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User talk:Platypus

Fizzlebop — Sat, 26 Nov 2011 17:53:04 GMT

Fizzlebop:

Since this page has become rather cluttered, I've moved old discussions to the archive page below. Feel free to leave new messages here. I'll get back to you ASAP!

[[User talk:Platypus/Archive1]]

I don't think I'm up to the high standards you set on your site. I won't trouble you anymore with uncategorized pages and I apologize for the time you've had to spend cleaning up after me. If you could please post the contents of the page you deleted on my talk page, I'll copy them elsewhere. Thanks.
--[[User:Fizzlebop]]

Platypus - I'm new to this site and have been having fun creating stories. After your warning about categorizing pages, I added categories to my pages. Apparently, I forgot to add a category to one of my pages last night and you deleted it. Please restore the content of that page so I can add a category. I am still in the middle of editing this story. I'm not going to continue spending hours writing stories on this site if a simple mistake like this causes you to delete all of my work.
--[[User:Fizzlebop]]

>Add new comments below. Do not add new comments to the archive.

Hey Platypus,
I made some changes to links in The Story of Jack Foster, and all three links suddenly took the reader into Smutty sex Romp. I guess the author of that page, who doesn't seem to be active any longer, must have intended for this to happen, but it just seems really odd.
Can you let me know your thoughts on this? I will change all the links back if you think I should, it just seemed like a mistake at first so I corrected one, then another. When I saw that the third link of the three on that page led there too, I thought i should check in with you...
Thanks in advance!
--[[User:Starry]] 20.14, 19 November 11

Hey platypus, I was hoping you could add another few... Or alot more pages and options to the story A New Life in the section of a college girl with a bladder problem. Please add alot of new and exciting pages that relate to the topic, by myself I think I've added atleast 5 or more pages but I'm not even as close to as good as you in editing and adding plus one other reason is that it is not as fun when your the only user editing and adding to that story in which you have to create all the pages and when you read ten you already know what will happen. Please add alot of pages and exciting new options to the story in the college girl with a bladder problem Section. Thanks. From: Shawnbunbun. Once again thanks.-November 15th at 6:10 PM (AKA 18:10 Army time).

>.< As far as I knew the grammar isn't too horrible. I'm pretty sure I got spelling correct... is it just the random capitals for words that shouldn't be capitalized that's bugging you? And I'll remember about the Category's. ^^ Btw new to leaving messages so sorry if I've messed up. Just found this site last night.
--[[User:Xx.Fate.Eater.xX|Xx.Fate.Eater.xX]] 14:06, 08 November 2011

Hey, I was wondering if you could create two pages, a public and a so-called private. This could lessen the chances of people editing stories that were only supposed to be edited by one person. in fact, a completed section where nothing could be edited could be placed as well. Tell me what you think or if you want, just create the section.

--[[User:Snowball|Snowball]] 03:04, 23 October 2011 (UTC)

Hey Platypus, I dropped by the site this morning to do some additions to my stories and noticed that both of them have been removed from the main page. To my knowledge neither have been deleted and I am greatful for that. I am unsure what I have done or how I have offended you to make you want to remove peoples access to my stories. I won't make any additions until hearing from you or revert the changes you made. I realize that I, personally haven't made any recent additions to them but since they were still being read and other people were starting contribute I didn't think this would be a problem. If I have done something to offend you then I am sorry, if you would have dropped me a line on my talk page then I am sure we could have worked it out. Please let me know what you would like me to do or not do. Thanks,--[[User:Blackdragon25|Blackdragon25]] 15:08, 22 October 2011 (UTC)

Hey Platypus again, on the main page The Devils Daughter has no apostrophe if I put an apostrophe wouldn't it totally spaz out?

Sorry Platypus about not putting down the Category, my bad there, still getting the hang of this system!! Forgive me :D

-- Not sure what you mean by the last message I received, as I copied off of the main tutorial page on how to add category.
--[[User:Missredelle|Missredelle]]

Sry, I'm from germany and those hs cause me alot of trouble:D By the way, this was my first writing here and I would appreciate some feedback maybe. Thanks for the correcting

--[[User:MCGeddo|MCGeddo]] 21:37, 15 September 2011 (UTC)

Is what TheSugarTrail is doing with that story of his anything more than spam? Story starts out with pick your hair color. 4 options. Then nothing changes from that other than simple hair color. Then after that comes eye color 3 options again nothing changes b/c of this. Finally a name is picked with 6 options. Nothing changes in the story based on these 3 things. Then you gotta do the math 4 x 3 x 6 = 72 pages per page of actual story. SEVENTY TWO PAGES PER PAGE OF ACTUAL STORY!!!

The story currently has about 232 pages. Roughly 10 of these 232 pages are not simply a clone of another page with 1 word or letter changed. Each additional actual page to the story will be needed to have 71 clones of it to keep the story going.

http://editthis.info/Choose_your_own_adventure/Windy_Lea_Stories

--[[User:Yihman1|Yihman1]] 22:03, 5 September 2011 (UTC)

== Archiving The 'General Discussion' Page & Other ==
Like what you did with your own user talk page, perhaps you should do the same thing with the 'General Discussion' page. It's got a ridiculous amount of subtopics on the page and most of them are dead. I'd like to use that page more often and maybe help people with their problems other than just you having to toil away being admin and all.

Also, maybe we could have a 'Story of the Year Award'. The nominations for this award could include the stories that were featured in the year. There would be a separate page where people can vote for a story. Voting can be done by making pages called (( Voting: Nomination )) and people can just click on the page to vote, the amount of views that were done on that page will decide the winner. --[[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] 23 October 2011

:I'm in full agreement about the General Discussion page needing an archive. I'd be happy to contribute towards making that a reality, too. [[User:JackalRobot|JackalRobot]] 19:38, 20 November 2011 (UTC)

::I decided to full-on go ahead and '''be bold''', so I did it. Everything prior to 2010 is now in an [[Talk:Main Page/Archive1|archive page]]. If more discussions did take place on the General Discussion page, I can see a system that had archived sections divided by topic, e.g. an archive for questions about writing stories, an archive for questions about how to edit a wiki, an archive for promoting a particular story. But that's the future, and I'll probably have cyborg bits by then. [[User:JackalRobot|JackalRobot]] 19:56, 20 November 2011 (UTC)

== Dating Site Ads ==

I know you've probably noticed this by the time you read this, but some person changed the Main Page to some crappy dating site ad. Thankfully, I happened to go on about 45 minutes after this incident and switched it back to the previous addition. This is really starting to piss me off, the Dating Site Ads I mean. Just checking the recent changes now, I see two spam accounts that were just made, with one being the account responsible for doing the griefing on the site. Hopefully this rubbish can finally end. I don't know who is doing this, but one thing is for sure, they must be really bored. --[[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] 9 October 2011

Apparently they are at it again, if I did it correctly I changed the main page back to your previous edit. It's amusing in a way because they actually think people looking for a choose your own adventure style text based site like this are doing to see some dating advertisements in "not-really English" and go like oh, let me check that out instead. I also updated two of the stories I have been working on for # of pages as they were out of date. --[[User:Rouge|Rouge]] November 18, 2011

== Review Area ==

Hey Platypus, i've recently finished my last story (though, I need to read it over for grammatical errors), and I was thinking that I should, instead of making another story, I would perhaps make a reviewing area, if this works out well, this could increase publicity for stories which should be read, encourage writers to continue writing on this site, and also give writers constructive criticism (e.g. one choice stories).

You should be asking by now, why are you asking me? Well, I already asked TheElderOnes, and he says it's a good concept, now i'm just here to ask you if you find it good as well. Perhaps, even helping me do reviews, since you are, a well known person on this site. -- [[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] 7:36 (AEST), 21 September 2011

A few more questions, where does my review page go? I kind of don't want it to be in some section were no one would see it, since the whole point of this idea is to increase publicity for stories which should be more popular and of course, make consturctive criticisms about the writers story. Also, who are some people you would think are capable and willing to help me write the reviews? -- [[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] 16:48 (AEST) 21 September 2011

Maybe you could somehow mix them together. Say, add a third column, then add a link on the main page to all the reviews. The link could tell the reader how the reviews are done. -- [[User:Heyoeveryone| Heyoeveryone]] September 23 2011

Cool! Just tell me when you're ready. Though, I think that I may need help with this project. Since I can't play through every single story without becoming too stressed (I don't want this to become a 'real' job). Plus, I have some personal issues to attend to, so I cannot necessarily log in every day. So I'm suggesting that we should make a 'ad' for people willing to review, they can send you or me a message detailing why he or she should be allowed to review. Or, we can go a easier way and just make a 'user reviews' section. Then, if we find certain reviews that are of high quality, we just move it to the 'official reviews' section.

Oh and sorry for the late reply. --[[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] 20:57 (AEST) 24 September 2011

Hey, can you umm... make the reviews page for me, i'm kind of scared when changing the site such as this. You can leave it red linked if you want, and i'll just add in the stuff. -- [[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] 30 September 2011

Thank you!!! And you're welcome to write reviews anytime. --[[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] 2 October 2011

== Question on something that could be considered a "nonstory" ==

Hi, Platypus, do you know how to make a personalized status indicator? I'd like to get rid of the MP stuff and add more stuff on it -[[User:Storylover141|Storylover141]] 17:56 PDT, 25 September 2011

All right. So, I've been plotting this big universe in which my stories occur, and after writing a certain story, I plan on finally writing a really big story that involves characters from all of the stories (and new ones, of course), meeting up and sh- stuff. But, what I had been planning is writing a little bit of a supplementary thing, bridging some of the events of the stories and connecting them before the real fun can begin.

However, this would just be in a diary format, with "forward" and "backwards" options being on pages. Now comes my question - would it be cool if I did that as a separate story, or should I add it in as pages in the Elderpedia (this is my current idea)... I could, of course, do it on another site, but that's the least attractive option. The pages, if added to the Elderpedia would have a title that clearly defines them as part of the Elderpedia, but with a marker like "Elderpedia:BCDiary1" or something similar. Now that I'm ranting, I think it's simpler to end this here. Just wanted to get your opinion on this before going through with it. --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 12:00, 15 September 2011 (UTC)

Shall do, good sir. --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 12:27, 15 September 2011 (UTC)

Unrelated to the above question, but I don't want to clutter your page with headlines - Does this wiki have an IRC chat yet? It seems like it would, and a good amount of other wikis have their own. It'd be a good way for people to ask questions to each other, and could even lead to ideas for new stories. I dunno, I just think that this kind of thing would be interesting and was wondering if we already had one set up or not. --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 07:03, 17 September 2011 (UTC)

Adding here for the same reason stated in my last message here. I saw your discussion with Heyoeveryone, and your ideas on the review page. I thought of a way you could combine them if you want, like the review page being separate like the featured story, as in your first idea, and then once a--[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 22:42, 2 November 2011 (UTC) story is reviewed there, you could do a third column link to either the review page or the specific review.

In case it's a bit oddly phrased (Which I'm sure it is), I dicked around for a minute and threw together [[Delete:ReviewExample|this]] to serve as a visual aid. --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 05:58, 22 September 2011 (UTC)

More spam, dude. [[How can established folks perceive estimable absol|Here,]] [[I thought this was about time I acquainted myself‎|here,]] and [[It is primo how mavericks must not fully explain a|here,]] and the users in question are [[User:Andreatsde|Andreatsde,]] [[User:Randyjukla|Randyjukla]] and [[User:Beatrizwbm|Beatrizwbm.]] --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 07:33, 23 September 2011 (UTC)

This is just gonna be my little section of the page, hope you don't mind. Anyways, I noticed that we have the <nowiki>{{incomplete}}</nowiki> thing, which generates the "incomplete pages" warning. What I'm wondering is this: Do we have one that would do one for categorization warning, and if we don't, why not? It'd be quite useful, as there's someone getting warned for this very reason almost every day, where as the incomplete thing is maybe once a week or so, it seems. It'd be so easy to just thrown <nowiki>{{categorization}}</nowiki> on a page and have it tell them, and if someone wants to personalize the message or whatever, they could just type it in on their own.

Just, uh... just a thought. --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 01:03, 1 November 2011 (UTC)

Ah, finally! A template. <nowiki>{{warn1}}</nowiki> shall not go to waste here - that I'm sure of. Also, that O.D.S.T. person below was annoying. Just saying. --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 22:42, 2 November 2011 (UTC)

Hey, i'm so sorry that i keep on forgetting to categorize my posts. I'M SO SORRY! i'm new to this site, and i did'n't mean to! i'm so, so, sorry! forgive meeeeee!!!! --[[User:TeamJack|TeamJack]] 1:48, 18 November 2011 (UTC)

I promise i will be more careful. If i forget to catagorize a post, i will IMMEDEATELY fix it. --[[User:TeamJack|TeamJack]] 3:27, 18 November 2011 (UTC)

That was accedental! i was rushing out hte door when i was doing that And forgot to change it! i'm fixing it now. --[[User:TeamJack|TeamJack]] 6:41, 18 November 2011 (UTC)

== General Disclaimer ==

Please understand that, well, the General Disclaimer page was indeed not part of a story, it is a legal page. It <nowiki>[most likely]</nowiki> freed this site from liability including slander and defamation.
[[user:O.D.S.T.|O.D.S.T.]] - '''''Proin sit amet nisi scientiam nostrum''''' 23:21, 26 September 2011 (UTC)

== Uncategorised ==

I've been popping in a few categories for people that forgot and throwing the odd <nowiki>{{warn1}}--~~~~</nowiki> onto talk pages, and it has just this second dawned on me that I really should've cleared that with you first. My apologies about that. Are you cool with me continuing to do so? [[User:JackalRobot|JackalRobot]] 09:01, 23 November 2011 (UTC)

So, you sent me a message about a status bar... And, I'm not sure what that is.
--[[User:Krinkel|Krinkel]] 16:59, 26 November 2011 (UTC)

User talk:Platypus

Fizzlebop — Sat, 26 Nov 2011 17:06:48 GMT

Fizzlebop:

Since this page has become rather cluttered, I've moved old discussions to the archive page below. Feel free to leave new messages here. I'll get back to you ASAP!

[[User talk:Platypus/Archive1]]

Platypus - I'm new to this site and have been having fun creating stories. After your warning about categorizing pages, I added categories to my pages. Apparently, I forgot to add a category to one of my pages last night and you deleted it. Please restore the content of that page so I can add a category. I am still in the middle of editing this story. I'm not going to continue spending hours writing stories on this site if a simple mistake like this causes you to delete all of my work.

>Add new comments below. Do not add new comments to the archive.

Hey Platypus,
I made some changes to links in The Story of Jack Foster, and all three links suddenly took the reader into Smutty sex Romp. I guess the author of that page, who doesn't seem to be active any longer, must have intended for this to happen, but it just seems really odd.
Can you let me know your thoughts on this? I will change all the links back if you think I should, it just seemed like a mistake at first so I corrected one, then another. When I saw that the third link of the three on that page led there too, I thought i should check in with you...
Thanks in advance!
--[[User:Starry]] 20.14, 19 November 11

Hey platypus, I was hoping you could add another few... Or alot more pages and options to the story A New Life in the section of a college girl with a bladder problem. Please add alot of new and exciting pages that relate to the topic, by myself I think I've added atleast 5 or more pages but I'm not even as close to as good as you in editing and adding plus one other reason is that it is not as fun when your the only user editing and adding to that story in which you have to create all the pages and when you read ten you already know what will happen. Please add alot of pages and exciting new options to the story in the college girl with a bladder problem Section. Thanks. From: Shawnbunbun. Once again thanks.-November 15th at 6:10 PM (AKA 18:10 Army time).

>.< As far as I knew the grammar isn't too horrible. I'm pretty sure I got spelling correct... is it just the random capitals for words that shouldn't be capitalized that's bugging you? And I'll remember about the Category's. ^^ Btw new to leaving messages so sorry if I've messed up. Just found this site last night.
--[[User:Xx.Fate.Eater.xX|Xx.Fate.Eater.xX]] 14:06, 08 November 2011

Hey, I was wondering if you could create two pages, a public and a so-called private. This could lessen the chances of people editing stories that were only supposed to be edited by one person. in fact, a completed section where nothing could be edited could be placed as well. Tell me what you think or if you want, just create the section.

--[[User:Snowball|Snowball]] 03:04, 23 October 2011 (UTC)

Hey Platypus, I dropped by the site this morning to do some additions to my stories and noticed that both of them have been removed from the main page. To my knowledge neither have been deleted and I am greatful for that. I am unsure what I have done or how I have offended you to make you want to remove peoples access to my stories. I won't make any additions until hearing from you or revert the changes you made. I realize that I, personally haven't made any recent additions to them but since they were still being read and other people were starting contribute I didn't think this would be a problem. If I have done something to offend you then I am sorry, if you would have dropped me a line on my talk page then I am sure we could have worked it out. Please let me know what you would like me to do or not do. Thanks,--[[User:Blackdragon25|Blackdragon25]] 15:08, 22 October 2011 (UTC)

Hey Platypus again, on the main page The Devils Daughter has no apostrophe if I put an apostrophe wouldn't it totally spaz out?

Sorry Platypus about not putting down the Category, my bad there, still getting the hang of this system!! Forgive me :D

-- Not sure what you mean by the last message I received, as I copied off of the main tutorial page on how to add category.
--[[User:Missredelle|Missredelle]]

Sry, I'm from germany and those hs cause me alot of trouble:D By the way, this was my first writing here and I would appreciate some feedback maybe. Thanks for the correcting

--[[User:MCGeddo|MCGeddo]] 21:37, 15 September 2011 (UTC)

Is what TheSugarTrail is doing with that story of his anything more than spam? Story starts out with pick your hair color. 4 options. Then nothing changes from that other than simple hair color. Then after that comes eye color 3 options again nothing changes b/c of this. Finally a name is picked with 6 options. Nothing changes in the story based on these 3 things. Then you gotta do the math 4 x 3 x 6 = 72 pages per page of actual story. SEVENTY TWO PAGES PER PAGE OF ACTUAL STORY!!!

The story currently has about 232 pages. Roughly 10 of these 232 pages are not simply a clone of another page with 1 word or letter changed. Each additional actual page to the story will be needed to have 71 clones of it to keep the story going.

http://editthis.info/Choose_your_own_adventure/Windy_Lea_Stories

--[[User:Yihman1|Yihman1]] 22:03, 5 September 2011 (UTC)

== Archiving The 'General Discussion' Page & Other ==
Like what you did with your own user talk page, perhaps you should do the same thing with the 'General Discussion' page. It's got a ridiculous amount of subtopics on the page and most of them are dead. I'd like to use that page more often and maybe help people with their problems other than just you having to toil away being admin and all.

Also, maybe we could have a 'Story of the Year Award'. The nominations for this award could include the stories that were featured in the year. There would be a separate page where people can vote for a story. Voting can be done by making pages called (( Voting: Nomination )) and people can just click on the page to vote, the amount of views that were done on that page will decide the winner. --[[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] 23 October 2011

:I'm in full agreement about the General Discussion page needing an archive. I'd be happy to contribute towards making that a reality, too. [[User:JackalRobot|JackalRobot]] 19:38, 20 November 2011 (UTC)

::I decided to full-on go ahead and '''be bold''', so I did it. Everything prior to 2010 is now in an [[Talk:Main Page/Archive1|archive page]]. If more discussions did take place on the General Discussion page, I can see a system that had archived sections divided by topic, e.g. an archive for questions about writing stories, an archive for questions about how to edit a wiki, an archive for promoting a particular story. But that's the future, and I'll probably have cyborg bits by then. [[User:JackalRobot|JackalRobot]] 19:56, 20 November 2011 (UTC)

== Dating Site Ads ==

I know you've probably noticed this by the time you read this, but some person changed the Main Page to some crappy dating site ad. Thankfully, I happened to go on about 45 minutes after this incident and switched it back to the previous addition. This is really starting to piss me off, the Dating Site Ads I mean. Just checking the recent changes now, I see two spam accounts that were just made, with one being the account responsible for doing the griefing on the site. Hopefully this rubbish can finally end. I don't know who is doing this, but one thing is for sure, they must be really bored. --[[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] 9 October 2011

Apparently they are at it again, if I did it correctly I changed the main page back to your previous edit. It's amusing in a way because they actually think people looking for a choose your own adventure style text based site like this are doing to see some dating advertisements in "not-really English" and go like oh, let me check that out instead. I also updated two of the stories I have been working on for # of pages as they were out of date. --[[User:Rouge|Rouge]] November 18, 2011

== Review Area ==

Hey Platypus, i've recently finished my last story (though, I need to read it over for grammatical errors), and I was thinking that I should, instead of making another story, I would perhaps make a reviewing area, if this works out well, this could increase publicity for stories which should be read, encourage writers to continue writing on this site, and also give writers constructive criticism (e.g. one choice stories).

You should be asking by now, why are you asking me? Well, I already asked TheElderOnes, and he says it's a good concept, now i'm just here to ask you if you find it good as well. Perhaps, even helping me do reviews, since you are, a well known person on this site. -- [[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] 7:36 (AEST), 21 September 2011

A few more questions, where does my review page go? I kind of don't want it to be in some section were no one would see it, since the whole point of this idea is to increase publicity for stories which should be more popular and of course, make consturctive criticisms about the writers story. Also, who are some people you would think are capable and willing to help me write the reviews? -- [[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] 16:48 (AEST) 21 September 2011

Maybe you could somehow mix them together. Say, add a third column, then add a link on the main page to all the reviews. The link could tell the reader how the reviews are done. -- [[User:Heyoeveryone| Heyoeveryone]] September 23 2011

Cool! Just tell me when you're ready. Though, I think that I may need help with this project. Since I can't play through every single story without becoming too stressed (I don't want this to become a 'real' job). Plus, I have some personal issues to attend to, so I cannot necessarily log in every day. So I'm suggesting that we should make a 'ad' for people willing to review, they can send you or me a message detailing why he or she should be allowed to review. Or, we can go a easier way and just make a 'user reviews' section. Then, if we find certain reviews that are of high quality, we just move it to the 'official reviews' section.

Oh and sorry for the late reply. --[[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] 20:57 (AEST) 24 September 2011

Hey, can you umm... make the reviews page for me, i'm kind of scared when changing the site such as this. You can leave it red linked if you want, and i'll just add in the stuff. -- [[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] 30 September 2011

Thank you!!! And you're welcome to write reviews anytime. --[[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] 2 October 2011

== Question on something that could be considered a "nonstory" ==

Hi, Platypus, do you know how to make a personalized status indicator? I'd like to get rid of the MP stuff and add more stuff on it -[[User:Storylover141|Storylover141]] 17:56 PDT, 25 September 2011

All right. So, I've been plotting this big universe in which my stories occur, and after writing a certain story, I plan on finally writing a really big story that involves characters from all of the stories (and new ones, of course), meeting up and sh- stuff. But, what I had been planning is writing a little bit of a supplementary thing, bridging some of the events of the stories and connecting them before the real fun can begin.

However, this would just be in a diary format, with "forward" and "backwards" options being on pages. Now comes my question - would it be cool if I did that as a separate story, or should I add it in as pages in the Elderpedia (this is my current idea)... I could, of course, do it on another site, but that's the least attractive option. The pages, if added to the Elderpedia would have a title that clearly defines them as part of the Elderpedia, but with a marker like "Elderpedia:BCDiary1" or something similar. Now that I'm ranting, I think it's simpler to end this here. Just wanted to get your opinion on this before going through with it. --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 12:00, 15 September 2011 (UTC)

Shall do, good sir. --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 12:27, 15 September 2011 (UTC)

Unrelated to the above question, but I don't want to clutter your page with headlines - Does this wiki have an IRC chat yet? It seems like it would, and a good amount of other wikis have their own. It'd be a good way for people to ask questions to each other, and could even lead to ideas for new stories. I dunno, I just think that this kind of thing would be interesting and was wondering if we already had one set up or not. --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 07:03, 17 September 2011 (UTC)

Adding here for the same reason stated in my last message here. I saw your discussion with Heyoeveryone, and your ideas on the review page. I thought of a way you could combine them if you want, like the review page being separate like the featured story, as in your first idea, and then once a--[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 22:42, 2 November 2011 (UTC) story is reviewed there, you could do a third column link to either the review page or the specific review.

In case it's a bit oddly phrased (Which I'm sure it is), I dicked around for a minute and threw together [[Delete:ReviewExample|this]] to serve as a visual aid. --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 05:58, 22 September 2011 (UTC)

More spam, dude. [[How can established folks perceive estimable absol|Here,]] [[I thought this was about time I acquainted myself‎|here,]] and [[It is primo how mavericks must not fully explain a|here,]] and the users in question are [[User:Andreatsde|Andreatsde,]] [[User:Randyjukla|Randyjukla]] and [[User:Beatrizwbm|Beatrizwbm.]] --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 07:33, 23 September 2011 (UTC)

This is just gonna be my little section of the page, hope you don't mind. Anyways, I noticed that we have the <nowiki>{{incomplete}}</nowiki> thing, which generates the "incomplete pages" warning. What I'm wondering is this: Do we have one that would do one for categorization warning, and if we don't, why not? It'd be quite useful, as there's someone getting warned for this very reason almost every day, where as the incomplete thing is maybe once a week or so, it seems. It'd be so easy to just thrown <nowiki>{{categorization}}</nowiki> on a page and have it tell them, and if someone wants to personalize the message or whatever, they could just type it in on their own.

Just, uh... just a thought. --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 01:03, 1 November 2011 (UTC)

Ah, finally! A template. <nowiki>{{warn1}}</nowiki> shall not go to waste here - that I'm sure of. Also, that O.D.S.T. person below was annoying. Just saying. --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 22:42, 2 November 2011 (UTC)

Hey, i'm so sorry that i keep on forgetting to categorize my posts. I'M SO SORRY! i'm new to this site, and i did'n't mean to! i'm so, so, sorry! forgive meeeeee!!!! --[[User:TeamJack|TeamJack]] 1:48, 18 November 2011 (UTC)

I promise i will be more careful. If i forget to catagorize a post, i will IMMEDEATELY fix it. --[[User:TeamJack|TeamJack]] 3:27, 18 November 2011 (UTC)

That was accedental! i was rushing out hte door when i was doing that And forgot to change it! i'm fixing it now. --[[User:TeamJack|TeamJack]] 6:41, 18 November 2011 (UTC)

== General Disclaimer ==

Please understand that, well, the General Disclaimer page was indeed not part of a story, it is a legal page. It <nowiki>[most likely]</nowiki> freed this site from liability including slander and defamation.
[[user:O.D.S.T.|O.D.S.T.]] - '''''Proin sit amet nisi scientiam nostrum''''' 23:21, 26 September 2011 (UTC)

== Uncategorised ==

I've been popping in a few categories for people that forgot and throwing the odd <nowiki>{{warn1}}--~~~~</nowiki> onto talk pages, and it has just this second dawned on me that I really should've cleared that with you first. My apologies about that. Are you cool with me continuing to do so? [[User:JackalRobot|JackalRobot]] 09:01, 23 November 2011 (UTC)

So, you sent me a message about a status bar... And, I'm not sure what that is.
--[[User:Krinkel|Krinkel]] 16:59, 26 November 2011 (UTC)

The man in white/Follow the second search party

Fizzlebop — Sat, 26 Nov 2011 04:26:10 GMT

Fizzlebop:

Following the brief family team huddle, Sharon and Betty gathered themselves and began to prepare for their trek deep into the Umlaut acreage where the girls had earlier spotted Sticky. The two set themselves to the task of preparing for the search with the diligence of women ready to defend their family name, all the while hushed under the weight of separate secrets weighing on each of their respective shoulders.

"You know," said Betty breaking the longstanding silence,"before we get involved with this there is something you should know about Sticky."

Sharon looked up from tying her hiking boots at the sound of his name. "You know anything about the Malahues?" asked Sharon quietly, not breaking her gaze with betty.

"Yes, as a matter of fact I do," she said cautiously, "but whatever you do you can't reveal this to the boys and their mother." She paused for several more seconds. "I have been doing some research on the Umlaut family tree - turns out there is more of a connection between our family and the Malahues than just our business dealings. Sharon, the Umlauts and the Malahues come from the same stock. As far as i could find, the families are the one and the same, it was only during the great Shenandoah brum wars of the 1880's that the Umlauts branched off when a dispute over the fibers used in making our beloved family product separated the original organic polyester nylon farmers from the business-minded young bloods who preferred the cheaper synthetic cotton."

Sharon was silent for several moments, a glassy film beginning to cover her eyes. "You can't mean we Umlauts came from the Malahues," she whispered, her dry voice choking with emotion at the horrible secret that had just been revealed to her, "this means all along the boys and Joy have been concealing the true roots of our family lineage to hide the greed of our ancestors."

Betty and Sharon resolved to find and warn their distant cousin Sticky of the imminent raid on his crop and him. They jumped into their SUV and started to program the GPS coordinates into the navigation system that they had overheard Kim calling out from the basement. Sharon started to pat her pockets, searching for something.

"Where are my glasses? Do you see them?"

They spent a few seconds searching the car seat and console before Betty remembered she had her own. " Oh, here, use mine." Betty handed over her skinny reading glasses. They took turns using the glasses to alternately read the GPS coordinates from the piece of paper and program them into the system. Once the ever pleasant British woman's voice started speaking, Sharon put the pedal to the metal. They drove with extreme urgency. Going 80 mph through dense forest, the mothers whizzed by oaks and maples, once nearly smacking straight into a locust tree. "How many times have I asked Peter to take down that tree!?" complained Sharon. They skidded to a stop as they arrived at the GPS coordinates and began looking for the tell-tale signs of polyester nylon in bloom. The clean, slightly acrid smell; the slightly lower density of air; and the rustling of nylon shoots in the slight breeze led them fairly quickly to the crop site just over a nearby ridge. They spotted Sticky Malahue walking through the crops, periodically bending over to inspect a polyester flower.

"Sticky!" Betty whisper-yelled. "We don't have much time! The rest of the Umlauts are coming to find you and ensure your crop fails permanently - and you too!"

Sticky wasted no time asking questions about why these Umlauts were suddenly helping him. He just bolted. Malahue sprinted straight back to his small cottage on the edge of the field and grabbed a bag of polyester nylon seeds and stuffed them in his pocket. With this small bit of hope safely secured, he pumped his legs as hard as he could and ran into the woods.

* [[The man in white/Return to the house|Return to the house]]

[[Category:The man in white]]

The man in white/Follow the second search party

Fizzlebop — Sat, 26 Nov 2011 04:15:39 GMT

Fizzlebop: Created page with 'Following the brief family team huddle, Sharon and Betty gathered themselves and began to prepare for their trek deep into the Umlaut acreage where the girls had earlier spotted …'

Following the brief family team huddle, Sharon and Betty gathered themselves and began to prepare for their trek deep into the Umlaut acreage where the girls had earlier spotted Sticky. The two set themselves to the task of preparing for the search with the diligence of women ready to defend their family name, all the while hushed under the weight of separate secrets weighing on each of their respective shoulders.

"You know," said Betty breaking the longstanding silence,"before we get involved with this there is something you should know about Sticky."

Sharon looked up from tying her hiking boots at the sound of his name. "You know anything about the Malahues?" asked Sharon quietly, not breaking her gaze with betty.

"Yes, as a matter of fact I do," she said cautiously, "but whatever you do you can't reveal this to the boys and their mother." She paused for several more seconds. "I have been doing some research on the Umlaut family tree - turns out there is more of a connection between our family and the Malahues than just our business dealings. Sharon, the Umlauts and the Malahues come from the same stock. As far as i could find, the families are the one and the same, it was only during the great Shenandoah brum wars of the 1880's that the Umlauts branched off when a dispute over the fibers used in making our beloved family product separated the original organic polyester nylon farmers from the business-minded young bloods who preferred the cheaper synthetic cotton."

Sharon was silent for several moments, a glassy film beginning to cover her eyes. "You can't mean we Umlauts came from the Malahues," she whispered, her dry voice choking with emotion at the horrible secret that had just been revealed to her, "this means all along the boys and Joy have been concealing the true roots of our family lineage to hide the greed of our ancestors."

Betty and Sharon resolved to find an warn their distant cousin Sticky of the imminent raid on his crop and him. They jumped into their SUV and drove with extreme urgency towards the GPS coordinates they had overheard Kim calling out from the basement beneath them. Going 80 mph through dense forrest, the mothers whizzed by oaks and maples, once nearly smacking straight into a locust tree. "How many times have I asked Peter to take down that tree!?" complained Sharon. They skidded to a stop as they arrived at the GPS coordinates and began looking for the tell-tale signs of polyester nylon in bloom. The clean, slightly acrid smell; the slightly lower density of air; and the rustling of nylon shoots in the slight breeze led them fairly quickly to the crop site just over a nearby ridge. They spotted Sticky Malahue walking through the crops, periodically bending over to inspect a polyester flower.

"Sticky!" Betty whisper-yelled. "We don't have much time! The rest of the Umlauts are coming to find you and ensure your crop fails permanently - and you too!"

Sticky wasted no time asking questions about why these Umlauts were suddenly helping him. He just bolted. Malahue sprinted straight back to his small cottage on the edge of the field and grabbed a bag of polyester nylon seeds and stuffed them in his pocket. With this small bit of hope safely secured, he pumped his legs as hard as he could and ran into the woods.

* [[The man in white/Return to the house|Return to the house]]

[[Category:The man in white]]

The man in white/Floor it and run away

Fizzlebop — Sat, 26 Nov 2011 03:34:35 GMT

Fizzlebop:

Michelle and Christina pulled the car into the driveway and shut off the engine - their hearts still beating fast. They looked at each other and, taking a deep breath, opened their car doors and sprinted into the house. They yanked the door open, dashed inside and slamed it shut behind them, locking it quickly. The recent terror of the man in white was still fresh in their minds, but they found themselves in a calm, warm environment as their parents mingled - unaware of the man in white outside.

With adrenaline pumping, the girls hustled into the room with their parents and described what happened. After describing the startling appearance of the man in white, they were shocked and dismayed to find that their parents didn't believe them! They said "you girls always have had active imaginations." The girls went away disappointed and confused.

Once gone, their parents murmur in hushed and worried tones: "they saw him."

"This shouldn't be happening," said Peter, his anger evident as his face turned crimson, "I had my agents destroy every polyester-nylon crop field and grow house south of the Shenandoah Park. Sounds like Sticky is up to something with this latest development."

"I don't understand," said Kim, shaking his head in disbelief, "We had this worked out; ever since we made the switch to the cheaper synthetic cotton weave, our brum business has shot off. It was up to you two to keep our relatives out of the -"

"Don't you dare call them our relatives!" shot Joy flaring up into a fit of rage, "The Malahues are a different kind entirely - they don't care for the family business, just caring for those darn plants day and night, 'preserving the integrity of the trade' and all that nonsense. Well, we'll just see about that."

The parents huddled up and concocted a plan to send out search parties. Peter, Kim and grandmother Joy formed the first search party, Betty and Sharon formed a second.

* [[The man in white/Follow the first search party|Follow the first search party]]
* [[The man in white/Follow the second search party|Follow the second search party]]

[[Category:The man in white]]

The man in white/Follow the first search party

Fizzlebop — Sat, 26 Nov 2011 03:31:21 GMT

Fizzlebop:

The first search party consists of the fathers and their mother Joy. They rapidly descend the staircase to the rarely-used base to find their gear.

Peter rolls out his state-of-the-art bicycle with dozens of gadgets attached. Joy opened a secret compartment in the wall and drew out a specialized D65 full spectrum light source, polarized glasses and a spectrometer. Kim flipped over the top of an old coffee table, revealing a three-dimensional map of the surrounding area. As Peter inflated his bike tires and Joy donned her gear, Kim triangulated the position of the man in white based on the stories of the girls and readings from the two satellite dishes on the house roof. When he had a good bearing on the most likely location - he passed the GPS coordinates to Peter, who mounted his bicycle. Joy (now fully loaded with her paraphenalia) jumped on Peter's back and declared "this is the day you've been training for! Now fly like the wind!"

Peter clipped his feet into his pedals and burst through the basement door. Pedaling faster than ever before, Peter rode the bike through the woods headed towards the location designated by Kim. Bumping over logs, rocks and the rolling landscape, Joy kept a keen eye out while shining her D65 over hill and dale. They neared the target location and Peter called out "we're getting close - are you seeing anything?"

Joy alternated between scanning the horizon and watching the spectrometer until she saw the greenish-yellow hue that is uniquely characteristic to the natural polyester nylon plant. "Stop!" She yelled, and Peter came to a jolting halt. Joy and Peter dismounted and walked towards the yellow hue just over the ridge in front of them. As they crested the hill, they saw what they were looking for: a vast field of all natural polyester fiber growing under ultra-violet lamps. They quickly scanned the perimeter of the fields seeking the man in white, but saw no one.

"The best we can do is burn it," stated Joy. Peter fetched his bicycle and rode it around the field, using the handlebar-mounted flame-thrower to incinerate the crops. Once their task was complete, Peter radioed back to Kim at the house using the short-wave radio mounted to his bike. Since the brothers had spent hours fooling around with the antennas earlier that day, they had a great signal. "Mission complete, Soapcake."

Kim's voice crackled back over the radio, "Roger that, Pink Phantom."

Joy and Peter then:

*[[The man in white/Ride back to the house|Ride back to the house]]
*[[The man in white/Ride to the local tavern to celebrate|Ride the the local tavern to celebrate]]

[[Category:The man in white]]

The man in white/Follow the first search party

Fizzlebop — Sat, 26 Nov 2011 03:15:52 GMT

Fizzlebop:

The first search party consists of the fathers and their mother Joy. They rapidly descend the staircase to the rarely-used based to find their gear. Peter rolls out his state-of-the-art bicycle with dozens of gadgets attached. Joy opened a secret compartment in the wall and drew out a specialized D65 full spectrum light source, polarized glasses and a spectrometer. Kim flipped over the top of an old coffee table, revealing a three-dimensional map of the surrounding area. As Peter inflated his bike tires and Joy donned her gear, Kim triangulated the position of the man in white based on the stories of the girls and readings from the two satellite dishes on the house roof. When he had a good bearing on the most likely location - he passed the GPS coordinates to Peter, who mounted his bicycle. Joy (now fully loaded with her paraphenalia) jumped on Peter's back and declared "this is the day you've been training for! Now fly like the wind!"

Peter clipped his feet into his pedals and burst through the basement door. Pedaling faster than ever before, Peter rode the bike through the woods headed towards the location designated by Kim. Bumping over logs, rocks and the rolling landscape, Joy kept a keen eye out while shining her D65 over hill and dale. They neared the target location and Peter called out "we're getting close - are you seeing anything?"

Joy alternated between scanning the horizon and watching the spectrometer until she saw the greenish-yellow hue that is uniquely characteristic to the natural polyester nylon plant. "Stop!" She yelled, and Peter came to a jolting halt. Joy and Peter dismounted and walked towards the yellow hue just over the ridge in front of them. As they crested the hill, they saw what they were looking for: a vast field of all natural polyester fiber growing under ultra-violet lamps. They quickly scanned the perimeter of the fields seeking the man in white, but saw no one.

"The best we can do is burn it," stated Joy. Peter fetched his bicycle and rode it around the field, using the handlebar-mounted flame-thrower to incinerate the crops. Once their task was complete, Peter radioed back to Kim at the house using the short-wave radio mounted to his bike. Since the brothers had spent hours fooling around with the antennas earlier that day, they had a great signal. "Mission complete, Soapcake."

Kim's voice crackled back over the radio, "Roger that, Pink Phantom."

Joy and Peter then:

*[[The man in white/Ride back to the house|Ride back to the house]]
*[[The man in white/Ride to the local tavern to celebrate|Ride the the local tavern to celebrate]]

[[Category:The man in white]]

The man in white/Follow the first search party

Fizzlebop — Sat, 26 Nov 2011 02:55:13 GMT

Fizzlebop:

The first search party consists of the fathers and their mother Joy. They rapidly descend the staircase to the rarely-used based to find their gear. Peter rolls out his state-of-the-art bicycle with dozens of gadgets attached. Joy opened a secret compartment in the wall and drew out a specialized D65 full spectrum light source, polarized glasses and a spectrometer. Kim flipped over the top of an old coffee table, revealing a three-dimensional map of the surrounding area. As Peter inflated his bike tires and Joy donned her gear, Kim triangulated the position of the man in white based on the stories of the girls and readings from the two satellite dishes on the house roof. When he had a good bearing on the most likely location - he passed the GPS coordinates to Peter, who mounted his bicycle. Joy (now fully loaded with her paraphenalia) jumped on Peter's back and declared "this is the day you've been training for! Now fly like the wind!"

Peter clipped his feet into his pedals and burst through the basement door. Pedaling faster than ever before, Peter rode the bike through the woods headed towards the location designated by Kim. Bumping over logs, rocks and the rolling landscape, Joy kept a keen eye out while shining her D65 over hill and dale. They neared the target location and Peter called out "we're getting close - are you seeing anything?"

Joy alternated between scanning the horizon and watching the spectrometer until she saw the sign "Stop!" She yelled, and Peter came to a jolting halt. Joy and Peter dismounted and walked towards the yellow hue just over the ridge in front of them. As they crested the hill, they saw what they were looking for: a vast field of all natural polyester fiber growing under ultra-violet lamps. They quickly scanned the perimeter of the fields seeking the man in white, but saw no one.

"The best we can do is burn it" stated Joy. Peter fetched his bicycle and rode it around the field, using the handlebar-mounted flame-thrower to incinerate the crops.

Joy and Peter then:

*[[The man in white/Ride back to the house|Ride back to the house]]
*[[The man in white/Ride to the local tavern to celebrate|Ride the the local tavern to celebrate]]

[[Category:The man in white]]

The man in white/Follow the first search party

Fizzlebop — Sat, 26 Nov 2011 02:46:24 GMT

Fizzlebop: Created page with 'The first search party consists of the fathers and their mother Joy. They rapidly descend the staircase to the rarely-used based to find their gear. Peter rolls out his state-o…'

The man in white/Floor it and run away

Fizzlebop — Sat, 26 Nov 2011 02:39:02 GMT

Fizzlebop:

Michelle and Christina pull the car into the driveway and shut off the engine - their hearts still beating fast. They look at each other and, taking a deep breath, open their car doors and sprint into the house. They yank the door open, dash inside and slam it shut behind them, locking it quickly. The recent terror of the man in white is still fresh in their minds, but they find themselves in a calm, warm environment as their parents mingle - unaware of the man in white outside.

With adrenaline pumping, the girls hustle into the room with their parents and describe what happened. After describing the startling appearance of the man in white, they're shocked and dismayed to find that their parents don't believe them! They say "you girls always have had active imaginations." The girls go away disappointed and confused.

Once gone, their parents murmur in hushed and worried tones: "they saw him." The parents huddle up and develop a plan to send out search parties. Peter, Kim and grandmother Joy form the first search party, Betty and Sharon form a second.

* [[The man in white/Follow the first search party|Follow the first search party]]
* [[The man in white/Follow the second search party|Follow the second search party]]

[[Category:The man in white]]

The man in white/Floor it and run away

Fizzlebop — Sat, 26 Nov 2011 02:36:53 GMT

Fizzlebop:

Michelle and Christina pull the car into the driveway and shut off the engine - their hearts still beating fast. They look at each other and, taking a deep breath, open their car doors and sprint into the house. They yank the door open, dash inside and slam it shut behind them, locking it quickly. The recent terror of the man in white is still fresh in their minds, but they find themselves in a calm, warm environment as their parents mingle - unaware of the man in white outside.

With adrenaline pumping, the girls hustle into the room with their parents and describe what happened. After describing the startling appearance of the man in white, they're shocked and dismayed to find that their parents don't believe them! They say "you girls always have had active imaginations." The girls go away disappointed and confused.

Once gone, their parents murmur in hushed and worried tones: "they saw him." The parents huddle up and develop a plan to send out search parties. Peter and grandmother Joy form the first search party, Betty and Sharon form a second, while Kim stays to keep watch over the children at the house.

* [[The man in white/Follow the first search party|Follow the first search party]]
* [[The man in white/Follow the second search party|Follow the second search party]]
* [[The man in white/Stay at the house|Stay at the house]]

[[Category:The man in white]]

The man in white/Floor it and run away

Fizzlebop — Sat, 26 Nov 2011 02:30:21 GMT

Fizzlebop:

girls describe what happened. Parents don't believe them. Girls go away disappointed and confused. Once gone, parents say "they saw him." Parents then huddle and come up with a plan to send out search parties. Peter and Joy form the first search party, Betty and Sharon form a second, while Kim stays to keep watch over the children at the house.

* [[The man in white/Follow the first search party|Follow the first search party]]
* [[The man in white/Follow the second search party|Follow the second search party]]
* [[The man in white/Stay at the house|Stay at the house]]

[[Category:The man in white]]

The man in white

Fizzlebop — Sat, 26 Nov 2011 02:29:12 GMT

Fizzlebop:

On a dark and stormy night, two young, beautiful, intelligent, charismatic, highly fashionable, unsuspecting girls sat high atop a distant mountain, enclosed against the cold night in an art studio playing a horror video game. After playing through a particularly horrible and frightening scene, they shut off the computer and left the studio for dinner. Turning off the lights of the studio plunged them into darkness, and they walked briskly to the car, temporarily dispelling the mist that swirled around their fashionably shoed feet. As Michelle, the older of the two girls, turned the key in the ignition, she looked over at Christina.

"I have a creepy feeling."

"Me too."

"It's probably just the creepy video game."

"Yeah, and this mist isn't helping either."

"Yeah, you're probably right."

Michelle started the car and moved it forward, although she couldn't shake the feeling that was creeping up her spine. They started driving down the gravel road, the fog obscuring the view of the headlights. As they turned the first corner, their headlights illuminated a man standing completely still in the woods, dressed in white. Michelle slammed on the brakes and she and Christina looked at each other.

What do you do?

* [[The man in white/Floor it and run away|Floor it and run away]]

* [[The man in white/Go back and ask if he needs help|Go back and ask if he needs help]]
[[Category:The man in white]]

The man in white/Follow him into the woods

Fizzlebop — Sat, 26 Nov 2011 02:27:26 GMT

Fizzlebop:

"Come on, I think we should follow him."

"Are you crazy?"

"He said he needs help!"

"You and your bleeding heart! We don't know who this guy is!"

"Well, I'm going whether you come with me or not. I can take care of myself!"

What do you do?

* [[The_man_in_white/Lock the doors and floor it]]

* [[The_man_in_white/Abandon the car and go with Christina]]
[[Category:The man in white]]

The man in white/Floor it and run away

Fizzlebop — Sat, 26 Nov 2011 02:25:15 GMT

Fizzlebop:

girls describe what happened. Parents don't believe them. Girls go away disappointed and confused. Once gone, parents say "they saw him." Parents then huddle and come up with a plan to send out search parties. Peter and Joy form the first search party, Betty and Sharon form a second, while Kim stays to keep watch over the children at the house.

* [[The man in white/Follow the first search party]]
* [[The man in white/Follow the second search party]]
* [[The man in white/Stay at the house]]

[[Category:The man in white]]

The man in white/Floor it and run away

Fizzlebop — Fri, 25 Nov 2011 22:33:53 GMT

Fizzlebop: Created page with 'girls describe what happened. Parents don't believe them. Girls go away disappointed and confused. Once gone, parents say "they saw him." Parents then huddle and come up with…'

girls describe what happened. Parents don't believe them. Girls go away disappointed and confused. Once gone, parents say "they saw him." Parents then huddle and come up with a plan to send out search parties. Peter and Joy form the first search party, Betty and Sharon form a second, while Kim stays to keep watch over the children at the house.

* [[The man in white/Follow the first search party]]
* [[The man in white/Follow the second search party]]
* [[The man in white/Stay at the house]]

The man in white/Follow him into the woods

Fizzlebop — Fri, 25 Nov 2011 22:25:42 GMT

Fizzlebop:

The man in white/Follow him into the woods

Fizzlebop — Fri, 25 Nov 2011 22:21:38 GMT

Fizzlebop: Created page with '"Come on, I think we should follow him." Christina said as she started to open the door. "Are you crazy?" "He said he needs help!" Christina got out and closed the door. 'I c…'

"Come on, I think we should follow him." Christina said as she started to open the door.

"Are you crazy?"

"He said he needs help!" Christina got out and closed the door.

'I can't believe she is going after him! Her and her bleeding heart!' Michelle thought to herself. She debated whether she should follow her or head back to the house and get help.

What do you do?

* [[The_man_in_white/Floor it and run away]]

* [[The_man_in_white/Abandon the car and follow Christina]]

The man in white/Go back and ask if he needs help

Fizzlebop — Fri, 25 Nov 2011 22:17:22 GMT

Fizzlebop: Created page with 'Michelle put the car in reverse, and backed down the road. The gravel crunched slowly under the wheels. Christina rolled down the window and shouted out to the man, who was stand…'

Michelle put the car in reverse, and backed down the road. The gravel crunched slowly under the wheels. Christina rolled down the window and shouted out to the man, who was standing about 15 yards from the car.

"Hey! Do you need help?"

"Yes, I do! Come with me. I have to show you."

The man turned and started walking away through the dark, foggy woods. Christina looked over at Michelle questioningly.

"Should we follow him?"

* [[The_man_in_white/Floor it and run away]]

*[[The_man_in_white/Follow him into the woods]]

The man in white

Fizzlebop — Fri, 25 Nov 2011 22:06:05 GMT

Fizzlebop: Created page with 'On a dark and stormy night, two young, beautiful, intelligent, charismatic, highly fashionable, unsuspecting girls sat high atop a distant mountain, enclosed against the cold nig…'

On a dark and stormy night, two young, beautiful, intelligent, charismatic, highly fashionable, unsuspecting girls sat high atop a distant mountain, enclosed against the cold night in an art studio playing a horror video game. After playing through a particularly horrible and frightening scene, they shut off the computer and left the studio for dinner. Turning off the lights of the studio plunged them into darkness, and they walked briskly to the car, temporarily dispelling the mist that swirled around their fashionably shoed feet. As Michelle, the older of the two girls, turned the key in the ignition, she looked over at Christina.

"I have a creepy feeling."

"Me too."

"It's probably just the creepy video game."

"Yeah, and this mist isn't helping either."

"Yeah, you're probably right."

Michelle started the car and moved it forward, although she couldn't shake the feeling that was creeping up her spine. They started driving down the gravel road, the fog obscuring the view of the headlights. As they turned the first corner, their headlights illuminated a man standing completely still in the woods, dressed in white. Michelle slammed on the brakes and she and Christina looked at each other.

What do you do?

* [[The_man_in_white/Floor it and run away]]

* [[The_man_in_white/Go back and ask if he needs help]]

Fizzlebop/A man named Guggha

Fizzlebop — Thu, 24 Nov 2011 13:52:42 GMT

Fizzlebop: Created page with 'Guggha was strong of body but weak of mind. He excelled at feats of physical strength like lifting boulders, up-rooting trees, or lifting garbage trucks. But when it came to mo…'

Guggha was strong of body but weak of mind. He excelled at feats of physical strength like lifting boulders, up-rooting trees, or lifting garbage trucks. But when it came to more intellectual pursuits, he fell short of even his mediocre peers. Having mastered only the simplest concepts of speech and logic, Guggha decided to focus all of his efforts on increasing the size of his muscles.

Fizzlebop/Fell off the ledge and bonked his head on the wall

Fizzlebop — Thu, 24 Nov 2011 13:48:14 GMT

Fizzlebop: Created page with 'Buddy jumped from the fireplace and Fizzlebop whopped his arm on the fireplace. Fizzlebop lay there unconscious with a broken arm and a bruised head. But, he was alive. While …'

Buddy jumped from the fireplace and Fizzlebop whopped his arm on the fireplace. Fizzlebop lay there unconscious with a broken arm and a bruised head. But, he was alive. While he lay there, insensitive to the world around him, he slipped into a dream.

Fizzlebop dreamed about:

* [[Fizzlebop/A man named Guggha]]
* [[Fizzlebop/Hang-gliding off the coast of Bee Bay]]

Fizzlebop/Let's play and knock things over

Fizzlebop — Thu, 24 Nov 2011 13:41:08 GMT

Fizzlebop:

Sid said "Good idea Fizz. What should we knock over first?" Fizzlebop looked over at a statue in Sid's castle and said "let's knock that over first." Sid was wary of knocking over such a big statue, but he said "OK." So Fizzlebop and Sid marched over to the enormous statue and started to rock it back and forth. It was very heavy, so it took all of their strength to move it at all. They had to work hard and in unison to get it rocking. After much effort, grunting and sweating, they finally rocked it hard enough to topple the statue. It crashed to the floor with a big crash-boom! Inside the statue, was a big huge table and there were a bunch of good guys including Buddy and Whiz on the table with lasers, lassos, coins and other weapons. Then Fizzlebop knocked through a wall and fell out of a crack in Sid's castle. He grabbed onto a ledge on the castle wall and started trying to get back up. Sid fell through the same crack in the wall.

Fizzlebop then:

* [[Fizzlebop/Fell off the ledge and bonked his head on the wall]]
* [[Fizzlebop/Battled back with the good guys]]

Fizzlebop/Let's play and knock things over

Fizzlebop — Thu, 24 Nov 2011 13:39:08 GMT

Fizzlebop: Created page with 'Sid said "Good idea Fizz. What should we knock over first?" Fizzlebop looked over at a statue in Sid's castle and said "let's knock that over first." Sid was wary of knocking o…'

Sid said "Good idea Fizz. What should we knock over first?" Fizzlebop looked over at a statue in Sid's castle and said "let's knock that over first." Sid was wary of knocking over such a big statue, but he said "OK." So Fizzlebop and Sid marched over to the enormous statue and started to rock it back and forth. It was very heavy, so it took all of their strength to move it at all. They had to work hard and in unison to get it rocking. After much effort, grunting and sweating, they finally rocked it hard enough to topple the statue. It crashed to the floor with a big crash-boom! Inside the statue, was a big huge table and there were a bunch of good guys on the table with lasers, lassos, coins and other weapons. Then Fizzlebop knocked through a wall and fell out of a crack in Sid's castle. He grabbed onto a ledge on the castle wall and started trying to get back up. Sid fell through the same crack in the wall.

Fizzlebop then:

* [[Fizzlebop/Fell off the ledge and bonked his head on the wall]]
* [[Fizzlebop/Battled back with the good guys]]

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Fizzlebop — Thu, 24 Nov 2011 13:29:19 GMT

Fizzlebop: Created page with 'Once upon a time there was a prince named Fizzlebop. Prince Fizzlebop was a bad guy. He was seven and a half years old and he loved to knock things over. One day, Fizzlebop wo…'

Once upon a time there was a prince named Fizzlebop. Prince Fizzlebop was a bad guy. He was seven and a half years old and he loved to knock things over. One day, Fizzlebop woke up and decided to go to a tall castle with another mean guy named Sid. Sid was notorious for using magnets to torture toys. When Fizzlebop arrived at Sid's castle, Sid asked Prince Fizzlebop what he wanted to do.

Fizzlebop said:

* [[Fizzlebop/Let's play and knock things over]]
* [[Fizzlebop/Let's bonk things over and jump up and down]]