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ADAS/A cock appears in the hole!

Arm22 — Fri, 04 Feb 2011 22:43:02 GMT

Arm22:

As you sit there, a huge penis pushes its way through the hole. It's so big, it barely fits.

You're incredibly turned on, so you take the black cock in your mouth and suck it slowly into your throat. You hear moans coming from the other side and your partner finally comes in your mouth. You swallow the load just like you did to James.

The other guy says, "That was great. Let me help you too."

[[ADAS/You put your cock in the hole]]

[[Category: Another Day At School...]]

ADAS/A cock appears in the hole!

Arm22 — Fri, 04 Feb 2011 22:42:31 GMT

Arm22: Created page with 'As you sit there, a huge penis pushes its way through the hole. It's so big, it barely fits. You're incredibly turned on, so you take the black cock in your mouth and suck it sl…'

Take his load in your mouth.

Arm22 — Fri, 04 Feb 2011 22:38:23 GMT

Arm22: Created page with 'You swallow his whole load, which is surprisingly big for a teenager. He then laughs and yells to the bus that you're a "homo cocksucker". So now everyone at school thinks you're…'

You swallow his whole load, which is surprisingly big for a teenager. He then laughs and yells to the bus that you're a "homo cocksucker". So now everyone at school thinks you're gay. They would be correct.

The bus pulls up at school and it seems as if the whole world now knows your secret. You can't take the teasing, so you head into the bathroom and lock yourself in a stall. The worst part of it all is that you're still hard from how hot it was sucking James' cock.

You look up and see a hole in the stall and hear someone come in and sit on the other side.

*[[ADAS/You put your cock in the hole]]

*[[ADAS/A cock appears in the hole!]]

[[Category: Another Day At School...]]

Call it a day

Arm22 — Fri, 04 Feb 2011 21:09:53 GMT

Arm22:

You head home, exhausted and fatigued. After all, you had lots of fun today. Back at your house, you watch a game tape, then four "post-game" tapes. Maybe tomorrow, you can make some more.

After all, every day is game day at [[Hardon High]].

{{HardonHighStatus|Location=''[[Home]]''|Health=Happy}}
[[Category: Hardon High]]

[[Category: Hardon High]]

Blow your load in Tony's mouth

Arm22 — Fri, 04 Feb 2011 21:09:20 GMT

Arm22: Created page with 'You decide to let Tony finish you off. He is a novice cock sucker, but seems to have a small idea what he's doing. When you finally blow your huge load into his mouth, he says to…'

You decide to let Tony finish you off. He is a novice cock sucker, but seems to have a small idea what he's doing. When you finally blow your huge load into his mouth, he says to you:

"I love your cock, mister. Who are you?"

You hesitate, then tell him to step out of the stall. He does, and so do you. He gasps when he sees that his fuck buddy is actually his football coach.

"Coach! What are you doing!?"

"Finally getting what I want from you. Bend over and pull your pants down."

"No way!" he yells. He tries to get out of the bathroom, but you stop him.

"I don't think so. I thought you loved my cock?"

"I-I do," he stutters.

"Well, if you loved it in your mouth, you'll really love it in your ass. Now BEND OVER!" you shout.

Scared of your anger, Tony complies. He pulls his pants down, revealing his tight, hairy, puckered hole and his quarterback ass. You can't resist it any longer, but just as you push into him, Mr. Scarpelli walks in. Little does Tony know, you've had some fun with his dad before. Though shocked at first, Mr. Scarpelli comes over and joins you. He has never seen his son's hot body before and is shocked at its size, even bigger than his own. He takes the whole thing in his mouth, having expert cocksucking abilities.

"DAD!" Tony yells, but he is starting to enjoy being double teamed by his coach and his father. He moans, which only turns you on more. Before you cum, you tell Tony to suck your cock. He is so horny, he agrees. You begin sucking Mr. Scarpelli, making a three way suck. The three of you cum at the same time, and you know that Tony loved it.

*[[Head to the baths]]

{{HardonHighStatus|Location=''[[Restaurant Bathroom]]''|Health=Satisfied, for now}}
[[Category: Hardon High]]

Tell Tony what you want him to do

Arm22 — Fri, 04 Feb 2011 20:58:05 GMT

Arm22:

"Sure is," you growl. "Suck it, little bitch boy."

Tony tries to take it in his mouth, but can't fit the whole thing.

"I can't do it!" he whines.

*[[Tell Tony to get into your stall]]

*[[Tell Tony to put his ass against the hole]]

{{HardonHighStatus|Location=''[[Restaurant Bathroom]]''|Health=Horny}}
[[Category: Hardon High]]

Tell Tony what you want him to do

Arm22 — Fri, 04 Feb 2011 20:57:20 GMT

Arm22: Created page with '"Sure is," you growl. "Suck it, little bitch boy." Tony tries to take it in his mouth, but can't fit the whole thing. "I can't do it!" he whines. [[Tell Tony to get in your st…'

"Sure is," you growl. "Suck it, little bitch boy."

Tony tries to take it in his mouth, but can't fit the whole thing.

"I can't do it!" he whines.

[[Tell Tony to get in your stall]]

[[Tell Tony to put his ass against the hole]]

{{HardonHighStatus|Location=''[[Restaurant Bathroom]]''|Health=Horny}}
[[Category: Hardon High]]

Stroke yourself

Arm22 — Fri, 04 Feb 2011 20:52:56 GMT

Arm22:

You begin stroking your 10 inch cock and wait until your friend notices. While you pleasure yourself, he looks over and you catch him checking you out.

"What are you looking at, Mike?"

"N-nothing!"

"I know you saw it. And I know you liked what you saw. Your cock is just as hard as mine. You know, Mike, I think you may not be quite as straight as you think." Though you expect him to quip back, he says nothing. Now is the time to make your move.

Do you:

*[[Bend over and offer your ass]]

*[[Suck his prick]]

or

*[[Kiss him while fingering his ass]]

{{HardonHighStatus|Location=''[[Showers]]''|Health=Very Horny}}
[[Category: Hardon High]]

[[Category: Hardon High]]

Grab his cock

Arm22 — Fri, 04 Feb 2011 20:52:48 GMT

Arm22:

His cock is too sexy for you to handle, and you grab it.

"What the fuck are you doing!?" your friend yells.

"Shh, just enjoy it."

"Fuck no! Get the fuck off of me, faggot!"

Mike leaves you standing there in the shower. You've lost your best friend.

End.

{{HardonHighStatus|Location=''[[Showers]]''|Health=Lonely}}
[[Category: Hardon High]]

[[Category: Hardon High]]

Grab his ass

Arm22 — Fri, 04 Feb 2011 20:52:16 GMT

Arm22:

You slowly move over toward Mike, unnoticed. Before he can resist, you have his mouth covered and his perfect ass cupped in your huge hands. He begins to resist, but you hold him back.

"I know you like this, Mike. Stop trying to fight it. If you just let me please you, you'll have the best fuck of your life."

As you hoped, Mike stops resisting and goes limp. You tell him to get on the floor. Although you are a top, you want Mike to see how great being gay is. As he lays down, you stroke his dick until it is at full mast, then begin to squat on top of it. Your leg muscles are in perfect condition and you are able to squat all the way down, then back up. Mike's thick dick fills you completely and you're loving every minute of it. At some point, Mike stopped caring that you were a man and started enjoying it too.

You tell him to stand up and allow him to fuck you all he wants. When he comes, it fills your insides with warmth. However, you need some release now. You tell him that you want the same thing he just gave you. He agrees, and you begin fucking him. He loves it even more than topping you and you realize that he'll be a bottom bitch despite his big prick.

When you are close to cumming, you pick him up (with superhuman strength) and begin fucking him from the front. You kiss him with tongue as you fill him with sperm. He moans into your mouth, and you put him down.

The two of you finish your showers and you

*[[Head back to your office]]

{{HardonHighStatus|Location=''[[Showers]]''|Health=Content}}
[[Category: Hardon High]]

[[Category: Hardon High]]

Julio Alvarez, the Mexican janitor who gives the best blowjobs in the school.

Arm22 — Fri, 04 Feb 2011 20:50:16 GMT

Arm22:

With a nod of your head, you tell Julio to come over and suck Mike's big cock. Without hesitation, he strips down, revealing a lean body and an average (7-inch) cock. His mouth, however, is far above average and takes Mike's whole 11 1/2 inches in one gulp.

Once again, Mike lets out a yell of pleasure. The sensation of your huge cock filling him and Julio's mouth sucking him is too much for him to handle. He cums so hard that even the expert cock sucker can't catch it all. His spunk leaks out of Julio's mouth and across his face.

The intensity of Mike's orgasm milks you to an intense completion as well. Your cum (which is still going strong) fills his insides. The tri-racial threesome collapses to the ground in ecstacy. Mike thanks you and Julio for the best fuck of his life. However, Julio is not done yet. He begins to worship every inch of Mike's bulging body and plays with his nipples.

Should you:

*[[Stay and have more fun]]

*[[Call it a day]]

*[[Head to the baths]]

or

*[[Call another guy on the team]]

{{HardonHighStatus|Location=''[[Showers]]''|Health=Satisfied}}
[[Category: Hardon High]]

[[Category: Hardon High]]

Go to Mike's office

Arm22 — Fri, 04 Feb 2011 20:50:04 GMT

Arm22:

When you reach Mike's office, he is just leaving. His tall, muscular, ebony body is glistening with sweat.

"Hey, Coach. I just got back from a quick jog around the court. I was going for a shower. Do you need something?"

*[["Your black ass."]]

*[["Your black cock."]]

*[["Nothing, I was just coming to talk."]]

*[["I was just going for a shower too!"]]

{{HardonHighStatus|Location=''[[Mike's Office]]''|Health=Horny}}
[[Category: Hardon High]]

[[Category: Hardon High]]

Go to Mike's office

Arm22 — Fri, 04 Feb 2011 20:47:40 GMT

Arm22:

Call it a day

Arm22 — Fri, 04 Feb 2011 20:45:53 GMT

Arm22:

Call another guy on the team

Arm22 — Fri, 04 Feb 2011 20:45:42 GMT

Arm22:

You grab your cell phone as you head out to your car. You have the names of literally hundreds of guys saved in your contacts. You think about it for a bit and wonder who to call.

Do you call:

[[Tony Scarpelli]], the team's star quarterback and one hot Italian stallion. Tony and you have fucked around a few times. But the kid is a top like you - and nearly as hung. You're dying to fuck his tight jock ass. Maybe tonight it can happen?

[[Ronnie Weaver]], a former player of yours and now quarterback for a pro-ball team. The blond god was was one of the best players you ever had but whenever he got a big dick in him, he was one noisy faggot slut!

[[Rodney Tinker]], a senior linebacker and grade-A stud. The massively built behemoth towers over you, but his huge teen muscleass can't get enough rough, hard fucks. He's into some pretty kinky shit.

[[Hal and Jay Platt]], twin brothers who play tight end and wide receiver, respectively. They play the same positions in the bedroom, natch. The teens do everything together. When they're not rooting each other's asses, they're usually side-by-side and bending over your desk.

[[Eric Honda]], the team's Asian kicker. His smooth, golden physique is near flawless. Even more delectable is his insatiable Oriental booty. He's a noisy little power bottom and once got gang banged by the entire team.

[[Category: Hardon High]]

"Suck my cock, queers."

Arm22 — Fri, 04 Feb 2011 20:44:46 GMT

Arm22:

You agree to suck his cock, and he strips down, revealing his muscular body and his 9-inch, thick as a pipe cock. His two coaches get on their knees and take turns sucking his big dick while kissing each other as well. You have some experience sucking cock, but Mike is a newbie. You know that to keep your sexy quarterback quiet, you'll have to make this good. As you suck his whole girth into your mouth, he warns you that he is about to cum. You push yourself to his ballsack, choking on his cock.

Your gag reflex milks him to completion as Mike eats his egg-sized balls one at a time. However, Tony laughs and spits on you.

"That was nice, but not good enough to keep me quiet."

*[["Let me fuck your asses."]]

[[Category: Hardon High]]

"Let me fuck your asses."

Arm22 — Fri, 04 Feb 2011 20:44:33 GMT

Arm22:

You and Mike look at each other, then bend over hesitantly. You know from the showers that Tony is big soft, but who knows what his hard Italian sausage looks like.

Turning around, you see that Tony has stripped down. His body is muscular for a senior and his hard cock is a fraction shorter than yours, but thick. Being a top, you wonder if you'll be able to handle it. Tony asks which of you is tighter. "I am," replies Mike.

"Then I'll take Coach Donato first. Save the best for last."

At first, you are hesitant, but you realize that this could be enjoyable...If you let it. Tony walks up behind you and whispers in your ear, "Time for a taste of your own medicine, bitch." So he knows about your flings with almost every player you've ever coached.

Tony plunges into you without warning. You try not to scream, but your hole is being stretched to its limit.

"If you're not the tight one, then Coach Hovey must be impossible! Damn, that's nice."

Despite being a top, you know how to get down being a bottom. You begin to moan, liking the fullness Tony's cock gives you. He even brushes your prostate, making you see spots as you cum across the dirty floor. Tony pulls out, wanting to save some for Mike.

He crosses over to him, but gives Coach Hovey a bit of foreplay. "You never did anything wrong, so I might as well let you enjoy it." You watch as Tony uses his mouth to cover every sensitive area on Mike's body but his cock. As he eats Mike's ass out as you did minutes earlier, Mike moans and begs for Tony's cock.

"He'll never be a straight man again," you think.

"You want it?" says Tony, his body practically vibrating with excitement.

"Yes, please! Fill me with your hot, fat sausage, you Italian stallion! Fuck me!!"

This is too much for Tony to handle, and he pushes into Mike in one thrust. They both begin screaming in pleasure, and after a few minutes, cum simultaneously.

Tony crosses over to you and orders you to clean his prick. You do so, loving the taste of Mike's ass mixed with Tony's cum.

Finally, Tony agrees not to tell anyone as long as they don't tell his father. Of course, he doesn't know that you and his father have had lots of fun together. You agree anyway, and decide that you are done for today. Mike heads home, knowing his sex life with his wife will never be the same. Maybe, just maybe, you can have some more fun with your best friend tomorrow.

End.

[[Category: Hardon High]]

Julio Alvarez, the Mexican janitor who gives the best blowjobs in the school.

Arm22 — Fri, 04 Feb 2011 20:44:09 GMT

Arm22:

Timmy Chambers, the skinny nerd who loves big daddies.

Arm22 — Fri, 04 Feb 2011 20:43:44 GMT

Arm22:

Timmy stands there, staring at the beautiful sight before him. He is in shock that he was lucky enough to stumble upon his two coaches fucking right in front of him.

You notice him after a minute and gesture for him to join, all the while fucking Mike's tight asshole. Mike is in too much pleasure to notice until Timmy has his clothes off and is sucking Mike's black cock.

Mike's raging horniness makes him speak in a guttural voice: "Bend over, boy."

"Yes, daddy," replies Timmy. He's such a good little slut.

Mike plunges into Timmy without warning, and Timmy begins crying in pain. However, Mike is enjoying himself too much to notice. Finally, the daisy chain breaks when you and Mike have simultaneous orgasms. Once he comes down from his pleasure high, Mike realizes what he has done to Timmy.

"I am so sorry, Timmy. Let me make it up to you." He gets on his knees and takes Timmy's six inches into his mouth. Though he is new to this, he still knows what feels good. You begin kissing Timmy tenderly and then pleasure his neck and nipples. You lick his ear and whisper, "Do you like that?" He moans in reply.

You leave Timmy and Mike to their own devices. What do you do now?

*[[Head back to your office]]

*[[Call another guy on the team]]

*[[Call it a day]]

[[Category: Hardon High]]

Tony Scarpelli, the Italian stud quarterback.

Arm22 — Fri, 04 Feb 2011 20:43:28 GMT

Arm22:

"What the fuck!?" yells Tony, "I leave work to pick up my clothes and find this!?"

In shock, you and Mike pull apart and try to cover yourselves. Sheepishly, Mike asks how much he saw.

"Enough," Tony says.

"What do we have to do to keep you quiet?" you ask.

*[["Let me fuck your asses."]]

*[["Suck my cock, queers."]]

*[["Ravish me."]]

[[Category: Hardon High]]

Mike Hovey

Arm22 — Fri, 04 Feb 2011 20:43:06 GMT

Arm22:

You dial Mike's number and his wife answers.

"Hello?"

You ask her where you can find Mike. She mentions that he is at school. You thank her and hang up.

When you realize that Mike must be hiding in his office, you go back to look for him. Mike's office is right next to yours. You wonder why you didn't think of him before. Maybe because you were too into the team to think about it. Although you think you could be in the mood for some virgin "straight" ass.

Do you:

*[[Head back to your office]]

*[[Go to Mike's office]]

or

*[[Call one of the guys on your team]]

[[Category: Hardon High]]

Kiss him while fingering his ass

Arm22 — Fri, 04 Feb 2011 20:42:20 GMT

Arm22:

You move forward and kiss him passionately. Your huge cocks are rubbing against each other, creating a wonderful friction. He doesn't resist, which doesn't surprise you at this point. He must have been in the closet a while. You want to make his first time gay something he'll remember.

One hand strokes your cocks together, while the other plunges into his ass. He breaks the kiss, asking if he can top you. Though his dick is tempting, you want his ass. Now.

You refuse and tell him to turn around. You eat his hairy ass out, your stubble rubbing against his bulbous black cheeks. Savoring the taste, you then stand up and finger him, preparing his tight hole for the onslaught it's about to recieve. He moans and groans the whole time, loving every minute. Finally, you get some soap and lube yourself. Feeling like you're ready to explode, you take his ass with one deep plunge. He screams in pain and pleasure.

However, his scream has attracted some attention.

Is it:

*[[Tony Scarpelli, the Italian stud quarterback.]]

*[[Billy Mathers, the hot twink you just gave the ride of his life.]]

*[[Timmy Chambers, the skinny nerd who loves big daddies.]]

*[[Julio Alvarez, the Mexican janitor who gives the best blowjobs in the school.]]

[[Category: Hardon High]]

Grab his cock

Arm22 — Fri, 04 Feb 2011 20:41:44 GMT

Arm22:

Stroke yourself

Arm22 — Fri, 04 Feb 2011 20:41:09 GMT

Arm22:

"I was just going for a shower too!"

Arm22 — Fri, 04 Feb 2011 20:39:23 GMT

Arm22:

"I was just finishing up some...work...and was gonna hit the showers!"

"Well, you can join me," says Mike.

You think to yourself that he might be more gay than he realizes. This is your chance to take his cherry. Is is possible that he hasn't heard about your escapades with most of the senior class?

You and Mike head towards the shower room. As you begin to strip down, revealing your hairy, muscular body, Mike drops his towel, revealing two big surprises. His cock is rock hard...and it's at least an inch bigger than yours. You stare in shock at it.

Mike doesn't notice as he's enjoying the hot water over his muscles, which you notice are bulging. His biceps are almost as big as your head; his abs a tighter washboard than any player you've ever had. As you stare at his firm calves, you wonder how you never got any of that ass, which is firm and round. You are rock hard at this point and need to make this straight man queer.

Do you:

*[[Grab his ass]]

*[[Grab his cock]]

*[[Stroke yourself]]

[[Category: Hardon High]]

Grab his ass

Arm22 — Fri, 04 Feb 2011 20:38:02 GMT

Arm22:

Grab his ass

Arm22 — Fri, 04 Feb 2011 20:30:13 GMT

Arm22: Hardon High

User talk:Platypus/Archive1

Arm22 — Fri, 04 Feb 2011 20:28:03 GMT

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== Talk archiving ==

*A better way to archive your talk page might be to move it to [[User talk:Platypus/Archive1]]. That way, it's in the "User talk" namespace, and it automatically links back here. It's also the standard way people archive talk pages on MediaWiki wikis like this one. -[[User:Camper9|Camper9]] 03:17, 24 June 2008 (PDT)

Good idea. Thanks! --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 04:43, 24 June 2008 (PDT)

----

I'm not sure if you were aware, but [[User:6bushes|6bushes]] is 'blanking' (removing all content) from many pages in "Smutty Sex Romp." I was going to revert them myself, but I read that it would be better to contact a sysop about it via their talk page since they can mass revert. -- [[User:Katrex|Katrex]]

I've noticed from your edits of the pages I've added, I've been letting some words in the past tense through (had/was being the primary offenders). My apologies, for this wasn't my intention. I've been trying to stick to present tense, I guess some words are just far easier for me to miss. I'll try to ensure all future pages (and current) pages are kept in (changed to) the present tense. Thanks for the corrections you've made, I probably wouldn't have noticed it otherwise. As well, thanks for changing the colour of the text on that one page, I was wondering how I could do that. :] -- [[User:Katrex|Katrex]]

Thanks for fixing the coding in my template.--[[User:Zinger2099|Zinger2099]]

I found some bs links I guess the spammer left, and deleted them. Sadly, the spammer deleted all the rated R stories, and I'm not sure how to bring them back. Might want to look into this.--[[User:Olboyfloats|Olboyfloats]]

Well, he said he was leaving. Looks like we might be safe.--[[User:Guardian Angel|Guardian Angel]] 18:33, 22 February 2007 (EST)

Need help deleating the 1s? [[User:Fruitbat|Fruitbat]]

I can;t find where to deleat a page.

Do you have a feeling that Decimus Callilaus (or whatever his name is) was actually Gauis Fleminus and managed to change his IP address or something? [[User:Fruitbat|Fruitbat]]

There's another Roman vandal. Right now, I'm sure that it's either Gaius or a group of vandals that know him. Congrats on blocking him before he destroyed the site! [[User:Fruitbat|Fruitbat]]

I wish there was a way to like block all users with Roman names so that the Roman vandals can't come on anymore! It's a good thing Robkohr gave us those powers! [[User:Fruitbat|Fruitbat]]

What is that 70. whatever user doing? He's filling up the entire page with stories he hasen't even started!? [[User:Fruitbat|Fruitbat]]

Does the Tredguard's Treasure quest really belong in Normal stories? [[User:Fruitbat|Fruitbat]]

Sorry, I guess I'm just lazy and don't proofread my edits. Won't happen again. [[User:Lucky numbers|Lucky numbers]]

Exeuse me? What did you say I messed up? I know I neede to proofread my sections of Cusader, but I have no clue what the other thing you mentioned. ''sexy smutt romp''? I don't understand. [[User:Lucky numbers|Lucky numbers]]

Frankly, I'm getting confused of all the 68. members. I just blocked one, and another shows up and starts editing the same page, with the same warnings that the user I blocked had. I am just confused! [[User:Fruitbat|Fruitbat]]

It's like a cult of Secret Island people, who save-edit-save-edit etc. [[User:Fruitbat|Fruitbat]]

Thanks for saving Boromir's Quest from the link spammer. [[User:Fruitbat|Fruitbat]]

Olay, thanks! [[User:Fruitbat|Fruitbat]]

Do you have any idea what is going on with Boromir's Quest? Every time I try to make a new page, it takes me to this stupid page which makes my type in a word before I can continue. Do you know what this is? [[User:Fruitbat|Fruitbat]]
== Categories- ==

*They make it easier to determine what story a page belongs to when the page is viewed out of context.

*They make it easier to determine how many pages belong to a given story.

Having unique templates for stories delivers both advantages... both there's nothing wrong with categorizing the pages as well, if you really want to do all that work. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:49, 15 March 2007 (EST)

Thanks. I don't really mind the work, because, for the most part, adding a category to the template will add each page to that category to. Personally, I think it'll also help to organize the wiki a bit, so that we don't just have pages with names that are meaningless without the rest of the story. But that's just me. — [[User:LastUserNameEver|LastUserNameEver]] 21:55, 15 March 2007 (EST)

Categories are not needed for Kitty in the Window or any adventure with a unique status bar. They already basically have a category all to themselves! [[User:Fruitbat|Fruitbat]]

==Pictures==

Just trying to help, that's all. Most of the pix are Wikipedia pic anyhow....I'm trying to keep everything copyright-safe. [[User:204.52.215.13|204.52.215.13]] 17:49, 26 March 2007 (EST)

==Logo==
Hi! I am creating my own wiki. However, I do not know how to upload my logo on to this site. Please help! You can catch me on the main site (you know [EditThis.info]) as Sportman2. PLease leave a message there. Please help!--[[User:208.102.116.51|208.102.116.51]] 16:58, 28 March 2007 (EST)

==Rabbit Hole==
Hey! You completely rock! Thanks for all the help making the story look great! I'm still a little new when it comes to all this, but with your help, I'd have to say I'm very proud of how this story is starting out!
HAIL ERIS!! --[[User:Olboyfloats|Olboyfloats]]

Oh, I LOVE the flipped Chao and the colored box. Super cool stuff. This whole Rabbit Hole thing is getting deeper and deeper every day! --[[User:Olboyfloats|Olboyfloats]]

Ya,sry bout that...I deal with getting users to do that.May I ask why the categories arn't integrated with the template?[[User:Shazlin|Shazlin]] 23:24, 19 June 2007 (EDT)
== [[Darkened Hope]] ==
Please add it to R-rated stories. --09:14, 21 June 2007 (EDT)
:Thanks for the speedy service. I'm working on it. --09:26, 21 June 2007 (EDT)

What version of MediaWiki is this then?[[User:Shazlin]] 23:57, 22 June 2007 (EDT)

Seems to be 1.5[[User:Shazlin]] 00:21, 23 June 2007 (EDT)

== My CYOA ==

I want to put [[Ectoplasm]] in the General Category.[[User:Mr. Giga|Mr. Giga]] 04:23, 23 June 2007 (EDT)

Hey Platypus, I'm kind of wanting to write my own story now, front page in the 18+ section, could you help me out? Oh, and is there some way to put it on there and work on it while keeping it locked from other people (until I'm finished or have a decent start on it) Thanks. --[[User:Ashogo|Ashogo]]

== sysop ==

Hi Platypus,

You have been a great user on the system and I have given you sysop rights. This means that you can block users that are vandals on the system. If you would like to look up a user's IP address go to the Control Panel and use the tool there. Then go to special pages to go to the block IP form. Please use this feature sparingly. Blocks should only be used for users that are trying to destroy the site and not to censor content.

Thanks, 
--[[User:RobKohr|RobKohr]] 03:03, 25 February 2007 (EST)

*Sometimes after you submit it takes you to an "create a wiki page". That is just a problem with the redirect and the block did work.
*Fruitbat is another user that I granted rights on
*I have already blocked Gaius

Thanks for the tip [[User:Rickyrab|Rickyrab]] 18:21, 22 March 2007 (EST)

Thanks for hooking up the Rabbit Hole! I've started some of the basic begginnings of it, and will be working on it a ton over the weekend. Feel free to correct my spelling, make it funnier, add new things, whatever. After this weekend, when I'm happy with it, I'm going to start advertising it amongst my regular Discordian channels, and inviting everyone to play along. My hope is that someday it has more pages than the Smutty Sex thingy.. [[User:Olboyfloats|Olboyfloats]]

hey platypus i would like to move tree of doom to the 18+rated section but i dont know how, can you help me?

Hi Platypus

Thanks for letting me know about the health bars & such. Hope I'm not creating too much work for you when I forget them occasionally.

About the Hitchhikers Guide problem - so, are ALL of these stories interlinked?

Canary8623

Thanks for the explination. Did that story you were editing have unuploaded images as well? It must have. [[User:Fruitbat|Fruitbat]]

Hi Platypus

Thanks for giving me that info many thanks! Well im a newby but im learning... p.s can you get flash animations onto your stories etc.

Vokesy

==Death to perversion==

Your empire of perversion is at an end! Go post your porn on a porn site, and let this wiki become a Choose-your-own Adventure Wiki, not a place for sick idiots such as yourself to masturbate!

Death to perversion! Let logic reign!

--[[User:Imperator Romanum|Imperator Romanum]] 17:31, 26 November 2007 (EST)

Get a life, loser. And try making your own site with stories you like instead of trying to trash our site. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 19:23, 26 November 2007 (EST)
*If this wiki uses an up-to-date version of MediaWiki, you should be able to rollback pages directly from a user's list of contributions, which should be a little faster. --[[User:Camper9|Camper9]] 20:30, 29 November 2007 (EST)

== Thanks ==

Thanks for adding in the status bar. I wasn't sure how to do that, but once I saw how you added them in, I figured it out rather quickly.
-Kliesh

== Stop Deleting My Stuff ==

The adult section has no limits. Although I know you hate sex on this site and profanity...DEAL WITH IT!!!!

dude youre a hipocrite, you complain that sex and profanity are bad, then you write 5,200 pages of the smutty sex romp!!!!! fag!!!
== Stop ==

can you stop making articles off of other's works please it does get anoying[[User:Civilwar|Civilwar]] 16:15, 26 January 2008 (EST)

Hey guy, i apologize for doing so poorly. i havn't done any of these before. but i was trying. i have attempted two stories, both of which i have sucked at (lol)

i was about to begin a new one, one that didnt suck so badly. if you can remove my other ones ("violence") than please do. i don't know how to.

thanks.

-kieferirvine

Hey guy, i apologize for doing so poorly. i havn't done any of these before. but i was trying. i have attempted two stories, both of which i have sucked at (lol)

i was about to begin a new one, one that didnt suck so badly. if you can remove my other ones ("violence") than please do. i don't know how to.

thanks.

-kieferirvine

Is there any special code language that I have to/ought to know? I tried editing/adding a few pages to University Daze and accidentally broke ''at least'' two links. :(

Is there an easy way to get to a page that gives some sort of tutorial on how all this works? I'm by no means a computer guru. Honestly, I'm rather clueless. Any help would be appreciated.

Hey, thanks for editing my edits...or however you quite say that....^^. I don't know how to post links to different options, so if someone could tell me that would really help! :D -Funnymuffin

== Platypus ==

Can you help me and tell me how to put/make a story on this site? I would really like it if you could. I made sure that this message was spelled correct to please you. I need your help.

==Band text adventure==

 Hello, platypus, Im Squibots2 , I created the text adventure called Band forming thing. I need some help. Lately, its been getting edgier and edgier. I dont want it deleted, but i dont know how to move it. do you think you can move it to R or 18+ so i have less limitations?? please?? 

== Help Out a Newbie? ==

Hola!

Hey, I'm trying to figure out how to add locations to the status bar..I'm sure it's ridiculously easy, but I'm afraid it's a little beyond my grasp. Could you help me out?

== Platypus2 ==

Hey, remember me? I'm Platypus2! I'm back with a new account called Platypus3. Don't worry, I haven't spammed anyone so far. I just wanted to warn you that blocking me will just make me come back with a new account. Look, I'm sorry for all the spam I posted. I was just pissed that you deleted my contributions to "Teenager." I know they were innapropriate, but they added a hilarious edge to the story. I made it much better. You should have got the guy who made Teenager's opinion before deleting it. I'm sure he would have thought it better! C'mon, man! I promise not to spam if you wont delete any funny contributions I make. I'm offering a truce.

yea im still learning the ropes so im still working on them thanks tho

hey Platypus, thanks for trying to keep things consistant but it IS SUPPOSED TO CHANGE you will see why in the end (hint: it may have something to do with a pumpkin) also please stop trying to keep health consistant.

== Platypus STOP ==

hi Platypus THERES REASON FOR CHANGE in jim's Barbeque. Thanks for trying to keep things consistant but THATS NOT HOW WE WANT IT (you will see what we mean LATER ON)
'''

== ALL CAPS MEANS IM ANGRY THIS IS MY OUTSIDE TYPING IT IS VEARY ANGRY! ==

Thanks for reading - Hey its
[[Category: Platypus Archive]]

== yo needs endings ==

yo there is like almost no endings here hello!

==Accident==
If i tried to delete Random III then it was probably an editing accident. Try to relax more, you dont have to blast me for a mistake.

You sly dog, you probably know who wrote this anyway so I won't sign it.

== What the Barbeque ==

K so i think we got an issue here mister LETS GO RUIN ALL THE FUN. I see that you want to be like us cool dudes and make the site better one story at a time but we gotta come to an agreement here k? Now this leads me to my first question. Are You the only admin on this site? OR ARE YOU JUST SOME KIND OF BARBEQUE HATER?!?!?!?! You are the only person who seems to freak out when we do anything that you think is wrong everyone else is gettin a laugh and changin it back in time... but you just seem to scream about every little thing. Yes i see that you are doing good but still....

thankyou [[User:Hey its|Me]]

p.s.
it would be really cool if you could set font colour :) (and if you can, can you help with how?)

== Greetings! ==
Um.... you seem to be the most active user, so I thought I'd introduce myself. There's not much to say, but is there anything I should know that's not on the main page? I admit, I'm a bit confused by the distinction between "Normal" and "R-rated" stories. Could you clarify please? Other than that, can you recommend any stories to read in the R-rated or under sections?

Thanks--[[User:Rawar|Rawar]] 09:23, 27 March 2009 (PDT)

==Okay==

Sorry about that. I'll try my best to do keep things right. I'm usually pretty good about this stuff but far from the best. If I'm doing anything wrong, just let me know and I'll do my best to fix it.-[[User:121|121]] 18:25, 30 January 2009 (PST)

== Misc. ==

I created a separate page which I use to describe a few points on the status bar, thereby allowing me to remove it from the main page and giving a end result that I think looks much nicer. However, since it's not technically part of the story if this is a problem feel free to delete it. Just let me know if you do so I can re-add the information to the first page. - [[User:Katrex|Katrex]] 18:48, 28 September 2008 (PDT)

chill I'm trying dude ok?
Platypus,

Not all of them are endings. Im actually refreshing it with a new side story.

== Anon edits ==

Why are they disabled? --[[User:Elassint|Elassint]] 18:25, 3 July 2008 (PDT)

== Sex Romp updates ==

Just a brief note so you'll know I'm enjoying the SSR outrageousness. I especially like Lynn the ballerina, her determination to bring as many in as possible, and her slightly foul-mouthed amazement at their (lack of) limits. I'd like to see more of Lynn... pity there's no option (yet) to let her follow the player home and playfully boss him around some more. (-:

Hey man i just want to thank you for helping me out with my story since im new to this and all. So anyway, thanks man :D.

:Yeah, it's pretty amazing, thanks. [[User:Treebeard|Treebeard]] 21:34, 24 November 2008 (PST)

== Resident evil ==

Hey man i just want to thank you for helping me out with my story since im new to this and all. So yeah thanks man :D. --[[User:Anonym|Anonym]] 14:25, 20 August 2008 (PDT)

== My Threads (University Daze) ==

Thanks for the grammar nazi'ing. I have a habit of coming back (read: much) later and fixing what I write. It helps to be distanced from it, otherwise I don't spot errors and can't really tell whether I like what I've written. You've made my job easier.

--[[User:Anubite|Anubite]] 13:57, 25 November 2008 (PST)

== skilful / skillful ==

"skilful" is a better spelling than "skillful" because whereas both spellings are acceptable in American English, only "skilful" is allowed in British English. Therefore that's the spelling that should be used here: [[Rock, Paper, Scissors/Rock/Rock]].--[[User:Alphador|Alphador]] 03:36, 12 December 2008 (PST)

== Newbie ==

Hey - just discovered this site and have been perusing some of your work. I have a question - is it permitted to add gay options to existing stories? I am not sure what the accepted rules are. I can start my own story, but thought it might be fun to add to some of the existing adult CYOAs. [[User:PhinnyGene|PhinnyGene]] 12:36, 17 December 2008 (PST)

Yes. Adding gay options to existing stories is allowed. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 16:03, 17 December 2008 (PST)

I added an option to the [[Fuck Christie's tits]] page of Jack Foster -- I see you reverted it -- did I do something wrong? I thought we were encouraged to add more possible options...? [[User:PhinnyGene|PhinnyGene]] 20:29, 19 December 2008 (PST)

Just a quick question. Can we start our own stories? If yes, then how?
[[User:Unkowhero23|Unkowhero23]]

Thanks for contacting - I thought I was making my own story, but obviously I'm doing something wrong Lol! Will look into it and to a bit more reading. Cheers! [[User:Impious|Impious]]

== Sub Categories ==

I noticed that in SSR you have a separate category for all of the locations in that story. I was wondering if this is something that should be done for all non-story pages of an adventure. In my story, War of Nations, I do have a couple of spells with links that aren't related to the plot but instead explain what the spell does. Also, second question, Should I begin all of my options with War of Nations/ or is it okay to remove that part? Thirdly, how exactly do I create a category?

*I created the location subcategory mainly so I could track how many pages are in a given location and make it easier to get to pages in a given location. From a location's page, I can click on "What Links Here" and see all the pages in that location. If you want to make a subcategory for spells, feel free.

Should you begin all options with War of Nations? It's up to you. Adding that to the option name does keep you from accidentally crossing pages with another story.

Creating a category is much like creating a regular page. Type <nowiki>[[Category: Category Name]]</nowiki> on a page and the page is now categorized. Click on the red Category Name and you go to an index page showing all the pages in the category. If you place the name of another category on that index page, your new category become a subcategory. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 17:23, 1 February 2009 (PST)

== Thanks for the help ==

Thank you for helping me with my story! I'm new to editing Wikis so I don't know to add categories and all that plus I make mistakes often. Thanks. One question, why did you delete 666? It was a perfectly good room!

== Londonbirder ==

Hi Platypus,

Sorry to hear about the vandal attack. I haven't heard of him attacking elsewhere, but if I have learned anything about vandals, they get bored and move on after a little while. I saw that you were blocking his IP's so that should at least make it harder.

Note: it is very unlikely that he is related to Londonbirders. They are a group interested in birds, not messing with wikis, so I wouldn't bother asking them about this. He is most likely just trying to get wikis to accuse eachother.

:What is this "owned by birdwatchers" thing doing on my page?
::Seems that there is some vandal wandering around. Just revert his changes and don't engage him in dialog (never feed the trolls)

== It'll do for now ==

I'm sure you'll completely repair the main page when you get back online. I don't care too much about the rest of this jerk's vandalism, but we need a main page and I did what I could to get it at least usable. BTW, is there any way to block all users named "londonbirder[anything]" at once, so that imbecile boy would have to at least switch to a completely new username? Hopefully he'll get bored soon. -- Teejay

== thanks for your help ==

Thanks for your revisions. I hope you are enjoying the story. I'd love your contributions if you'd be so bold.

== What the Barbeque ==

K so i think we got an issue here mister LETS GO RUIN ALL THE FUN. I see that you want to be like us cool dudes and make the site better one story at a time but we gotta come to an agreement here k? Now this leads me to my first question. Are You the only admin on this site? OR ARE YOU JUST SOME KIND OF BARBEQUE HATER?!?!?!?! You are the only person who seems to freak out when we do anything that you think is wrong everyone else is gettin a laugh and changin it back in time... but you just seem to scream about every little thing. Yes i see that you are doing good but still....

thankyou [[User:Hey its|Me]]

p.s.
it would be really cool if you could set font colour :) (and if you can, can you help with how?)

== Thanks for the help! ==

Really appreciate it. :) Do you know if it would be okay to set up a [[CYOA Drinking Game]] similar to the TV Tropes or Uncyclopedia Drinking Games?--[[User:Occono|Occono]] 03:02, 27 May 2009 (PDT)

== Thank you ==

I would like to thank you for all the editing that you do, really appreciate it. You must really like writing don’t you? If there really were a Nazi grammar group then I’m sure you would be in the SS!
[[User:Fletcher Peninsula]]

== Gotcha. ==

I won't put any more redlinks on the MainPage, thanks for explaining.--[[User:Occono|Occono]] 18:19, 20 July 2009 (PDT)

== Stop editing my story of burning leaves please ==

Hey Platypus, I told on the first page of the Burning Leaves story that I didn't want no one except me editing the story because I already have the whole story planned but you still keep editing it, stop with editing it please.

== Thanks ==

Thanks for correcting my grammar and I'm sorry for getting angry at you, it's just that I saw that there also were new things added and since I saw that you was the only other one than me that had been editing it I thought you did that but maybe you wasn't.

== Rampage ==

I've added a link to the first page of Rampage allowing readers to skip forward a bit. The reason for this is that the story now is getting to be a bit long and seems to have developed into two seperate parts. There's part I (Brandon/Valerie/mother) and part II (Kaya/Samantha) with only one link connecting the two. I just thought it would help people if they've already read the older bits. If you don't like the idea, feel free to remove the link. Thanks.

== Creating A Custom Template ==

In some of the articles, I saw some custom-made templates with different names given to them. Could you perhaps teach me on how to create my own custom template? I don't want anything fancy, really. I want something like the 'Status' template you posted on the [[Main Page]], with the title, "Status" changed to "Digimon Status" instead. Do you think you could help me with that? =)

--[[User:OminousFlare|OminousFlare]] 00:48, 25 September 2009 (PDT)

*Thanks, Platypus. Your advice helped a lot.
--[[User:OminousFlare|OminousFlare]] 09:37, 25 September 2009 (PDT)

== Editing A Page Title ==

Okay, this is getting way annoying. I keep on finding myself having the need to edit some of the titles of my articles and I cannot do so as there is no such function. Thus, I have to keep on bothering you to delete my pages after I create new ones with changed titles but with the same contents to replace them. I am sure this is a little frustrating on your part, too.

Is there a way for me to edit the page titles at all? Or is it a doomed no-return path upon a page's creation? Thanks for your help again and I hope to hear from you soon.

--[[User:OminousFlare|OminousFlare]] 12:07, 25 September 2009 (PDT)

* So, I'm guessing the 'redirect' function really doesn't work in this wiki? Because I tried putting <nowiki>#REDIRECT [[insert page title]]</nowiki> into the page I want to be deleted (using the preview, of course) and it doesn't work, so, I thought I might check with you if I'm doing something wrong here or my first assumption is correct.

==Stories in the wrong Category?==

So, I've been working on Transylvanian Terror (which is in the Mature section) again, and it occurred to me that nothing in there is really R rated. Definitely PG 13, but not R. If you've read through a path or two, would you agree? That said, I don't feel comfortable moving it under a category entitled "Kid's stories", although the heading would indicate that PG 13 goes under there. When I think "Kid" I think 7-9 year olds, and it's not a story for them. Would it be appropriate to either separate out PG and PG 13 or retitle the "Kids" stories? There are several other stories in the "Mature" section that are definitely not R rated, but neither are they kid's stories. Examples are DARKNESS, World's End, and Jim's barbecue. Actually, maybe it'd be best to take the PG-13 criteria form the "Kids stories section" and give it to the "Mature" section. What do you think?

Also, has "Hunting again for Red October" been nominated for story of the week yet? If it hasn't, I totally nominate it.

Thanks, --[[User:Rawar|Rawar]] 14:17, 6 October 2009 (PDT)

==Quick Question==
How can I hyperlink an image? (I.e. clicking a logo for a story on my page and going to another page.) --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 20:56, 1 March 2010 (UTC)

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Hi you sent me a message before on putting the status bar into stories I edit, can you give me a link to a tutorial on tha? Beacause I'm not sure where that is in the help section.
Thanks a bunch!
INferno77

New Contributor
Hey, I am completely new to the site and was wondering what you thought about my contribution in the War & Sex storyline?
Thank you for linking my page to the index too btw, I am just a starter after all and am still getting used to everything.
Please get back to me with comments and suggestions as I do not want to "rock the boat." Haha hope to hear from you soon.
Ollie Williams

== About Contributing ==
I'm more than happy to follow you're guidelines but you weren't very specific about what you didn't like. I am
new to site, so bear with me. How did I deviate from the story style for one thing, I thought I followed it quite accuratley
from what I had read until that point. The page your reffering to that was a dead end, I was going to finish editing it
actually, it wasn't finished, I was going to have him go back to his apartment. (the arc had to logically end at some point,
but I realised you probly didn't want me to end the story). I didn't finish since I had to eat dinner lol. Also, my grammar
is fine and if anything only needs minor editing. What structuring? You mean text codes? How are they wrong?
Anyhoo, hope you get back to me,
Numenorean

- Dear Platypus,
We, the users behind "'''Hey its'''", would like to thank you for the unban. We promise
not to be abusive to others' stories or the site - yes, other users' stories have unlimited possibilities,
but it adds that special zazz to ours. We would like to call a truce between us, and an agreement for you to leave our edits
alone or a notification of said edit.
Thank you,
'''Jim's Barbeque'''

- Dear Platypus,
In regards to your last message: we are not trying to annoy you nor draw your wrathful ire. Our underlying plot
simply drew itself, unbidden, from the path we had intended it to take, and those involved in the wrongful tainting of this fine
site's front page have been forcibly restrained from accessing the account. To give a short little tantalizing taste
of our grand scheme, our connection to other stories is like the intertwining of supporting chains that come together in unity to
form a massive bridging masterpiece. But we are not acting upon a roguish, free-form method; nay, for graceful
and generous contact is made between the affected and ourselves, in one way or another. Those who have coldly abandoned
the loving, harmonious community supporting this website are subject only to the most subtle, unassuming involvement
that tarnishes not any name, in any one's opinion. Your contact with us is invaluable to our cause, and we would be subject
to only the finest honour if you were to keep in touch with any further snags along this fine road we trod.
Thank you,
'''Jim's Barbeque'''

- Dear Platypus,
We are extremely thankful for the revival of our long sought-after story page. While we respectfully disagree that it does not
belong in "World's End", we agree to not repost it within that story.
Thank you,
'''Jim's Barbeque'''

== Deletions Requested ==

Sorry about the little mess, but I prefer the hyphen over the slash. Anyway, here are the blanked pages:
*[[Nightcaps/Stare back]]
*[[Nightcaps/Keep staring]]
*[[Nightcaps/Jeffrey's leaving?]]
*[[Nightcaps/What's wrong?]]
*[[Nightcaps/Holding Jeffrey's hand]]
Oh and if I can ever make it easier on you by doing something differently (still getting the hang of CYOA, not to mention wiki-editing in general), don't hesitate to point out my noobery. I obviously don't need to invite you to change anything that... well, that you would change anyway, haha. Thanks! [[User:NightChime|NightChime]] 03:00, 19 October 2009 (PDT)

== Please Contribute more! ==

You're probably the user that is on this site the most and are really creative, can you please contribute more to my story, "High School?"(Just not Gothic male or female please!)

Thanks--[[User:Gr1mm|Gr1mm]]

'''EDIT''':
Hey, there is something I would like you to do on my High School story. the link is here: *[["Um, well I thought we were going to....Well....You know....Do it...." you say nervously and embarassed.]] It's the ONLY thing (so far) that I would like you to do on goth. I chose you, because you're incredibly descriptive, you're good at writing all the sex and stuff, and you're pretty much one of the only trustworthy people on here. You can also edit any other page that branches off of that little page(if you know what I mean; I'm not good at explaining). I think it would be pretty cool if you used one of the props already in equipment. (it's in '''''Bold Italic''''') And weird stuff could happen, like their eyeliner, or their lipstick smears and ''stuff''. And if you want, Allison can use anything she has in her room (Use your imagination ;) ). And If it wouldn't bother you, you could do both points of view, from Jace's and Allison's point of view. It'll also show you what's already in her inventory. (Allison's point of view:*[["Um, well I thought we were going to....Well....You know....Do it...." Jace asks nervously.]])Please, if you get this, leave me a comment on my discussions page.

Thanks--[[User:Gr1mm|Gr1mm]]

== Hey Platypus ==

Hey platypus. You know my story, [[13 years]]. While it may not be a CYOA, I don't know where else to put it. So even though it doesn't belong here, can I continue doing it? PLEEASSSE? With a cherry on top(lol)?--[[User:Blablob|Blablob]] 06:25, 17 October 2009 (PDT)

Okay, well about the [[13 years]] topic, I'll fix it tomorrow. I will add choices instead, so no worries.--[[User:Blablob|Blablob]] 17:00, 17 October 2009 (PDT)

== Telling when a story was last worked on ==

Is there a way to tell when a story was last added to? I want to do a bit of maintenance and move some stories into the Pit of Abandoned Stories, but unless I check every page, it's hard to tell if the story's been inactive since it was started last year, or if someone just added a page last Tuesday. Thanks. --[[User:Rawar|Rawar]] 15:25, 27 October 2009 (PDT)

==Tutorial==
I have started a [[Tutorial]]. If you want to give me a couple days, I can finish most of the pages myself (except for the video embedding. I'm not even sure that's possible. I heard someone talk about it in a story though.), but there may be some topics I've overlooked. If there are, would you please add them? Would you also make sure the info I included is accurate? Lastly, I'm not really sure where the appropriate place to put it would be. Right now it's residing in the G stories section. Maybe you can find a good place for it. --[[User:Rawar|Rawar]] 22:46, 28 October 2009 (PDT)

== Reversion needed? ==
Looks like the main page may need to be reverted. All the PG-13 stories found their way into the Quizzes section. Looks like it's a job only a sysop can do. --[[User:Rawar|Rawar]] 13:45, 30 October 2009 (PDT)

== What do you mean? ==

When you posted me about me taking away catagories for my pages, I misunderstood you. Do you mean you want me to start putting them, or not deleting them? I'm not the one who's been getting rid of them. In fact, I wouldn't even know how. Please don't delete my pages.--[[User:Blablob|Blablob]] 13:10, 13 November 2009 (PST)

what are you talking about? I never deleted it. Honostly! But, uh, yeah, I'll make sure I make catagories for my pages.--[[User:Blablob|Blablob]] 18:14, 13 November 2009 (PST)

After a little bit of thought, I've come to a decision. I'll be leaving the website. Er..I guess a better way to put is I won't be editing anymore. I used to do it all the time, but I just find it kind of boring now. So, yeah, see ya later, I guess.--[[User:Blablob|Blablob]] 16:15, 14 November 2009 (PST)

== Blablob is BACK, baby! ==

Hello, I'm back. Yes, after a while of thought and whatnot, I decided I'd give this place a second go. Now, my other stories--13 years, Icarly, and a few others--it's all behind me. I'm going to start focusing more on PG 13 stories rather than mature stories, and I'll probably work on 1 story, and make it really good, rather than making a bunch of stories. It won't be anything like 13 years: a long story with long chapters with barely any choices to make; I'm coming back for a fresh start. So, I hope you are glad to have me back, and I promise to take consideration into my mistakes in the past.--[[User:Blablob|Blablob]] 13:28, 19 December 2009 (UTC)

== Sorry About The Grammar ==

Last night I was pretty tired when I was typing all of that storyline. I ended up kind of ignoring all my mistakes... Thanks for the future reminder though.
--[[User:Kevinsims22|Orpheus]] 21:27, 24 December 2009 (UTC)

== Guess I should report this to you ==

So while reading Warhammer: Sartosa, City of Pirates about a week ago I reached the page [[knock at the door]] which had an odd code.

http:// editthis.info/choose_your_own_adventure/Password_here

Supposedly a browser was to appear in which you could enter the password but obviously it’s not working. I briefly read the Wikipedia help articles but found no helpful information on how to fix it. So I used categories to cheat and get to the next page. I would have told you earlier but for some reason I did not.

So I’m wondering if this is some sort of bug that happened when the database was transferred and if it can be fixed. If not I can just start a new page at the page were you get the password and copy the entire story into a new story arc identical to the normal one except that you know the password.

Also, happy New Year and merry Christmas in arrears. (If you’re into that sort of thing).

[[User:Fletcher Peninsula]]

== Hey Platypus!! :D ==

This is what you wrote (I'll put in bold the things I wrote): Please follow the style of the story you are working on '''I don't get it, do you mean by this that I have to continue writing pages for Burning Leaves or does it mean that I have to write in third person in every page where I write? (which is the style I normally use)''' . The pages in University Daze do not start with dashes '''What are dashes? (I searched in my dictionary and it described the word as lines but I don't think it means that)''' . And again, include the category on every page you write. '''I would do that if I knew how to but I don't (*sigh* I still have a lot to learn about CYOA). Btw what to you mean with again? You never told me to before.'''

-pandafoxygirl- 17 January 2010 at 8:34 am (European time)
Um excuse me but i didnt post it, I think so how would you even know it's incomplete and I'm new to the whole choose adventure thing so please at first their all going to be choppy but you dont have to threaten to delete it how would you like it if I threatened to delete something of yours?
--[[User:Caterius|Caterius]] 00:22, 19 January 2010 (UTC)
Um okay could you please help me out on my story then please and thankyou.--[[User:Caterius|Caterius]] 14:33, 19 January 2010 (UTC)

== Thanks ==

Oh, now I get it (I think), thanks. It's just that I'm actually Dutch, I'm pretty good at English but I still have to learn a lot.

Oh sorry then, I didn't think of it that way.

Okay then, from now on I'll also add categories to the page.

Thanks for helping me out ^_^;

pandafoxygirl 08:09, 17 January 2010 (UTC)

== The Battle for the Earth ==

Hi Platypus! I was hoping you could move "The Battle for the Earth" from the Pit back into the active list. I've started working on this, cleaning it up and running some interesting story lines through it. I'd like to be open for others to add to. Thanks! -Robin

Thanks for moving it back! - Robin

== Student's work ==

Hi there,

I'm using your site for my students to create stories in second person POV. Sadly, one of my students didn't follow the instructions and now our IP address is blocked. Is there anything I can do? My students were really excited about publishing their work this way.

== Sorry? ==

You keep telling me to put the category on the things I post, i don't know what you mean. NOTE: I know I have posted stories that aren't adult under adult, I think I'm being hacked. Ninja Kittehs from Space was supposed to be under PG-13. OTHER NOTE: Yes I am a n00b, and have no idea how this works, so please don't insult me. NOTE #3: I am over 18, I just don't like that kind of thing. NOTE #4: I think I know what you meant, please check my stories (Video Games, Ninja Kittehs from Space, they were supposed to be PG-13), and see if I did it right.

== Broken Page ==

http://editthis.info/choose_your_own_adventure/Paladin/VP11

Crusader 2: Paladin

==Okay I'm gonna try this..==
Okay Platypus, this may or may not work...
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Okay it didn't work so...[[C:\Users\Possum\Pictures\AdventurebyKevinsims22.jpg]]
Maybe? Hmmmm.....If not I'll find a way that will be much easier... Or before I do that I'll try this [[Media:C:\Users\Possum\Pictures\AdventurebyKevinsims22.jpg]]
Okay my last attempt,(in actuality I made like 5050345245 other attempts buttt you know.)
[<a href="http://viewmorepics.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=viewImage&friendID=532625619&albumID=745874&imageID=5389073"><img src="http://hotlink.myspacecdn.com/images02/128/608ca540f2bc4da6b7070c1a6dbff66f/m.jpg" alt="" /></a>] Okay it worked, kind of.
--[[User:Kevinsims22|Orpheus]] 12:22, 13 June 2010 (UTC)

== Titles ==

How would I go about adding the titles? Sorry, I'm new and wasn't sure how. I love your story though.

Grab his cock

Arm22 — Fri, 04 Feb 2011 20:16:07 GMT

Arm22: Created page with 'His cock is too sexy for you to handle, and you grab it. "What the fuck are you doing!?" your friend yells. "Shh, just enjoy it." "Fuck no! Get the fuck off of me, faggot!" M…'

"Suck my cock, queers."

Arm22 — Fri, 04 Feb 2011 20:08:28 GMT

Arm22: Created page with 'You agree to suck his cock, and he strips down, revealing his muscular body and his 9-inch, thick as a pipe cock. His two coaches get on their knees and take turns sucking his bi…'

"Let me fuck your asses."

Arm22 — Fri, 04 Feb 2011 20:02:39 GMT

Arm22: Created page with 'You and Mike look at each other, then bend over hesitantly. You know from the showers that Tony is big soft, but who knows what his hard Italian sausage looks like. Turning arou…'

Tony Scarpelli, the Italian stud quarterback.

Arm22 — Fri, 04 Feb 2011 19:47:00 GMT

Arm22: Created page with '"What the fuck!?" yells Tony, "I leave work to pick up my clothes and find this!?" In shock, you and Mike pull apart and try to cover yourselves. Sheepishly, Mike asks how much …'

Timmy Chambers, the skinny nerd who loves big daddies.

Arm22 — Fri, 04 Feb 2011 19:43:37 GMT

Arm22: Created page with 'Timmy stands there, staring at the beautiful sight before him. He is in shock that he was lucky enough to stumble upon his two coaches fucking right in front of him. You notice …'

Call it a day

Arm22 — Fri, 04 Feb 2011 19:27:08 GMT

Arm22: Created page with 'You head home, exhausted and fatigued. After all, you had lots of fun today. Back at your house, you watch a game tape, then four "post-game" tapes. Maybe tomorrow, you can make …'

Julio Alvarez, the Mexican janitor who gives the best blowjobs in the school.

Arm22 — Fri, 04 Feb 2011 19:23:21 GMT

Arm22:

Call another guy on the team

Arm22 — Fri, 04 Feb 2011 19:21:39 GMT

Arm22: Created page with 'You grab your cell phone as you head out to your car. You have the names of literally hundreds of guys saved in your contacts. You think about it for a bit and wonder who to call…'

Julio Alvarez, the Mexican janitor who gives the best blowjobs in the school.

Arm22 — Fri, 04 Feb 2011 19:19:44 GMT

Arm22: Created page with 'With a nod of your head, you tell Julio to come over and suck Mike's big cock. Without hesitation, he strips down, revealing a lean body and an average (7-inch) cock. His mouth, …'

Kiss him while fingering his ass

Arm22 — Fri, 04 Feb 2011 19:10:32 GMT

Arm22: Created page with 'You move forward and kiss him passionately. Your huge cocks are rubbing against each other, creating a wonderful friction. He doesn't resist, which doesn't surprise you at this p…'

Stroke yourself

Arm22 — Fri, 04 Feb 2011 18:58:42 GMT

Arm22: Created page with 'You begin stroking your 10 inch cock and wait until your friend notices. While you pleasure yourself, he looks over and you catch him checking you out. "What are you looking at,…'

"I was just going for a shower too!"

Arm22 — Fri, 04 Feb 2011 18:53:29 GMT

Arm22: Created page with '"I was just finishing up some...work...and was gonna hit the showers!" "Well, you can join me," says Mike. You think to yourself that he might be more gay than he realizes. Thi…'

Go to Mike's office

Arm22 — Fri, 04 Feb 2011 18:44:01 GMT

Arm22: Created page with 'When you reach Mike's office, he is just leaving. His tall, muscular, ebony body is glistening with sweat. "Hey, Coach. I just got back from a quick jog around the court. I was …'

Mike Hovey

Arm22 — Fri, 04 Feb 2011 18:40:20 GMT

Arm22: Created page with 'You dial Mike's number and his wife answers. "Hello?" You ask her where you can find Mike. She mentions that he is at school. You thank her and hang up. When you realize that …'