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Older discussions started before 2010 have been moved to an [[Talk:Main Page/Archive1|archive page]].

==Removed pedo stories==
I created a filter for the story pedo__romp (with only 1 underscore, but used 2 underscores to get through my own filter). After a little research this content would be considered illegal as obscene even though it was only in text form.
[http://law.justia.com/cases/federal/appellate-courts/ca11/13-14350/13-14350-2015-03-12.html Reference]
I don't monitor the content on the site, but this was pointed out to me by a user. If you find any content explicitly related to sex with a minor, please remove it or edit it. --[[User:RobKohr|RobKohr]] 20:00, 25 September 2015 (UTC)

Removing these pages is impossible. If the wrong word is in the page title, the page can't be moved or deleted, only edited. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 21:42, 25 September 2015 (UTC)

To quote another user, who was unable to reply here for technical reasons:

"You are totally wrong about written descriptions of underage sex being illegal. The fact that the material could be considered obscene, and thus illegal (in the US) would actually apply equally to any story with any extreme sexual activity. It can be applied to rape, bestiality, and just about ANY story that contains sexual descriptions. It is based on a remnant of a struck down child protection law that was unconstitutional, which is why it is sited for material directly related to children. The law is laughable, and you may have found one of the few cases where it was actually used, and the only one that I am aware of that actually made it through successfully. The user who pointed it out to you must be a free speech hating Nazi to bring up such an unlikely and remote senario as based on such a law. If this law were actually a problem, the largest sex story site on the internet www.asstr.org would not exist. No reasonable court would rule that you are guilty of transporting obscenity for something someone else wrote on your website. I'm not trying to tell you how to run your site, but if the "no pedo stories" rule stands; I will be leaving."

This is very much a sentiment I share. '''--[[User:BakaG|BakaG]] 08:08, 27 September 2015 (UTC)'''

== An Idea For A Perfect Game Of Thrones Story ==
Hello dear users of C.Y.O.A, I know how our precious site works and I would like to announce you that I am about to write a big and great story, in the Universe of A Song Of Ice And Fire book series. Anyone who would like to help me in this story, please contact me via Skype (sarp.kaya12) or [[User talk:Potato King|edit my talk page]].

== Why are there no cows in the story Furry World? ==
-- Jasper --

I hope I can find some friends and even get help with my story. Looking forward.

Edit: Check it Out! [[An Interactive Game Of Thrones Story]]

-- [[User:Potato King|Potato King]] , 05.08.2015, 15:03 (GMT+2)

== How to start my own ==
I'm new and I have no idea how to start my own story.

==HELP==
Could some people please help me write *[[time machine]]

==Rules?==
Hi, I'm fairly new here. I'm wondering, is there anything that is not allowed in stories/on site? I just don't want my stuff deleted. -Creat0r

==Just some trouble==

Hi there, I've been writing a C.Y.O.A. and I'm having the problem that I've set three options on my first page; Male, Female and Other. These redirect to different C.Y.O.A.s and it is rather irritating that when I try to chose the male option to advance it comes up with a selection of emo guys that I can use, from a different Catagory. Any help would be appreciated as I will not be able to advance in my writings until it is fixed.

Thank you in advance
--Xuan Tian Shang Ti

Xuan, I had that same problem on my new CYAO. This happens because someone else is already using this as a category name, so it will keep redirecting to their story. It helps to use your story's name in front of the choices or to put a specific phrasingthat noone has used yet.
For instance say your story is Smurfs in Ireland and you want to give people the choice of being a male or female. You could put Smurfs In Ireland: Male, or I want to be a male smurf
Hope this helps for anyone else with the same problem.

==Main Page Stories==

What constitutes a story being on the main page? It seems like people just throw theirs on there. [[User:Theotherguy|Theotherguy]] 07:10, 30 August 2012 (UTC)

We're trying to only include a small, representative sampling on the Main Page. Yes, some people are throwing theirs on there, but those stories are being thrown back off when they're spotted. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:25, 30 August 2012 (UTC)

By my understanding, the story has to be of a quality that it can be 'considered' for a feature, not necessarily featured, but close or at the level. By the way, great to see someone took the initiative and did this, the site really needed some tidying. --[[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] 13 September 2012

Maybe we should make specific guidelines? Must be this many pages, this quality of writing, etc. etc. [[User:Theotherguy|Theotherguy]] 23:14, 13 September 2012 (UTC)

Well I would suggest at least having the minimum amount of pages be set to 50, besides the 'Quizzes and Challenges' Section. I'm not sure about the quality of writing, as long as it is understandable and entertaining. --[[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] September 14 2012

== Main Page and Its Length ==

I'm sure most of you here have noticed this already, but I'd like to just point out. The Main Page is ever growing in it's length. That's great news! That means more adventures, but it comes at a price. The overall size of the page. I thought I'd do a little experiment and see how long it would take me to scroll down from the top to the very bottom. It took me more than 10 seconds. That is a ridiculously long time. Only fine for social media sites such as Facebook.

What I'm suggesting is that we need to find a way to successfully organize the Main Page to which the size of it is significantly less, while not having it link off into other pages. Such as replacing the sections with say Collapsible Tables [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Help:Collapsing], so then you can choose which sections you want to look at, perhaps even placing sub tables on top of that.

Heyoeveryone 12:02, 5 May 2012 (UTC)

It's certainly worth looking into. But bear in mind that newbies constantly screw up even the limited formatting currently on the Main Page. Any further complications to the coding will mean even more intense monitoring and reverting. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:56, 5 May 2012 (UTC)

Ahh, true. I barely know coding myself, but new people constantly make stories, and sooner or later, mistakes will be made, and those beloved tables will be disfigured. It is possible though, and if someone were able just to implement this idea, it will do wonders for this site. I don't go on often, but when I do, I always notice how long the Main Page is.

So, '''IF''' anyone is willing to do this, then by all means, go ahead, it will do wonders for the site, I suggest you ask Platypus though.

--Heyoeveryone 06:05, 23 May 2012 (UTC)

== YouTube Idea ==

I have been a fan of this site for a while. I am an experienced actor and had the idea of adapting some of these stories to YouTube. Essentially, it would be an audiobook of the story where you click a link at the end of the video to make your choice (leading you to the next part of the story). I would like to try it with a shorter story first. If you have a short, well written CYOA story and are interested in sharing your story on YouTube, please let me know your username, the name of the story, and that I have your permission to record it and put it on YouTube (right below this post) . I would also be happy to hear any input on this idea.
-AlexCW

I know a lot about doing that kind of thing, it would be really great if it was animated or something like that. If you need any help working with Youtube CYOAs I can certainly help. I can also do (some) animation if you want. -Creat0r

I think this would be awesome! Guys I don't know how long this thread was posted but I would like to continue it. You know in the you adventure stories or something like that you flip to a page to continue? Well, maybe it should be one or two long videos that you pause at choices and the choices have the time you skip to. I might make a video like this on my YouTube! Awesome idea.
- [[KateFleet]] [[ YouTube : FleetGaming ]]

== Family-Friendly Section, Not Family-Friendly ==

I recently noticed that about 10 new stories were made, and each of them looked like they should be in the 10+ section. How is stealing a car family friendly? Or discouraging school? Seriously, If I see one more story like that being made, it's going straight to PG-13.
Note: I am 11 years old, and I don't even think that those stories are appropriate for my age!--[[User:903860|The Adenster]] 01:05, 29 January 2010 (UTC)

Adenster, family-friendly is generally a relative term. While I dont know the particular stories you speak of, discouraging school or stealing a car CAN be used in a family setting IE. one character has a Huckleberry Finn-ish tendency to skip school and the car can be used as a life lesson piece. Terms like Family-Friendly vary greatly from person to person and are entirely dependent on perception. For example some people believe in spanking their children whilst others dont. One side would consider it "Family-Friendly" whilst the other group would not. Generally if things such as car-stealing or such occur it can be acceptable if put in perspective and used in the context of the story. --[[User:BFEL|BFEL]] 12:13, 7 April 2011 (UTC)

== New Category ==
I just had a really great idea, maybe a new category can be made for just new stories, called Not Rated Yet, or whatever. Then, where the story is placed can be decided by somebody, so that sections like "Family-Friendly" are not so populated with stories that aren't appropriate.--[[User:903860|The Adenster]] 01:23, 29 January 2010 (UTC)

Your points are well taken, and this new group of writers is not writing family friendly material, but I'm somewhat averse to creating a Not Yet Rated section for ''somebody'' to rate, because there's only one sysop active on this site. My time is limited and I like to get in a little bit of time to work on my own writing. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 03:02, 29 January 2010 (UTC)

I myself would be interested in assisting with this, Platypus. --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 03:28, 3 March 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, maybe ratings could be incoporated into reviews. That way unrated stories can move and get a review simultaneously.--[[User:Snowball|Snowball- The Anti-Adult-Content Resistance Leader]] 10:52, 20 January 2012 (UTC)

== About story page links ==
I'm kind of a perfectionist and it just hurts my eyes to see the story page links not formatted properly. It's either because people are too lazy or just not well enough informed on how to create proper links. Most pages have something like this:
* <nowiki>[[Story Name-Page Name]]</nowiki> = [[Story Name-Page Name]]
* <nowiki>[[Story Name/Page Name]]</nowiki> = [[Story Name/Page Name]]
* <nowiki>[[Story Name: Page Name]]</nowiki> = [[Story Name: Page Name]]
And so on. What I'd like to see is this:
* <nowiki>[[Story Name/Page Name|Display Name]]</nowiki> = [[Story Name/Page Name|Display Name]]
* <nowiki>[[Story Name/Character: Page Name|Display Name]]</nowiki> = [[Story Name/Character: Page Name|Display Name]]
The '''Display Name''' field makes the link show as that to the user, while still linking to the '''Story Name/Page Name''' page. This kind of naming makes the story pages look a lot better while still keeping the pages properly sorted out. I think this is explained on the main page, but it seems a bit unclear. Maybe it could be improved? --[[User:Dreama|Dreama]] 16:00, 25 February 2010 (UTC)

It is discussed in the [[Tutorial]], but sometimes it seems as if some of the people who want to write here aren't capable of reading.

Mostly, I like to see consistency within any given story. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 21:16, 25 February 2010 (UTC)

Is there a way to get the Category page to display just the page names? In my story, I use the <nowiki>[[Story Name/Page Name|Page Name]]</nowiki> idiom, but the category page shows every page with the story prefix and they are all grouped under the same header. --[[User:Shiine|Shiine]] 8:50, 5 July 2010

I don't know a way of changing the way the page names are displayed on the Category page, but if you categorize each individual page as <nowiki>[[Category:Story Name|Page Name]] </nowiki>, then the Category page will aphabetize based on whatever you tell it the Page Name is, regardless of what the page name displays as. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 19:10, 5 July 2010 (UTC)

I added a section to [[Tutorial/sleep|the tutorial]] about using the sort key in the category field. --[[User:Shiine|Shiine]] 23:40, 10 Aug 2010

== problems with the search bar ==

Hello, I just want to say that there seems to be a problem with the search, whenever I type a requist in it comes back with no results, I tried using the report a bug feature but the appears to be broken. --[[User:Tricrotic|Tricrotic]] 11:57, 7 March 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, the search bar only works when you type in the exact title of a story. Granted, there is a place where you search for pages that begin with _______, that should be the automatic search engine. I don't know much about programming, but it really shouldn't be too hard to move a program that's already been created, just to a different, more accessible place. - veri_disquo (2014)

==New Story==

If you guys remember me from way back, I used to use this site a lot, then suddenly stopped. Well, I'm back (again), and I've started a new story titled [[Cell]]. I look forward to the reviews of this CYOA story, as it goes through the process of Evolution.--[[User:blablob|blablob]]

Are you still working on it? --[[user:blamblegam]]

==Questions==
Are the stories in here copyrighted in anyway? If I want to feature one on a website, can do I need permission of the author or is it public material?

The stories here aren't copyrighted. But it might be polite to mention your intentions to the author beforehand. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 22:53, 14 May 2012 (UTC)

If the story is in the Pit, can you edit the story to be in a different category? Because, for this story that I have been editing, I wish to change the maturity since its hard to keep track of every link you put. The Lost City of Atlantice is the story i had been working on for a bit and some of the tags that were created aren't really in the category. Plus, some of my ideas fit into other categories. What should I do? --[[User:sayrppoetry/sayrppoetry]]

If you retrieve a story from the Pit, feel free to up its maturity level as needed. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 22:51, 2 April 2012 (UTC)

== Status functionality? ==

The tutorial mentions status functionality as if you are able to use variables, but there was no information on how to perform operations on variables (You know, add, subtract, that sort of thing.) I looked for an article on the issue but didn't find any. Is this functionality available?

No. You can not perform operations on the variables. You have to do any adding and subtracting manually on the next page, and if you want options where you have different values for the variables, you have to create multiple paths. --[[User:Rawar|Rawar]] 19:27, 2 April 2010 (UTC)

BTW: I was wanting to experiment with status stuff, so I ended up creating a template page for the [[sandbox]]. Since you can't delete pages, and this might be useful, I replaced it with a basic status bar and left it in the sandbox. I hope others find it useful. --[[User:Shiine|Shiine]] 04:27, 19 March 2011 (UTC)

== New here, and want to know a few things about editting. ==

I joined today and want to know if it is okay for me to go through stories fixing some grammar mistakes and spelling. (not that I a grammar freak or saying I am perfect myself.) Some stories i looked at had a dozen mistakes a page and that is just bad for the site. See [[DUDE WHERES MY CAR]], I fixed the main page, leaving in the repitive sentence structure because I was unsure if I should change that. The next pages I looked at were equally plagued. Is there a way to catergorize stories as "being a pain to read because of mistakes"? I did not mean chnaging content, simplly fixing sloppy mistakes. To be sure, I am not planning on reading every story on here to be an English jainitor. I just wondered whose job these things were, Thanks. ~[[User:RandyRift|RandyRift]]

I’m not an admin or anything but…

There is no real problem or rule against editing pages, especially grammar correction. If you want to fix stories then that’s alright. Hell, even adding new stuff to the story is fine in most cases.
The problem with this site is that there are some users who create crappy stories with five pages that have no real plot or proper grammar. People work on their story for a day then leave resulting in many poor stories with no real purpose. So if you want to fix stories then go for it.

--[[User:Fletcher Peninsula|Fletcher Peninsula]]

Unfortunately, there are far too many ungrammatical writers out there for me to repair all the things they post. I am the only active sysop here, and I don't object to anyone trying fix grammar around the site. We were recently invaded by a Canadian school whose students wanted the thrill of posting on the web despite the fact that many of them had a poor grasp of English. Their teacher's help made many things worse, not better. But since they seem to have left, many of their stories are going to be getting moved to the Pit of Abandonned Stories soon. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 01:21, 1 April 2010 (UTC)

I have another question, why is it that on the category page, (for my story) when I am logged in I see 90 pages, but when not logged in I see 78? (the page lists only that many.) ~[[User:RandyRift|RR]] 3 April 2010

== Pictures and Copyrights ==
I'm not very familiar with finding out what kind of copyrights some picture has on the web and what pictures are free to be posted here, for example, and what pictures may be freely copied and even uploaded here to be displayed. So far I've only been directly linking to pictures on Wikipedia (in very rare occasions anyway), but that's very limited. Anyone know better? --[[User:Dreama|Dreama]] 22:56, 24 April 2010 (UTC)

The safest thing is to upload your own pictures to photobucket or something. However, there are several free stock photo and picture sites out there. My favorite is http://www.sxc.hu/ . However, make sure you read the licenses for the photos before using them or linking to them! --[[User:Rawar|Rawar]] 00:42, 28 April 2010 (UTC)

There's thousands of free stock photos on [http://www.dreamstime.com/free-photos Dreamstime.com]. Just resize them to a width of 800 for web use. -- [[User:ImmortalDreams|ImmortalDreams]]

== A portrait of an American Girl Named Myra. ==

If you like the story idea, please help create a scenario for Myra. Remember, do not edit or add onto anyone else's scenario. Create a small one of your own. It doesn't have to be deep! Thank you for contributing!

She ought to wear a funky fruit hat. She's 12, was living with her mother in Maine, dad's a deadbeat, moves to Oklahoma for no apparent reason, uncovers alien conspiracy there. Turns out her mother's been replaced by an evil space automaton. She must team up with her drunken embarassment of a father to rescue her from a Dick Dastardly-esque villain who brought the aliens here with a magical voodoo portal, and then find a way to close said portal. Along the way, she learns important lessons regarding metaphysical idealism and beef Wellington. --[[User:Nalanhata|Nalanhata]], June 18

== Moving a page ==

Is there a way to move pages? I've looking over a story with terrible spelling problems and [[Tour_the_town|this page]] links to [[A little Tatoo paurlor]] which should be fixed. -- [[User:TheRick|TheRick]] 05:26, 18 August 2010 (UTC)

The page-moving function had to be disabled due to malicious vandals. However, what you can do is copy the text in the mis-named page, blank that page, edit the page with the mis-named link, and paste the text onto a new page with the correctly spelled name. Then I'll delete the blanked page. I'm the only one who can do deletions. And I do appreciate anyone who actually wants to do some work tidying up the place. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:56, 18 August 2010 (UTC)

== Old Geezer ==

I'm still having problems with editing Lady Helsing as it says Permission error" when l try to
edit it.

First of all make sure you are logged in... next... if you have been on a single page writing for too long it will automatically log you out so right click copy anything you have if you need to re-log in --[[User:Mezzo|Mezzo]] 17:12, 28 September 2011 (UTC)

== Tags? ==
What are the tags supposed to do? Because the ones that are for this one are 'porn or death'. --[[User:Heyoeveryone]]

== Severe lag of site? ==

Anybody else getting loadtimes of upwards of 5 minutes (multiple refreshes included) for even the shortest of pages?

If so, I think I know why. Remember, this is only a guess (although it's one with backup). I noticed my browser (Chrome) seems to hang on loading the info from TagNimbus, so I tried to visit the TagNimbus site. It seems to be down or dead, and a look at www.IsUp.me told me the whole site seemed to be down for others, too.

If it's down, any chance of getting in touch with the owner to restore it? Otherwise, if TagNimbus is finall- I mean unfortunately dead, can we just remove the thing anyways? It didn't seem to change anything and was abused to tag pages with irrelevant tags...

But hey, this is all the rambling of one author who just hopes to get the site working so he can get back to writing the gore story he was in the middle of... --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 06:27, 23 April 2011 (UTC)

==Hello==

Hello. Just wanted to say this site looks really cool and interesting, I really look forward to helping stories along or even starting some once I get the hang of it.

I should know though, are there any particular rules or anything that aren't immediately obvious or that are mentioned? And where should I start? Any advice for a newbie would be very appreciated. The site is a little unnecessarily complicated.

Heyo whoever you are! Best thing you should start on is probably continuing on stories that have been started, but after 10 pages, the author has quit. If you really want to begin a new story, i suggest planning it before you actually type it all out. In your plan you should have: the main storyline, the seperate endings, and of course the characters who are going to be in the story.
-- [[User:Heyoeveryone]] 3 September 2011

You should try mind mapping. It's a great way to make branching plot lines. -- [[User:ImmortalDreams|ImmortalDreams]]

It's bad to add to the number of all the carcasses you can see on the Main Page. Save those, or if you prefer, get the more severely rotting ones that we lumped in the Pit to decompose. Unfortunately, stories are hard to get rid of, so save them from non-authorship before it's too late. It also makes it easier, since you'd agree with the storyline from the beginning, whereas others end up left behind because there's a lock on the whole thing. For Example, everything might lead to a standstill after everything directs to a page. The rest of the plot is a mystery and starts rotting. Simply because the author him/her self doesn't know how it ends.--[[User:Snowball|Snowball- The Anti-Adult-Content Resistance Leader]] 14:58, 24 January 2012 (UTC)

== Template Appearance Problem ==

The templates for my story [[War Pigs]] are coming out all wrong in IE 9, but they look fine in Firefox. Can anybody explain why? It would be greatly appreciated. --[[User:AgentVincent|AgentVincent]] 03:55, 7 July 2011 (UTC)

The problem is probably that it's IE9. IE9 enjoys shitting all over everything nice looking on the internet. --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 15:47, 31 July 2011 (UTC)

== The whole "Anon" thing. ==

Anyone else amused by this? Three brief little "attacks" (if you even want to call them that) with an empty threat? I dunno, I guess it just struck me as pathetic and funny. --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 06:26, 12 August 2011 (UTC)

Yea a real dumbass, but thank God he didn´t write any pages, those would have been real '''attacks''' on the site! :)

[[User:Fletcher Peninsula|Fletcher Peninsula]]

== Pictures ==

I noticed that there was an embedded image button. Being a photo editor, such as myself, I jumped at the idea of adding a picture where they could be used. Unfortunately it says that file adding is disabled. I looked through the General Discussion and i realize that you have had "attacks" in the past but is there a chance that they could be re-added?

--[[User:Aegisofawakening|Aegisofawakening]] 01:58, 21 August 2011 (UTC)

Actually, file adding was disabled due to server-size limitations, not due to attacks. But images can still be displayed on pages, even if the file itself cannot become part of this site. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 04:09, 21 August 2011 (UTC)

== Thanks! ==

I'd just like to say thank you so much!!! Why? Well, a few years back i wrote a few tales ([[Girlngirl High]], [[All Alone]] and [[Teehee!]]). I thought, no way were these stories would ever become hits, all of them are less than 100 pages! And i never finished any of them. So i decided to quit the site for 2 years. Today, i decided to go on and look at my stories, see how they've turned out.

I looked down to find out that '''every story i've made has gotten over 1000 views on the first page, with the most being 20 000!!!''' I was just amazed at how my stories were this popular. So i'd just like to say THANK YOU!! I've given the job of continuing the stories to my friend [[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]]. He's a very good friend of mine and he said he'd love to take over. So once again, thank you so much for your support throughout these past 2 years. Also thanks to those people who added pages onto my stories. If you'd like to work on these stories, just ask Heyo for permission and he should promptly allow you.

Am i coming back? Nah. Well maybe. --[[User:Unkowhero23]]

Actually, you don't need my permission. Just make sure that you don't have many grammatical and spelling errors, and that the pages aren't just one or two sentences. Those are terrible, and with the load times of the site sometimes, you want something more than just that.

--[[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] 5th September, 2011

== Spam ==

What's with all the random advertisements lately? It's actually more of a nuisance than those Anon people a little while back. Is this site really such a big deal that people need to go around and post all these ads? - [[User:Jamesparker|Jamesparker]], September 23, 2011

Ad's? Where? Link them here. It's best if you name and shame them, and so that their account will be quickly deleted off the site. And I guess it is such a big deal. --[[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] 9 October 2011

== Mature, Adult, Bad Taste ==

A suggestion, if you will. Maybe the mature, adult and bad taste story listings should be collectively put on a sub-page separate from the main page? On reflection, maybe only the Adult and Bad Taste ones. Those wishing to see those stories wouldn't have any trouble finding them by following the link (from the main page), and it'd render the main page free of offensive language and titles. Everybody wins? What'd'y'all think? [[User:JackalRobot|JackalRobot]] 21:12, 20 November 2011 (UTC)

I have been giving the idea consideration, especially as some people would prefer not to be exposed to even the titles of some of the Adult stories. And it would help reduce the sheer size of the Main Page. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 00:41, 21 November 2011 (UTC)

Despite my own story preferences, I agree. I always thought it odd (and not a little family-unfriendly) to give almost equal weight to kiddie stories as well as possibly very kinky adult stuff. As long as you can always go directly to any given page (through a browser bookmark perhaps) I actually suggest adult stories are kept behind a disclaimer screen of some sort.
[[User:Anedwcan|Anedwcan]] 19:48, 12 January 2012 (UTC)

Also, it can broaden the areas for the Adult Stories and free the titles. Then there could be another sub-group for the mild content.--[[User:Snowball|Snowball- The Anti-Adult-Content Resistance Leader]] 14:52, 24 January 2012 (UTC)

That is a great idea you have there, and it would be nice to see this happen. However there is a huge flaw I see in this. Recent Changes would still show everything be it a kids story about a kitten, or an adult story about bestiality.--[[User:Yihman1|Yihman1]] 07:04, 27 January 2012 (UTC)

I have a "Mature" (R rated) story I am writing. I am considering adding a storyline in which the character gets raped offscreen. Is that too intense for "Mature"? Should I post the beginning of the storyline, and the page that links to it, here to be vetted? --[[User:LaedyRose|LaedyRose]]

I don't think an offscreen rape would necessarily need to be put in the Adult section. At least the Mature section, certainly. It depends on how much detail you put in. You might want to put a warning at the beginning of the storyline, simply because rape is a special kind of evil and will break (or make) the story for some readers. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 01:34, 10 April 2013 (UTC)

== Feedback For My Stories ==

Hi! I'm new here, and I'm starting my first story, [[Transformers: War Between Two Worlds]]. I wasn't sure if it should go in the Family Friendly Section or the PG13 Section, so I put it in Family Friendly. If you have any feedback, read what I have so far and post it here. This story will take me a while, but as soon as I'm done, I'll get started on another one. Also, would anyone like to team up with me on a story? I'm guessing most of you will think I'm crazy, but it's good to check. TEAMWORK RULES! I'm not that smart when it comes to wiki editing, so if there's a place where this page would better fit, then please tell me here.

Feedback:

New Ideas (for my future stories):

Edit Requests (If you would like permission to edit one of my stories, put your username here):

-[[User:AwesomeSauce2233475]]

Sorry about putting my page in the wrong place, Platypus. How do you reach the user page?

== Finding A Story ==

Hi everyone.

Just a quickie.

1) Is there a story that focuses on something like a haunted house/mansion/what-have-you somewhere? I've skimmed the titles but nothing popped out at me and I've been reading here and there but even though most stories seem to only be like 5-10 pages the sheer number of them means I haven't had a chance to check them all and was hoping someone who'd been around longer knew of one and could point me in the right direction?

-- [[User:Captain.Devonin|Cpt. Devonin]]

: I don't know of such a story, but this brings up an issue I've been meaning to: it's awfully hard for someone to find anything they might be looking for, if they haven't seen it already. I'm wondering if the allowance of short synopses has been discussed before, or perhaps if we might create categories like [[:Category:Stories that feature supernatural characters|stories that feature supernatural characters]] or [[:Category:Stories that take place in haunted houses|stories that take place in haunted houses]].

: --[[User:KC Riley|KC Riley]] 03:39, 21 January 2012 (UTC)

Well, [[Madman's Mansion]] isn't haunted but its the best one I know of that involves a proper what-have-you-somewhere and decent story length and grammar and punctustion and so on.

--[[User:Snowball|Snowball- The Anti-Adult-Content Resistance Leader]] 14:49, 24 January 2012 (UTC)

Also, how about this: when you enter the main page, there is a link to each level of the stories, then, you can continue on into sub-groups of Ghost, Sci-Fi, Quest, Tragedy, or something like that.--[[User:Snowball|Snowball- The Anti-Adult-Content Resistance Leader]] 13:55, 28 February 2012 (UTC)

== How to know people are watching? ==

I'm new here, and recently finished a short story.

But how do I tell if anyone is seeing it? Is there a place on this website to get feedback on the stories?

Thanks

You can see at the bottom of each page how many times the page has been accessed. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 07:16, 28 January 2012 (UTC)

Platypus, is this still true? I have looked at my page, and do not see a number for how many times it has been accessed. Or was this removed? --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 12:20, 24 February 2014 (UTC)

Yes, unfortunately, this isn't currently active. It was always nice to know how often a page has been accessed. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:38, 24 February 2014 (UTC)

== Something wrong? ==

Hi, I'm new here. Saw this site and thought it was pretty interesting, and gave it a try. It's fun and I'm currently working on a story. However, I'm getting a feeling I am doing something wrong with creating stories and editing them. If I am doing anything wrong so far, which I am sure I am, please tell me, okays?

-Bluedragon

So far, so good. I see nothing wrong with what you're doing. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 14:25, 24 February 2012 (UTC)

== A page making/organizing resource ==

First of all, I don't want to sound like a spammer or advertiser, but since I can code, I thought I'd make a resource for everyone who's interested.
 
 
I've noticed when making games on here, that it's difficult to keep track of all your pages, and it's still hard to make them even with a mind map. So I made a rather unconventional, very small piece of software using Game Maker. Despite its not too standard interface. It provides an easy and efficient way to organize your pages. You can type and paste your page content into it and then automatically generate the pages in the correct format for this site.
 
 
I in no way claim that I have ownership rights to the site. I only want to provide a resource for its users in order to make the creating process easier.
 
 
The file is only 2.3MB.
Here's the download link(vs1) - [http://www.4shared.com/file/g5M6PSP2/CYOA_-_Page_Organizer.html]
--[[User:ImmortalDreams|ImmortalDreams]]
 
 
 
'''New Features:'''
 
Made page recognition easier by showing the link names instead of the page names for the disabled parallel fields of each choice.
 
Added a ''Clear'' button to the description area.
 
Added a feature where the active field is always highlighted.
 
Added tab key support for faster navigation between fields.
 
'''Bug Fixes:'''
 
All of the proper link names show up in the generated code files. Before, all link names had been choice1's.
 
The disabled child name(now link) fields no longer show a value of 0 when going to one page and back again.
 
 
New download link(vs1.1) - [http://www.4shared.com/file/KF270foj/CYOA_-_Page_Organizer11.html]
--[[User:ImmortalDreams|ImmortalDreams]]

== Interaction ==

How can I communicate with other users of this site, so that we can conspire and work together. I am currently working on a story that is just to much for one person to handle, but I don't understand how I can talk with "helpers". I just don't get it!-- [[User: Cyclops|Cyclops]]

You can click on a user's name to view their profile page, then click on the "discussion" tab to see their talk page. If you post something on their talk page, they'll see an alert at the top of their screen. Hopefully, they'll click the alert, go to their talk page, and then write something back on your page. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 23:06, 4 April 2012 (UTC)

i think that there needs to be a few changes to this site. A chatroom. It would be very easy to find one online and embed it in a page. Also I believe there should be category pages where all the sci fi pages are in one place with links to it. Maybe on the mainpage, instead of links to very story, have links to the category listing. Finally I believe there should be something to let us rate pages (as in 4 out of 5 stars).
-[[User:Gartonia|Gartonia]]

The interaction between users does seem unusual (profile page->discussion...) There can be a better way surely?
Also, clicking on a user's name is not easy. For one, the pages don't have a author's link. Also, the person who wrote the last page in a story might be different from the author of the current page.
A link to the profile of the creator should be there on each page so one can easily click on it...
-[[User:BenchWarmer|BenchWarmer]]

A link to the profile of the creator ''is'' there on each page. Just click the History tab. There's a link to the profile page and to the discussion page of every user who's edited the page. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 19:43, 16 January 2015 (UTC)

== Salutations. ==

Hello, I am one of the new guys here. I just wanted to know if there are any rules that I must adhere to on this site. I mainly made an account just so that I was able to continue on a story that I saw on this website. Well anyway, If you can notify me, please do, Thank You.

== Salutations. ==

Hello, I am one of the new guys here. I just wanted to know if there are any rules that I must adhere to on this site. I mainly made an account just so that I was able to continue on a story that I saw on this website. Well anyway, If you can notify me, please do, Thank You.

== Linking to existing pages ==

How does one link back to an existing page, in effect creating a loop?

The same way you create a link to a new page: By enclosing the name of the page in square brackets. For example: <nowiki> [[Main Page]] </nowiki> links you to [[Main Page]].--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 21:49, 13 June 2012 (UTC)

== Featured Story - A Dead Thing? ==

We're 8 days from the 8 month anniversary of the last time the Featured Story section was last updated. Who was last in charge of updating that? --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 07:24, 14 June 2012 (UTC)

The idea was proposed by [[User: Occono|Occono]], last seen in 2009. I said then that I had no objections to such a feature, but no intention of participating in it. Anyone volunteering? --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 18:19, 14 June 2012 (UTC)

As I understood it, anyone could edit the featured story section, no one in particular was responsible for keeping it reguarly updated. That being said, 8 months is an alarmingly long time. If we´re looking for a story right now to put on there "Megan" (which is already nominated) could do. Although that one might be a bit to... bloody disturbing, to be put there. Another one might be Battle Royal, which has a lot of pages. (Wait, did I just recomend Battle Royal over something else beacuse it was so bloody disturbing? Scary thought!).

Overall though, personally I´d want to put a quality story on the featured page. And the simply fact is that there arn´t enough quality storys on this site to maintain a one or two months switch around in my opinion. Also, personally, I´d also not like to see adulth storys be put there, which decresses the story-pool significantly.

--[[User:Fletcher Peninsula|Fletcher Peninsula]]

Woah, seriously? 8 months? That is amazing. Nevertheless it's a great thing that someone actually bothered to change it. It may be my story, but from 2012 onwards, I was surprised that [[Remember]] was still featured. Congratulations to TheElderOnes. It's been a long time coming, and now you've finally gotten the story featured. Nice.

--[[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] 30/06/2012

== Compressing the main page ==

I started compressing the main page into smaller sortable tables. I just finished the family friendly section, feel free to take over for me if you would like to do the next sections

The goal for all of these tables is to keep the list around 10 items, and then have a more stories page for each section. The simpest way to do this is to choose all stories that have 50+ pages. If that leads to too many stories, then make it 100+...

If a story is well written, and more than 50 pages, it should trump a story with more pages.

Also, please bring the adult section back to the home page with the top items from it. That is the most active section of the site, and it generates a lot of traffic from google.

--[[User:RobKohr|RobKohr]] 12:19, 15 August 2012 (UTC)

== Separate Wiki for Adult Content ==

I don't really like that adult stores are so easily accessible for people that come here looking for non-adult material, such as that they'll pop up as random pages, or can be seen in "Recent Changes". Is there any interest in branching Adult content off in to a separate Wiki, and maybe including a link the "Adult Section" in the side-bar? --[[User:Holvard|Holvard]] 19:56, 31 December 2012 (UTC)

Unfortunately, the majority of the traffic here is looking for the Adult Content. Removing it or trying to bury it in some way would most likely kill off the non-adult content. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 20:16, 31 December 2012 (UTC)

How extreme is the majority? As far as I can tell, this is the only active site to make free interactive adult stories, so if there's that much interest I may try to make my own. --[[User:Holvard|Holvard]] 20:56, 31 December 2012 (UTC)

Would it take a lot of work to put the adult content behind a disclaimer screen? As long as one had to go through the main page to access the adult site, it might actually ''increase'' traffic to the non-adult content, because people would feel better about, for instance, recommending it to children. People might feel more comfortable with the site in general if they felt sure that reasonable precautions were being taken. --[[User:LaedyRose|LaedyRose]] 9 April 2012

It could work through account settings, and then it being disabled by default, and the option for parental controls. Maybe even an option (that would have to be enabled through account settings) so that only one account could be tied to that IP, and these settings, after being enabled, could be disabled via a parental control password that is set up with the account, that could be different than the account's login password.
[[User:UZ9|UZ9]] 21:52, 20 April 2013 (UTC)

== Issues With the Site ==
I've noticed that Create Your Own Adventure pages tend to load slowly, and the last week or so, accessing the site at all has been touch and go. Is there any particular reason for this? Is there anything you or we can do about it, or do we just need to be patient? --[[User:LaedyRose|LaedyRose]] 9 April 2012

== Lag of site and page load limits ==
Is there a problem? When I first started contributing to this site it could sometimes be very slow, but I put that down to traffic at certain times of the day. In the morning in GMT (when the Americas are asleep!) it was usually pretty good. Now, though, I find it's terribly slow whenever I use it, often taking upwards of thirty seconds to a minute to load a single page. What's more, not infrequently it doesn't load the page at all and I instead get a "Uncached page load rate limit reached -> 3 per second;" message. After a couple of those (even if I've only been on the site for ~5 minutes and loaded three or four pages) I get a request to complete a Captcha: "Page loads per hour hit - limit 60. Reset limit by filling in this captcha:"

It seems that it's trying to load pages multiple times when I access them? That might explain why it's being so slow, too.

*There is indeed a problem: link spammers. RobKohr has had to deliberately slow down site responsiveness and include that captcha in the hopes of frustrating the spambots so maybe they'll go away and leave us alone. The messages you're seeing aren't because ''you're'' trying to load more than 3 pages per second. It's because the bots are trying to load far, far more pages than that per second. Do I like this solution? Not really. It's frustrating. Can anyone else think of a better one? --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 14:14, 13 May 2013 (UTC)

**You guys could require to creat a acc that is activaded by admin/mod to view the content, the login page should always come if a cookie isnt existing and the page itself could be a blank site with minmal text and a field to look in.

***You wouldn't even need to create an account to ''view'' the content (that would be counter-intuitive, since you want people to see it) but just to ''edit'' it. I know that's probably far from ideal because the whole point is the Wiki is free for everyone, but at the same time if it's being incredibly slow because of spambots then maybe it's a necessary step?

: Is there some reason that the normal solutions (for MediaWiki, let's say the Phalanx extension) can't be applied here? Spam is a rather indiscriminate reality of the Internet that sites are usually protected against without crippling themselves and hoping spambots will get frustrated and go away. They won't, but the users will. --[[User:KC Riley|KC Riley]] 13:06, 25 June 2013 (UTC)

== Linking pictures problems and other errors ==

Hello. In my various writing I try to place links to pictures to enhance the story experience. I've been doing this for months and months but lately the site has been completely blocking my ability to place links. The first time I try to post a page with a link it will force me to type in two words to verify that I'm human. After I type in the correct words it will attempt to post the page again but instead I will get this message: "You can only submit one page with a link in it per 20 minute period". Because of the human verification process I am completely unable to post links. I am fine with only posting one link per twenty minutes but the site has negated any way of posting links as the verification process eats up my one post per twenty minutes. As someone who uses the site often this is a major inconvenience.

Furthermore, if the human verification process doesn't stop my attempts at posting a link all the million of other error messages will. Errors such as site load limits or pages per hour or some such. These errors are never correct and seemingly random. I can stomach these messages and plod forward but they are a complete hindrance when it comes to posting links.

Please give me some assistance in this regard, I do not want to lose the function of placing links in my stories.

I have noticed this annoying tendency too. I tried to create a link to the CC-BY legal language, which is what I license my writing using, and find that, since I get the captcha thing, it blocks the link completely by telling me I can only do one external link per 20 minutes. So, it must say 1 time when I first submit, 1 time when I captcha and submit, meaning I can never do anything external. Like, say, link the CC-BY legal language for people to easily read the copyright terms, or provide a picture of an outfit I am thinking of, or whatever. Instead, I need to put a half link in so people can copy and paste, but not go to by directly clicking. Not sure how to get around this -.- --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:45, 17 March 2014 (UTC)

== Hiya! Are people still active? ==

Hey guys. I'm Bloody and I just joined the site. I've noticed the discussion board is a little old, and just wanted to see if others were still active. Guess I just need a little reassurance that I'm not the only one. lol -Bloody

== Page loads per second hit - limit 2 ==

Has anyone else been getting this message a lot lately? [[User:AgentVincent|AgentVincent]] 21:32, 1 February 2014 (UTC)

Yes. I have. But I wait about 2 seconds and hit the "reload page" button, and it works. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

That page loads hit per second is extremely annoying. I'm a fast reader, and on short pages, it sometimes pops up. It does so constantly when I'm just trying to get back to pages inside of a story I want to edit or add more to. I also really dislike that "Page hits per hour" message. What's the point of having it? Maybe the site can do away with that? -- [[User:Sophos8|Sophos8]]

I don't like it either, but "throttling" the site is one of the techniques that RobKohr is using to frustrate the spam-bots that were filling the site with crap. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 20:21, 13 February 2014 (UTC)

It is driving me insane. I can't enjoy this site when everytime i click on another page i get this annoying message. I spend more time reading that than actual story.
And i just got it when i tried to add here....

lol, you should try checking through stories to see if they should be moved to the pit. I see that message so often it isn't funny D: --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 14:00, 1 March 2014 (UTC)

its annoying as hell it would be nice if it was raised to 4

How does one "frustrate" a bot? If anything it will cause people actually interested in this site to turn away. There has to be a better way to do this.

== Image linking ==

Every time I try to link an image, it gives me:
"You can only submit one page with a link in it per 20 minute period."
This happens regardless of whether i add via hyperlinking or as a text url itself.

Any help would be very much appreciated.
My only other option for this is to upload images to this site, but I'm not sure if I can or not. But the editing tools does support adding images during editing so...
--[[User:Aelvir|Aelvir]] 15:33, 8 February 2014 (UTC)

== Chat Concept ==

Recently created, and in need of a public announcement. Feel free to use this link and open in separate tabs to keep it alive: '''editthischat.chatango.com''' 
--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 22:24, 8 May 2014 (UTC)

== Mermaid games? ==

Can someone please make a adult section mermaid choose sex game or direct me to one... Thanks.

And i want it to be that you cant change into legs and are cught by fishermen.

Also make the girl mermaid choose a blonde girl.

And its set in a medieval world thats advanced on slavery and cross breeding and has mutant bugs.

Thanks.

==New here==

So I'm working on a story called [[Three sisters]] in the adult section. I'm just wondering if anyone is enjoying it as of yet, its still a WIP and there is still loads of work to be done with it. Anyway let me know if there are things you would like to see in it, or anything else.

-[[User:Tapdancingfish|Tapdancingfish]] 23:39, 14 August 2014 (UTC)

==I have questions==
Ive just joined but having been writting up my own story for months, i want to know if its possible to keep my story hidden from public until im ready for them to read it? Also is there anyway for me to revert unwanted edits by other users (to be honest i dont want any users editing my work unless its to fix grammar)?
[[User:Blitzbear93|Blitzbear93]] 14:01, 14 September 2014 (UTC)Blitzbear93
:Hi,
:I suggest that you create a wiki to write your story, then you blank the page in the last edit. Nobody can read it when opening your wiki, but you can easily retrieve your own story in the revision history page (clicking on the previous archived version). You cannot really prevent any user from editing, but whether it happens, you have the right to make reverts, too, so you can check your work periodically if you are worried about that. You may mention at the beginning of the story the following sentence :
:''Please do not change or add pages (unless you correct my orthography, which you are welcome to do). Thank you.''
:Good luck. -- [[User:Girl Mamtha|Girl Mamtha]] 20:10, 26 October 2014 (UTC)

== Linking to outside sites ==

So, I've been trying for over two hours to upload the first page of my my story. However, submissions with outside links can only be submitted once every 20 minutes, a common sense policy I have no issues with. My problem comes when the first submission attempt loads the page again with a captcha to prove I'm not a spam bot. Entering the captcha, I discover that triggering the Captcha counts as a story submission and makes me wait 20 minutes before I can actually submit it. Annoying, but okay. I wait the 20 minutes, hit submit, and discover that my login has timed out. I log in again to discover that being informed that I timed out COUNTS AS A GODDAMN STORY SUBMISSION. I went around this loop AGAIN, keeping track of the time in an attempt to not have to repeat it, with no more success. It should not be this hard to link to a goddamn discussion/writers collaboration thread on another website.

Oh, and hitting submit and being told you have to wait ALSO counts, so if you misjudge by one minute, you have to wait EVEN MORE.

EDIT: After another 40 minutes of trying, I have given up and removed the link. This Kraken shall be wrestled another day.

== Is this websites community still active? ==

A few years back I used to frequently use this website a lot, I never had an account though.
Now I want to contribute stories and etc.
But I'm worried the hay day of this website is over.
How active is this community?

Tapdancingfish- 2/19/2015
I'm still around and a few others, dunno how active the site is as I don't see updates very often.

== New here! Started a story! "My Worlds" ==

I'm new here so I don't know if the site is still very active.
If yes then help if you want with my story, My Worlds.
I suck at grammar so help with that too.

==Still seeing if people are around==
Site seemed dead for awhile but you never know if people are lurking around out there. If you are give a shout out, if not, well then you can't read this.

-[[User:Noseknows|Noseknows]] 8:31, 19 May 2015 (UTC)

Oh man, this site was much busier back in the day. I really hope the website's community bounces back again, it'd probably motivate me to write once more and finish Remember. If not, i'll just return to checking in every few months.

-[[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] 16:17, 5 June 2015 (UTC)
: Seems there is great interest in reviving this site, or one that is similar, but perhaps at a site that is better maintained? If enough project participants were interested, you could request CYOS.wiki at Wiki.wiki (that's the URL) and have it hosted there for free. You could either start from scratch or migrate over any content of interest. -[[User:JOR|JOR]] 21:06, 28 July 2015 (UTC)

I want so bad, but I simply don't have the time to maintain it, I have a tonne of responsibilities I have to attend and I can really only check on this site once every few months. If this site got revamped or a new one was made sure I can definitely contribute and add more to my story(ies), but until then I'll wait till something happens.

-[[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] 15:10, 12 October 2015 (UTC)

== How do I delete my account? ==

Don't think I'm ever coming back here.

Talk:Main Page

2015-10-18T06:21:26Z

Mrraymangouw: /* How do I delete my account? */ new section

The guys grope her vagina.

2015-09-09T20:37:18Z

Mrraymangouw:

Continue to tease SI

2015-07-05T12:13:40Z

Mrraymangouw:

Give Jermey a show SI

2015-07-05T12:12:20Z

Mrraymangouw:

[[Category: The Humiliation of Katie]] [[Category: Satellite Installation]]

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| bgcolor="#KC9OC" valign="top" width="100%" colspan="3"| '''Status'''
|-
| bgcolor=#C0C0C0 valign="top" width="8%"| Condition
| bgcolor=#FFFFFF valign="top" width="8%"| Slightly Horny
| bgcolor=#C0C0C0 valign="top" width="84%" rowspan="4"| Apparel and Items: Baggy top and Short shorts
|-
| bgcolor=#C0C0C0 valign="top"| Day, Time
| bgcolor=#FFFFFF valign="top"| Thursday, 12PM
|-
| bgcolor=#C0C0C0 valign="top"| Humiliation
| bgcolor=#FFFFFF valign="top"| 0%
|-
| bgcolor=#C0C0C0 valign="top"| Horniness
| bgcolor="#FFFFFF valign="top"| 60%
|}

'''Humiliation: -10'''

'''Horniness: +10'''

Katie reached for the remote and was about to pull it out. But first she wanted to see what Jeremy was doing one more time before she got up.

She didnt know what the hell came over her as she let her shirt fall back down towards her bouncing tits again. She looked back again. Jeremy was now standing, rubbing on the massive bulge in his pants.

Katie was feeling a heat wave come across her. She reached the remote and was about to pull it out. But she first wanted to see what Jeremy was doing one more time before getting up.

Katie didn't know what the hell came over her as she let the shirt fall back down towards her bouncing large tits again. She looked back again. Jeremy was now standing rubbing on the massive bulge in his pants.

Katie was feeling a heat wave come across her. She let her baggy shirt slide further down her body. Her nipples were now fully erect. She'd never done anything like this before. She was always such a good girl. Her eyes were mesmerized on Jeremy's bulge as he continued to rub himself faster. She could feel her pussy heating up. She stuck her ass up higher. She knew that her shorts were now completely up in her ass crack. Her ass may as well not been covered. Her heart was racing faster. She knew she shouldn't be doing this, but it felt so good teasing him. She pretended that her arm was stuck in the couch. That was her excuse to rock her ass back and forth.

[[Take the remote out SI]]

[[Continue to tease SI]]

Keep trying SI

2015-07-05T12:09:12Z

Mrraymangouw:

Get on her hands and Knees SI

2015-07-05T12:07:16Z

Mrraymangouw:

Couch

2015-07-05T12:05:56Z

Mrraymangouw:

Beg her to reconsider, tell her you'll do anything!

2015-06-29T21:46:41Z

Mrraymangouw:

After a long pause, Molly sits opposite you. "You'll do anything?"

You tell her again. You swear you'll do whatever it takes for her to forgive you.

"Fine. I have three conditions. Firstly, since you can't get a job, forget it. You'll be in charge of the house and you'll be keeping things tidy. I'm fed up with coming home from a real job and having to clean up after you and cook my dinner and yours!"

You nod your head. Seems fair, after all.

"Secondly. You'll have your dick in that."

She points to Gemma, who is holding a silver chastity device with a pink padlock.

"Since I can't trust you to behave, I'm taking control. I will have the only key. Let's see you fuck someone with that on."

Gemma tosses the device onto your lap.

"Thirdly, you need a punishment. Strip, get on your knees, and apologise to me for everything you've done and promise you'll do everything I tell you from now on."

You stare at her, dumbfounded, the chastity cage still in your hands.

She raises an eyebrow, "well?"

[[You do as she says]]

[[Tell her this is too much]]

[[Category: Sissified & Enslaved]]

Abandon them and keep running. They'll just keep falling down

2015-06-28T22:13:41Z

Mrraymangouw:

'''Status: Bottomless and adrenalized'''

The panties are so wet they can't be used anymore. They'll just keep slipping down. And putting on sweaty panties would feel terrible in this heat. Besides, you wanted to be naughty. Running around a public pond pantiless with your shirt as a dress is pretty naughty. You enjoy the run so much you don't notice that your "dress" is riding up exposing the bottom of your cunt and most of your ass until you feel as breeze over your bare labia. What do you do?

*[[Let it keep riding up]]
*[[Pull it down]]
*[[Stop running sit down instead]]
*[[A sweaty riding up dress is no good. Take it off.]]

[[Category: Oops! You're Naked!]]

Katie's Camping Trip - Katie gets mad and yells back

2015-06-18T21:48:27Z

Mrraymangouw: Created page with 'Category: The Humiliation of Katie {| width="100%" | bgcolor="#KC9OC" valign="top" width="100%" colspan="3"| '''Status''' |- | bgcolor=#C0C0C0 valign="top" width="8%"| Condi…'

Category:The Humiliation of Katie

2015-06-17T19:48:36Z

Mrraymangouw:

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|-
| bgcolor=#C0C0C0 valign="top" width="8%"| Condition
| bgcolor=#FFFFFF valign="top" width="8%"| {{{Condition}}}
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|-
| bgcolor=#C0C0C0 valign="top"| Day, Time
| bgcolor=#FFFFFF valign="top"| {{{Day, Time}}}
|-
| bgcolor=#C0C0C0 valign="top"| Need to Bathroom
| bgcolor=#FFFFFF valign="top"| {{{Need to Use Bathroom}}}
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|}

The Beginning - [[The Humiliation of Katie]]

[[Storyboard]] - 415 Chapters Registered in the Storyboard (If the count below is higher than this count, a new chapter was recently added.

UPDATE : Over 400!!!!

Chapters added recently. (For your convenience.)
----

New additions in [[Series 1 - New Job]] and [[A Humiliating Day at Home - Satellite Installation]]

[[Katie gets even by ripping off Cat's skirt . . . who is wearing panties -- a tiny thong]]

[[Katie gets even by ripping off Samantha's skirt . . . Samantha isn't wearing panties]]

[[Samantha wants revenge]]

[[Make Katie eat her out]]

[[Katie uses her tongue]]

[[They Stop]]

[[Katie's Camping Trip - Katie's Mom Goes Back with the Boys]]

[[Katie's Camping Trip - The sun is starting to set, and their mother hasn't returned yet]]

[[Katie's Camping Trip - She wakes up badly sunburned]]

[[Katie's Camping Trip - Katie is Sent Back with the Boys, and Gets Lost with Them]]

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[[Category:Adult Stories]]

Katie's Camping Trip - Katie is Sent Back with the Boys, and Gets Lost with Them

2015-06-16T22:28:11Z

Katie's Camping Trip - Emily Gives Katie the Baby Oil

2015-06-16T21:44:22Z

Mrraymangouw:

[[Category: The Humiliation of Katie]]

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Their mother looked back when she heard Katie hit the ground.

"Oh that's a good idea!" their mother said, seeing Katie naked with the oil on her lap.

Her mom took her by her hand and pulled her out to the towel that was laid out on the ground for her. Katie glanced back at Emily who was busy zipping up the bag as she shot a grin over her direction. She found herself being pushed down on the towel as her mother opened the bottle and slobbered her hand with the stuff. Rubbing her hands together, she started running her hands over Katie's skin, soaking it in the oil. Her mother left no where untouched on her front side, everywhere from the soles of her feet, to her sensitive labia, to her pink little nipples. It was like her mother was babying her by oiling her when she could just as easily do it! Katie knew that Emily played off of their mother's short-sided ignorance.

"Alright, flip over honey." her mother told her.

Katie grudgingly turned over onto her breasts and belly. Her mother started working on her legs, rubbing the length of them so that they were slippery and glossy just like her front side. Her mom was just about to squirt some more oil on her hands when Katie heard the voices of some boys. Katie looked sideways and saw a group of boys about 16 or 17 coming their direction. Her mom was in the way, hiding her naked body from the boys so Katie used the extra time to turn over and cover herself with the towel she was lying on.

"Don't honey! You'll get sand stuck all over you!" her mom told her, pinning her down with one hand.

"Hi!" one of the boys said to them.

"Good afternoon!" her mother replied as Emily just gave them a wave and a wink in her sexy bikini-clad body.

"Yeah, umm we are lost. We are trying to get back to the cabin area but we lost the path." one of the boys explained.

"We can point you in the right direction." Katie's mom assured them "Emily can you help these boys while I finish up oiling Katie."

"Sure." Emily smiled from the other side of Katie "Come over here boys."

Katie realized what was happening, Emily was bringing the boys over to where they would be able to see her naked! Her mom squirted more oil onto her hands and started massaging Katie's giggly butt just as the boys got a clear view of her backside. Their eyes bulged out, just like her pants as they saw her mom rubbing her skin so that it was glossed up. Emily took her time explaining how to get back, so that the boys could get an eye-full of Katie. She was just glad that they could only see her embarrassingly large butt.

"Katie can you turn over so I can check that the oil is staying in?" her mom asked, pushing Katie over.

Katie immediately tried to cover herself from the boys, but it was in vain as her mother swatted her hands away.

"I need to see Katie!" her mom told her.

Katie was left utterly naked and looking back up at the group of four boys slightly younger than she was. Her pink nipples at the points of her breasts, her womanhood, her glossy skin, everything was left open to their hungry eyes. Katie's cheeks burned with embarrassment and humiliation.

"Looks good Katie!" her mom said, allowing Katie to cover herself.

"You really shouldn't be afraid of your body Katie, everyone is naked beneath their clothes!" her mom told her.

"Did you catch all that?" Emily asked the distracted boys.

"Yeah, ummm, we're going to need someone to bring us back..." one of the boys replied.

Emily laughed and Katie's mom looked up to the boys.

"One of us will go back with you." Katie's mom told them.

[[Katie's Camping Trip - Katie's Mom Goes Back with the Boys]]

[[Katie's Camping Trip - Katie is Sent Back with the Boys, and Gets Lost with Them]]

They Stop

2015-05-17T21:45:24Z

Mrraymangouw:

Samantha wants revenge

2015-05-17T21:42:55Z

Mrraymangouw:

Stay in the mall, hoping that this day could still be good

2015-05-04T21:51:08Z

Mrraymangouw:

You took a deep sign, close your eyes and think:

"No, this won't ruin your day. Just stay calm. Everything will be alright."

You walk further in the mall and decide to:

[[Go to a restaurant inside the mall]]

[[Go to an arcade]]

[[Go to a clothing store (Kiki)]]

[[Talk to Tyler]]

[[Category: Public Nudity]]

Stay in the mall, hoping that this day could still be good

2015-05-04T21:50:17Z

Mrraymangouw:

Stay in the mall, hoping that this day could still be good

2015-05-04T21:48:36Z

Mrraymangouw: Created page with 'You took a deep sign, close your eyes and think: "No, this won't ruin your day. Just stay calm. Everything will be alright." You walk further in the mall and decide to: [[Go t…'

You took a deep sign, close your eyes and think:

"No, this won't ruin your day. Just stay calm. Everything will be alright."

You walk further in the mall and decide to:

[[Go to a restaurant inside the mall]]

[[Go to the arcade]]

[[Go to a clothes store]]

[[Category: Public Nudity]]

The mall - “you know you want to see this.”

2015-05-03T06:23:38Z

Mrraymangouw:

Katie's Accident in Art - Harper Records Katie doing all off the above

2015-04-08T01:32:17Z

Just follow Cathy and do whatever she wants you to do.

2015-03-16T22:20:53Z

Mrraymangouw:

Katie Had Lost Her Bikini

2015-03-12T23:16:20Z

Mrraymangouw:

Category:The Humiliation of Katie

2015-03-02T07:12:06Z

Mrraymangouw:

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The Beginning - [[The Humiliation of Katie]]

[[Storyboard]] - 372 Chapters Registered in the Storyboard (If the count below is higher than this count, a new chapter was recently added.

UPDATE : Got to 350

Chapters added recently. (For your convenience.)
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[[Katie does not get free. She is still tied to the tree Monday morning when school starts]]

[[Romantic Rival - The Redneck Passes Out from Drinking, Giving Katie the Chance to Look for Something She might use to get free of her bonds]]

[[Romantic Rival - Katie doesn't find anything, and decides to take her chances in the woods, rather than stay in the cabin]]

[[Katie has to walk home]]

[[Epilogue - The Hazing 01]]

[[Katie Searches Through Boxes Until she finds a knife; a long slow process]]

[[Romantic Rival - Katie manages to reach the road, but is she traveling in the right direction?]]

[[The Cheerleaders Run Onto the Field... But Samantha And Her Crew Have Plans For Katie]]

[[Games with Jill - Pulled on an oversized sweater, panties and old basketball shorts.]]

[[Games with Jill - Aunt Jill stopped her.]]

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[[Category:Adult Stories]]

Games with Jill - Pulled on an oversized sweater, panties and old basketball shorts.

2015-03-02T07:11:30Z

Mrraymangouw:

[[Category: The Humiliation of Katie]]

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| bgcolor=#FFFFFF valign="top"| Saturday, Morning
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From behind, the teen could hear her aunt begin to zip up her backpack. Frantically, Katie started throwing whatever she could grab onto her body. The teen had no time to register what she now had on. She could feel the fabrics hang loosely around her figure but thankfully covered all of the essentials.

With a sigh of relief, the brunette turned to her mirror to see what she was now wearing. The results weren't the best.

The mirror welcomed her with an image of a young girl practically swimming in the white keyhole sweater she bought herself for Christmas two years ago. When purchasing the item, the teen framed the top as an investment to her parents; saying that she would wear the top all the time when she was able to fill it out. It was clear that time had not come yet as the hole in the sweater showed off a lot more of Katie’s C-cups than she wanted. Her nipples pressed against the edge of the opening, ready to reveal themselves to the world on a moment’s notice. The sweater had been a topic she never wanted to bring up, especially around Christmas time, preferring to let the article become the victim of wear and tear inside the closet.

Her trousers were a similar disaster. The elasticity in the basketball shorts gave way long ago and hanged loosely around Katie’s hips. Streaks of pink could be seen across the red fabric, primarily around the crotch, referencing an earlier mishap she caused.

''That’s actually how I got these shorts to begin with....... which means that these are actually Kevin’s!''

The teen shivered thinking about what her older brother did in these shorts and what his “dates” would do in these shorts. Of course, they were clean now but Katie believed that the article could use a second helping of bleach.

Unlike her shorts, the elastic on the brunette’s panties hugged her curves a little too much. The teen kept her movements limited as she could feel the panties struggle to stay in one piece with every step. It was obvious that the article was several years old, making Katie ponder what their actual appearance was. If Aunt Jill was to force her to take off her older brother’s stained basketball shorts, she really didn’t want to parade in kiddie panties with hearts on them.

“Really? That’s what you picked?”

''Speaking of which...''

Katie turned to face her elder and explained, “It was all I had left.”

Aunt Jill rolled her eyes. “Let’s go.”

The teen followed her down the stairs with the biggest smile on her face. Sure, what she got wasn’t great but it beat being stuck in nothing but a tee shirt or just plain naked.

Katie was about to enter Aunt Jill’s car before...

[[Games with Jill - Aunt Jill’s chihuahua tried to jump into Katie’s keyhole sweater.]]

[[Games with Jill - Aunt Jill stopped her.]]

[[Games with Jill - It started to rain.]]

[[Games with Jill - Nothing happens. They make it to the daycare without incident.]]

Category:The Humiliation of Katie

2015-02-27T19:03:31Z

Mrraymangouw:

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The Beginning - [[The Humiliation of Katie]]

[[Storyboard]] - 370 Chapters Registered in the Storyboard (If the count below is higher than this count, a new chapter was recently added.

UPDATE : Got to 350

Chapters added recently. (For your convenience.)
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[[Katie does not get free. She is still tied to the tree Monday morning when school starts]]

[[Romantic Rival - The Redneck Passes Out from Drinking, Giving Katie the Chance to Look for Something She might use to get free of her bonds]]

[[Romantic Rival - Katie doesn't find anything, and decides to take her chances in the woods, rather than stay in the cabin]]

[[Katie has to walk home]]

[[Epilogue - The Hazing 01]]

[[Katie Searches Through Boxes Until she finds a knife; a long slow process]]

[[Romantic Rival - Katie manages to reach the road, but is she traveling in the right direction?]]

[[The Cheerleaders Run Onto the Field... But Samantha And Her Crew Have Plans For Katie]]

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[[Category:Adult Stories]]

Category:The Humiliation of Katie

2015-02-27T19:03:13Z

Mrraymangouw:

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| bgcolor="#FFFFFF valign="top"| {{{Lvl Humiliation}}}
|}

The Beginning - [[The Humiliation of Katie]]

[[Storyboard]] - 369 Chapters Registered in the Storyboard (If the count below is higher than this count, a new chapter was recently added.

UPDATE : Got to 350

Chapters added recently. (For your convenience.)
----

[[Katie does not get free. She is still tied to the tree Monday morning when school starts]]

[[Romantic Rival - The Redneck Passes Out from Drinking, Giving Katie the Chance to Look for Something She might use to get free of her bonds]]

[[Romantic Rival - Katie doesn't find anything, and decides to take her chances in the woods, rather than stay in the cabin]]

[[Katie has to walk home]]

[[Epilogue - The Hazing 01]]

[[Katie Searches Through Boxes Until she finds a knife; a long slow process]]

[[Romantic Rival - Katie manages to reach the road, but is she traveling in the right direction?]]

[[The Cheerleaders Run Onto the Field... But Samantha And Her Crew Have Plans For Katie]]

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[[Category:Adult Stories]]

Katie has to walk home

2015-02-25T13:18:14Z

Mrraymangouw:

[[Category: The Humiliation of Katie]]

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|-
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Katie didn't want to call either her mother or any of her fellow cheerleaders and ask them for a ride. Her mother might not understand, and her fellow cheerleaders, her so-called 'friends,' had left her alone and tied up to face the humiliation by herself.

Wishing this day would end, Katie said to the security guard, "I guess I'll walk, then."

"Don't let me stop you."

Katie turned and walked away, looking neither left nor right, but keeping her eyes focused on the end of the road, where she would have to turn down the cross-street. She kept one hand covering her pussy and the other covering her tits. She wore her backpack slung as low as she could get it, hoping it covered at least some of her ass. As she walked away from the school, the whistles and catcalls of her fellow students rang in her ears.

She didn't look at anyone around her, but heard the comments of several people she knew. She ignored them all, however.

At the end of the block, Katie turned right and started walking down the right side of the street. She heard a vehicle pull up beside her. She glanced at it and kept walking.

Too late did she realize that the vehicle was a pickup truck she had seen before, and recently. She started to turn towards it, but before she could complete the maneuver, a paintball pellet hit her in the left buttock.

Katie yelped and jumped. She dropped her left hand, the one she had been using to hide her breasts, to her butt. When she did, Madison, who was riding in the passenger seat of the pickup, and was wielding a wicked-look paintball gun, fired pellets into both of her breasts.

"Why," Katie said.

"We don't have to return the paintball guns until tomorrow," Madison said. "We thought we may as well get some more use out of them."

"Stop," Katie said, walking backwards down the sidewalk, trying to cover herself, and not having much luck.

"Ask me nicely."

"Please stop," Katie said.

Madison grinned. "No," she said. She had been holding her paintball gun pointed at the ground. She raised it now and aimed at Katie as Katie turned and started running.

Katie felt the repeated sting of pellet after pellet hitting her large butt. She ran as fast as she could to the end of the street, turned the corner, and kept running.

Katie didn't slow down until she was about halfway down this block. Then she turned and looked around. The pickup truck was gone. They hadn't followed her.

She didn't see anyone else she knew on the rest of her walk home, and, at this stage, wouldn't have cared if she had. In fact, nothing happened until she was standing on her front door, rooting in a pocket of her backpack for her purse. Then she heard a voice say, "Surprise!"

Katie found her keys and opened the door, trying her best to ignore the new paintball rounds hitting her ass.

Inside her house, she locked the front door and dropped her backpack on the floor.

"Is that you, Katie?" her mother said from the kitchen.

"Yes."

"I had to bring your backpack to school today. Don't forget it again."

"You're worried about my backpack?" Katie said. "All the things that have happened to me, and you're worried about my backpack?"

"What do you mean?"

"Have you wondered why I didn't bring my backpack school today?" Katie said.

"Yes. Why?"

"I had no way to get it from my room. I was tied to a tree in front of the school. Where did you think I was all weekend?"

"Weren't you here this weekend?"

Giving up, Katie went upstairs. She threw her backpack onto her bed, then went into the shower. In the shower, she scrubbed and scrubbed herself until she washed the paint off her body.

She wondered how long it would take her to live this incident down.

[[Epilogue - The Hazing 01 | Epilogue]]

Category:The Humiliation of Katie

2015-02-25T13:14:36Z

Mrraymangouw:

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The Beginning - [[The Humiliation of Katie]]

[[Storyboard]] - 368 Chapters Registered in the Storyboard (If the count below is higher than this count, a new chapter was recently added.

UPDATE : Got to 350

Chapters added recently. (For your convenience.)
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[[The player gets in front of Katie, but offers to help her, for a price]]

[[Samantha gets free and unties the others, but leaves Katie]]

[[Before Katie can escape, the cheerleaders and football players from Nothwood East come back and find her]]

[[Katie does not get free. She is still tied to the tree Monday morning when school starts]]

[[Romantic Rival - The Redneck Passes Out from Drinking, Giving Katie the Chance to Look for Something She might use to get free of her bonds]]

[[Romantic Rival - Katie doesn't find anything, and decides to take her chances in the woods, rather than stay in the cabin]]

[[Katie has to walk home]]

[[Epilogue - The Hazing 01]]

[[Katie Searches Through Boxes Until she finds a knife; a long slow process]]

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[[Category:Adult Stories]]

Epilogue

2015-02-25T13:12:14Z

Mrraymangouw: Epilogue moved to Epilogue - The Hazing 01: Love the epilogue, but I changed it in case other series end, or if there are other endings in this serie.

#REDIRECT [[Epilogue - The Hazing 01]]

Epilogue - The Hazing 01

2015-02-25T13:12:14Z

Mrraymangouw: Epilogue moved to Epilogue - The Hazing 01: Love the epilogue, but I changed it in case other series end, or if there are other endings in this serie.

Lick Samantha and the others clean with someone else

2015-02-23T19:47:40Z

Mrraymangouw:

[[Category:The Humiliation of Katie]]
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Katie thought about the proposal. She just felt too tired and humiliated to lick all these girls alone. But she was too afraid for the punishment she'd get if she took the showers. She knew it was selfish, but...

"I'll do it with someone else." Asked Katie, facing her head to the ground.

"Nice of you," smiled Samantha, and faced the greco-indian girl. "Barbara, get Lin and bring her here."

"Is she still at school?" She asked.

"Yes, she is at the music club. Just say that I wanted to see her here. Oh, and please escort her here, please. I don't want her to run away again."

Barbara nodded, and took off.

Several minutes passed, till she came back with Lin. Katie took a good look at her. She very small and fragile, though she was about the same height as Katie. She had straight black hair, collarbone length. She also seemed to wear red glasses over her green eyes. She was Asian, going by her skin color it is likely that both her parents are Japanese. She also had smaller breast than Katie, presumably B-cup.

"This is Lin, our other playtoy. Say hai, Lin."

She didn't said a word and looked down to the ground.

Samantha continued:

"Lin also tried to join us, but God, did she fail! At least you succeeded, Katie. Anyway Lin, thanks to Katie here you're gonna clean us with your tongue."

Lin didn't look up, but in her eyes was a big shock.

"Come and start with me!" Said Samantha.

Katie and Lin walked in closer on Samantha. They slowly sticked their tongues out to Samantha nude body. Samantha grabbed their heads and pulled them to her skin. The girls tasted her disgusting salty sweat, and almost had to throw up. The girls continued to lick every inch of her. Her chest, her neck, her feet, her crotch and finally her ass. When they were done, Barbara came forward and said:

"Now me!"

[[Katie and Lin continue to lick every girl in the locker room]]

[[Katie and Lin refuse to continue, but will receive punishment]]

Before Katie can escape, the cheerleaders and football players from Nothwood East come back and find her

2015-02-23T19:33:15Z

Mrraymangouw:

[[Category: The Humiliation of Katie]]

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| bgcolor=#FFFFFF valign="top"| Saturday, Morning
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Katie forgot about everything else and focused on getting the rope off her wrists.

She thought she could feel herself making progress, which meant she was encouraged to try even harder. And, yes, she was making progress. She wasn't just imagining it.

Then came the moment when she realized she was nearly free. A few more minutes should do it. She closed her eyes and focused everything on her bonds, wanting to do that last little bit as quickly as she could.

Katie shrieked as someone grabbed her breasts. "What the fuck's going on? her" a voice said.

Katie opened her eyes. One of the cheerleaders from Northwood East, a tall, rather well-endowed blonde, stood scowling at her. Katie looked at her, then down at the hands that were squeezing her tits.

"Tie her up again," the blonde said. "Do it right this time. The bitch is almost free."

"You got it, Madison," said a male voice from behind her. Katie thought she recognized it as the voice of Ryan, the Northwood East football player who had pretended to help her, but in fact led her into an ambush.

Katie shook her head and tried to speak as Ryan re-tied her hands, much more tightly this time, finally looping the rope around the tree trunk, holding her securely in place. While he did that, the blonde, Madison, activated the vibrators taped to her breasts and pussy.

When that was done, Madison said, "Get the vibrator on her ass. Turn it on, and make sure it's set on high. I want this bitch to really feel it."

Ryan did so, taking the chance to grope Katie's butt as he did so.

"The batteries are fresh, bitch," Madison said. "They should last all weekend."

Ryan joined her. They both took out phones. Katie tried to plead with them as they took picture after picture of her humiliation, but they paid no attention.

She tried to speak, tried to pull herself away from the tree, tried to get them to help her. The only thing she achieved was to make her boobs bounce. And Ryan and Madison both took videos of her struggles.

Finally, they put their cameras away. Ryan turned and went back to his truck, which was parked on the street. Katie had never heard it arrive, so intent had she been on getting her bonds loose.

"I see the others left you," Madison said. "Well, that's okay with me. You're the bitch we want the most. I just wish I could be here Monday morning, when you're found."

Then she went over to the truck. She got in the passenger side. Katie watched as Ryan drove away, then watched the truck disappear in the distance.

As soon as she was alone again, Katie started struggling once more with her bonds. She quickly realized that they were much tighter this time. If she got free, it was going to take her a lot longer. Fortunately, she had plenty of time.

[[Katie does not get free. She is still tied to the tree Monday morning when school starts]]

Category:The Humiliation of Katie

2015-02-17T23:39:33Z

Mrraymangouw:

Lick Samantha and the others clean with someone else

2015-02-17T23:34:26Z

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Katie thought about the proposal. She just felt too tired and humiliated to lick all these girls alone. But she was too afraid for the punishment she'd get if she took the showers. She knew it was selfish, but...

"I'll do it with someone else." Asked Katie, facing her head to the ground.

"Nice of you," smiled Samantha, and faced the greco-indian girl. "Barbara, get Ashley and bring her here."

"Is she still at school?" She asked.

"Yes, she is at the music club. Just say that I wanted to see her here. Oh, and please escort her here, please. I don't want her to run away again."

"Sure thing." And she took off.

Several minutes passed, till she came back with Ashley. Katie took a good look at her. She very small and fragile, though she was about the same height as Katie. She had straight black hair, collarbone length. She also seemed to wear red glasses over her green eyes. She was Asian, going by her skin color it is likely that both her parents are Japanese. She also had smaller breast than Katie, presumably B-cup.

"This is Ashley, our other playtoy. Say hai, Ashley."

She didn't said a word and looked down to the ground.

Samantha continued:

"Ashley also tried to join us, but God, did she fail! At least you succeeded, Katie. Anyway Ashley, thanks to Katie here you're gonna clean us with your tongue."

Ashley didn't even look up, but in her eyes was a big shock.

"Come and start with me!" Said Samantha.

Katie and Ashley walked in closer on Samantha. They slowly sticked their tongues out to Samantha nude body. Samantha grabbed their heads and pulled them to her skin. The girls tasted her disgusting salty sweat, and almost had to throw up. The girls continued to lick every inch of her. Her chest, her neck, her feet, her crotch and finally her ass. When they were done, Barbara came forward and said:

"Now me!"

[[Katie and Ashley continue to lick every girl in the locker room]]

[[Katie and Ashley refuse to continue, but will receive punishment]]

Category:The Humiliation of Katie

2015-02-12T23:50:32Z

Mrraymangouw:

Category:The Humiliation of Katie

2015-02-12T23:49:43Z

Mrraymangouw:

The coach has another exercise for Katie to do because of her attire

2015-02-12T23:47:33Z

Mrraymangouw:

[[Category:The Humiliation of Katie]]
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After a minute of running and spanking, the coach blew her whistle and said:

"Great job, ladies. Go and sit on the bench now."

The girls walked towards the bench. Katie finally felt relieved, when suddenly the coach said:

"Hold on Katie, don't you go just jet. You have to do more exercises."

"B-but why, coach?!" Asked Katie surprised.

"As punishment for your attire, or lack thereof. You have to do 80 push-ups, 100 jumping jacks, three minutes wall sitting, and a hand stand for a full minute without a wall."

"B-but I'm so tired I can barely stand!" Said Katie, who was about to cry.

"I don't care! Do it, or I'll sent you to the principal's office."

Katie knew she could bring much into this argument, so she began exercising.

Firstly, she went to the ground, steadying her feet and hands to the ground, and started doing push-ups.

"5,6,7..." Yelled the coach, as she counted the push-ups. Katie tried not to look up, but she couldn't control her urges, and looked up anyway. There she saw the other cheerleaders laughing to themselves. How could she even face them anymore after all of this?

"78,79, and 80! Alright, now do the jumping jacks!" Demanded the coach.

Katie got slowly back on her feet. She spread her legs and arms, and started jumping. The worst part wasn't even that she now had to face her class now, but the fact that she wasn't a bra no more made it worse. Her breast started to go up and down, which hurts like hell. She started to wish that her breast were a cup smaller. When she was done, she had to go wall sitting. She always thought that wall sitting was a nightmare, but now, after this exercise, she thought she could pass out any minute. She could feel the muscles in her upper legs hurting more by the second. She doesn't know how much longer she could take any of this. These three minutes felt like an eternity.

Finally, she had to do a hand stand. She took a step back, and stood on her hands, facing the others. By now, she was so tired, she started to see black. She couldn't take any more of this, so she fell down, with her butt up towards the other. The cheerleaders became hysterical after seeing this.

The coach signed:
"Alright, you passed for today. But don't be such a wuss next time! Everyone, hit the showers."

Katie was relieved to hear this. After all of this, Katie started to really sweat by now. She walked to the dressing room, and wanted to clean herself.

She saw the other cheerleaders undressing themselves for the showers, some of them were already nude, but didn't go to the shower. When she was about to turn on the valves, Samantha grabbed her arm and said:

"Not so fast. We have a special shower prepared."

"W-what kind of s-shower?" Asked an tired Katie.

"You, of course. Lick us clean."

"W-what!"

"If you don't like it, you could just split the punishment up with our other playtoy. Or take the actual showers, though you might get some problems with that. What's it gonna be?

[[Lick Samantha and the others clean]]

[[Lick Samantha and the others clean with someone else]]

[[Take a shower, but deal with another torment]]

The coach has another exercise for Katie to do because of her attire

2015-02-12T23:31:29Z

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After a minute of running and spanking, the coach blew her whistle and said:

"Great job, ladies. Go and sit on the bench now."

The girls walked towards the bench. Katie finally felt relieved, when suddenly the coach said:

"Hold on Katie, don't you go just jet. You have to do more exercises."

"B-but why, coach?!" Asked Katie surprised.

"As punishment for your attire, or lack thereof. You have to do 80 push-ups, 100 jumping jacks, three minutes wall sitting, and a hand stand for a full minute without a wall."

"B-but I'm so tired I can barely stand!" Said Katie, who was about to cry.

"I don't care! Do it, or I'll sent you to the principal's office."

Katie knew she could bring much into this argument, so she began exercising.

Firstly, she went to the ground, steadying her feet and hands to the ground, and started doing push-ups.

"5,6,7..." Yelled the coach, as she counted the push-ups. Katie tried not to look up, but she couldn't control her urges, and looked up anyway. There she saw the other cheerleaders laughing to themselves. How could she even face them anymore after all of this?

"78,79, and 80! Alright, now do the jumping jacks!" Demanded the coach.

Katie got slowly back on her feet. She spread her legs and arms, and started jumping. The worst part wasn't even that she now had to face her class now, but the fact that she wasn't a bra no more made it worse. Her breast started to go up and down, which hurts like hell. She started to wish that her breast were a cup smaller. When she was done, she had to go wall sitting. She always thought that wall sitting was a nightmare, but now, after this exercise, she thought she could pass out any minute. She could feel the muscles in her upper legs hurting more by the second. She doesn't know how much longer she could take any of this. These three minutes felt like an eternity.

Finally, she had to do a hand stand. She took a step back, and stood on her hands, facing the others. By now, she was so tired, she started to see black. She couldn't take any more of this, so she fell down, with her butt up towards the other. The cheerleaders became hysterical after seeing this.

The coach signed:
"Alright, you passed for today. But don't be such a wuss next time! Everyone, hit the showers."

Katie was relieved to hear this. After all of this, Katie started to really sweat by now. She walked to the dressing room, and wanted to clean herself.

She saw the other cheerleaders undressing themselves for the showers, some of them were already nude, but didn't go to the shower. When she was about to turn on the valves, Samantha grabbed her arm and said:

"Not so fast. We have a special shower prepared."

"W-what kind of s-shower?" Asked an tired Katie.

"You, of course. Lick us clean."

"W-what!"

"If you don't like it, you could just split the punishment up with our other playtoy. Or take the actual showers, though you might get some problems with that. What's it gonna be?

[[Lick Samantha and the others clean]]

[[Lick Samantha and the others clean with someone else]]

[[Take a shower, but deal with another torment]]

Category:Sissified & Enslaved

2015-02-10T20:22:50Z

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This is the index of [[Sissified & Enslaved]]

Go to the ground

2015-02-08T20:03:45Z

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You climb down the fire escape, carefully looking that nobody is downstairs. You feel the cold rusty metal of the stairs on your bare feet. You're afraid that the cold weather might give you hypothermia. You go lower and lower down the stairs till you see that the stairs don't reach the ground. It is an 18 feet drop. You see that there is a dumpster that could break your fall. You climb down the final stairs, hang on the last bar and...

[[Make the jump]]

[[Keep hanging on the bar]]

[[Category: ENF]]

JDIA: Angelina sees a paparazzo photographing them from a nearby tree.

2015-01-30T20:06:14Z

Mrraymangouw:

Suddenly Angelina noticed movement out of the corner of her eye and saw a figure in a nearby tree, with a large camera.

"Shut up!" She said to Jennifer, clamping a big hand over the dazed star's mouth. "Hey you!" She shouted at the cameraman. The figure suddenly started to hurriedly get out of the tree but she called again. "Wait, wait! Don't worry I'm not upset, come down here! I want to talk!"

The camera man suspiciously got out of the tree and cautiously entered the pool area. He was in his late twenties and pudgy with glasses and spiked hair.

"How many more of you are out there?" Angelina asked. He turned, reluctant, but then called out to the hidden audience. A skinny black guy and a Asian woman with piercings stepped into the pool area, camera's slung over their shoulders.

*[[JDIA: Angelina gets the photographers to photograph her fucking Jennifer.]]
*[[JDIA: Angelina gets the photographers to take humiliating photographs of Jennifer.]]
*[[JDIA: Angelina invites the photographers to fuck Jennifer.]]
[[Category: Just Do It Already!]]

Throw a smoke pellet at Harley to disorientate her

2015-01-21T13:24:22Z

Mrraymangouw:

'''Location: Wayne Enterprises R&D facility East Wing'''

Batman quickly grabbed a smoke pellet from his belt, and threw it at Harley, disorientating her. She yelled:

"Wrong move, B-man."

Since Harley never moved her gun away from the scientist, she knew that she could just pull the trigger, even though she couldn't see him.

A gunshot was heard, and as soon as the smoke cleared up, Batman saw the scientist dead on the ground.

"Should've been more careful, Bat-brain."

'''Game Over'''

*[[Exit the office (Batman - Office) |Try again]]

[[Category: Batman vs Joker]]

Throw a smoke pellet at Harley to disorientate her

2015-01-21T13:23:34Z

Mrraymangouw:

'''Location: Wayne Enterprises R&D facility East Wing'''

Batman quickly grabbed a smoke pellet from his belt, and threw it at Harley, disorientating her. She yelled:

"Wrong move, B-man."

Since Harley never moved her gun away from the scientist, she knew that she could just pull the trigger, even though she couldn't see him.

A gunshot was heard, and as soon as the smoke cleared up, Batman saw the scientist dead on the ground.

"Should've been more careful, Bat-brain."

*[[Exit the office (Batman - Office) |Try again]]

[[Category: Batman vs Joker]]

Throw a smoke pellet at Harley to disorientate her

2015-01-21T13:23:06Z

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'''Location: Wayne Enterprises R&D facility East Wing'''

Batman quickly grabbed a smoke pellet from his belt, and threw it at Harley, disorientating her. She yelled:

"Wrong move, B-man."

Since Harley never moved her gun away from the scientist, she knew that she could just pull the trigger, even though she couldn't see him.

A gunshot was heard, and as soon as the smoke cleared up, Batman saw the scientist dead on the ground.
"Should've been more careful, Bat-brain."

*[[Exit the office (Batman - Office) |Try again]]

[[Category: Batman vs Joker]]

Batman vs Joker

2015-01-21T13:11:22Z

Mrraymangouw:

==The Beginning==

In this story, you'll be a character from the Batman lore. Who will you be? A hero? A villain?
Whoever you are, your objective is to defeat your opposition.

So? What will you do?

Will you:
*[[Be Good]]
*[[Be Evil]]
*[[Be Neutral]]

[[Category: Batman vs Joker]]

Category:The Humiliation of Katie

2015-01-20T22:02:24Z

Mrraymangouw:

Launch for the goon (Batman - Office)

2015-01-14T19:43:22Z

Mrraymangouw:

'''Location: Wayne Enterprises'''

Batman made a run for the thug. However, in fear for the giant bat, he started shooting at him. Many of the shoots missed it target, but a few were head shots in the Dark Knights head. Batman collapsed, and died on the floor. The thug checked the body and yelled:

"I got him! I got the Bat!"

'''Game Over'''

*[[Head slam the two goons (Batman - Office)|Go back]]

[[Category: Batman vs Joker]] [[Category:Endings]]

Launch for the goon (Batman - Office)

2015-01-14T19:42:27Z

Mrraymangouw:

'''Location: Wayne Enterprises'''

Batman made a run for the thug. However, in fear for the giant bat, he started shooting at him. Many of the shoots missed it target, but a few were head shots in the Dark Knights head. Batman collapsed, and died on the floor. The thug checked on his body and yelled:

"I got him! I got the Bat!"

'''Game Over'''

*[[Head slam the two goons (Batman - Office)|Go back]]

[[Category: Batman vs Joker]] [[Category:Endings]]

Exit the office (Batman - Office)

2015-01-13T23:08:53Z

Mrraymangouw:

'''Location: Wayne Enterprises R&D facility East Wing'''

Batman entered the R&D lab. There he saw Harley Quinn, holding a scientist at gun point, saying:

"Thanks for da codes, doc." She grabbed up a her cell phone and continued:

"Did you hear that, Puddin'?"

On the other side you could hear Joker, sounding pleased with what he heard. Then Harley slowly started to pull the trigger.

Next move?

*[[Throw a smoke pellet at Harley to disorientate her]]

*[[Throw a Batarang to knock the gun out of her hand]]

[[Category: Batman vs Joker]]