. You lift the wire off from his neck and his head plops onto the carpet.
 You are breathing heavily from the kill and Harvey hears it. “What happened?” he asks.
 “I killed him,” you say enthusiastically. “He’s dead.”
 Harvey chuckles and says. “Excellent work, man. Well, done. How’d you do it?”
 You tell him your story about how you jumped through the window, hid in the closet, and strangled the target.
 “Excellent work, man. Real professional work. No mess at all, right?”
 You look over your body. Not a drop of blood was on you. “No, nothing,”
 “Perfect. You’re done here. Come on back down here.”
 You calmly walk out the door and back down the street to the car. You climb into the passenger seat and Harvey shakes you hand and says, “Congratulations. Your first hit. Makes you feel good, huh?”
 “Like I’m a god,” you reply.
 “Yeah, I know the feeling.” They two of you drive back to Boston and Harvey drops you off outside your apartment building.
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That night, you are sitting on your couch watching Deal or No Deal when your cell phone rings. “What is it?” you answer.
 Harvey’s voice says, “Dude, turn on channel nine. You’re on T.V.”
 You flip to channel nine. You see Marcus’s house surrounded with police tape. The reporter says, “…Thomson was killed earlier this day at his home in Quincy. This is just one in a series of violent crimes in the Quincy area that ended with a bang today.”
 The broadcast changes to a recording of an interview with a Detective Jack Marino. He says, “About five people have been reported to have been killed in this town in the last couple months, all by the same man using the same weapons. Today, we found out that our victim here, Marcus Thomson, is the assassin that killed all these people. We found dozens of combat knives and stolen guns on the premises. We believe that his death is likely some form of retaliation for one of his murders.
 The reporter continues, “The police have no clues to the identity of the person who killed Mr. Thompson, but Detective Marino states, ‘We remain hopeful that we will find him.’”
 “You did it, man,” says Harvey. “A nice clean kill. Untraceable. Just like a professional.”
 “Yeah, looks like I’m safe, huh?”
 “Looks like it. Hey, I think you’re ready to take on a mission alone. What do you say?’
 “Yeah, sounds good.”

*[[Go to your second mission]]

[[Category:Agent Black]]

WAS: Wake up Helena and demand sex

Manichimon — Fri, 03 Aug 2012 23:10:08 GMT

Manichimon:

You grab a hold of Helena’s nipple and begin pulling it towards you causing Helena to scream as she awakens from the pain. Helena calms down quickly as she realizes it was you who awoke her, she realizes that if you want to abuse her then she should just be submissive and take it. This power you command over Helena’s emotions gets you hard immediately and although you don’t know it Lyna breaths an sigh of relief as she realizes it’s not her turn today.

Helena takes a hold of her ample breasts pushes them towards you, as if offering them to you. You begin to feel out the texture of her breasts, first gently but then you begin to slap and abuse Helena’s meat racket for your own sick amusement. You love the way Helena’s breast bounces as you give them a particular hard slap. Helena however begins to blush from your shameful treatment, she puts her hand behind her back and bits her lip to try and survive this ordeal.

You continue to abuse her tits as she mounts you in a cowgirl position. But mere flesh on flesh won’t cut it as you bring out a riding crop for her to see.

“Listen slave I am going to hit you on your tits with this whip until you can bring me to an orgasm got it?!"

Helena immediately understands the situation as she begins to grind her hips against yours letting your dick get massaged by her cunt. Helena howls from a mix’s of pain and pleasure as the whip smacks her tit and your dick pounds her submissive pussy. Helena is the kind of woman who gets off from both pain and pleasure like a true slave. Any stimulus the master gives her should be regarded as pleasure. As her tits grow red she begins to put her back into it, you cock gets grinded by her cunt so much that you want to explode inside her. As the climax finally comes you grab her hips and push her down upon you burying your cock as deep inside her as possible and shot your load inside her. Your muscles tense as you orgasms, it’s not only the dick that enjoys a woman’s sex.

With your animal urges satisfied you throw Helena to the side of the bed in order to get the comfortable center spot of the bed. Helena mumbles in disappointment at you for rejecting her as soon as the sex is over, but her feelings are of no concern to you. You get comfortable and get ready to go to sleep. In an astonishing moment of wisdom you somehow know that the next day you will meet your fate. You ponder on what to do.

*[[WAS: Go to sleep]]

*[[WAS: Go to your balcony to get a last look at your nation]]
[[Category: War and Sex]]

Talk:Guide her to your bedroom

Manichimon — Fri, 03 Aug 2012 23:08:06 GMT

Manichimon: Created page with 'Excuse me, but wasn't the red-haired goth-girl's name Susan?--~~~~'

Excuse me, but wasn't the red-haired goth-girl's name Susan?--[[User:Manichimon|Imu]] 23:08, 3 August 2012 (UTC)

Pedo Romp/lifeguard: hands on teacher

Manichimon — Fri, 03 Aug 2012 17:45:06 GMT

Manichimon:

A lot of the class didn't know much more than the doggy paddle. This was to be expected teaching the youngest girls in the neighborhood. No matter your summer schedule that you laid out before hand started with the basics.

Time to get started with the front stroke. From watching the girls swim their warm up one of the girls was a clear stand out from the rest. She swam the whole length and back with out stopping and it was a pleasant surprise that she knew how to breathe to the side and keep her face down in the water. From earlier when you did brief introductions you learned her name was Emily.

"OK girls let's get started with today's lesson, the front stroke." After hearing this Emily perked up and smiled. "Emily seeing how you already know this stroke quite well, would you mind helping me show the rest of our class today?" Emily's smile widened even more.

You showed everyone how to do the front stroke. Showed them how to cup their hands and take long strokes through the water kicking the whole time just enough to create a splash. Now it was time for them to practice. A few picked it up rather quickly and were motoring across the pool like they were part fish, more like mermaids you thought. There were two who just couldn't get the posture or rhythm right. Emily was already coaching the one girl who was trying to pinwheel her arms as fast as she could. The other girl, who you recalled was Jill, after a few corrections from you would assuredly see the light.

The girl's midsection wasn't straight and her face was fully up out of the water. "Jill you want to put your face down in the water and exhale, then when you need a breath tilt your head to the side and breathe in. More like this." Your hand rested on her stomach pushing it up and supporting her so she straightened out. Jill was one of the two girls to wear a two piece swim suit to lessons today so your hand is directly on her bare skinny tummy.

(WIP)

[[Category: Pedo romp]]

Go to Pedophile Heaven

Manichimon — Fri, 03 Aug 2012 17:30:24 GMT

Manichimon: I tried to make the death message more vague, so however you die you can link here and it'll make sense. Fixed some grammar and tried to spice up the description. Left the AWWWW YEEEAAA alone.

Well luckily for you though, while you were alive on earth you treated all of your victims with the utmost kindness. Most of them even thought that you would be with them forever.. And you usually were until they moved away. Either way, you were a good pedophile and as your soul ascends, you watch two golden gates, engraved with intricate patterns you have trouble looking at, fade into view, sparkling in harsh white light that seems to have no source. Pedophile Heaven.... AWWW YEEEAAAA! You step through the gates and tears form in your eyes as you view your surroundings. There's a large fountain filled with little girls playing in sparkling crystal liquid. Off to the side what you first thought to be a large floating temple seems now to be an elaborate door leading into a huge palace. On an overly fluffy looking cloud in front of you are a few adults around your age hugging their young lovers... What a paradise! So what do you do?

Do you:
*[[Go to the fountain to play with the young vixens]]
*[[Enter into the giant floating palace| Enter the giant floating palace]]
*[[Go sit on the cloud with the other adults]]
[[Category: Pedo romp]]

Go to Pedophile Heaven

Manichimon — Fri, 03 Aug 2012 17:20:03 GMT

Manichimon:

Well luckily for you though, while you were alive on earth you treated all of your victims with the most kindness you could. Most of them even thought that you would be with them forever.. And you usually were until they moved away. Either way, you were a good pedophile and as you body burnt into a crisp, right infront of your eyes a large gate appeared infront of you sparking it white light! Pedophile Heaven.... AWWW YEEEAAAA! You step into the gates and tears form in your eyes as you see your surroundings. There's a large fountain filled with little girls playing in the sparkling crystal liquid. Off to the side what you first thought to be a large floating temple seems now to be an elaborate door leading into a huge palace. On an overly fluffy looking cloud in front of you are a few adults around your age hugging their young lovers... What a paradise! So what do you do?

Do you:
*[[Go to the fountain to play with the young vixens]]
*[[Enter into the giant floating palace| Enter the giant floating palace]]
*[[Go sit on the cloud with the other adults]]
[[Category: Pedo romp]]

I changed my mind! I'm sorry! Please, God, don't smite me!

Manichimon — Fri, 03 Aug 2012 17:12:39 GMT

Manichimon:

Alright. So you're going to change your ways and stop assaulting children with your penis? That's a pretty big step to make, are you sure you're ready?

*[[What? I just meant I'm doing her right here, no abduction necessary]]
*[[Yes, I swear to change my ways]]
*[[Suicide for your sins| My god, I'm a monster!]]

[[Category: Pedo romp]]

I changed my mind! I'm sorry! Please, God, don't smite me!

Manichimon — Fri, 03 Aug 2012 17:11:56 GMT

Manichimon: Created page with 'Alright. So you're going to change your ways and stop assaulting children with your penis? That's a pretty big step to make, are you sure you're ready? *[[What? I just meant I'm…'

Dance practice room

Manichimon — Fri, 03 Aug 2012 17:05:43 GMT

Manichimon:

They have such skilled legs... and feet. You walk into the room too meet four students waiting for you, it appears no one showed up today. One of the students is a boy named Brach, hes twelve and very muscular. Theres also Tim, who is nine and very shy. The second girl is Ashlyn, a cute blonde of about eleven years. And last but not least the youngest, extremely young actually, five year old Hailey.

Do you:
*[[Take Hailey]]
*[[Take Ashlyn]]
*[[Take Tim and Brach]]
*[[Lock the door and do them all]]
[[Category:Pedo romp]]

Talk:Dance practice room

Manichimon — Fri, 03 Aug 2012 17:04:49 GMT

Manichimon:

''The two girls are Ashlyn, a cute blonde about eleven.''
*Alright, so I don't mean any offense, but i'm unsure if this is supposed to indicate that there are in fact 5 students in the room, and there are a pair of 11 year old twins named Ash and Lyn. Or if there are only four students in the room, and Ashlyn was meant to be singular. If i'm wrong, i'm sorry, but I'm going to change Ashlyn to singular.--[[User:Manichimon|Imu]] 17:04, 3 August 2012 (UTC)

Talk:Dance practice room

Manichimon — Fri, 03 Aug 2012 17:04:23 GMT

Manichimon: Created page with '''The two girls are Ashlyn, a cute blonde about eleven.'' Alright, so I don't mean any offense, but i'm unsure if this is supposed to indicate that there are in fact 5 students i…'

''The two girls are Ashlyn, a cute blonde about eleven.''
Alright, so I don't mean any offense, but i'm unsure if this is supposed to indicate that there are in fact 5 students in the room, and there are a pair of 11 year old twins named Ash and Lyn. Or if there are only four students in the room, and Ashlyn was meant to be singular. If i'm wrong, i'm sorry, but I'm going to change Ashlyn to singular.

A male bisexual pedo

Manichimon — Fri, 03 Aug 2012 16:59:21 GMT

Manichimon:

Fuckin pussy and suckin' cocks. Classic. Good luck in the world of pedophilia!

Do you:
*[[Go to a church, your a pastor| Go to a church, you're a pastor]]
*[[Go to the capital arts theatre]]
*[[Go to Toys R Us]]
*[[Masturbate to the Disney Channel]]
*[[Travel downtown, and utilize candy as a bait for the kids]]
[[Category:Pedo romp]]

Invite some of her friends over for a party

Manichimon — Fri, 03 Aug 2012 03:00:11 GMT

Manichimon:

Lisa was a pretty good lay, but your cock craves new experiences. Since you thoroughly enjoyed Lisa's virgin body, perhaps more fresh teens is what you need? Surely Lisa has some cute friends that you could have your way with, perhaps even a cousin, or even better, a twin! Your cock twitching with mild arousal at the potential sex, you nudge the sleeping girl.

"Mmmf"

She does not seem to be waking up, perhaps you should try some ''alternative methods''?

*[[Wake Lisa with a blowjob]]
*[[Wake Lisa by fucking her pussy]]
*[[Wake Lisa by fucking her ass]]
Or, you could
*[[Nudge Lisa harder]]

{{SexRompStatus|Location=''[[Your Apartment]]''|Health=Mildly Aroused|MP=100|Level=3}}

[[Category: Smutty Sex Romp]]

Invite some of her friends over for a party

Manichimon — Fri, 03 Aug 2012 02:51:56 GMT

Manichimon: Created page with 'Lisa was a pretty good lay, but your cock craves new experiences. Since you thoroughly enjoyed Lisa's virgin body, perhaps more fresh teens is what you need? Surely Lisa has some…'

Lisa was a pretty good lay, but your cock craves new experiences. Since you thoroughly enjoyed Lisa's virgin body, perhaps more fresh teens is what you need? Surely Lisa has some cute friends that you could have your way with, perhaps even a cousin, or even better, a twin! Your cock twitching with mild arousal at the potential sex, you nudge the sleeping girl.

"Mmmf"

She does not seem to be waking up, perhaps you should try some ''alternative methods''?

*[[Nothing like a morning blowjob!|Wake Lisa with a Blowjob]]
*[[Wake Lisa by fucking her pussy]]
*[[Wake Lisa by fucking her ass]]
Or, you could
*[[Nudge Lisa harder]]

[[Category: Smutty Sex Romp]]

User:Manichimon

Manichimon — Fri, 03 Aug 2012 02:33:25 GMT

Manichimon: Created page with 'Hi, I'm not a very creative person. I am a decent writer, as in I can spell most words and know how to structure sentences half-right. English is in fact my first language, so y…'

Hi, I'm not a very creative person.

I am a decent writer, as in I can spell most words and know how to structure sentences half-right. English is in fact my first language, so you'd think i'd be a bit better at it, but that appears not to be the case.

Apparently speaking a language is different from writing it, who knew?

Anyways, I am occasionally (read: very rarely) struck with good ideas for a story while reading it, or at least '''I''' think it's a good idea; so I don't really contribute in a linear fashion. My contributions will likely be small, and most of them are probably grammar or spelling corrections. If a correction I make is incorrect, please tell me and i'll try ''extremely'' hard to remember not to correct that particular thing.

God of the Multiverse

Manichimon — Thu, 02 Aug 2012 23:45:30 GMT

Manichimon:

You have been chosen. Of all the mortals in the universe you have been chosen to serve for one day as the God of the Multiverse, an all-powerful deity ruling from your galactic chair on the edge of infinity. But while temporarily omnipotent you still have the needs of a mortal, and right now you are horny enough to fuck the galaxy! You have a secret holding chamber for the heroes and villains of the multiverse that can be anything you need it to be and filled with whoever you want to fill it with. The galaxy is your fantasy now.

*[[START|Begin!]]
*[[Incarnate|Incarnate yourself into the Mortal Realm]]

[[Category: God of the Multiverse]]

Head to the jocks

Manichimon — Wed, 01 Aug 2012 20:55:54 GMT

Manichimon: I just can't visualize an 'ass like a black chick' y'know? I feel like describing the ass makes it more erotic.

You just got your first taste of cock and you crave more. There are four jocks by the bathroom. You stumble over to them. They push you into the bathroom and lock the doors. Your tits are still covered in semen.

"Luckily for you the school has a whore who can lick up your tits before we bust on them again," says the quarterback.

"Goody," you say.

A sexy brunette with tits the same size as yours and a large, tight looking ass sucks on your tits until they're clean. Four jocks pull out their cocks. You reach for the two that you definitively get. You start to suck one dick and stroke the other one. They get hard super fast. The other slut, Missy, gets her two hard as well.

"Sorry Missy, we are here for this slut, but thanks for the blow," says one of the jocks.

"Anytime, you big-dicked hunk," she replies.

Do you:
*[[Suck them off and have them jerk off on you]]
*[[Fuck one, suck one, jerk two of them]]
*[[Fuck two, suck one, and jerk one]]
*[[Fuck two in your pussy, and two in your mouth.]]
[[Category: Blackmail]]

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'''Requirements:''' ''This is a story about a young girl written in second person.''

Fuck the creepy security guard

Manichimon — Wed, 01 Aug 2012 20:46:02 GMT

Manichimon: Undo revision 155776 by Manichimon (Talk)

You model this brand new suit. While you changed into this suit, the guard took your other clothes, but you did not notice. You walk out. He grins. You walk back and forth, bouncing your tits with each step. Your ass starts to jiggle. Why would it do that? The guard is slapping it up. Then you tun to him. He unzips his pants and reveals his small dick.

Well at least it is not huge or anything.

He pushes the bottom of your bikini to one side and guides you down on his hard cock. It slides easily inside your trimmed, wet twat.

Wet?! God, yes you are wet. Apparently, the idea of a stranger fucking you made you horny. T

The security guard starts to fuck you, sliding his cock in and out your tight, little pussy. But it's so small, you can barely feel it. Seriously, your tampons are bigger than this guy. It is not enough for you. You yawn.

"Bitch! Get on your knees and suck it then," he commands.

Then he jerks his cock out of you and pushes you to the floor. You reach for his cock and shove it greedily into your mouth. You suck on it just like a lolly-pop, your tongue licking it up and down as you feel it hot and hard in your mouth.

The security guard moans happily, his hands on your head. Suddenly, he pulls himself from your mouth, moaning as he points his cock at your chest. Cum shoots out, hot and sticky. For such a little cock, he sure has a lot of white stuff! It's covering your tits, running down your chest.

"Perfect," he says. "Now get out and don't steal anything every again.

"What about my clothes," you say.

"What about them," he grins and shoves you out the door.

*[[Go to school, covered in semen and with your boobs showing]]
*[[Go to home, covered in semen and with your boobs showing]]

[[Category: Blackmail]]

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'''Requirements:''' ''This is a story about a young girl written in second person.''

College Girls / Unzip your pants and prepair to let her ride you

Manichimon — Wed, 01 Aug 2012 20:45:38 GMT

Manichimon: College Girls / Unzip your pants and prepair to let her ride you moved to College Girls / Unzip your pants and prepare to let her ride you: Minor nitpick

#REDIRECT [[College Girls / Unzip your pants and prepare to let her ride you]]

College Girls / Unzip your pants and prepare to let her ride you

Manichimon — Wed, 01 Aug 2012 20:45:38 GMT

Manichimon: College Girls / Unzip your pants and prepair to let her ride you moved to College Girls / Unzip your pants and prepare to let her ride you: Minor nitpick

You sense that Emily is near climax... and as much as you would love to have her come on your fingers the idea of her pussy pulsating around your cock is too much to resist.

You pull your fingers out of he and begin to unzip your jeans when she reaches down and begins doing it for you. You both stand up momentarily stand up, you sliding down your jeans and underwear in one quick action, she removing her panties every bit as quickly. She pushes you back down on the chair as her lips meet yours and her pussy slides against your cock, her juices wetting the outside, but without any penetratin.

She begins rubbing against you as you continue to make out, and your free hands reach around and begin to massage her bottem.

Do you:
*[[College Girls / Continue to let her rub her clit against your dick|Continue to let her rub her clit against your dick]]
*[[College Girls / Slide your cock inside of her|Slide your cock inside of her]]
*[[College Girls / Point out that maybe now would be a good time to put on some protection|Point out that maybe now would be a good time to put on some protection]]

[[Category: College Girls|Unzip your pants and prepair to let her ride you]]

College Girls / Slip another finger inside her and arouse her even more

Manichimon — Wed, 01 Aug 2012 20:43:45 GMT

Manichimon:

You oblige her and slide a second finger into her pussy. She begins bucking herself back against your fingers as you both continue to kiss more forcefully.

"Mmmm!", she begins to moan as her hands squeeze your body. You feel her wetness leaking down your fingers. You slide your thumb around and caress the outer lips of her snatch then around more until you are rubbing it against her clit.

She keeps bouncing up and down on your hand, completely absorbed in the feeling between her legs and the kiss that she shares with you.

Do you:
*[[College Girls / Keep fingering her|Keep fingering her]]
*[[College Girls / Move her to the bed and pull down her panties and begin eating her out|Move her to the bed and pull down her panties and begin eating her out]]
*[[College Girls / Unzip your pants and prepare to let her ride you|Unzip your pants and prepare to let her ride you]]

[[Category: College Girls|Slip another finger inside her and arouse her even more]]

Fuck the creepy security guard

Manichimon — Wed, 01 Aug 2012 20:32:25 GMT

Manichimon: just a bit o' grammar.

You model this brand new suit. While you changed into this suit, the guard took your other clothes, but you did not notice. You walk out. He grins. You walk back and forth, bouncing your tits with each step. Your ass starts to jiggle. Why would it do that? The guard is slapping it up. Then you turn to him. He unzips his pants and reveals his small dick.

Well at least it is not huge or anything.

He pushes the bottom of your bikini to one side and guides you down on his hard cock. It slides easily inside your trimmed, wet twat.

Wet?! God, yes you are wet. Apparently, the idea of a stranger fucking you made you horny.

The security guard starts to fuck you, sliding his cock in and out your tight, little pussy. But it's so small, you can barely feel it. Seriously, your tampons are bigger than this guy. It is not enough for you. You yawn.

"Bitch! Get on your knees and suck it then," he commands.

Then he jerks his cock out of you and pushes you to the floor. You reach for his cock and shove it greedily into your mouth. You suck on it just like a lolly-pop, your tongue licking it up and down as you feel it hot and hard in your mouth.

The security guard moans happily, his hands on your head. Suddenly, he pulls himself from your mouth, moaning as he points his cock at your chest. Cum shoots out, hot and sticky. For such a little cock, he sure has a lot of white stuff! It's covering your tits, running down your chest.

"Perfect," he says. "Now get out and don't steal anything every again.

"What about my clothes," you say.

"What about them," he grins and shoves you out the door.

*[[Go to school, covered in semen and with your boobs showing]]
*[[Go back home, covered in semen and with your boobs showing]]

[[Category: Blackmail]]

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'''Requirements:''' ''This is a story about a young girl written in second person.''

Order Miguel to face fuck Desire

Manichimon — Mon, 23 Jul 2012 21:49:30 GMT

Manichimon:

Being strapped down on the footstool made Desires head an easy target. If Manuel would just squat down a bit his dick would be pointing directly at her face. Manuel walks over to Desire and disposed of the ball gag in her mouth which he replaces with an O shaped muzzle. This way her mouth would always remain open when he shoved his dick into her mouth.

While standing right in front of Desire, Manuel removes his pants, you are glad you chose the biggest cock of the bunch because the expression on Desires face is priceless.

“You must have the biggest cock Desire has ever seen if she’s that intimidated by it.” You tell Manuel.

Manuel grabs Desires hair and drives his cock forward into her mouth. It reaches into the back of her throat. Using her hair as leverage Manuel starts thrusting back and forth. Every push into her mouth sends wet sounds of grunts and gags from Desire. Due to his size Desire face quickly became red with anguish. Tears travel down her cheeks from her cringing eyes which begged him to stop, but Manuel continues fucking her face like a cunt. Her pleas mean nothing to him; she’s just another mouth to stick his dick into. He even starts going faster to maximize his pleasure. Soon his balls bang against her chin as the sound of flesh slapping on to flesh fills the room. Saliva squirts out of Desires face drenching both her face and Manuel’s cock. Soon the sounds of Desires gag came so frequently that it sounded like a never-ending loop. It was the sound of a breaking point, the sound of someone choking to death. Right before Desire fainted Manuel pulled his cock out of her mouth making all the saliva flow out onto the floor.

Yin gasped at the sight of her mother’s unconscious face. it looked like shed been beaten, her face bright red and wet with saliva and tears. Then she stared at Manuel cock that looked so threatening, but also arousing in an animalistic kind of way. It was still erected and filled with her mother’s saliva. She comments what just aspired.
“W…Was that sex?”

“To your mother it was, and to you too, but not me. You and your mother are whores Yin. Your bodies are tools for men to take out their sexual aggression on. You’re not real women. Real women have relationship with their men but you are just used on them. You do not deserve, nor ever shall have an intimate relationship with a man. You will begin to love the defilement, the humiliation and submission, inflicted on you by your clients.”

Yin swallows hard at your words and continues to stare at Manuel’s cock. Although what you described wasn’t pretty she believes it full heartily. Her mother is a whore, so she is a whore. She is ready for her first client.

*[[Have Manuel fuck Yin]]

[[Category: The Devil's Daughter]]

Have Miguel fuck Yin

Manichimon — Mon, 23 Jul 2012 21:48:25 GMT

Manichimon: Have Miguel fuck Yin moved to Have Manuel fuck Yin: The name. It is wrong.

#REDIRECT [[Have Manuel fuck Yin]]

Have Manuel fuck Yin

Manichimon — Mon, 23 Jul 2012 21:48:24 GMT

Manichimon: Have Miguel fuck Yin moved to Have Manuel fuck Yin: The name. It is wrong.

“Quick, help me carry Desire over to the bed and strap her to the bedpost.” With Miguel’s help you tie Desires naked body down eagle style on the bed. The necessary rope was provided from Desires own private stash. All the saliva covering her face that was spewed out during the facefucking makes her look really cheap as she twists and turns while unconscious.

“Why are you tying mother down on the bed?” Yin asks you. You take a moment to smile at her before responding.

“Get on top of her, your cunt to her mouth.” Yin only meets your order with silent disgust. To edge her on you say. “Look, if you’re going to be a whore then you’re going to have to learn how to fuck alongside your mother. You’re going to park your cunt on her face, Miguel will fuck you and I will watch the deflowering. You got that? Then fucking hurry bitch!”

The horny and now frighten Yin do as you told her and gets in a sixty-nine position on top of her mother. The smell of wet cunt returns Desire to the edge of consciousness.

“Uhh… whose, whose pussy?”

As she tries to move she finds out that she’s bound to the bed. All her limbs tightly secured. Still a bit dazed she notices how Miguel squats down over her head with his rock hard cock pointing at her daughter’s wet entrance. Miguel rubs his cock along her pussy lips with his balls dangling right over Desire. They are hairy and emit a foul smell that assault Desires nostrils. Then she realizes what’s this all about, he’s about to take her daughters virginity right in front of her.

You are right there to capture the indescribable play of emotions upon Desires face. All her facial muscles contracts in a violent spasm that sends her body shaking in the bed. Her lips open up to form a perfect O, and it emits a silent shriek which sound waves can be felt to your bone marrow. Some of Miguel’s pre-cum drips down on her chin before he pushes forward.

With one thrust Miguel pushes his dick into Yin and steals away her virginity like it was nothing. This makes Yin grunt as if she had the air knocked out of her, totally in shock over this new feeling in her pussy. Miguel is way too big and experienced for her. Her tight cunt walls are stretched painfully wide every time he pushes his dick into her. With her sensitive pussy she’s able to feel every bump and thrust that his cock makes inside her. With only her own juices to smoothen the powerful organs forceful thrusts Yin’s first time with a man is both pleasurable and painful. She grabs the bed sheets and soon finds out that she’s a screamer.

“Ahhhhh!… Jesus Christ Miguel you’re fucking good! My… first… fucking cock inside me and it’s to fucking big. Miguel you’re so fucking hard, I love your fucking cock!”

Miguel grabs Yin’s black hair as he powers his heavy cock further into her. His rock hard shafts steadfast attack pummels his long cock into her juicy pussy. Desire feels humiliated seeing her daughters pussy juices be continuingly squirted out of every time he penetrated her daughter. Yin’s body is in full, ready to breed arousal. In her arousal she finds that the pain, humiliation and pleasure all mix into one sex crazed sensation.

“That’s it, that’s the spot right there! Punish me with your fat cock!”

Yin’s sex crazed yell for punishment is heard and for the first time Miguel pushes his cock so far in that only his balls remain on the outside. This results in Yin cringing up and panting in pain. She never really realized how painful his full size would feel and is left quivering unable to escape his powerful grip. You intervene and tell Desire.

“Well, well looks like your daughter got more than she barging for. Better help her soon or Miguel will split her in half!”

*[[Order Desire to lick Miguel’s balls so that he cums faster]]

*[[Order Desire to lick Yin’s clit so that she cums faster]]

[[Category: The Devil's Daughter]]

Order Miguel to face fuck Desire

Manichimon — Mon, 23 Jul 2012 21:47:11 GMT

Manichimon:

Being strapped down on the footstool made Desires head an easy target. If Manuel would just squat down a bit his dick would be pointing directly at her face. Manuel walks over to Desire and disposed of the ball gag in her mouth which he replaces with an O shaped muzzle. This way her mouth would always remain open when he shoved his dick into her mouth.

While standing right in front of Desire, Manuel removes his pants, you are glad you chose the biggest cock of the bunch because the expression on Desires face is priceless.

“You must have the biggest cock Desire has ever seen if she’s that intimidated by it.” You tell Manuel.

Manuel grabs Desires hair and drives his cock forward into her mouth. It reaches into the back of her throat. Using her hair as leverage Manuel starts thrusting back and forth. Every push into her mouth sends wet sounds of grunts and gags from Desire. Due to his size Desire face quickly became red with anguish. Tears travel down her cheeks from her cringing eyes which begged him to stop, but Manuel continues fucking her face like a cunt. Her pleas mean nothing to him; she’s just another mouth to stick his dick into. He even starts going faster to maximize his pleasure. Soon his balls bang against her chin as the sound of flesh slapping on to flesh fills the room. Saliva squirts out of Desires face drenching both her face and Manuel’s cock. Soon the sounds of Desires gag came so frequently that it sounded like a never-ending loop. It was the sound of a breaking point, the sound of someone choking to death. Right before Desire fainted Manuel pulled his cock out of her mouth making all the saliva flow out onto the floor.

Yin gasped at the sight of her mother’s unconscious face. it looked like shed been beaten, her face bright red and wet with saliva and tears. Then she stared at Manuel cock that looked so threatening, but also arousing in an animalistic kind of way. It was still erected and filled with her mother’s saliva. She comments what just aspired.
“W…Was that sex?”

“To your mother it was, and to you too, but not me. You and your mother are whores Yin. Your bodies are tools for men to take out their sexual aggression on. You’re not real women. Real women have relationship with their men but you are just used on them. You do not deserve, nor ever shall have an intimate relationship with a man. You will begin to love the defilement, the humiliation and submission, inflicted on you by your clients.”

Yin swallows hard at your words and continues to stare at Manuel’s cock. Although what you described wasn’t pretty she believes it full heartily. Her mother is a whore, so she is a whore. She is ready for her first client.

*[[Have Miguel fuck Yin]]

[[Category: The Devil's Daughter]]

Order Miguel to face fuck Desire

Manichimon — Mon, 23 Jul 2012 21:45:26 GMT

Manichimon:

Chose Miguel to take Yin’s virginity

Manichimon — Mon, 23 Jul 2012 21:41:27 GMT

Manichimon: Just changing all instances of 'Miguel' to match the given name earlier, which was 'Manuel'

The other men voice their disapproval as you take Manuel by the arm and lead him into the bedroom. You give Manuel a smile and a nervous flinch. The nervousity is fake of course; you only want to get Manuel in the right mood. You know how young men work, especially the aggressive ones. They see a pretty young thing smiling nervously at them then all they want to do is fuck her.

Manuel shrugs his shoulders at his pals, disguising his delight at being chosen with a nonchalant body gesture. They see through the poor act of comradeship and continue booing on.

…………………

The moment you close the door behind you Miguel is all over you. “Fuck yea I want to fuck you baby”. He grabs your hips with his strong hands, trying to use his masculine body to impose himself on you mentally.

“Wait.” You shrugs him off and point at the other side of the room. “Miguel meet Desire, a common prostitute and her daughter Yin, an virgin.”

Desire is right were you left her, tied down on a footstool naked and in an extremely humiliating position. Desire has awoken but she decides to keep her mouth shut until she can fully grasp the situation. Stand right next to her is Yin naked and ready to fuck. Her virgin innocence is still there; she avoids eye contact but has learned not to shelter her tits and pussy.

“Miguel you have an big task ahead of you. Desire and Yin are my property.” Hearing the word property Desire shouts out an proclamation of denial. She knows where this is going; women who become property of your cult are dehumanized into mindless fuck slaves. She shouts for help and urges Yin to run away but Yin stand firm. Yin has accepted her fate as a prostitute just like her mother so she offers no resistance. You put an mouth gag on Desire just like you would to a barking dog so that she cannot interrupt you further.

“Where was I? Oh yes I want to turn Desire and Yin into the biggest mother and daughter slut couple ever to walk the planet, however Yin is still an virgin. SO I need a man, a real man, with an really big dick, kind of like yours to deflower her for me.”

By now Deisre is shaking her head back and forth in shame and denial. Right in front of her you are talking about enslaving her and turning her into a fuck toy with her daughter. This complete stranger is about to take her daughters virginity and she is powerless to stop it.

“Do you think you could do that for me? Big boy?”

Manuel swallows hard haven been given the opportunity of a life time. As you told Yin just a moment ago, fucking an mother and daughter at the same time is every guys dream. This young teen from the slums fantasies are being fulfilled by you, a satanic cult member whom he also desires. The bulge in his pants tells you he is ready to serve.

You give him an quick kiss on the cheek before moving back a few steps to let Manuel interact with Desire and Yin on his own. He moves over to the naked teen and her gagged mother. After standing still for a moment, being rendered speechless by the highly erotic privilege he has just been given, Manuel raises his hand at Yin and screams. “Get down on your knees bitch!”

Yin drops down immediately; Manuel knows how to handle the situation that’s for sure. You tell him. "Remember that they are still MY property so if you want to fuck them you'll have to play by my rules."

"Sure chica, whatever you say."

*[[Order Manuel to face fuck Desire]]

*[[Order Manuel to face fuck Yin]]

*[[Fuck Manuel yourself to show whose in charge around here]]

*[[Skip the foreplay and have Manuel deflower Yin right now]]
[[Category: The Devil's Daughter]]

How can I help?

Manichimon — Thu, 04 Aug 2011 22:19:21 GMT

Manichimon: Just a misspelling and a grammar error

You say, "How can I help, Kate?"

She replies confidently, "If you let me stay with you for at least a week, I'll leave after that to go live in Florida."

"Kate, I could let you stay or we could both go to Florida with the money I have now."

You decide that:
*[[Kate can stay]]
*[[Kate you can't stay]]
*[[You need to convince her to take you with her to Florida]]
[[Category:The Girl Down the Street]]

This is Willy Wonka's Chocolate Factory. We're indoors. No clouds!

Manichimon — Sun, 17 Apr 2011 00:47:01 GMT

Manichimon:

This is Willy Wonka's fucking chocolate factory, he has thousands of midget men working for him 24/7 at the price of frickin cocao beans you jackass, anything can happen here, you have questioned the order of the Willy Wonkaverse and your molecules will instantly explode.

'''BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOM!'''

Damn, that was a big explosion...
Oh, your dead by the way...

'''THE END'''

This is Willy Wonka's Chocolate Factory. We're indoors. No clouds!

Manichimon — Sun, 17 Apr 2011 00:46:40 GMT

Manichimon: Created page with 'This is Willy Wonka's fucking chocolate factory, he has thousands of midget men working for him 24/7 at the price of frickin cocao beans you jackass, anything can happen here, yo…'

Pretend you're not dead and go to your sister

Manichimon — Sun, 17 Apr 2011 00:26:02 GMT

Manichimon: Created page with 'Oh sure, because your not really dead after shooting yourself with an AK-47.....can you sense the sarcasm? Unfortunately even in this screwed up story,people who shoot themselv…'

Oh sure, because your not really dead after shooting yourself with an AK-47.....can you sense the sarcasm?

Unfortunately even in this screwed up story,people who shoot themselves with an AK-47 die, congratulations, you're officaly dead!

'''THE END'''

Fuck her freshly popped pussy again

Manichimon — Sat, 26 Mar 2011 04:43:29 GMT

Manichimon:

Well...she did ask for it, "Get down on alll fours." you command, the redheaded ex-virgin complies, her smooth young ass inviting you to pound away at it mercilessly, her pussy lips pucker cutely and looking at them closely, you wonder how the hell you got your cock in there.

"Whats wrong mister, aren't we going to do it again" the girl asks waggling her ass awkwardly, ''Think later, fuck now'' you think as you drop to your knees behind her, you line up your once again rock hard cock with her pussy lips and with a single thrust get in balls deep.

Her pussy doesn't seem to have stretched at all from your earlier fuck, a fact you are thankful for as the immense pressure and tightness of her young pussy feel amazing.

She moans in pleasure, and you pull out slightly before thrusting in again, establishing a steady rhythm, her moans turn to mewls of pleasure and she pants out, "Please, faster, fuck me as hard as you can mister" this breaks any self-control you had and your speed instantly increases, fucking her fast and hard, her moans and groans of pleasure mingle with your grunts of effort, she thrusts her hips backwards to meet your thrusts, "Oh fuck, please, make me cum mister!" she begs and you pound her pussy even harder than before, you feel your orgasm building, your balls tighten and you feel the familiar boil meaning that this will be an especially intense orgasm, you throw your head back as her tight preteen pussy convulses, sucking the cum from your balls and you erupt, a white flash passes through your head and the girl beneath you collapses in a quivering mess from the pleasure, knees and arms unable to support her own weight.

As the orgasmic bliss dissolves, you are both overcome by a wave of exhaustion, "That was the best mister! I wish I could do that every day for the rest of my life!" pants the ex-virgin preteen. You think about her words, there are definite possibilities, you catch your breath and say,

*[[That can be arranged]]
*[[Sorry, but no]]
*[[Decide to let her go]]

Fuck her freshly popped pussy again

Manichimon — Sat, 26 Mar 2011 04:41:15 GMT

Manichimon: Created page with 'Well...she did ask for it, "Get down on alll fours." you command, the redheaded ex-virgin complies, her smooth young ass inviting you to pound away at it mercilessly, her pussy l…'

Well...she did ask for it, "Get down on alll fours." you command, the redheaded ex-virgin complies, her smooth young ass inviting you to pound away at it mercilessly, her pussy lips pucker cutely and looking at them closely, you wonder how the hell you got your cock in there. "Whats wrong mister, aren't we going to do it again" the girl asks waggling her ass awkwardly, ''Think later, fuck now'' you think as you drop to your knees behind her, you line up your once again rock hard cock with her pussy lips and with a single thrust get in balls deep. Her pussy doesn't seem to have stretched at all from your earlier fuck, a fact you are thankful for as the immense pressure and tightness of her young pussy feel amazing. She moans in pleasure, and you pull out slightly before thrusting in again, establishing a steady rhythm, her moans turn to mewls of pleasure and she says, "Please, faster, fuck me as hard as you can mister" this breaks any self-control you had and your speed instantly increases, fucking her fast and hard, her moans and groans of pleasure mingle with your grunts of effort, she thrusts her hips backwards to meet your thrusts, "Oh fuck, please, make me cum mister!" she begs and you pound her pussy even harder than before, you feel your orgasm building, your balls tighten and you feel the familiar boil meaning that this will be an especially intense orgasm, you throw your head back as her tight preteen pussy convulses, sucking the cum from your balls and you erupt, a white flash passes through your head and the girl beneath you collapses in a quivering mess from the pleasure, knees and arms unable to support her own weight. As the orgasmic bliss dissolves, you are both overcome by a wave of exhaustion, "That was the best mister! I wish I could do that every day for the rest of my life!" pants the ex-virgin preteen. You think about her words, there are definite possibilities, you catch your breath and say,

*[[That can be arranged]]
*[[No way]]
*[[Decide to let her go]]

User talk:Platypus

Manichimon — Fri, 25 Mar 2011 02:07:02 GMT

Manichimon:

Since this page has become rather cluttered, I've moved old discussions to the archive page below. Feel free to leave new messages here. I'll get back to you ASAP!

[[User talk:Platypus/Archive1]]

>Add new comments below.

I removed the CW section because, as far as could be told, there was nothing in it.

Sorry if I'm doing this wrong you mentioned categories, how exactly do I do that? I really have no idea I'm sorry if my editing was against the rules.

What do you mean by Uncategorized? My stuff is getting deleted and i don't understand.

==Sorry 'bout that==
Sorry Platypus, I had to rush to get to school and didn't have time to make it a proper page, no need to delete my little contribution to the smutty sexiness, oh by the way I notice a lack of romantic stories in the Mature/Adult section, hmmmm...now that I think of it the whole sight could use some romancing, I will remedy this problem , you know since i'm cool like that, and again sorry for the error but I can't miss another english class if I want to pull off an A-.
P.S. Do you mind if I call you the platinum pussy? Or how about Platypussy, Guardian of Panties? No offense or anything but I had to make the connection, its who I am.
P.P.S. Are you a beaver or a duck, or the bastard child of a one night stand between the two? Please enlighten me to your origins, and read earlier comment before you get pissed at me.
-Manichimon

== An apolicypse ==
Sorry for my bad formatting and syntax. Its my first story and im still learning how to do everything :) Tell me if you have any other suggestions that might improve how it turns out.
[[An_apolicypse]]

== The Greatest Weekend Ever ==
Hey, Can you tell me how to completely remove pages from a story? people have edited my story and i dont like the way they took it. [[User Talk: saleemyas3]]

okay thats what i did, but you messaged me to not do that, and you put all the text back in the pages.

== What about Categorizing? ==

How do you categorize a page? And why do you get penalized when you don't? I certainly don't get the jist of why we have to

categorize when I don't know how to do it, and can't find out where, either.

== Moving Story to Category ==
I'm a bit new here although ive had expierence editing with Wikia. How do i move the story im started, High School Sophomore Year, to the Adult Section?
Loch

== Something came to my attention... ==

Looks like a kid who's obviously under 18 added a story to the "Adult" section. I didn't remove it, but you may want to look at it.

This is the story.[http://choose_your_own_adventure.editthis.info/choose_your_own_adventure/The_broken_story_of_stupidness_:P]

== Page Needs Attention ==
As requested on the page I am bringing [[SttMF/Ask Him to Just Fuck You]] to your attention. It is linked from [[SttMF/Let Him Pleasure You]].

== Smutty Sex Romp ==

Hey Platypus, doing a great job as always.

Would you please review Smutty Sex Romp? The description on the main page claims 10,000 pages, but I just did a quick check, and it only have 636.

== Smutty Sex Romp ==
From Lord X. I'd like to have the Church Little Lindsay section expanded including talking to the nun about what i did to lindsay i'm wondering if she's accepting

== Greek Heroes ==
I'm doing Greek Heroes for a school project. It will be a story about Heracles. As you can see, I've already got a few CYOA's.

== Smutt Sex Romp ==

Sorry, clearly I don't understand how everything works yet. I simply clicked on the page list and this is what it says:

Articles in category "Smutty Sex Romp"
The following 199 pages are in this category, out of 646 total.

I assumed that the 646 total meant that was how many pages were part of the story.

==RedOwl==
No problemo, I'll be sure to make sure my grammar and tenses work better in whatever I add to SSR from now on.

== Category page for Temporal ==

Hi there,

Thanks for setting up a category page for my new story "Temporal". I have only just started here and didn't realize I had to make one until just now, and noticed you had already done it for me. Appreciate it!

==Birthday Boy==

Thanks for catching the orphaned page!

==Brai==

I'm really sorry, As you can see it's a work in progress but I try to follow the rules.

== Page Tagging ==

Hi Platapus,

I added a new feature to EDI today:

http://groups.google.com/group/editthisinfo/browse_thread/thread/9fb943f21e7f2953

I figure tagging might be something that would be pretty useful and important to this wiki. Feel free to fiddle with it and if you would like to set any standards for cyoa, I leave it up to your judgement.

== Furry World Advice? ==

Okay since I'm a major idiot...I accidentally made an article tag and not a post...please just ignore that. I was working on some furry world postings the other day and I saw that you were a major contributor to it, I was just wondering if you were interested in taking a look at some of the things I've written...I don't know. Sorry to trouble you man.

== Question ==

Whenever l try to edit Lady Helsing it says Permission error and l'm not allowed because l'm not
user or a bureaucrat even when l have already logged in. Why's that?

Hi Platypus
Thanks for the reminder for the the stats, I completely forgot them. Do you know if there is any way to change the header of the movie section from "movie" to "books"? The part i´m currently doing is based on the NJO books, so "movie" deoens´t really fit.
THX Maramara2

== Sorry ==

Oh gosh, I am really really sorry if I made a mistake on the Smutty story. It's my first day on this site, so I apologise if I fucked up. It won't happen again.

- SZ

== Bug Report? ==

Hi Platypus, I hope this goes here. I was going through the story [[University Daze]] and I came across a page that gives me the following message:

''The database did not find the text of a page that it should have found, named "Ask her for the reagent".''
''This is usually caused by following an outdated diff or history link to a page that has been deleted.''
''If this is not the case, you may have found a bug in the software. Please report this to an administrator, making note of the URL.''

The link wasn't red and I tried refreshing several times to see if if it was a momentary glitch, but it kept happening, so I decided to report it here. I hope this is the correct procedure.

The page in question is http://editthis.info/choose_your_own_adventure/Ask_her_for_the_reagent and I got to it from http://editthis.info/choose_your_own_adventure/Tell_her_the_truth_and_say_no

== Featured Stories ==

I believe the ''inyashas fantasy land'' story being on the [[Previous Featured Stories]] page is a mistake. It doesn't appear to have shown up on the [[Featured CYOA Nominations]] page, the grammar is laughably poor, and if my assumptions are correct, it seems to have been written by an InuYasha fan who can't even spell the name of his favorite show. I would correct this myself, but I know you're usually pretty on top of things, so I just wanted to make sure it was allowed to stay up in error. I don't want to step on your toes or anything. --[[User:Cannon|Cannon]] 06:19, 7 January 2011 (UTC)

== Felix342018 ==

I just wanted to alert you that [[User:Felix342018|Felix342018]] changed the links in [[Plan B-Attack]] to go to an external website. I reverted his edit. It seems fairly clear to me that he has no intention of making any productive contributions. I believe you have the power to put an end to this, yes? --[[User:Cannon|Cannon]] 07:08, 8 January 2011 (UTC)

== Oops on link removal ==

I only discovered that there were few or no dark alleys in the part of Manhattan relevant to Worlds End by looking it up in Google Street View, but I tried to preserve the story by relocating the action. (If you were to walk to the Hudson River from the Port Authority, which direction would you go in? West. Which street would you take? Probably somewhere around 42nd. Thus the editing decision there.) I try not to remove links/ rip pages out, though. [[User:Rickyrab|Rickyrab]] 04:22, 22 January 2011 (UTC)
:see http://maps.google.com/maps?oe=utf-8&client=firefox-a&ie=UTF8&q=port+authority+bus+terminal&fb=1&gl=us&hq=port+authority+bus+terminal&hnear=New+Brunswick,+Middlesex,+New+Jersey&ll=40.758197,-73.990163&spn=0.003486,0.009946&z=17 [[User:Rickyrab|Rickyrab]] 04:24, 22 January 2011 (UTC)
::That being said, sorry about the page loss. [[User:Rickyrab|Rickyrab]] 04:27, 22 January 2011 (UTC)

== From Narutowriter ==

I have a question... how do you delete pages? haha, ironic, i know, but my laptop was slow one day and I ran out of room and made a new page, but now it's all good and i want to delete the other page. Please help. Do I just delete all the contents or what? IDK.. Thanks.

Thanks but heres the link because i deleted off the page:: [[Go to lunch with Sasuke 2]]

User talk:Platypus

Manichimon — Fri, 25 Mar 2011 02:05:46 GMT

Manichimon:

Since this page has become rather cluttered, I've moved old discussions to the archive page below. Feel free to leave new messages here. I'll get back to you ASAP!

[[User talk:Platypus/Archive1]]

>Add new comments below.

==Sorry 'bout that==
Sorry Platypus, I had to rush to get to school and didn't have time to make it a proper page, no need to delete my little contribution to the smutty sexiness, oh by the way I notice a lack of romantic stories in the Mature/Adult section, hmmmm...now that I think of it the whole sight could use some romancing, I will remedy this problem , you know since i'm cool like that, and again sorry for the error but I can't miss another english class if I want to pull off an A-.
P.S. Do you mind if I call you the platinum pussy? Or how about Platypussy, Guardian of Panties? No offense or anything but I had to make the connection, its who I am.
P.P.S. Are you a beaver or a duck, or the bastard child of a one night stand between the two? Please enlighten me to your origins, and read earlier comment before you get pissed at me.
Manichimon-(The Crimson

I removed the CW section because, as far as could be told, there was nothing in it.

Sorry if I'm doing this wrong you mentioned categories, how exactly do I do that? I really have no idea I'm sorry if my editing was against the rules.

What do you mean by Uncategorized? My stuff is getting deleted and i don't understand.

== An apolicypse ==
Sorry for my bad formatting and syntax. Its my first story and im still learning how to do everything :) Tell me if you have any other suggestions that might improve how it turns out.
[[An_apolicypse]]

== The Greatest Weekend Ever ==
Hey, Can you tell me how to completely remove pages from a story? people have edited my story and i dont like the way they took it. [[User Talk: saleemyas3]]

okay thats what i did, but you messaged me to not do that, and you put all the text back in the pages.

== What about Categorizing? ==

How do you categorize a page? And why do you get penalized when you don't? I certainly don't get the jist of why we have to

categorize when I don't know how to do it, and can't find out where, either.

== Moving Story to Category ==
I'm a bit new here although ive had expierence editing with Wikia. How do i move the story im started, High School Sophomore Year, to the Adult Section?
Loch

== Something came to my attention... ==

Looks like a kid who's obviously under 18 added a story to the "Adult" section. I didn't remove it, but you may want to look at it.

This is the story.[http://choose_your_own_adventure.editthis.info/choose_your_own_adventure/The_broken_story_of_stupidness_:P]

== Page Needs Attention ==
As requested on the page I am bringing [[SttMF/Ask Him to Just Fuck You]] to your attention. It is linked from [[SttMF/Let Him Pleasure You]].

== Smutty Sex Romp ==

Hey Platypus, doing a great job as always.

Would you please review Smutty Sex Romp? The description on the main page claims 10,000 pages, but I just did a quick check, and it only have 636.

== Smutty Sex Romp ==
From Lord X. I'd like to have the Church Little Lindsay section expanded including talking to the nun about what i did to lindsay i'm wondering if she's accepting

== Greek Heroes ==
I'm doing Greek Heroes for a school project. It will be a story about Heracles. As you can see, I've already got a few CYOA's.

== Smutt Sex Romp ==

Sorry, clearly I don't understand how everything works yet. I simply clicked on the page list and this is what it says:

Articles in category "Smutty Sex Romp"
The following 199 pages are in this category, out of 646 total.

I assumed that the 646 total meant that was how many pages were part of the story.

==RedOwl==
No problemo, I'll be sure to make sure my grammar and tenses work better in whatever I add to SSR from now on.

== Category page for Temporal ==

Hi there,

Thanks for setting up a category page for my new story "Temporal". I have only just started here and didn't realize I had to make one until just now, and noticed you had already done it for me. Appreciate it!

==Birthday Boy==

Thanks for catching the orphaned page!

==Brai==

I'm really sorry, As you can see it's a work in progress but I try to follow the rules.

== Page Tagging ==

Hi Platapus,

I added a new feature to EDI today:

http://groups.google.com/group/editthisinfo/browse_thread/thread/9fb943f21e7f2953

I figure tagging might be something that would be pretty useful and important to this wiki. Feel free to fiddle with it and if you would like to set any standards for cyoa, I leave it up to your judgement.

== Furry World Advice? ==

Okay since I'm a major idiot...I accidentally made an article tag and not a post...please just ignore that. I was working on some furry world postings the other day and I saw that you were a major contributor to it, I was just wondering if you were interested in taking a look at some of the things I've written...I don't know. Sorry to trouble you man.

== Question ==

Whenever l try to edit Lady Helsing it says Permission error and l'm not allowed because l'm not
user or a bureaucrat even when l have already logged in. Why's that?

Hi Platypus
Thanks for the reminder for the the stats, I completely forgot them. Do you know if there is any way to change the header of the movie section from "movie" to "books"? The part i´m currently doing is based on the NJO books, so "movie" deoens´t really fit.
THX Maramara2

== Sorry ==

Oh gosh, I am really really sorry if I made a mistake on the Smutty story. It's my first day on this site, so I apologise if I fucked up. It won't happen again.

- SZ

== Bug Report? ==

Hi Platypus, I hope this goes here. I was going through the story [[University Daze]] and I came across a page that gives me the following message:

''The database did not find the text of a page that it should have found, named "Ask her for the reagent".''
''This is usually caused by following an outdated diff or history link to a page that has been deleted.''
''If this is not the case, you may have found a bug in the software. Please report this to an administrator, making note of the URL.''

The link wasn't red and I tried refreshing several times to see if if it was a momentary glitch, but it kept happening, so I decided to report it here. I hope this is the correct procedure.

The page in question is http://editthis.info/choose_your_own_adventure/Ask_her_for_the_reagent and I got to it from http://editthis.info/choose_your_own_adventure/Tell_her_the_truth_and_say_no

== Featured Stories ==

I believe the ''inyashas fantasy land'' story being on the [[Previous Featured Stories]] page is a mistake. It doesn't appear to have shown up on the [[Featured CYOA Nominations]] page, the grammar is laughably poor, and if my assumptions are correct, it seems to have been written by an InuYasha fan who can't even spell the name of his favorite show. I would correct this myself, but I know you're usually pretty on top of things, so I just wanted to make sure it was allowed to stay up in error. I don't want to step on your toes or anything. --[[User:Cannon|Cannon]] 06:19, 7 January 2011 (UTC)

== Felix342018 ==

I just wanted to alert you that [[User:Felix342018|Felix342018]] changed the links in [[Plan B-Attack]] to go to an external website. I reverted his edit. It seems fairly clear to me that he has no intention of making any productive contributions. I believe you have the power to put an end to this, yes? --[[User:Cannon|Cannon]] 07:08, 8 January 2011 (UTC)

== Oops on link removal ==

I only discovered that there were few or no dark alleys in the part of Manhattan relevant to Worlds End by looking it up in Google Street View, but I tried to preserve the story by relocating the action. (If you were to walk to the Hudson River from the Port Authority, which direction would you go in? West. Which street would you take? Probably somewhere around 42nd. Thus the editing decision there.) I try not to remove links/ rip pages out, though. [[User:Rickyrab|Rickyrab]] 04:22, 22 January 2011 (UTC)
:see http://maps.google.com/maps?oe=utf-8&client=firefox-a&ie=UTF8&q=port+authority+bus+terminal&fb=1&gl=us&hq=port+authority+bus+terminal&hnear=New+Brunswick,+Middlesex,+New+Jersey&ll=40.758197,-73.990163&spn=0.003486,0.009946&z=17 [[User:Rickyrab|Rickyrab]] 04:24, 22 January 2011 (UTC)
::That being said, sorry about the page loss. [[User:Rickyrab|Rickyrab]] 04:27, 22 January 2011 (UTC)

== From Narutowriter ==

I have a question... how do you delete pages? haha, ironic, i know, but my laptop was slow one day and I ran out of room and made a new page, but now it's all good and i want to delete the other page. Please help. Do I just delete all the contents or what? IDK.. Thanks.

Thanks but heres the link because i deleted off the page:: [[Go to lunch with Sasuke 2]]

Give her a surprise party in the morning

Manichimon — Thu, 24 Mar 2011 12:43:55 GMT

Manichimon:

You decide to give her a surprise birthday party tomorrow morning. You decide that it should be:

*[[A day in alone, just the two of you]]
*[[A big party where you invite all of your friends]]
*[[Invite some of her friends over for a party]]
*[[A day out on the town]]

{{SexRompStatus|Location=''[[Your Apartment]]''|Health=Horny|MP=0|Level=1}}
[[Category: Smutty Sex Romp]]

March into the gym teacher's office

Manichimon — Wed, 23 Mar 2011 09:49:28 GMT

Manichimon:

You tuck your dick back into your pants and wait for her to lead you to her office, she grabs your arm in a painfully tight grip and drags you into a small cluttered office, with a large wooden desk covered with papers. "What the hell do you think you were doing back there?" Asks the obviously enraged gym-teacher, your body isn't strong enough to atack the musclebound teacher so you decide to,
*[[Possess her]]
*[[Rip her clothes off]]
*[[Make an excuse]]

{{RampageTemplate|who=6th Grade Boy}}
[[Category: Rampage]]

March into the gym teacher's office

Manichimon — Wed, 23 Mar 2011 09:48:47 GMT

Manichimon: Created page with 'You tuck your dick back into tour pants and wait for her to lead you to her office, she grabs your arm in a painfully tight grip and drags you into a small cluttered office, with…'

You tuck your dick back into tour pants and wait for her to lead you to her office, she grabs your arm in a painfully tight grip and drags you into a small cluttered office, with a large wooden desk covered with papers. "What the hell do you think you were doing back there?" Asks the obciously enraged gym-teacher, your body isn't strong enough to atack the musclebound teacher so you decide to,
*[[Possess her]]
*[[Rip her clothes off]]
*[[Make an excuse]]

{{RampageTemplate|who=6th Grade Boy}}
[[Category: Rampage]]