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Ashes House/ Revenge

2014-03-24T18:44:42Z

Trueroman: Created page with '"I think it is time to do some payback," You squeal in excitement. You look around the room for some options and try to think of some things you can do to get the clowns jollies …'

"I think it is time to do some payback," You squeal in excitement. You look around the room for some options and try to think of some things you can do to get the clowns jollies off.

[[Ashes House/ Fister| Grab the Fist'o 2000]]

[[Ashes House/ Strecher| Grab the Shake 'n Stretch]]

[[Ashes House/ Nipple Ripper| Grab the Nipple Ripper]]

[[Category: Pokemon: Gotta Sex 'em all! Kanto Edition]]

Ashes House/Plumber/Straps

2014-03-24T18:39:44Z

Trueroman: Created page with 'You decide to tie him down in his dazed moment. You quickly wrestle his hands into the cuffs on the corners of the mattress and take a step back when he starts tugging hard on th…'

You decide to tie him down in his dazed moment. You quickly wrestle his hands into the cuffs on the corners of the mattress and take a step back when he starts tugging hard on them with a hard snap. The chains crackle as he stretches and turns until he gives up and gives you a cold glare. You feel a psychic assault on your brain but suddenly it dissipates. That is when you notice the name crossed in the armbands of the cuffs. "Mind Wiper," You mutter, remembering them to be a brand with the ability to restrain not just the body but also the mind. No mind rapes!

"Who is the bitch now!? Huh, ya pink tubby!"

He gives a shout and a spit but you ignore him and weigh your options.

*[[Ashes House/ Revenge| Get some revenge]]

*[[Ashes House/ Upstairs| Just head upstairs]]

[[Category: Pokemon: Gotta Sex 'em all! Kanto Edition]]

Ashes House/Plumber/Surrender

2014-03-24T18:31:18Z

Trueroman: Created page with 'You decide to drop to your knees and beg for forgiveness. The door flings open, Mr Mime charging in with a scowl on his face. You plead with hands raised, showing you have given …'

You decide to drop to your knees and beg for forgiveness. The door flings open, Mr Mime charging in with a scowl on his face. You plead with hands raised, showing you have given up this wild chase, showing disinterest in your previous target. This makes the clown pause, standing over you while he watches you squirm. You note that his penis looms not far from your face from this angle, a growing piece of meat reaching out to touch your cheek. ''no,'' you think, ''I don't care for circus peanuts right now.'' You look up, a shadow painting over your figure. What was once a frown begins to turn the other way. To your dismay two grubby big mits begin to creep down and wrap around your head, both you and his eyes widening with the coming madness. And with that he thrusted forward.

You wake up some time later, strapped to the bed in the room. It doesn't take you long to realize how sore you are, both of your holes pounding something awful. Then, you look left to a sudden disturbance nearby. Mr Mime is snapping leather black gloves on to adorn his new outfit. You are now about to be dominated by Mr. Mime. Yay!

THE END?

[[Category: Pokemon: Gotta Sex 'em all! Kanto Edition]]

Ashes House/Plumber/Here's Clowny

2014-03-20T14:57:15Z

Trueroman:

To your horror you are staring at a very disturbing but oddly kinky room. Black leather straps, tight black outfits and array of sexual but awfully painful looking tools are hung up on the walls. In the middle of the room is a very hard looking bed with straps on both sides. On the far wall, blinking in neon lights sits a decorative light from the Bobby Bob Home shopping channel. This particular line of product was intended to express gratification for your pokemon. This one flashes: Everyone loves a clown.

You have just walked into the den of Mr. Mime. You are now in enemy territory and this guys has gadgets galore to give him the upper hand and without Spanky, you are already feeling butt hurt. Suddenly there is a pounding on the door, followed by another. The door splinters open the face of Mr. Mime tries to squeeze through with an evil look painted on. "Mime mimey!"

You look around the room. Surely there is something you can do?

*[[Ashes House/Plumber/Dildo| Grab a dildo!]]
*[[Ashes House/Plumber/Hide| Hide behind the bed!]]
*[[Ashes House/Plumber/Surrender| Surrender!]]

[[Category: Pokemon: Gotta Sex 'em all! Kanto Edition]]

Ashes House/Plumber/Spanky

2014-03-20T14:56:33Z

Trueroman:

You reach for your pokeball it hurl it into the cooling sauna. Spanky emerges in a puff of rage, his wild apendixes flailing about. When he catches sight of the unamused clown, it lets out a war cry. "Yeah Spanky! Punch him in the nads!"

Spanky jumps back and forth, dodging in between clouds of smoke then suddenly launches with what looks like a surprise haymaker. Victory looks to be in grasp-- until Mr. Mime lets out a sudden burst of physic confusion making the room distorted. Spanky is hit first send head first into a wall, you on the other hand are knocked out of the Sauna and into the room on the other side. You just sent out a fighting type to take a psyhic. Great job numb nuts.

You stand up in a panic still dazed from the mind rape. You take hold of the door and slam it shut, locking it in the process. You gasp for breath but are startled by what you see.

*[[Ashes House/Plumber/Here's Clowny| Yep you're Fucked!]]

Ashes House/Plumber/Fix Sink

2014-03-20T14:55:10Z

Trueroman:

So now you are under the sink, screwing the sink in place with your wrench. You turn nobs, bang random shit, really you have no damn idea what you are doing but you continue anyway. Miraculously you actually fixed the pipe. You crawl back from underneath the sink and wipe sweat from your brow. Yeah you are working hard for that pussy. ''This is worth extra head'', you think to yourself. Out from the left hallways comes Mr. Mime, this time without his towel. But he is 'dressed' and decent.

He sees you have finished fixing the pipe and gives a goofy clap and chants his name. He then pushes you back to the door shows you out and gives you a farewell handshake. Really, this happened so fast you were not able to respond except in quiet unheard mutters. The door slams shut and you hear the lock click in place.

It just dawned on you they didn't even pay you. Apparently Ashes fine ass mom is also a cheap ass bitch. Go figure. Also it just dawned on you as well, now thinking about her ass, is that you just fixed the wrong plumbing. Good job Mr. Fixit. So what now? Try another route or leave? You can always try to go back in the front door but they might not need a plumber anymore.

*[[Pallet Town/Ashes House/Knock Again| Knock on door again]]
*[[Pallet Town/Ashes House/Climb| Climb Vine to second story]]
*[[Pallet Town/Ashes House/Backyard| Go to backyard]]
*[[Pallet Town/First Steps| Leave]]

[[Category: Pokemon: Gotta Sex 'em all! Kanto Edition]]

Pallet Town/Ashes House/Knock louder

2014-03-20T14:51:50Z

Trueroman:

You decide not to be so meek. So instead you pound that door hard, hammering it with perhaps more strength than necessary. AS you continue your onslaught the door finally opens. At your dismay it is not Ashes fine ass mom. Instead before you stands a colorful clown, a frown creasing his face. "Mime," He says in a very dry tone.

It is a Mr. Mime, the one Ash gave her awhile back. You notice he is wet, his curly hair matted down and soaked. Around him is a bath towel running along his waist. You also catch what seems to be a bulge in the towel where his loins is. "Mime?"

You have to force yourself not to eye the clowns package, transfixed at the size. "Um, yes." You rub your head, twirling the strands of your oh so lovely bowl cut. "Is-- is Ashes fine ass mom home?" The clown raises a twisted finger to mouth in question. He doesn't recognize you is showing sign of suspicion as to why you would come here.

What story would you give the clown?

*[[Ashes House/Deliveryman| Delivering a package]]
*[[Ashes House/Gardner| New Gardner]]
*[[Ashes House/Plumber| Fixing the plumbing]]
*[[Ashes House/Reporter| Pokemon Reporter]]
*[[Ashes House/Gynecologist| On call gynecologist]]

[[Category:Pokemon: Gotta Sex 'em all! Kanto Edition]]

Ashes House/Gynecologist

2014-03-20T14:50:55Z

Trueroman:

You try to think of something clever to get you in; nothing really stands out. All you can think about is pounding Ashes' fine ass mom's pussy. Pussy? Maybe... just maybe...? You clear your throat and widen your stance more and try to appear more confident. "I am Ashes' fine ass mom's on call Gynecologist."

In a second the door slams in your face. Apparently they don't exist? Who would have thunk. So what is your next plan of attack? Try a different route, leave or take on the door again?

*[[Pallet Town/Ashes House/Knock Again| Knock on door again]]
*[[Pallet Town/Ashes House/Climb| Climb Vine to second story]]
*[[Pallet Town/Ashes House/Backyard| Go to backyard]]
*[[Pallet Town/First Steps| Leave]]

[[Category: Pokemon: Gotta Sex 'em all! Kanto Edition]]

Ashes House/Plumber/escape

2014-03-20T14:45:24Z

Trueroman:

You make a mad dash for the door but it is to no avail. Suddenly your feet sweep from underneath you and you fall head first into the floor. With a crack it hits, knocking some senses out as you try to clamor back up. But Mr. Mime has you by the legs, a psychic grasp lifting you upside down by one ankle. You dangle, watching Mr. Mime slowly rise from the bed, that creepy grin giving you goosebumps. You begin to levitate to him, a horrid thought crossing your mind. From this angle he is going to impale you with his long pink dick. You scream at the thought.

This was not the most best choice to go about. As you let out a terrible cry you fly fast into the vicinity of his cock. It goes all in at once the tip smacking against the back of your throat instantly gagging you. But it doesn't stop there. Mr. Mime grabs your legs with a firm grip and begins to mime his noggin with yours, using his telekinetic powers to force your movement back and forth. The thrill is unbearable, incapable of thinking of any means of escape. You feel your body go numb at the assualt of the clown until you pass out taking in his massive erection.

You awake later, tied to the bed in the room. You are naked and you feel very sore in the mouth. Jaw pops back into place and you let out a yelp. You look down at your exposed frame and see an erection, somewhat slimy if lubed up. You don't want to think what has happened to you since going unconcious but you may just get a encore. In walks Mr. Mime, this time tapered with a horrifying outfit. He has taken one of the black leather suits off the wall and is now wearing it. Everything covered in pure black except his two puffs of hair, two hard nipples and a dangling schlong.

"No," You try to choke out as he walks into the room. "Can't we just be friends."

He takes a hold of a zipper that wraps around the side of the mask he is wearing. With a pull he undoes it, exposing massive red lips.

"Mr.," He pauses for a second, speaking in a rather creepy voice, '''"Mime."''' Your screams become muffled as the door slams shut. You have become a sex toy for Mr. Mime. Good job, give yourself a cookie.

THE END?

[[Category:Pokemon: Gotta Sex 'em all! Kanto Edition]]

Ashes House/Plumber/escape

2014-03-20T14:42:41Z

Trueroman: Created page with 'You make a mad dash for the door but it is to no avail. Suddenly your feet sweep from underneath you and you fall head first into the floor. With a crack it hits, knocking some s…'

Ashes House/Plumber/Dildo

2014-03-20T14:27:48Z

Trueroman:

You need a weapon! You charge for the wall, grabbing hold a floppy but thick pink and grey dildo. It waggles with your wobble as you take a fighting stance grasping both ends of the shaft as if a sword. The door then flies open. Mr. Mime in huffs, penis still hanging out,a boner going hard. He gives you the 'I kill you now,' look.

He charges, big white hands aiming for your throat. You close your eyes and a do a spinning back slap with the massive pecker. With a crack it whips Mr. Mime in the face. It sends him spiraling head over heels onto the hard bed. You just bitch slapped a mime with a dildo! You are one lucky bastard! He is now down and now is your chance to act. What next?

*[[Ashes House/Plumber/escape| Run Bitch! Run!]]
*[[Ashes House/Plumber/Straps| Tie him down to the bed!]]

[[Category: Pokemon: Gotta Sex 'em all! Kanto Edition]]

Ashes House/Plumber/Next Room

2014-03-20T14:26:06Z

Trueroman:

You don't want to take on a pissed clown so you decide to jump into the next room. As you begin your mad dash a confusing blast from Mr. Mime hits you and hurdles you into the other room. You drop your pokeball in the hall as you are thrown into the other room. You fear to fetch it and opt to slam the door shut, locking it and pressing your back against the wall. As you turn around though your heart sinks into your nads at the sight that you see.

*[[Ashes House/Plumber/Here's Clowny| You are Fucked!]]

Ashes House/Plumber/Bathroom

2014-03-20T14:25:08Z

Trueroman:

You slowly creep up to the door. You see steam seeping from underneath the door, it is heavily pouring out as if a great fire was on the other side. Sauna?

*[[Ashes House/Plumber/Sauna| Enter the room]]
*[[Ashes House/Plumber/Kitchen again| Go back to Kitchen]]

[[Category: Pokemon: Gotta Sex 'em all! Kanto Edition]]

Ashes House/Intro

2014-03-20T14:23:22Z

Trueroman:

You have seen her town. Yes, the lovely lady who bore a child who would become the greatest Pokemon trainer alive. Her name... well you honestly don't know. You just know her as Ashes fine ass mom. You recall stalking her in the local mart, peeking around the end of the isle as she did some shopping. Oh, the sight you saw as she leaned over to pick up a fallen box she accidently bumped over with the knockers hanging far. She leaned away, ass in the air, panty shot for your eyes. Just your eyes only. But this wasn't the only case.

No, you have seen her in different spots. Floral shops, Champions Museum, sun bathing down on route 21. You have even seen her leaving Professor Oaks on occasion, looking rough with brown locks frilled and out of place. Often her outfit was out of place too. Out of all the women of Pallet Town, she has always been the top of the list of wild Meowths you have wanted to tame. So you have-- at least in your mind.

Here you are though, masterbating at your usual spot. On the couch, eyes closed and mind raising to the prospects of own Ashes fine ass moms pussy. You feel an orgasm looming as you increase the pace, nearing that moment when your body would quake in climax. Your dormant arm sweeps across the couch in anticipation, brushing against your trainer back you have lazily thrown to the side to get down to business. With a slight thud it hits the ground, but you don't care at this point.

You let out a stream, flicking your cock a few more times as you reel back from the pleasure. "Oh woman, let me spray them Jigglypuffs..." You imagine blowing your load across her chest, basking in your art as great strokes cross her mounds and canyon. When you finally finish off you are disappointed to the aspect that it was all just daydreaming. Instead you have just covered yourself in goop.
In the processes of cleaning, you feel yet another stirring in your loins.

"Again, friend?" You say to talking to yourself. "I just can't satisfy you." It just didn't do the trick. Your body is craving the real thing, the nice warmth only a vagina can bring. You look at your trainer back still laying on the floor. You remind yourself the promise you have made. The promise to get as many fine bitches as you can. You have come this far, you started your Pokemon journey in hopes to explore and get that tail, so today is the day to do just that.

The images of Ashes fine ass mom is still fresh in your head. How you would love to become Ashes new daddy. Maybe this is the starting point you need? She probably is lonely, you convince to your brain, already walking out the door after a scoop of the hand around the strap of your pokebag. With no man at home and a son out abroad, this would be the opportune time to fill that void in her life. You chuckle, ''Among other holes.''

So starts the first adventure!

*[[Pallet Town/Ashes House| Begin Adventure]]
*[[Pallet Town| Return to Hub]]

[[category: Pokemon: Gotta Sex 'em all! Kanto Edition]]

Ashes House/Intro

2014-03-20T14:22:57Z

Trueroman:

You have seen her town. Yes, the lovely lady who bore a child who would become the greatest Pokemon trainer alive. Her name... well you honestly don't know. You just know her as Ashes fine ass mom. You recall stalking her in the local mart, peeking around the end of the isle as she did some shopping. Oh, the sight you saw as she leaned over to pick up a fallen box she accidently bumped over with the knockers hanging far. She leaned away, ass in the air, panty shot for your eyes. Just your eyes only. But this wasn't the only case.

No, you have seen her in different spots. Floral shops, Champions Museum, sun bathing down on route 21. You have even seen her leaving Professor Oaks on occasion, looking rough with brown locks frilled and out of place. Often her outfit was out of place too. Out of all the women of Pallet Town, she has always been the top of the list of wild Meowths you have wanted to tame. So you have-- at least in your mind.

Here you are though, masterbating at your usual spot. On the couch, eyes closed and mind raising to the prospects of own Ashes fine ass moms pussy. You feel an orgasm looming as you increase the pace, nearing that moment when your body would quake in climax. Your dormant arm sweeps across the couch in anticipation, brushing against your trainer back you have lazily thrown to the side to get down to business. With a slight thud it hits the ground, but you don't care at this point.

You let out a stream, flicking your cock a few more times as you reel back from the pleasure. "Oh woman, let me spray them Jigglypuffs..." You imagine blowing your load across her chest, basking in your art as great strokes cross her mounds and canyon. When you finally finish off you are disappointed to the aspect that it was all just daydreaming. Instead you have just covered yourself in goop.
In the processes of cleaning, you feel yet another stirring in your loins.

"Again, friend?" You say to talking to yourself. "I just can't satisfy you." It just didn't do the trick. Your body is craving the real thing, the nice warmth only a vagina can bring. You look at your trainer back still laying on the floor. You remind yourself the promise you have made. The promise to get as many fine bitches as you can. You have come this far, you started your Pokemon journey in hopes to explore and get that tail, so today is the day to do just that.

The images of Ashes fine ass mom is still fresh in your head. How you would love to become Ashes new daddy. Maybe this is the starting point you need? She probably is lonely, you convince to your brain, already walking out the door after a scoop of the hand around the strap of your pokebag. With no man at home and a son out abroad, this would be the opertune time to fill that void in her life. You chuckle, ''Among other holes.''

So starts the first adventure!

*[[Pallet Town/Ashes House| Begin Adventure]]
*[[Pallet Town| Return to Hub]]

[[category: Pokemon: Gotta Sex 'em all! Kanto Edition]]

Ashes House/Deliveryman

2014-03-20T14:02:29Z

Trueroman:

You say you are delivering a package. The Mr. Mime looks around. First eying your hands, then traveling to the patio and peering off to the left in right of the front gardens looking for any signs of what you are bringing them. He then looks at you quizzically. "Mime?"

You begin to get nervous, your lie is not going through very well. You need to think of something to say and fast. "Oh-- the uh, package is right here."

"Mime?" He responds again in confusion.

"Here I will show you." You unzip your pants and whip out your penis. "I just need to put this in her mailbox. Hur Hur."

The clown frowns and takes a step back. The door soon slams into your face and a click of the lock can be heard. Yep, last resort failed. You never thought you would end up showing your penis to a clown. But you did and it was not worth it. Now you need to find another way in or give up all together. Perhaps knock again, might piss off the clown though.

*[[Pallet Town/Ashes House/Knock Again| Knock on door again]]
*[[Pallet Town/Ashes House/Climb| Climb Vine to second story]]
*[[Pallet Town/Ashes House/Backyard| Go to backyard]]

[[Category: Pokemon: Gotta Sex 'em all! Kanto Edition]]

User talk:DirtyMeStoryTime

2014-03-20T13:52:36Z

Trueroman:

Thanks for the advice. When I write I tend to jot everything down then go back and correct my spelling. Usually this isn't a problem when I right on Word then transfer it over to wherever I am posting it online. Since this website is linked based and I'm kind of just throwing ideas as I go along, I plan on going back to correct spelling and grammar when I get a decent amount written through a couple of path choices.

I am still learning the site, I tried the tutorial and while it explains it well when it comes to computer terms I find it easier to experiment. I was clicking the Ab button on the tool bar to put the brackets, but I will start adding the * beforehand. Please share any other tips if you like :)

Yeah I was fiddling with how you did that. I figured it out though, thanks.

So if I have a path that ends the story do I need to still put a link? I have seen others that didn't so wasn't sure. Also, I came to a point where I didn't need a page anymore, how to do I completely remove it?

[[User:Trueroman| Trueroman]] 9:53 AM 20th March 2014
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Finally I made time and took a look at Dirty Me, the story I mean. And damn, your writing is great, I really enjoy reading it. I'm normally into more perverse stuff, at least in stories, but I enjoy your style too much. Only thing which bothers me is, that your posts are so damn long. Not that it is a bad thing, it makes a great story, but I would just enjoy a few more options to choose how to proceed. Anyway, other than that, great writing, looking forward to more. - [[User:Wassersaeufer|Wassersaeufer]] 15:55 19th March 2014 (UTC)

Wow, thanks for the compliment on me complimenting someone else, even though you weren't the one I complimented... well, now this sentence sounds really wrong *lol*. Anyway, thanks for noticing and keep up the good work. Though I have not yet read [[Dirty Me]], I will soon change that. - [[User:Wassersaeufer|Wassersaeufer]] 14:27 18th March 2014 (UTC)

From MFCmaster123
Thanks for your help with my Bold font problem.
Writ this day 17 March, 2014
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To mods:

Sorry, I made a n00b mistake in my first couple linking pages.
Please delete the "I'm just a boy" page.
I am also not sure if I moved the page "I'm just a girl" correctly. Please feel free to fix or let me know how to fix if I did not.
All fixed, thanks Platypus ^.^
--[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 13:10, 21 February 2014 (UTC)

Making a link log page or a story notes page for your story is acceptable. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:48, 21 February 2014 (UTC)

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I think your story "Dirty Me" is very interesting as of yet. I don't think I've ever read a CYOA involving elements of tragedy written from a realistic ("Not the fun fantasy stuff" as you wrote yourself) point of view, but yours looks very promising. I hope to see more of it, and wish you the best of luck with your writing! --[[User:ArthurKung|ArthurKung]] 21:53, 24 February 2014 (UTC)

Not all of it will be tragedy. I write erotica, as well as other things, and have some of my short works for sale. It will have alot of sex and sexuality in it. Sadly, many elements come from my own life, and I was not...the most well adjusted or confident person growing up. It will just be more realistic than much of the stuff on here. You try to walk around town naked in stories on here, you just get to have lots of sex. You try to walk around town naked in real life, you will end up in a jail cell, and probably with a record for the rest of your life. I want to keep it plausible, believable. I will sketch out background stories, these will not really branch, just "Dream about x, remember y" type of thing, that will actually have elements from my real life, either in part, or whole. I will probably include me being raped, not once, but twice, but not sure if I want the character to go through it, or remember it. I will probably have how I was molested, and how that lead to the character/me that you see here. I have been beaten, and will probably include issues around that also. At the heart, my story will be a growing up story with many of my specialty writing, erotica. I already have included how I/the character, ended up on probation, and my/the characters, first time having sex. There will be more of that. Some pleasant, some horrifying. I just hope people can connect to my stories, written here, my blog, for sale on Amazon, etc. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:56, 25 February 2014 (UTC)

You're doing fine with the organizing, and you can move +Infinity to the I's if you want. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

To be honest, I haven't yet looked into your story. So I have no basis for an opinion. I will, however, look into it soon. I note that [[User:ArthurKung|ArthurKung]] likes it, and he's usually a pretty good judge. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

I haven't read any of the story yet, but read your informational page. First off, I'm very sorry about the bad things that have actually happened to you, and I hope your life turns out better in the future. Second, I'm happy you've had some fun and good experiences as well, and I hope you have more of them. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

OK, I've read what you have so far (I read very fast.) I'm quite impressed. You're an excellent writer. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Thanks for the heads-up. Like I said, I'm just sorry that all those negative things happened to you. I know you don't want sympathy, but I will say that I hope from now on your life is filled with goodness, light, and a loving partner who cares about you. And that you have lots of loving, tender, consensual, enjoyable sexual experiences. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Are you doing fine? No, you're doing better than that. It's okay for some of your pages to be works in progress. You've contributed a lot, not just to your own story (which is very well written, btw), but to the site as whole by assisting with some of the overdue cleanup. Don't worry so much and keep on keeping on as you've been doing. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:48, 3 March 2014 (UTC)

I have seen some of the elements from your blog appear. I haven't done much additional commenting on it, but what is there to say that I haven't said already? I wish I could erase some of the really horrible stuff that happened to you, and I hope your husband is always warm and loving and kind and ensures you enjoy sweet, tender sex. (Women/girls being abused always has been a trigger of powerful emotions in me: anger at the abuser, and deep sorrow and an urge to comfort the woman who has been abused.) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Nothing you haven't already heard. You're a very skilled writer and I'm enjoying your developing story. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Been there... just try to relax. Maybe read a different story for a few minutes to take your conscious mind off it, then when you feel inspired, return to the story... -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

No, I actually was offline for a couple of days. It wasn't your imagination. I'll poke around your story and check out the new links. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

I like Prank War. It's a cute little story and reminds me of being back in middle school. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

==hidden text==
Don't mind me, just noticed by the changelog that it looked like you were looking for a way to essentially hide text that is only viewable through the edit window, correct? --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 09:22, 7 March 2014 (UTC)

I'm not sure what you want your hidden text template to do, but I can see where it's going wrong. You're referencing hidden text within the code for the hidden text template, which is what's generating the loop error.

If you want invisible text, the easy way is to change the font color to white.

<nowiki> invisible </nowiki>

produces:
 invisible 

You can see the text by painting over it with your cursosr.
--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:39, 7 March 2014 (UTC)

Got it. You're trying to build a collapsible, nested table. I'm not sure how to build such a thing here. The wiki markup language available is somewhat limited. I'll play around some and see if I can't come up with something. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 13:31, 7 March 2014 (UTC)

Ah, I see what you're going for. Like Platypus guessed, it sounds like a nested table with collapsible elements. Almost kinda "flowchart-y" in nature. I found the syntax for a nested table at an external wiki (Aberwiki, at their MediaWiki User's Guide: Using Tables page), but as far as collapsibility goes, there's a javascript extension/gadget that exists (Manual:Collapsible elements on the actual main Mediawiki site), but isn't implemented in CYOA's Common.js section. Like Platypus said, the markup around here is really barebones around here. I ''think'' it can be done, but it might require some playing with before it works. Sorry for the vagueness as to where the two syntax pieces I found are, it's impossible to post two external links in the same post without doing one, waiting 20 minutes, then doing the other. Tedious, but it does prevent spambots from flooding us as badly as they did before... --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 14:10, 7 March 2014 (UTC)

Javascript matters should probably be brought up with Platypus, since he'd be the only one able to add your code into CYOA's Common.js page. o: --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 16:53, 8 March 2014 (UTC)

Actually, Javascript matters would have to go to RobKohr. He doesn't have the daily presence here that I have, but he's the site administrator/owner. I'm the sysop, which is a rank I own at RobKohr's discretion. He makes the decisions about site functionality and features.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 19:58, 8 March 2014 (UTC)

==Blazetempest==
It was nice of you to try cleaning up Blazetempest's poor writing, but given the overwhelming number of poor postings that show up in my stories, I feel I have to be firm with these writers. If they can't read the warning that specifies that poor writing will be deleted, then they really shouldn't be posting. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 19:58, 8 March 2014 (UTC)

==warnings==
If you spot someone leaving off the categories before I do, by all means, feel free to use the warning templates to remind them. It is a relief to not have to do everything that needs doing around here. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 09:20, 12 March 2014 (UTC)

==egrizzly==
Thanks for the heads up. 'Funny' vandals usually only post once then disappear, but I'll give him a warning and if he makes another 'joke' edit, I'll block him. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 14:36, 13 March 2014 (UTC)

== Nah, it's okay ==

I respect your concern for the site, and i guess i was being slightly bitchy about it. People like you are the ones people respect in real life.

== Reply to your comment ==

Just here to say, that I read a bit of your story and I like it. Also, if this isn't too much to ask, I thought maybe you could help me with my writing skills, since I have close to zero experience about writing about sex and stuff. But if you don't want to, I understand. I'll try and read as much as I can on the rest of your story next time, and try to give you a full review.
--[[User:Chaomaster|Chaomaster]] 22:00 15 March 2014

==Number of views==
It's true that the site used to automatically display the number of views on every page you pulled up. It's just one of those things that stopped functioning. It would be nice to have that back, since every user is always curious if their work is being read. Site-functionality issues have to go to RobKohr, not me. He's the only one who could restore that automatic function.

I'll experiment with variations on <nowiki>{{NUMBEROFVIEWS}}</nowiki> and see if I can't come up something. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:35, 18 March 2014 (UTC)

I've been kicking around the idea of adding to the warn1 template to include those links, so I think we'll keep it with your amendment. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 02:26, 19 March 2014 (UTC)

I'm sure there are ways that the look of the site could be improved. The site ''is'' improved from some of the older formats that it had. I promise to be openminded about any suggestions you might have. Anything that would involve changing the underlying wiki code or wiki functionality would have to go through RobKohr, of course. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:40, 19 March 2014 (UTC)

Pallet Town/Ashes House

2014-03-19T15:39:16Z

Trueroman:

You stand outside of the luxurious mansion of Ashes fine ass mothers house. You are nervous upon approach and unsure how to proceed. You notice the front door is unlocked with a jiggle of the handle. From your vantage point the second story balcony is reachable from a grove of vines running up the side of the east wall. Or maybe go into the backyard?

*[[Pallet Town/Ashes House/Knock| Knock on door]]

*[[Pallet Town/Ashes House/Front Enter| Just walk in]]

*[[Pallet Town/Ashes House/Climb| Climb Vine to second story]]

*[[Pallet Town/Ashes House/Backyard| Go to backyard]]

[[Category: Pokemon: Gotta Sex 'em all! Kanto Edition]]

Pallet Town/Ashes House

2014-03-19T15:38:55Z

Trueroman:

You stand outside of the luxurious mansion of Ashes fine ass mothers house. You are nervous upon approach and unsure how to proceed. You notice the front door is unlocked with a jiggle of the handle. From your vantage point the second story balcony is reachable from a grove of vines running up the side of the east wall. Or maybe go into the backyard?

*[[Pallet Town/Ashes House/Knock| Knock on door]]

*[[Pallet Town/Ashes House/Front Enter| Just walk in]]

*[[Pallet Town/Ashes House/Climb| Climb Vine to second story]]

*[[Pallet Town/Ashes House/Backyard| Go to backyard]]

*[[Pallet Town/First Steps| Leave]]

[[Category: Pokemon: Gotta Sex 'em all! Kanto Edition]]

Pallet Town/Ashes House/Knock

2014-03-19T15:38:14Z

Trueroman:

You rasp gingerly on the door, wait a minute then tap again this time a little louder. There is still no response.

*[[Pallet Town/Ashes House/Knock louder| Knock Louder]]

*[[Pallet Town/Ashes House/Enter| Just Walk In]]

[[Category: Pokemon: Gotta Sex 'em all! Kanto Edition]]

Pallet Town/Ashes House

2014-03-19T15:37:43Z

Trueroman:

You stand outside of the luxurious mansion of Ashes fine ass mothers house. You are nervous upon approach and unsure how to proceed. You notice the front door is unlocked with a jiggle of the handle. From your vantage point the second story balcony is reachable from a grove of vines running up the side of the east wall. Or maybe go into the backyard?

*[[Pallet Town/Ashes House/Knock| Knock on door]]

*[[Pallet Town/Ashes House/Front Enter| Just walk in]]

*[[Pallet Town/Ashes House/Climb| Climb Vine to second story]]

*[[Pallet Town/Ashes House/Backyard| Go to backyard]]

*[[Pallet Town/First Steps| Leave]]

*[[Category: Pokemon: Gotta Sex 'em all! Kanto Edition]]

Pallet Town/Ashes House

2014-03-19T15:37:13Z

Trueroman:

You stand outside of the luxurious mansion of Ashes fine ass mothers house. You are nervous upon approach and unsure how to proceed. You notice the front door is unlocked with a jiggle of the handle. From your vantage point the second story balcony is reachable from a grove of vines running up the side of the east wall. Or maybe go into the backyard?

[[Pallet Town/Ashes House/Knock| Knock on door]]

[[Pallet Town/Ashes House/Front Enter| Just walk in]]

[[Pallet Town/Ashes House/Climb| Climb Vine to second story]]

[[Pallet Town/Ashes House/Backyard| Go to backyard]]

[[Pallet Town/First Steps| Leave]]

[[Category: Pokemon: Gotta Sex 'em all! Kanto Edition]]

Pokemon: Gotta Sex 'em all! Kanto Edition

2014-03-19T15:32:18Z

Trueroman:

'''Game Objectives: This game is split up in episodic adventures that work as standalone events. Your goal in each adventure is overcome situations to get what you desire most. Sex. Straight up Sex. You can of course play it however you like, but the real test is to find all the ways to get the job done. In the stories will be varying ways to get possible targets so keep an eye out! These will be listed in the Sexedex and on the intro to every episode. To find them though is your challenge, but they will be marked when you encounter them in the story. So take off your pants get comfortable and grab those pokeballs! Gotta Sex 'em All!'''

So where to start? You have three options to get you going. If you are a first time reader check out the prologue. It introduces the character and what he is all about. Course if you have read the title I'm sure you already have a clear picture in mind. Still, read it.

Second, you have the Hub. This is where the meat of this story takes place. Here you will pick from a series of locations which in turn will take you to 'episodes' where an adventure path will take place telling a chapter in Brown's life, detailing the exploits to wet his whistle.

Finally, you have the Sexedex. This is a catalog of all the sexy time that can be encountered. Its a check list if you will that I will fill up as more episodes are completed. Do you have what it takes to encounter them all?

*[[Prologue| Prologue]]

*[[Hub Menu| Hub]]

*[[Sexedex| Sexedex]]

[[Category: Pokemon: Gotta Sex 'em all! Kanto Edition]]

Ashes House/Intro

2014-03-19T15:30:42Z

Trueroman:

Place holder

[[Pallet Town/Ashes House| Begin Adventure]]

[[Pallet Town| Return to Hub]]

[[category: Pokemon: Gotta Sex 'em all! Kanto Edition]]

Ashes House/Intro

2014-03-19T15:30:07Z

Trueroman: Created page with 'Place holder Begin Adventure Return to Hub category: Gotta Sex 'em all! Kanto Edition'

Place holder

[[Pallet Town/Ashes House| Begin Adventure]]

[[Pallet Town| Return to Hub]]

[[category: Gotta Sex 'em all! Kanto Edition]]

Pallet Town

2014-03-19T14:28:35Z

Trueroman: Created page with 'Pallet Town has changed over the years. With the word of mouth and appearing on national television, Ash made a name for the off the beaten path town. The town has grown in size,…'

Pallet Town has changed over the years. With the word of mouth and appearing on national television, Ash made a name for the off the beaten path town. The town has grown in size, more people moving in mainly for their interest in Pokemon studies or training. Really it hasn't been terribly long since Ash left the city to become a famed champion, but ever since his adventures in the Indigo League business has boomed. Things to note: Ashes fine ass moms house is now a mansion. Oaks lab has gotten bigger with a lot more room for ranches and fences to let tamed pokemon froluck. A dock connecting from route 21 is now is progression to be built. And a museum has be erected in honor of the famous Ketchum kid. Other than new houses and newer faces, Pallet Town is still a quiet, nature fortified dwelling. At least until you're done with the place.

[[Ashes House/Intro| Episode 1- A Mime in a Hard Place!]]

[[Category: Pokemon: Gotta Sex 'em all! Kanto Edition]]

Hub Menu

2014-03-19T14:17:14Z

Trueroman: Created page with 'These Locations are currently Available! * Pallet Town'

These Locations are currently Available!

*[[Pallet Town| Pallet Town]]

Prologue

2014-03-19T14:14:45Z

Trueroman:

Your name is brown. You are a rather-- well unfortunate 16 year old who has found himself the laughing stock of your hometown of Pallet town. So why are you the laughing stock? You are the pervert of new beginnings, the oddball no girl wants to fuck. You are a cancer of sorts on a town where every move you make is noticed and known by all. So what does someone like you do? You get the hell out of dodge.

You have heard of a great trainer named Ash who grew up here. Yeah, you knew the guy. Two years older, two years start on his journey. A prick you remember, a douche bag player who got all the fine bitches of this small, boring community. You don't think there is a girl he didn't touch and, well, you sneaked a peek of his exploits being the peeping Tom you are and there isn't a female here not stamped with his mark. Not even that fine ass mother of his.

But enough about that dick. This story is about you. Brown, the unsung hero of the next batch of kids running off to pursue their dreams. Your dream may be different but the goal may be ultimately be the same. Fame, fortune and a chance to explore beyond the cushy coven here in the middle of nowhere. The best way to do this is to become a Pokemon trainer. Not your most ideal choice but one you hope to grow into. That is why kids leave this town and will be for you too. At least that is the half of it. You also want to get massive tail, head and other sexy, kinky experiences to remember. You want to make your mark on the women of Kanto and Pallet Town is just the beginning.

So here you are outside Professor Oaks lab, hidden in the back of a crowd of kids your age keeping your distance. Oak comes to the door and asks everyone to line up. So you do so-- at the back of the line. An hour passes, many people, most from Pallet town, others from neighboring cities, leave with their new gain Pokemon excited and wide eyed. You finally reach the door and enter the lab. The last guy in front if you trudges off, a bit more somber to the rest. You approach the Professor who doesn't notice you, lost in a wooden chart pressed near his face.

You give a slight cough to hopefully gain his attention but it falls on deaf ears. Again, louder. Nothing. Finally you just knock a beaker off the table and falls to the ground breaking into many pieces. Oak spins around and his eyes turn into slits. "Oh. It's you Brown." He doesn't seem to happy to see you. "Fuck off will ya."

Oak spins around and walks to his desk where he takes a seat. You stand akwardly not moving. Oak ignores you for a few minutes but eventually, irritated speaks up. "What?"

"I-- I've come for a Pokemon."

His eyebrows perked up, "You? A Pokemon? You can't be serious."

You are very much serious, "Yes. I am."

You continue to stand there being an unwanted decoration in the lab. But the Professor can sense your unsual determination to get what you want so he lets out a sigh and slumps in his seat. "Fine, but I don't really have much to choose from."

"What do you got?"

"This," He reaches into the drawer lined underneath the desk. He tosses the ball towards you, you barely catching it as it nearly slips from your fingers. You hold the ball up to your eyes and see a label printed on it. It reads Spanky.

"Spanky?" You asked curiously.

"Yes he is a Mankey. Mankies generally are aggressive, rather obnoxious Pokemon but quite frankly this one takes the cake." He looks back down at his work scattered on the desk, "You seem a perfect match."

You discard the insult. "Thanks."

He just waved it off, "Don't thank me, you really shouldn't. Now get lost kid. Ashes fine ass mom is coming over to visit. Gonna spelunk her cave if ya know what I mean."

You take that as your key and walk out the door.

You are now outside. It it about noon. You decide to see your new Pokemon, perhaps he is a chick magnet. Your mind wanders off but you snap back to reality. You toss the rather dusty pokeball on the ground. It opens with a thud, a beam of white light flashing. What it unleashes is something not expect. You thought it would be a cute, 'aww' inspiring Pokemon or something tough and powerful. Instead, what you behold, is a mangy, one eyed monkey like creature with a snarl on its face. It has an eye patch and a scar running over its bad eye. It glares at you with its one good eye, then, without warning he punches you square in the face, knocking you on the ground.

You cling to your face, which is already swelling up. "What the hell!?" You scream, checking the inside of your mouth for possible bleeding. Luckily there is none. It just growls at you and beats its patchy, mangled chest. You get back on your feet, keeping some distance in case of anymore wild swings. "That wasn't nice..."

He spits a glob of mucus that it gnarled from the back of its throat, hitting you in the eye. This is going to be more of a pain than you thought. You decide to put Spanky back in his ball for the time being. With Spanky stowed away in a flash of red light, you sigh in relief.

You hear a voice from behind. "Hah, lame as usual!" You turn around to see Blue, sister to Gary, sporting a cocky grin and a egotistical stance. You are surprised at the sight. It is if all the girls of the town gathered in one spot. Behind Blue's busty frame stands the other girls of Pallet Town: Yellow, Green and Red. A swirl of sexual desires form in your mind-- oh, the things you would do to these ladies.

"No one wants to see your one eyed Monkey!" Green yells, everyone laughing with her. Some making ewwing noises. You snap back from your thoughts, now feelings something warm in your hands. You look down and see you have whipped out your penis and are stroking it. After noticing your blunder, all of them laugh some more before walking by, butts swaying to the beats of their character. A shiver shoots down your spine. You tuck your penis back into your pants. You need release and you need it fast.

So here you are-- Brown, the lone Bidoof, to traverse the untamed lands of Kanto. With this new start you decide to begin your journey. Now to balance your life as a trainer and sexual master!

[[Pokemon: Gotta Sex 'em all! Kanto Edition| Return]]

[[Category: Pokemon: Gotta Sex 'em all! Kanto Edition]]

Prologue

2014-03-19T14:13:55Z

Trueroman:

Your name is brown. You are a rather-- well unfortunate 16 year old who has found himself the laughing stock of your hometown of Pallet town. So why are you the laughing stock? You are the pervert of new beginnings, the oddball no girl wants to fuck. You are a cancer of sorts on a town where every move you make is noticed and known by all. So what does someone like you do? You get the hell out of dodge.

You have heard of a great trainer named Ash who grew up here. Yeah, you knew the guy. Two years older, two years start on his journey. A prick you remember, a douche bag player who got all the fine bitches of this small, boring community. You don't think there is a girl he didn't touch and, well, you sneaked a peek of his exploits being the peeping Tom you are and there isn't a female here not stamped with his mark. Not even that fine ass mother of his.

But enough about that dick. This story is about you. Brown, the unsung hero of the next batch of kids running off to pursue their dreams. Your dream may be different but the goal may be ultimately be the same. Fame, fortune and a chance to explore beyond the cushy coven here in the middle of nowhere. The best way to do this is to become a Pokemon trainer. Not your most ideal choice but one you hope to grow into. That is why kids leave this town and will be for you too. At least that is the half of it. You also want to get massive tail, head and other sexy, kinky experiences to remember. You want to make your mark on the women of Kanto and Pallet Town is just the beginning.

So here you are outside Professor Oaks lab, hidden in the back of a crowd of kids your age keeping your distance. Oak comes to the door and asks everyone to line up. So you do so-- at the back of the line. An hour passes, many people, most from Pallet town, others from neighboring cities, leave with their new gain Pokemon excited and wide eyed. You finally reach the door and enter the lab. The last guy in front if you trudges off, a bit more somber to the rest. You approach the Professor who doesn't notice you, lost in a wooden chart pressed near his face.

You give a slight cough to hopefully gain his attention but it falls on deaf ears. Again, louder. Nothing. Finally you just knock a beaker off the table and falls to the ground breaking into many pieces. Oak spins around and his eyes turn into slits. "Oh. It's you Brown." He doesn't seem to happy to see you. "Fuck off will ya."

Oak spins around and walks to his desk where he takes a seat. You stand akwardly not moving. Oak ignores you for a few minutes but eventually, irritated speaks up. "What?"

"I-- I've come for a Pokemon."

His eyebrows perked up, "You? A Pokemon? You can't be serious."

You are very much serious, "Yes. I am."

You continue to stand there being an unwanted decoration in the lab. But the Professor can sense your unsual determination to get what you want so he lets out a sigh and slumps in his seat. "Fine, but I don't really have much to choose from."

"What do you got?"

"This," He reaches into the drawer lined underneath the desk. He tosses the ball towards you, you barely catching it as it nearly slips from your fingers. You hold the ball up to your eyes and see a label printed on it. It reads Spanky.

"Spanky?" You asked curiously.

"Yes he is a Mankey. Mankies generally are aggressive, rather obnoxious Pokemon but quite frankly this one takes the cake." He looks back down at his work scattered on the desk, "You seem a perfect match."

You discard the insult. "Thanks."

He just waved it off, "Don't thank me, you really shouldn't. Now get lost kid. Ashes fine ass mom is coming over to visit. Gonna spelunk her cave if ya know what I mean."

You take that as your key and walk out the door.

You are now outside. It it about noon. You decide to see your new Pokemon, perhaps he is a chick magnet. Your mind wanders off but you snap back to reality. You toss the rather dusty pokeball on the ground. It opens with a thud, a beam of white light flashing. What it unleashes is something not expect. You thought it would be a cute, 'aww' inspiring Pokemon or something tough and powerful. Instead, what you behold, is a mangy, one eyed monkey like creature with a snarl on its face. It has an eye patch and a scar running over its bad eye. It glares at you with its one good eye, then, without warning he punches you square in the face, knocking you on the ground.

You cling to your face, which is already swelling up. "What the hell!?" You scream, checking the inside of your mouth for possible bleeding. Luckily there is none. It just growls at you and beats its patchy, mangled chest. You get back on your feet, keeping some distance in case of anymore wild swings. "That wasn't nice..."

He spits a glob of mucus that it gnarled from the back of its throat, hitting you in the eye. This is going to be more of a pain than you thought. You decide to put Spanky back in his ball for the time being. With Spanky stowed away in a flash of red light, you sigh in relief.

You hear a voice from behind. "Hah, lame as usual!" You turn around to see Blue, sister to Gary, sporting a cocky grin and a egotistical stance. You are surprised at the sight. It is if all the girls of the town gathered in one spot. Behind Blue's busty frame stands the other girls of Pallet Town: Yellow, Green and Red. A swirl of sexual desires form in your mind-- oh, the things you would do to these ladies.

"No one wants to see your one eyed Monkey!" Green yells, everyone laughing with her. Some making ewwing noises. You snap back from your thoughts, now feelings something warm in your hands. You look down and see you have whipped out your penis and are stroking it. After noticing your blunder, all of them laugh some more before walking by, butts swaying to the beats of their character. A shiver shoots down your spine. You tuck your penis back into your pants. You need release and you need it fast.

So here you are-- Brown, the lone Bidoof, to traverse the untamed lands of Kanto. With this new start you decide to begin your journey. Now to balance your life as a trainer and sexual master!

[[Category: Pokemon: Gotta Sex 'em all! Kanto Edition]]

Sexedex

2014-03-19T14:12:19Z

Trueroman:

'''Episode one- A Mime in a Hard Place!'''

*Ashes fine ass mom (Bedroom)

*Ashes fine ass mom (Billard Room)

*Ashes fine ass mom (Bathroom)

*Ashes fine ass mom (sauna)

*Mr. Mime (You don't wanna know)

*[[Pokemon: Gotta Sex 'em all! Kanto Edition| Main Page]]

[[Category: Pokemon: Gotta Sex 'em all! Kanto Edition]]

Sexedex

2014-03-19T14:11:53Z

Trueroman:

Episode one- A Mime in a Hard Place!

*Ashes fine ass mom (Bedroom)

*Ashes fine ass mom (Billard Room)

*Ashes fine ass mom (Bathroom)

*Ashes fine ass mom (sauna)

*Mr. Mime (You don't wanna know)

*[[Pokemon: Gotta Sex 'em all! Kanto Edition| Main Page]]

[[Category: Pokemon: Gotta Sex 'em all! Kanto Edition]]

Sexedex

2014-03-19T14:10:12Z

Trueroman:

Episode one- A Mime in a Hard Place!

*Ashes fine ass mom (Bedroom)

*Ashes fine ass mom (Billard Room)

*Ashes fine ass mom (Bathroom)

*Ashes fine ass mom (sauna)

*Mr. Mime (You don't wanna know)

*[[Pokemon: Gotta Sex 'em All! Kanto Edition| Main Page]]

[[Category: Pokemon: Gotta Sex 'em All! Kanto Edition]]

Sexedex

2014-03-19T14:08:59Z

Trueroman: Created page with 'Episode one- A Mime in a Hard Place! *Ashes fine ass mom (Bedroom) *Ashes fine ass mom (Billard Room) *Ashes fine ass mom (Bathroom) *Ashes fine ass mom (sauna) *Mr. Mime (…'

Episode one- A Mime in a Hard Place!

*Ashes fine ass mom (Bedroom)

*Ashes fine ass mom (Billard Room)

*Ashes fine ass mom (Bathroom)

*Ashes fine ass mom (sauna)

*Mr. Mime (You don't wanna know)

*[[Pokemon: Gotta Sex 'Em All! Kanto Edition| Main Page]]

[[Category: Pokemon: Gotta Sex 'Em All! Kanto Edition]]

Pokemon: Gotta Sex 'em all! Kanto Edition

2014-03-19T14:04:08Z

Trueroman:

'''Game Objectives: This game is split up in episodic adventures that work as standalone events. Your goal in each adventure is overcome situations to get what you desire most. Sex. Straight up Sex. You can of course play it however you like, but the real test is to find all the ways to get the job done. In the stories will be varying ways to get possible targets so keep an eye out! These will be listed in the Sexedex and on the intro to every episode. To find them though is your challenge, but they will be marked when you encounter them in the story. So take off your pants get comfortable and grab those pokeballs! Gotta Sex 'em All!'''

So where to start? You have three options to get you going. If you are a first time reader check out the prologue. It introduces the character and what he is all about. Course if you have read the title I'm sure you already have a clear picture in mind. Still, read it.

Second, you have the Hub. This is where the meat of this story takes place. Here you will pick from a series of locations which in turn will take you to 'episodes' where an adventure path will take place telling a chapter in Brown's life, detailing the exploits to wet his whistle.

Finally, you have the Sexedex. This is a catalog of all the sexy time that can be encountered. Its a check list if you will that I will fill up as more episodes are completed. Do you have what it takes to encounter them all?

[[Pallet Town/First Steps| Go outside]]

[[Prologue| Prologue]]

[[Hub Menu| Hub]]

[[Sexedex| Sexedex]]

[[Category: Pokemon: Gotta Sex 'em all! Kanto Edition]]

Pokemon: Gotta Sex 'em all! Kanto Edition

2014-03-19T14:01:31Z

Trueroman:

'''Game Objectives: This game is split up in episodic adventures that work as standalone events. Your goal in each adventure is overcome situations to get what you desire most. Sex. Straight up Sex. You can of course play it however follow along however you like, but the real test is to find all the ways to get the job done. These will be listed in the Sexedex and on the intro to every episode. So take off your pants get comfortable and grab those pokeballs! Gotta Sex 'em All!'''

So where to start? You have three options to get you going. If you are a first time reader check out the prologue. It introduces the character and what he is all about. Course if you have read the title I'm sure you already have a clear picture in mind. Still, read on.

Second, you have the Hub. This is where the meat of this story takes place. Here you will pick from a series of locations which in turn will take you to 'episodes' where an adventure path will take place telling a chapter in Brown's life, detailing the exploits to wet his whistle.

Finally, you have the Sexedex. This is a catalog of all the sexy time that can be encountered. Its a check list if you will that I will fill up as more episodes are completed. Do you have what it takes to encounter them all?

[[Pallet Town/First Steps| Go outside]]

[[Prologue| Prologue]]

[[Hub Menu| Hub]]

[[Sexedex| Sexedex]]

[[Category: Pokemon: Gotta Sex 'em all! Kanto Edition]]

Prologue

2014-03-19T13:56:10Z

Trueroman: Created page with 'Your name is brown. You are a rather-- well unfortunate 16 year old who has found himself the laughing stock of your hometown of Pallet town. So why are you the laughing stock? Y…'

Pokemon: Gotta Sex 'em all! Kanto Edition

2014-03-19T13:54:37Z

Trueroman:

Your name is brown. You are a rather-- well unfortunate 16 year old who has found himself the laughing stock of your hometown of Pallet town.
So why are you the laughing stock? You are the pervert of new beginnings, the oddball no girl wants to fuck. You are a cancer of sorts on a town where every move you make is noticed and known by all. So what does someone like you do? You get the hell out of dodge.

You have heard of a great trainer named Ash who grew up here. Yeah, you knew the guy. Two years older, two years start on his journey.
A prick you remember, a douche bag player who got all the fine bitches of this small, boring community. You don't think there is a girl he didn't touch and, well, you sneaked a peek of his exploits being the peeping Tom you are and there isn't a female here not stamped with his mark. Not even that fine ass mother of his.

But enough about that dick. This story is about you. Brown, the unsung hero of the next batch of kids running off to pursue their dreams. Your dream may be different but the goal may be ultimately be the same. Fame, fortune and a chance to explore beyond the cushy coven here in the middle of nowhere. The best way to do this is to become a Pokemon trainer. Not your most ideal choice but one you hope to grow into. That is why kids leave this town and will be for you too. At least that is the half of it. You also want to get massive tail, head and other sexy, kinky experiences to remember. You want to make your mark on the women of Kanto and Pallet Town is just the beginning.

So here you are outside Professor Oaks lab, hidden in the back of a crowd of kids your age keeping your distance. Oak comes to the door and asks everyone to line up. So you do so-- at the back of the line. An hour passes, many people, most from Pallet town, others from neighboring cities, leave with their new gain Pokemon excited and wide eyed. You finally reach the door and enter the lab. The last guy in front if you trudges off, a bit more somber to the rest. You approach the Professor who doesn't notice you, lost in a wooden chart pressed near his face.

You give a slight cough to hopefully gain his attention but it falls on deaf ears. Again, louder. Nothing. Finally you just knock a beaker off the table and falls to the ground breaking into many pieces. Oak spins around and his eyes turn into slits. "Oh. It's you Brown."
He doesn't seem to happy to see you. "Fuck off will ya."

Oak spins around and walks to his desk where he takes a seat. You stand akwardly not moving. Oak ignores you for a few minutes but eventually, irritated speaks up. "What?"

"I-- I've come for a Pokemon."

His eyebrows perked up, "You? A Pokemon? You can't be serious."

You are very much serious, "Yes. I am."

You continue to stand there being an unwanted decoration in the lab. But the Professor can sense your unsual determination to get what you want so he lets out a sigh and slumps in his seat. "Fine, but I don't really have much to choose from."

"What do you got?"

"This," He reaches into the drawer lined underneath the desk. He tosses the ball towards you, you barely catching it as it nearly slips from your fingers. You hold the ball up to your eyes and see a label printed on it. It reads Spanky.

"Spanky?" You asked curiously.

"Yes he is a Mankey. Mankies generally are aggressive, rather obnoxious Pokemon but quite frankly this one takes the cake." He looks back down at his work scattered on the desk, "You seem a perfect match."

You discard the insult. "Thanks."

He just waved it off, "Don't thank me, you really shouldn't. Now get lost kid. Ashes fine ass mom is coming over to visit. Gonna spelunk her cave if ya know what I mean."

You take that as your key and walk out the door.

So where to start? You have three options to get you going. If you are a first time reader check out the prologue. It introduces the character and what he is all about. Course if you have read the title I'm sure you already have a clear picture in mind. Still, read on.

Second, you have the Hub. This is where the meat of this story takes place. Here you will pick from a series of locations which in turn will take you to 'episodes' where an adventure path will take place telling a chapter in Brown's life, detailing the exploits to wet his whistle.

Finally, you have the Sexedex. This is a catalog of all the sexy time that can be encountered. Its a check list if you will that I will fill up as more episodes are completed. Do you have what it takes to encounter them all?

[[Pallet Town/First Steps| Go outside]]

[[Prologue| Prologue]]

[[Hub Menu| Hub]]

[[Sexedex| Sexedex]]

[[Category: Pokemon: Gotta Sex 'em all! Kanto Edition]]

Pokemon: Gotta Sex 'em all! Kanto Edition

2014-03-19T13:45:56Z

Trueroman:

This is the [[Introduction| Introduction]] and set up of the game.

[[Category: Pokemon: Gotta Sex 'em all! Kanto Edition]]

Your name is brown. You are a rather-- well unfortunate 16 year old who has found himself the laughing stock of your hometown of Pallet town.
So why are you the laughing stock? You are the pervert of new beginnings, the oddball no girl wants to fuck. You are a cancer of sorts on a town where every move you make is noticed and known by all. So what does someone like you do? You get the hell out of dodge.

You have heard of a great trainer named Ash who grew up here. Yeah, you knew the guy. Two years older, two years start on his journey.
A prick you remember, a douche bag player who got all the fine bitches of this small, boring community. You don't think there is a girl he didn't touch and, well, you sneaked a peek of his exploits being the peeping Tom you are and there isn't a female here not stamped with his mark. Not even that fine ass mother of his.

But enough about that dick. This story is about you. Brown, the unsung hero of the next batch of kids running off to pursue their dreams. Your dream may be different but the goal may be ultimately be the same. Fame, fortune and a chance to explore beyond the cushy coven here in the middle of nowhere. The best way to do this is to become a Pokemon trainer. Not your most ideal choice but one you hope to grow into. That is why kids leave this town and will be for you too. At least that is the half of it. You also want to get massive tail, head and other sexy, kinky experiences to remember. You want to make your mark on the women of Kanto and Pallet Town is just the beginning.

So here you are outside Professor Oaks lab, hidden in the back of a crowd of kids your age keeping your distance. Oak comes to the door and asks everyone to line up. So you do so-- at the back of the line. An hour passes, many people, most from Pallet town, others from neighboring cities, leave with their new gain Pokemon excited and wide eyed. You finally reach the door and enter the lab. The last guy in front if you trudges off, a bit more somber to the rest. You approach the Professor who doesn't notice you, lost in a wooden chart pressed near his face.

You give a slight cough to hopefully gain his attention but it falls on deaf ears. Again, louder. Nothing. Finally you just knock a beaker off the table and falls to the ground breaking into many pieces. Oak spins around and his eyes turn into slits. "Oh. It's you Brown."
He doesn't seem to happy to see you. "Fuck off will ya."

Oak spins around and walks to his desk where he takes a seat. You stand akwardly not moving. Oak ignores you for a few minutes but eventually, irritated speaks up. "What?"

"I-- I've come for a Pokemon."

His eyebrows perked up, "You? A Pokemon? You can't be serious."

You are very much serious, "Yes. I am."

You continue to stand there being an unwanted decoration in the lab. But the Professor can sense your unsual determination to get what you want so he lets out a sigh and slumps in his seat. "Fine, but I don't really have much to choose from."

"What do you got?"

"This," He reaches into the drawer lined underneath the desk. He tosses the ball towards you, you barely catching it as it nearly slips from your fingers. You hold the ball up to your eyes and see a label printed on it. It reads Spanky.

"Spanky?" You asked curiously.

"Yes he is a Mankey. Mankies generally are aggressive, rather obnoxious Pokemon but quite frankly this one takes the cake." He looks back down at his work scattered on the desk, "You seem a perfect match."

You discard the insult. "Thanks."

He just waved it off, "Don't thank me, you really shouldn't. Now get lost kid. Ashes fine ass mom is coming over to visit. Gonna spelunk her cave if ya know what I mean."

You take that as your key and walk out the door.

[[Pallet Town/First Steps| Go outside]]

[[Category: Pokemon: Gotta Sex 'em all! Kanto Edition]]

Pokemon: Gotta Sex 'em all! Kanto Edition

2014-03-19T13:44:30Z

Trueroman:

This is the [[Introduction| Introduction]] and set up of the game.

Your name is brown. You are a rather-- well unfortunate 16 year old who has found himself the laughing stock of your hometown of Pallet town.
So why are you the laughing stock? You are the pervert of new beginnings, the oddball no girl wants to fuck. You are a cancer of sorts on a town where every move you make is noticed and known by all. So what does someone like you do? You get the hell out of dodge.

You have heard of a great trainer named Ash who grew up here. Yeah, you knew the guy. Two years older, two years start on his journey.
A prick you remember, a douche bag player who got all the fine bitches of this small, boring community. You don't think there is a girl he didn't touch and, well, you sneaked a peek of his exploits being the peeping Tom you are and there isn't a female here not stamped with his mark. Not even that fine ass mother of his.

But enough about that dick. This story is about you. Brown, the unsung hero of the next batch of kids running off to pursue their dreams. Your dream may be different but the goal may be ultimately be the same. Fame, fortune and a chance to explore beyond the cushy coven here in the middle of nowhere. The best way to do this is to become a Pokemon trainer. Not your most ideal choice but one you hope to grow into. That is why kids leave this town and will be for you too. At least that is the half of it. You also want to get massive tail, head and other sexy, kinky experiences to remember. You want to make your mark on the women of Kanto and Pallet Town is just the beginning.

So here you are outside Professor Oaks lab, hidden in the back of a crowd of kids your age keeping your distance. Oak comes to the door and asks everyone to line up. So you do so-- at the back of the line. An hour passes, many people, most from Pallet town, others from neighboring cities, leave with their new gain Pokemon excited and wide eyed. You finally reach the door and enter the lab. The last guy in front if you trudges off, a bit more somber to the rest. You approach the Professor who doesn't notice you, lost in a wooden chart pressed near his face.

You give a slight cough to hopefully gain his attention but it falls on deaf ears. Again, louder. Nothing. Finally you just knock a beaker off the table and falls to the ground breaking into many pieces. Oak spins around and his eyes turn into slits. "Oh. It's you Brown."
He doesn't seem to happy to see you. "Fuck off will ya."

Oak spins around and walks to his desk where he takes a seat. You stand akwardly not moving. Oak ignores you for a few minutes but eventually, irritated speaks up. "What?"

"I-- I've come for a Pokemon."

His eyebrows perked up, "You? A Pokemon? You can't be serious."

You are very much serious, "Yes. I am."

You continue to stand there being an unwanted decoration in the lab. But the Professor can sense your unsual determination to get what you want so he lets out a sigh and slumps in his seat. "Fine, but I don't really have much to choose from."

"What do you got?"

"This," He reaches into the drawer lined underneath the desk. He tosses the ball towards you, you barely catching it as it nearly slips from your fingers. You hold the ball up to your eyes and see a label printed on it. It reads Spanky.

"Spanky?" You asked curiously.

"Yes he is a Mankey. Mankies generally are aggressive, rather obnoxious Pokemon but quite frankly this one takes the cake." He looks back down at his work scattered on the desk, "You seem a perfect match."

You discard the insult. "Thanks."

He just waved it off, "Don't thank me, you really shouldn't. Now get lost kid. Ashes fine ass mom is coming over to visit. Gonna spelunk her cave if ya know what I mean."

You take that as your key and walk out the door.

[[Pallet Town/First Steps| Go outside]]

[[Category: Pokemon: Gotta Sex 'em all! Kanto Edition]]

User talk:Trueroman

2014-03-19T13:39:50Z

Trueroman:

{{warn1}} --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 15:06, 15 March 2014 (UTC)

You need to put options on pages, or else it is not a Create Your Own Adventure. If you are unsure what options you want to put, at least put a note so readers know you will add options later. Otherwise, the pages will be deleted. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 15:18, 15 March 2014 (UTC)

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I notice you are writing alot. That is pretty good ^.^ Always nice to see people don't just write a couple pages, then never work on their story again. I have noticed though that there are many grammar errors. It happens. I have enough of my own issues. But, if I may recommend: I have found it is better to put it in Word or something, then run a grammar/spelling check. At least the most obvious mistakes are caught then.

I also notice you tend to make your links slightly different. It probably isn't a problem, I don't know, but I know the standard way is:

<nowiki>*[[Next path]]</nowiki> 
<nowiki>*[[Different path]]</nowiki>

The <nowiki>*</nowiki> in front will make it appear with the outline sort of form.

*Like this
*and this

Then it is more consistent. Just wanted to mention it. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:46, 19 March 2014 (UTC)

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lol, well, 1 pointer I guess. Click my name and put it on my talk page, otherwise I will only see it if I paid attention to the recently edited logs. The pages will be like this: [[User talk:DirtyMeStoryTime]]

User talk:DirtyMeStoryTime

2014-03-19T13:39:05Z

Trueroman:

Thanks for the advice. When I write I tend to jot everything down then go back and correct my spelling. Usually this isn't a problem when I right on Word then transfer it over to wherever I am posting it online. Since this website is linked based and I'm kind of just throwing ideas as I go along, I plan on going back to correct spelling and grammar when I get a decent amount written through a couple of path choices.

I am still learning the site, I tried the tutorial and while it explains it well when it comes to computer terms I find it easier to experiment. I was clicking the Ab button on the tool bar to put the brackets, but I will start adding the * beforehand. Please share any other tips if you like :)

Yeah I was fiddling with how you did that. I figured it out though, thanks.

[[User:Trueroman| Trueroman]] 9:36 AM 19th March 2014
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Wow, thanks for the compliment on me complimenting someone else, even though you weren't the one I complimented... well, now this sentence sounds really wrong *lol*. Anyway, thanks for noticing and keep up the good work. Though I have not yet read [[Dirty Me]], I will soon change that. - [[User:Wassersaeufer|Wassersaeufer]] 14:27 18th March 2014 (UTC)

From MFCmaster123
Thanks for your help with my Bold font problem.
Writ this day 17 March, 2014
---
To mods:

Sorry, I made a n00b mistake in my first couple linking pages.
Please delete the "I'm just a boy" page.
I am also not sure if I moved the page "I'm just a girl" correctly. Please feel free to fix or let me know how to fix if I did not.
All fixed, thanks Platypus ^.^
--[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 13:10, 21 February 2014 (UTC)

Making a link log page or a story notes page for your story is acceptable. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:48, 21 February 2014 (UTC)

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I think your story "Dirty Me" is very interesting as of yet. I don't think I've ever read a CYOA involving elements of tragedy written from a realistic ("Not the fun fantasy stuff" as you wrote yourself) point of view, but yours looks very promising. I hope to see more of it, and wish you the best of luck with your writing! --[[User:ArthurKung|ArthurKung]] 21:53, 24 February 2014 (UTC)

Not all of it will be tragedy. I write erotica, as well as other things, and have some of my short works for sale. It will have alot of sex and sexuality in it. Sadly, many elements come from my own life, and I was not...the most well adjusted or confident person growing up. It will just be more realistic than much of the stuff on here. You try to walk around town naked in stories on here, you just get to have lots of sex. You try to walk around town naked in real life, you will end up in a jail cell, and probably with a record for the rest of your life. I want to keep it plausible, believable. I will sketch out background stories, these will not really branch, just "Dream about x, remember y" type of thing, that will actually have elements from my real life, either in part, or whole. I will probably include me being raped, not once, but twice, but not sure if I want the character to go through it, or remember it. I will probably have how I was molested, and how that lead to the character/me that you see here. I have been beaten, and will probably include issues around that also. At the heart, my story will be a growing up story with many of my specialty writing, erotica. I already have included how I/the character, ended up on probation, and my/the characters, first time having sex. There will be more of that. Some pleasant, some horrifying. I just hope people can connect to my stories, written here, my blog, for sale on Amazon, etc. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:56, 25 February 2014 (UTC)

You're doing fine with the organizing, and you can move +Infinity to the I's if you want. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

To be honest, I haven't yet looked into your story. So I have no basis for an opinion. I will, however, look into it soon. I note that [[User:ArthurKung|ArthurKung]] likes it, and he's usually a pretty good judge. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

I haven't read any of the story yet, but read your informational page. First off, I'm very sorry about the bad things that have actually happened to you, and I hope your life turns out better in the future. Second, I'm happy you've had some fun and good experiences as well, and I hope you have more of them. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

OK, I've read what you have so far (I read very fast.) I'm quite impressed. You're an excellent writer. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Thanks for the heads-up. Like I said, I'm just sorry that all those negative things happened to you. I know you don't want sympathy, but I will say that I hope from now on your life is filled with goodness, light, and a loving partner who cares about you. And that you have lots of loving, tender, consensual, enjoyable sexual experiences. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Are you doing fine? No, you're doing better than that. It's okay for some of your pages to be works in progress. You've contributed a lot, not just to your own story (which is very well written, btw), but to the site as whole by assisting with some of the overdue cleanup. Don't worry so much and keep on keeping on as you've been doing. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:48, 3 March 2014 (UTC)

I have seen some of the elements from your blog appear. I haven't done much additional commenting on it, but what is there to say that I haven't said already? I wish I could erase some of the really horrible stuff that happened to you, and I hope your husband is always warm and loving and kind and ensures you enjoy sweet, tender sex. (Women/girls being abused always has been a trigger of powerful emotions in me: anger at the abuser, and deep sorrow and an urge to comfort the woman who has been abused.) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Nothing you haven't already heard. You're a very skilled writer and I'm enjoying your developing story. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Been there... just try to relax. Maybe read a different story for a few minutes to take your conscious mind off it, then when you feel inspired, return to the story... -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

No, I actually was offline for a couple of days. It wasn't your imagination. I'll poke around your story and check out the new links. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

==hidden text==
Don't mind me, just noticed by the changelog that it looked like you were looking for a way to essentially hide text that is only viewable through the edit window, correct? --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 09:22, 7 March 2014 (UTC)

I'm not sure what you want your hidden text template to do, but I can see where it's going wrong. You're referencing hidden text within the code for the hidden text template, which is what's generating the loop error.

If you want invisible text, the easy way is to change the font color to white.

<nowiki> invisible </nowiki>

produces:
 invisible 

You can see the text by painting over it with your cursosr.
--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:39, 7 March 2014 (UTC)

Got it. You're trying to build a collapsible, nested table. I'm not sure how to build such a thing here. The wiki markup language available is somewhat limited. I'll play around some and see if I can't come up with something. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 13:31, 7 March 2014 (UTC)

Ah, I see what you're going for. Like Platypus guessed, it sounds like a nested table with collapsible elements. Almost kinda "flowchart-y" in nature. I found the syntax for a nested table at an external wiki (Aberwiki, at their MediaWiki User's Guide: Using Tables page), but as far as collapsibility goes, there's a javascript extension/gadget that exists (Manual:Collapsible elements on the actual main Mediawiki site), but isn't implemented in CYOA's Common.js section. Like Platypus said, the markup around here is really barebones around here. I ''think'' it can be done, but it might require some playing with before it works. Sorry for the vagueness as to where the two syntax pieces I found are, it's impossible to post two external links in the same post without doing one, waiting 20 minutes, then doing the other. Tedious, but it does prevent spambots from flooding us as badly as they did before... --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 14:10, 7 March 2014 (UTC)

Javascript matters should probably be brought up with Platypus, since he'd be the only one able to add your code into CYOA's Common.js page. o: --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 16:53, 8 March 2014 (UTC)

Actually, Javascript matters would have to go to RobKohr. He doesn't have the daily presence here that I have, but he's the site administrator/owner. I'm the sysop, which is a rank I own at RobKohr's discretion. He makes the decisions about site functionality and features.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 19:58, 8 March 2014 (UTC)

==Blazetempest==
It was nice of you to try cleaning up Blazetempest's poor writing, but given the overwhelming number of poor postings that show up in my stories, I feel I have to be firm with these writers. If they can't read the warning that specifies that poor writing will be deleted, then they really shouldn't be posting. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 19:58, 8 March 2014 (UTC)

==warnings==
If you spot someone leaving off the categories before I do, by all means, feel free to use the warning templates to remind them. It is a relief to not have to do everything that needs doing around here. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 09:20, 12 March 2014 (UTC)

==egrizzly==
Thanks for the heads up. 'Funny' vandals usually only post once then disappear, but I'll give him a warning and if he makes another 'joke' edit, I'll block him. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 14:36, 13 March 2014 (UTC)

== Nah, it's okay ==

I respect your concern for the site, and i guess i was being slightly bitchy about it. People like you are the ones people respect in real life.

== Reply to your comment ==

Just here to say, that I read a bit of your story and I like it. Also, if this isn't too much to ask, I thought maybe you could help me with my writing skills, since I have close to zero experience about writing about sex and stuff. But if you don't want to, I understand. I'll try and read as much as I can on the rest of your story next time, and try to give you a full review.
--[[User:Chaomaster|Chaomaster]] 22:00 15 March 2014

==Number of views==
It's true that the site used to automatically display the number of views on every page you pulled up. It's just one of those things that stopped functioning. It would be nice to have that back, since every user is always curious if their work is being read. Site-functionality issues have to go to RobKohr, not me. He's the only one who could restore that automatic function.

I'll experiment with variations on <nowiki>{{NUMBEROFVIEWS}}</nowiki> and see if I can't come up something. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:35, 18 March 2014 (UTC)

I've been kicking around the idea of adding to the warn1 template to include those links, so I think we'll keep it with your amendment. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 02:26, 19 March 2014 (UTC)

I'm sure there are ways that the look of the site could be improved. The site ''is'' improved from some of the older formats that it had. I promise to be openminded about any suggestions you might have. Anything that would involve changing the underlying wiki code or wiki functionality would have to go through RobKohr, of course. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:40, 19 March 2014 (UTC)

User talk:DirtyMeStoryTime

2014-03-19T13:36:45Z

Trueroman:

Thanks for the advice. When I write I tend to jot everything down then go back and correct my spelling. Usually this isn't a problem when I right on Word then transfer it over to wherever I am posting it online. Since this website is linked based and I'm kind of just throwing ideas as I go along, I plan on going back to correct spelling and grammar when I get a decent amount written through a couple of path choices.

I am still learning the site, I tried the tutorial and while it explains it well when it comes to computer terms I find it easier to experiment. I was clicking the Ab button on the tool bar to put the brackets, but I will start adding the * beforehand. Please share any other tips if you like :)

[[User:Trueroman| Trueroman]] 9:36 AM 19th March 2014
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Wow, thanks for the compliment on me complimenting someone else, even though you weren't the one I complimented... well, now this sentence sounds really wrong *lol*. Anyway, thanks for noticing and keep up the good work. Though I have not yet read [[Dirty Me]], I will soon change that. - [[User:Wassersaeufer|Wassersaeufer]] 14:27 18th March 2014 (UTC)

From MFCmaster123
Thanks for your help with my Bold font problem.
Writ this day 17 March, 2014
---
To mods:

Sorry, I made a n00b mistake in my first couple linking pages.
Please delete the "I'm just a boy" page.
I am also not sure if I moved the page "I'm just a girl" correctly. Please feel free to fix or let me know how to fix if I did not.
All fixed, thanks Platypus ^.^
--[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 13:10, 21 February 2014 (UTC)

Making a link log page or a story notes page for your story is acceptable. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:48, 21 February 2014 (UTC)

----
I think your story "Dirty Me" is very interesting as of yet. I don't think I've ever read a CYOA involving elements of tragedy written from a realistic ("Not the fun fantasy stuff" as you wrote yourself) point of view, but yours looks very promising. I hope to see more of it, and wish you the best of luck with your writing! --[[User:ArthurKung|ArthurKung]] 21:53, 24 February 2014 (UTC)

Not all of it will be tragedy. I write erotica, as well as other things, and have some of my short works for sale. It will have alot of sex and sexuality in it. Sadly, many elements come from my own life, and I was not...the most well adjusted or confident person growing up. It will just be more realistic than much of the stuff on here. You try to walk around town naked in stories on here, you just get to have lots of sex. You try to walk around town naked in real life, you will end up in a jail cell, and probably with a record for the rest of your life. I want to keep it plausible, believable. I will sketch out background stories, these will not really branch, just "Dream about x, remember y" type of thing, that will actually have elements from my real life, either in part, or whole. I will probably include me being raped, not once, but twice, but not sure if I want the character to go through it, or remember it. I will probably have how I was molested, and how that lead to the character/me that you see here. I have been beaten, and will probably include issues around that also. At the heart, my story will be a growing up story with many of my specialty writing, erotica. I already have included how I/the character, ended up on probation, and my/the characters, first time having sex. There will be more of that. Some pleasant, some horrifying. I just hope people can connect to my stories, written here, my blog, for sale on Amazon, etc. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:56, 25 February 2014 (UTC)

You're doing fine with the organizing, and you can move +Infinity to the I's if you want. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

To be honest, I haven't yet looked into your story. So I have no basis for an opinion. I will, however, look into it soon. I note that [[User:ArthurKung|ArthurKung]] likes it, and he's usually a pretty good judge. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

I haven't read any of the story yet, but read your informational page. First off, I'm very sorry about the bad things that have actually happened to you, and I hope your life turns out better in the future. Second, I'm happy you've had some fun and good experiences as well, and I hope you have more of them. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

OK, I've read what you have so far (I read very fast.) I'm quite impressed. You're an excellent writer. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Thanks for the heads-up. Like I said, I'm just sorry that all those negative things happened to you. I know you don't want sympathy, but I will say that I hope from now on your life is filled with goodness, light, and a loving partner who cares about you. And that you have lots of loving, tender, consensual, enjoyable sexual experiences. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Are you doing fine? No, you're doing better than that. It's okay for some of your pages to be works in progress. You've contributed a lot, not just to your own story (which is very well written, btw), but to the site as whole by assisting with some of the overdue cleanup. Don't worry so much and keep on keeping on as you've been doing. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:48, 3 March 2014 (UTC)

I have seen some of the elements from your blog appear. I haven't done much additional commenting on it, but what is there to say that I haven't said already? I wish I could erase some of the really horrible stuff that happened to you, and I hope your husband is always warm and loving and kind and ensures you enjoy sweet, tender sex. (Women/girls being abused always has been a trigger of powerful emotions in me: anger at the abuser, and deep sorrow and an urge to comfort the woman who has been abused.) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Nothing you haven't already heard. You're a very skilled writer and I'm enjoying your developing story. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Been there... just try to relax. Maybe read a different story for a few minutes to take your conscious mind off it, then when you feel inspired, return to the story... -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

No, I actually was offline for a couple of days. It wasn't your imagination. I'll poke around your story and check out the new links. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

==hidden text==
Don't mind me, just noticed by the changelog that it looked like you were looking for a way to essentially hide text that is only viewable through the edit window, correct? --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 09:22, 7 March 2014 (UTC)

I'm not sure what you want your hidden text template to do, but I can see where it's going wrong. You're referencing hidden text within the code for the hidden text template, which is what's generating the loop error.

If you want invisible text, the easy way is to change the font color to white.

<nowiki> invisible </nowiki>

produces:
 invisible 

You can see the text by painting over it with your cursosr.
--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:39, 7 March 2014 (UTC)

Got it. You're trying to build a collapsible, nested table. I'm not sure how to build such a thing here. The wiki markup language available is somewhat limited. I'll play around some and see if I can't come up with something. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 13:31, 7 March 2014 (UTC)

Ah, I see what you're going for. Like Platypus guessed, it sounds like a nested table with collapsible elements. Almost kinda "flowchart-y" in nature. I found the syntax for a nested table at an external wiki (Aberwiki, at their MediaWiki User's Guide: Using Tables page), but as far as collapsibility goes, there's a javascript extension/gadget that exists (Manual:Collapsible elements on the actual main Mediawiki site), but isn't implemented in CYOA's Common.js section. Like Platypus said, the markup around here is really barebones around here. I ''think'' it can be done, but it might require some playing with before it works. Sorry for the vagueness as to where the two syntax pieces I found are, it's impossible to post two external links in the same post without doing one, waiting 20 minutes, then doing the other. Tedious, but it does prevent spambots from flooding us as badly as they did before... --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 14:10, 7 March 2014 (UTC)

Javascript matters should probably be brought up with Platypus, since he'd be the only one able to add your code into CYOA's Common.js page. o: --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 16:53, 8 March 2014 (UTC)

Actually, Javascript matters would have to go to RobKohr. He doesn't have the daily presence here that I have, but he's the site administrator/owner. I'm the sysop, which is a rank I own at RobKohr's discretion. He makes the decisions about site functionality and features.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 19:58, 8 March 2014 (UTC)

==Blazetempest==
It was nice of you to try cleaning up Blazetempest's poor writing, but given the overwhelming number of poor postings that show up in my stories, I feel I have to be firm with these writers. If they can't read the warning that specifies that poor writing will be deleted, then they really shouldn't be posting. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 19:58, 8 March 2014 (UTC)

==warnings==
If you spot someone leaving off the categories before I do, by all means, feel free to use the warning templates to remind them. It is a relief to not have to do everything that needs doing around here. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 09:20, 12 March 2014 (UTC)

==egrizzly==
Thanks for the heads up. 'Funny' vandals usually only post once then disappear, but I'll give him a warning and if he makes another 'joke' edit, I'll block him. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 14:36, 13 March 2014 (UTC)

== Nah, it's okay ==

I respect your concern for the site, and i guess i was being slightly bitchy about it. People like you are the ones people respect in real life.

== Reply to your comment ==

Just here to say, that I read a bit of your story and I like it. Also, if this isn't too much to ask, I thought maybe you could help me with my writing skills, since I have close to zero experience about writing about sex and stuff. But if you don't want to, I understand. I'll try and read as much as I can on the rest of your story next time, and try to give you a full review.
--[[User:Chaomaster|Chaomaster]] 22:00 15 March 2014

==Number of views==
It's true that the site used to automatically display the number of views on every page you pulled up. It's just one of those things that stopped functioning. It would be nice to have that back, since every user is always curious if their work is being read. Site-functionality issues have to go to RobKohr, not me. He's the only one who could restore that automatic function.

I'll experiment with variations on <nowiki>{{NUMBEROFVIEWS}}</nowiki> and see if I can't come up something. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:35, 18 March 2014 (UTC)

I've been kicking around the idea of adding to the warn1 template to include those links, so I think we'll keep it with your amendment. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 02:26, 19 March 2014 (UTC)

I'm sure there are ways that the look of the site could be improved. The site ''is'' improved from some of the older formats that it had. I promise to be openminded about any suggestions you might have. Anything that would involve changing the underlying wiki code or wiki functionality would have to go through RobKohr, of course. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:40, 19 March 2014 (UTC)

User:Trueroman

2014-03-19T13:31:38Z

Trueroman: Created page with 'Newcomer looking to improve and have fun with writing.'

Newcomer looking to improve and have fun with writing.

User talk:Trueroman

2014-03-19T13:28:17Z

Trueroman:

{{warn1}} --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 15:06, 15 March 2014 (UTC)

You need to put options on pages, or else it is not a Create Your Own Adventure. If you are unsure what options you want to put, at least put a note so readers know you will add options later. Otherwise, the pages will be deleted. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 15:18, 15 March 2014 (UTC)

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I notice you are writing alot. That is pretty good ^.^ Always nice to see people don't just write a couple pages, then never work on their story again. I have noticed though that there are many grammar errors. It happens. I have enough of my own issues. But, if I may recommend: I have found it is better to put it in Word or something, then run a grammar/spelling check. At least the most obvious mistakes are caught then.

I also notice you tend to make your links slightly different. It probably isn't a problem, I don't know, but I know the standard way is:

<nowiki>*[[Next path]]</nowiki> 
<nowiki>*[[Different path]]</nowiki>

The <nowiki>*</nowiki> in front will make it appear with the outline sort of form.

*Like this
*and this

Then it is more consistent. Just wanted to mention it. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:46, 19 March 2014 (UTC)

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Thanks for the advice. When I write I tend to jot everything down then go back and correct my spelling. Usually this isn't a problem when I right on Word then transfer it over to wherever I am posting it online. Since this website is linked based and I'm kind of just throwing ideas as I go along, I plan on going back to correct spelling and grammar when I get a decent amount written through a couple of path choices.

I am still learning the site, I tried the tutorial and while it explains it well when it comes to computer terms I find it easier to experiment. I was clicking the Ab button on the tool bar to put the brackets, but I will start adding the * beforehand. Do you have any other pointers for someone new here?

User talk:Trueroman

2014-03-19T13:27:37Z

Trueroman:

{{warn1}} --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 15:06, 15 March 2014 (UTC)

You need to put options on pages, or else it is not a Create Your Own Adventure. If you are unsure what options you want to put, at least put a note so readers know you will add options later. Otherwise, the pages will be deleted. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 15:18, 15 March 2014 (UTC)

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I notice you are writing alot. That is pretty good ^.^ Always nice to see people don't just write a couple pages, then never work on their story again. I have noticed though that there are many grammar errors. It happens. I have enough of my own issues. But, if I may recommend: I have found it is better to put it in Word or something, then run a grammar/spelling check. At least the most obvious mistakes are caught then.

I also notice you tend to make your links slightly different. It probably isn't a problem, I don't know, but I know the standard way is:

<nowiki>*[[Next path]]</nowiki> 
<nowiki>*[[Different path]]</nowiki>

The <nowiki>*</nowiki> in front will make it appear with the outline sort of form.

*Like this
*and this

Then it is more consistent. Just wanted to mention it. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:46, 19 March 2014 (UTC)

----
Thanks for the advice. When I write I tend to jot everything down then go back and correct my spelling. Usually this isn't a problem when I right on Word then transfer it over to wherever I am posting it online. Since this website is linked based and I'm kind of just throwing ideas as I go along, I plan on going back to correct spelling and grammar when I get a decent amount written through a couple of path choices.

I am still learning the site, I tried the tutorial and while it explains it well when it comes to computer terms I find it easier to experiment. I was clicking the Ab button on the tool bar to put the brackets, but I will start adding the * beforehand. Do you have any other pointers for someone new here?

Ashes House/Gynecologist

2014-03-18T23:02:18Z

Trueroman:

You try to think of something clever to get you in, nothing really stands out. All you can think about is pounding Ashes fine ass moms pussy. Pussy? Maybe... just maybe...? You clear your throat and make your stance more widen and confident. "I am Ashes fine ass moms Gynecologist."

In a second the door slams in your face. Apparently they don't exist? Who would have thunk. So what is your next plan of attack? Try a different route, leave or take on the door again?

[[Pallet Town/Ashes House/Knock Again| Knock on door again]]

[[Pallet Town/Ashes House/Climb| Climb Vine to second story]]

[[Pallet Town/Ashes House/Backyard| Go to backyard]]

[[Pallet Town/First Steps| Leave]]

[[Category: Pokemon: Gotta Sex 'em all! Kanto Edition]]

Ashes House/Plumber/Pry

2014-03-18T22:42:42Z

Trueroman: Created page with 'You give the door out a tug but it budges to no avail. You even have time to grab other knobs as Mr. Mime slowly walks towards you, a silent cackle growing slowly into a full blo…'

You give the door out a tug but it budges to no avail. You even have time to grab other knobs as Mr. Mime slowly walks towards you, a silent cackle growing slowly into a full blown laughing fit. He is enjoying the chase and you just made it easy. Time is wasted trying to get out. The shadow cast down by the light beaming against Mr. Mime coats you. You freeze in terror not wanting to turn around. The last thing you remember before passing out is two white gloves wrapping around your neck.... and after that when you finally wake up? Well you don't want to know. I will give you a hint though. It's not Ashes fine ass moms ass.

THE END?

Ashes House/Plumber/Hide

2014-03-18T22:36:21Z

Trueroman:

You try to duck and crawl underneath the bed. Your body hits the floor hard, knees and elbow scraping along till you are completely under. Boom! Goes the door smacking hard against the wall nearly coming off its hinges. You peek behind you as best as you can, colorful shoes making way around the bed. Oh man, you think, I'm about to be raped by a clown! Are you turned on you wonder?

The room goes quiet, you look around, no sign of the clown in sight. You are not that lucky though, as you begin to crawl out on the other side a sickening, cackling laugh followed by the most scariest face you have seen pops in front of your head. You let out a scream only matched by the chuckles of Mr. Mime as he wraps gloves around your arms and pulls you out.

Next thing you are aware of are straps tying you down to the bed. You are stripped and vulnerable. You must have passed out from the fright, but your nightmare has just begun. You look up to see Mr. Mime staring back. A stalwart face goes from sullen to a grimacing curved smile of pure terror. Mr. Mime wants to play and you are his new toy.

If becoming a Mr. Mimes sex slave was your goal in life. You just succeeded. Congratulations! You won! Ya sick freak...

THE END?

[[Category: Pokemon: Gotta Sex 'em all! Kanto Edition]]

Ashes House/Plumber/Hide

2014-03-18T22:35:03Z

Trueroman: Created page with 'You try to duck and crawl underneath the bed. Your body hits the floor hard, knees and elbow scraping along till you are completely under. Boom! Goes the door smacking hard again…'

You try to duck and crawl underneath the bed. Your body hits the floor hard, knees and elbow scraping along till you are completely under. Boom! Goes the door smacking hard against the wall nearly coming off its hinges. You peek behind you as best as you can, colorful shoes making way around the bed. Oh man, you think, I'm about to be raped by a clown! Are you turned on you wonder?

The room goes quiet, you look around, no sign of the clown in sight. You are not that lucky though, as you begin to crawl out on the other side a sickening, cackling laugh followed by the most scariest face you have seen pops in front of your head. You let out a scream only matched by the chuckles of Mr. Mime as he wraps gloves around your arms and pulls you out.

Next thing you are strapped down to the bed, stripped and vunerable. You must have passed out from the fright, but your nightmare has just begun. You look up to see Mr. Mime staring back. A stalwart face goes from sullen to a grimacing curved smile of pure terror. Mr. Mime wants to play and you are his new toy.

If becoming a Mr. Mimes sex slave was your goal in life. You just succeeded. Congratulations! You won! Ya sick freak...

THE END?

[[Category: Pokemon: Gotta Sex 'em all! Kanto Edition]]

Ashes House/Plumber/Sauna

2014-03-18T22:27:16Z

Trueroman:

The steam smacks your face and blinds you. It is indeed hot and the moisture has already dampened your clothes. As your eyes adjust you see the silhouette of a oval figure benched over in the corner. Because of the door being open the room begins to defog, revealing more of the figure. Whose that pokemon! As the faint outline bears new form you see Mr. Mime, eyes closed, massaging the length of his dick. You catch sight of it, chin dropping ever so slightly at the size. You feel rather small at this point.

"What is that?! like 12 inches?!" You blurt out not thinking. Mr Mime eyes pop open and he has a startled look. But it soon turns to anger and frustration. "Oh uh, no leaky pipes here. Nope."

He stands up, quoting his name in a deep, threatening voice. He seems like he is about to attack as he raises his hands up forming what seems like an attack.

How do you respond?

[[Ashes House/Plumber/Run| Run like Hell!]]

[[Ashes House/Plumber/Spanky| Spanky his pink ass!]]

[[Ashes House/Plumber/Next Room| Jump into the next room!]]

[[Category: Pokemon: Gotta Sex 'em all! Kanto Edition]]

Ashes House/Plumber/Bathroom

2014-03-18T22:25:52Z

Trueroman:

You slowly creep up to the door. You see steam seeping from underneath the door, it is rather heavily clouded pouring as if a great fire was on the other side. Sauna?

[[Ashes House/Plumber/Sauna| Enter the room]]

[[Ashes House/Plumber/Kitchen again| Go back to Kitchen]]

[[Category: Pokemon: Gotta Sex 'em all! Kanto Edition]]