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User talk:Super tramp

Chickennugget — Tue, 01 Apr 2014 00:05:25 GMT

Chickennugget: Undo revision 201383 by Chickennugget (Talk)

Please don't post incomplete pages. Complete pages include options so the story can continue. Also, please make sure to include the title of the story as a category on each page.

Incomplete pages will be edited or deleted. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 02:43, 21 December 2012 (UTC)

{{warn2}}--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 16:58, 21 December 2012 (UTC)

{{warn3}}--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 20:10, 21 December 2012 (UTC)

You're being given the same consideration as anyone else. If you cannot abide by the site rules and categorize your pages, you will have to find another site to post on. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 21:48, 21 December 2012 (UTC)

Love the way your new story is headed. I enjoy reading every new installment. Question: if I have a creative idea about how to extend it off a certain branch, should I transmit it to you? Another possibility is to post something on the Talk page of the story. Or would you prefer I simply go ahead and create it, with the idea being that once it's up, you can modify it if you want to? -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Great! I'm looking forward to seeing more of your story as it develops. By the way, some of the other stories in the adult section are somewhat more about character development than raw sex. Check out [[Red Mobster]], [[High School]] and [[Extraordinary life of a not so common teenager]]. Merry Christmas and Happy New Year back at ya! -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

You're doing great! I have a suggestion for one of the branches. I noticed that in one path Dwayne gets knocked out as a potential romantic rival [humiliated by the girls after trying to sneak into the locker room.] I'd like to see that path continue on, to where our hero fends off the advances of other girls (especially Katelyn), and [perhaps after several years] is on the point of pledging his eternal love for Amanda. However, in the interim, Amanda's dad hss divorced her mom and moved out, and right as it looks like there's going to be a "they lived happily ever after", Mom tries to steal Mark away for herself, or barring that at least convince her daughter to share Mark with her for as long as both Amanda and Mom still live. You don't have to, but I thought it might make a nice storyline. (It actually happened to me when I was younger... I ended up with my GF and her mom sharing me. That lasted about 5 years.) Keep up the good work! -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Brain fart. I of course meant Matt. Anyway, take your time, keep developing the story and I'll look forward to seeing it! -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Keep up the good work! New suggestion: at some point in one of the storylines you should have Matt falling in love with Amanda, and be in the process of physically pleasuring her [with the both of them naked] when Cousin Katelyn sneaks into Amanda's room, also naked, and tries to either get Matt to use her body instead of Amanda's or failing that, get Matt to pleasure her along with Amanda. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

No new ideas at this moment but if/when I get some, I'll let you know! Keep it going, I love today's new installment! -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

User talk:Super tramp

Chickennugget — Mon, 31 Mar 2014 23:51:14 GMT

Chickennugget:

AIF The cops arrive

Chickennugget — Sat, 01 Mar 2014 04:22:54 GMT

Chickennugget:

It wasn't long before the cops arrived and it was a flurry of questions after that. You were asked the same questions several times as were Stacy and Alice, but they really didn't remember much.

After what seemed like forever the police left.

"Scott?" you heard your Aunt Stacy call.

"I got off the phone with your mother and she invited us to stay there. Alice and I just need to pack a few things before we go over. You should come with us."

"Yeah, that sounds like a good idea," you reply. "I'll just wait here."

"No," Alice said. "Can you come with us?"

You nod and follow Stacy and Alice, your eyes wandering down to their asses.

It was at that moment that both of your aunts turned back to look at you.

"I-- I--"

"It's okay Scott. We know you're a young boy, and well, you've seen quite a lot this morning. Just try to control yourself."

"Yes ma'am" you reply rather ashamed.

You stand silently, watching as your two aunts pack the respective suitcases as you carried them out to the car.

The drive home was silent as well. You stood on the sidelines when your mother greeted Alice and Stacy until she turned to you.

"Oh my little hero!" Heather cried and wrapped her arms around you tightly.

The four of you head inside.

[[AIF_Go to your room and masturbate|Go to your room and masturbate]]

[[AIF_Stay with your aunts and mom|Stay with your aunts and mom]]

[[AIF_Go see Zoe|Go see Zoe]]

[[Category: All in the Family]]

Young Love/ Cheerleading Tryouts

Chickennugget — Wed, 26 Feb 2014 21:54:24 GMT

Chickennugget:

As nice as it would be to get some sleep before football tryouts there is absolutely no way you are going to miss out on Amanda's cheerleading tryouts. For one, she is your girlfriend and you want to be there to support her. Secondly, what guy doesn't want to watch a bunch of beautiful young girls kick their legs in the air wearing short skirts and tight panties.

The tryouts don't start till around eight in the evening and it seems every girl in the whole school has shown up for a chance to be on the cheerleading squad. Even Katelyn and the blonde thick bombshell Celeste show up, along with a couple other girls you remember from middle school. A black haired girl, Becca Figgs, who you remember everyone used to tease because of her weight or lack of. She was as skinny as a toothpick the last time you saw her but there have been some definite changes since then. She is stunningly beautiful with long healthy hair that ends just above her midriff with piercing blue eyes and a very sexy smile. Her transformation astounds you and you find yourself happy you never teased her during middle school. Another girl, Amber Atkins, who has light brown hair and brown eyes. She is about average height and build. You dated her for about six days in elementary school. You always wondered why she broke up with you and recall her being there when Katelyn humiliated you by pulling down your pants and pushing you in the mud.

"Oh yeah..." You think as you find yourself staring blankly over at Katelyn. She notices you staring, lifts her skirt and slaps her ass making it slightly jiggle. "All is forgiven!" Is all you can think as the two of you grin at each other.

The 'auditions' start up quickly with basic stretching. Using the whole gymnasium the girls form into rows, sit down and spread their legs open as far as they can. The gym fills with the sound of girls, as they grunt, moan and breath heavily trying their best to open their legs just a little bit wider. You find yourself getting extremely horny.

You try your best not to think about it as you look over at Amanda. You are surprised to see how flexible she actually is. She seems to be in a bit of pain but she is definitely more accomplished then most the others. A few coaches make their rounds pointing at those they want to stay.

Amanda, Katelyn, Celeste, Becca, and Amber all make it, along with about a couple dozen other girls. The girls that remain are instructed to stand up and hold their right leg to the side and pull it up as far as possible. A couple girls immediately lose balance and fall to the ground. You watch Katelyn flawlessly performs the move though her leg isn't as high as a couple others. Amanda again surprises you by pulling her leg up only a couple feet from her head. She appears slightly uncomfortable again but when she notices you looking she smiles brightly and pushes herself a little harder, narrowing the gap to no more than a foot. You look over at Celeste and get an instant boner. Her leg is actually pushing against her head and her panties are cutting into her snatch. It seem to be glistening with perspiration.

You are surprised at how long they have to hold the pose as a random coach checks each one out. When a rather well built young man comes up to Katelyn he circles around a couple times before stopping behind her. You find it a little disconcerting just how close behind her he is. He seems to be talking to her his mouth dangerously close to her ear as she occasionally nods her head. Something about him rubs you the wrong way. You watch as Katelyn nods her head once more before he slides his hand under Katelyn's thigh and slowly lifts her leg even further into the air. Her face is pained but she endures and after he stops pulling up he slowly runs his hand up and down her inner thigh. She nods again and he backs away slowly nodding his head in approval. Katelyn catches you staring at her and she tries to flash her usual grin but you can tell it's forced. The same stretch is repeated with the left leg.

After the second trial is complete they move on to the cheer routine.

[[Young Love/ Football Tryouts]]

[[Category: Young Love]]