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User talk:Platypus

2012-06-07T19:06:18Z

LukeS9713: /* The Neighbors */ new section

Since this page has become rather cluttered, I've moved old discussions to the archive page below. Feel free to leave new messages here. I'll get back to you ASAP!

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>Add new comments below. Do not add new comments to the archive.

I don't know if you've received complaints from any other users recently about this, but there is a syntax error that comes up upon clicking the "Trolling in the Mall" page in SSR. Just a heads up.

-- Pterodactyl

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I just recieved my second warning about not catergorizing pages correctly or pre-empting them with the story title. However, if I did so with the last few entries I've made within any stories, it was a complete accident. I made every attempt to comply. Your message resounded loud and clear, and to be completely honest, you sound like an impudent asshole with severe control issues who prefers to emphasize tone over content. I'll make no more entries, I assure you. In the future, perhaps treat your writers with a little less insolent rudeness and you might not end up with so many endless pages of half-written drivel. (I'm sure you'll erase this message to eradicate the perceived insult, but at least consider what I've said.) User:DickingCream

Hey Platypus,

I'm working on starting The House on Horny Hill. I neglected to save an intermediate page and so some later ones were deleted as orphaned. Could those be recovered so I only have to re-write the page that I forgot to save earlier?
--[[User:DickHardy|DickHardy]] 23:11, 3 April 2012 (UTC)

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Whoa ^^ I get the feeling you're way stricter than my English teacher xp. My spelling and grammar skills are little more than readable I'm afraid. I'm not native English or anything so.. I'll try ^^ (it's only my third language)

It took me over 15 minutes to even figure out what you'd changed on some of those pages ^^, after figuring that out I was left stupefied as to what was wrong with it in the first place -_-. Looks like my grammar may remain beneath your expectations for quite a while yet.. (completely hopeless)

--[[User:Zoroastra|Zoroastra]]

What do you mean 'title of the story?'

-- Apollo.

Playtpus my man {or bird if you are female}
Great place that you have here and fantastic stories going down but l have a slight problem here.
Whenever l try to edit Smutty Sex Romp then this comes up "Permission error...users and bureaucrats allowed."
What in the NINE HELLS does that mean?

-- Apollo

Platypus, sorry i've been no here for a while.....just tell me what ''Choose your own adventure'' are you? I mean what category are you?

Starforce

Ah, OK. But what do you mean by title?

--Starforce

I just made Category: Randy Orton good now?

--Starforce

Then all my pages have the category, if not, example the Pokemon Trainer Academy is PKMN PTA not Pokemon Adventure, it's not my fault it's the creator fault.

--Starforce

--MaxJose

DUDE DID YOU DELETE A BUNCH OF MY STORY PLEASE RESPOND I NEED TO KNOW THIS AND IF YOU DID WHY.

--MaxJose

dude i was wondering if you can find out who did it or if you can get it back i really need this.

== Re: deleteme ==

Oh shit, I guess that makes a lot more sense now that I think about it. Whoops.

My apologies, man. --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 03:23, 1 April 2012 (UTC)

Hi. Something has happened to my story. I keep trying to get my page back but it's blank. I clicked restore and it says it's done but the page still says it's been blanked. How or who did that? Was it when I was editing? Could you restore my page/s for me as I can't seem to find out how.
Continuation
*hi again. I know you fixed it but my page was blanked again. Could you tell me how it's happening. All I did was edit the first page of text. I didn't touch the catagory link or the options i only changed the dialog. Is it something I'm doing by mistake. If it happens again how do i fix it myself so i dont have to bother you. If you couldn't tell I'm new at this*

CaptainMorgan30

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Hello. I'm sorry for bothering you, but I have two questions.
1. Can you delete this page for me? http://editthis.info/choose_your_own_adventure/The_next_morning.._*Black_Dress_2%2BDuran%2BMercs*
Thank you very much. The title for the page doesn't fit with the rest of the story and I seemed to have failed at formatting it correctly which leads me to...

2. I'm a little more than confused at how to make the link appear at the top of the page (under the title of said page) which allows you to go back to a point in the story. I've read the tutorial page and stared at the coding for the page trying to figure it out, but I'm utterly perplexed at it. I'd be extremely grateful if you could shed some light on it for me. --[[User:Happyazngirl|Happyazngirl]] 05:46, 12 April 2012 (UTC)

Sorry Platipus,i forgot to do that.Anyway,do you like how i edited your story?

== iWant Sex ==

Hey Platypus,
I'm new to choose your own adventures, and I really can't figure out anything to write about. However, I read your iWant Sex story, and I got many ways it could keep going. What I guess I'm saying, is this: would you mind if I added to iWant Sex?
Bight99

I'd like to thank you on the advice. I read most of the stuff on creating/editing posts. And I wasn't sure what categories meant, so I skipped adding it on my CYOA. Thank you, as in my first stages of this creation any help at all I appreciate. I'm still not sure if I did the right thing, but nevertheless, THANK YOU. :)

== The Neighbors ==

Hey, Platypus, I got your message about leaving a subject, or whatever, but I don't know how to do that. Could you show me exactly how to do what you said?

The Neighbors

2012-06-07T18:55:39Z

LukeS9713:

Ten miles outside of Newton, Iowa, a quarter mile apart, lived two families:

'''The Blairs''' are a family with five girls.

'''The Sanders''' are a family with five boys, with a distant cousin named Becca visiting from Oregon.

Everybody is on summer break.

'''The Blairs'''

[[Auburn: Short, auburn hair, 20]]

[[Annabelle: Short, brown hair, good boobs, 19]]

[[Adalee: Slim, red-brown hair, 17]]

[[Amelia: Skinny, black hair, 14]]

[[Aliza: Skinny, red haired tomboy, 13]]

'''The Sanders'''

[[Jonathan: Skinny, tall, short black hair, smart, 21]]

[[Caleb: Normal, good worker, musician, ladies man, 19]]

[[Benjamin: Normal, pimpled, computer guy, phenomenal young photographer, 17]]

[[Lucas: A tad skinny, fun, good at everything, pretty ripped for 15]]

[[Noah: Stocky, black haired, quiet, 13]]

[[Becca: Stocky, blonde, good-sized boobs, unlogical, 14]]

Everyone is described with stature, hair, and/or width first.

There are younger kids in both families, that are not mentioned right now.

You will meet other people to interact with later.
[[Category:The Neighbors]]

Becca; she's in the house, and it shouldn't be too hard to grab some naked pics.

2012-06-02T01:39:02Z

LukeS9713: Created page with 'You wait until she's about to take a shower, then you say you have to go to the bathroom. You set down your camera on the stand in front of the toilet, facing the shower: You're …'

You wait until she's about to take a shower, then you say you have to go to the bathroom. You set down your camera on the stand in front of the toilet, facing the shower: You're going to pretend you left it there. Then you leave and hook your remote up to the computer, and you get to see Becca get undressed. You start rolling the video as soon as she grabs her shirt, snapping some pics inbetween. She strips off her shirt, uncovering her hot pink bra. She unsnaps that, revealing some pale pink tits that go with her white skin. Then she takes off her jeans, revealing her light blue thong. She peels that off, and you zoom in to get a good view of her lightly-haired pussy. She rubs herself a bit, and then she...

[[Turns on the shower]]

[[Drops into full masturbation]]

[[Opens the door and catches you right outside]]

The Neighbors/Becca: Stocky, blonde, good-sized boobs, unlogical, 14

2012-06-01T17:02:31Z

LukeS9713: Created page with 'Well, it's been a pretty boring year, and you're glad summer is here. You're going to have fun, but who with? You have surprisingly good boobs, for 14, the result of pressing the…'

Well, it's been a pretty boring year, and you're glad summer is here. You're going to have fun, but who with? You have surprisingly good boobs, for 14, the result of pressing them for pleasure, a thing you've always had. You've been over to the Blair's a few times, and you have fun there.
You like Noah, but you are also starting to more-than-like Lucas. What to do?

[[Look for a chance to seduce Noah]]

[[Find a way to get naked pics to Lucas]]

[[Go lesbian with the Blairs]]
[[Category:The Neighbors]]

The Neighbors/Noah: Stocky, black haired, quiet, 13

2012-06-01T17:00:53Z

LukeS9713: Created page with 'You really don't have many options. Most of the time, people know you're there but don't notice you. However, you've spent the last school year with Becca, and have become pretty…'

You really don't have many options. Most of the time, people know you're there but don't notice you. However, you've spent the last school year with Becca, and have become pretty good friends. Also, though you keep denying it, you've always had a thing for Amelia, and she's never been too distant to you.

[[Go out to the barn with Becca and surprise strip]]

[[Invite the Blairs over for a playdate, and get alone with Amelia in the hayloft]]
[[Category: The Neighbors ]]

The Neighbors

2012-06-01T16:59:12Z

LukeS9713:

Ten miles outside of Newton, Iowa, a quarter mile apart, lived two families:

'''The Blairs''' are a family with five girls, who have a big horse named Promise.

'''The Sanders''' are a family with five boys, with a distant cousin named Becca visiting from Oregon.

Everybody is on summer break.

'''The Blairs'''

[[The Neighbors/Auburn: Short, auburn hair, 20]]

[[The Neighbors/Annabelle: Short, brown hair, good boobs, 19]]

[[The Neighbors/Adalee: Slim, red-brown hair, 17]]

[[The Neighbors/Amelia: Skinny, black hair, 14]]

[[The Neighbors/Aliza: Skinny, red haired tomboy, 13]]

'''The Sanders'''

[[The Neighbors/Jonathan: Skinny, tall, short black hair, smart, 21]]

[[The Neighbors/Caleb: Normal, good worker, musician, ladies man, 19]]

[[The Neighbors/Benjamin: Normal, pimpled, computer guy, phenomenal young photographer, 17]]

[[The Neighbors/Lucas: A tad skinny, fun, good at everything, pretty ripped for 15]]

[[The Neighbors/Noah: Stocky, black haired, quiet, 13]]

[[The Neighbors/Becca: Stocky, blonde, good-sized boobs, unlogical, 14]]

Everyone is described with stature, hair, and/or width first.

There are younger kids in both families, that are not mentioned right now.

You will meet other people to interact with later.
[[Category:The Neighbors]]

The Neighbors

2012-06-01T16:55:14Z

LukeS9713:

Ten miles outside of Newton, Iowa, a quarter mile apart, lived two families:

'''The Blairs''' are a family with five girls, who have a big horse named Promise.

'''The Sanders''' are a family with five boys, with a distant cousin named Becca visiting from Oregon.

Everybody is on summer break.

'''The Blairs'''

[[The Neighbors/Auburn: Short, auburn hair, 20]]

[[The Neighbors/Annabelle: Short, brown hair, good boobs, 19]]

[[The Neighbors/Adalee: Slim, red-brown hair, 17]]

[[The Neighbors/Amelia: Skinny, black hair, 14]]

[[The Neighbors/Aliza: Skinny, red haired tomboy, 13]]

'''The Sanders'''

[[The Neighbors / Jonathan: Skinny, tall, short black hair, smart, 21]]

[[The Neighbors/Caleb: Normal, good worker, musician, ladies man, 19]]

[[The Neighbors/Benjamin: Normal, pimpled, computer guy, phenomenal young photographer, 17]]

[[The Neighbors/Lucas: A tad skinny, fun, good at everything, pretty ripped for 15]]

[[The Neighbors/Noah: Stocky, black haired, quiet, 13]]

[[The Neighbors/Becca: Stocky, blonde, good-sized boobs, unlogical, 14]]

Everyone is described with stature, hair, and/or width first.

There are younger kids in both families, that are not mentioned right now.

You will meet other people to interact with later.
[[Category:The Neighbors]]

The Neighbors/Lucas: A tad skinny, fun, good at everything, pretty ripped for 15

2012-06-01T16:02:01Z

LukeS9713: Created page with 'Now that all of your older brothers are usually out of the house, you have taken over most of the responsibility, such as mowing, and you actually do enjoy cooking breakfast ever…'

Now that all of your older brothers are usually out of the house, you have taken over most of the responsibility, such as mowing, and you actually do enjoy cooking breakfast every now and then. Worst of all, sometimes Mom makes you do laundry.
You can do just about anything, and any job you haven't learned yet, you can pick up pretty fast. You're good with computers, mechanical things, and many, many other things.
So, what are you going to do first?

[[Throw a bonfire party]]

[[Go mow the 1.7 acre of yards]]

[[Hitch a ride to town]]
[[Category:The Neighbors]]

The Neighbors/Benjamin: Normal, pimpled, computer guy, phenomenal young photographer, 17

2012-06-01T16:00:15Z

LukeS9713: Created page with 'So, although you're not the handsomest guy around, you've got an awesome talent with the camera, and girls love that more than almost anything. You've already done some professio…'

So, although you're not the handsomest guy around, you've got an awesome talent with the camera, and girls love that more than almost anything. You've already done some professional work, such as weddings, senior pics, and the like. Now, where do you start?

[[Becca; she's in the house, and it shouldn't be too hard to grab some naked pics.]]

[[Ask one of the seniors if she'd like some nude shots]]

[[Take Adalee out for a photoshoot and then tell her it has to be a nude one]]
[[Category:The Neighbors]]

The Neighbors/Caleb: Normal, good worker, musician, ladies man, 19

2012-06-01T15:58:41Z

LukeS9713: Created page with 'You're going to college for music, but you also attract girls like flies. However, you've never been able to stick with one long enough to get serious. You've got a summer job, j…'

You're going to college for music, but you also attract girls like flies. However, you've never been able to stick with one long enough to get serious. You've got a summer job, just finished your freshman year, and can't wait for summer to start. So, do you...

[[Bring home a girlfriend from college]]

[[Spend the summer with a girl in town]]

[[Have fun with the Blairs]]
[[Category:The Neighbors]]

The Neighbors/Jonathan: Skinny, tall, short black hair, smart, 21

2012-06-01T15:56:13Z

LukeS9713: Created page with 'You're pretty much a genius: You got a 33 on your ACT, and now you've finished your junior year of college, going for a major in mechanical engineering. You've got a girlfriend a…'

You're pretty much a genius: You got a 33 on your ACT, and now you've finished your junior year of college, going for a major in mechanical engineering. You've got a girlfriend at college named Katrina, but you also have the Blairs living right next door. Who are you going to spend the summer with?

[[Katrina: Happy girl, happy world]]

[[The older Blairs: They're hotter]]

[[Why not have the best of both worlds?]]
[[Category:The Neighbors]]

The Neighbors

2012-06-01T15:53:09Z

LukeS9713:

The Neighbors

2012-06-01T15:36:05Z

LukeS9713:

Ten miles outside of Newton, Iowa, a quarter mile apart, lived two families:

'''The Blairs''' are a family with five girls, who have a big horse named Promise.

'''The Sanders''' are a family with five boys, with a distant cousin named Becca visiting from Oregon.

Everybody is on summer break.

'''The Blairs'''

[[Auburn: Short, auburn hair, 20]]

[[Annabelle: Short, brown hair, good boobs, 19]]

[[Adalee: Slim, red-brown hair, 17]]

[[Amelia: Skinny, black hair, 14]]

[[Aliza: Skinny, red haired tomboy, 13]]

'''The Sanders'''

[[Jonathan: Skinny, tall, short black hair, smart, 21]]

[[Caleb: Normal, good worker, musician, ladies man, 19]]

[[Benjamin: Normal, pimpled, computer guy, phenomenal young photographer, 17]]

[[Lucas: A tad skinny, fun, good at everything, pretty ripped for 15]]

[[Noah: Stocky, black haired, quiet, 13]]

[[Becca: Stocky, blonde, good-sized boobs, unlogical, 14]]

Everyone is described with stature, hair, and/or width first.

There are younger kids in both families, that are not mentioned right now.

You will meet other people to interact with later.

The Neighbors

2012-06-01T14:54:50Z

LukeS9713:

Ten miles outside of Newton, Iowa, a quarter mile apart, lived two families:

'''The Blairs''' are a family with five girls, who have a big horse named Promise.

'''The Sanders''' are a family with five boys, with a distant cousin named Becca visiting from Oregon.

Everybody is on summer break.

'''The Blairs'''

[[Auburn: Short, auburn hair, 20]]

[[Annabelle: Short, brown hair, good boobs, 19]]

[[Adalee: Slim, red-brown hair, 17]]

[[Amelia: Skinny, black hair, 14]]

[[Aliza: Skinny, red haired tomboy, 13]]

'''The Sanders'''

[[Jonathan: Skinny, tall, short black hair, smart, 21]]

[[Caleb: Normal, good worker, musician, ladies man, 19]]

[[Benjamin: Normal, pimpled, computer guy, phenomenal young photographer, 17]]

[[Lucas: A tad skinny, fun, good at everything, pretty ripped for 15]]

[[Noah: Stocky, black haired, quiet, 13]]

[[Becca: Stocky, blonde, good-sized boobs, unlogical, 14]]

Everyone is described with stature, hair, and/or width first.

You will meet other people to interact with later.

The Neighbors

2012-06-01T14:48:39Z

LukeS9713: Created page with 'Ten miles outside of Newton, Iowa, a quarter mile apart, lived two families: '''The Blairs''' are a family with five girls, who have a big horse named Promise. '''The Sanders''…'