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CLM/Pull out your gun and shoot the rapist

AllyG — Sun, 14 Feb 2016 00:44:02 GMT

AllyG:

Being the caring person you are, you pull out your M9 and pull the trigger, killing the rapist with a simple bullet to the head, but sparing the victim. You then call the police and they take the victim away. After the ordeal, you feel hungry.

[[CLM/Walk right]]

[[Category: CLM]]

CLM/Pull out your gun and shoot the rapist

AllyG — Sun, 14 Feb 2016 00:41:48 GMT

AllyG:

CLM/Pull out your gun and shoot the rapist

AllyG — Sun, 14 Feb 2016 00:40:33 GMT

AllyG:

CLM/Pull out your gun and shoot the rapist

AllyG — Sun, 14 Feb 2016 00:39:18 GMT

AllyG: Created page with 'Being the caring person you are, you pull out your M9 and pull the trigger, killing the rapist with a simple bullet to the head, but sparing the victim. You then call the police…'

Dogfight over The Pacific Ocean

AllyG — Sun, 14 Feb 2016 00:23:23 GMT

AllyG:

"Goodmorning Sir" you all say to your squadron leader. "Goodmorning pilots, we heard that the Japs attacked Midway and the airbase is under punishing fire" the squad leader says calmly. "Sir, did they use carriers?" A pilot questions "We believe so, and thats our plan. We'll attack the carriers. We will cover the TBF bombers and hold off the fighters. Then do strafing runs". There is a murmur as the mission seems like suicide for some. "Pilots, get your gear" "Yes sir!"

You walk out of the briefing room to your quarters and grab your stuff. Kissing the photo of your wife, you leave. Do you:

[[Dogfight/ Get in your F4U Corsair and take off]]

[[Category: Dogfight]]

CLM/Investigate

AllyG — Tue, 19 Jan 2016 23:12:03 GMT

AllyG: Created page with '"I'll check what the noise is bro" you say, aware of gangs being out at this time of night. Your really scared but open the door. Instead of a group of thugs or some homeless guy…'

"I'll check what the noise is bro" you say, aware of gangs being out at this time of night. Your really scared but open the door. Instead of a group of thugs or some homeless guy, it's a cat. You and Jacob love cats. "Hey buddy, it's a cat!" "What! No way!" "Yes way!" You lure the stray cat in and give it a huge dinner. For it's bed, you get a pillow from the couch and Jacob gets his spare coat. The feline settles and sleeps happily and peacefully, as oppose to sitting in some dumpster.

You both play the Halo 2 and 3 campaigns, and fall asleep as soon as the Xbox™ is turned off.

The next day, Jacob and the cat are gone. "What the fuck..." but Jacob had left a note: 'Just gone to clean and desex the cat, it's a girl. Also getting some toys, cat house, cat food and some cat clothes. I've made a list of names for her.

--NAMES--
Cortana (We love Halo)
Snowflake
Lucy
Winnie
---
All I could think of. If you have new names, tell me when I get back.
Jacob :)

You know he left like 10 minutes ago, so to pass the time, you:

[[CLM/Play Far Cry 4®]]

[[CLM/Sleep again]]

[[Category: CLM]]

CLM/Yes,see the Manager

AllyG — Tue, 19 Jan 2016 22:50:09 GMT

AllyG:

You get up and see the manager, and hope that the chef who cooked this piece of shit be fired. "I understand you have a problem" a tall man says. "Yeah, this steak is cold in some parts, and over/undercooked in others. "Oh my god...BRING ME THAT FUCKING CHEF!" the Manager hisses. "As a replacement, would you like a free meal?" "I guess!" you say cheerfully. What do you order:

[[Iced chocolate]]

[[Chicken wings in spicy sauce]]

[[Category: CLM]]

CLM/Yes,see the Manager

AllyG — Tue, 19 Jan 2016 22:47:16 GMT

AllyG: Created page with 'You get up and see the manager, and hope that the chef who cooked this piece of shit be fired. "I understand you have a problem" a tall man says. "Yeah, this steak is cold in som…'

You get up and see the manager, and hope that the chef who cooked this piece of shit be fired. "I understand you have a problem" a tall man says. "Yeah, this steak is cold in some parts, and over/undercooked in others. "Oh my god...BRING ME THAT FUCKING CHEF!" the Manager hisses. "As a replacement, would you like a free meal?" "I guess!" you say cheerfully. What do you order:

[[Iced Chocolate]]

[[Chicken wings served in spicy sauce]]

[[Category: CLM]]

CLM/A 19yr old Male

AllyG — Tue, 12 Jan 2016 15:38:22 GMT

AllyG:

You are a 19 year old Male human! Now, pick your nationality!

[[CLM/American]]

[[CLM/British]]

[[CLM/Chinese]]

[[CLM/Australian]]

[[CLM/Russian]]

[[CLM/African]]

[[CLM/Japanese]]

[[CLM/Other*]]

*Note you cannot be North Korean since leaving the country is the highest crime possible there is in North Korea!

CLM/American

AllyG — Tue, 12 Jan 2016 15:35:54 GMT

AllyG:

You`re an American! Pick your hair colour!

[[CLM/Black]]

[[CLM/Blonde]]

[[CLM/Brunette]]

[[CLM/Redhead]]

[[CLM/Bald]]

[[CLM/Other]]

[[Category: CLM]]

CLM/American

AllyG — Tue, 12 Jan 2016 15:34:39 GMT

AllyG: Created page with 'You`re an American! Pick your hair colour! CLM/Black CLM/Blonde CLM/Brunette CLM/Redhead CLM/Bald CLM/Tenticales expand out of your head'

You`re an American! Pick your hair colour!

[[CLM/Black]]

[[CLM/Blonde]]

[[CLM/Brunette]]

[[CLM/Redhead]]

[[CLM/Bald]]

[[CLM/Tenticales expand out of your head]]

CLM/A 19yr old Male

AllyG — Tue, 12 Jan 2016 15:31:10 GMT

AllyG: Created page with 'You are a 19 year old Male human! Now, pick your nationality! CLM/American CLM/British CLM/Chinese CLM/Australian CLM/Russian CLM/African [[C…'

You are a 19 year old Male human! Now, pick your nationality!

[[CLM/American]]

[[CLM/British]]

[[CLM/Chinese]]

[[CLM/Australian]]

[[CLM/Russian]]

[[CLM/African]]

[[CLM/Japanese]]

[[CLM/Other*]]

*Note you cannot be North Korean since leaving "the dedicated love and leadership of the notorius dictator Kim Jong-Un, well...YOU WILL BE SHOT!"

City Life Manhattan

AllyG — Tue, 12 Jan 2016 15:24:50 GMT

AllyG:

Welcome! This is a story about you living in Manhattan! Before we get started, who are you?

[[CLM/A 19yr old Male]]

[[CLM/A 19yr old Female]]

[[Category: CLM]]

City Life Manhattan

AllyG — Tue, 12 Jan 2016 15:23:46 GMT

AllyG:

Welcome! This is a story about you living in Manhattan! Before we get started, who are you?

[[CLM/A 19yr old Male]]

[[CLM/A 19yr old Female]]

User talk:Platypus

AllyG — Tue, 12 Jan 2016 11:53:42 GMT

AllyG: /* Help imma Newbie[Kinda] */

Since this page has become rather cluttered, I've moved old discussions to the archive pages below. Feel free to leave new messages here. I'll get back to you ASAP!

*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive1]]
*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive2]]
*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive3]]
*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive4]]

 >Add new comments below by clicking on the 'edit' button above. Do not add new comments to the archives. 

I apologize for the spam delete-page-request. Cleaning the Pit stories to make it into a bigger story is a lot more work than I thought.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 06:47, 10 January 2016 (UTC)

Hi Platypus. Apologies for the error, thank you for reverting it. By the way, I'm loving your original work and I hope my additions are bringing the story back to life. Ronnie

I don't think you understand what I'm saying. I agree that standards are important to ensuring that this section of the site doesn't descend into chaos. I am just commenting that as a new writing user, I am potentially going to make this site better and stronger for all users. If you delivered the same corrections using a more inclusive tone, you would not threaten the precious resource of new content contributors. With no malice, --[[User:Sir|Sir]] 23:00, 17 December 2015 (PST)

Your welcoming attitude has been overwhelming.--[[User:Sir|Sir]] 16:45, 15 December 2015 (PST)

Hi you just deleted my post in rampage under just go to sleep until tomorrow I'm new to this and was just wondering why?

Yes ik about the fact I need catagories reason why its work in progress its my first project and first page and its just being pieced together if you would love to put in the marks then by all means please do I just wouldlike to finish the storyboard. Then look at the little details
Scincerely geoffreyatln

Hello platypus, I was wondering if you would be willing to look at and edit the pages that I have added to the story Your Best Friend's Younger Sister? Also, do you have any tips for a new writer? Bw92

Hi Platypus, thanks for the editing tip I'm new to this sort of thing I'll sort out the pages I've already created

Hello Platyus, I was wondering if you could restore War13's chapters for the [[The Humiliation of Katie]]. I am willing to patch them up (I understand its annoying when people don't take the time to
learn how the site's categories and pages work.) - [[User:Uman|Uman]] 13:50, 7 September 2015 (UTC)

Thanks, I have them categorized now, will complete the fixing later today. - [[User:Uman|Uman]] 16:25, 7 September 2015 (UTC)

Hello Platypus. This is Firestorm. I'm new to this and I appreciate your pointing out my categories failure. I will do my best to ensure that I add categories to all future edits. Thank you! [[User:Firestorm|Firestorm]]

Hi Platypus. I think it's great that you are keeping an eye on things and ensuring proper grammar and such. But honestly when the option is between a blank page or a page that's not quite perfect for your liking, well deleting the whole thing and leaving the page as a broken link doesn't really help anyone. If you wanted to fix up the issues, or wanted to replace it with something better that is fine. Perhaps there is an option to flag a page for cleanup later if you don't have time (or maybe someone else can do it). But deleting pages that are reasonable but not perfect in favor of absolutely nothing is not an improvement in my opinion. There are a lot of story lines on here that dead end and need finishing and not only does your practice make it very disappointing for readers to not be able to finish a story arc, but it also discourages editors from wanting to come back and help finish some story arcs. [[User:Regulus|Regulus]] 06:58, 26 July 2015 (UTC)

Thanks for the input! If there is anything else you would like me to do let me know. [[User:Oneoffire|Oneoffire]] 23:23, 21 July 2015 (UTC)

Hey Platypus, I am dwarftopia. I read your message and I thank you for informing me that it was a feature needed. I have managed to categorize every page on my new story. Thanks for the tip!

'''''dwarftopia''''' --[[User:Dwarftopia|Dwarftopia]] 07:16, 2 July 2015 (UTC)

Hello Platypus, I received your message. I read back over my contributions to your choose your own adventure and hopefully fixed most of the errors. If there is something I missed, please let me know. Thanks! <nowiki>~~~~</nowiki>

i swear i didn't know it affected everything i thought it on changed when i looked at it,i am sorry for the indecent

Sure, sure. That's why you're vandalizing page after page. If you're going to act like a 12-year-old then go play Call of Duty, kid. '''-[[User:BakaG|BakaG]] 00:51, 11 June 2015 (UTC)'''

 You can sign your messages for convenience by using four ~ (tilde) symbols like so: <nowiki>~~~~</nowiki>. Your name and the date will show up like this: [[User:BakaG|BakaG]] 16:30, 16 November 2014 (UTC) 

Ok thanks! So others can still see my content? [[User:Wytod300050|Wytod300050]] 17:02, 16 June 2015 (UTC)

Hey, I was just wondering why when I am signed out I can't see my contributions to a story? Can others still see them?? [[User:Wytod300050|Wytod300050]] 02:59, 15 June 2015 (UTC)

Thank you for your feedback. I was looking to leave more options for others but that will do [[User:Twjhh|Twjhh]] 17:15, 26 May 2015 (UTC)

Thanks for the feedback! Constructive criticism is always welcome. [[User:Marzipan92]] 22:12, 24 April 2015 (UTC)

Thank you for the heads up on the pages that I forgot to Categorize. [[User:Deathsknight|Deathsknight]] 14:28, 8 March 2015 (UTC)

Hey, is there a way to blank pages automatically, or to mass wipe a category? I'm trying to redo a story, so that would help out a lot. Cheers.
--[[User:Snowball|Snowball]] 18:16, 22 February 2015 (UTC)

That is a really good point. I'll do it manually then. Thanks. --[[User:Snowball|Snowball]] 08:34, 23 February 2015 (UTC)

Roger that. Sorry for my ignorance!-Lasagna

I appreciate your protectiveness of your source material, but try being more hospitable. No reason to delete things when the changes aren't more than link perspectives or minor punctuation problems. You clearly don't want to write all 64,000 pages that would be needed to finish and tie together Rampage, or any other of your stories. So stop impeding people who are helping add more content to the site by wholesale deleting everything anybody writes with 2 missed periods or a run-on sentence or two. Try leaving the message and see if I'll fix it first, at the very least.[[User:Makhai|Makhai]] 13:57, 12 December 2014 (UTC).

Hi there. I see you deleted my work on the story 'A Unique Arrangement'. It was understandable but i now know how to add options/categorize and i was wondering if you could get my deleted work back? I don't really want to have to write it all over again because of a couple of mistakes.
Cheers. [[User:Bammy|Bammy]] 00:40, 11 December 2014 (UTC) [[User:Bammy|Bammy]] 13:29, 11 December 2014 (UTC)

I wpuld like toapologize for the actions that led to the deletion of the page if it were mear grammer problem please repost the page (if possible) and allow me to make corrections. If there was a problem with how I handled the story please tell me so I can make corrections and better furture work. In any case please type back as to know that you received this message

My apologies,
Greg222James

Platypus...this is Bustyalix. You recently messaged me about including the STATUS BAR, but I have no idea how to go about doing so. Is there any way you and I may converse privately? I'd be more than happy to include my personal email address if necessary. Please get back to me on this matter. Thanks!

I'm still new at this, so I don't appreciate the attitude. Yes, it'll take me some time getting used to this HTML like format, yes I'll make some errors now and again, but no that does not mean you have the right to strike an attitude with me. I haven't really worked with a status bar before, and I honestly didn't even realize I had to do anything with it. I'm still learning, rather teaching myself this strange format, so don't come to me in a hard and demeaning tone because I didn't do something the way you wanted it, because I am fairly new at this.

Platypus, this is eatenbypie. I appreciate that you pay attention to things like categorization of pages, but deleting work two hours after being warned and threatening to ban a new user because I missed categorization on 6-8 pages is excessive, especially given that the site doesn't notify you about warnings. Simple oversight on my part, and obviously an oversight given that the rest of the story has proper categorization. -Edit Not bothering to recreate my work on this site.

Apologies for the tense problems. I've been proofreading my stuff since I'm used to writing in past tense, but some things slip through the cracks it seems. As for quirky titles... do you mean the link/page title thing? The first was due to a page collision. I suppose I could have changed the action prompt to something else, but I consider that a part of the story itself, and didn't want to change it due to a collision. Those are rare, I guess. The second was due to a plan where two mini-storylines would converge to the same page... but the actions to get there would be different. In this case I would prefer to use a third page title rather than favor one of the two storylines. The third time I did it... yeah, that was just for my amusement, and it would be a simple matter to limit usage of alternate titles and use them only when needed. So... yeah. [[User:Ironwill|Ironwill]] 02:46, 24 November 2014 (UTC)

Hi Platypus; I got your message. Sorry about the mistake. If it ever happens again let me know and I'll fix it right away. I'm new to the editing, but I really try hard to be professional. Like I said, If there's any more problems, message me and I'll fix them right away. I really enjoy your story and I hope we get along. Please message me back soon so I know you got my message. - ThatOneWritter

Got your message. Didn't see it at first since I posted one after another Sorry 'bout the mistake. Will try to pay more attention to it in the future.-Repoman.

dude what are some of your story's?-Jay The man

will you be adding more to rampage and smutty sex romp? Jay The man

Hey platypus, just a quick question. I have a guy adding to my story using very little detail and it doesn't even follow the story. As the original creator of the story do I have the right to delete these submissions in favor of more descriptive and frankly more linear additions that I plan on making?--[[User:Blackdragon25|Blackdragon25]] 21:47, 4 December 2014 (UTC)
I understand, i just wanne give it a try.
I dont even speak english.
but i want to compliment you for your story

Hello Platypus,
thank you for your helpful (if terse) comments. I was unsure whether the status bar was needed as the second posted page obviously was meant as an ending. [[User:Kyrael|Kyrael]] 19:57, 19 December 2014 (UTC)

Hi Platypus
i'm new and have tried to label like you requested but cant. can you help?
regards. wildside

Heya Platypus, I just wanted to ask you how high the writing standards are for this website, as I'm currently working on a CYOA story that I'd really love to post here... but sometimes my punctuation is lacking. I only ask because I've noticed a lot of people on this page complaining about you deleting their stories/pages. I would hate for that to happen to me.
Also I have another question, how easy is it to move a story to a different age category? - PurpleLemon

'''Sophie4C'''
Hi, I'm very sorry about catergories, yes I do know how to do them but I've been edit via phone, so it's not easy having to rewrite/re copy and paste each time I do forgot. I will check over the choices I have made and correct them if you haven't already. [[User:Sophie4C|Sophie4C]] 07:39, 11 July 2015 (UTC)

Hi, I got your message about punctuating dialogue, and I consulted the help page as you advised. Upon reviewing what I'd done however, I wasn't able to find anything that seemed out of place. Perhaps you could specify what I need to fix? --[[User:Jkeyes|Jkeyes]] 21:42, 25 September 2015 (UTC)

Hi. I apologize for the perceived inconsistency in Rampage and won't be doing it that way in the future. I just wanted to explain that it was done in order to prevent any chance for accidentally linking to other stories. Won't happen again. --[[User:Kantus|Kantus]] 17:25, 23 November 2015 (UTC)

== Delete a page ==

Hey Platypus, since you're the only one who can delete pages can you please delete [[EW: Enter the briefing room]] (since I merged it into [[EW: On a tour of the Harry Potter studios‎]]). Thank you -- [[User:NiceGuy|NiceGuy]] 18:55, 1 February 2015 (UTC)

Hello there, I was wondering if you could help me delete two pages of my own story please, for I can't seem to delete them myself. The reason why I want them deleted is because I feel like they are not good ideas for branches anymore, as I once thought they were. They are: [[Lucid dreams/Male/Dream about the shower brunette| Dream about the shower brunette]], [[Lucid dreams/Male/Grab the towels| Clean up mess]]

I thank you for your cooperation. And I will edit in some new and (hopefully) better branches next time. --[[User:Chaomaster|Chaomaster]] 19:50, 21 February 2015 (UTC)

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Platypus, I'm a long time admirer but new contributor to the site, i wasn't sure how else to respond to your message so I wanted to say thank you for your feedback and I'll make the necessary corrections but I am learning still and I ask patience on that score. I do not understand what i am not doing with the categories please explain to me what it is that i am not doing - i have looked at the tutorial and compared scripting and i do not notice what i am not doing that they were doing on this story i am working on please go into further detail and i appologize for the inconvenience [[User:Phreakinsane|Phreakinsane]] 02:20, 2 March 2015 (UTC)

I'm trying to make a Cool Effect bro

== Hope You Don't Mind ==

I hope you don't mind; but I used the warn template, for Nigfin, since he left several pages uncategorised. If you do, I apologise for stepping on your toes. - [[User:Neminis|Neminis]] 19:27, 9 March 2015 (UTC)

Hey platypus, I have a user Maxpower altering my pages with out permission. I know he is just trying to help but he is altering the context or the story and despite my attempts to get him to stop polightly he continues to do it. I don't mind him adding to the story but he has been asked not to alter mine or other's contributions to the story. I would appreciate you having a word with him. Thanks --[[User:Blackdragon25|Blackdragon25]] 19:22, 16 March 2015 (UTC)

In my defence of the above accusations, I would like to bring Blackdragon's attention to the message that appears at the bottom of the edit window. Specifically, if you don't want your writing to be edited mercilessly, then don't submit here. The majority of my recent edits have centered around spelling, grammar, and readability, although I admit that here or there I add some embellishment or make changes to improve consistency and continuity. No one else on here seems to have a problem with that and realize that wikis are designed with collaboration in mind, and collaborative storytelling only makes for better more well rounded stories. In any case, I submit that if he considers his writing to be a sacred text that he changes his story type to private. But I'm definitely done with his whining. He will see no further contributions from me.
[[User:Maxpower|Maxpower]] 05:48, 17 March 2015 (UTC)

== Make it four ==
No pages link to [[Make it four]]. I've asked the original creator what's up. Please don't just delete this; there's a whole string of pages I would like to see (re?)attached to the story. Writing you to see if there perhaps was some kind of technical hiccup that I couldn't find? [[User:Anedwcan|Anedwcan]] 16:09, 18 March 2015 (UTC)

So, I just got that "second warning" of yours, but I have been titling every post since you gave me the first one. Can you please explain to me what it is I am not doing and possibly link me to the offending post? --[[User talk:Jemini|Jemini]]

Never mind, I figured it out. --[[User:Jemini | Jemini]]

== 2 Taboo 4 You Deletion Request ==
Could you please delete the following pages by [[User:Vitalis|Vitalis]] from my story [[2T4U|2 Taboo 4 You]]:
*[[2T4U/Go into mommy's room]]
*[[2T4U/Climb into bed with her]]
*[[2T4U/Snuggle up to her, rubbing your dick against her]]
*[[2T4U/Say "I need help mom"]]
*[[2T4U/Yes, mom suck my dick]]
He didn't adhere to the guidelines I laid out for the story, basically added nothing to the story, and has not fixed his passages after I asked him to. I feel that I have given him enough time to repair the damage. Thank you. --[[User:Elerneron|Elerneron]] 22:08, 21 April 2015 (UTC)

== Downfall ==

Sorry for creating so much work for you lately. I ran into unexpected intra-story crosslinking which is why I had to delete and recreate dozens of pages. I underestimated the complexity of branching. - [[User:Minnie May Hopkins|Minnie May Hopkins]] 22:22, 2 August 2015 (UTC)

== Main Page ==

Is there any way you can lock the Main Page? It really doesn't need to be edited often or ever, let alone by all the people that keep inadvertantly vandalizing it due to their apathy or stupidity. '''-[[User:BakaG|BakaG]] 01:22, 23 August 2015 (UTC)'''

== Punctuation ==

Sorry for my bad grammar. English is not my mother language. I will fix it next time. --[[User:Kaligula|Kaligula]] 16:34, 24 August 2015 (UTC)

== Intentional and Malicious Vandalism ==

This is to bring to your attention the fact that the user [[User:TheRealSlimShady|TheRealSlimShady]] has intentionally and maliciously replaced the page [[2T4U]] in response to my asking him not to change the basic features of the story. He apparently is not aware of the history feature. I have not undone his changes in case that would erase the evidence; as I am not certain if one would loose such with an undo. If you could please address this I would be most appreciative. --[[User:Elerneron|Elerneron]] 03:29, 14 September 2015 (UTC)

As a fellow contributor, I would like to thank you for handling the situation that [[User:Elerneron|Elerneron]] just brought up. Much like him, I also left it as is for the sake of having it handled properly. --[[User:Jemini|Jemini]]

== Delete review? ==

Thanks for removing my story. With it gone, should [[Review:_War_Pigs|this review]] of it also be deleted? [[User:AgentVincent|AgentVincent]] 03:03, 16 September 2015 (UTC)

== Pedo Stories ==
I tried to respond to the Main Talk page about this, but I was running into a Catch22 because of RobKohr's link. Where it captcha'ed me when I tried to post, then said I couldn't submit a post with a link in the same 20 minute period. Anyway, here's what I was trying to say:

You are totally wrong about written descriptions of underage sex being illegal. The fact that the material could be considered obscene, and thus illegal (in the US) would actually apply equally to any story with any extreme sexual activity. It can be applied to rape, bestiality, and just about ANY story that contains sexual descriptions. It is based on a remnant of a struck down child protection law that was unconstitutional, which is why it is sited for material directly related to children. The law is laughable, and you may have found one of the few cases where it was actually used, and the only one that I am aware of that actually made it through successfully. The user who pointed it out to you must be a free speech hating Nazi to bring up such an unlikely and remote senario as based on such a law. If this law were actually a problem, the largest sex story site on the internet '''www.asstr.org''' would not exist. No reasonable court would rule that you are guilty of transporting obscenity for something someone else wrote on your website. I'm not trying to tell you how to run your site, but if the "no pedo stories" rule stands; I will be leaving. Sincerely --[[User:Elerneron|Elerneron]] 00:56, 26 September 2015 (UTC)

I quoted your message on RobKohr's talk page. I hope you don't mind. He's the on waging a crusade on "pedo stories".

http://editthis.info/create_your_own_story/User_talk:RobKohr '''--[[User:BakaG|BakaG]] 07:08, 26 September 2015 (UTC)'''

I have found a new location for my stories. If you could put off editing or deleting them until I have time to move them I would very much appreciate it. --[[User:Elerneron|Elerneron]] 17:38, 2 October 2015 (UTC)

[[Primal Influence]], [[The Arcade]], and [[Generations]] may all be removed. --[[User:Elerneron|Elerneron]] 18:32, 2 October 2015 (UTC)

Actually [[The Humiliation of Katie]] may have some offending sections as well. I don't know how in depth we are planning on going here (age wise), but "[[Katie, who just hit puberty, is in her first year of high school at the age of 13]]" and "[[Katie, small and unknown to the town, enters a new elementary at the age of 6]]" would be offending sections. I didn't particularly want so young of ages to be used but I wasn't aware of the whole deletion possibility at the time. If necessary, I can raise the age of the 16 and 17 years on that story. But let me know if I should first before you delete them (the [[Katie, small and shy about her body, trying out for cheerleading at 16]] and [[Katie at 17, who deals with an exceptionally bad school year along with her family's attempts of getting closer together]] if you do decide to. - [[User:Uman|Uman]] on October 3, 2015

Are you aware of what age is being regarded as underage? I assume the American age of 18 is the default but I am just dodge checking. - [[User:Uman|Uman]] on October 3, 2015

Do you think it would be alright for me to advertise the new site I am at as an alternative for "pedo" stories after the disclaimer at the top of the All Adult Stories page? --[[User:Elerneron|Elerneron]] 18:07, 13 October 2015 (UTC)

== Platypus im Stuck idk how :/ ==

Platypus when i try to edit my edit it wont let me because its apparently not there any more :[ can you help me please?! 15:19, 1 November 2015 (UTC)

== Help imma Newbie[Kinda] ==

[[Platypus]] can you please help me edit:( .I dont understand why it wont let me edit my problems.Please help!
Sincerely,[[DATNUMBA1]] 15:27, 1 November 2015 (UTC)

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I don't usually like bitching and complaining, but this [[Katie Leaves the Locker Room After Five Minutes]] here was flagged for pedophilia somehow. Now what I don't understand here is that the character (Katie) isn't a kid and there is no sexual activity that occurs here. I know we want to get rid of pedophilia stuff but are we really going about it like this? - Uman, on 11/5/2015

Hey, I'm making a page called "Take it" that's not related to it's original story. Is that okay?

Thanks, just saying because there was a deletion notice from you.

Hey Platypus, I got your message, but do you know why bits of other peoples storys end up in mine? Like for example: Kill him. That was in red. And then I notice its in blue and it says "You kill Zach for not eating his food and eject him into hyperspace. He dies 32 seconds later." Do you know why bits of other peoples stuff is in my story? Also, when I go to make a story, like start one, not edit, I can`t type whatsoever. It doesnt let me. Or is it because I`m doing all of it on DSi Internet Browser. Thanks, [[AllyG]]. P.S RIP David Bowie 1947-2016 10/1/16
Platypus, it's [[Whining Winnie]], please check out RAMPAGE in the pit of abandoned stories! I've redone it, but how do I lift it out of there to the Mature section?

Thanks, your right. But I`m not really good at going into detail on stories. Could you maybe help? [[AllyG]]

== About Life of a 13 Year old ==

Do you think it'll be okay if I moved Life of a 13 year old to All the Fallen Stories? I have no idea who else to ask so I was wondering if you could give me permission or perhaps point me at the right person to ask. -Rikion

== Adding date and time at the end of a message automatically ==
As the title says it, would you happen to know a way to add the date and time information at the end of a message (such as this one) automatically, so we don't have to type them in? Thanks in advance, Platypus. --[[User:Darth Malcolm|Darth Malcolm]] 02:44, 05 January 2016 (UTC)

User talk:Platypus

AllyG — Mon, 11 Jan 2016 15:45:57 GMT

AllyG: /* Help imma Newbie[Kinda] */

Since this page has become rather cluttered, I've moved old discussions to the archive pages below. Feel free to leave new messages here. I'll get back to you ASAP!

*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive1]]
*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive2]]
*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive3]]
*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive4]]

 >Add new comments below by clicking on the 'edit' button above. Do not add new comments to the archives. 

I apologize for the spam delete-page-request. Cleaning the Pit stories to make it into a bigger story is a lot more work than I thought.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 06:47, 10 January 2016 (UTC)

Hi Platypus. Apologies for the error, thank you for reverting it. By the way, I'm loving your original work and I hope my additions are bringing the story back to life. Ronnie

I don't think you understand what I'm saying. I agree that standards are important to ensuring that this section of the site doesn't descend into chaos. I am just commenting that as a new writing user, I am potentially going to make this site better and stronger for all users. If you delivered the same corrections using a more inclusive tone, you would not threaten the precious resource of new content contributors. With no malice, --[[User:Sir|Sir]] 23:00, 17 December 2015 (PST)

Your welcoming attitude has been overwhelming.--[[User:Sir|Sir]] 16:45, 15 December 2015 (PST)

Hi you just deleted my post in rampage under just go to sleep until tomorrow I'm new to this and was just wondering why?

Yes ik about the fact I need catagories reason why its work in progress its my first project and first page and its just being pieced together if you would love to put in the marks then by all means please do I just wouldlike to finish the storyboard. Then look at the little details
Scincerely geoffreyatln

Hello platypus, I was wondering if you would be willing to look at and edit the pages that I have added to the story Your Best Friend's Younger Sister? Also, do you have any tips for a new writer? Bw92

Hi Platypus, thanks for the editing tip I'm new to this sort of thing I'll sort out the pages I've already created

Hello Platyus, I was wondering if you could restore War13's chapters for the [[The Humiliation of Katie]]. I am willing to patch them up (I understand its annoying when people don't take the time to
learn how the site's categories and pages work.) - [[User:Uman|Uman]] 13:50, 7 September 2015 (UTC)

Thanks, I have them categorized now, will complete the fixing later today. - [[User:Uman|Uman]] 16:25, 7 September 2015 (UTC)

Hello Platypus. This is Firestorm. I'm new to this and I appreciate your pointing out my categories failure. I will do my best to ensure that I add categories to all future edits. Thank you! [[User:Firestorm|Firestorm]]

Hi Platypus. I think it's great that you are keeping an eye on things and ensuring proper grammar and such. But honestly when the option is between a blank page or a page that's not quite perfect for your liking, well deleting the whole thing and leaving the page as a broken link doesn't really help anyone. If you wanted to fix up the issues, or wanted to replace it with something better that is fine. Perhaps there is an option to flag a page for cleanup later if you don't have time (or maybe someone else can do it). But deleting pages that are reasonable but not perfect in favor of absolutely nothing is not an improvement in my opinion. There are a lot of story lines on here that dead end and need finishing and not only does your practice make it very disappointing for readers to not be able to finish a story arc, but it also discourages editors from wanting to come back and help finish some story arcs. [[User:Regulus|Regulus]] 06:58, 26 July 2015 (UTC)

Thanks for the input! If there is anything else you would like me to do let me know. [[User:Oneoffire|Oneoffire]] 23:23, 21 July 2015 (UTC)

Hey Platypus, I am dwarftopia. I read your message and I thank you for informing me that it was a feature needed. I have managed to categorize every page on my new story. Thanks for the tip!

'''''dwarftopia''''' --[[User:Dwarftopia|Dwarftopia]] 07:16, 2 July 2015 (UTC)

Hello Platypus, I received your message. I read back over my contributions to your choose your own adventure and hopefully fixed most of the errors. If there is something I missed, please let me know. Thanks! <nowiki>~~~~</nowiki>

i swear i didn't know it affected everything i thought it on changed when i looked at it,i am sorry for the indecent

Sure, sure. That's why you're vandalizing page after page. If you're going to act like a 12-year-old then go play Call of Duty, kid. '''-[[User:BakaG|BakaG]] 00:51, 11 June 2015 (UTC)'''

 You can sign your messages for convenience by using four ~ (tilde) symbols like so: <nowiki>~~~~</nowiki>. Your name and the date will show up like this: [[User:BakaG|BakaG]] 16:30, 16 November 2014 (UTC) 

Ok thanks! So others can still see my content? [[User:Wytod300050|Wytod300050]] 17:02, 16 June 2015 (UTC)

Hey, I was just wondering why when I am signed out I can't see my contributions to a story? Can others still see them?? [[User:Wytod300050|Wytod300050]] 02:59, 15 June 2015 (UTC)

Thank you for your feedback. I was looking to leave more options for others but that will do [[User:Twjhh|Twjhh]] 17:15, 26 May 2015 (UTC)

Thanks for the feedback! Constructive criticism is always welcome. [[User:Marzipan92]] 22:12, 24 April 2015 (UTC)

Thank you for the heads up on the pages that I forgot to Categorize. [[User:Deathsknight|Deathsknight]] 14:28, 8 March 2015 (UTC)

Hey, is there a way to blank pages automatically, or to mass wipe a category? I'm trying to redo a story, so that would help out a lot. Cheers.
--[[User:Snowball|Snowball]] 18:16, 22 February 2015 (UTC)

That is a really good point. I'll do it manually then. Thanks. --[[User:Snowball|Snowball]] 08:34, 23 February 2015 (UTC)

Roger that. Sorry for my ignorance!-Lasagna

I appreciate your protectiveness of your source material, but try being more hospitable. No reason to delete things when the changes aren't more than link perspectives or minor punctuation problems. You clearly don't want to write all 64,000 pages that would be needed to finish and tie together Rampage, or any other of your stories. So stop impeding people who are helping add more content to the site by wholesale deleting everything anybody writes with 2 missed periods or a run-on sentence or two. Try leaving the message and see if I'll fix it first, at the very least.[[User:Makhai|Makhai]] 13:57, 12 December 2014 (UTC).

Hi there. I see you deleted my work on the story 'A Unique Arrangement'. It was understandable but i now know how to add options/categorize and i was wondering if you could get my deleted work back? I don't really want to have to write it all over again because of a couple of mistakes.
Cheers. [[User:Bammy|Bammy]] 00:40, 11 December 2014 (UTC) [[User:Bammy|Bammy]] 13:29, 11 December 2014 (UTC)

I wpuld like toapologize for the actions that led to the deletion of the page if it were mear grammer problem please repost the page (if possible) and allow me to make corrections. If there was a problem with how I handled the story please tell me so I can make corrections and better furture work. In any case please type back as to know that you received this message

My apologies,
Greg222James

Platypus...this is Bustyalix. You recently messaged me about including the STATUS BAR, but I have no idea how to go about doing so. Is there any way you and I may converse privately? I'd be more than happy to include my personal email address if necessary. Please get back to me on this matter. Thanks!

I'm still new at this, so I don't appreciate the attitude. Yes, it'll take me some time getting used to this HTML like format, yes I'll make some errors now and again, but no that does not mean you have the right to strike an attitude with me. I haven't really worked with a status bar before, and I honestly didn't even realize I had to do anything with it. I'm still learning, rather teaching myself this strange format, so don't come to me in a hard and demeaning tone because I didn't do something the way you wanted it, because I am fairly new at this.

Platypus, this is eatenbypie. I appreciate that you pay attention to things like categorization of pages, but deleting work two hours after being warned and threatening to ban a new user because I missed categorization on 6-8 pages is excessive, especially given that the site doesn't notify you about warnings. Simple oversight on my part, and obviously an oversight given that the rest of the story has proper categorization. -Edit Not bothering to recreate my work on this site.

Apologies for the tense problems. I've been proofreading my stuff since I'm used to writing in past tense, but some things slip through the cracks it seems. As for quirky titles... do you mean the link/page title thing? The first was due to a page collision. I suppose I could have changed the action prompt to something else, but I consider that a part of the story itself, and didn't want to change it due to a collision. Those are rare, I guess. The second was due to a plan where two mini-storylines would converge to the same page... but the actions to get there would be different. In this case I would prefer to use a third page title rather than favor one of the two storylines. The third time I did it... yeah, that was just for my amusement, and it would be a simple matter to limit usage of alternate titles and use them only when needed. So... yeah. [[User:Ironwill|Ironwill]] 02:46, 24 November 2014 (UTC)

Hi Platypus; I got your message. Sorry about the mistake. If it ever happens again let me know and I'll fix it right away. I'm new to the editing, but I really try hard to be professional. Like I said, If there's any more problems, message me and I'll fix them right away. I really enjoy your story and I hope we get along. Please message me back soon so I know you got my message. - ThatOneWritter

Got your message. Didn't see it at first since I posted one after another Sorry 'bout the mistake. Will try to pay more attention to it in the future.-Repoman.

dude what are some of your story's?-Jay The man

will you be adding more to rampage and smutty sex romp? Jay The man

Hey platypus, just a quick question. I have a guy adding to my story using very little detail and it doesn't even follow the story. As the original creator of the story do I have the right to delete these submissions in favor of more descriptive and frankly more linear additions that I plan on making?--[[User:Blackdragon25|Blackdragon25]] 21:47, 4 December 2014 (UTC)
I understand, i just wanne give it a try.
I dont even speak english.
but i want to compliment you for your story

Hello Platypus,
thank you for your helpful (if terse) comments. I was unsure whether the status bar was needed as the second posted page obviously was meant as an ending. [[User:Kyrael|Kyrael]] 19:57, 19 December 2014 (UTC)

Hi Platypus
i'm new and have tried to label like you requested but cant. can you help?
regards. wildside

Heya Platypus, I just wanted to ask you how high the writing standards are for this website, as I'm currently working on a CYOA story that I'd really love to post here... but sometimes my punctuation is lacking. I only ask because I've noticed a lot of people on this page complaining about you deleting their stories/pages. I would hate for that to happen to me.
Also I have another question, how easy is it to move a story to a different age category? - PurpleLemon

'''Sophie4C'''
Hi, I'm very sorry about catergories, yes I do know how to do them but I've been edit via phone, so it's not easy having to rewrite/re copy and paste each time I do forgot. I will check over the choices I have made and correct them if you haven't already. [[User:Sophie4C|Sophie4C]] 07:39, 11 July 2015 (UTC)

Hi, I got your message about punctuating dialogue, and I consulted the help page as you advised. Upon reviewing what I'd done however, I wasn't able to find anything that seemed out of place. Perhaps you could specify what I need to fix? --[[User:Jkeyes|Jkeyes]] 21:42, 25 September 2015 (UTC)

Hi. I apologize for the perceived inconsistency in Rampage and won't be doing it that way in the future. I just wanted to explain that it was done in order to prevent any chance for accidentally linking to other stories. Won't happen again. --[[User:Kantus|Kantus]] 17:25, 23 November 2015 (UTC)

== Delete a page ==

Hey Platypus, since you're the only one who can delete pages can you please delete [[EW: Enter the briefing room]] (since I merged it into [[EW: On a tour of the Harry Potter studios‎]]). Thank you -- [[User:NiceGuy|NiceGuy]] 18:55, 1 February 2015 (UTC)

Hello there, I was wondering if you could help me delete two pages of my own story please, for I can't seem to delete them myself. The reason why I want them deleted is because I feel like they are not good ideas for branches anymore, as I once thought they were. They are: [[Lucid dreams/Male/Dream about the shower brunette| Dream about the shower brunette]], [[Lucid dreams/Male/Grab the towels| Clean up mess]]

I thank you for your cooperation. And I will edit in some new and (hopefully) better branches next time. --[[User:Chaomaster|Chaomaster]] 19:50, 21 February 2015 (UTC)

______________________

Platypus, I'm a long time admirer but new contributor to the site, i wasn't sure how else to respond to your message so I wanted to say thank you for your feedback and I'll make the necessary corrections but I am learning still and I ask patience on that score. I do not understand what i am not doing with the categories please explain to me what it is that i am not doing - i have looked at the tutorial and compared scripting and i do not notice what i am not doing that they were doing on this story i am working on please go into further detail and i appologize for the inconvenience [[User:Phreakinsane|Phreakinsane]] 02:20, 2 March 2015 (UTC)

I'm trying to make a Cool Effect bro

== Hope You Don't Mind ==

I hope you don't mind; but I used the warn template, for Nigfin, since he left several pages uncategorised. If you do, I apologise for stepping on your toes. - [[User:Neminis|Neminis]] 19:27, 9 March 2015 (UTC)

Hey platypus, I have a user Maxpower altering my pages with out permission. I know he is just trying to help but he is altering the context or the story and despite my attempts to get him to stop polightly he continues to do it. I don't mind him adding to the story but he has been asked not to alter mine or other's contributions to the story. I would appreciate you having a word with him. Thanks --[[User:Blackdragon25|Blackdragon25]] 19:22, 16 March 2015 (UTC)

In my defence of the above accusations, I would like to bring Blackdragon's attention to the message that appears at the bottom of the edit window. Specifically, if you don't want your writing to be edited mercilessly, then don't submit here. The majority of my recent edits have centered around spelling, grammar, and readability, although I admit that here or there I add some embellishment or make changes to improve consistency and continuity. No one else on here seems to have a problem with that and realize that wikis are designed with collaboration in mind, and collaborative storytelling only makes for better more well rounded stories. In any case, I submit that if he considers his writing to be a sacred text that he changes his story type to private. But I'm definitely done with his whining. He will see no further contributions from me.
[[User:Maxpower|Maxpower]] 05:48, 17 March 2015 (UTC)

== Make it four ==
No pages link to [[Make it four]]. I've asked the original creator what's up. Please don't just delete this; there's a whole string of pages I would like to see (re?)attached to the story. Writing you to see if there perhaps was some kind of technical hiccup that I couldn't find? [[User:Anedwcan|Anedwcan]] 16:09, 18 March 2015 (UTC)

So, I just got that "second warning" of yours, but I have been titling every post since you gave me the first one. Can you please explain to me what it is I am not doing and possibly link me to the offending post? --[[User talk:Jemini|Jemini]]

Never mind, I figured it out. --[[User:Jemini | Jemini]]

== 2 Taboo 4 You Deletion Request ==
Could you please delete the following pages by [[User:Vitalis|Vitalis]] from my story [[2T4U|2 Taboo 4 You]]:
*[[2T4U/Go into mommy's room]]
*[[2T4U/Climb into bed with her]]
*[[2T4U/Snuggle up to her, rubbing your dick against her]]
*[[2T4U/Say "I need help mom"]]
*[[2T4U/Yes, mom suck my dick]]
He didn't adhere to the guidelines I laid out for the story, basically added nothing to the story, and has not fixed his passages after I asked him to. I feel that I have given him enough time to repair the damage. Thank you. --[[User:Elerneron|Elerneron]] 22:08, 21 April 2015 (UTC)

== Downfall ==

Sorry for creating so much work for you lately. I ran into unexpected intra-story crosslinking which is why I had to delete and recreate dozens of pages. I underestimated the complexity of branching. - [[User:Minnie May Hopkins|Minnie May Hopkins]] 22:22, 2 August 2015 (UTC)

== Main Page ==

Is there any way you can lock the Main Page? It really doesn't need to be edited often or ever, let alone by all the people that keep inadvertantly vandalizing it due to their apathy or stupidity. '''-[[User:BakaG|BakaG]] 01:22, 23 August 2015 (UTC)'''

== Punctuation ==

Sorry for my bad grammar. English is not my mother language. I will fix it next time. --[[User:Kaligula|Kaligula]] 16:34, 24 August 2015 (UTC)

== Intentional and Malicious Vandalism ==

This is to bring to your attention the fact that the user [[User:TheRealSlimShady|TheRealSlimShady]] has intentionally and maliciously replaced the page [[2T4U]] in response to my asking him not to change the basic features of the story. He apparently is not aware of the history feature. I have not undone his changes in case that would erase the evidence; as I am not certain if one would loose such with an undo. If you could please address this I would be most appreciative. --[[User:Elerneron|Elerneron]] 03:29, 14 September 2015 (UTC)

As a fellow contributor, I would like to thank you for handling the situation that [[User:Elerneron|Elerneron]] just brought up. Much like him, I also left it as is for the sake of having it handled properly. --[[User:Jemini|Jemini]]

== Delete review? ==

Thanks for removing my story. With it gone, should [[Review:_War_Pigs|this review]] of it also be deleted? [[User:AgentVincent|AgentVincent]] 03:03, 16 September 2015 (UTC)

== Pedo Stories ==
I tried to respond to the Main Talk page about this, but I was running into a Catch22 because of RobKohr's link. Where it captcha'ed me when I tried to post, then said I couldn't submit a post with a link in the same 20 minute period. Anyway, here's what I was trying to say:

You are totally wrong about written descriptions of underage sex being illegal. The fact that the material could be considered obscene, and thus illegal (in the US) would actually apply equally to any story with any extreme sexual activity. It can be applied to rape, bestiality, and just about ANY story that contains sexual descriptions. It is based on a remnant of a struck down child protection law that was unconstitutional, which is why it is sited for material directly related to children. The law is laughable, and you may have found one of the few cases where it was actually used, and the only one that I am aware of that actually made it through successfully. The user who pointed it out to you must be a free speech hating Nazi to bring up such an unlikely and remote senario as based on such a law. If this law were actually a problem, the largest sex story site on the internet '''www.asstr.org''' would not exist. No reasonable court would rule that you are guilty of transporting obscenity for something someone else wrote on your website. I'm not trying to tell you how to run your site, but if the "no pedo stories" rule stands; I will be leaving. Sincerely --[[User:Elerneron|Elerneron]] 00:56, 26 September 2015 (UTC)

I quoted your message on RobKohr's talk page. I hope you don't mind. He's the on waging a crusade on "pedo stories".

http://editthis.info/create_your_own_story/User_talk:RobKohr '''--[[User:BakaG|BakaG]] 07:08, 26 September 2015 (UTC)'''

I have found a new location for my stories. If you could put off editing or deleting them until I have time to move them I would very much appreciate it. --[[User:Elerneron|Elerneron]] 17:38, 2 October 2015 (UTC)

[[Primal Influence]], [[The Arcade]], and [[Generations]] may all be removed. --[[User:Elerneron|Elerneron]] 18:32, 2 October 2015 (UTC)

Actually [[The Humiliation of Katie]] may have some offending sections as well. I don't know how in depth we are planning on going here (age wise), but "[[Katie, who just hit puberty, is in her first year of high school at the age of 13]]" and "[[Katie, small and unknown to the town, enters a new elementary at the age of 6]]" would be offending sections. I didn't particularly want so young of ages to be used but I wasn't aware of the whole deletion possibility at the time. If necessary, I can raise the age of the 16 and 17 years on that story. But let me know if I should first before you delete them (the [[Katie, small and shy about her body, trying out for cheerleading at 16]] and [[Katie at 17, who deals with an exceptionally bad school year along with her family's attempts of getting closer together]] if you do decide to. - [[User:Uman|Uman]] on October 3, 2015

Are you aware of what age is being regarded as underage? I assume the American age of 18 is the default but I am just dodge checking. - [[User:Uman|Uman]] on October 3, 2015

Do you think it would be alright for me to advertise the new site I am at as an alternative for "pedo" stories after the disclaimer at the top of the All Adult Stories page? --[[User:Elerneron|Elerneron]] 18:07, 13 October 2015 (UTC)

== Platypus im Stuck idk how :/ ==

Platypus when i try to edit my edit it wont let me because its apparently not there any more :[ can you help me please?! 15:19, 1 November 2015 (UTC)

== Help imma Newbie[Kinda] ==

[[Platypus]] can you please help me edit:( .I dont understand why it wont let me edit my problems.Please help!
Sincerely,[[DATNUMBA1]] 15:27, 1 November 2015 (UTC)

----

I don't usually like bitching and complaining, but this [[Katie Leaves the Locker Room After Five Minutes]] here was flagged for pedophilia somehow. Now what I don't understand here is that the character (Katie) isn't a kid and there is no sexual activity that occurs here. I know we want to get rid of pedophilia stuff but are we really going about it like this? - Uman, on 11/5/2015

Hey, I'm making a page called "Take it" that's not related to it's original story. Is that okay?

Thanks, just saying because there was a deletion notice from you.

Hey Platypus, I got your message, but do you know why bits of other peoples storys end up in mine? Like for example: Kill him. That was in red. And then I notice its in blue and it says "You kill Zach for not eating his food and eject him into hyperspace. He dies 32 seconds later." Do you know why bits of other peoples stuff is in my story? Also, when I go to make a story, like start one, not edit, I can`t type whatsoever. It doesnt let me. Or is it because I`m doing all of it on DSi Internet Browser. Thanks, [[AllyG]]. P.S RIP David Bowie 1947-2016 10/1/16

Hey Platypus, it`s [[AllyG]] again! :) So, the DSi Browser is literally the Google app, so it allows me to go on the internet through my DSi. Just search "DSi Internet Browser". But do you know why I cant make a story? I`m also kinda mad that you deleted my work. I only made my account today and that was my first edit and I wasn`t sure what I was to do when other people`s stuff popped up in my story.

Platypus, I forget to categorize my pages. PLEASE don`t delete them! I`ll edit them now! P.S Read the tale of jack foster and chat to Lindsay. Thats where my work begins. [[AllyG]]

== About Life of a 13 Year old ==

Do you think it'll be okay if I moved Life of a 13 year old to All the Fallen Stories? I have no idea who else to ask so I was wondering if you could give me permission or perhaps point me at the right person to ask. -Rikion

== Adding date and time at the end of a message automatically ==
As the title says it, would you happen to know a way to add the date and time information at the end of a message (such as this one) automatically, so we don't have to type them in? Thanks in advance, Platypus. --[[User:Darth Malcolm|Darth Malcolm]] 02:44, 05 January 2016 (UTC)

Fuck her pussy

AllyG — Mon, 11 Jan 2016 14:34:44 GMT

AllyG:

"I'll have the cone" You spread Lindsay out on the bench and put all the clothes to form a pillow. You have no problem with pushing your cock in, as she`s already wet from masturbating and dreaming about you banging her. Now, her dream's come true.

You thrust in deeply, and she moans in pleasure. Your cock is happy and so are you with this doll. You then increase the pace until your ramming her. "Don`t stop! Baby don`t fucking stop fucking my tight pussy!" You change positions, this time for doggy, and continue banging her as hard as you can. "I`m nearly there!" "Oh yeah, fuck me harder! FUCK ME HARDER! YEAH" she then orgasms and juces all over your cock. You haven`t even come close to cumming yet. You then change position to cowgirl. As she sits down on you, you grab her perfect titties. Lindsay then begins boumcing up and down your shaft, getting faster. "Yeah you like that tight pussy? My pussy loves your cock!" You get up to go for missionary. As you begin thrusting in and out, you feel your balls tighten up. You then cum in her pussy, but your not done yet, hell no!

[[Bang her in the ass]]

[[Category: The story of Jack Foster]]

Sure, let`s do it

AllyG — Mon, 11 Jan 2016 14:10:24 GMT

AllyG: Created page with '"Sure, let`s do it" you reply. You reach the change room and step inside. "I know what you want, hot stuff" she purrs. "Your damn right babe" She slowly undoes your jeans, and yo…'

"Sure, let`s do it" you reply. You reach the change room and step inside. "I know what you want, hot stuff" she purrs. "Your damn right babe" She slowly undoes your jeans, and your cock is unveiled. A look of shock goes over Lindsays face as she looks at your huge 10 inch-penis. Losing no time, she gives the best blowjob you`ve ever had, even better than the one with Cherry. She starts out slow, but then starts pumping it like a pro. She then stops and says, "Still want dessert?" She takes off her designer jacket, and you take off her bra and panties. Your both naked now. "Would you like cone or tub"

[[Fuck her pussy]]

[[Fuck her ass]]

Go chat with Lindsay

AllyG — Mon, 11 Jan 2016 14:00:03 GMT

AllyG: Created page with 'You walk up to Lindsay and casually say "Hey" "Hi" she says, giggling. "So what are you doing here?" You say. "Just going clothes shopping" You think to yourself that 1: She`s a …'

You walk up to Lindsay and casually say "Hey" "Hi" she says, giggling. "So what are you doing here?" You say. "Just going clothes shopping" You think to yourself that 1: She`s a horny, stunning blonde, and 2: She`s got a huge crush on you. "So what are you doing now?" You ask politely. "Going to the change room to try out some new clothes, wanna come?"

You reply:

[[Sure, let`s do it]]

[[No thanks, I`ll wait outside]]

User talk:Platypus

AllyG — Mon, 11 Jan 2016 13:38:39 GMT

AllyG: /* Help imma Newbie[Kinda] */

Since this page has become rather cluttered, I've moved old discussions to the archive pages below. Feel free to leave new messages here. I'll get back to you ASAP!

*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive1]]
*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive2]]
*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive3]]
*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive4]]

 >Add new comments below by clicking on the 'edit' button above. Do not add new comments to the archives. 

I apologize for the spam delete-page-request. Cleaning the Pit stories to make it into a bigger story is a lot more work than I thought.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 06:47, 10 January 2016 (UTC)

Hi Platypus. Apologies for the error, thank you for reverting it. By the way, I'm loving your original work and I hope my additions are bringing the story back to life. Ronnie

I don't think you understand what I'm saying. I agree that standards are important to ensuring that this section of the site doesn't descend into chaos. I am just commenting that as a new writing user, I am potentially going to make this site better and stronger for all users. If you delivered the same corrections using a more inclusive tone, you would not threaten the precious resource of new content contributors. With no malice, --[[User:Sir|Sir]] 23:00, 17 December 2015 (PST)

Your welcoming attitude has been overwhelming.--[[User:Sir|Sir]] 16:45, 15 December 2015 (PST)

Hi you just deleted my post in rampage under just go to sleep until tomorrow I'm new to this and was just wondering why?

Yes ik about the fact I need catagories reason why its work in progress its my first project and first page and its just being pieced together if you would love to put in the marks then by all means please do I just wouldlike to finish the storyboard. Then look at the little details
Scincerely geoffreyatln

Hello platypus, I was wondering if you would be willing to look at and edit the pages that I have added to the story Your Best Friend's Younger Sister? Also, do you have any tips for a new writer? Bw92

Hi Platypus, thanks for the editing tip I'm new to this sort of thing I'll sort out the pages I've already created

Hello Platyus, I was wondering if you could restore War13's chapters for the [[The Humiliation of Katie]]. I am willing to patch them up (I understand its annoying when people don't take the time to
learn how the site's categories and pages work.) - [[User:Uman|Uman]] 13:50, 7 September 2015 (UTC)

Thanks, I have them categorized now, will complete the fixing later today. - [[User:Uman|Uman]] 16:25, 7 September 2015 (UTC)

Hello Platypus. This is Firestorm. I'm new to this and I appreciate your pointing out my categories failure. I will do my best to ensure that I add categories to all future edits. Thank you! [[User:Firestorm|Firestorm]]

Hi Platypus. I think it's great that you are keeping an eye on things and ensuring proper grammar and such. But honestly when the option is between a blank page or a page that's not quite perfect for your liking, well deleting the whole thing and leaving the page as a broken link doesn't really help anyone. If you wanted to fix up the issues, or wanted to replace it with something better that is fine. Perhaps there is an option to flag a page for cleanup later if you don't have time (or maybe someone else can do it). But deleting pages that are reasonable but not perfect in favor of absolutely nothing is not an improvement in my opinion. There are a lot of story lines on here that dead end and need finishing and not only does your practice make it very disappointing for readers to not be able to finish a story arc, but it also discourages editors from wanting to come back and help finish some story arcs. [[User:Regulus|Regulus]] 06:58, 26 July 2015 (UTC)

Thanks for the input! If there is anything else you would like me to do let me know. [[User:Oneoffire|Oneoffire]] 23:23, 21 July 2015 (UTC)

Hey Platypus, I am dwarftopia. I read your message and I thank you for informing me that it was a feature needed. I have managed to categorize every page on my new story. Thanks for the tip!

'''''dwarftopia''''' --[[User:Dwarftopia|Dwarftopia]] 07:16, 2 July 2015 (UTC)

Hello Platypus, I received your message. I read back over my contributions to your choose your own adventure and hopefully fixed most of the errors. If there is something I missed, please let me know. Thanks! <nowiki>~~~~</nowiki>

i swear i didn't know it affected everything i thought it on changed when i looked at it,i am sorry for the indecent

Sure, sure. That's why you're vandalizing page after page. If you're going to act like a 12-year-old then go play Call of Duty, kid. '''-[[User:BakaG|BakaG]] 00:51, 11 June 2015 (UTC)'''

 You can sign your messages for convenience by using four ~ (tilde) symbols like so: <nowiki>~~~~</nowiki>. Your name and the date will show up like this: [[User:BakaG|BakaG]] 16:30, 16 November 2014 (UTC) 

Ok thanks! So others can still see my content? [[User:Wytod300050|Wytod300050]] 17:02, 16 June 2015 (UTC)

Hey, I was just wondering why when I am signed out I can't see my contributions to a story? Can others still see them?? [[User:Wytod300050|Wytod300050]] 02:59, 15 June 2015 (UTC)

Thank you for your feedback. I was looking to leave more options for others but that will do [[User:Twjhh|Twjhh]] 17:15, 26 May 2015 (UTC)

Thanks for the feedback! Constructive criticism is always welcome. [[User:Marzipan92]] 22:12, 24 April 2015 (UTC)

Thank you for the heads up on the pages that I forgot to Categorize. [[User:Deathsknight|Deathsknight]] 14:28, 8 March 2015 (UTC)

Hey, is there a way to blank pages automatically, or to mass wipe a category? I'm trying to redo a story, so that would help out a lot. Cheers.
--[[User:Snowball|Snowball]] 18:16, 22 February 2015 (UTC)

That is a really good point. I'll do it manually then. Thanks. --[[User:Snowball|Snowball]] 08:34, 23 February 2015 (UTC)

Roger that. Sorry for my ignorance!-Lasagna

I appreciate your protectiveness of your source material, but try being more hospitable. No reason to delete things when the changes aren't more than link perspectives or minor punctuation problems. You clearly don't want to write all 64,000 pages that would be needed to finish and tie together Rampage, or any other of your stories. So stop impeding people who are helping add more content to the site by wholesale deleting everything anybody writes with 2 missed periods or a run-on sentence or two. Try leaving the message and see if I'll fix it first, at the very least.[[User:Makhai|Makhai]] 13:57, 12 December 2014 (UTC).

Hi there. I see you deleted my work on the story 'A Unique Arrangement'. It was understandable but i now know how to add options/categorize and i was wondering if you could get my deleted work back? I don't really want to have to write it all over again because of a couple of mistakes.
Cheers. [[User:Bammy|Bammy]] 00:40, 11 December 2014 (UTC) [[User:Bammy|Bammy]] 13:29, 11 December 2014 (UTC)

I wpuld like toapologize for the actions that led to the deletion of the page if it were mear grammer problem please repost the page (if possible) and allow me to make corrections. If there was a problem with how I handled the story please tell me so I can make corrections and better furture work. In any case please type back as to know that you received this message

My apologies,
Greg222James

Platypus...this is Bustyalix. You recently messaged me about including the STATUS BAR, but I have no idea how to go about doing so. Is there any way you and I may converse privately? I'd be more than happy to include my personal email address if necessary. Please get back to me on this matter. Thanks!

I'm still new at this, so I don't appreciate the attitude. Yes, it'll take me some time getting used to this HTML like format, yes I'll make some errors now and again, but no that does not mean you have the right to strike an attitude with me. I haven't really worked with a status bar before, and I honestly didn't even realize I had to do anything with it. I'm still learning, rather teaching myself this strange format, so don't come to me in a hard and demeaning tone because I didn't do something the way you wanted it, because I am fairly new at this.

Platypus, this is eatenbypie. I appreciate that you pay attention to things like categorization of pages, but deleting work two hours after being warned and threatening to ban a new user because I missed categorization on 6-8 pages is excessive, especially given that the site doesn't notify you about warnings. Simple oversight on my part, and obviously an oversight given that the rest of the story has proper categorization. -Edit Not bothering to recreate my work on this site.

Apologies for the tense problems. I've been proofreading my stuff since I'm used to writing in past tense, but some things slip through the cracks it seems. As for quirky titles... do you mean the link/page title thing? The first was due to a page collision. I suppose I could have changed the action prompt to something else, but I consider that a part of the story itself, and didn't want to change it due to a collision. Those are rare, I guess. The second was due to a plan where two mini-storylines would converge to the same page... but the actions to get there would be different. In this case I would prefer to use a third page title rather than favor one of the two storylines. The third time I did it... yeah, that was just for my amusement, and it would be a simple matter to limit usage of alternate titles and use them only when needed. So... yeah. [[User:Ironwill|Ironwill]] 02:46, 24 November 2014 (UTC)

Hi Platypus; I got your message. Sorry about the mistake. If it ever happens again let me know and I'll fix it right away. I'm new to the editing, but I really try hard to be professional. Like I said, If there's any more problems, message me and I'll fix them right away. I really enjoy your story and I hope we get along. Please message me back soon so I know you got my message. - ThatOneWritter

Got your message. Didn't see it at first since I posted one after another Sorry 'bout the mistake. Will try to pay more attention to it in the future.-Repoman.

dude what are some of your story's?-Jay The man

will you be adding more to rampage and smutty sex romp? Jay The man

Hey platypus, just a quick question. I have a guy adding to my story using very little detail and it doesn't even follow the story. As the original creator of the story do I have the right to delete these submissions in favor of more descriptive and frankly more linear additions that I plan on making?--[[User:Blackdragon25|Blackdragon25]] 21:47, 4 December 2014 (UTC)
I understand, i just wanne give it a try.
I dont even speak english.
but i want to compliment you for your story

Hello Platypus,
thank you for your helpful (if terse) comments. I was unsure whether the status bar was needed as the second posted page obviously was meant as an ending. [[User:Kyrael|Kyrael]] 19:57, 19 December 2014 (UTC)

Hi Platypus
i'm new and have tried to label like you requested but cant. can you help?
regards. wildside

Heya Platypus, I just wanted to ask you how high the writing standards are for this website, as I'm currently working on a CYOA story that I'd really love to post here... but sometimes my punctuation is lacking. I only ask because I've noticed a lot of people on this page complaining about you deleting their stories/pages. I would hate for that to happen to me.
Also I have another question, how easy is it to move a story to a different age category? - PurpleLemon

'''Sophie4C'''
Hi, I'm very sorry about catergories, yes I do know how to do them but I've been edit via phone, so it's not easy having to rewrite/re copy and paste each time I do forgot. I will check over the choices I have made and correct them if you haven't already. [[User:Sophie4C|Sophie4C]] 07:39, 11 July 2015 (UTC)

Hi, I got your message about punctuating dialogue, and I consulted the help page as you advised. Upon reviewing what I'd done however, I wasn't able to find anything that seemed out of place. Perhaps you could specify what I need to fix? --[[User:Jkeyes|Jkeyes]] 21:42, 25 September 2015 (UTC)

Hi. I apologize for the perceived inconsistency in Rampage and won't be doing it that way in the future. I just wanted to explain that it was done in order to prevent any chance for accidentally linking to other stories. Won't happen again. --[[User:Kantus|Kantus]] 17:25, 23 November 2015 (UTC)

== Delete a page ==

Hey Platypus, since you're the only one who can delete pages can you please delete [[EW: Enter the briefing room]] (since I merged it into [[EW: On a tour of the Harry Potter studios‎]]). Thank you -- [[User:NiceGuy|NiceGuy]] 18:55, 1 February 2015 (UTC)

Hello there, I was wondering if you could help me delete two pages of my own story please, for I can't seem to delete them myself. The reason why I want them deleted is because I feel like they are not good ideas for branches anymore, as I once thought they were. They are: [[Lucid dreams/Male/Dream about the shower brunette| Dream about the shower brunette]], [[Lucid dreams/Male/Grab the towels| Clean up mess]]

I thank you for your cooperation. And I will edit in some new and (hopefully) better branches next time. --[[User:Chaomaster|Chaomaster]] 19:50, 21 February 2015 (UTC)

______________________

Platypus, I'm a long time admirer but new contributor to the site, i wasn't sure how else to respond to your message so I wanted to say thank you for your feedback and I'll make the necessary corrections but I am learning still and I ask patience on that score. I do not understand what i am not doing with the categories please explain to me what it is that i am not doing - i have looked at the tutorial and compared scripting and i do not notice what i am not doing that they were doing on this story i am working on please go into further detail and i appologize for the inconvenience [[User:Phreakinsane|Phreakinsane]] 02:20, 2 March 2015 (UTC)

I'm trying to make a Cool Effect bro

== Hope You Don't Mind ==

I hope you don't mind; but I used the warn template, for Nigfin, since he left several pages uncategorised. If you do, I apologise for stepping on your toes. - [[User:Neminis|Neminis]] 19:27, 9 March 2015 (UTC)

Hey platypus, I have a user Maxpower altering my pages with out permission. I know he is just trying to help but he is altering the context or the story and despite my attempts to get him to stop polightly he continues to do it. I don't mind him adding to the story but he has been asked not to alter mine or other's contributions to the story. I would appreciate you having a word with him. Thanks --[[User:Blackdragon25|Blackdragon25]] 19:22, 16 March 2015 (UTC)

In my defence of the above accusations, I would like to bring Blackdragon's attention to the message that appears at the bottom of the edit window. Specifically, if you don't want your writing to be edited mercilessly, then don't submit here. The majority of my recent edits have centered around spelling, grammar, and readability, although I admit that here or there I add some embellishment or make changes to improve consistency and continuity. No one else on here seems to have a problem with that and realize that wikis are designed with collaboration in mind, and collaborative storytelling only makes for better more well rounded stories. In any case, I submit that if he considers his writing to be a sacred text that he changes his story type to private. But I'm definitely done with his whining. He will see no further contributions from me.
[[User:Maxpower|Maxpower]] 05:48, 17 March 2015 (UTC)

== Make it four ==
No pages link to [[Make it four]]. I've asked the original creator what's up. Please don't just delete this; there's a whole string of pages I would like to see (re?)attached to the story. Writing you to see if there perhaps was some kind of technical hiccup that I couldn't find? [[User:Anedwcan|Anedwcan]] 16:09, 18 March 2015 (UTC)

So, I just got that "second warning" of yours, but I have been titling every post since you gave me the first one. Can you please explain to me what it is I am not doing and possibly link me to the offending post? --[[User talk:Jemini|Jemini]]

Never mind, I figured it out. --[[User:Jemini | Jemini]]

== 2 Taboo 4 You Deletion Request ==
Could you please delete the following pages by [[User:Vitalis|Vitalis]] from my story [[2T4U|2 Taboo 4 You]]:
*[[2T4U/Go into mommy's room]]
*[[2T4U/Climb into bed with her]]
*[[2T4U/Snuggle up to her, rubbing your dick against her]]
*[[2T4U/Say "I need help mom"]]
*[[2T4U/Yes, mom suck my dick]]
He didn't adhere to the guidelines I laid out for the story, basically added nothing to the story, and has not fixed his passages after I asked him to. I feel that I have given him enough time to repair the damage. Thank you. --[[User:Elerneron|Elerneron]] 22:08, 21 April 2015 (UTC)

== Downfall ==

Sorry for creating so much work for you lately. I ran into unexpected intra-story crosslinking which is why I had to delete and recreate dozens of pages. I underestimated the complexity of branching. - [[User:Minnie May Hopkins|Minnie May Hopkins]] 22:22, 2 August 2015 (UTC)

== Main Page ==

Is there any way you can lock the Main Page? It really doesn't need to be edited often or ever, let alone by all the people that keep inadvertantly vandalizing it due to their apathy or stupidity. '''-[[User:BakaG|BakaG]] 01:22, 23 August 2015 (UTC)'''

== Punctuation ==

Sorry for my bad grammar. English is not my mother language. I will fix it next time. --[[User:Kaligula|Kaligula]] 16:34, 24 August 2015 (UTC)

== Intentional and Malicious Vandalism ==

This is to bring to your attention the fact that the user [[User:TheRealSlimShady|TheRealSlimShady]] has intentionally and maliciously replaced the page [[2T4U]] in response to my asking him not to change the basic features of the story. He apparently is not aware of the history feature. I have not undone his changes in case that would erase the evidence; as I am not certain if one would loose such with an undo. If you could please address this I would be most appreciative. --[[User:Elerneron|Elerneron]] 03:29, 14 September 2015 (UTC)

As a fellow contributor, I would like to thank you for handling the situation that [[User:Elerneron|Elerneron]] just brought up. Much like him, I also left it as is for the sake of having it handled properly. --[[User:Jemini|Jemini]]

== Delete review? ==

Thanks for removing my story. With it gone, should [[Review:_War_Pigs|this review]] of it also be deleted? [[User:AgentVincent|AgentVincent]] 03:03, 16 September 2015 (UTC)

== Pedo Stories ==
I tried to respond to the Main Talk page about this, but I was running into a Catch22 because of RobKohr's link. Where it captcha'ed me when I tried to post, then said I couldn't submit a post with a link in the same 20 minute period. Anyway, here's what I was trying to say:

You are totally wrong about written descriptions of underage sex being illegal. The fact that the material could be considered obscene, and thus illegal (in the US) would actually apply equally to any story with any extreme sexual activity. It can be applied to rape, bestiality, and just about ANY story that contains sexual descriptions. It is based on a remnant of a struck down child protection law that was unconstitutional, which is why it is sited for material directly related to children. The law is laughable, and you may have found one of the few cases where it was actually used, and the only one that I am aware of that actually made it through successfully. The user who pointed it out to you must be a free speech hating Nazi to bring up such an unlikely and remote senario as based on such a law. If this law were actually a problem, the largest sex story site on the internet '''www.asstr.org''' would not exist. No reasonable court would rule that you are guilty of transporting obscenity for something someone else wrote on your website. I'm not trying to tell you how to run your site, but if the "no pedo stories" rule stands; I will be leaving. Sincerely --[[User:Elerneron|Elerneron]] 00:56, 26 September 2015 (UTC)

I quoted your message on RobKohr's talk page. I hope you don't mind. He's the on waging a crusade on "pedo stories".

http://editthis.info/create_your_own_story/User_talk:RobKohr '''--[[User:BakaG|BakaG]] 07:08, 26 September 2015 (UTC)'''

I have found a new location for my stories. If you could put off editing or deleting them until I have time to move them I would very much appreciate it. --[[User:Elerneron|Elerneron]] 17:38, 2 October 2015 (UTC)

[[Primal Influence]], [[The Arcade]], and [[Generations]] may all be removed. --[[User:Elerneron|Elerneron]] 18:32, 2 October 2015 (UTC)

Actually [[The Humiliation of Katie]] may have some offending sections as well. I don't know how in depth we are planning on going here (age wise), but "[[Katie, who just hit puberty, is in her first year of high school at the age of 13]]" and "[[Katie, small and unknown to the town, enters a new elementary at the age of 6]]" would be offending sections. I didn't particularly want so young of ages to be used but I wasn't aware of the whole deletion possibility at the time. If necessary, I can raise the age of the 16 and 17 years on that story. But let me know if I should first before you delete them (the [[Katie, small and shy about her body, trying out for cheerleading at 16]] and [[Katie at 17, who deals with an exceptionally bad school year along with her family's attempts of getting closer together]] if you do decide to. - [[User:Uman|Uman]] on October 3, 2015

Are you aware of what age is being regarded as underage? I assume the American age of 18 is the default but I am just dodge checking. - [[User:Uman|Uman]] on October 3, 2015

Do you think it would be alright for me to advertise the new site I am at as an alternative for "pedo" stories after the disclaimer at the top of the All Adult Stories page? --[[User:Elerneron|Elerneron]] 18:07, 13 October 2015 (UTC)

== Platypus im Stuck idk how :/ ==

Platypus when i try to edit my edit it wont let me because its apparently not there any more :[ can you help me please?! 15:19, 1 November 2015 (UTC)

== Help imma Newbie[Kinda] ==

[[Platypus]] can you please help me edit:( .I dont understand why it wont let me edit my problems.Please help!
Sincerely,[[DATNUMBA1]] 15:27, 1 November 2015 (UTC)

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I don't usually like bitching and complaining, but this [[Katie Leaves the Locker Room After Five Minutes]] here was flagged for pedophilia somehow. Now what I don't understand here is that the character (Katie) isn't a kid and there is no sexual activity that occurs here. I know we want to get rid of pedophilia stuff but are we really going about it like this? - Uman, on 11/5/2015

Hey, I'm making a page called "Take it" that's not related to it's original story. Is that okay?

Thanks, just saying because there was a deletion notice from you.

Hey Platypus, I got your message, but do you know why bits of other peoples storys end up in mine? Like for example: Kill him. That was in red. And then I notice its in blue and it says "You kill Zach for not eating his food and eject him into hyperspace. He dies 32 seconds later." Do you know why bits of other peoples stuff is in my story? Also, when I go to make a story, like start one, not edit, I can`t type whatsoever. It doesnt let me. Or is it because I`m doing all of it on DSi Internet Browser. Thanks, [[AllyG]]. P.S RIP David Bowie 1947-2016 10/1/16

Hey Platypus, it`s [[AllyG]] again! :) So, the DSi Browser is literally the Google app, so it allows me to go on the internet through my DSi. Just search "DSi Internet Browser". But do you know why I cant make a story? I`m also kinda mad that you deleted my work. I only made my account today and that was my first edit and I wasn`t sure what I was to do when other people`s stuff popped up in my story.

Platypus, I`ve trekked my way across the digital landscape to find the pit of abandoned storys. As I rummage through the ranks, a shiny golden page catches my eye. "RAMPAGE" Is it ok if I like delete everything in the story to then start over?

== About Life of a 13 Year old ==

Do you think it'll be okay if I moved Life of a 13 year old to All the Fallen Stories? I have no idea who else to ask so I was wondering if you could give me permission or perhaps point me at the right person to ask. -Rikion

== Adding date and time at the end of a message automatically ==
As the title says it, would you happen to know a way to add the date and time information at the end of a message (such as this one) automatically, so we don't have to type them in? Thanks in advance, Platypus. --[[User:Darth Malcolm|Darth Malcolm]] 02:44, 05 January 2016 (UTC)

RAMPAGE

AllyG — Mon, 11 Jan 2016 13:24:40 GMT

AllyG: Blanked the page

User talk:Platypus

AllyG — Mon, 11 Jan 2016 13:00:35 GMT

AllyG: /* Help imma Newbie[Kinda] */

Since this page has become rather cluttered, I've moved old discussions to the archive pages below. Feel free to leave new messages here. I'll get back to you ASAP!

*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive1]]
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*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive3]]
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 >Add new comments below by clicking on the 'edit' button above. Do not add new comments to the archives. 

I apologize for the spam delete-page-request. Cleaning the Pit stories to make it into a bigger story is a lot more work than I thought.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 06:47, 10 January 2016 (UTC)

Hi Platypus. Apologies for the error, thank you for reverting it. By the way, I'm loving your original work and I hope my additions are bringing the story back to life. Ronnie

I don't think you understand what I'm saying. I agree that standards are important to ensuring that this section of the site doesn't descend into chaos. I am just commenting that as a new writing user, I am potentially going to make this site better and stronger for all users. If you delivered the same corrections using a more inclusive tone, you would not threaten the precious resource of new content contributors. With no malice, --[[User:Sir|Sir]] 23:00, 17 December 2015 (PST)

Your welcoming attitude has been overwhelming.--[[User:Sir|Sir]] 16:45, 15 December 2015 (PST)

Hi you just deleted my post in rampage under just go to sleep until tomorrow I'm new to this and was just wondering why?

Yes ik about the fact I need catagories reason why its work in progress its my first project and first page and its just being pieced together if you would love to put in the marks then by all means please do I just wouldlike to finish the storyboard. Then look at the little details
Scincerely geoffreyatln

Hello platypus, I was wondering if you would be willing to look at and edit the pages that I have added to the story Your Best Friend's Younger Sister? Also, do you have any tips for a new writer? Bw92

Hi Platypus, thanks for the editing tip I'm new to this sort of thing I'll sort out the pages I've already created

Hello Platyus, I was wondering if you could restore War13's chapters for the [[The Humiliation of Katie]]. I am willing to patch them up (I understand its annoying when people don't take the time to
learn how the site's categories and pages work.) - [[User:Uman|Uman]] 13:50, 7 September 2015 (UTC)

Thanks, I have them categorized now, will complete the fixing later today. - [[User:Uman|Uman]] 16:25, 7 September 2015 (UTC)

Hello Platypus. This is Firestorm. I'm new to this and I appreciate your pointing out my categories failure. I will do my best to ensure that I add categories to all future edits. Thank you! [[User:Firestorm|Firestorm]]

Hi Platypus. I think it's great that you are keeping an eye on things and ensuring proper grammar and such. But honestly when the option is between a blank page or a page that's not quite perfect for your liking, well deleting the whole thing and leaving the page as a broken link doesn't really help anyone. If you wanted to fix up the issues, or wanted to replace it with something better that is fine. Perhaps there is an option to flag a page for cleanup later if you don't have time (or maybe someone else can do it). But deleting pages that are reasonable but not perfect in favor of absolutely nothing is not an improvement in my opinion. There are a lot of story lines on here that dead end and need finishing and not only does your practice make it very disappointing for readers to not be able to finish a story arc, but it also discourages editors from wanting to come back and help finish some story arcs. [[User:Regulus|Regulus]] 06:58, 26 July 2015 (UTC)

Thanks for the input! If there is anything else you would like me to do let me know. [[User:Oneoffire|Oneoffire]] 23:23, 21 July 2015 (UTC)

Hey Platypus, I am dwarftopia. I read your message and I thank you for informing me that it was a feature needed. I have managed to categorize every page on my new story. Thanks for the tip!

'''''dwarftopia''''' --[[User:Dwarftopia|Dwarftopia]] 07:16, 2 July 2015 (UTC)

Hello Platypus, I received your message. I read back over my contributions to your choose your own adventure and hopefully fixed most of the errors. If there is something I missed, please let me know. Thanks! <nowiki>~~~~</nowiki>

i swear i didn't know it affected everything i thought it on changed when i looked at it,i am sorry for the indecent

Sure, sure. That's why you're vandalizing page after page. If you're going to act like a 12-year-old then go play Call of Duty, kid. '''-[[User:BakaG|BakaG]] 00:51, 11 June 2015 (UTC)'''

 You can sign your messages for convenience by using four ~ (tilde) symbols like so: <nowiki>~~~~</nowiki>. Your name and the date will show up like this: [[User:BakaG|BakaG]] 16:30, 16 November 2014 (UTC) 

Ok thanks! So others can still see my content? [[User:Wytod300050|Wytod300050]] 17:02, 16 June 2015 (UTC)

Hey, I was just wondering why when I am signed out I can't see my contributions to a story? Can others still see them?? [[User:Wytod300050|Wytod300050]] 02:59, 15 June 2015 (UTC)

Thank you for your feedback. I was looking to leave more options for others but that will do [[User:Twjhh|Twjhh]] 17:15, 26 May 2015 (UTC)

Thanks for the feedback! Constructive criticism is always welcome. [[User:Marzipan92]] 22:12, 24 April 2015 (UTC)

Thank you for the heads up on the pages that I forgot to Categorize. [[User:Deathsknight|Deathsknight]] 14:28, 8 March 2015 (UTC)

Hey, is there a way to blank pages automatically, or to mass wipe a category? I'm trying to redo a story, so that would help out a lot. Cheers.
--[[User:Snowball|Snowball]] 18:16, 22 February 2015 (UTC)

That is a really good point. I'll do it manually then. Thanks. --[[User:Snowball|Snowball]] 08:34, 23 February 2015 (UTC)

Roger that. Sorry for my ignorance!-Lasagna

I appreciate your protectiveness of your source material, but try being more hospitable. No reason to delete things when the changes aren't more than link perspectives or minor punctuation problems. You clearly don't want to write all 64,000 pages that would be needed to finish and tie together Rampage, or any other of your stories. So stop impeding people who are helping add more content to the site by wholesale deleting everything anybody writes with 2 missed periods or a run-on sentence or two. Try leaving the message and see if I'll fix it first, at the very least.[[User:Makhai|Makhai]] 13:57, 12 December 2014 (UTC).

Hi there. I see you deleted my work on the story 'A Unique Arrangement'. It was understandable but i now know how to add options/categorize and i was wondering if you could get my deleted work back? I don't really want to have to write it all over again because of a couple of mistakes.
Cheers. [[User:Bammy|Bammy]] 00:40, 11 December 2014 (UTC) [[User:Bammy|Bammy]] 13:29, 11 December 2014 (UTC)

I wpuld like toapologize for the actions that led to the deletion of the page if it were mear grammer problem please repost the page (if possible) and allow me to make corrections. If there was a problem with how I handled the story please tell me so I can make corrections and better furture work. In any case please type back as to know that you received this message

My apologies,
Greg222James

Platypus...this is Bustyalix. You recently messaged me about including the STATUS BAR, but I have no idea how to go about doing so. Is there any way you and I may converse privately? I'd be more than happy to include my personal email address if necessary. Please get back to me on this matter. Thanks!

I'm still new at this, so I don't appreciate the attitude. Yes, it'll take me some time getting used to this HTML like format, yes I'll make some errors now and again, but no that does not mean you have the right to strike an attitude with me. I haven't really worked with a status bar before, and I honestly didn't even realize I had to do anything with it. I'm still learning, rather teaching myself this strange format, so don't come to me in a hard and demeaning tone because I didn't do something the way you wanted it, because I am fairly new at this.

Platypus, this is eatenbypie. I appreciate that you pay attention to things like categorization of pages, but deleting work two hours after being warned and threatening to ban a new user because I missed categorization on 6-8 pages is excessive, especially given that the site doesn't notify you about warnings. Simple oversight on my part, and obviously an oversight given that the rest of the story has proper categorization. -Edit Not bothering to recreate my work on this site.

Apologies for the tense problems. I've been proofreading my stuff since I'm used to writing in past tense, but some things slip through the cracks it seems. As for quirky titles... do you mean the link/page title thing? The first was due to a page collision. I suppose I could have changed the action prompt to something else, but I consider that a part of the story itself, and didn't want to change it due to a collision. Those are rare, I guess. The second was due to a plan where two mini-storylines would converge to the same page... but the actions to get there would be different. In this case I would prefer to use a third page title rather than favor one of the two storylines. The third time I did it... yeah, that was just for my amusement, and it would be a simple matter to limit usage of alternate titles and use them only when needed. So... yeah. [[User:Ironwill|Ironwill]] 02:46, 24 November 2014 (UTC)

Hi Platypus; I got your message. Sorry about the mistake. If it ever happens again let me know and I'll fix it right away. I'm new to the editing, but I really try hard to be professional. Like I said, If there's any more problems, message me and I'll fix them right away. I really enjoy your story and I hope we get along. Please message me back soon so I know you got my message. - ThatOneWritter

Got your message. Didn't see it at first since I posted one after another Sorry 'bout the mistake. Will try to pay more attention to it in the future.-Repoman.

dude what are some of your story's?-Jay The man

will you be adding more to rampage and smutty sex romp? Jay The man

Hey platypus, just a quick question. I have a guy adding to my story using very little detail and it doesn't even follow the story. As the original creator of the story do I have the right to delete these submissions in favor of more descriptive and frankly more linear additions that I plan on making?--[[User:Blackdragon25|Blackdragon25]] 21:47, 4 December 2014 (UTC)
I understand, i just wanne give it a try.
I dont even speak english.
but i want to compliment you for your story

Hello Platypus,
thank you for your helpful (if terse) comments. I was unsure whether the status bar was needed as the second posted page obviously was meant as an ending. [[User:Kyrael|Kyrael]] 19:57, 19 December 2014 (UTC)

Hi Platypus
i'm new and have tried to label like you requested but cant. can you help?
regards. wildside

Heya Platypus, I just wanted to ask you how high the writing standards are for this website, as I'm currently working on a CYOA story that I'd really love to post here... but sometimes my punctuation is lacking. I only ask because I've noticed a lot of people on this page complaining about you deleting their stories/pages. I would hate for that to happen to me.
Also I have another question, how easy is it to move a story to a different age category? - PurpleLemon

'''Sophie4C'''
Hi, I'm very sorry about catergories, yes I do know how to do them but I've been edit via phone, so it's not easy having to rewrite/re copy and paste each time I do forgot. I will check over the choices I have made and correct them if you haven't already. [[User:Sophie4C|Sophie4C]] 07:39, 11 July 2015 (UTC)

Hi, I got your message about punctuating dialogue, and I consulted the help page as you advised. Upon reviewing what I'd done however, I wasn't able to find anything that seemed out of place. Perhaps you could specify what I need to fix? --[[User:Jkeyes|Jkeyes]] 21:42, 25 September 2015 (UTC)

Hi. I apologize for the perceived inconsistency in Rampage and won't be doing it that way in the future. I just wanted to explain that it was done in order to prevent any chance for accidentally linking to other stories. Won't happen again. --[[User:Kantus|Kantus]] 17:25, 23 November 2015 (UTC)

== Delete a page ==

Hey Platypus, since you're the only one who can delete pages can you please delete [[EW: Enter the briefing room]] (since I merged it into [[EW: On a tour of the Harry Potter studios‎]]). Thank you -- [[User:NiceGuy|NiceGuy]] 18:55, 1 February 2015 (UTC)

Hello there, I was wondering if you could help me delete two pages of my own story please, for I can't seem to delete them myself. The reason why I want them deleted is because I feel like they are not good ideas for branches anymore, as I once thought they were. They are: [[Lucid dreams/Male/Dream about the shower brunette| Dream about the shower brunette]], [[Lucid dreams/Male/Grab the towels| Clean up mess]]

I thank you for your cooperation. And I will edit in some new and (hopefully) better branches next time. --[[User:Chaomaster|Chaomaster]] 19:50, 21 February 2015 (UTC)

______________________

Platypus, I'm a long time admirer but new contributor to the site, i wasn't sure how else to respond to your message so I wanted to say thank you for your feedback and I'll make the necessary corrections but I am learning still and I ask patience on that score. I do not understand what i am not doing with the categories please explain to me what it is that i am not doing - i have looked at the tutorial and compared scripting and i do not notice what i am not doing that they were doing on this story i am working on please go into further detail and i appologize for the inconvenience [[User:Phreakinsane|Phreakinsane]] 02:20, 2 March 2015 (UTC)

I'm trying to make a Cool Effect bro

== Hope You Don't Mind ==

I hope you don't mind; but I used the warn template, for Nigfin, since he left several pages uncategorised. If you do, I apologise for stepping on your toes. - [[User:Neminis|Neminis]] 19:27, 9 March 2015 (UTC)

Hey platypus, I have a user Maxpower altering my pages with out permission. I know he is just trying to help but he is altering the context or the story and despite my attempts to get him to stop polightly he continues to do it. I don't mind him adding to the story but he has been asked not to alter mine or other's contributions to the story. I would appreciate you having a word with him. Thanks --[[User:Blackdragon25|Blackdragon25]] 19:22, 16 March 2015 (UTC)

In my defence of the above accusations, I would like to bring Blackdragon's attention to the message that appears at the bottom of the edit window. Specifically, if you don't want your writing to be edited mercilessly, then don't submit here. The majority of my recent edits have centered around spelling, grammar, and readability, although I admit that here or there I add some embellishment or make changes to improve consistency and continuity. No one else on here seems to have a problem with that and realize that wikis are designed with collaboration in mind, and collaborative storytelling only makes for better more well rounded stories. In any case, I submit that if he considers his writing to be a sacred text that he changes his story type to private. But I'm definitely done with his whining. He will see no further contributions from me.
[[User:Maxpower|Maxpower]] 05:48, 17 March 2015 (UTC)

== Make it four ==
No pages link to [[Make it four]]. I've asked the original creator what's up. Please don't just delete this; there's a whole string of pages I would like to see (re?)attached to the story. Writing you to see if there perhaps was some kind of technical hiccup that I couldn't find? [[User:Anedwcan|Anedwcan]] 16:09, 18 March 2015 (UTC)

So, I just got that "second warning" of yours, but I have been titling every post since you gave me the first one. Can you please explain to me what it is I am not doing and possibly link me to the offending post? --[[User talk:Jemini|Jemini]]

Never mind, I figured it out. --[[User:Jemini | Jemini]]

== 2 Taboo 4 You Deletion Request ==
Could you please delete the following pages by [[User:Vitalis|Vitalis]] from my story [[2T4U|2 Taboo 4 You]]:
*[[2T4U/Go into mommy's room]]
*[[2T4U/Climb into bed with her]]
*[[2T4U/Snuggle up to her, rubbing your dick against her]]
*[[2T4U/Say "I need help mom"]]
*[[2T4U/Yes, mom suck my dick]]
He didn't adhere to the guidelines I laid out for the story, basically added nothing to the story, and has not fixed his passages after I asked him to. I feel that I have given him enough time to repair the damage. Thank you. --[[User:Elerneron|Elerneron]] 22:08, 21 April 2015 (UTC)

== Downfall ==

Sorry for creating so much work for you lately. I ran into unexpected intra-story crosslinking which is why I had to delete and recreate dozens of pages. I underestimated the complexity of branching. - [[User:Minnie May Hopkins|Minnie May Hopkins]] 22:22, 2 August 2015 (UTC)

== Main Page ==

Is there any way you can lock the Main Page? It really doesn't need to be edited often or ever, let alone by all the people that keep inadvertantly vandalizing it due to their apathy or stupidity. '''-[[User:BakaG|BakaG]] 01:22, 23 August 2015 (UTC)'''

== Punctuation ==

Sorry for my bad grammar. English is not my mother language. I will fix it next time. --[[User:Kaligula|Kaligula]] 16:34, 24 August 2015 (UTC)

== Intentional and Malicious Vandalism ==

This is to bring to your attention the fact that the user [[User:TheRealSlimShady|TheRealSlimShady]] has intentionally and maliciously replaced the page [[2T4U]] in response to my asking him not to change the basic features of the story. He apparently is not aware of the history feature. I have not undone his changes in case that would erase the evidence; as I am not certain if one would loose such with an undo. If you could please address this I would be most appreciative. --[[User:Elerneron|Elerneron]] 03:29, 14 September 2015 (UTC)

As a fellow contributor, I would like to thank you for handling the situation that [[User:Elerneron|Elerneron]] just brought up. Much like him, I also left it as is for the sake of having it handled properly. --[[User:Jemini|Jemini]]

== Delete review? ==

Thanks for removing my story. With it gone, should [[Review:_War_Pigs|this review]] of it also be deleted? [[User:AgentVincent|AgentVincent]] 03:03, 16 September 2015 (UTC)

== Pedo Stories ==
I tried to respond to the Main Talk page about this, but I was running into a Catch22 because of RobKohr's link. Where it captcha'ed me when I tried to post, then said I couldn't submit a post with a link in the same 20 minute period. Anyway, here's what I was trying to say:

You are totally wrong about written descriptions of underage sex being illegal. The fact that the material could be considered obscene, and thus illegal (in the US) would actually apply equally to any story with any extreme sexual activity. It can be applied to rape, bestiality, and just about ANY story that contains sexual descriptions. It is based on a remnant of a struck down child protection law that was unconstitutional, which is why it is sited for material directly related to children. The law is laughable, and you may have found one of the few cases where it was actually used, and the only one that I am aware of that actually made it through successfully. The user who pointed it out to you must be a free speech hating Nazi to bring up such an unlikely and remote senario as based on such a law. If this law were actually a problem, the largest sex story site on the internet '''www.asstr.org''' would not exist. No reasonable court would rule that you are guilty of transporting obscenity for something someone else wrote on your website. I'm not trying to tell you how to run your site, but if the "no pedo stories" rule stands; I will be leaving. Sincerely --[[User:Elerneron|Elerneron]] 00:56, 26 September 2015 (UTC)

I quoted your message on RobKohr's talk page. I hope you don't mind. He's the on waging a crusade on "pedo stories".

http://editthis.info/create_your_own_story/User_talk:RobKohr '''--[[User:BakaG|BakaG]] 07:08, 26 September 2015 (UTC)'''

I have found a new location for my stories. If you could put off editing or deleting them until I have time to move them I would very much appreciate it. --[[User:Elerneron|Elerneron]] 17:38, 2 October 2015 (UTC)

[[Primal Influence]], [[The Arcade]], and [[Generations]] may all be removed. --[[User:Elerneron|Elerneron]] 18:32, 2 October 2015 (UTC)

Actually [[The Humiliation of Katie]] may have some offending sections as well. I don't know how in depth we are planning on going here (age wise), but "[[Katie, who just hit puberty, is in her first year of high school at the age of 13]]" and "[[Katie, small and unknown to the town, enters a new elementary at the age of 6]]" would be offending sections. I didn't particularly want so young of ages to be used but I wasn't aware of the whole deletion possibility at the time. If necessary, I can raise the age of the 16 and 17 years on that story. But let me know if I should first before you delete them (the [[Katie, small and shy about her body, trying out for cheerleading at 16]] and [[Katie at 17, who deals with an exceptionally bad school year along with her family's attempts of getting closer together]] if you do decide to. - [[User:Uman|Uman]] on October 3, 2015

Are you aware of what age is being regarded as underage? I assume the American age of 18 is the default but I am just dodge checking. - [[User:Uman|Uman]] on October 3, 2015

Do you think it would be alright for me to advertise the new site I am at as an alternative for "pedo" stories after the disclaimer at the top of the All Adult Stories page? --[[User:Elerneron|Elerneron]] 18:07, 13 October 2015 (UTC)

== Platypus im Stuck idk how :/ ==

Platypus when i try to edit my edit it wont let me because its apparently not there any more :[ can you help me please?! 15:19, 1 November 2015 (UTC)

== Help imma Newbie[Kinda] ==

[[Platypus]] can you please help me edit:( .I dont understand why it wont let me edit my problems.Please help!
Sincerely,[[DATNUMBA1]] 15:27, 1 November 2015 (UTC)

----

I don't usually like bitching and complaining, but this [[Katie Leaves the Locker Room After Five Minutes]] here was flagged for pedophilia somehow. Now what I don't understand here is that the character (Katie) isn't a kid and there is no sexual activity that occurs here. I know we want to get rid of pedophilia stuff but are we really going about it like this? - Uman, on 11/5/2015

Hey, I'm making a page called "Take it" that's not related to it's original story. Is that okay?

Thanks, just saying because there was a deletion notice from you.

Hey Platypus, I got your message, but do you know why bits of other peoples storys end up in mine? Like for example: Kill him. That was in red. And then I notice its in blue and it says "You kill Zach for not eating his food and eject him into hyperspace. He dies 32 seconds later." Do you know why bits of other peoples stuff is in my story? Also, when I go to make a story, like start one, not edit, I can`t type whatsoever. It doesnt let me. Or is it because I`m doing all of it on DSi Internet Browser. Thanks, [[AllyG]]. P.S RIP David Bowie 1947-2016 10/1/16

Hey Platypus, it`s [[AllyG]] again! :) So, the DSi Browser is literally the Google app, so it allows me to go on the internet through my DSi. Just search "DSi Internet Browser". But do you know why I cant make a story? I`m also kinda mad that you deleted my work. I only made my account today and that was my first edit and I wasn`t sure what I was to do when other people`s stuff popped up in my story.

== About Life of a 13 Year old ==

Do you think it'll be okay if I moved Life of a 13 year old to All the Fallen Stories? I have no idea who else to ask so I was wondering if you could give me permission or perhaps point me at the right person to ask. -Rikion

== Adding date and time at the end of a message automatically ==
As the title says it, would you happen to know a way to add the date and time information at the end of a message (such as this one) automatically, so we don't have to type them in? Thanks in advance, Platypus. --[[User:Darth Malcolm|Darth Malcolm]] 02:44, 05 January 2016 (UTC)

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AllyG — Mon, 11 Jan 2016 12:27:41 GMT

AllyG: /* Help imma Newbie[Kinda] */

Since this page has become rather cluttered, I've moved old discussions to the archive pages below. Feel free to leave new messages here. I'll get back to you ASAP!

*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive1]]
*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive2]]
*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive3]]
*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive4]]

 >Add new comments below by clicking on the 'edit' button above. Do not add new comments to the archives. 

I apologize for the spam delete-page-request. Cleaning the Pit stories to make it into a bigger story is a lot more work than I thought.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 06:47, 10 January 2016 (UTC)

Hi Platypus. Apologies for the error, thank you for reverting it. By the way, I'm loving your original work and I hope my additions are bringing the story back to life. Ronnie

I don't think you understand what I'm saying. I agree that standards are important to ensuring that this section of the site doesn't descend into chaos. I am just commenting that as a new writing user, I am potentially going to make this site better and stronger for all users. If you delivered the same corrections using a more inclusive tone, you would not threaten the precious resource of new content contributors. With no malice, --[[User:Sir|Sir]] 23:00, 17 December 2015 (PST)

Your welcoming attitude has been overwhelming.--[[User:Sir|Sir]] 16:45, 15 December 2015 (PST)

Hi you just deleted my post in rampage under just go to sleep until tomorrow I'm new to this and was just wondering why?

Yes ik about the fact I need catagories reason why its work in progress its my first project and first page and its just being pieced together if you would love to put in the marks then by all means please do I just wouldlike to finish the storyboard. Then look at the little details
Scincerely geoffreyatln

Hello platypus, I was wondering if you would be willing to look at and edit the pages that I have added to the story Your Best Friend's Younger Sister? Also, do you have any tips for a new writer? Bw92

Hi Platypus, thanks for the editing tip I'm new to this sort of thing I'll sort out the pages I've already created

Hello Platyus, I was wondering if you could restore War13's chapters for the [[The Humiliation of Katie]]. I am willing to patch them up (I understand its annoying when people don't take the time to
learn how the site's categories and pages work.) - [[User:Uman|Uman]] 13:50, 7 September 2015 (UTC)

Thanks, I have them categorized now, will complete the fixing later today. - [[User:Uman|Uman]] 16:25, 7 September 2015 (UTC)

Hello Platypus. This is Firestorm. I'm new to this and I appreciate your pointing out my categories failure. I will do my best to ensure that I add categories to all future edits. Thank you! [[User:Firestorm|Firestorm]]

Hi Platypus. I think it's great that you are keeping an eye on things and ensuring proper grammar and such. But honestly when the option is between a blank page or a page that's not quite perfect for your liking, well deleting the whole thing and leaving the page as a broken link doesn't really help anyone. If you wanted to fix up the issues, or wanted to replace it with something better that is fine. Perhaps there is an option to flag a page for cleanup later if you don't have time (or maybe someone else can do it). But deleting pages that are reasonable but not perfect in favor of absolutely nothing is not an improvement in my opinion. There are a lot of story lines on here that dead end and need finishing and not only does your practice make it very disappointing for readers to not be able to finish a story arc, but it also discourages editors from wanting to come back and help finish some story arcs. [[User:Regulus|Regulus]] 06:58, 26 July 2015 (UTC)

Thanks for the input! If there is anything else you would like me to do let me know. [[User:Oneoffire|Oneoffire]] 23:23, 21 July 2015 (UTC)

Hey Platypus, I am dwarftopia. I read your message and I thank you for informing me that it was a feature needed. I have managed to categorize every page on my new story. Thanks for the tip!

'''''dwarftopia''''' --[[User:Dwarftopia|Dwarftopia]] 07:16, 2 July 2015 (UTC)

Hello Platypus, I received your message. I read back over my contributions to your choose your own adventure and hopefully fixed most of the errors. If there is something I missed, please let me know. Thanks! <nowiki>~~~~</nowiki>

i swear i didn't know it affected everything i thought it on changed when i looked at it,i am sorry for the indecent

Sure, sure. That's why you're vandalizing page after page. If you're going to act like a 12-year-old then go play Call of Duty, kid. '''-[[User:BakaG|BakaG]] 00:51, 11 June 2015 (UTC)'''

 You can sign your messages for convenience by using four ~ (tilde) symbols like so: <nowiki>~~~~</nowiki>. Your name and the date will show up like this: [[User:BakaG|BakaG]] 16:30, 16 November 2014 (UTC) 

Ok thanks! So others can still see my content? [[User:Wytod300050|Wytod300050]] 17:02, 16 June 2015 (UTC)

Hey, I was just wondering why when I am signed out I can't see my contributions to a story? Can others still see them?? [[User:Wytod300050|Wytod300050]] 02:59, 15 June 2015 (UTC)

Thank you for your feedback. I was looking to leave more options for others but that will do [[User:Twjhh|Twjhh]] 17:15, 26 May 2015 (UTC)

Thanks for the feedback! Constructive criticism is always welcome. [[User:Marzipan92]] 22:12, 24 April 2015 (UTC)

Thank you for the heads up on the pages that I forgot to Categorize. [[User:Deathsknight|Deathsknight]] 14:28, 8 March 2015 (UTC)

Hey, is there a way to blank pages automatically, or to mass wipe a category? I'm trying to redo a story, so that would help out a lot. Cheers.
--[[User:Snowball|Snowball]] 18:16, 22 February 2015 (UTC)

That is a really good point. I'll do it manually then. Thanks. --[[User:Snowball|Snowball]] 08:34, 23 February 2015 (UTC)

Roger that. Sorry for my ignorance!-Lasagna

I appreciate your protectiveness of your source material, but try being more hospitable. No reason to delete things when the changes aren't more than link perspectives or minor punctuation problems. You clearly don't want to write all 64,000 pages that would be needed to finish and tie together Rampage, or any other of your stories. So stop impeding people who are helping add more content to the site by wholesale deleting everything anybody writes with 2 missed periods or a run-on sentence or two. Try leaving the message and see if I'll fix it first, at the very least.[[User:Makhai|Makhai]] 13:57, 12 December 2014 (UTC).

Hi there. I see you deleted my work on the story 'A Unique Arrangement'. It was understandable but i now know how to add options/categorize and i was wondering if you could get my deleted work back? I don't really want to have to write it all over again because of a couple of mistakes.
Cheers. [[User:Bammy|Bammy]] 00:40, 11 December 2014 (UTC) [[User:Bammy|Bammy]] 13:29, 11 December 2014 (UTC)

I wpuld like toapologize for the actions that led to the deletion of the page if it were mear grammer problem please repost the page (if possible) and allow me to make corrections. If there was a problem with how I handled the story please tell me so I can make corrections and better furture work. In any case please type back as to know that you received this message

My apologies,
Greg222James

Platypus...this is Bustyalix. You recently messaged me about including the STATUS BAR, but I have no idea how to go about doing so. Is there any way you and I may converse privately? I'd be more than happy to include my personal email address if necessary. Please get back to me on this matter. Thanks!

I'm still new at this, so I don't appreciate the attitude. Yes, it'll take me some time getting used to this HTML like format, yes I'll make some errors now and again, but no that does not mean you have the right to strike an attitude with me. I haven't really worked with a status bar before, and I honestly didn't even realize I had to do anything with it. I'm still learning, rather teaching myself this strange format, so don't come to me in a hard and demeaning tone because I didn't do something the way you wanted it, because I am fairly new at this.

Platypus, this is eatenbypie. I appreciate that you pay attention to things like categorization of pages, but deleting work two hours after being warned and threatening to ban a new user because I missed categorization on 6-8 pages is excessive, especially given that the site doesn't notify you about warnings. Simple oversight on my part, and obviously an oversight given that the rest of the story has proper categorization. -Edit Not bothering to recreate my work on this site.

Apologies for the tense problems. I've been proofreading my stuff since I'm used to writing in past tense, but some things slip through the cracks it seems. As for quirky titles... do you mean the link/page title thing? The first was due to a page collision. I suppose I could have changed the action prompt to something else, but I consider that a part of the story itself, and didn't want to change it due to a collision. Those are rare, I guess. The second was due to a plan where two mini-storylines would converge to the same page... but the actions to get there would be different. In this case I would prefer to use a third page title rather than favor one of the two storylines. The third time I did it... yeah, that was just for my amusement, and it would be a simple matter to limit usage of alternate titles and use them only when needed. So... yeah. [[User:Ironwill|Ironwill]] 02:46, 24 November 2014 (UTC)

Hi Platypus; I got your message. Sorry about the mistake. If it ever happens again let me know and I'll fix it right away. I'm new to the editing, but I really try hard to be professional. Like I said, If there's any more problems, message me and I'll fix them right away. I really enjoy your story and I hope we get along. Please message me back soon so I know you got my message. - ThatOneWritter

Got your message. Didn't see it at first since I posted one after another Sorry 'bout the mistake. Will try to pay more attention to it in the future.-Repoman.

dude what are some of your story's?-Jay The man

will you be adding more to rampage and smutty sex romp? Jay The man

Hey platypus, just a quick question. I have a guy adding to my story using very little detail and it doesn't even follow the story. As the original creator of the story do I have the right to delete these submissions in favor of more descriptive and frankly more linear additions that I plan on making?--[[User:Blackdragon25|Blackdragon25]] 21:47, 4 December 2014 (UTC)
I understand, i just wanne give it a try.
I dont even speak english.
but i want to compliment you for your story

Hello Platypus,
thank you for your helpful (if terse) comments. I was unsure whether the status bar was needed as the second posted page obviously was meant as an ending. [[User:Kyrael|Kyrael]] 19:57, 19 December 2014 (UTC)

Hi Platypus
i'm new and have tried to label like you requested but cant. can you help?
regards. wildside

Heya Platypus, I just wanted to ask you how high the writing standards are for this website, as I'm currently working on a CYOA story that I'd really love to post here... but sometimes my punctuation is lacking. I only ask because I've noticed a lot of people on this page complaining about you deleting their stories/pages. I would hate for that to happen to me.
Also I have another question, how easy is it to move a story to a different age category? - PurpleLemon

'''Sophie4C'''
Hi, I'm very sorry about catergories, yes I do know how to do them but I've been edit via phone, so it's not easy having to rewrite/re copy and paste each time I do forgot. I will check over the choices I have made and correct them if you haven't already. [[User:Sophie4C|Sophie4C]] 07:39, 11 July 2015 (UTC)

Hi, I got your message about punctuating dialogue, and I consulted the help page as you advised. Upon reviewing what I'd done however, I wasn't able to find anything that seemed out of place. Perhaps you could specify what I need to fix? --[[User:Jkeyes|Jkeyes]] 21:42, 25 September 2015 (UTC)

Hi. I apologize for the perceived inconsistency in Rampage and won't be doing it that way in the future. I just wanted to explain that it was done in order to prevent any chance for accidentally linking to other stories. Won't happen again. --[[User:Kantus|Kantus]] 17:25, 23 November 2015 (UTC)

== Delete a page ==

Hey Platypus, since you're the only one who can delete pages can you please delete [[EW: Enter the briefing room]] (since I merged it into [[EW: On a tour of the Harry Potter studios‎]]). Thank you -- [[User:NiceGuy|NiceGuy]] 18:55, 1 February 2015 (UTC)

Hello there, I was wondering if you could help me delete two pages of my own story please, for I can't seem to delete them myself. The reason why I want them deleted is because I feel like they are not good ideas for branches anymore, as I once thought they were. They are: [[Lucid dreams/Male/Dream about the shower brunette| Dream about the shower brunette]], [[Lucid dreams/Male/Grab the towels| Clean up mess]]

I thank you for your cooperation. And I will edit in some new and (hopefully) better branches next time. --[[User:Chaomaster|Chaomaster]] 19:50, 21 February 2015 (UTC)

______________________

Platypus, I'm a long time admirer but new contributor to the site, i wasn't sure how else to respond to your message so I wanted to say thank you for your feedback and I'll make the necessary corrections but I am learning still and I ask patience on that score. I do not understand what i am not doing with the categories please explain to me what it is that i am not doing - i have looked at the tutorial and compared scripting and i do not notice what i am not doing that they were doing on this story i am working on please go into further detail and i appologize for the inconvenience [[User:Phreakinsane|Phreakinsane]] 02:20, 2 March 2015 (UTC)

I'm trying to make a Cool Effect bro

== Hope You Don't Mind ==

I hope you don't mind; but I used the warn template, for Nigfin, since he left several pages uncategorised. If you do, I apologise for stepping on your toes. - [[User:Neminis|Neminis]] 19:27, 9 March 2015 (UTC)

Hey platypus, I have a user Maxpower altering my pages with out permission. I know he is just trying to help but he is altering the context or the story and despite my attempts to get him to stop polightly he continues to do it. I don't mind him adding to the story but he has been asked not to alter mine or other's contributions to the story. I would appreciate you having a word with him. Thanks --[[User:Blackdragon25|Blackdragon25]] 19:22, 16 March 2015 (UTC)

In my defence of the above accusations, I would like to bring Blackdragon's attention to the message that appears at the bottom of the edit window. Specifically, if you don't want your writing to be edited mercilessly, then don't submit here. The majority of my recent edits have centered around spelling, grammar, and readability, although I admit that here or there I add some embellishment or make changes to improve consistency and continuity. No one else on here seems to have a problem with that and realize that wikis are designed with collaboration in mind, and collaborative storytelling only makes for better more well rounded stories. In any case, I submit that if he considers his writing to be a sacred text that he changes his story type to private. But I'm definitely done with his whining. He will see no further contributions from me.
[[User:Maxpower|Maxpower]] 05:48, 17 March 2015 (UTC)

== Make it four ==
No pages link to [[Make it four]]. I've asked the original creator what's up. Please don't just delete this; there's a whole string of pages I would like to see (re?)attached to the story. Writing you to see if there perhaps was some kind of technical hiccup that I couldn't find? [[User:Anedwcan|Anedwcan]] 16:09, 18 March 2015 (UTC)

So, I just got that "second warning" of yours, but I have been titling every post since you gave me the first one. Can you please explain to me what it is I am not doing and possibly link me to the offending post? --[[User talk:Jemini|Jemini]]

Never mind, I figured it out. --[[User:Jemini | Jemini]]

== 2 Taboo 4 You Deletion Request ==
Could you please delete the following pages by [[User:Vitalis|Vitalis]] from my story [[2T4U|2 Taboo 4 You]]:
*[[2T4U/Go into mommy's room]]
*[[2T4U/Climb into bed with her]]
*[[2T4U/Snuggle up to her, rubbing your dick against her]]
*[[2T4U/Say "I need help mom"]]
*[[2T4U/Yes, mom suck my dick]]
He didn't adhere to the guidelines I laid out for the story, basically added nothing to the story, and has not fixed his passages after I asked him to. I feel that I have given him enough time to repair the damage. Thank you. --[[User:Elerneron|Elerneron]] 22:08, 21 April 2015 (UTC)

== Downfall ==

Sorry for creating so much work for you lately. I ran into unexpected intra-story crosslinking which is why I had to delete and recreate dozens of pages. I underestimated the complexity of branching. - [[User:Minnie May Hopkins|Minnie May Hopkins]] 22:22, 2 August 2015 (UTC)

== Main Page ==

Is there any way you can lock the Main Page? It really doesn't need to be edited often or ever, let alone by all the people that keep inadvertantly vandalizing it due to their apathy or stupidity. '''-[[User:BakaG|BakaG]] 01:22, 23 August 2015 (UTC)'''

== Punctuation ==

Sorry for my bad grammar. English is not my mother language. I will fix it next time. --[[User:Kaligula|Kaligula]] 16:34, 24 August 2015 (UTC)

== Intentional and Malicious Vandalism ==

This is to bring to your attention the fact that the user [[User:TheRealSlimShady|TheRealSlimShady]] has intentionally and maliciously replaced the page [[2T4U]] in response to my asking him not to change the basic features of the story. He apparently is not aware of the history feature. I have not undone his changes in case that would erase the evidence; as I am not certain if one would loose such with an undo. If you could please address this I would be most appreciative. --[[User:Elerneron|Elerneron]] 03:29, 14 September 2015 (UTC)

As a fellow contributor, I would like to thank you for handling the situation that [[User:Elerneron|Elerneron]] just brought up. Much like him, I also left it as is for the sake of having it handled properly. --[[User:Jemini|Jemini]]

== Delete review? ==

Thanks for removing my story. With it gone, should [[Review:_War_Pigs|this review]] of it also be deleted? [[User:AgentVincent|AgentVincent]] 03:03, 16 September 2015 (UTC)

== Pedo Stories ==
I tried to respond to the Main Talk page about this, but I was running into a Catch22 because of RobKohr's link. Where it captcha'ed me when I tried to post, then said I couldn't submit a post with a link in the same 20 minute period. Anyway, here's what I was trying to say:

You are totally wrong about written descriptions of underage sex being illegal. The fact that the material could be considered obscene, and thus illegal (in the US) would actually apply equally to any story with any extreme sexual activity. It can be applied to rape, bestiality, and just about ANY story that contains sexual descriptions. It is based on a remnant of a struck down child protection law that was unconstitutional, which is why it is sited for material directly related to children. The law is laughable, and you may have found one of the few cases where it was actually used, and the only one that I am aware of that actually made it through successfully. The user who pointed it out to you must be a free speech hating Nazi to bring up such an unlikely and remote senario as based on such a law. If this law were actually a problem, the largest sex story site on the internet '''www.asstr.org''' would not exist. No reasonable court would rule that you are guilty of transporting obscenity for something someone else wrote on your website. I'm not trying to tell you how to run your site, but if the "no pedo stories" rule stands; I will be leaving. Sincerely --[[User:Elerneron|Elerneron]] 00:56, 26 September 2015 (UTC)

I quoted your message on RobKohr's talk page. I hope you don't mind. He's the on waging a crusade on "pedo stories".

http://editthis.info/create_your_own_story/User_talk:RobKohr '''--[[User:BakaG|BakaG]] 07:08, 26 September 2015 (UTC)'''

I have found a new location for my stories. If you could put off editing or deleting them until I have time to move them I would very much appreciate it. --[[User:Elerneron|Elerneron]] 17:38, 2 October 2015 (UTC)

[[Primal Influence]], [[The Arcade]], and [[Generations]] may all be removed. --[[User:Elerneron|Elerneron]] 18:32, 2 October 2015 (UTC)

Actually [[The Humiliation of Katie]] may have some offending sections as well. I don't know how in depth we are planning on going here (age wise), but "[[Katie, who just hit puberty, is in her first year of high school at the age of 13]]" and "[[Katie, small and unknown to the town, enters a new elementary at the age of 6]]" would be offending sections. I didn't particularly want so young of ages to be used but I wasn't aware of the whole deletion possibility at the time. If necessary, I can raise the age of the 16 and 17 years on that story. But let me know if I should first before you delete them (the [[Katie, small and shy about her body, trying out for cheerleading at 16]] and [[Katie at 17, who deals with an exceptionally bad school year along with her family's attempts of getting closer together]] if you do decide to. - [[User:Uman|Uman]] on October 3, 2015

Are you aware of what age is being regarded as underage? I assume the American age of 18 is the default but I am just dodge checking. - [[User:Uman|Uman]] on October 3, 2015

Do you think it would be alright for me to advertise the new site I am at as an alternative for "pedo" stories after the disclaimer at the top of the All Adult Stories page? --[[User:Elerneron|Elerneron]] 18:07, 13 October 2015 (UTC)

== Platypus im Stuck idk how :/ ==

Platypus when i try to edit my edit it wont let me because its apparently not there any more :[ can you help me please?! 15:19, 1 November 2015 (UTC)

== Help imma Newbie[Kinda] ==

[[Platypus]] can you please help me edit:( .I dont understand why it wont let me edit my problems.Please help!
Sincerely,[[DATNUMBA1]] 15:27, 1 November 2015 (UTC)

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I don't usually like bitching and complaining, but this [[Katie Leaves the Locker Room After Five Minutes]] here was flagged for pedophilia somehow. Now what I don't understand here is that the character (Katie) isn't a kid and there is no sexual activity that occurs here. I know we want to get rid of pedophilia stuff but are we really going about it like this? - Uman, on 11/5/2015

Hey, I'm making a page called "Take it" that's not related to it's original story. Is that okay?

Thanks, just saying because there was a deletion notice from you.

Hey Platypus, I got your message, but do you know why bits of other peoples storys end up in mine? Like for example: Kill him. That was in red. And then I notice its in blue and it says "You kill Zach for not eating his food and eject him into hyperspace. He dies 32 seconds later." Do you know why bits of other peoples stuff is in my story? Also, when I go to make a story, like start one, not edit, I can`t type whatsoever. It doesnt let me. Or is it because I`m doing all of it on DSi Internet Browser. Thanks, [[AllyG]]. P.S RIP David Bowie 1947-2016 10/1/16

== About Life of a 13 Year old ==

Do you think it'll be okay if I moved Life of a 13 year old to All the Fallen Stories? I have no idea who else to ask so I was wondering if you could give me permission or perhaps point me at the right person to ask. -Rikion

== Adding date and time at the end of a message automatically ==
As the title says it, would you happen to know a way to add the date and time information at the end of a message (such as this one) automatically, so we don't have to type them in? Thanks in advance, Platypus. --[[User:Darth Malcolm|Darth Malcolm]] 02:44, 05 January 2016 (UTC)

You

AllyG — Mon, 11 Jan 2016 06:19:33 GMT

AllyG: Blanked the page

Sure

AllyG — Mon, 11 Jan 2016 06:16:46 GMT

AllyG:

You get up, get your gear, and walk with him. The bell rings for lunchtime, and, if posessed, everyone stumbles out of class silently, and forms a long line. It`s like a conveyor belt of humans. Then it happens. Someone looks at you and then whispers to her friends. You recognise who it is: One of the girls in the gang of bullies you spoke to before school. They walk over to you and one says "Haven`t you done enough. Now you`ve posessed this guy" "Shut the fuck up" Dan replys. "Ooh, she`s now using him as protection. Speaking of protection, if you have sex, I`ll bring the condoms to stop you from having little Nazi kids" That REALLY pissed you off. It also got Dan mad aswell. "Fuck you" "Huh?" "Fuck you, racist sexual bastard!" "EXCUSE ME!" "NOBODY TELLS ME WHAT TO DO, AND DEFINITELY NOT A NAZI!" The whole school is looking at you. You feel embarrassed. They gather and throw stuff at:

[[You]]

[[The gang of bullies]]

Ok

AllyG — Mon, 11 Jan 2016 05:57:38 GMT

AllyG:

"Ok, I guess" "I`ll write it on a note" About 20 seconds later a small piece of paper pops under the door reading: 0105-4212. Theres some words below, too: My name`s Dan by the way. Whats yours?

You take out your pen and write "Zoey"
You hand back the note. "Zoey, huh? Nice name" "Thanks" "Do you wanna have lunch with me?"

You reply:

[[Sure]]

[[Gross! Go flirt with someone else you psycho!"]]

Ok

AllyG — Mon, 11 Jan 2016 05:56:52 GMT

AllyG:

"Ok, I guess" "I`ll write it on a note" About 20 seconds later a small piece of paper pops under the door reading: 0105-4212. Theres some words below, too: My name`s Dan by the way. Whats yours?

You take out your pen and write "Zoey"
You hand back the note. "Zoey, huh? Nice name" "Thanks" "Do you wanna have lunch with me?"

You reply:

[[Ok]]

[[Gross! Go flirt with someone else you psycho!"]]

Kill you

AllyG — Mon, 11 Jan 2016 05:52:50 GMT

AllyG: Created page with 'He then grabs a metal rod, flings it in the air, and as he`s about to stab you with it, the door bursts open and 4 police officers come in pointing guns at your killer. "FREEZE! …'

He then grabs a metal rod, flings it in the air, and as he`s about to stab you with it, the door bursts open and 4 police officers come in pointing guns at your killer. "FREEZE! POLICE!" 2 of the officers grab you and escort you outside while the other 2 tell him to put the rod down. He refuses, and runs towards them. They then fire, shooting him in the head, killing him instantly.

THE END (Or is it?)

Nah

AllyG — Mon, 11 Jan 2016 05:46:45 GMT

AllyG:

"Nah" He seems kinda depressed. You then hear noise and the door is kicked aside. You look at him but when you see his eyes, his rage filled eyes you scream "HELP! RAPE! HELP ME SOMEONES TRYING TO KILL ME! HELP!!!!" "NOBODY IS HELPING YOU. NOBODY HELPS NAZIS!" You realise that he is going to either kill or rape you.

Does he:

[[Kill you]]

[[Rape you]]

[[Rape and then kill you]]

[[Abducts you]]

Ok

AllyG — Mon, 11 Jan 2016 05:28:48 GMT

AllyG:

"Ok, I guess" "I`ll write it on a note" About 20 seconds later a small piece of paper pops under the door reading: 0105-4212. Theres some words below, too: My name`s Dan by the way. Whats yours?

You take out your pen and write "Zoey"
You hand back the note. "Zoey, huh? Nice name" "Thanks" "Do you wanna have lunch with me?"

You reply:

[[Ok]]

[[No, but thanks anyway]]

[[Gross! Go flirt with someone else you psycho!"]]

Ok

AllyG — Mon, 11 Jan 2016 05:26:59 GMT

AllyG:

"Ok, I guess" "I`ll write it on a note" About 20 seconds later a small piece of paper pops under the door reading: 0105-4212. Theres some words below, too: My name`s Dan by the way. Whats yours?

You take out your pen and write "Zoey"
You hand back the note. "Zoey, huh? Nice name" "Thanks" "Do you wanna have lunch with me?"

You reply:

[[Ok]]

[[No, but thanks anyway]]

[[Gross! Go flirt with someone else you psycho!"]]

Tell him why your crying

AllyG — Mon, 11 Jan 2016 05:18:43 GMT

AllyG: Created page with 'Theres no way you can get out of this, so you might as well tell him anyway. "I`m in here crying because everyone hates me and accuses me of being a Nazi" "Well screw them, cau…'

Theres no way you can get out of this, so you might as well tell him anyway.

"I`m in here crying because everyone hates me and accuses me of being a Nazi" "Well screw them, cause I am one, or atleast part, anyway"

There is a long silence and you can just see him standing there looking shocked. You think "Oh shit, why did I do that!" He then says "Whatever man, it doesn`t really bother me at all, unless your all like "Hitler`s our saviour" and crap like that" "Really? So you don`t hate me?" "Nope" "Hey I can give you my number if you want" He asks politely.

Do you say:

[[Ok]]

[[Nah]]

[[I don`t know]]

A guy who went into the wrong one

AllyG — Mon, 11 Jan 2016 05:08:21 GMT

AllyG: Created page with 'You peek through the door and see a guy who walks in. He then says "Holy shit!" as he realizes what he`s just done. You find it hard to not giggle a little bit. You try to contai…'

You peek through the door and see a guy who walks in. He then says "Holy shit!" as he realizes what he`s just done. You find it hard to not giggle a little bit. You try to contain your emotion but burst out laughing. "Who's there?" the guy says. "Me". "Find it funny, do you?" He asks angrily. You then start to cry again at the thought of another person hating you. "Hey, are you alright in there?" You try to say yes to stop him from seeing you, but somehow you say no.

Do you:

[[Tell him why your crying]]

[[Tell him to get out and call him a pervert]]

[[Kill him]]

A nerd with wierd shit

AllyG — Mon, 11 Jan 2016 04:42:28 GMT

AllyG: Created page with 'You peek through the door and find a nerd, thin but tall. You watch as she picks her nose and disgustingly eat her booger. You think Ugghh, fuckin' gross! She then starts writing…'

You peek through the door and find a nerd, thin but tall. You watch as she picks her nose and disgustingly eat her booger. You think Ugghh, fuckin' gross! She then starts writing maths equations on the wall.
You hope she leaves soon.

After 10 minutes, the wierdo leaves. You take a deep breath of relief. You look down at your watch, it displays 11:43 AM. "Nearly time for lunch" you think, aware of that when you return, everyone will be suspicious. Or you could eat lunch here, or go to your hidey-hole where you escaped teasing and bullying.

Do you: [[Eat lunch at the cafeteria, and prepare for teasing]]

[[Eat lunch in the toilets]]

[[Sneak out to your secret place and eat there]]

Chantelle, the nicest kid in the school

AllyG — Mon, 11 Jan 2016 04:32:38 GMT

AllyG: Created page with 'You peek through the door and see Chantelle the nicest kid in the school, and possibly the whole town. You do know that she doesn't have a problem with becoming friends with wier…'

You peek through the door and see Chantelle the nicest kid in the school, and possibly the whole town. You do know that she doesn't have a problem with becoming friends with wierdos, retards or the occasional druggie. You think that if I told her, she wouldn`t have a problem. Still, there is a possibility that she will tell everyone and they will hate you.

Do you: [[Tell her that your a Neonazi]]

[[Decide that the risk is too great]]

Say "Can I be excused" and run to the toilets and cry

AllyG — Mon, 11 Jan 2016 04:18:06 GMT

AllyG: Created page with '"Sir, could I be excused to the bathroom?" "Of course" Mr Rogers says. You walk out casually, but the second the door closes, you run, tears pouring out from your eyes. You rea…'

"Sir, could I be excused to the bathroom?" "Of course" Mr Rogers says. You walk out casually, but the second the door closes, you run, tears pouring out from your eyes.

You reach the female toilets, and are relieved that nobody else is in there. You pick the furthest stall from the door and you just sit there crying. Sometime later you hear the door open, and stop crying.

Who is it:

[[Chantelle, the nicest kid in the school]]

[[A nerd with wierd shit]]

[[A guy who went into the wrong one]]

[[Aliens (Joking!!!)]]

I was just kidding you fucking retards!

AllyG — Mon, 11 Jan 2016 04:09:20 GMT

AllyG: Created page with '"I was just kidding you fucking retards!" you say, trying to convince them that you were joking. "Oh really, only Nazi`s look like that." Shit. I really need to get these bitches…'

"I was just kidding you fucking retards!" you say, trying to convince them that you were joking. "Oh really, only Nazi`s look like that." Shit. I really need to get these bitches away from me. Luckily the bell rings and you all go to class. "History...BORING" you think to yourself. Even worse, the lesson is about the Concentration Camps. You feel everyones eyes looking at you, because you look like a Nazi.

Do you: [[Run out of class]]
[[Say "Can I be excused" and run to the toilets and cry]]
OR
[[Sit there. I don't give a damn what people think]]

Sandbox

AllyG — Sun, 10 Jan 2016 15:43:44 GMT

AllyG:

If you wish to play in sand, please do so on this page. After you are done, please revert this page so others may use it.

If you do not revert this page, it will be reverted for you. If you intend to use this page to start a story, please read the instructions in the [[Tutorial]] and follow the directions to start a story properly. This page is for experimentation only and nothing posted on this page will remain here permanently.

[[Testing 123]]

[[Category:System Pages]]

Hi

Test test

[[link?]]

''The quick brown fox jumped over the lazy dog. ''

'AllyG'

As you lazily wake up, the morning birds begin their song. Sadly, the quiet, and kind of cute chips and chirps are shattered by your old cat Tara. Do you: "Be quiet, i'm trying to rest"

Go back to sleep

Get up